I Paid Fiverr Copywriters to Write Sales Emails For Me And, Well...
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I went on Fiverr and paid random copywriters to write sales emails for my online course.
And, well, the results were all over the place.
Which do you think was best?
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Rob out here actually doing what zero other people are doing. He's SHOWING you what email copy should (and shouldn't) look like. There's too many TH-camrs and content creators that just "tell" you, "You can do it. You can be a copywriter! Oh you want to know _how_ ? Buy my course to see an example."
Rob is legitimately doing God's work. Thank you, sir.
Wow, I'm blushing because of how nice this is. Thank you! I'll try to keep bring you fun lessons!
Totally agree
I will never charge less than $200 dollar anymore. If people could get paid writing wack copy like this, I should be paid a thousand dollars for every masterpiece I deliver.
This is the right mindset! I love it!
I really loved this, Rob. As a copywriter, I enjoy such learning experiences where I get to hear a client's perspective. I certainly didn't expect the most expensive copy to be that bad...
That's awesome! Glad you enjoyed it! And yes... that last one was.. um not great haha
You guys were hilarious! I can't believe those Fiverr freelancers actually got 5 stars and great reviews with all the format spasms and altered angles. I feel so much better about my email copy now
The 3rd Piece of email copy, I love how she made up with proper momemtum...
As a copywriter, Its very important to connect with your audience till the end...
Incredible video ROB!
And here I am thinking I would suck at copy yet I saw pretty bad ones.
This video got me laughing at some of the copy sent. For someone who hasn't started her copy-learning journey yet, I knew the bad ones when I paused to read them.
It goes to say that every lousy copy had not considered any potential client at all, didn't want to bother about giving out information and they were all about the money they would be paid after "writing copy."
I've learnt a lot from this video and Amanda is such a wise woman. I think I jotted down almost everything she had to say about each copy. She had really good pointers.
Thank you for this video, it was worth it and I hope you do more like this.
I wish Rob could tear my copy to pieces too. 😁 Learned a lot from this. Thank you!
Ok. I learnt so much from this video Rob. Truthfully the last email did sound like an obituary. But wow. I am speechless
LOL, yeah, based on your reply, you're better than 99% of the stuff we saw already haha
Okay, I started watching this in order to learn something, and learn something I did, but what I did not expect was that I was going to laugh my ass off
I enjoyed the commentary. It's fun, honest, critical, and fair for sure. I am working up the guts to offer writing services for others who work in my industry. I have hired dozens of writers to work for me when I wanted to post a little more than I had time to. The results, in general, are not good. Much of what I paid for is so poor that I can't even use it. I am willing to take something that's 80% useful if it's inexpensive. The expectation is that I am going to have to edit something I pay so little for. I'm ok with that. The problem is that many of the results I paid for are UNFIXABLE.
So, when I write for others I expect to be able to deliver respectable work that is not going to embarrass the client. I am not going to charge much at all when I get started. After I prove my self and gain some positive reviews I'd like to be able to charge enough to eek out a decent payday.
In the mean time I'll be watching you on YT. Again, thanks for taking the time to put this together.
Great work, Rob. Teaching with real world examples. Lovely to see Amanda and hear her views on the emails too. Thanks for the valuable insights❤️
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it - yes, more videos with Amanda is a must!!
@@RobertAllenCopy Certainly. I always look forward to your emails - brilliant storytelling with humour and pictures of places you visited. Keep 'em coming!
Rob.... Had to say this is one of the best vids after upwork series and I actually loved this one and as everyone is so bad on email copy on fiverr can you please make on "how to write a email copy" thank you.
Thanks! Noted and definitely will do ... soon!
@@RobertAllenCopy thank you very much
My favorite email is at 16:38. They should definitely charge more :)
Oh and #MoreAmandaAppearances. You complement each other so well!
I totally agree! She's coming back for an encore soon
Haha, this was super interesting! Lovely to see Amanda, too
Thanks! YES! Let's start a movement #MoreAmandaAppearances haha
Ngl I've reviewed emails like these before. There's nuance in knowing what good seasoned copy looks like. Very entertaining Rob! Maybe consider hiring Upwork copywriters for the next episode :P
Agreed
OOOH love this idea... watch for it soon coming to an inbox near you!
I loved this guys! Yall are funny. I would laugh at the most expensive ones but mostly I'm disappointed. People are paying real money to get emails that sound like they were copy and pasted into a poorly written template. Also, I'd love to have a teardown of my own work by you guys lol
I was literally laughing out loud watching this while waiting at the dentist's. The last one especially had me in tears.
LOL - wow, I cannot believe these people actually have work...and great reviews too! Thanks for the vid Rob, made my day :)
Haha, glad you enjoyed it! Some legit had me scratching my head... But to be fair, most businesses don't hold themselves to the standard of copy that you and I would. So there is that... but also haha
Definitely got a thumbs up and sub from me! I recently began researching copywrighting as a supplemental income strategy and have been looking for real world examples of what business owners expect when they hire a person from Fiverr. This was really eye opening and exactly what I needed, I appreciate the insight!🤙
Did you send a link to this for the writers to learn where they went wrong? One thing I took away from this is that research is the most important part of writing an email and those surveys are definitely a good idea, as is making sure you take the time to actually read the answers.
Loved this video! A lot of fun, and lot of value, too. I think you should definitely do some more videos with Amanda - you two are great together!
haha, thank you! More Amanda content coming soon for sure
Loved this rob👍 thank you🤗
Really enjoyed the video Rob. Learned a few copywriting lessons as well (things to avoid doing while writing copy, of course). I've got another idea for a video series...how about reviewing your subscribers' email copy?
The best content on the internet for copywriters 🥂😍 You're a baller.
I wonder how in the world someone could come up with such ridiculously good ideas 🤣
My favourite part of this was ,,sales and scales"
So funny and insightful. Always delivering value
Thanks Biorn!
Was skeptical about this video at first but after watching I have to say that I'm glad I took a 2 week course on copywriting. Cause my god just one of the copies in here was good. It makes me feel better about my writing and I'll probably charge more than I initially though
Appreciate the content!
Thanks!
Super interesting. Like literally educating. But how would YOU write the email copy for this program? 😂
Immediately I saw this, I just rushed in coming 😂😂😂
First
Double first! You got it one second after it went live haha. thanks for watching!
@@RobertAllenCopy and yeahhh, thanks for inviting Amanda! That's something I can definitely look forward to seeing every-time on this channel.
Emails like these make me feel I'm a better copywriter lol 🤣🤣
Thanks for this video. A real eye opener.
Glad you enjoyed it!
The person whose cover looked aggressive to you with title "emails that sell" is the one who has an expensive copywriting course in Pakistan and I started in copywriting from his course.
Loved This
I'd be interested to know what info you sent them to work from.
What is most funny is people paying 10$ for a sales email like these 2 and then talk about how low quality the work is. You are probably freelancers as well so you should understand the concept of you get what you pay for.
Hi Rob, can you critique my email copy sample? I want to start as a copywriter in Fiverr, so I can save up for college.
Copies like these make me hopeful about my career as a copywriter
Me too. Hahaha
Please I'm taking your course and I sent you a mail🙈..... Sorry for putting this here, I'm just trying to get you to see it🙈🙈
I got you! Just saw will shoot you a reply later today
@@RobertAllenCopy Thank youuuuu!!!
do you use an AI typing assistant?
You don't have to use a rephraser; there are existing services on the market that don't provide accurate information. Textscout is the top rated company for high quality publications that will help increase visitors.
I love your videos boss
After reading those emails, I need to start charging more.
Yeah, I don't even know what you're charging but I would say you can safely double your fees just based on your comment having the right punctuation lol
This is interesting!!!
Oh my fucking god, if anyone knows of any video with similar content PLEASE message me! I'm dying over here trying to search anything up...all I can find is "5 easy tips for email marketing!" and other bullshit. I wanna see THIS, real work being critiqued by real professionals...or hell, even clients would be better. I'm praying and begging and pleading, PLEASE, someone point me in the right direction...I'm disangry right now, which is both disappointed and angry. But yeah, this video was tight. Loved the ruthlessness. Thumbs up baby.
Working on another one now!
@@RobertAllenCopy I'm becoming impatient for it. It would be _really_ nice if you could convert this into a playlist.
I love you both ❤
Brilliant content idea Rob! It would've been perfect if you ended with a good sales email example.. For contrast. Anyway, I blame all the goo-roos selling copy courses after writing copy for a year or so... Some even lesser. 😅
it would have been a lot more fun if you would have shown how to do it.
It hurts that you paid these guys
haha, right? Consider it a donation to education of other copywriters on what not to do
6:50 'It's a lie' lol.
copywriters✖ chopywriters✔
and they are top sellers... lol
Now I really understand why offer owners are so desperate to find good copywriters… 🤣🤦🏼♂️
This is psychology intrigue.
I have known you to always come from different angles compared to others out there.
Rob...."I'm coming for you soon"... Allen 😀💘
Thanks,
dude, (no offense) but these 900 5× review copywriters are literally lacking more creativity than I as a beginner even started "learning"..
(my confidence level just sky roceketed..)
LOL
Haha, thanks for watching!
Lol I'm a newby but I could write a better one than these guys.
I'm the second
Ain't no shame in a bronze medal haha