(Part 1) Watch Me Write Sales Emails | Over The Shoulder Sales Email Copywriting

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  • @itscoachcarmine
    @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Learn more about copywriting and marketing in my free online courses.➡carminemastropierro.com/courses

    • @RethsonAboja
      @RethsonAboja หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Could you make a video of how to send emails to clients

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@RethsonAboja For sure!

  • @mkbts815
    @mkbts815 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Thank you so much for this video. Saviour!!

  • @Tomisinshalewa
    @Tomisinshalewa ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank the good Lord I found your channel!😭 I've been looking for good copy tutorials on TH-cam and I've been reading all your extremely helpful content on your website!
    As soon as I saw your name I knew my problems where solved
    Thank you so much!
    I'm subscribing right away cause I need this in my life😩

  • @beautifulyou465
    @beautifulyou465 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I'm so lucky to come across this video, you are good at what you do

  • @rehammohamed5776
    @rehammohamed5776 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This was super helpful. Thank you so much, Carmine!

  • @nikitajain2274
    @nikitajain2274 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Loved this break down 🎉❤

  • @warrenbarrow2910
    @warrenbarrow2910 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That was very informative and to the point. Now, I have to jump in and start writing my copy!

  • @evefavourite3168
    @evefavourite3168 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much 🙏. Hope to see more of this

  • @ayandas851
    @ayandas851 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you very much, It is really helpful.❤❤

  • @husn222-g6f
    @husn222-g6f ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Great video! I've never come across an email copywriting video broken down like this. I went through the comments and read your answers to all the questions. Thank you for these great guidelines.

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you very much and it's my pleasure :)

  • @MarvinLarry
    @MarvinLarry ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You're very smooth with your writing. Keep it up.

  • @kathyalmansoob4941
    @kathyalmansoob4941 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Omg thank u so much that was sooo helpful. Every video I watched just shows me criteria but not an example. Honestly you nailed it

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว

      You're very welcome and thanks for the kind words!

  • @DanielRevere
    @DanielRevere ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Carmine you’ve helped me a lot

  • @olabanjooyeniran6060
    @olabanjooyeniran6060 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow I love this formula it's simple and straightforward

  • @richardonojeghwo5284
    @richardonojeghwo5284 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Thanks so much coach

  • @Xhar308
    @Xhar308 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Carmine, you're the best. It's great to have tangible examples to see how an email should be formatted. My question..., when a client hires you to do a job, do they provide you with material to review, or do they ask you to write a sales page on "X," and you do the research yourself? I'm unsure of how much detail they provide.

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Thank you, and no problem! Each project is different. Most of the time, clients will give me branding and content guidelines as a start. Then, I do my own research on their business, customers, competitors, and read things like case studies, statistics, and industry reports to understand more.

  • @ooo5376
    @ooo5376 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Thanks you coach 👍

  • @seemaYadav-tt9qu
    @seemaYadav-tt9qu 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    hey Carmine you are really really a very helpful person 🙏👍👍👍👍 tons of thank for your efforts for us

  • @simontibasima6871
    @simontibasima6871 ปีที่แล้ว

    a great straight to the point video. i would appriciate a tutorial on sales letter( long form copy)

  • @beenishmubeen709
    @beenishmubeen709 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    extremely beneficial and to the point!

  • @swen575
    @swen575 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You explain very well! Thank you!

  • @Rizzoman_
    @Rizzoman_ ปีที่แล้ว +1

    hello carmine, its nice to see you bring the example of this video. you are very good at it. But the question is, what is the job that the copy writing do to affliate marketing sales once you has been accept to working on for the client, is it to posting the content product on the social media or anything that related to the product to promoted?

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It depends on the client. You might be writing sales pages, emails, social media copy, etc. They may ask you to publish it or have their team do it. I work out these details with the client first.

  • @Abdul.Basit.Entrepreneur
    @Abdul.Basit.Entrepreneur 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks for this amazing video training!!!

  • @HamidCopywriter
    @HamidCopywriter 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    thanks carmine

  • @akinoluwaseun1488
    @akinoluwaseun1488 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This is really really good.
    I love it.
    Thank you so much.

  • @nicolecristob
    @nicolecristob 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Carmine, this helped me! Thank you!

  • @theacaciaboost4282
    @theacaciaboost4282 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    wow this video was great, thank you sooo much!
    would love to see more videos like this if possible.

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you! And you will very soon :)

  • @shubhamdavey
    @shubhamdavey 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Really helpful. Thanks for sharing.

  • @nkernest66
    @nkernest66 ปีที่แล้ว

    keep doing over the shoulder tutorials❤🙏

  • @GettingPremium
    @GettingPremium ปีที่แล้ว

    Great video!

  • @NITIN_BISHT40
    @NITIN_BISHT40 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I am thinking about getting your $19 course but I have a few questions
    1.why is it so cheap compared to other copywriting courses which are around 500-700$
    2.I am new to copywriting so will I be able to learn and write emails that sell.
    3.How long will it take to learn copywriting and land my first client.

  • @g._yz1892
    @g._yz1892 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    amazing video, these examples are perfect for marketing. appreciate it

  • @heightgrowthbros8948
    @heightgrowthbros8948 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I just wanted to ask Why don't you make a video which gives us an Idea of who you are? Your copywriting journey, brands you've worked with, your earnings and all. ( I'm interested in it too)
    A bit about me - I've done a bit of freelance content writing I'm planning to start copywriting freelancing from June currently I'm 17. I saw your video and these are definitely great and value packed I'll surely binge watch them after my exams!

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Cool idea! I'll definitely schedule that for one of the future videos

  • @paulmaking1980
    @paulmaking1980 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for the video bro, very helpful for people who are new to copywriting and want to do this for a living.

  • @emberior
    @emberior 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I learned in the video that the email should be short. Am I correct?

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Not necessarily short, but only write as much as needed. 👍

  • @happycutebox
    @happycutebox 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow, this was good. Thanks so much!

  • @kim0007
    @kim0007 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow, thank you.

  • @ajayijoy6195
    @ajayijoy6195 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks so much for the detailed video. I have a question. Does the subject line necessarily have to contain so many questions in a sales email?

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You're welcome! You don't have to include a question in the subject line if you don't want to, it's just one of many strategies that help increase open rates :)

  • @win0044
    @win0044 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thanks for the value packed video! I had a quick question. Where do we get all the information to write the email. Will the client give us all the information and the email campaigns and Write it or will I have to ask for all the information?

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      You're welcome! I like to ask the client if they have resources and documents they can give me before I begin writing that'll help me understand the product, industry, etc. I'll still research competitors, go through their website, and take my own notes too.

  • @FeooTubee
    @FeooTubee 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Awesome!

  • @Iamfiance56
    @Iamfiance56 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I notice these days from observing some copy emails, that the emails aren't to much writing focused, but are more visual with very little copy.
    I'm finding it a bit hard to know when would someone need emails with more copy? I assume it's for more "complicated" businesses for ex; coaching, meal prepping, online course, etc. Vs product focused like skin care products, hair care, a quick sale off a hoodie etc?
    Would love to get your opinion on when to write more depth email copy vs email copy that only requires very minimal copy.

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      You're exactly right! Typically, as a rule of thumb, more complex products and industries require more sales copy while simpler ones require less.
      It also depends on your audience. If you're speaking to customers that are at the top of the funnel and aren't 100% aware of what you offer and what solutions are out there, it will naturally require more sales copy to educate them.
      On the other hand, you can tighten and shorten sales copy for customers who've already converted because they have more experience with your offer/business.

    • @Iamfiance56
      @Iamfiance56 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@itscoachcarmine Okay I see, that makes a lot of sense! Thank you, I'm currently working on a writing portfolio and have been wanting to create a section for emails, but didn't know how to properly write them. lol

  • @animetownforlife
    @animetownforlife 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks!! This help me a lot!

  • @hammedmuhammed5243
    @hammedmuhammed5243 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks 👍 for the tips it was so helpful ......umm what p.s?

  • @MrDaan073
    @MrDaan073 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    For the mini-course tripwire offer, I'd have gone with the following subject line: "Build an extra income stream for just $19"
    Your thoughts on this variant?

  • @belaouma7983
    @belaouma7983 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    THANKYOUUUU

  • @PearlAddo
    @PearlAddo ปีที่แล้ว +1

    please from what you stated that does mean the subject line being question-centered should be one. meaning you can choose one from any of the questions?

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      A question-focused subject line would be asking a question within the subject line of the email. Think, "Do you want to learn copywriting?" or "Struggling to get freelance clients?" for example. It engages the reader and prompts them to open the email :)

    • @PearlAddo
      @PearlAddo ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@itscoachcarmine thank you very much

  • @nkernest66
    @nkernest66 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    pls specialize in this kind of tutuorials pls🙏❤

  • @ahmadtharwat2670
    @ahmadtharwat2670 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Do you give mentorship programs..? On teaching writing emails for newbie copywriters

  • @strahinjagocic6210
    @strahinjagocic6210 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    For ads and things like that, do I also need to create a full ad and stuff like that, or just text and content?

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Normally as a copywriter, you're just writing the content and structuring it, a designer will handle making into something that looks nice :)

  • @israrmalik4336
    @israrmalik4336 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Most most help full course .i have question .if i want to sell .course that teach how to set up your advitizing agence .waht could be title headling

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you :) You could have a headline like "Learn How to Build a Profitable Advertising Agency in 30 Days" or "The Done-For-You 6-Figure Agency System". Just some ideas!

    • @israrmalik4336
      @israrmalik4336 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@itscoachcarmine thank uuuuuuuuuuuiiii

  • @BurnTheShipsMotivation
    @BurnTheShipsMotivation 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How do the emails get distributed to the consumer? Do you just give the text to the company and they handle it, or do you have to send them individually to random emails?

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Usually, you're sending it out to an email list you've built, or a client has. Or, you could send these to cold prospects using a tool like Apollo or Hunter.io

  • @Edp-jf8zn
    @Edp-jf8zn ปีที่แล้ว +1

    question i dont want to have a business i wanna work as an email copywriting how can i start

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว

      Start studying and practicing email copywriting. Write sample emails to build a portfolio, and you can include that in your resume. Get email marketing certifications as well, and apply for email copywriter/marketer positions on LinkedIn.

  • @Vee_K96
    @Vee_K96 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Carmine
    Just a quick question, how long do you think a sales email should be?

    • @CashConqueror101
      @CashConqueror101 ปีที่แล้ว

      Not long but it varies, I’d keep it under 200 words, the shorter, the better!

  • @Marcelo-ix2tq
    @Marcelo-ix2tq 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    How much do you charge for these? They're gret!

  • @israrmalik4336
    @israrmalik4336 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Is sale mail also d.i.c and welome email

  • @MrDJCue
    @MrDJCue ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Curious,
    3 days into researching copywriting so forgive my amateur questions:
    - Do clients require you to provide graphics for the email or just the text?
    - Also are you the person who is sending the emails on behalf of the clients?? Or are you just providing the text and they send the email?

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      No problem! It depends on the client, but some may have designers that will take care of designing and sending the email itself. If you have the skills to do so, you can charge extra and include it as a service.
      The same goes for sending the emails, some clients will give me access to their CRM and I'll send them or they may have their team to do it.

    • @MrDJCue
      @MrDJCue ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Good looking out Carmine! 👊😎

  • @orjidivine5162
    @orjidivine5162 ปีที่แล้ว

    Pls can I also use Microsoft word to write email

  • @Zenaciousrootz
    @Zenaciousrootz 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Gained a subscriber !!

  • @vilain_inspiration
    @vilain_inspiration 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    this (first name) I have to give my name?

  • @ufcnutta4203
    @ufcnutta4203 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can barely hear you!

  • @artielarengano9287
    @artielarengano9287 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Dude why aren’t you writing in Google docs

  • @Kyoto99952
    @Kyoto99952 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    WARNING THERE ARE MULTIPLE ADS IN THIS VIDEO --- WATCH OUT FOR YOUR EARS ----- THIS DUDE IS WHISPERING IN THE MIC

  • @FuZiOnSEdits
    @FuZiOnSEdits 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Volume is so low

    • @itscoachcarmine
      @itscoachcarmine  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sorry, fixing that in new videos moving forward

  • @emberior
    @emberior 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

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