Task 1 Process Diagrams: Transform Band 6 to 9
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 24 มี.ค. 2024
- In this video, I take you through the journey of transforming an IELTS Writing Task 1 report from Band 6 to Band 9, specifically focusing on process diagrams.
I start by examining a real student's report and pinpoint the common errors that lead to lower scores. Through this analysis, I show you the mistakes and reveal how simple changes can significantly boost your score. You'll learn the ins and outs of effective paraphrasing, the importance of a clear and logical structure, and how to choose the correct vocabulary to accurately describe process diagrams.
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I got 7.5 overall with just one week of prep, because i did what you've said in your lectures "keep it simple" thank you Chris
Great job!
Aw, that's awesome, I'm preparing for 5 month and still I don't think I'm able to get a band 7😢
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Don't worry it would be good keep going @@shaxlomakhmadjanova1106
This dude is genius. Used his strategies to get an overall 8 band. Thanks Chris!
Well done!
It's extremely important for test takers to know how to deal with the process in Writing Task 1, especially with the natural process. Thank you so much, mr. Pell!
Thanks for sharing!
Hi chris! I am very grateful for your channel. I prepared only for two days and followed all your tips. I scored 7.5. You are the best teacher ever!!!
Fantastic!
Hi, Chris! I got overall score 7.0 on my first time after 2 weeks watching almost all your videos, especially for writing and speaking, thank you so much for the lesson "keep it simple", it really helped me through my IELTS journey, thank you!!
Fantastic!
Hey! Sister give some tips and tricks😢
@@JIJisan-kl4oe Sure!
For preparation, I practiced everyday. I tried to practice all sections. But, if I didn't have enough time, I would be focus on what section was my worst weakness. In my case was writing section, so I made sure I practice writing everyday by doing at least 2 tasks (part 1 or part 2) a day, and read many essays for part 2 to improve my flow and vocabulary in writing.
And before you study, you have to make sure to empty your mind, so you can be focus. I did 'silent time' for at least 10-15 minutes before study (no phones).
Mindset is also important. "Think simple". You don't have to think about grand ideas, think simple. If you think too hard, especially about the idea, you'll ended up writing nothing.
You also have to put in your mind if IELTS is a communication test. I got this from Chris and it helped me to calm and thought clearly while I do the practice and the test.
For the test day, just have fun and stay focus. Particularly in speaking, as Chris said, take it as you talk to a friend at a café. (This even made me forget about I was at IELTS speaking test when I had the conversation with the examiner 😭, but it caused me to speak naturally)
That's the tips and tricks from me, hope it helps😊
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I got my result yesterday. I can't describe enough how much this channel and IELTS advantage website have helped me. No more IELTS test for me 🎉 Thank you very much Chris.
Great job!
How did you manage your time? My exam is on may 4th and I'm still having challenges in managing my time.
@@abahesther3994 I just practice a lot and put myself in the exam condition. However, I reduced time by 5-10 mins. Say for example, if the real test is 60 mins, I allowed myself only 50 mins. I then used the remaining time to double check the answers or went back to the question that I was not sure about.
@@abahesther3994 I just practice a lot and put myself in exam condition. I allowed myself to have the last 5-10 mins to review answers and went back to the questions that I wasn't sure about.
@@abahesther3994 I just practiced like the exam condition and reduce time by 5-10 mins.
I really hope I can pass IELTS with 7 and above band this July , I study hard and also watch your videos thorough the day to improve my skills even more. Thank you Chris for your lessons ! ❤️
Same here 🥺
Chris is hands down a god-tier teacher!
I was looking forward to a process video. Thank you so much Chris may God bless you
You are very welcome
Chris,
I am from El Salvador and took the IELTS exam this past Saturday and I got overall Band 7 which is what I needed, and I would like to express my gratitude to you and your team for your hard work.
I purchased a course a month ago from a different instructor and was very confused on how to answer the task 2 for the writing exam. I found your channel just a week before my test and you really helped me understand how I needed to answer the writing task 2 with your free content plus the tips you provide for the other tests.
Looking back, I regret not finding your channel earlier, I would have purchased your course, I am sure it would have resulted in an even better score.
God bless you and your team for all you do !
Well done!
@@Ieltsadvantage pls,sir,I love ur teaching and I have also watched your videos with so much understanding, I need more of your teaching,mostly the books..
wish me luck, my exam will be almost 2 weeks later and please God wish me best luck🥺 i am so nervous, and i wish that i will come to comments section after exam and say you about i gain overall band 7 score😭😭
@@trashaccount4854 "say you about" is wrong. You should say: "I wish that I would come to the comments section after the exam and tell you about how I got a band 7 score overall "
@@shalomgab ahah thanks. Noted
And thank you as well for sharing brilliant information with us and we all are eager to watch other types of task 1 reports
Relly nice explanation. Thank you.
I like this kind of writing even more thanks to you. 👍
Thank you so much SIR. give us this type of video again n again!!!
I’ve been waiting for this video for a long time.
I hope you enjoy it!
I remember back in October's end, i found your channel and started to watch your content. With only 5 days of preparation and solving cambrigde 17,18 according to your tips i secured band 6.5 ( no band less than 6), that too with basic English and the most toughest reading question of 2023 . I was only 🤏 much close to get band 7. Shall i found your channel earlier, i would have scored band 7.5, 8 who knows. My profound gratitudes to you and wishing you good luck.
you are truly a hero, i don't trust any of the ielts content out there but yours and I was struggling to find process diagrams videos until right now. I am taking my test towards the end of April and I will hopefully update you about my results.
Glad I could help!
quick question, all of your videos are fantastic and beneficial, however, since you have been posting for a long time i am not sure if i should go through them all or only watch the long versions. so, what do you suggest? also, besides your vip course, could i take one complete mock test with you when i am done preparing so you could guide me through the final touches one or two weeks before the test? or is that something that you don't offer? anyways, thanks a lot for everything you do
Wow 🎉 super! I was needing help to understand the writing task 1 process . Thank you so much for supporting us with your useful advice and help🧡💯
The same 💯
i really like videos made this way. when you compare the bad essays to the good one, it's very easy to understand and I know what I need to fix
Your video is just right on time. I needed to learn this before my exam date next week. Thank you!
Glad it was helpful! If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.
Chris your techniques are easy to understand and follow. With only one week of preparation using ielts advantage strategies I was able to score 8.5 overall!!! 🎉I can’t thank you enough and will definitely recommend your channel to anyone who needs help with their ielts. Keep up the good work!! 👍🏼
Excellent!
Hi there, Chris! It would be unjust if I do not express my gratitude for your simple, effective & to the point guidance in various vidoes available on your channel. I just got my desired band of 7.5 (overall) and I was able to learn a lot from your guidance for speaking module. Keep up the good work and continue helping the IELTS test takers with your free videos who might not have the resources to join special VIP course of yours 🙂 Once again, thank you so much for sincere guidance. Lots of love from Chakwal, Pakistan.
Well done!
Hey chris, I am a VIP student. I took the IELTS test a year ago and got a 5.5 overall. After I joined the VIP 2.0 course, I got an overall score of 7.0, and my listening score was 8.5. Thanks to you and the brilliant course you created.
Great job!
How can i sign up VIP course?
Chris, we are really happy with your work 😀 it is gonna be so useful for me
Great! Thank you!
Thank you very much Mr Christopher
I was just studying about that topic.
You're very welcome!
I am a big fan of 'transformation' videos like this. Those are a good supplementary source for me besides your VIP writing course where I am currently a member.
Glad you like them! Thanks for being a VIP.
Hello Chris,Thank you for helping people with IELTS because I upgraded my task 1 from 5 To 7 band score after your videos,thank you Chris you are the best teacher!❤❤❤
Excellent!
Thank you, ielts advantage. I got an overall band 7 in ielts . 7 in reading,8 in listening , 7 in speaking and 6 in writing , your teaching methodology is very good and your videos on speaking was a game changer for me. Again i am very thankful for your work 😊😊😊
wish me luck, my exam will be almost 2 weeks later and please God wish me best luck🥺 i am so nervous, and i wish that i will come to comments section after exam and say you about i gain overall band 7 score😭😭
@@trashaccount4854 good luck!
Best teacher ❤
Tnx Chris so much i was able to write both tasks in real exam , because of ur lessons and I remembered a lot about ur suggestions and even without practicing much I wrote a good stuff and I’m so happy 🥹❤️❤️ ur the best teacher!!
Great job!
i used to have so many problems with task 1, but after watching your videos i started to write better. thanks
Great job!
Hello chris recently i found your videos it was very well explained it helps me a lot to work on my writing that was not good enough before ...
i got 6.5 overall by just studying for some time and my score is 7.5 L , 6.5 W , 6 R , 6 S Thank you sir
Impressive explanation!
Hey Chris, I'm so thankful for and to you. I was unsure about my Ielts readiness 2 weeks to my exam(I hadn't being able to give time to study, I had just barely concluded reading a book about IELTS writing a friend sent me then). Initially, I had planned on practicing everyday for the rest of the week before my exam but that was when I stumbled on your video and I went ahead to consume them totally😂, afterwhich I practiced just 1 reading passage, 4 listening tapes, 1 writing module and 3 speaking practice with my friend. My results came out last week and I made a total of 7.5:R-8, S-8,L-7.5,W-6.5. I scaled through the band score I needed for each module, so, I'm super excited and also grateful to you. Thank you so much for your helpful videos.
Thank you for sharing your success story. Congratulations on your fantastic IELTS results!
This has been a great series, now waiting for "before and after" type question.
I have exam tomorrow please wish me luck 🍀🙏
Good luck!
What did you get?
Luck
Hi Chris! I hope you're doing well. I got my IELTS result today and got 7.5 overall in the first attempt. I prepared for like 3 weeks before the exam date. Your ultimate guide videos about listening, reading and writing were truly amazing and informative. I used to struggle a lot with practice tests as I had no idea about how effective strategies can improve your speed and accuracy of answers. My score jumped from band 4 to 8 in reading just by applying the strategies you mentioned. The same thing went for listening and writing. Even on the test day, I watched your videos about stress management and they helped me a lot as I followed your advice. So, Thank you so much for helping me with this✨
Wow! Great job!
Hello Chris, I got overall band 8 with S-8, W-7, R-8.5, L-7.5. I watched your videos on speaking and writing and it really helped me a lot on the test day. Thank you so much for amazing tips. Sending my biggest gratitude to you.
Great job!
Pray for me guys tomorrow's my exam😅
All the best!
how was it? :)
How did it go?
Thank you. I hope, I will be able to get good score with help your recommendations.
Hello Chris, thanks for all your help! I got an overall band score of 8 in my very first IELTS exam. S - 8, L - 8.5, R - 8, & W - 8. I was worried that I would perform poorly because I fell sick a couple days to my exam, but your writing and speaking challenges really helped me improve and excel. Thank you❤
Congratulations!
Tysm for these videos man, I was able to score an 8.5 first try by solely relying on your website. Great resources!
Well done!
thank you so much for making this video
It’s very helpful for me..... Thank you so much Chris😊
You're most welcome!
Hi chris..I scored overall 7 in IELTS just by watching your videos and I only had 2 weeks to prepare..Thankyou chris❤✌
Great job!
Thank you so much chris. I received an overall 7.5 (L 8.5, R 7.5,W 6.5, S 7). I didn't expect to receive this much score in IELTS but your tips really helped me a lot.
Excellent!
Hi Chris :)
I never thought it was possible, but got 7.5 just by watching your videos and following your tips for a week. I really advise anyone who is still preparing for the ielts to watch 100% of your content, there is nothing better available online. Thank you so much for the excellent work!
Well done!
Hi Chris, I watched some of your videos for tips to try some online ielts sample test. Thanks to your tips, I was able to finish the reading section pretty early for my 1st time.
I only got 6.5 for reading though, but when I checked the answers, some of my mistakes are quite unjust. For example:
_ Some mistakes are from not copying exactly what was written in the essays, like my answer was "friends and families" while the correct answer is "families and friends".
_ Another one is from an anatomy diagram for a fish. The part that need filling in is pointing to the fish's pectoral fin, so I answered "pectoral". But the accepted answer was "pectoral and pelvic" since this is exactly what was written in the essays. I even looked this up afterwards and the pelvic fins are indeed at a different position from the pectoral fins (it's quite obvious from their names).
This seems to be a problem for computer based tests since the answers are checked automatically. So I want to ask since I have no experience with ielts, does this problem occurs in the actual ielt tests, specifically the computer based test? Since I decided to take the test on computer for the headphones advantage in the listening session.
Thank you so much for this content
I started binging his tutorials a week before my test.. got overall BAND 8. R-9. W-7.5 L-8.5 S-7.5.
Guys, don’t blindly do a bunch of practice tests. Pay attention to his techniques in each aspect of the test and PERFECT PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT SCORE
Congratulations!
Super🎉❤ congratulations 💥
Listening/ Reading - 7 | Writing/ Speaking - 6.5
I was able to achieve an Overall 7 in IELTS yesterday. All thanks to you Sir ! Initially i paid and joined with a “magical guru” like you mention all the time. I accidentally came across one of your thumbnails just 5 days before the exam. Right away i reset all what i learnt from that guru and watched all of your videos day and night. I can proudly say that although i was needed an overall 6.5 for my journey, I was over the moon to know that i got a 7. Phew! Indeed you are the real wizard in IELTS. Thank you again for your truthfulness and guidance. May all gods bless you and wish you keep up the good work. !!
Chelsea Laurent
From Sri Lanka 🇱🇰
Congratulations!
Super. Many thanks from HCMC, Vietnam❤
I got overall 8.0 ! THS for your channel !!! ❤
Well done!
Much obliged teacher❤
This was helped me a lot🍀💪
Hi Chris. I’m chisom from Nigeria. I took my first ielts and got a 7.5 after listening to you TH-cam videos. However, I needed a band 8 and I started watching your videos again especially for reading as I got a low band for reading. I wrote a second ielts and my results just came out yesterday and I got a band 8. Listening 8.5, reading 8, and writing 7 and speaking 8. Thank you very much Chris. 🎉🎉
Woah! Congratulations!
Thanks this lesson.
Thank you very much teacher🤝
I promised myself that I would come back and write here once I got my IELTS score. On Monday I had my first ever try (IELTS general). I had one month to prepare. At first, I was watching your videos on TH-cam and then I realised that I am struggling with writing. So I bought your VIP course. It was the best decision ever. BTW the mindset course is really really helpful! I've got an overall 8.0 - Listening - 8.5, Reading - 9, Writing -7, Speaking - 8. I will try my very best to make my grammar more clean and get an 8 in writing next time. Thank you so much for helping me on this way!
Congratulations!
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful news! It's great to hear that you found our VIP course helpful. If you need any further assistance or guidance as you continue your preparation, please don't hesitate to reach out.
Sir i watch ur videos .. thankfully i got overall 8 bands and 8.5 band in speaking thanks for your providence
Great job!
Hey! Thanks to this channel, I managed to get a Band 9.0 without any guidance from any other sources. Thank you very much 'IELTS Advantage'!
really??? u got a 9.0????
@@dolinhchi3733 Yes, I was pretty confident about getting band 9 in listening and reading module but a bit nervous about the speaking part as I was worried about my accent. But thankfully, I managed to pull it off.
Just gave my ielts exam. I got a band 8. L-8.5,R-8.5,S-8,W-7.5. Your channel helped me a lot. Mostly for the writing part I only followed your blog. Thank you very much Chris.
Great job!
recently i got 7.0 by only watching ur videos for a whole week before an exam. I'm so thankful!!! You are the best, Chris!
Fantastic!
Thanks to your guidance. I achieved good bands in all the modules. L - 8.5 , R- 7.5 , S- 8 , W- 6.5.( in just 2 weeks of preparation)
Great job!
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Can you rate my task 1 please
Hi thank you a lot. I improved my Writing from 5.5 to 7 and Speaking from 6 to 7.5. You are really good teacher thanks to you I got good results
Keep it up
Thank so much for such educative videos Sir.
You're welcome!
well, this course is awesome, i can improve my writing skill
I got an overall band 8 and 7.5 in writing only because of your wonderful writing tips." I kept in simple". Thank you Sir
Excellent!
Hi Chris, thanks to your videos I managed to score a Band 8.5 overall! Thank you so much 🥳
Fantastic!
I had my test yesterday, and I got this diagram question, thanks for your video, its really helpful 😊
You're very welcome!
Completed. My exam is on 22 June 2024. I am studying in the final minutes. Thank you. After results, I will let you know. Pray for me. ❤
Best of luck with your scores!
U still have abt a month ! Mine is tomorrow 😭
@@layanflowers2395 sorry man. I made a mistake. My exam is over. It was 22 June not July 😂😂😂 Anyway all the best
Hi, Chris! Thanks to you I got 7.5. Thanks for all this valuable lessons.
Well done!
thank you so much, chris!
i only had around 10 days to prepare and i watched a lottt of your videos, and i love how informative and accurate they are!
i cramped 5 videos in an hour before i went into my test center, and i can say that i was very relaxed and ready for the test hahaha
overall, i got a band 7.5
R 7, W 7, S 7, L 8.5 !!
once again, thank you sooo much!
thanks to you, im going to study abroad🫶 God bless youu!
Great job!
Watching most of your videos from Africa precisely Nigeria
Thank yhou very much.Video was very helpful for me.
Glad it helped. If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.
🎯 Key Takeaways for quick navigation:
00:00 *📝 Paraphrasing is crucial in Task 1 reports to ensure accuracy.*
01:49 *💬 Use accurate synonyms when paraphrasing to avoid errors.*
05:43 *🛑 Avoid inaccuracies in your overview paragraph for a higher score.*
08:16 *↕️ Divide process details into logical paragraphs for coherence.*
16:12 *🚫 Avoid adding personal interpretations or extra information in Task 1 reports.*
20:44 *🚯 Task 1 reports should not include personal opinions or conclusions.*
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Thanks a lot sir.
Best regards
You're very welcome.
Chris you are an angel … God sent 🥹
Im really appreciate your efforts🥂❤️🔥💣🔥✅️
I appreciate that
U are the best
just perfect
I had R 8.5, L 7.5, S 7, W 7 on my first trial, thanks to your videos and the idea of using the vocabulary we have and keeping it simple. At a point I taught this test was too simple and I was going to fail😂 but I persisted .
You're such a great teacher
Thank you very much
God bless you for your hard work
Well done!
I just got 7 for writing and that's exactly what I needed!!!🙏🏻 i had to pass ielts asap so i only had one week to prepare and your videos saved my life! 7.5 overall😊
Congratulations! Well done!
Students : *struggle with IELTS*
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Another great video here, Chris. My students have had a lot of success with some of the methods you mention for all skills. If you're taking video ideas, I'd love to see a comparison between paraphrasing techniques. The discrepancy between 'Uses paraphrasing effectively as required' (Band 8) & 'Uses paraphrasing effectively' (Band 7) is one of the parts I struggle to teach as an IELTS tutor myself. Any advice is appreciated, thanks!
Great suggestion! I'll look into it. In the meantime, please refer to an article on our website on 'How to Paraphrase in the IELTS Test'. It will show you how to paraphrase effectively. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
I took my first exam last week and got 7.5! My hands were shaking but I still managed to get 7.0 in speaking. Also big thanks to your videos and free challenges, they are super helpful!!
Great job!
Thank you🌹
Thankyou chris i got 7.5 by doing what u said i got 7 in writing which i wasnt confident about... thanks a lottt
Great job!
Thank you ❤
You're welcome!
I got overall 7 in ielts.Your videos help me a lot,thank you chrish❤️
Great job!
Love you from nepal❤️🇳🇵
it is great
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Hello thank you for your valuable information. My question is how should solve list selection type questions.
So sad that i found your vid so late, i only have 5 days to practice😢😢
Sir, you teach very well. I am studying from you for the first time.
Welcome aboard!
If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.
@@Ieltsadvantage except TH-cam, is any other source available for contact you ?
Overall, the recycling of plastic bottles is a cyclical process that consists of use, collection, sorting, crushing, cleaning, pelletizing, making new plastic products and reuse.
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Remarkable
Thanks.
Great video
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Thanks for the clear and detailed explanation. But something caught my attention in 19:05 Shouldn't it be dropped instead of drop?