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IELTS Writing task 1: line graph
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 14 ส.ค. 2024
- In this lesson you will learn how to describe a line graph in IELTS Academic Writing task 1. You will see the answer structure, tips, vocabulary and band 9 answer example.
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0:11 describing a line graph
1:09 Task 1 Structure
-Introduction
-Overview
-Feature 1
-Feature 2
1:50 Introduction (What graph shows, for what countries, for what period of time)
- Paraphrase the info
- shouldn’t be longer than 2 sentence
shows = illustrate = gives information about
- List countries in your introduction is also a good technique
4:50 Overview (No dates, No numbers, No percentages)
- Write general trends
- You should normally have 2-4 key features
Useful Linking words: While
Synonyms: The recycling rates, The percentage of recycled waste
Describe: Showed a steady but significant rise = Rose significantly = Experienced an upward trend
+ Experienced a downward trend = declined = experience a decrease
6:57 The details (Body paragraphs)
You can group the date by:
1. By country
2. By similar trend
8:00 1st Paragraph
- Should mention the percentage in the beginning and in the end of the time period
- Describing: Were nearly 35% and 20% respectively
+ Increased sharply. + Exceeding France’s rate
+ Reaching an almost 60%. + Grew to 40%. + Then remained steady
+ Experienced a rapid surge. + Continued with a gradual increase
9:38 2nd Paragraph
- Can use superlatives( Highest, Lowest) to indicate the big change
- Always support your details with data
- Describing: Was the highest among these three countries
+ Dramatically declined to 30%. + Was a growth of 10%
+ Was the lowest in the end of the period
10:42 Always write task 1 answers with 1 tense
- If describing something in the past, write the paragraph in past simple
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I think in the overview section it is mention-worthy that, " while the percentage of recycled waste in France experienced a downward trend with some fluctuation". Thank you for your outstanding presentation and explanation.
"fluctuations"
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This is one of the best line graphs video. Thanks a million tone. Each & every side the way you described it’s an exquisite
Bro please reply me . the way she teches we can apply this in all LINE graph same way but change vocabulary then we can apply this method on all lines graph?
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Line graph has its own vocabulary
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The line graph gives information about the regional households that recycle waste in the Uk, France, and Germany over a decade.
Overall, the recycling rates of the Uk and Germany are erratic but showed an upward trend, while the percentage of waste products recycled in France steadily plunged throughout the period.
In the beginning, the proportion of families recycling unwanted materials in the Uk and Germany were around 35% and 20% respectively. These figures experienced some fluctuations but maintained a steady growth. In 2015, the numbers hit their peaks, the Uk reaching just above 60% and Germany attaining approximately 58%.
In the early stage, France had the highest number of households that recycled wastes. However, the rate gradually plummeted to 40% in 2007. The figure showed a continuous fallback until it reaches a low point of about 30% in 2013 and significantly rose to 40% at the end of the period, having the least number of families that recycle wastes among the three countries.
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The line graph illustrates percentagewise rates of regional households in the UK, France and Germany during 2005 to 2015.
Overall, it is accurate that there is an upward trend in the UK and Germany despite of mild fluctuations in the UK recycling rates. However, France showed a downward trend in the beginning, but increased in the end.
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In the start of the period UK and France were at 35 and 20 percentage respectively,yet France was on 50 percent in rates.
There has been seen a steadily progress in Germany since 2005 to the end of the period. While In Uk from 2007 to year 2009 a permanency has seen. After some time a rapid upward UK has witnessed in regional recycling at the end of the period.
On the other hand, France has showed a perpetuate decline from 50 percentage to 30 in the year of 2013. However, an upward curve has been noticed instantly after to 2013 to the last of the period bringing the rates to 40 percent in UK.
I think you may made some mistakes in grammer. (My answer is in below. You can also make me correct if my answer is wrong.) Thank you
At the start of the period, the UK and France were at 35 and 20 percent respectively, yet France was on 50 percent in rates. There has been steady progress in Germany since 2005 to the end of the period. While in Uk from 2007 to 2009 a permanency was seen. After some time a rapid upward UK has witnessed regional recycling at the end of the period.
On the other hand, France has shown a perpetual decline from 50 percent to 30 in the year of 2013. However, an upward curve has been noticed instantly after 2013 to the last of the period bringing the rates to 40 percent in the UK.
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The line graph gives information about household recyling percentages in UK, France and Germany in ten-year period.
Overall, it is clear that while UK and Germany have a upward trend, France experiences decrease trend throughout the time period. At the beginning, although France’s houselhold recyling rate was the highest among the other countries, it positioned the last country at the end of the period.
In 2005, France had 50% recycling rate and until 2013 this ratio dropped steadily to 30%. In 2013, recyling rate of France rocketed about 10% and finished its rate about 40% end of the period.
Conversely, in terms of household recycling rate, Germany started its rate slightly higher than 20% and rose gradually up to nearly 60% over the time.
Moreover, UK’s household recyling rate also experience the same trend as Germany, starting with roughly 35% in the beginning. At the end of 2009, it only rose by 5%. In 2 years, UK’s household recyling rate showed us the sharpest increase among the other countries. By the end of 2015, UK’s recyling rate placed the first country as 60%.
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I don't think it could hit band 7 for several reasons:
- Your tense was wrong in the overview, you used the present tense.
- You didn't use the articles (a, an, the) well (e.g: in A ten-year period, AN upward trend, A decreasING trend etc.)
- body paragraphs didn't start with a phrase that indicates the data in the paragraph (this is actually a requirement in Cohesion & Coherence marks)
- "It is clear that"
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"In" the end of the period" i think it is grammatically incorrect so this mistake affect your score and i think it isn't Band9 due to this mistake.
"At the end of the period" is correct i think
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I thought in overview, you should always start it with either " Overall or In general"?
I had the same doubt i was about to type
Not necessarily, but good to do so to indicate to the examiner clearly that it is an overview (otherwise it can always be inferred by the absence of any numbers and inclusion of a summary).
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Hi! fellow warriors. Who is going to take on October 13, 2018? Raise your hands in the air... Also, do you think this technique of separate the line by trend is appropriate to use it with bar or pie chart as well? In the way I understood, and I've been practicing is: in the first paragraph I explain one of the line and write down one contrasting point with the other line, the remains sentences is to make contrasting and comparison with the same line, and this para is usually longer then the second one. On the other paragraph, I describe the other line with the same comparison/contrast with the other line and emphasizing what was the results at the end of the period given.
As for how to write numbers, I was pretty much confused until I saw a video where is more o less explain. To summarize, the lady there said the we must not add a "s" to year/month/day if they are adjectives, for instance: I have a three-year-old son, a 3-year period, and so on. As well, it was said that we should not use "S" with hundred/million/thousand, etc.
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