What if I Wrote The Force Awakens? - Star Wars Theory Fan-Fic
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- If Luke never tried to kill Ben Solo. Things would have been entirely different.
Ben would continue to communicate and be under the manipulation of Snoke, however his destruction of Luke’s jedi temple that night would or would not have happened. Regardless, it would have happened eventually. That night or another night. Let’s say Ben was going to do it anyways that night, then Luke wouldn’t have been knocked out. He’d have been fighting for and protecting his students. He’d have destroyed the few students who rallied with Ben and easily taken Ben out, too.
This could cause two outcomes. One would cause Luke to bring Han and Leia to his temple to talk with Ben, and 4 of them together could discuss things. Luke wouldn’t be driven to run away and cut his force powers off because A) he wouldn’t be ashamed of trying to kill his nephew because he never did, regardless of it being a fleeting shadow of a thought or not. And B) his students wouldn’t be slaughtered and his Jedi temple would still stand!
This would cause Ben to escape from his parents once they took him home, and he’d leave to unite with Snoke.
The other outcome is, Ben gets away that night, he escapes by the skin of his teeth, just strong enough to flee from Luke’s grasp. He steals a ship and leaves to find Snoke.
Snoke essentially does what he originally did with Kylo which was not complete his training until the events of the force awakens.
However, now there would be no point in having the map to lead to Luke Skywalker, because he never went into exile. So in order to understand this new Luke, we have to explain the force awakens slightly.
The map for Luke Skywalker, would turn into a message to Luke Skywalker, to come back as a rebellion fighter, and join the resurgence of new rebels to destroy starkiller base and defeat Snoke. Who they don’t know is Palpatine. Poe gives the message to BB-8 who runs away and fights Teedo in the desert. And we can just say Rey meets BB-8 the same way she did in 7, then meets Finn and Poe etc.
Jump back to the current time where Luke doesn’t kill Kylo and Kylo runs away to Snoke.
Luke would continue to train Jedi for the next decade and become even more powerful in the force.
He would continue to educate himself with new texts and scrolls throughout the galaxy, and commune with the force ghosts. He would constantly stay in touch with his sister through the force and keep tabs on his friends. Visiting them periodically and stopping by Leia’s home while gallivanting through the galaxy, finding new artifacts.
Luke would become so unbelievably powerful, that no one dared to exterminate him. This forces Snoke to train Kylo even harder. Making Kylo into what he was always wanting, a dark, brooding, powerful fallen Jedi. Using both the light and dark to power him. He would lead the first order under Snoke’s command. Snoke would order Kylo to go to Exegol where his training would be completed for real. He would meet Palpatine and face his test against the Sith troopers. I’m not talking about the stormtroopers in red paint, I’m talking about real badass Sith troopers with dual wielding lightasbers. Palpatine would also have cloned, imperfectly, a cyborg Maul, and trained him to fight like the real maul used to, albeit without force abilities. This Maul would be a more terrifying version of Grievous. More skilled, and with the same personality and fighting style as the real Maul. He would just lack the powers of the force, albeit, still force sensitive, just not very much. Kylo would prove himself, and fight hard against this Maul. He would become very powerful and pass all tests, defeating his enemies. Kylo moves like Anakin. Sidious sees it, and smiles.
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Hey guys. Hope ya had fun with this one. How should I write the next episode?
Have a great day. Cya next time.
You do you, thats all what I have to say.
You gotta rewrite the whole trilogy... but make Luke not be Jake Skywalker. He has to keep the saber instead of throwing it over his shoulder and ending the Jedi order. That’s just not Luke.
Now THIS was star wars. Canonizing the themes and lore of ancient legends to inform the current plot's themes is brilliant. This was poetry, it rhymed. Now that sequel Luke is fleshed out as a full character, Rey can be a clean slate of a character for Luke to project his new hopes onto. After 8, the passing of the torch can actually feel earned, while still pulling at the heartstrings.
Hey Theory this was a great story for Luke. I think seeing Luke in episode 7 and seeing his struggles and conflict in this would've been great to see and how it all happened. I love seeing the Son and the Father of Mortis even Anakin's ghost, same with the whole battles before the Old Republic. I love that you brought up Luke using the kyber crystals of Anakin and Qui-Gon at the end. This is so much better and even Luke the main character as a middle age man is perfect because we have Qui-Gon as the main character in episode 1 who found Anakin and shows that he is a true Jedi. Anyways can't wait for episode 8. I remember the video you made 3 years ago about what if I wrote TLJ that was good. Anyways much love and see you then and remember the Force will be with you......always...
That was great! Thanks for the entertaining story.
"Is it possible to write these stories???"
"Not by Disney..."
Speaking facts, amigo.
Not by a Disney fan
Disney don't write the stories..
I just saw this go up before I even clicked like
Kathleen Kennedy the true Sith lord
PUMPED for this! I've always felt there were some really solid elements in the sequels that could be used to make a legitimately good trilogy. It boggles my mind that they launched into making these movies with no plan in place for the entire trilogy.
I wasnt expecting you here. a surprise to be sure, but a welcome one.
Yo hey man I love all your videos so much !
A surprise to be sure, but, a welcome one.
@@reallightfield5314 I LOVE watching SWT. He inspired me to start my channel when I tuned into one of his streams a couple years ago, actually! He's my go-to whenever there is Star Wars news, or for fun theories like this!
@@blue_ex3852 Thanks so much!
I like this, just swap Sidious with Plagueis though. I think that would be much cooler, and it wouldn't undermine Anakin's legacy. Have Plagueis denounce the sith for a more broad view of the force, incorporating the dark with the light.
Would make less sense tbh
I mean, it's not like Plagueis being there whould undermine less Anakin's sacrifice, but also whould pretty much undermine the tale Palpatine told Anakin, also I bet that probably in this version Anakin's ghost will play a role in Palpatine's defeat so, let's see what happens
@@lonelysatoshi2482 well? Instead have plageius discover a dark ability similar to the force ghost Qui Gon discovered. and instead of the shitty revive of palpatine, have plagieus somehow revive himself/his conscious, using said discovered dark side ability, that he told palpatine about. Making a perfect arc, with the entire skywalker family being the chosen ones.
Like you could literally write 100’s of fan fictions that are so much better than the sequels, it’s so astonishing at how bad they were
@@rigby7218 Still kinda dosen't work, like isin't the whole point of Plagueis being the Sith failure that later Palpatine succeded? And I mean that "new unkown ability" does not make it any better, But either way I get your point, Lucasfilm really needed to work hard if they wanted to bring back Palpatine and make it work
Like for example; start the trilogy as him simply being a ghost form attached to a Holocron, then as the movies goes far he finally gets a body by perfecting the formula for inmortality that his master Plagueis tried to do but in the moment he instead indirectly altered the force thus creating Anakin, and yeah have him being the baddie, does bad stuff, rule the galaxy, revive the Sith order and destroy the chosen one's balance, tries to get direct access to control the world between worlds or something, y'know bad guy stuff, and speaking of Rey Palpatine, daughter of the failed clone, instead just have her being a Skywalker from the start and have her the goal of maintain her grandfather Anakin legacy (once she discovers her heritage of course) in contrast on how Kylo wanted to do that but with Vader, and in the moment Palpatine is defeated have Anakin's ghost directly involved in it, and idk also have other Jedi's ghosts or even the Whils to help, it's honestly not that hard if you know well the lore, what you can use, and what you can't
@@lonelysatoshi2482 I think Plagueis surviving is so much more satisfying. Palpatine thought he killed his master long ago so having Plagueis survive shows how arrogant Palpatine was for thinking he surpassed his master plus Palpatine probably assumed that the essence transfer was all B.S. Having Plagueis bide his time to return and take up the remnants of the Empire is such a great payoff. It shows that he was far more powerful than Palpatine. He waited in the shadows for his former arrogant apprentices fail which he always knew he would. Plagueis should have been the final big bad in the end.
It amazes me how a 17 minute fan fiction can be better than a whole 2 hour movie
Already 10 times better than the sequels we got. Man what a missed opportunity not to have a Anakins force ghost.
You saw my comment! Been following you for a few years now really enjoy listening to you Theory I feel like we have a lot of similar feelings towards the prequels and I grew up thinking I was like anakin too! Much love from Ohio keep up the great work!
@@haydenjurko Awesome comment--man, this is a zillion times better than that poop that KKennedy let loose. Ugh.
I'm going to watch this video a few times and pretend the Farce A-woke-ens never happened. MTFBWY
Amazing how good the stories can be when they're written by someone that knows and loves the franchise, isn't it?
I think the ultimate mistake is that disney hired people who aren't passionate and knowledgeable enough about star wars to write the trilogy. This is how it should've been! Great work!
Rian Johnson so unknowledgeable that he borrowed from obscure legends material for two parts of TLJ. So obscure it seems that the supposed fanboy haters don't know what they are.
@@Marconi76 he’s admitted he didn’t care about the lore. So shut up
@@hanshotlast That's not what he said and the guy who made the original video has problems with comprehension because he read out what RJ said then completely misinterpreted it.
I think the problem was there was no consistent writer and the insistence from Disney to basically reboot it but call it a sequel.. the new stuff and the stories films have been brilliant, if Carrie was still alive I'd say persuade the original 3 to come back, might have to actually torture Harrison Ford because he despises star wars.. and thrn make some true sequels
@@ukilledmydog for real. They could have Han with a limited role perhaps and shoot all his parts for the 3 at once. Instead they killed off one of the coolest characters ever like a little bitch then were in a race to kill off the other two in ways that were past ridiculous. IMO this trilogy was a slap in the face, a complete mockery of the original.
The Mortis arc in the Clone Wars is low-key some of the best Star Wars content ever created. Having Luke find an artifact to see what happens with Anakin, then Revan...man, that would be awesome.
Revan isn’t canon bro
@@l750z_6 it's confirmed there was a sith named revan before in canon. Also there are some deleted clone wars scenes on mortis where revan and bane appeared i think.
@@toma6261 Yeah I’m pretty sure in the new movies different battalions we’re named off of Revan and older Jedis of the republic
@@l750z_6 yes he is, it was confirmed
Wholeheartedly, I believe that this would’ve been a better way to start the sequel trilogy. The fan fiction pays homage to the characters and stories we grew up loving and fantasizing, while giving room at the end by hinting at Rey and other new characters’ roles as the new generation.
Stepping out of your comfort zone opens doors to new opportunities. Finding comfort in the uncomfortable is a great achievement . Thanks so much for the videos theory !
Your name 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Great comment mate
Dream song lol
When The Son said "-Luke Skywalker!" chills, literal chills.
So well done. 👏👏👏 thank you
How is this one TH-camr better at creating stories than a full team of professionals hired at Disney? This man should have been in charge the whole time
Beautiful! Grounding himself with one foot in the Light Side and expanding his powers with the other foot in the Dark Side-the harmonization between Order and Chaos-is exactly the optimization of his force abilities needed to bring balance.
That constant struggle to find the middle path is precisely what needs to be taught to new students to stabilize the galaxy. Absolutely brilliant.
Ok Luke duel wielding his father saber and his own is legendary especially if he hols the blue one in his mechanical hand, also a rebuilt General Grievous and robot Maul would be fantastic
Grievous was still a living alien before he became a cyborg. So Grievous is dead even if they rebuilt him.
They should be one character, General Maulvous.
A cloned Maul with cyborg enhancements, and a Droid version of Grievous.
Dumbest idea I've ever heard
@@genetenz why? Luke is a master of all saber forms, he would be unstoppable
Is it possible one day for us to get Fan Fic visual comics?
No
We’re never getting it only in many years
@@quempire2656 what?
Who knows maybe it will happen sooner that you think.
@@speedeatass1182 I just heard a guy talk about starving people in India 1941 and then he said swissil
This was so exciting to watch. I cant imagine how good this would have been in live action. You absolutely killed this seeing Luke like this would have been so incredible!! Great job and cant wait to see your the episode 8 fanfic
When I see stuff like this, I'm even more grateful that you chose to share your passion for Star Wars with all of us. I hope you choose to make a story-telling venturre of your own. Your great talent for it (and the talent of your team) is quite obvious.
I really wish they would’ve gone full OP with Kylo Ren in the sequels…they had an actor as incredibly talented as Adam Driver portraying him and still they didn’t use him to his full potential, realistically Anakin’s grandson on the dark side should be a force of nature unlike anything we’ve yet seen other than Palpatine himself…
Because Mary Sue had to be more powerful than Kylo Ren because she's the greatest ever
@@picklerick4944 Rey legit loses to him though so the argument is invalid
@@thorodinson1933 in TROS, yes, when they were clearly making a movie by checklist of fan complaints. But then she still beat him.
@@thedachmo watch the fight again. She gets exhausted and gives up and collapses. There’s atleast 5+ seconds where he could’ve easily killed her. He had all his stamina still, he barely looks like he tries and is still easily overtaking her. Then Palpatine literally wrecks her and she gets saved by multiple Jedi spirits
@@thorodinson1933 read my comment again.
That's TROS, not TFA. The fight checks off the Rey keeps beating Kylo complaint. Despite this, Rey *still* 'wins' that fight in the end.
The specific reason I love this is that it's a bridge between the old and the new. It helps gracefully finish up Luke's story while starting the transition to Rey, without making the old character look stupid. I absolutely hated the actual Disney trilogy but if it was like this I would have cried and watched it 17 times in theater.
Agreed. I think an inclusion (perhaps in episode 9 of this Fan Fiction, I've only seen this episode so I may be jumping the gun) of Ahsoka and Darth Talon would be good..perhaps Rey learns from Ahsoka, while Kylo Ren learns from Darth Talon. This could lead into episodes 10-12, where Revan/Darth Revan's story is explained, linking new generation with the older generation
Wow that was incredible!!!!! I was on the edge of my seat for this, it was outstanding. Seeing Luke with both of those sabers would have been awesome. Great job as usual!
It hurts so much to see the wasted potential of Finn. A former brainwashed storm trooper, who could have become a Jedi and led a storm trooper revolt against the first order. Instead we got "REYYYY!" and the alien horse racing arc.
I would've been fine if Finn at least show some emotions and guilt when killing his fellow Stormtroopers who were also brainwashed. But instead, he laughs at it and shouts "Whoo!!!!"
@@dereklopez9060 True but he probably felt alone in feeling afraid. He was the only one in his unit to put down his blaster and I doubt the environment was very friendly in the First Order.
@@InjusticeJosh I just wish they kept the deleted scene from TLJ where Finn was this close to start a Stormtrooper rebellion.
@@dereklopez9060 it's so depressing lol, how could such prestigious Hollywood names screw it up so badly? Oh wait.
I love how Ahsoka is in the intro next to the other legendary characters 🔥🔥🙂
I mean, she is literally a legendary characther, herself.
At least she earned it
lukesoka
@@sdfasdfsadf8503 ew
@@Araadh 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Why is this so much better??? Ur telling me that one youtuber can make a better story than the people who do Star Wars for a living? It’s a disgrace.
Well done theory. Well done.
Dear Disney, please hire Star Wars Theory to be a part of your creative team with Dave Filoni & Jon Favreau. This fan fiction is better than EVERYTHING in your sequel trilogy.
Love, a lifelong Star Wars Fan.
SWT, well done sir. As always, May the Force Be With You
When Luke said "I won't let him get away with this", I expected him to go super sayain.
Yes! I was wondering if anyone would catch that Easter egg
Lowkey, same XD
I just realized that now
Over 90000
Don"t forget the lightning!
“What if I wrote the Force Awakens”
*Well for starters, I’d make it follow the growth and determinations of the Solo Children: Jacen, Jaina, and Anakin*
Yes.
Yeah but this was more on how to modify TFA to make it better, not change the setting entirely like Legends did
For me Jar Jar would atleast be shown to be more of a pawn for the sith, I think that’s an interesting idea that works because he’s already established to be “clumsy” as well. No matter what you believe about Jar Jar it’s definitely easy to spin that “clumsiness” into him actually being manipulated
This isn't really about legends, this is more so to modify the story of the sequels.
True!
I definitely think Luke needed some more on screen time in the movies
Also regarding the ending - Just imagine Luke fighting all of those sith lords at once almost like he's in "Ultra Instinct" like he's one with the force like Obi-Wan was fighting against Grievous
It would be like Sidious did with those Jedi Masters that came with Mace to arrest him.
@@mike7671 but better we can at least make him look more powerful than that
@@EarthrealmWarrior I wanted a scene of Luke facing a whole army of troopers all by himself like a bad ass, similar to Windu in the Clone Wars 2D cartoon
@@mike7671 would be cool but they kinda turned him into a joke
Felt more emotion listening to this than rewatching the sequels. I absolutely LOVE the direction that you are taking with this, and hope to see more in the future.
If I had written the sequels I would have definitely borrowed from legends with the Yuuzhan Vong. But if I have to be restricted with what I change, I would mainly focus on proper character development and give them a level to them making their deaths more impactful or meaningful. I would have also kept characters true to themselves, so an example would be how Luke behaves and what he does.
Same I’d also want the YV, sorta like how the Prequels used Droids
I'd have borrowed the Spirit of Exar Kun plotline tbh.
I‘m glad people haven’t forgotten the Vong. Will forever be Canon for me, the Vong, Caedus, everything else
have the Yuuzhan Vong rock up right at the end of epd 9, then that leads into 10, 11 and 12
@William Patterson opps my bad lol
Jesus Christ, The part when anakin, Obi wan, and Yoda touched His shoulder legit made me cry. Such Beautiful Story telling, This is legit What I wanted 7 to be. You legit Deserve to Write at least 1 Star Wars movie
This is so well done especially playing on top of episode seven scenes, just A1 and shoutout to your editing team also!!!
This IS AWSOME. You are the best Star wars creator ever. You care about the story, the characters and know how to make something special. Can't wait to see what you can do next. May the force be with you Star Wars Theory.
This was better than the movie imo. Seeing Luke struggle but stay grounded shows his strength and I love that. Also including the force ghosts along with the son was awesome to see. Not to mention all the wars in the flashback. Can't for for the next one
Why is it you’re so much more creative than every single executive at Disney? I mean all they care about is money and they would’ve made billions with something like this! Awesome fan fic theory it was great
Yeah totally this would have melted the brains of fans...it would have made strong connections immediately across all the movirs and not just as nostalgia
@@mdub2000 that's exactly the problem. "For fans". Disney tried to make formless paste they can sell to everyone, like their marvel movies.
@@karlfranzemperorofmandefil5547 true but even the guys at marvel have better sense when it comes to planning.... i have to admit what they’ve done has been quite incredible especially since i grew up on marvel comics and i mean as a proper comic fan buying issues through the late 70’s through the 90’s
@@mdub2000 yes Marvel does that but they at least do it well. Probably because marvel is nieche as hell (well it was before the MCU) so they actually had to try. With SW they assumed the name would just sell it
Super cool! I love how descriptive you get with these. It's almost like an audiobook
Just wow...this one brought more emotions forward for me than all of the sequal trilogy together. Thank you for this friend and may the force be with you always 🙏🏽❤😭😱
I’ve read the joke many time: Luke never gave up on Anakin, but almost mustered Ben on a hunch. Did Luke come to doubt himself on the gamble he took to bring Anakin back to the light?
That always got me as well I don’t think Luke would do that
Not sure how "mustered" got in there, but I appreciate the thumbs up!
I agree! I was like WTF?!?!
True. He couldn't completely kill Vader, who had already MASSACRED millions of people. Yet he thought of murdering his teenage nephew who hasn't even done a single crime? Like he was just having dark thoughts or communication with Snoke/Palps. That ain't Luke. I would understand if his nephew already murdered somebody or destroyed the temple first.
I love how you didn’t just simply write your own sequel trilogy, you reworked the pieces at play in the actual sequels in order to build the start to a functional trilogy that would have even allowed money hungry Disney to create a ton of spin-offs I would’ve enjoyed watching. Hopefully we can all bring enough attention to your channel in order to get you officially working with Lucasfilm
Empasis on WITH instead FOR. We don't want those corporate hacks at Disney stifling our lord's creative genius.
Don't be silly. We all know that Disney spits on good writers.
These types of vids are what drew me to your channel in the first place, my cold nerd heart is full.
This was fantastic, really awesome work theory, I felt the emotion and the passion in the story. Keep this up 👌🏻🔥
A sequel that continues the story, builds upon character growth AND pays respect to the original source material. Why is this concept so impossible for KK to grasp?
Because the force is female.
its because since "they" are a big name and doesnt want to lose the fans and etc, and not "hurt anyone's feelings now these days" everything has to be political and crap.
@@dirkdiggler9173 it's both of their fault honestly
@@dirkdiggler9173 Kathleen Kennedy forced detrimental changes to the movies. I'm not saying JJ's any good (he isn't) but the movies would have been better without any of her input.
I know everyone always says this, but that was a SMOKING plot. I so freaking wish we could see that on screen. I was so engrossed listening to it. You also managed to utilize the new characters correctly without scrapping them totally. I always love your prequel tie-ins. Hayden is the man!
Coming back to the video as it scratches a particular itch, I just want you to know, Theory, how much of an inspiration you are. Keep being a fantastic fan and a great guy.
Man this was amazing!! I loved the cliff hanger! You really did have me on the edge of my seat the whole time! I can’t wait for the next part!
You'd be Star Wars Canon instead of Theory if you wrote the sequels😂
Does that mean KK only gets to make theory snippets of TH-cam? I’d take that trade.
I almost like the commands until I saw that the likes are ''66'' xD
Damn whoever changed it instead of keeping it at 66
@@DK12970 its a treason then xD
He can to anything now.
I was waiting for this 👌😎
Glad too see your getting back into these type of videos have missed them
THIS IS.... MAANN MAKE MOREE, THIS IS SO GOOD EVEN THROUGH WORDS ONLY! Keep this up
Wow, so compelling. i was completely captivated. and i like how you threw in the idea that lukes green kyber crystals was actually qui gons 👍
Me too, and I haven't thought about it before now but, Obi-Wan was in possession of his lightsaber last we saw.
Unless it went into the pyre w/him at the end of Ep.1
Do you think he found Qui Gon’s light saber at Obi Wan’s on Tatooine?
I completely agree with your comment..
Aparently, that's supposedly cannon lore. I looked it up, and it said Obi-Wan had Qui-Gon's crystal in his house on Tatooine, along with Anakin's lightsaber.
The fact you're not writing for Disney shows they refuse to hire good writers, or anyone who cares about the universe George created. I'm excited for the next one Theory keep it up!
This makes no sense. Just because they don’t hire someone it means they hire no good writers? Is Dave filoni not a good writer? Favreau? Russo brothers?
Preach
@@chief8387 I think Dave is great and the Mandalorian team are taking things in the right direction, but as a whole, absolutely not. I’m excited for the Kenobi show and the spin-offs but my expectations are not high. We as fan base have been let down too much for that.
But as far as them not hiring him as a reason, you’re right. But I say that based off his extremely detailed and researched writing; that if they did care they would hire someone like that. How many times have we heard the writing team either doesn’t know the material or doesn’t care? Just my opinion.
@@Rune_TTV we’ve heard one time that ONE of the writers on a storyboard team was in the process of watching Star Wars for the first time. Just because someone doesn’t know Star Wars like we do doesn’t mean they can’t bring something good to the table. Creativity doesn’t belong to any fandom. As long as there is one person up top who clears projects (aka Dave) there shouldn’t be any issue whether a writer knows Star Wars or not
This is incredible. Thank you for sharing this. Holy crap it was so meaningful and powerful.
This was AMAZING. I wish this story was an actual movie, it was so exciting and well told! Keep up the awesome work, this was sick!! 👏💖
We need a “What If…” style animated Sequel trilogy…
YES!
That would be epic
@@anxiouscracker8438 sure would!
@@GENGHISKHAN-hk3qs it would be cool if they did something similar to what marvel did where they show us what would happen if events in the Star Wars series went differently that would be cool and interesting
@@anxiouscracker8438 it sure would, I would love to see that. But, KK. So, not sure.
Generally, this is an amazing idea. Makes you think how did they end up damaging Star Wars like they did? Hope one day I go into a cinema and seeing your name as director. Some day I’m sure it’ll happen. Superb video
@@Zavala-z9g I am still trying to bleach my memory of the DST. But I found a greater purpose serving the Galactic Empire, mainly the video gaming division
If Opie Taylor can be a director why can’t StarWars theory.
@@Zavala-z9g I am still trying to understand how she beated kylo in ep7
This was extremely satisfying!!! Can’t wait for the next one!!!!!
This was absolutely fantastic, great new story and can't wait for Episode 8. The fan-fictions keep getting better and better. I don't know how you do it...Young Theory!
I'm enjoying this so much, I wish that I was the one who wrote it. Damn you Star Wars Theory for reaching into my brain and completing my thoughts I didn't know were even there. Much love brother, keep up the great work.
This woulda been an S tier Star Wars movie!!!! I’d see this 10 times in a theatre
wow i have chills and goosebumps. well done my friend
Great content Theory! Thank you for giving me what the sequels couldn't even if using some elements from it, it was amazing.
Palpatine’s immortality here seems like that of Orochimaru, I dig it.
truee lol
I know right, now thinking of it makes it more cool.
Mara jade *wearing sith mask in front of whole senate* In the name of the Sith Order I declare War against the new republic!
"Somehow palapatine came back to life"
vs
"jiutsus"
Sith acolyte using reanimated jutsu to revive the dead jedi knights and masters and sith.
Man, I think that Disney should do more to embrace the passion of the fanbase.
They did. After TLJ, they accepted the passionate hate by the fans, which lead them to make Rise of Skywalker.
@@andyb6400 If the rise of Skywalker is what you consider to be embracing the passion of the fandom then wow… what about all the copyright claims on the fan videos. These fans are only showing their love, and yet creators at Lucasfilm think it’s ok to say you can’t show love? Sure that’s that’s embracing the passion of the fans(!) shit like that is how the you know that it’s Kathy and her people. What about the ending? The ending was the biggest screw job to both George Lucas and the fans. That’s only one of the problems.
@@andyb6400 I think you forgot to say "they tricked the fans into believing" they accepted the passionate hate by the fans.
@@WaelAli-sd8sw I mean, TROS is proof. Whiny babies cried about TLJ, saying snoke was the big bad and shouldnt have died and rey was a nobody. so Disney listened to them and made rey a palpatine and brought a big bad villain back. I hate TROS. And it only happened because Disney listened to the "fans" after TLJ
@@andyb6400 those hardcore fans are where the big profit lies. So you have to treat them as a stakeholder and produce your product to cater to their needs. Also, Kathy hates the fans. Why would she even listen? The hardcore fans rejected the woke garbage because it deviates from the Lucas philosophy. But, judging by your opinions, you know know nothing.
Star wars fan from France, i'm following you since years now. And i got to say i enjoyed that video so much. great writing buddy
Man I love your fan ficus! Great things to listen to while doing chores!
We’re making canon out of fan-fiction now? LoL
I’m sure you’re still thinking hard on palpatines survival and the origin of the knights of Ren. But so far, great job man 👍🏻
It’s funny how focusing more on Luke, elevates the importance of Rey and gives her purpose.
A lot of Rewrites/Fanfictions about this just make up an entirely new story - the more interesting idea would be a scenario where JJ offered you his script and let you rewrite it in a certain amount of time, using the same characters, same ideas etc.
AMAZING! Would of preferred to see this than what we got. This has more depth and a better connection to the other films. Can't wait to see your versions on episode 8 & 9!
May the force be with you
I wasn’t ready for it to be over!! I didn’t even realize how quickly it went. Dude, it’s amazing. I had a very similar idea of how I thought The Force Awakens should have gone. Luke would never have snuck in and thought about killing his nephew, Leila’s son! That’s BS. Your theory is MUCH more plausible. See, THAT is really knowing the characters, and what they would do in the face of certain challenges. I’ve been a Star Wars fan since the age of 7, when my parents took me to see it in the theaters in the summer of ‘77. I know them….my entire life. Crazy. So I’m passionate about “realistic” character dynamics, and you always do an amazing job at keeping that consistent, and still have fun with different “what if” scenarios. Love that you’re here bro. Thanks 😊
I really liked the force awakens, still do to this day. However, focusing more on Luke is what should have happened. The sequel trilogy should have continued and finished off Luke's story.
This is really great, being a long time fan of Star Wars it was so upsetting the path Disney took. Thanks for your time and dedication to your work. All the way from New Zealand.
I absolutely love this rewrite.
I personally would have someone, even Ben, be the grandson of Palpatine that was either taken as Luke's apprentice or adopted by Luke. Therefore the whole message "let the past die" in the Last Jedi holds more fact, especially for a descendant of Palpatine who maybe wants to redeem the Empire, his family name and fix the flaws of the Jedi and Sith. But that is the direction my own fanfic thoughts go in.
This exceeded my expectations, going in, Theory! Solid job and really looking forward to 8!
This is great! I really loved the maul clone, this makes so much sense because when Palpatine fought Maul and Savage on Mandalore, he realized his reborn apprentice was just as powerful as he remembered and said: “I still have other uses for you…” So the maul clone, for testing Palpatine’s possible new apprentices, would have made a lot of sense.
Since you asked for some feedback - if you're going to do Ep. 8 Fan-fic - try and step away from all this stuff that we've already seen. I know you really revere George, so I feel it bears reiterating that the only known, quoted criticism George had of Episode 7 was that there was nothing new. And compared to what we got in TFA, I feel like this is just mining even deeper into the nostalgia bubble with the EU flashbacks, Maul 2.0 and Grievous 2.0, Palpatine raising an Anakin 2.0, and so on. I also didn't feel any emotional investment in what was going on, only that we were moving between cool moments for "the fans", which... I dunno. I'm a fan of Star Wars but I also care about why the characters are doing anything other than trying to power up to beat each other.
i feel like we needed an explanation on how the first order was formed and how starkiller base was made without the new republic taking any action against it, probably the biggest plot hole for me
@@chloespell movie wise yes we did but it’s heavily explained in the comics
@@chloespell yeah it's literally a 3rd death star... and the fact that it's actually Illum is never explained.
@@chloespell It's funny, because there's a really easy solution: Just say that it's an ancient Sith weapon, and tha they found it while in the Unknown Regions.
Man this video just sounds like a movie I really wanted to see. Keep up the good work theory!
I'm hooked! Excellent job! Can't wait for the episode 8
This was brilliant! One thing that I would have love to see is Ahsoka showing up and fighting beside Luke in the sequels, such a missed opportunity fro m the actual production team missed out on.
Such an underrated comment. Would be amazing for sure!
In my personal opinion, I really liked TFA when it came out. Although it’s mostly because of nostalgia and the fact it got me back into being a mega Star Wars fan after 5 years. When rewatching it I still tend to enjoy the scenes. I just wish they well… did everything else after TFA better lol.
I wish TFA had been good. TLJ was amazing as it is, then they ruined it all with TROS. Blame JJ. Rian stayed true to Lucas' vision
@@andyb6400 You think TLJ was amazing..? In what way bro... that movie was awful
@@andyb6400 troller detected. Hahaha
@@andyb6400 the only reason I liked the last Jedi was because Luke was in it as Luke is my favourite character
@@nickvigilance763 Visually beautiful, badly written.
This is perfect! I felt and saw everything. Perfect! I havent seen your videos for really long time. So glad to come back to see this. Perfect😀 The Force will be be with you too. Always!
Bro this was dope!! I cant wait for the next one! Keep up the amazing work theory!
Thank you for this! I really loved the grey line between the light and the dark in which Luke walks in this story, his fascination with the sith, as opposed to the usual binary approach...
And you even managed to almost pull Super Sayan transformation in the temple fire eheheh.
Cheers and keep it up!
That was great! I mean, Luke dual-wielding lightsabers about to throw down with the Knights of Ren is a far superior cliffhanger than the garbage Darth JJ gave us.
This was so awesome I love all your videos and I've been watching for 2 years now and there never bad this was just so good keep up the good work
Bro!!!! Keep going with these...I am in love with this new take. Gahhh it's so good!
Force ghost Luke: have u ever heard the tragedy of Disney’s failed sequels, Ben?
*finises explaining story*
Rey’s character writer: where can I learn the power to write terribly?
Luke: I have a bad feeling about this…
I suppose humor is subjective.
Imagine if this was the new trilogy we got, you had me more interested and invested in the storyline in that 15minutes than I was across all three of the new movies! You make the best content, can't wait to see more!!
This was amazing and would've made the sequels worth it. Keep up the great work!
What a cinematic experience! love this man, super excited for the next one :)
And THERE, you just made a better "movie" than an almost 100 year old, "legendary" movie company, could ever make!
You know they make things to sell toys so they don't mind making a good story. They are a business
How? It's literally just prequel fans service
Shit ... That was way more badass than I anticipated. Now I'm pissed we aren't gonna get this for real haha
Pretty epic I think! Only recently subbed to your channel but iv been binging a lot of your old videos must say 10/10
Incredible work man keep making these they are awesome!
Ive been looking forward to this
LOOONG have I waited
Love how you treat Star Wars as modern myth with themes, lessons and references to (in universe) history. That’s how it should be and how the sequels should have been. Timeless
That was brilliant and beautiful man. Actually brought a tear to my eye.
I love the sequels and glad you are doing Theory vids on this
Theory: The Sith weren't necessary bad entities.
Me: Press X to doubt.
*proceeds to press X*
Serral
@Phoenix 𝙾𝚙𝚎𝚗 𝙼𝚢 PROFILE Not from a Jedi.
Yeah this is the way it works from the story of the father foretold that storyline made way more sense integrating with the chosen one direction we were shown in Clone Wars definitely told him what would happen on that path and he ended up on it ... the same path lay before Luke yet he chose wisely and with the force ghosts help would help him further into what his oath was meant to be as the chosen one's offspring as mentioned in Empire .. good tie ins can't wait to see what comes next.. thus is a definite rewatch to get some ideas rolling .. thanks Theory
Love love loved this!!!!! Theory is such an incredible story teller! Wish we could get a fan fiction novel from you my brother! Thank you for the great work I tune in everyday! Much love
Dude, this is so much better! Nicely done,theory!