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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 28 ก.ย. 2024
- This is a hypothetical rewrite of the 2015 film, Star Wars Episode 7: The Force Awakens. We incorporated the use of generative A.I technology such as MidJourney and ElevenLabs.
35 years after the fall of the empire, the galaxy has entered an age of unparalleled peace and prosperity. Leia Organa has worked tirelessly for years brokering peace treaties and trade agreements for old systems to re-form the galactic republic. A job she has been superb at for decades. But there is one last system that wants to reestablish trade. THE IMPERIAL REMNANT. A campaign Leia is staunchly in opposition of and threatens everything her husband Han Solo, and brother, Luke Skywalker worked so hard to build.
Before the Emperor's death, he created a contingency trust to furnish his most loyal supporters and military leaders with significant financial resources, as well as a small cluster of some of the most resource-rich planets in the galaxy so that his legacy could endure. Resources that would substantially aid in the new republic's humanitarian efforts as they attempt to root out the last remnants of crime and piracy syndicates in the galaxy. And rebuild worlds that were ravaged by the empire.
Spanish translation is written by Héctor G. Perez
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Finn gets the story he deserves, Han gets the respect he deserves, Poe gets the mantle he deserves, Rey gets the mystery she deserves, Luke gets the power he deserves, Snoke gets the creepyness he deserves, the Republic gets the defeat they deserve, Anakin gets the protagonism he deserves, we get the Star Wars we deserve. Everyone Happy!!!!
At this point, this channel needs to rewrite the sequel trilogy, MCU Phase 4, and the new Indiana Jones while we're at it.
Hux gets the guile he deserves.
Haha thanks man. Idk about everyone. There’s always a few salty fans that hate everything except their ideas. But to them I say. I look forward to reading your fan fic lol. Thanks for complements! Appreciate it
@@StrongandGrand that’s a pretty full slate but we might be up to the challenge lol
@@evertonporter7887 indeed
“Together Han, Luke, and Leia.” … how Disney never made this reunion happen baffles me. Excellent story.
Worst missed opportunity ever.
When they killed Han in the force awakens that’s what my mind immediately went to. How in the world did they not have 1 scene with those three. It’s so stupid.
@@smitty16s zero emotional impact the way they did it
It’s cuz they don’t believe in strong family’s
You forgot Lando!
Now THIS is pure Star Wars. Reflections of modern day conflicts, epic battles and emotions consequences and most importantly the original trilogy characters acting like did many years ago, but older and wiser. THIS is the Star Wars that we should have gotten. Honestly feel proud of yourselves for such a feat that not even modern day Disney has yet solved.
Thanks M567dk. Those are really lovely words. I'm just a fan out here trying to do what's most interesting for the story and the fans. Thank you for the kind words and all of your support.
The fun thing is some aspects of the clone wars (that were there in the prequels but weren't really explored) have been rolling around in George Lucas head since the Vietnam war, but they suddenly became relevant again during the war on terror.
War and politics are always cyclical.
@@markusbarten455 i
Disney couldn't solve a 3 lettered word search.
3 minutes in, it's already 100x better than anything Disney has crapped out in a decade
you took the words out of my mouth.
Bro I was 15 seconds into the video and was shocked at how good it was already.
Everything except Andor.
@@kg-ck4dt and or is excellent
@@kg-ck4dt Dude no TV series will ever fix the colossal fuck up of the sequels.
I like how this doesn’t completely shit on the fundamental ideas that Disney came up with, but just improves them and properly uses them.
Thanks man
That was clever
Gas mickey
They were never Disney's ideas, they were always George's ideas. And some ideas from the extended universe. They took his ideas and made them worse
@@O1OO1O1 well Rey and Snoke I think we’re Disney Ideas and the knights of Ren I believe.
I waited 43 years for episode 7 and finally got it in story format. Bravo. Well done.
I think George would approve.
yes he would
Math doesn't work.
Holy crap, that was a million times better than what we actually got. I wish we could rewind time and have this guy write episode 7.
On behalf of the Temporal Excellence Agency, we did better. We sent Timothy Zahn back there to write Heir To The Empire.
Disney didn't listen.
We’re basically living in the WORST timeline when it comes to our favorite franchises. Star Wars, Star Trek, Lord of the Rings, Terminator, Dr. Who, etc…
Just a bunch of schlocky, moronic trash written by WoKe talentless hacks who couldn’t care less about respecting the source material. A travesty.
I watch episode vii in theaters, I think it was ok. Mediocre but OK. Then it's down hill from there. Not even Jedis can walk up that steep of a trench. But agree that this is league's better, and we maybe has a chance, they are remaking the Sequel Trilogy, right? I think it's a 1000 times better Idea then tweaking the originals to accommodate with the sequel... which are their first idea. It's just they didn't want to admit the Sequel needed to be thrown out. Now Kennedy is out with the idea of "tweaking" the original Trilogy out with the the rest of the pile.
Really gotta disagree. (Everyone's opinions are valid of course, I just disagree.) To me, this reads like the prequels... super boring, way too much focus on the politico-economic forces and factors-which should matter for depth of backstory, but shouldn't be the focus of the script.
Also, the AI images are just awful.
And... "anyways"?
This is what happens when a lifelong Star Wars fan and not feminist sjws write a Star Wars story
“We get a full display of Luke and Ben’s powers and it is awesome”
Disney screeching “NO YOU CANT HAVE THIS” in the background.
There’s much depth in storytelling, world building with correct and respectful treatment of legacy characters. Beautifully done
Thanks Faizal! Appreciate that you're here.
Are you listening Disney? THIS is how it’s done. This story treatment is a 1000 times better than what we got.
Disney listens, but... thing is... Disney doesn't CARE.
The shadow can only mock, not make; not new things of its own.
Exactly. This is a 1000 times better than what we got from Disney. It is not even close.
No, it’s not. Most everyone would have bitched about this, too. And never let some shoddy AI, which makes Luke look like Tyrion, write a story.
They don’t care lol.
“That… is why you failed” - Yoda
I don’t think they are competent enough to make it good.
i love how often the AI makes Luke look more like Peter Dinklage than Mark Hamill
I also saw some Matt Damon in Luke in a few scenes
I am really liking the rework on Rey’s character. I actually really like her as a Sith, and you managed to make her competent, mysterious, conflicted, sexy, and feminine all in one. Bravo!
This story manages to make everyone better. Finn is actually cool, Rey is interesting and mysterious, Luke is finally Luke.
I have watched and read so much star wars material and man ..this ..this was something special ...the changes ..the story ..the visuals ..amazing ..the stakes ..I mean people who matter actually die at the earned moments ...thanks
Jay! Your words mean the world to me. I spent a lot of time considering how this story would play out if I was at the helm, and I really tried to do it in a way that respects the characters and the audience, so that character moments felt earned and authentic. Thank you for supporting the channel, consider sharing and subscribing Episode VIII is already being outlined.
@@prismstoriesAgreed
The fact that the StarForge is in the story makes the ending so enticing.
These 25mins could definitely turn into a 2 1/2 hour movie. This is actually beautiful.
Just add some more dialogue, fights scenes, emotional scenes, and yeah. There we have it.
Lucas films can redeem Itself if it turns from the woke empire and simply tells stories that matter again, like this one
@@IronKoresadly with carrie fischer gone and harrison ford wanting nothing to do with star wars anymore, there won’t ever be a do-over for these movies.
@@thomasconnolly8683You underestimate where AI is going. Soon you'll be able to watch your own version and it'll look however you want
This was amazing!!
I weep at what could have been. These were my childhood heroes. Thanks for putting this together.
You’re welcome
The writers and crew could NEVER make anyone happy. This version is soulless.
@@DontrelleRoosevelt thanks
I genuinely feel the same way. This honors the admirable people we saw these characters develop into.
This generation of writers have a massive resentment at people who achieved competency and meaning through suffering. Their only accomplishment is in tearing down something beautiful for many of us.
You really honored Han Solo in the opening sequence, I'm only 2:38 in and I already shed a tear for how you showed him to be an old hero dealing with his own insecurities and quest for a final purpose.
Beautiful.
@@robhulson thank you rob
This proves that our issue was never with characters or actors, it was with the narrative. You can tell an exciting new story with new characters, just don’t crap all over legacy characters to prop them up.
for real man. this shit was incredible
Rey as a powerful Sith would be my absolute Dream. Sith a naturally more powerful than Jedi. So having Rey be overpowered would be well within the Lore for a Sith lord.
@@ReveredDead
If they really wanted Rey to be the big hero, then that is fine as long as they flesh out and develop her charecter along the way. She became a key member of the story without us getting hooked on her, we were all hooked on Fin instead.
Rey being a powerful Sith does sound better though, however, I do not think they wanted that at all.
@@ReveredDead Rey being overpowered jedi isn't the problem , the story and the plot are the problem
I've always said Ray, Finn and Poe are great characters set in an awesome universe being dragged by a terrible plot.
I want to see StarwarsTheory’s reaction to this. I feel like he would freaking love this entire plot. Kudos to you. I wishhhhh this was actually episode 7. This is the story the fans deserved.
Dude you and me both. We're still SO SMALL. I have no idea how to get to him, other than blowing up his twitter lol. if you got any hints I am all ears.
Yes! He needs to see this ASAP!!! He will LOVE this❤❤❤
@@marlacali76 I’ll try to shoot him a couple of DMs
Every script that wasn't touched by K. Kennedy, including JJ Abrams, was a really good work with a lot of thought put into it. JJ wanted to go with the G.Lucas script at first but was open to new ideas and came up with two really good stories. The first one never got completed and the tlj script, which was written to improve on the lack of story the first had, were both completely scrapped. Tlj was the last straw for JJ, cus he wrote a really good story and worked his ass off doing it, then KK comes along and even tried to destroy every copy of it. Sorry coffee lady, didn't anyone teach you nothing stays buried.
Doomcock got his hands on an unpolished version but it's basically the same. Lukes green lightsaber crystal comes into it.
But what the hell 🤷🏻♂️ who needs great and competent writing when you can come up with randomly overpowered girls and contradicting scenes with no explanation.
@@MikeDchy25 sounds like you have some first hand knowledge there Mike. Care to share with the class?
Literally amazing, PURE STARWARS! Political tension, rise of authoritarianism and showing of bureaucratic regimes, always classic epic battles and amazing characters 10/10!!!
I don't know why you don't have a billions views... this is amazing. The move to make Rey evil or at least on evil's side from the start is an incredibly smart decision. We've never seen someone on the darkside change...except for one final moment with Vader. Rey is perfect for this role, a dark/lost chosen one having a choice to change is new, and very very relevant right now.
This... this is how you upset a status quo. Now there is no 'Mary Sue' complaint. Her abilities and legacy make her competency perfectly logical and still mysterious at her introduction. And to top it off... we get the female darksider/Sith we have never seen in a film before... glorious!
Finn's treatment is also serious and not a joke. His character matters to the plot and isn't just a token ignored and forgotten as he is for half of the new trilogy.
And then the resentment from Ben to his father is much more compelling, adding Poe as the son he wanted as opposed to the Ben the son who he never understood is just... chefs kiss.
DUDE this is such high praise. I am so happy you resonated with the material. I care so much about this project and hoped it would resonate in this way. I wanted to make the new characters feel necessary and position the legacy characters in a way that was respectful of their struggle while still leaving room for them to pass on the torch. Starting to break story on Episode 8 this weekend so please hang tight. I got a lot of work ahead of me.
I can feel the love for the characters in this. It's wonderful.
While still being a great inversion of the previous films, like they attempted with the Sequel Trilogy. Keeping things like Han's death, but giving it weight in the story. This feels almost like a heavy-handed (but necessary) edit of the ST rather than just a whole new attempt. I really appreciate that there is still some DNA of the ST.
This is genuinely the best rewrite of the sequels i have ever seen.
Thanks Carter, Appreciate you being here and your support.
Oh... my...Han's death actually gave me chills and had me tearing up. That was SO MUCH BETTER. And I LOVE that you made Rey the Sith. It's perfect. This was amazing. I'm subbing for the rest.
Thanks man! I love that moment too. it's heart breaking, and gives our characters a personal grudge match against the antagonist as opposed to just a mysterious threat. I thought it would be more impactful for his friends and family to actually be upset by his death rather than two characters who knew him for less than a few days lol.
@@prismstories yes! His "actual" death was a joke. A bad, sad, pathetic joke. 😔 This has meaning.
Thanks man!
Han’s death hit me way harder in this story than the one in the actual movie
I fucking weeped!
He is written the way he should have been and that's why it's more emotional🥺😥💖😭
We need the next episode! This was so good. A.I. is getting to a point to where we are going to get a full trilogy with cinematic realness. If Disney wont fix what they have destroyed, the fans will!!!
I give it 5 to 10 years before some clever collage kids can recreate Avatar. we're on the precipice. And I am going to bet my channel on it.
This was fucking FANTASTIC. I felt more emotional depth in Han’s death just from these AI generated images and your reading voice than I did with the entirety of TFA. You also essentially kept all of the major plot elements of the ST while giving them more meaning and reason. 10/10, leagues beyond what we actually got.
Thanks man, really appreciate it
Word. I even got a little teary eyed. Wonderful display of what good writing can do.
I’ve seen multiple Stars Wars fans post videos like this online with their versions of the sequels. And they have all been 100% better than the garbage Disney gave us. How is it a multi billion dollar company can’t get Star Wars right. Yet someone online can. It baffles me how incompetent Disney is and how Disney handled the sequels.
Really it boils down to a business mandate. Disney acquires a property and immediately starts developing a slate and release dates without a ton of planning for the substance of those release dates instead of doing it the way artists approach material which is develop an entire story first and then work towards production and release.
Blows my mind man. Disney hires people based on politics, they don’t look for the best in the industry anymore.
kinda true
Its simple. The people of Disney are not fans. They dont know the characters, they dont know the story. All they want is to put their ideology into already established IPs (because they cant make anything new worth watching based on their beliefs).
Kathleen Kennedy!
I hope this blows up. This was really well done. This fixes all the shortcomings of EPVII while not throwing everything out the window. Switching Ben and Rey vastly improves the story and wasn't even something I knew I wanted until now.
Exactly right. This gives Rey a credible origin and a compelling story arc. None of that infuriating Mary Sue bulls**t foisted upon us by the studio.
This was just brilliant. You have captured the identity and essence of Star Wars. I am so angry this is not the story we got. The scale, heart and pure character depth that is being demonstrated is so inspiring.
I, too, felt almost a primal rage against the fools who ruined our heroes by writing nihilistic drivel fueled by no belief in the power of the true masculine and what really makes the feminine strong. THIS is what I would absolutely add after watching Star Wars in the Machete Order. Terrific stuff.
You people drool over every sh_t you find on youtube, don't you? To read this comment section is just idiotic, so much dumb praise.
Because you know what? Jarjar Abrams and Rian Johnson got a lot of praise which was equally dumb, too. It makes mediocre artists go megalomaniac.
His story might be better than what Disney made, but still needs a lot of work before it could be considered good. Raise your standards a bit, ffs.
Then Sith Lord Kennedy said, “it’s treason then”. The script and its author were never seen again.
Came here via The Criticla Drinker. Excellent and so much more character driven.
I’ve got to admit, I actually got goosebumps at the end there. Can you imagine how insane with anticipation the fandom would have become if Ep. 7 really ended like that? Truly an excellent job all around. Cannot wait for 8 & 9 to come out. I’ll play all 3 together on my TV and pretend the real 7,8,9 never existed. I especially need a TLJ remake to get that abomination out of my memory. You got one more subscriber here!
you got goosebumps watching a 25 minute video of awful Star Wars AI generated art and a monotone man reading his bad writing? are you stupid?
In the future we might be able to achieve turning this into an actual movie using IA tools.
The Han and Poe dynamic was an awesome addition, good rewrite
Thanks Inspector. I felt like it only makes sense for the new characters to be involved with the lives of the legacy characters. Makes the passing of the torch feel more natural
@@prismstories You would think. JarJar was wrong. Han, Luke, and Leia didn't overshadow the new characters. They still shine in their own way.
I like this rewrite
This was spectacular. So much more character depth, and Han’s death actually means something!!!! His reply to Ben totally got to me. The OT characters slowly handing off the story in a natural way to the new ones 👌
And I’m so intrigued by Rey’s journey and continued arc now. Really well done, thank you for giving us such a great story!
The fact we could have had an Old Luke talking to a Young Anakin. BRO I can’t tell if this glorious script you made pisses me off or makes me happy
Wow, amazing. Superior to the original in every way. And it made me realize we never got a funeral for Han on screen...
The "what does your heart tell you" comment gave me a pang in all the feels. Throwback to Shmi saying it to Anakin, and now Anakin says it to Luke. Damn! This was fantastic, thank you for sharing your vision 🤝
People are loving that line. Thanks for watching
Ok, this is my number seven. Luke turning to Anakin for support and counsel, actually brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.
I would have killed for a "There is much of you in him." to Anakin about Ben, for once complimenting Anakin for his connection to things and not Vader's.
I was crying when Luke was talking to his father
Han’s line “just you” hit so hard
got chills dude
I clicked on this video half bored, half curious.. Had no idea my mind would be blown. This was 10/10 Star Wars storytelling. Absolutely amazing!
Only 9 minutes in and I love it. Which means there's nothing wrong with Ben, Finn, Poe or Rey, just disastrous storytelling and marketing. Good job man!
This was an amazing rewrite of Episode 7, beautiful, shocking amd dark all at the same time
That means a lot, coming from the fan base. I really appreciate the support and love JediMaster. Looking forward to the next one
Wow! Just wow! This is the best what if I’ve seen! Luke is the badass we all know and love. Han is mourned properly and Leia is as competent as ever! Well done!
Thanks BB keep a look out for the next one in the trilogy!
Prism, I'm a 51-year-old man who was there as a six-year-old boy when SW tilted the earth on itself in '77 and I gotta say, WOW! On behalf of that wide eyed kid who sat in that cinema all those years ago I not only thank you for your incredible hard work but mostly for making me feel the SW goosebumps once again! You need to know that you've done something extraordinary here! PS: Your Ep 8 is even better and can't wait for your version of 9! MTFBWY and thanks again!
Bobby you warm my heart. I love hearing this. I am a nobody writer in the Hollywood world. And haven't really had my shot yet. So having the tools to experiment and try my hand at IP I love has been a very freeing experience. Thank you for watching and hope to see you in the comments in the final chapter. Best Wishes
High praise.
@@prismstoriesI demand a remake with your version.
I LOVE this. Bringing Luke, Han, and Leia back together was one of the biggest missed opportunities that we’ll never be able to correct now… I really like your Filoni-esque approach to using the best of the old EU canon, while modifying it with the new elements presented in the The Force Awakens, instead of literally scrapping everything and creating a confusing unexplained new reality with little to no lore to back things up. Beautiful, man! Great job. Looking forward to your next installments with great anticipation.
This is phenomenally written and truly feels like Star Wars. Just enough politics to please prequel fans without overwhelming OT fans; emphasis on family; the power of love; good vs evil; the contrast of ancient mysticism and modern society; someone loses a limb... wow. Bravo. Can't wait to watch the others.
DUDE, this was PHENOMENAL. I've read, heard from others and even imagined for myself how the sequels could have been soo much better, but THIS takes the cake, easily.
Fantastic work, compelling story/suspense and believable character development. I hope you can complete the rest of the trilogy!
Thank you man! I sincerely appreciate it! I will definitely finish it, and unlike, the franchises current ownership I mapped out all 3 before I took a crack at this one. It's comments like these that make me want to keep going. Thank you for the support. if you're able to share on your socials it's always appreciated but no pressure. Just trying to grow this baby channel into something special, with integrity for respect for our audience. More to come soon.
@@prismstories Definitely will do. I'm looking forward to Episode VIII and IX!
... consider me a new sub 🤙
@@BeYera3 appreciate the support! Stay tuned!
AGREED
this is infinitely better than what we were given, so much closer to the original spirit of Star Wars, while introducing new characters properly
This makes me love every new character. Wow. I feel like I have a real connection with them now. I can't believe we got what we got. I gotta admit, I teared up at the han part near the end. What could've been... *sigh.
I was instantly engaged and loved every second of this. Beautifully written and true to Star Wars. How the flip flap we didn’t get anything close to this level of quality is embarrassing for Disney. Subbed and looking forward to the next parts if you choose to.
Glad you enjoyed it! and thank you for the support. Looking forward to what's next.
I loved this. I was actually super interested in the direction this was going and I loved the setting so much. The successful Jedi Order, the promising young Ben, the Fallen Rey, and Luke trying to do the most good he can. I wish this was the story we got
Luke looks up at the night sky. Pouring rain falls, he holds his lightsaber high... "GOTCHA SUCKERS!!!"
This is the single greatest video I have ever watched… how could a bunch of actual writers not even come close to this
Wow. What a complement! Thanks
Because Wokism is a disease
Don't confuse vocational writing with good storytelling.
@@helmanfrow what do you mean?
@@ZachBroom I'm agreeing with the OP, who used the phrase "actual writers". I'm taking a cynical stance and suggesting that these days a talented writer is more likely to be found on TH-cam than in a major studio.
What makes a writer "actual"? PRISM is an "actual" writer. The people who wrote the studio movies are actually terrible writers.
Han's death actually made me more emotional in this video than in TFA. Brilliant story and only the beginning of a revolution! AI will change the potential of fanfiction forever in a way that Hollywood will become obsolete.
You did a tremendous job of unifying the Prequel and OT aesthetic, incorporating the Sequel characters, and making all of the relationships much more meaningful with just a few slight re-calibrations. And, I get heavy EU/Dark Horse vibes from this, realizing how cinematic so many of those Legends stories were and how I long to see them on screen. Hat's off to you, would love to see Eps. 8 & 9.
Yeah because switching the hero and the villain is a "slight re-calibration"...
@@thomgizziz Wait until he switches it again seeing as that's the set up.
ok this is pretty good. Waaaaaaaay better than what we got. Rey, Ben, Finn and Poe are very interesting. Luke, Leia and Han are still awesome, but you can gradually see the story shifting to the newer characters. The Disney Sequels team (especially the producer) could really learn a thing or two. I would have like to have seen Corellia as Hans Burial place. Maybe it would have been made a better planet as a place that rallied around Hans transformation from rouge thug to War Hero. But this whole thing was really good.
I love how gritty and focused the art direction is for this. So balanced and honest on how real a power vacuum would actually look like when the Imperial structure of resources and technology is eliminated. Everything would have to face a sort of "black mirror" of the aftermath.
Crime, medieval culture and religious intuition would return. And the Skywalkers would once again place themselves to face the fate of not only the universe but the power and mystery of the force itself.
Damn you Kathleen, you failed us all. Blinded by your own ego and fear. We all watched you fall. And now we fans of GEORGE LUCAS STAR WARS have the high ground!
How the hell can I get chills from your story while JJ put me to sleep? Nicely done.
Wow, the trio together, a great plot, great ai artwork, and throwing in the Starforge at the end from KotoR was unexpected. Absolutely marvelously done.
Thanks man!!!
I can not believe how amazing this is. The conflicts, the delivery of prior events, the political conundrums, this here is masterful writing!
It's crazy that HUGE movie studios can not come up with anything remotely similar to this with millions of dollars and countless writers and thinkers. Anyone who approved of the movies we got should be fired starting with the CEO and the other execs, and all benefits, bonuses and company cars given to them should be paid back!
This is the story we deserved. Every character we love gets the story they deserve and every new character suddenly becomes more interesting. Great stuff. Thank you
Seriously on the verge of tears from the emotions this brings, for both the moving story, the connected plot points and of course the fact that this story was not made. I suppose the upside to AI movies in the next couple of years, we'll be able to enjoy this as a full 110m movie! Thank you so much for this. Here's hoping you bring us 8 & 9. The redemption story arc of Rey would make me care for her!!!
I am not a huge Star Wars fan and I was dragged to watch the Last Jedi by a friend who loves the franchise back when it came out in 2017. I rented The Force Awakens the day before in order to get ready for the 2nd episode of the new trilogy and thought it was a serviceable popcorn flick. Nothing crazy good, very predictable, but overall entertaining. When we left the theater after seeing TLJ, my friend was DISTRAUGHT. The way that movie affected her was heartwrenching. She pointed out to me all the inconsistencies, how the characters were not acting like themselves, how incredibly stupid the story was. As a someone who didn't grow up with the original movies, I obviously wasn't much affected by it, but I sympathized with her so much, because I could only imagine how I would've felt if the same treatmend had been reserved to a franchise that was near and dear to my heart.
My friend deserved better. The Star Wars fans all over the world deserved better. Heck, even I, a casual viewer, deserved fucking better.
For what it's worth, you have my deepest simpathies and it's great to see fans creating their own content and come together in the name of the things they love.
This rewrite had me on the edge of my seat ;)
Yay!
This was so great! Having Rey an already well-trained Sith was genius. Luke was perfectly written as well. This is the Star Wars I grew up with and dreamt of seeing. Bravo!
Thanks Tim!
Yeah - just one nit pick though, there aren't any more Sith due to the prophecy, so she and Snoke must be some type of lesser dark side force user
@@qwertyvypez maybe
I couldn't stop watching this. This was amazing. Thank you!!
**SPOILER ALERT**
(For Anyone Who’s Never Seen The Actual Movie for Context.)
When Han died, It was not what I expected and I had tears in my eyes. I am sharing this with my fellow enthusiasts - as we all should! Get the word out - share this!
RT you're a rock star! Really happy you vibed with it. along with so many others. The support has truly been amazing. and Yes SHARE SHARE SHARE. The best way to support this channel at such an early stage is to spread the word. I hope I will be able to continue to earn your support.
@@prismstories Han saying "I know" to Luke as he died: perfect!
@@DankFarrik1138 thanks man. I like that part too
@@prismstories What If Star Wars: The Last Jedi Was Awesome? What If Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker Was Awesome?
Dude spoiler alert! Wasn't finished watching when got on the comments...lol
God. Damn. I don't think I have enough words to describe how enraptured I was listening to this remade version of The Force Awakens. Everything about it felt so genuine to what made Star Wars: *Star Wars*. I want to rant about how much I love every detail of this new story but i'll settle for saying that this 25 minute video gave me more enjoyment than the last near decade of Disney Star Wars. Please keep up the good work!
You honor me with your words Awolfx, truly. you have no idea. Thank you for the support and hope to see you here in the next one.
Anything would be better than the garbage we were fed, but this is exceptional. Keep pushing this, man, you never know when your break is going to happen. This is truly a New Hope.
THANK YOU!!!!
I felt so much more in this abbreviated new story than in the entire sequel trilogy.
This was brilliantly written and feels like true Star Wars no matter what side of the political aisle you're on no matter what you think of any of the Six original movies this feels like it's part of that story and i love how much love is in this
Thanks Bottom Barrel, you honor me with your words
Now this is the kinda use of AI tech that I can get behind. Great artwork & a truly well crafted Star Wars story, possibly the best ep7 fan fic I’ve watched/read, and I must’ve watched/read most if not all of them over the last 7 years.
I hope you’re pouring the same amount of love & care into continuing & concluding your story as you obviously did in creating it. I’m really looking forward to seeing what you’ve got instore for your versions of these beloved characters.
Truly well done & Thanks for sharing with us 🙏🏻
oh man Hobbzee you're going to get me emotional. I've been working towards writing professionally for the better part of 5 years and haven't been able to catch a break. with Covid and now the writers strike its been supper tough, but you and the other folks who have enjoyed this stuff has meant the world in an otherwise challenging time in my personal life. Thank you for being here.
@@prismstories Keep your chin up man! Choosing a career in the arts can often be challenging & not always as instantly gratifying as we'd like it to be, but you've obviously got a keen eye for storytelling & more importantly pacing, which for me is often the difference between a good story & a great story. Just keep at it. Write whatever you can, whenever you can as when paired with hard work, true talent rarely goes unrewarded 👍
P.s. even more excited for your next episode since you announced the runtime clocks in @ over 40 mins 😲👏👏
Dude, this is leaps and bounds better than what we got. I'm a huge star wars fan, I've watched every show, movie, played all of the games and read a few comics online and I gotta say this would have been better than most, if not all of it. I really hope you get a shot at the big screen one of these days.
Thanks man
I want to see this guy re-envision the Matrix sequels now.
I'm thinking about it
.. haven't watched Star Wars since the disappointments.. in a galaxy far far away.. they need writers like this
Thanks Da Edge, Yes, would like to see new and exciting story telling from them as well.
You should watch Andor S1
With some polish and great dialog, this could have been the ESB of the new cycle. What's missing are the Droids that are central to the entire storyline. They serve the role of tying the beginning to the distant end.
I am 10 minutes into this and it is already a thousand times better than the Disney Trilogy. Please do an episode 8 and 9. Yes Anakin force ghost talks to Luke!!!!
The end reveal of Snoke’s plan knocked me out of my seat. Awesome stuff I wish we had gotten this
hee hee hee. Thanks Tom! I think this is going to be a wild ride. The fan response has been bonkers.
starts off strong and, legitamately having Rey be the villain was a very intriguing switch. But, it absolutely loses its way around the time Ben gets dismembered and Luke talks with ghost Anakin. lol it was a noble effort but this needs insaaaaane amounts of reworking to be a fitting sequel
This is absolutely incredible! What will it take to get an episode 8 and 9 of this? I love that it seems to be building and heading somewhere, creates/edits a post-ep 6 future and is super aware of the storyline that has already happened up to that point. It's also nice that we get to see the rise of something dark out of the peace times instead of just being thrusted back into war
This is now canon for me. Thank you for all the time and effort you put into this. I got chills hearing you speak about the star forge. Last time i was learning about the star forge was when i played kotor years ago. Different era but similar construct
I'll definitely take this rewrite over what we originally got. Masterfully done!
This is the star wars the fans wanted. Amazing job.
THe vocal minority*
I really liked this version. It was original and a hell of a lot more imaginative than Disney's retelling of a New Hope. Good job
Thanks Vincent, appreciate the support.
@@prismstories Anytime. Keep up the awesome work
Thanks!
Oh man, no words can be used to describe emotions after watching this video. Disappointment of how Disney ruined the SW and joy from your story that I wished to see at the cinema years ago so desperately!!! Such a great job!!! Thanks. You have restored the peace in the galaxy!
This is honestly the best star wars content I've seen in years, its mature and new while being faithful to its origins
If the second and third act are as good as this you’re going to have a million subscribers soon enough
Excellent work Prism
People fail to see that the problem with the sequel trilogy isn’t the characters, but the narrative itself. This story sounds a thousand times better than the one we got. THIS should have been the real episode seven
That story was AMAZING! You really imagined a wonderful story and honored all the characters appropriately. I love that Luke is recognized as a Grand Master Jedi and how he vanquishes Rey with ease. That is the way it is supposed to be (rather than Rey being able to defeat Luke, unexplainedly). Your story telling is really FANTASTIC. Thanks and Bravo! -Rob (Pleasanton, CA)
She didn’t defeat Luke, he let her win. He never let his guard down until he was sure she wasn’t going for a killing strike. Just saying
Absolutely a masterpiece. It had me scared, inspired, and even cheering. Excellent storytelling and much better character development
He knows: "This is not the Jedi way." with that music brought a tear to my eye while imagining this moment on the big screen being like the one with the Emperor.
Wow! I don't have the words. This is exactly what a Star Wars movie should be. Can't wait to hear the rest of it. Disney, are you paying attention!?
This is excellent! If only we could have had this type of quality story, characters, and emotions! Please more of this quality content. This is the story we were waiting for all of these years since Episode IV set us on this journey so long ago.
Will do!
I was absolutely enthralled by this storytelling. And then you said the Star Forge and I nearly died on the spot. Disney needs to take notes.
For real it's like the perfect evolution of the Empire building ridiculously large weapons without it being yet another Death Star.
Absolutely amazing! This video made me so much more emotional than anything in the sequel trilogy. This is what we should’ve got for the force awakens. Will you do videos for the last Jedi and the rise of skywalker?
Yes I absolutely will. Thank you Jacob for your support! it means the EFFING world to me.
H O L Y S H I T. I thought this is just gonna be another fanfic (well, it sorta is) but the amount of plot thinking, the emotional play, the canonity is superb. I've watched many episode vii fanfics, but this one takes it.
You honor me with your words. Thanks Syafiq
I just finished watching your video and I have to say this is a master piece. The ending gave me chills. And this version of ep 7 is 1000 times better than disney's version. Han solo's death in this is 100 times more better and emotional than in disney's version. And I like how Luke's jedi order wasn't wasted and most importantly, I like how Luke, Han, and leia were treated in this version. Poe was better in this than in disney's version. It is funny how you made rey a sith lord and I really liked Ben Solo in this. This video deserves 10 M views and if you are planning to do a ep 8, I can't wait for it.
Very kind words. Thanks @NitewolfFN Yes we're continuing this "What If" over into the next.
@@prismstories I can't wait to see the next part.
I'm constantly getting goosebumps with this, magical.
Absolutely Brilliant this was the story i wish we had that took us back to the galaxy far far away. The level story details, call backs, family, tragedy and heroics that made feel like a kid again well done in every way i cannot wait for the next episode 🙌👏
Thanks Chris, Hope to not disappoint!
Random TH-camr with 50 subs > Disney’s entire writing team.
Ha! This Random TH-camr thanks you my guy. Appreciate the support.
Agreed
This is 100,000x better than the crock of crap Disney put out. How I wish the original Lucas storyline was followed, even if loosely.
Agreed. I don't know how I feel about an elderly Maul returning would have worked but I am sure it could have been pretty sweet.
This is amazing man, keep up the good work ‼️💯
Thank you AJ really glad you enjoyed it! As a small creator you never know what’s going to work. So I appreciate it. If resonate with it Sharing the video on your socials is literally the best thing you can do to give it life, but don’t feel obligated. Have a great day!
Im 2:53 in and this is already magnificent.
*Edit: Omfg Rey! 😂😂😂
*Edit 2: this was spectacular. I was cheering and exclaiming the entire time like I was actually in a theater. So emotionally powerful as well. Top level writing!!
Star Wars Theory sent me. Awesome writing! I got chills at Luke and Anakin speaking.