"So cool! Cold even! I hope nopony will notice I left that hill snowy during Winter Wrap-Up." I live with my brother, who is also an idiot, so I now speak it fluently!
This is like some bronies Roleplaying in a chat room. It opens with Not Rainbow Dash writing several posts by himself, trying to get someone else to interact with him. Then someone who actually knows him, Marijuana, logs in and responds to him. After that Dusk writes almost a whole paragraph of him just talking to himself, before Brave and the nurse start chatting with each other, as they've probably done a lot of roleplaying with each other before. Then Not Rainbow Dash decides to try and interact with them as Marijuana is afk. Turns out she was actually having a private conversation with Not Twilight Sparkle, asking if she wanted to continue from where they left off last time. So Marijuana asks Brave, just 'cause everyone knows who he is, if she can help with Not Twilight Sparkles tantrum, and he solves it the only way he knows how, 'cause he's actually a pervert who prefers to do sexual roleplay, by tackling her to the ground and hugging her. Not Twilight is okay with this. And then it goes on and on and on and on, finally resulting in one of them saying: "Hey, you know what would be great? Let's copy paste all that we've written here, and make a video out of it! For Bronies by Bronies!" This is not a story. This oozes roleplay to the moon and back. And they also had to accept Not Rainbow Dash to be allowed to voice his OC, 'cause he wouldn't stop hassling them about it. Urgh.
no what's even more rediculous is that the villain slowly and carefully removes his weapon just so he can give a lame retort to a character...rather than actually do something
I want to write a horrible fan fic about Tommy Wiseau going to Equestia and becomes an alicorn princess... It's so bad my mind refuses to do so, but my body demands to write it.
9:59 - 10:05 For those curious about the actual names yet not motivated enough to look it up... Not-Rainbow Dash = Breeze Rider Not-Shining Armor = Officer Donut Not-Fluttershy = Iridescence Not-Twilight = Star Whistle Marijuana = Doodlecute Mister Brave = Mister Brave
I love the people below trying to defend this "They're not professionals, give them a break and let them grow!" "Its not like you could do any better!" 1. If you tell someone that something they are doing is good 100% of the time, they will never improve, thats what criticism is for, to grow as an artist. 2. Mr. Enter IS doing an animated series called "Growing Around" and the first episode is a little more then half way done. the sample clips we've seen shows good animation, understandable voice actors and a charming plot. So yes, he is doing better.
Agreed. Also there is no way this was the best they could do. There are at least a few areas they could have easily improved upon with a little more effort (They could have put a little more effort into the story for one and a few more takes for the voice acting wouldn't have hurt either.).
Yes, thank you! I believe Enter and his team can eventually make it on TV with Growing Around. I really do. I also want to bring up that if they're only HALFWAY through the 1st episode, then they are obviously taking their time to get it done right. Im not saying that the Dusk's Dawn team should get NO credit, but this is bad. They need to be pushed to do better, and with this kind of thing you cant just hold their hand through it.
I love the people defending too! This may be bad in a lot of subjects, but it can grow into something even better, and even more! I did post 1 comment on the actual one saying their faults and what they could fix. I do hope they continue it.
AnimalCreation(Ace) I agree with you on ALL those points. if my mom saw that I made a finger painting I made in kindergarden and said it was perfect I would still be making them. She said they were good but I could be better and I improved! Im not a animator and i know how hard/easy it can be and im no good at it but This.... This is not using all the things you could. Im no better but they could do waaayyyy better (Cough)Growing around(Cough)
2:15 For automatic subtitles, this is what not-Rainbow Dash said: "cellco called even have nobody will it cites that heals not only doing less your app"
Aubriella Martell LOL Yeah. I remember in elementary school we were watching a TH-cam video from the History Channel with subtitles on, and we were supposed to make notes on the video, but we weren't paying attention because we were laughing so hard at the subtitles.
+JoCoProductions After listening to the line about 30 times and seeing Mr.Enter guesstimate the words I think I finally figured it out. "So cool! Cold even. I hope noone noticed I left the hill snowy after winter wrap-up"
I just realized that Dusk's Dawn ripped off the scene from The Last Airbender, when Katara calms Aang down when he's in his avatar state by hugging him. Why, Dusk's Dawn? Why?
+BlazingCookie Would have been funny if the guard said it sarcastically, or better yet if Marijuana did. It could have been something that made me laugh on purpose.
11:30 "I'm too evil for that"? That's not a normal thing to say. Not in real life OR in fiction. If you want the character to not want to freeze, just have them say "Never" or something. Don't have them say what is basically "I'm the antagonist, so I can't listen to what you say".
+MrCrazyToad Alternatively, have the character SHOW that they are too evil for that. A simple smile or laugh followed by them following through with the evil action. Also, I am pretty sure how good or evil you are has little to do with your willingness to cooperate with someone barging into your home and making an demand of you.
I get that the hug was an Avatar the Last Airbender reference but there's a huge problem: it doesn't work here. The reason it worked for Avatar is because Katara and Aang had a special connection. They cared deeply about each other. Aang even chose not to give her up because he loved her, despite not being able to control the Avatar state as a result. The reason it doesn't work here: these two characters had no previous interaction. They don't have a meaningful friendship or connection of any kind. In reality, that hug shouldn't have done anything.
+Shwah Gamers It should have thrown him like 3 yards back. There were 3 freaking tornadoes! How did you get past that?! XD Also I didn't even think of that reference. Good on you for spotting it. I was too distracted by the horrible animation. :D
After 12 times of watching his line I think I know what he said, "So cool! Cold even. I hope no one will notice that I left the hill snowy during winter wrap-up." and the angel bunny joke is somebody noticing he's not do his job? Even if he's not wearing any sort of vest in the scene? No matter what it was intended to be, I wasted at least 20 braincells trying to come up with an idea of what it was...
More so "So cool! Cold even. I hope no one will notice I left the hill snowy during last year's Wrap-up" The bunny noticed and the implication is that's how he got busted... And I'm unsure if that was supposed to be funny.
OK after what feels like 100 times trying to translate not-Rainbow-Dash's first line, I think I got it. "So cool! Cold, even. I hope nobody will notice, I left that hill snowy during last year's wrap-up."
Anyone else notice that Not-Rainbow-Dash, Not-Fluttershy, Not-Twilight, and Marijuana all have the same tail style? Mr. Brave and Not-Shining-Armour also share the same tail style, though different from that of the other characters.
PatarCreation s Also " *ahem* Freeze? Ah'm WAY to evil to for DAT" "He sounds dangerous" *LATER* "Since I'm OBVIOUSLY cured, you guys can go back to your... normal occupations." *SLOW CLAPS* That was the BEST pretending ever!
Imagine my horror as one day at work, in the middle of the warehouse, long after watching this review, did I realize that the blue one's pronunciation of 'notice' wasn't just the voice actor's accent- but an incredibly forced, only-works-in-text pun. Not-ICE. It's like a scar on my psyche now.
Thats why I mostly don't care for fan-fictions (of any kind). 1) OC's I don't know or care for 2) obvious cliche evil ark sides/ doppelgänger 3) unneeded drama 4) never feels like something that could be in the actual show. I would like to see at least one fan-writer who can write a story that feels like it could be an actual episode of the show it's based on (not counting suicide squidward).
Turnabout Storm did roughly the same thing for the Ace Attorney series. Concealed the Conclusion and Touhou Danmaku All-Star Medley are pretty well-made Touhou fangames, in addition to the two well-received fan-animes (Fantasy Kaleidoscope: Memories of Phantasms and Touhou Musou Kakyou: A Summer Day's Dream) ...As for actual TV shows, the best I've got was the He-Man vs. Lion-O Death Battle by ScrewAttack. They had the cheesy 80s dialogue down pat ("A whirlwind should *blow* him off course!"), at the very least. Honor Trip and Dragon Ball Multiverse are decent Dragon Ball Z fan works--the former written and apparently very good, the latter a fan-comic that mimics the original art style surprisingly well *and* does a great job with canon personalities. There are adaptations that stay true to the original spirit; the thing is, animated works have ridiculous production values *at best*, and most people don't want to try an "original flavor" work in a different medium because the adjustment is difficult. There are plenty out there, though. They're just hard to find.
okay, thanx for the info, do you may know some more cartoon (or western animated) based fan-works? I'm not so much the anime guy. I mostly prefer cartoons. ^^;
toongrowner1 I know of a few, but I haven't been through nearly as many of them as I would like. TV Tropes, as always, has several wonderful lists: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FanWork tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FanFilm tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FanVid tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OriginalFlavour That last one will probably get you the most stuff; if this isn't enough, find a show you like and search for "Fan Works" or "Fanfic recommendations" on TV Tropes, accompanied by the name of the show. That should get you started. It's how I found Turnabout Storm and Touhou, as a matter of fact.
I don't write pony fanfics, but I do write for many other things and I never use OCs. I also do my best to make it seem like it would fit into the world of whatever I'm writing for.
9:27 Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think that's a rip-off of Avatar: The Last Airbender. It's just like what happened when the sandbenders stole Appa. The tornadoes and glowing eyes just scream Avatar State and the way she was calmed down is very similar to the way Katara is able to calm Aang when he's in the Avatar State. I'm just surprised that she didn't have an arrow on her head.
So here’s how I interpret the monologue, his parents left many years ago and that woman on the bed is an allusion of his mom, the special day is his 9th birthday I believe and it’s important because it’s when young ponies become adults.
In case you're still confused, he said "So cool, cold even. I hope no one noticed I left that hill snowy during last year's wrap up?" I won't lie, I had to listen to it a bunch to understand.
***** Actually he wouldn't make a terrible berserker, it was a translation mistake that suggested that berserkers whent into battle with no armour. Berserkers were infamous vikings who usually wore a bear's hide to signify that they were strong and powerful, who never seemed to fear death and who got themselves into an unnatural state of rage for battles, hence why we say going berserk when we speak of going into an unnatural state of anger. The reason why the translation mistake happened was cause Ber is an old word for bear, but it also mean being bare (like bare chested) and serk/serki was an old type of shirt, so the translators that berserker/berserki meant "bare chested", when in really was more like "Bear shirt". Sorry if you were not in the mood to get this detailed comment being serious on a comment of yours that is two months old.
It took me a while to realise not-Rainbow Dash said: ''So cool. Cold even. I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during last year wrap up.''
When he asked "Just guess what happens" I literally guessed "He walks up to her an hugs her and everything is great" I'm not kidding, I'm shocked that I got it right.
What I hate about these kind of villains is when they know they're evil, but don't really justify it. I like villains who can justify why they are doing whatever they are doing. I like villains who actually make a very good point as to why they're villains. "I'm evil because I'm evil" is a bullshit excuse that no writer should ever use.
I phrased what I said terribly. I'm going to try and explain this. A villain should not look at himself as the villain, but if you give a villain enough reason to see himself as the villain it can work very well. If you're villain just says "I'm evil, why the fuck not" It rarely works. Especially here. The Joker works because he is a sociopath, and he knows that. he is aware that he has no control over it. He actually thinks he has to be the villain, he believes there can't be order without chaos, and that he has to be the chaos. And it works very well. I need to learn to phrase things better.
11:13 Because lip-syncing is just as important as the actor's voice being clear and understandable. It would solve many many complications with the accents if you could read their lips.
I honestly wish this had continued, if it got better we could look back on how far its come and if it got worse or stayed the same we could laugh at it more.
Umm... isnt he said: Cool! Cold even! I hope no one will NOTICE I left the hill snowy on LAST YEAR wrap up. I'm not even english so his accent really gave me a headace -.-
"So cool! Cold even! I hope nopony will notice I left the hill snowy during Winter Wrap-up." "The animals we took care of outside are recovering." ...I think Not-Rainbow Dash is meant to be Not-Pinkie Pie. Should we call him Pinkie Dash? If this was made in the later form of Pony Maker, then they would be able to make foals for this monstrosity.
Dusk's Dawn is a prime example of what not to do when making a project for MLP: FIM. I mean, Dusk's house looks way too much like Princess Peach's Castle.
"So Cool, Cold Even! i hope nobody will notice i left this hill snowy during last year's wrap up" That was the harshest bullshit i have ever translated.
At 2:20, Breeze Rider, or as you called him, Not-Rainbow-Dash, said "So cool! Cold even. I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during last year Wrap Up."
Call the deNoir Family the Addams Family was funny ^.^ And I like your nicknames for these characters. Also, there's something about not-Fluttershy's voice reminds me of a GPS.
From my experience, there's two different kinds of brony. One that can make a critical analysis of things in general, and the kind that has the mental deficiency to make something like this.
My God, this video is hilarious! I actually watched it twice in a row. I crack up every time I hear: "Things've been fine... Still workin' on that bridge above the river." I'm not sure why though. Maybe because I'm imagining it as an innuendo?
You know that scene in flapjack where they had a water painted picture of the captain in a realistic fashion that made him looked shocked while a stock sounding mans scream of fear is heard? This mlp thing made me feel that way through out it's entire duration
OMG I've been looking for this! Haven't watched your stuff since highschool, but I've been binging recently because I remembered this very specific video and tried to find it so I could make sure it wasn't a fever dream lol. Gonna see if I can find Double Rainboom and Snowdrop next
Also, Angel bunny notices the hill is still snowy and starts tapping his foot. He blushes for now obvious reasons, but he's right, if that's supposed to be a joke, ugh.
At the beginning, the "not Rainbow Dash" pony (Breeze Rider) says, "So cool! Cold even. I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during last year wrap up. Flying in winter is much better than..." And Mr. Brave says "The animals we took care of outside are recovering."
I think Not Rainbow Dash said: So cool! Cold even! I hope nobody (nopony?) will notice I left that hill snowy during last year's wrap up. He sounded when he said notice he said it like: Know ICE
I'm just going to take a guess and say that Breeze Rider (Not Rainbow Dash) said "So cool! Cold even. I hope nopony will notice I left that hill snowy during Winter Wrap Up". I swear, when I heard him say that I was wondering if this was in a different language or something.
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"So cool! Cold even! I hope nopony will notice I left that hill snowy during Winter Wrap-Up."
I live with my brother, who is also an idiot, so I now speak it fluently!
Heather Feather Productions Hahah, yeah, worked that out after I posted this.
Perhaps I need to spend more time with my brother... eh. xDD
Rhiannon Lederp No, not notice... i think he was trying to make an ice pun, so i think he said "note-ICE"
+Rhiannon Lederp you don't speak idiot, you read the subtitles of the original video :I
Catlikeness AJ There were subtitles???
Rhiannon Lederp Yes?
This is like some bronies Roleplaying in a chat room. It opens with Not Rainbow Dash writing several posts by himself, trying to get someone else to interact with him. Then someone who actually knows him, Marijuana, logs in and responds to him.
After that Dusk writes almost a whole paragraph of him just talking to himself, before Brave and the nurse start chatting with each other, as they've probably done a lot of roleplaying with each other before.
Then Not Rainbow Dash decides to try and interact with them as Marijuana is afk. Turns out she was actually having a private conversation with Not Twilight Sparkle, asking if she wanted to continue from where they left off last time.
So Marijuana asks Brave, just 'cause everyone knows who he is, if she can help with Not Twilight Sparkles tantrum, and he solves it the only way he knows how, 'cause he's actually a pervert who prefers to do sexual roleplay, by tackling her to the ground and hugging her. Not Twilight is okay with this.
And then it goes on and on and on and on, finally resulting in one of them saying: "Hey, you know what would be great? Let's copy paste all that we've written here, and make a video out of it! For Bronies by Bronies!"
This is not a story. This oozes roleplay to the moon and back. And they also had to accept Not Rainbow Dash to be allowed to voice his OC, 'cause he wouldn't stop hassling them about it. Urgh.
That is actually the most logical explanation I've ever heard of this.
***** Hm?
***** Hehe, thanks.
I'm gonna go with this theory....
Jimmy Killeen Seems the more likely one.
I think not-Rainbow-Dash is trying to say "So cool! Cold even! I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during last years wrap-up!"
Hmmm...u actually may be rite
Yeah I think that's it
That's a fucking idiotic line, no body with a functioning brain would say something like that the way they did. You're probably right.
You are correct. It took me at least five times of watching it to figure out what he said.
Dammit, I just figured that out for myself and was gonna brag about it! xD
"I'm way too evil for that."
"...Sounds dangerous."
XD
That one made me crack up too it was just so bad!
Bubbadoo That line sounded like it wouldn't be out of place in The Room. "O hai, Dusk!"
I can't tell but he MIGHT just be an evil villain.
***** Naw, I doubt it.
***** I didn't spawn a pink cloud, I did not.
"Freeze!"
"Freeze? I'm way too evil for that."
"He sounds dangerous."
I probably laughed harder at that than I should have.
no what's even more rediculous is that the villain slowly and carefully removes his weapon just so he can give a lame retort to a character...rather than actually do something
I did too.
Not-Rainbow Dash is like the love child of Tommy Wiseau and a Pegasus.
Wow. Tommy Wiseau as a furry. Now, that's something to write about!
.....I was hoping such a combination would result in a Tommy Wiseau winged centaur...I'm not pleased with this development.
I want to write a horrible fan fic about Tommy Wiseau going to Equestia and becomes an alicorn princess... It's so bad my mind refuses to do so, but my body demands to write it.
Mr.Master Mann
Ha ha, Watter stor-e Mann.
***** The guy who directed, produced, and starred in "The Room", a famously terrible film.
The blue Pegasus sounds like the love child of Christopher Walken and Spongebob if it was raised by Tommy Wiseau, in Russia.
I DID NAT HIT HER! I DID NAAAAT! OH HAI MARK!
He's voiced by Living Tombstone, a musician of Israeli origin. He has traces of a Hebrew accent whenever he talks.
+The #6 Runaway Guys Fan Wait. Living Tombstone. As in... THE Living Tombstone?!
XXXXXXDDDDDDDDD
@@ryanbryant-smith9850 That's sad :(
"I'm way too evil for that."
"He sounds dangerous."
*Mr. E chokes*
11:54
No shit
9:59 - 10:05
For those curious about the actual names yet not motivated enough to look it up...
Not-Rainbow Dash = Breeze Rider
Not-Shining Armor = Officer Donut
Not-Fluttershy = Iridescence
Not-Twilight = Star Whistle
Marijuana = Doodlecute
Mister Brave = Mister Brave
Breeze Rider= Tommy Wiseau
Don't call him Donut. It reminds me of a much better Web series.......
Ok some of those names are.... Unique?
I love the people below trying to defend this
"They're not professionals, give them a break and let them grow!"
"Its not like you could do any better!"
1. If you tell someone that something they are doing is good 100% of the time, they will never improve, thats what criticism is for, to grow as an artist.
2. Mr. Enter IS doing an animated series called "Growing Around" and the first episode is a little more then half way done. the sample clips we've seen shows good animation, understandable voice actors and a charming plot. So yes, he is doing better.
No arguments here.
Agreed. Also there is no way this was the best they could do. There are at least a few areas they could have easily improved upon with a little more effort (They could have put a little more effort into the story for one and a few more takes for the voice acting wouldn't have hurt either.).
Yes, thank you! I believe Enter and his team can eventually make it on TV with Growing Around. I really do. I also want to bring up that if they're only HALFWAY through the 1st episode, then they are obviously taking their time to get it done right. Im not saying that the Dusk's Dawn team should get NO credit, but this is bad. They need to be pushed to do better, and with this kind of thing you cant just hold their hand through it.
I love the people defending too! This may be bad in a lot of subjects, but it can grow into something even better, and even more! I did post 1 comment on the actual one saying their faults and what they could fix. I do hope they continue it.
AnimalCreation(Ace) I agree with you on ALL those points. if my mom saw that I made a finger painting I made in kindergarden and said it was perfect I would still be making them. She said they were good but I could be better and I improved! Im not a animator and i know how hard/easy it can be and im no good at it but This.... This is not using all the things you could. Im no better but they could do waaayyyy better (Cough)Growing around(Cough)
"Bad drama makes great comedy, but bad comedy is worthless." Nicely summarized.
2:15 For automatic subtitles, this is what not-Rainbow Dash said:
"cellco called even have nobody will it cites that heals not only doing less your app"
Wow, that's funny. I've seen automatic subtitles mess up before, but now I can't even tell what line that is. XD
Aubriella Martell LOL Yeah. I remember in elementary school we were watching a TH-cam video from the History Channel with subtitles on, and we were supposed to make notes on the video, but we weren't paying attention because we were laughing so hard at the subtitles.
LOL, same here. That's happened to me several times before, actually. I like your profile picture, by the way.
Aubriella Martell Thanks!
+JoCoProductions After listening to the line about 30 times and seeing Mr.Enter guesstimate the words I think I finally figured it out.
"So cool! Cold even. I hope noone noticed I left the hill snowy after winter wrap-up"
I just realized that Dusk's Dawn ripped off the scene from The Last Airbender, when Katara calms Aang down when he's in his avatar state by hugging him.
Why, Dusk's Dawn? Why?
I think there has been scenes similar to that long before The Last Airbender did it.
CyberLance26 Simpsons did it :P
Holy crap, I didn't know about that until you brought that up D:
Because the writer of this episode has no imagination.
KoopaTheTroopa522 I would have preferred it if it fully ripped off the scene. One less character to care about.
Doughnut- "Royal Guard, freeze!"
Evil Dusk- "Freeze? I'm way too evil for that."
Doughnut- "He sounds dangerous."
Everyone- WUTWUTHOWTHEFUCKWHYHOWEVENWUTICANTSERIOSULYHOWDOYOUKNOWHESOUNDSLIKEANIDIOTWUTWUTTHEFUCKWHYYYYYYY
You have just made my day XD
+BlazingCookie Would have been funny if the guard said it sarcastically, or better yet if Marijuana did. It could have been something that made me laugh on purpose.
+BlazingCookie uhhh 2spwkie4mie!!!!!!
+BlazingCookie Seriously, that's not even "Amateur Fanfic Bad" that's just...there are no words to describe how bad the dialogue in Dusk's Dawn is.
Except at least that is enjoyable.
This is an accurate depiction of Hell
+Christopher MacKay You have not seen hell. Trust me, it's much nicer than this.
+Hunter lisle Good Point
It can't be an accurate depiction of hell, there's no Oompa-Loompas.
+Christopher Mackay More like Tartarus.
Maybe, but I can't help but giggle everytime the "DUM DUM DUM!" plays at 11:32.
11:30 "I'm too evil for that"?
That's not a normal thing to say. Not in real life OR in fiction. If you want the character to not want to freeze, just have them say "Never" or something. Don't have them say what is basically "I'm the antagonist, so I can't listen to what you say".
+MrCrazyToad Alternatively, have the character SHOW that they are too evil for that. A simple smile or laugh followed by them following through with the evil action. Also, I am pretty sure how good or evil you are has little to do with your willingness to cooperate with someone barging into your home and making an demand of you.
+MrCrazyToad It would have worked if this was like a joke but it was played like he was being dead serious so... yeah that didn't go well.
Girl Buu Well, I don't care, as long as it isn't something as stupid as "I'm too evil for that".
MrCrazyToad I don't know. It could make for some great satire.
Girl Buu Maybe. But it doesn't work here.
So cool! Cold even. I hope nobody will notice i left that hill snowy after last years wrap- up.
+Tachiyune OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
What kind of way of saying "notice" is that?
Just a youtube commenter idfk
+Just a youtube commenter note-ice
Original Characters Donut Steel.
Theodore Hodbor top lel
Donut best pony
Theodore Hodbor Oh hardy har har.....
I'm so writing that one down....
_According to its intro, *orginal_
+Theodore Hodbor Haha.
marijuana is best character
fun fact, Marijuana is a cannon pony in the show. they just changed her name to Tree Hugger :)
The colorscheme isnt really right oxo...so no...that Marijuana is not a cannonpony...
I get that the hug was an Avatar the Last Airbender reference but there's a huge problem: it doesn't work here. The reason it worked for Avatar is because Katara and Aang had a special connection. They cared deeply about each other. Aang even chose not to give her up because he loved her, despite not being able to control the Avatar state as a result. The reason it doesn't work here: these two characters had no previous interaction. They don't have a meaningful friendship or connection of any kind. In reality, that hug shouldn't have done anything.
+Shwah Gamers It should have thrown him like 3 yards back. There were 3 freaking tornadoes! How did you get past that?! XD
Also I didn't even think of that reference. Good on you for spotting it. I was too distracted by the horrible animation. :D
After 12 times of watching his line I think I know what he said, "So cool! Cold even. I hope no one will notice that I left the hill snowy during winter wrap-up." and the angel bunny joke is somebody noticing he's not do his job? Even if he's not wearing any sort of vest in the scene? No matter what it was intended to be, I wasted at least 20 braincells trying to come up with an idea of what it was...
More so "So cool! Cold even. I hope no one will notice I left the hill snowy during last year's Wrap-up"
The bunny noticed and the implication is that's how he got busted... And I'm unsure if that was supposed to be funny.
This is "The Room" of My Little Pony. It's funny, because Not Rainbow Dash kinda sounds like Tommy Wiseau
OK after what feels like 100 times trying to translate not-Rainbow-Dash's first line, I think I got it.
"So cool! Cold, even. I hope nobody will notice, I left that hill snowy during last year's wrap-up."
The best way I have seen this described is a G1 Plot, with G3 characterization, with G4 visuals.
LOL nice
So "Not Shining Armor's" Name is Donut?
ORIGINAL CHARACTER!!!! DONUT STEEL!!
*Prays that my English is not as bad as 'Not-Rainbow Dash'*
"I'm too evil for that"
"Sounds dangerous"
That was so bad.
It was funny.
Dusk plays the pronoun game so we have to figure out who the hell "they" are
*Ding!*
the illuminati
Anyone else notice that Not-Rainbow-Dash, Not-Fluttershy, Not-Twilight, and Marijuana all have the same tail style? Mr. Brave and Not-Shining-Armour also share the same tail style, though different from that of the other characters.
That's because of the limited manes and tails in v3.
There's still more than 4 last I checked
I wonder why...maybe because they thought they would look better on the ponies.
Could be. Or it could be that they're lazy.
12:31 - Actually, his real name is Franklin Delano Donut, which may sound bad, but the other side has a guy named Caboose...
Why do I crack up every time he calls the green one Marijuana?
Because... It's funny?
Peasham is it really?
Peasham because after the third time you wouldnt think I would laugh the same way I did the first time, but I do
Thehunterpwn Weird, innit?
"crack up" get it LOL ZOMG ZOMFG get it marijuana crack drugs
*Markiplier voice* "I'm turning 9 tonight"
PatarCreation s
Also " *ahem* Freeze? Ah'm WAY to evil to for DAT"
"He sounds dangerous"
*LATER*
"Since I'm OBVIOUSLY cured, you guys can go back to your... normal occupations."
*SLOW CLAPS* That was the BEST pretending ever!
Imagine my horror as one day at work, in the middle of the warehouse, long after watching this review, did I realize that the blue one's pronunciation of 'notice' wasn't just the voice actor's accent- but an incredibly forced, only-works-in-text pun. Not-ICE. It's like a scar on my psyche now.
Is Non-Rainbow Dash (Breeze Rider) supposed to be a male or a female? Because his voice sounds like a male's, but it uses the female pony base.
??????
Is she a very masucine woman or she like to be referred as they
It's probably like Rumble.
I was wondering the same thing.
The Sonic '06 of MLP fan animations, mother of god...
Fun fact: most of the actors/actress are from Europe, English isn't their first language. So I can actually respect that
Thats why I mostly don't care for fan-fictions (of any kind).
1) OC's I don't know or care for
2) obvious cliche evil ark sides/ doppelgänger
3) unneeded drama
4) never feels like something that could be in the actual show.
I would like to see at least one fan-writer who can write a story that feels like it could be an actual episode of the show it's based on (not counting suicide squidward).
2) obvious cliche evil dark sides/ doppelgänger
Turnabout Storm did roughly the same thing for the Ace Attorney series.
Concealed the Conclusion and Touhou Danmaku All-Star Medley are pretty well-made Touhou fangames, in addition to the two well-received fan-animes (Fantasy Kaleidoscope: Memories of Phantasms and Touhou Musou Kakyou: A Summer Day's Dream)
...As for actual TV shows, the best I've got was the He-Man vs. Lion-O Death Battle by ScrewAttack. They had the cheesy 80s dialogue down pat ("A whirlwind should *blow* him off course!"), at the very least. Honor Trip and Dragon Ball Multiverse are decent Dragon Ball Z fan works--the former written and apparently very good, the latter a fan-comic that mimics the original art style surprisingly well *and* does a great job with canon personalities.
There are adaptations that stay true to the original spirit; the thing is, animated works have ridiculous production values *at best*, and most people don't want to try an "original flavor" work in a different medium because the adjustment is difficult. There are plenty out there, though. They're just hard to find.
okay, thanx for the info, do you may know some more cartoon (or western animated) based fan-works? I'm not so much the anime guy. I mostly prefer cartoons. ^^;
toongrowner1 I know of a few, but I haven't been through nearly as many of them as I would like. TV Tropes, as always, has several wonderful lists:
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FanWork
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FanFilm
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FanVid
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OriginalFlavour
That last one will probably get you the most stuff; if this isn't enough, find a show you like and search for "Fan Works" or "Fanfic recommendations" on TV Tropes, accompanied by the name of the show. That should get you started.
It's how I found Turnabout Storm and Touhou, as a matter of fact.
I don't write pony fanfics, but I do write for many other things and I never use OCs. I also do my best to make it seem like it would fit into the world of whatever I'm writing for.
So cool, cold even. I hope nopony will notice I left the hill snowy during last years wrap up.
Those God-awful Zelda CD-i games made more coherent sense than this mess of flash animation.
This is the Ride to Hell: Retribution of MLP fan animations.
I don't know if it's *that* bad. At least this video isn't blatantly misogynistic.
***** ok I'll give you that.
9:27
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think that's a rip-off of Avatar: The Last Airbender. It's just like what happened when the sandbenders stole Appa. The tornadoes and glowing eyes just scream Avatar State and the way she was calmed down is very similar to the way Katara is able to calm Aang when he's in the Avatar State. I'm just surprised that she didn't have an arrow on her head.
That is a Polish accent the blue Pegasus has, I am Polish and I have no fucking clue what he is saying.
2:43 "Wow! So cool! Cold even! I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during that last wrap-up"
Alright, this was actually one of the most entertaining MLP fan works I've ever seen -- but probably not for the reasons the creators were expecting.
a fedora wearer pony... Is this Hell?
my pony self has a fedora...
+mspantere Yes, this is indeed Hell.
ITS THE ROOM ALL OVER AGAIN DON'T TELL TOMMY WISEAU
Oh hi, Donut!
oh hi mark
So here’s how I interpret the monologue, his parents left many years ago and that woman on the bed is an allusion of his mom, the special day is his 9th birthday I believe and it’s important because it’s when young ponies become adults.
MLP
Borny
awseom
cupcakes
evry pony is best pony
once upon a time in the magical land of equestria
_Jesus_
*cucpakes
*fupcaps
I think I got it...took me like 8 tries;
"So cool! Cold even! I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during Winter Wrap-Up."
In case you're still confused, he said "So cool, cold even. I hope no one noticed I left that hill snowy during last year's wrap up?" I won't lie, I had to listen to it a bunch to understand.
"So cool. Cold even. I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during last year's wrap-up."
"Donut!"
How come no one made a RvB reference?
I'm surprised too
"So cool, cold even. I hope no pony noticed I left that hill frozen last wrap up"
Like this video? I'm way too evil for that.
Marijuana is probably the Snoop Dogg of Ponyville
Okay, who else is creeped out by the fact that Doughnut apparently stripped off before heading into the castle?
What? Don't you strip off all your protective armour before entering into a dangerous situation?
***** Well, not intentionally...
SSofIreland
Then you'd make a terrible Berzerker.
***** Actually he wouldn't make a terrible berserker, it was a translation mistake that suggested that berserkers whent into battle with no armour. Berserkers were infamous vikings who usually wore a bear's hide to signify that they were strong and powerful, who never seemed to fear death and who got themselves into an unnatural state of rage for battles, hence why we say going berserk when we speak of going into an unnatural state of anger. The reason why the translation mistake happened was cause Ber is an old word for bear, but it also mean being bare (like bare chested) and serk/serki was an old type of shirt, so the translators that berserker/berserki meant "bare chested", when in really was more like "Bear shirt". Sorry if you were not in the mood to get this detailed comment being serious on a comment of yours that is two months old.
100aegir
No big, I actually thought the translation error was the other way around but now I know.
It took me a while to realise not-Rainbow Dash said:
''So cool. Cold even. I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during last year wrap up.''
Their accents seems fairly understandable to me but that probably because I watched the thing and have re-watched this review SO MUCH!
I didn't even notice that until MrEnter said the real meaning in a later video.
Yup, he srewed up with nature just for his own amusement. What a great hero he is.
I also think the joke where there's half a snowy field was because he did a half assed job. :/
When he asked "Just guess what happens" I literally guessed "He walks up to her an hugs her and everything is great" I'm not kidding, I'm shocked that I got it right.
I think he said in the beginning. "So cool. Cold even. I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during winter wrap up."
What I hate about these kind of villains is when they know they're evil, but don't really justify it. I like villains who can justify why they are doing whatever they are doing. I like villains who actually make a very good point as to why they're villains. "I'm evil because I'm evil" is a bullshit excuse that no writer should ever use.
*Points to the Joker*
I phrased what I said terribly. I'm going to try and explain this. A villain should not look at himself as the villain, but if you give a villain enough reason to see himself as the villain it can work very well. If you're villain just says "I'm evil, why the fuck not" It rarely works. Especially here. The Joker works because he is a sociopath, and he knows that. he is aware that he has no control over it. He actually thinks he has to be the villain, he believes there can't be order without chaos, and that he has to be the chaos. And it works very well. I need to learn to phrase things better.
The AngelofFire The Joker is a psychopath, not a sociopath.
Last i recall he has no care for any kind of life at all, and that fits very well into the definition of Sociopath. I could be wrong of course.
The AngelofFire No, that's a psychopath.
Ohh, I remember this. I stopped watching after Not-Rainbow Dash's first line.
2:35 My guess at what he's saying is, "So cool! Cold even! I hope nopony will notice I left that hill snowy during Winter wrap up."
This MLP... thing?... legitimately sounds like first-time roleplayers on a brony message board.
11:13
Because lip-syncing is just as important as the actor's voice being clear and understandable. It would solve many many complications with the accents if you could read their lips.
I honestly wish this had continued, if it got better we could look back on how far its come and if it got worse or stayed the same we could laugh at it more.
Not-Ranbow Dash said: Cool! Cold even! I hope no one will entice I left the hill snowy on messy wrap up.
Yes, I can speak Stupid
Umm... isnt he said: Cool! Cold even! I hope no one will NOTICE I left the hill snowy on LAST YEAR wrap up.
I'm not even english so his accent really gave me a headace -.-
Mino1777 Forgot the so before cool but other than that you are perfectly correct.
Not last year wrap up, WINTER wrap up.
Ari Cupquake
I heard last year but this accent must be really something if even the native speakers dont understand it. :)
So cool! Cold even.I hope nobody will notice I left the hill a little snowy on last year wrap AWP!
Dr wolf’s tf2 analysis makes this thing look good
"...and Marijuana," made me laugh so hard! I wasn't expecting that at all 🤣
"So cool! Cold even! I hope nopony will notice I left the hill snowy during Winter Wrap-up."
"The animals we took care of outside are recovering."
...I think Not-Rainbow Dash is meant to be Not-Pinkie Pie. Should we call him Pinkie Dash?
If this was made in the later form of Pony Maker, then they would be able to make foals for this monstrosity.
Dusk's Dawn is a prime example of what not to do when making a project for MLP: FIM. I mean, Dusk's house looks way too much like Princess Peach's Castle.
"So Cool, Cold Even! i hope nobody will notice i left this hill snowy during last year's wrap up"
That was the harshest bullshit i have ever translated.
Original character, Donut Steel
At 2:20, Breeze Rider, or as you called him, Not-Rainbow-Dash, said "So cool! Cold even. I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during last year Wrap Up."
Call the deNoir Family the Addams Family was funny ^.^
And I like your nicknames for these characters. Also, there's something about not-Fluttershy's voice reminds me of a GPS.
It's entertainingly bad, like the Zelda CD-I games or Resident Evil's voice acting.
11:53
TheMysteriousMrEnter.exe has stopped working.
3:30 holy shit they spelt Original wrong I never noticed that before
Jesus christ.
From my experience, there's two different kinds of brony. One that can make a critical analysis of things in general, and the kind that has the mental deficiency to make something like this.
Spifflet I know it's hard to put a whole diverse group of people into two subsections, but i think it basically all comes down to those two.
+Spifflet correction. Rabid bronies and normal bronies.
Storse Animations Yeah, basically. Like I have no problem at all with bronies like Mr.Enter here, but the more crazy ones o the other hand...
+Spifflet What about those who just watch the show?
And those who make a genuine effort to make something unique and artistic out of the source material.
11:54 Dusk's Dawn broke Mr. Enter...XD
4:31 "Fuck it, I'm calling them the Addams Family!" 😂😂😂😂😂😂
My God, this video is hilarious! I actually watched it twice in a row. I crack up every time I hear: "Things've been fine... Still workin' on that bridge above the river." I'm not sure why though. Maybe because I'm imagining it as an innuendo?
"So cool! cold even! I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during during winter wrap up." That's what he said, so stop wondering.
Man, I remember this...
Wow 8 months ago, that long!
Marijuana is Treehugger before Treehugger was Treehugger
You know that scene in flapjack where they had a water painted picture of the captain in a realistic fashion that made him looked shocked while a stock sounding mans scream of fear is heard? This mlp thing made me feel that way through out it's entire duration
Is nobody gonna ignore how off they used the line tool?
and..maurijuana's hair. oh my god.
10:06 Not Twilight is blue, Marijuana is green... so... who do those two gray legs belong to?
OMG I've been looking for this! Haven't watched your stuff since highschool, but I've been binging recently because I remembered this very specific video and tried to find it so I could make sure it wasn't a fever dream lol. Gonna see if I can find Double Rainboom and Snowdrop next
Also, Angel bunny notices the hill is still snowy and starts tapping his foot. He blushes for now obvious reasons, but he's right, if that's supposed to be a joke, ugh.
And yet, Sadly even this thing has better Quality than my own Tumblr.
At the beginning, the "not Rainbow Dash" pony (Breeze Rider) says, "So cool! Cold even. I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during last year wrap up. Flying in winter is much better than..." And Mr. Brave says "The animals we took care of outside are recovering."
I mean if it was animated and all done by one person with no experience I could understand but.. this had a whole team...
"So cool. Cold even, I hope no one notices I left the hill snowy during winter wrap up."
I think Not Rainbow Dash said: So cool! Cold even! I hope nobody (nopony?) will notice I left that hill snowy during last year's wrap up. He sounded when he said notice he said it like: Know ICE
I think he said "So, cool! Cold even! I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during last years wrap-up."
Original character. Donut Steel.
I'm just going to take a guess and say that Breeze Rider (Not Rainbow Dash) said "So cool! Cold even. I hope nopony will notice I left that hill snowy during Winter Wrap Up".
I swear, when I heard him say that I was wondering if this was in a different language or something.
I did not hit her, I did nawt!
Oh hai, Twilight.
I really like your laughter at "You give this thing way to much credit." It's so... pained, and yet somewhat amused.
Guess what Mr. Enter??!!!!!! Dusk's Dawn Part Two is out!!!! 😈😱😱😱😔😈😈🙀🙀🙀😰😰😰😱😱😱😈😈😈😈😈
Can... can I have a link?
...What?
TheMysteriousMrEnter it doesn't exist. XD
You're a fucking masochist
TheMysteriousMrEnter You're a braver man then the rest of us.
"So cool! Cold even! I hope nobody will notice I left that hill snowy during messy wrap-up" maybe.... I may be close....