@@haleywalker3052 OMG YOU NOTICED ME I'm gonna take advantage of this nowwww Can you tell me what you think about my writing? Here's a tidbit *ethanol teens troubled hips and ethanol lips have another sip while your worries drip away but they always stay like the aftertaste of gin too bitter to chase down with sweet midnights you gulped down litres of beer to not feel lonely; surrounded yourself with bottles to not feel like the only one who is empty. go ahead and have your fun funny stories become more hilarious when told by miserable storytellers just remember, when the peanuts are all gone and the bottles became as empty as you all the syrup in the bar will not grant you salvation from tomorrow's judgment
missrainbowmoonfire poetry idk if you’re being sarcastic or not but i didn’t meant it like that, i just think that some people write really beautiful poetry but they aren’t being enough recognized for it bc it just isn’t the type of poetry who is popular :) (and sorry if my english is bad it’s not my mother language)
Most "instapoets" are basing their careers on being relatable, their "poems" are what any logical person can come up in matters of seconds or just cringe phrases from facebook pages of 2010. Ugh so annoying.
Everyone has a right to express themselves. If someone is more marketable, you can't blame them. One of the many issues with artists, all across the board, is lack of social skills
I’ve been writing long ass, well researched poems and i still feel awkward and drain in self doubt when posting them on Instagram but I’ve connected to some really good poets and writers and they appreciate my work and are so supportive. That is what keeps ke going 💛 thanks for this video😭 i feel more confident and in no way am i saying that these poets are trash, they’re where they are because they worked for it and people actually like reading their pieces and on Instagram, not everyone wants to read long poems and proses but “instapoetry”. So if you’re feeling low and lost and losing motivation because you don’t have enough audience yet, i just want to say that You might not have a lot of followers but you will always have some genuinely supportive readers and fellow writers, do not give up!! 💛
I went to school for English, so I got to sit through a poetry read or two. Here's the reason why these poems are so bad. A typical poem, at least the ones that are highly praised in the English major community, tend to be very artistic and descriptive. The thing about those poems though, is that they are not just filled with non - sequiturs and are not just artsy for artsy sake. They are really creative in their wordplay and their messages. I feel like Instagram poets read these really powerful poems and see how creative they are, so they try to fit the mold of the poems in order to get praise. The problem is that a really good poem comes from the heart. If you just try to emulate something that gets accolades and there is no heart or emotion behind what you are writing, it will literally just be words on a page. It comes off as really pretentious and inauthentic. This is the difference between an A+ and a C- paper. This is my advice for anyone struggling with writing: don't just try to fit a mold in order to be a good writer. Also, don't use big words if you don't know what they mean. The person grading the paper can tell.
i may or may not have a r.h. sin rip off calendar but some of them i just can’t with. life some are relatable and resonate with me but others im like “i could write this way better”
these poets are just catering to needs of ordinary ppl, who don't look for deeper meanings and analysis of a work . if u submit their poems to any professional critics, they will never stand out. Poetry is such a thing where even audience needs to be great
I'm an insta poet, and i totally understand where y'all are coming from, the format IG poetry comes in isn't always the best quality, but the accounts that y'all are looking at are huge and are often mass-produced... Go check out some of the smaller accounts, they won't disappoint you
Plenty of instagram poets that are terrible, male and female. Honestly, it’s such a scourge. They might be popular and raking in cash, but a genuine poet would never feel jealous. Selling the soul of your art like a cheap prostitute isn’t exactly something legitimately significant poets aspire to.
Guuurl just saw your comment on bestmess's last vid, idk about Ashley but I sure am moving to NYC right away to be your bff 😭😭😭 this roast was so on POINT sksksldkdkl THANK YOU
this was brilliant! and just backed up thoughts i had on the same people AND made me want to avoid hopping on that bandwagon even more. I feel comforted that the vast majority of the short pieces i have on my insta are just snippets of longer poems *phew* ..although i must admit i'm pretty sure there is some cheese...but the ones about depression balance it out....i think lol
An English literature professor of mine (a published poet, well respected creative writer/professor) didn’t know about rupi kaur or Instagram poetry. That’s how trashy and insignificant they are.
this is hilarious! I think the truth, and it's been said before, is that insta poetry is for people who don't like poetry. And, I suppose, don't worry if you're not popular as a poet, I think T S Eliot said something like good poetry usually isn't popular. And I have tried the instagram thing-- started around 3 months ago-- mostly sonnets and aphoristic little things (which seem to suit the medium) and I have all of ten followers lol. Anyway, subcribed!
In my opinion, All the poetries that you've shown in this video are not worth roasting. We should appreciate those legends. I truly admire their work. HUGE Respect to all the poets out there. 🙌❤
@@fatemasafy3944 Yes, I do. It's like a spoken/audio/video poetry.😂 And I fo have an IG account too @missrainbowmoonfire I also published an eBook www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B087ZYP9T9/ref=dbs_a_w_dp_b087zyp9t9 😂😂😂😂😂
Views expressed in this video were much needed. I just started using Instagram as a platform to share my poetry. Would never consider myself an instapoet. I'm following about twelve people such as atticus and the like out of curiosity but id really like to follow more traditional poets as well. I just started yesterday, and I got a follower and was so happy. then I checked my Instagram today and she stopped following me :'( lol. If you post your work there I'd be interested to read it.
How would you rate this poem I wrote earlier today? Love As The Dream Love as the dream of a dream of a dream to a heart in ever arctic winter with moonlight starved nights. Fading, Fading in the languishing of the longing for a spring that will never come. James E. Roethlein copyright 2023 Is it a little bit better or just as bad?
Lang Leav...or my little poetry ebook! www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B087ZYP9T9/ref=dbs_a_w_dp_b087zyp9t9 Sorry for the shameless plugging You can check some of my poems on IG @missrainbowmoonfire 😉
These are all awful. But technically though a queen doesn't have to be married (e.g., Queen Elizabeth I). She could have been "born a queen" if her father was the king and he died as her mother was giving birth to her and there were no older heirs. The poem still sucks though.
I totally disagree with everything you say. I understand the annoyance of those poems or "poems", they are really very weak but they are really judgments of hostile scholars. what is a poem? do you really know what a poem is? - It is not something that can be defined, nor does it have certain laws or certain judgments, certain techniques. Romantics like Novalis, Shelly, Coleridge. worthswood. even poets like Octavio Paz, Anna Ajmatova, Matsuo Bashō and the list can go on say that poetry cannot be defined, in fact they say that poetry does not have to be complicated, it has to come from the soul. one definition could be divine creation, nature, misunderstood legislation of the world. There is a very good essay by Novalis called on the poet and poetry, where he tries to define it and talks about art for art's sake, the ordinary man and the artist. I understand your annoyance with these poems, but I don't see why to criticize and criticize people who want to be a poet, in fact I applaud it, it is a very noble science, it is even one of the oldest sciences there is. Uniting the intellect (imagination) with the soul is not something that everyone does so easily. instead of criticizing so much because you do not put yourself rather to write. If you think it's so easy, then write poetry (I don't think it will come out as clean as you might think) My invitation is that if there are people who want to be a poet and their work is not very good, then let them be, the world is a very hostile terrain to continue attacking each other with literary works. For people like you, the world of literature is such a closed and hostile niche. incredible that people want to write poetry, want to be a poet. in the long run, writing (novels, short stories, poems, etc.) is like boxing, not the first person who strikes survives but the one who remains in the ring.
camello c I have a master’s degree in writing poetry (from Columbia University), so I’d argue I do know what writing poetry is like :) These poets are all talented and successful in their own right! The video was just for fun if you didn’t catch my message at the beginning 😉
The seven stages of simp poetry; 🤕🤥🤤🤯😎🤓🧐 oh and, if you have a response please, let it be in emojis, fellatio, coitus or parmesan. Very rare exceptions of payment in cognac will be considered.
prod.micahshepard I also have a Master’s degree in poetry from an Ivy League school 😋 But anyway, it’s subjective! I don’t like his work, but that doesn’t mean you can’t.
Bro, they really sound like Facebook statuses or thoughts that you don't have time to post, or internet quotes. Like, okay these are relatable, but that's it. Maybe I wanna feel and read something interesting!
Im actually a “male instagram poet”. My instagram is drepoitier. I dont have a following at all but it would be cool to get some criticism and perspectives from others
Also it’s all so quick and short. Mine I post the algorithm f*cks. And take days and are multiple slides, about everything from substance abuse to boys to girls to Greek myothlogy parraell to now,
I'm one of the insta male poets. Guilty as charged LOL An Ode To The Moon ------------------------------------------------- I am roaming the emptiness of the desert. The moon's rotund fullness hangs in the void of the heavens, Mid-way to the unseen horizon in the East. The moon threatens to plummet into the desert floor, Yet it maintains its oversight above its dominion. The dulcet tones of the moon's milky-white soothe me, But it is not my body they charm, They pierce the ramparts to an unfathomable chamber in the bedrock of my soul. And I feel a joy not confined to the borders of my flesh. It is a joy emanating from deep within me, And yet it belongs to us all. And then I ask: Why is it that the sun's strong light exposes my body, Yet the moon's milky-white exposes my soul? I am peeking between two almost kissing cliffs. I still my mind and then I see the snail's pace of the moon, As it peeks at me behind the West cliff on its mission across the sky. Gradually, almost imperceptibly, the moon's sliver advances past the cliff's edge, And widens until it once more appears in all its rotund glory, As it falls to the other side. When the moon's edge reaches the other cliff it hides again, Until once more I only see its thin sliver, And then it is beyond my sight. When the moon reveals this subtle dance to mine own eyes, I feel an intimacy with it that no book can offer, No teacher can teach. On this night, the crescent moon floods the recesses of my soul with its pale milky glow, And a mystical silence envelops the desert's void. On other nights, in other places, the silence would be dulled by a crying baby, while her mother sings a lullaby, Or in the desert by the plaintive shriek of an anonymous wind, As it hurtles across the desert floor, To lands beyond horizon's reach. But on this night, the silence is absolute, And it comforts me like a blanket during this milky desert night.
@@haleywalker3052 oh ok lol. Because my thoughts are they should call them quotes or tweets rather then calling them poetry. Thanks for the video it was very funny
My books are “Musing on the Cricket Game of Life Part 1 1/2”, “An Extravagant Way of Saying Nothing”, “Letters to Roxanne”, and “Writing With Scissors”.
Im not hating this poets because we all have our own insight...I can only appriciate them but I cant admire their works like how I love other poetries and willing to share it with my love ones
Wow... THANK YOU SO MUCH! I hope you get to check my poems too. It's in my youtube channel and also on IG @missrainbowmoonfire. (Sorry for my shamless plugging)
*me self doubting my writing skills
*watches this video
*self-doubts drop to 0.00%
LMAO glad I could be of assistance
@@haleywalker3052 OMG YOU NOTICED ME
I'm gonna take advantage of this nowwww
Can you tell me what you think about my writing?
Here's a tidbit
*ethanol teens
troubled hips
and ethanol lips
have another sip
while your worries
drip away
but they always stay
like the aftertaste of gin
too bitter to chase down
with sweet midnights
you gulped down litres of beer
to not feel lonely;
surrounded yourself with bottles
to not feel like the only one
who is empty.
go ahead and have your fun
funny stories become more hilarious
when told by miserable storytellers
just remember,
when the peanuts are all gone
and the bottles became as empty as you
all the syrup in the bar
will not grant you salvation
from tomorrow's judgment
same T_T
Brian Valdez omg,I love it!
“Swimming pools were invented to kiss girls in the rain.” 😂
All this roasting made my skin soft again. No more wrinkles. Thank you.
It’s so annoying because there are people who really like poetry and has talent but gets ignored because people nowdays only like things like that
That's okay. At least, there are still people like you who likes well-thought-out poetry.
Ikkkk
missrainbowmoonfire poetry idk if you’re being sarcastic or not but i didn’t meant it like that, i just think that some people write really beautiful poetry but they aren’t being enough recognized for it bc it just isn’t the type of poetry who is popular :) (and sorry if my english is bad it’s not my mother language)
Whenever I think my poems suck I just look at these kinds of poems. Probably the only time they will help me.
Most "instapoets" are basing their careers on being relatable, their "poems" are what any logical person can come up in matters of seconds or just cringe phrases from facebook pages of 2010. Ugh so annoying.
Ironically I just started my own instapoetry page lol. Follow me I guess @edieschild
Renzo Sosa HAHHAHAHAH I truly appreciate your honesty
i sat
in front of
rite aid
and watched the
goth teens
go by
@@renzossosa me too. @missrainbowmoonfire 😂
Everyone has a right to express themselves. If someone is more marketable, you can't blame them. One of the many issues with artists, all across the board, is lack of social skills
I’ve been writing long ass, well researched poems and i still feel awkward and drain in self doubt when posting them on Instagram but I’ve connected to some really good poets and writers and they appreciate my work and are so supportive. That is what keeps ke going 💛 thanks for this video😭 i feel more confident and in no way am i saying that these poets are trash, they’re where they are because they worked for it and people actually like reading their pieces and on Instagram, not everyone wants to read long poems and proses but “instapoetry”. So if you’re feeling low and lost and losing motivation because you don’t have enough audience yet, i just want to say that You might not have a lot of followers but you will always have some genuinely supportive readers and fellow writers, do not give up!! 💛
u r right. instapoems are not for poetry lovers, they are for generic poems people find easy to understand, hence it is all about numbers.
Their pathetic excuse of a poem makes me feel good about my writing, thanks!
I went to school for English, so I got to sit through a poetry read or two. Here's the reason why these poems are so bad. A typical poem, at least the ones that are highly praised in the English major community, tend to be very artistic and descriptive. The thing about those poems though, is that they are not just filled with non - sequiturs and are not just artsy for artsy sake. They are really creative in their wordplay and their messages. I feel like Instagram poets read these really powerful poems and see how creative they are, so they try to fit the mold of the poems in order to get praise. The problem is that a really good poem comes from the heart. If you just try to emulate something that gets accolades and there is no heart or emotion behind what you are writing, it will literally just be words on a page. It comes off as really pretentious and inauthentic. This is the difference between an A+ and a C- paper. This is my advice for anyone struggling with writing: don't just try to fit a mold in order to be a good writer. Also, don't use big words if you don't know what they mean. The person grading the paper can tell.
@topple To me it is a little bit of both. If you are emotionless, the poem will come across as too formulaic. I get where you are coming from though.
That awkward moment when you realize you followed r.h. Sin after a breakup
Actually his books are quite good. HAHHAHAGHA
😂😂😂😂😂
The burn. WHERE IS THE ICE?????
Art is art 🖼 it is subjective there is no such thing as good or bad art if it is pure
The very thought of judging poetry in the first place is ironic
instagram poets are useful though! they're great examples!
...
yanno,
for what not to do... 😀
😢😢😢😢 don't be too harsh on me.
i may or may not have a r.h. sin rip off calendar but some of them i just can’t with. life some are relatable and resonate with me but others im like “i could write this way better”
these poets are just catering to needs of ordinary ppl, who don't look for deeper meanings and analysis of a work . if u submit their poems to any professional critics, they will never stand out. Poetry is such a thing where even audience needs to be great
I'm an insta poet, and i totally understand where y'all are coming from, the format IG poetry comes in isn't always the best quality, but the accounts that y'all are looking at are huge and are often mass-produced... Go check out some of the smaller accounts, they won't disappoint you
I pray these writers will come to realize they must become their own worst critic. Otherwise their poetry will always be shallow.
great video I proved through satire anyone can be an instapoet and got it all over the media more criticism is needed
Thanks Thom!
@@haleywalker3052 love to see another where you roast more there are so many bad ones
Thom Young Definitely! I’m planning on it 😊
Thanks for your constructive criticism.❤️
Ben Maxfield was the only one who didn’t deserve to be on here 💀 But for the rest, wtf were they thinking 😭💀
benny writes good stuff ::
95 subs??? way more are coming bc i laughed so hard at this
Rose McKenzie Ahhh thank you so much! 🤩
Plenty of instagram poets that are terrible, male and female. Honestly, it’s such a scourge. They might be popular and raking in cash, but a genuine poet would never feel jealous. Selling the soul of your art like a cheap prostitute isn’t exactly something legitimately significant poets aspire to.
Love your sense of humour, and your editing is on point!! Great video lovely
Lauren and Nick Ahhh thank you!! 😍💕
time
is relative
beauty
is relative
family
is relative.
-Gabby Hannah or whatever her name is.
GIRL YOU ARE AO GOOD!! HOW DO YOU HAVE SUCH LITTLE SUBS 😭😭
LifeWithJo Ahhh that means so much! 💕 I’ve only been on here for around a month haha
Guuurl just saw your comment on bestmess's last vid, idk about Ashley but I sure am moving to NYC right away to be your bff 😭😭😭 this roast was so on POINT sksksldkdkl THANK YOU
velvetverveine AHHH thank you i love you 😭💕💕
These poems literally stroke my ego.
Also your humour great! Was a fun watch XD.
this was brilliant! and just backed up thoughts i had on the same people AND made me want to avoid hopping on that bandwagon even more. I feel comforted that the vast majority of the short pieces i have on my insta are just snippets of longer poems *phew* ..although i must admit i'm pretty sure there is some cheese...but the ones about depression balance it out....i think lol
An English literature professor of mine (a published poet, well respected creative writer/professor) didn’t know about rupi kaur or Instagram poetry. That’s how trashy and insignificant they are.
TRUTH 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
These guys really put the " mo' " in "emo."
I dont second guess my brooding nature epics anymore!!!
I'm just happy to see r.h. sin roasted. I can't tell you how awful his poetry is.
nah you're right, this crap isn't poetry...but then there's the big debate about what is poetry. But in all, I think your analysis is fitting.
Somebody REALLY NEEDED TO SAY THIS!!!
this is hilarious! I think the truth, and it's been said before, is that insta poetry is for people who don't like poetry. And, I suppose, don't worry if you're not popular as a poet, I think T S Eliot said something like good poetry usually isn't popular. And I have tried the instagram thing-- started around 3 months ago-- mostly sonnets and aphoristic little things (which seem to suit the medium) and I have all of ten followers lol. Anyway, subcribed!
In my opinion, All the poetries that you've shown in this video are not worth roasting. We should appreciate those legends. I truly admire their work.
HUGE Respect to all the poets out there. 🙌❤
Thank you. 😢
@@msrainbowmoonfire1802 Anytime. I guess you also write poems. I'd love to check out your channel. 💕
@@fatemasafy3944 Yes, I do. It's like a spoken/audio/video poetry.😂 And I fo have an IG account too @missrainbowmoonfire
I also published an eBook
www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B087ZYP9T9/ref=dbs_a_w_dp_b087zyp9t9
😂😂😂😂😂
I genuinely thought all of that just some quote... Not a fucking poem
It’s not poetry...it’s random thoughts.
Don't worry they're not equal with poets or real writers at all. They only following ego anyway.
I’m currently binge watching 😭😭
Views expressed in this video were much needed.
I just started using Instagram as a platform to share my poetry. Would never consider myself an instapoet.
I'm following about twelve people such as atticus and the like out of curiosity but id really like to follow more traditional poets as well. I just started yesterday, and I got a follower and was so happy. then I checked my Instagram today and she stopped following me :'( lol.
If you post your work there I'd be interested to read it.
I started posting my poems on IG too and it seemed like an outcast.😂
You’re hilarious I’m binge watching all your vids
belle ren Staaahhhpp 🙈
I write poetry and share it on Instagram does that make me a Instagram poet? I don’t write the poems to share in fact I don’t share all of my poetry
this made me giggle
luv the content
I just started posting my poems and short story in ig, seeing this inspires me to do better with my writing.
I just feel like the r.h.sin poems are things that people say to their friends who are in toxic relationships. But I’m not a poet so maybe I’m dumb.
You're not. You just have a different preference when it comes to poetry. 😉
These insta poets are just🤦🤦🤦
Ironically, I just started posting my poems on Instagram @missrainbowmoonfire and it seemed like an "outcast".
I’d help someone with calculus if they needed it
Anh Le “I don’t know if this can continue. I’m just confused... about differential equations”
Please list any poetry that you have done
Those aren't poems they are cringy self help phrases put together into stanzas.
Finallly someone who feels the same as me about 'insta poets'
Doing poetry is better than not doing anything
Just found your channel and I love your vids!
Keep being youu
Opalescent Girl whaaat!!! Thank you so much! 🤩
As someone would tell me all the time “ Your Ego kill your future man”
The female instagram poets are just as bad.
Don't be too harsh. 😢
Tyler knott Gregson poems kinda nicee
You really said what my points are actually ❤👀 thanks.
How would you rate this poem I wrote earlier today?
Love As The Dream
Love as the dream
of a dream of a dream
to a heart in ever arctic winter
with moonlight starved nights.
Fading,
Fading
in the languishing of the longing
for a spring that will never come.
James E. Roethlein copyright 2023
Is it a little bit better or just as bad?
I wanna start reading poetry but I don't wanna be basic. What are good books of poetry for getting started?
Lang Leav...or my little poetry ebook!
www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B087ZYP9T9/ref=dbs_a_w_dp_b087zyp9t9
Sorry for the shameless plugging
You can check some of my poems on IG @missrainbowmoonfire 😉
i just wanna be your friend now lmfaooo oh god the video & effects just get better
Arianna Eisendrath Oh my gosh hahaha thank you so much! 🥰🥰
It's true. I'm writing on instagram, and most of the poetry is terrible. I don't know who is worse, the poets or the readers.
Both I guess. 😂
There’s no way you knew that song by HI-5 lol
That was fun. You're lovely.
My poems sound like fucking gold compared to these. And they are not that good
This is really funny. But for me just for me R.H sin's books are actually quite good. HAHHAAHHAH
where’s the poetry?
I actually like some of ben ones, but all the others they feel like quotes, not poetry. And shitty quotes also.
do check my poems on IG @missrainbowmoonfire
r.h. is hurt, poor boy
Nicely done Haley... lots of cringe worthy stuff out there !
marti garaughty Thanks Marti! Very true haha
These are all awful. But technically though a queen doesn't have to be married (e.g., Queen Elizabeth I). She could have been "born a queen" if her father was the king and he died as her mother was giving birth to her and there were no older heirs. The poem still sucks though.
I looked to these guys for inspiration because they are popular. Now rethinking my literature. Any recommendations?
Sarcasm??
Warsan Shire or Ebony Stewart.... or me! 🤗
😂 EVERY PERSON ON EARTH SHOULD WATCH THIS.
I totally disagree with everything you say.
I understand the annoyance of those poems or "poems", they are really very weak but they are really judgments of hostile scholars.
what is a poem?
do you really know what a poem is? - It is not something that can be defined, nor does it have certain laws or certain judgments, certain techniques.
Romantics like Novalis, Shelly, Coleridge. worthswood. even poets like Octavio Paz, Anna Ajmatova, Matsuo Bashō and the list can go on say that poetry cannot be defined, in fact they say that poetry does not have to be complicated, it has to come from the soul.
one definition could be divine creation, nature, misunderstood legislation of the world.
There is a very good essay by Novalis called on the poet and poetry, where he tries to define it and talks about art for art's sake, the ordinary man and the artist.
I understand your annoyance with these poems, but I don't see why to criticize and criticize people who want to be a poet, in fact I applaud it, it is a very noble science, it is even one of the oldest sciences there is. Uniting the intellect (imagination) with the soul is not something that everyone does so easily.
instead of criticizing so much because you do not put yourself rather to write. If you think it's so easy, then write poetry (I don't think it will come out as clean as you might think)
My invitation is that if there are people who want to be a poet and their work is not very good, then let them be, the world is a very hostile terrain to continue attacking each other with literary works.
For people like you, the world of literature is such a closed and hostile niche.
incredible that people want to write poetry, want to be a poet. in the long run, writing (novels, short stories, poems, etc.) is like boxing, not the first person who strikes survives but the one who remains in the ring.
camello c I have a master’s degree in writing poetry (from Columbia University), so I’d argue I do know what writing poetry is like :) These poets are all talented and successful in their own right! The video was just for fun if you didn’t catch my message at the beginning 😉
Exactly. Thank you for saying this.
love this video x
Gee & Alex Thank you!! 🤩
The seven stages of simp poetry;
🤕🤥🤤🤯😎🤓🧐 oh and, if you have a response please, let it be in emojis, fellatio, coitus or parmesan.
Very rare exceptions of payment in cognac will be considered.
I just realized, I write better than R.H. Sin. And I'm not even a writer. 😆
I’m cracking up oh my god too good gal!!
Gabby DelCorso Hahaha I’m so glad!! 💕🤩
First I was like, why only the male ones. But zayum... By making these people famous were running the literature produced by our generation.
Atticus is not around for a TH-camr with 6k subs to judge .
prod.micahshepard I also have a Master’s degree in poetry from an Ivy League school 😋 But anyway, it’s subjective! I don’t like his work, but that doesn’t mean you can’t.
Haley Walker understood
I guess I'm lucky I started my writing account after this video was made lmao
Bro, they really sound like Facebook statuses or thoughts that you don't have time to post, or internet quotes. Like, okay these are relatable, but that's it. Maybe I wanna feel and read something interesting!
Let me give you something good
With or without I
Am king
Loyalty and
Love is all I need
Eeverything else go
To hell.
Atticus has some really good poems though
I agree with you.
i'm already dying omg
There were so many terrible ones out there that I ended up with an hour of footage XD Maybe a part two will happen in the near future
@@haleywalker3052 hahaha yess i support!!!
LMFAO this is AMAZING
jamiejars Thank you!! 😂😂
Are you saying simp poetry is just no GOOD?!! DAMN, I guess I'll have to get a new genre...jk.😅😅🤣🤣😂😂🤕🤥🤤🤯😎🤓🧐💯
Im actually a “male instagram poet”. My instagram is drepoitier. I dont have a following at all but it would be cool to get some criticism and perspectives from others
I died laughing at 1:39 lmao
Also it’s all so quick and short. Mine I post the algorithm f*cks. And take days and are multiple slides, about everything from substance abuse to boys to girls to Greek myothlogy parraell to now,
Oh I have a Christopher pointdexter tattoo hahahaha
I had a crush on atticus but yeah byiee..Jk😂😂
instagram.com/basharyehya_/ one of the few instapoets i enjoy
On the road to 2k ❤️ so proud
belle ren 😭💕
I'm one of the insta male poets. Guilty as charged LOL
An Ode To The Moon
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I am roaming the emptiness of the desert.
The moon's rotund fullness hangs in the void of the heavens,
Mid-way to the unseen horizon in the East.
The moon threatens to plummet into the desert floor,
Yet it maintains its oversight above its dominion.
The dulcet tones of the moon's milky-white soothe me,
But it is not my body they charm,
They pierce the ramparts to an unfathomable chamber in the bedrock of my soul.
And I feel a joy not confined to the borders of my flesh.
It is a joy emanating from deep within me,
And yet it belongs to us all.
And then I ask: Why is it that the sun's strong light exposes my body,
Yet the moon's milky-white exposes my soul?
I am peeking between two almost kissing cliffs.
I still my mind and then I see the snail's pace of the moon,
As it peeks at me behind the West cliff on its mission across the sky.
Gradually, almost imperceptibly, the moon's sliver advances past the cliff's edge,
And widens until it once more appears in all its rotund glory,
As it falls to the other side.
When the moon's edge reaches the other cliff it hides again,
Until once more I only see its thin sliver,
And then it is beyond my sight.
When the moon reveals this subtle dance to mine own eyes,
I feel an intimacy with it that no book can offer,
No teacher can teach.
On this night, the crescent moon floods the recesses of my soul with its pale milky glow,
And a mystical silence envelops the desert's void.
On other nights, in other places, the silence would be dulled by a crying baby,
while her mother sings a lullaby,
Or in the desert by the plaintive shriek of an anonymous wind,
As it hurtles across the desert floor,
To lands beyond horizon's reach.
But on this night, the silence is absolute,
And it comforts me like a blanket during this milky desert night.
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HAHAHHA THIS IS ON POINT
You forgot to add rupi kur
Kanhje 4Real She IS awful but this video was about the boys :)
@@haleywalker3052 oh ok lol. Because my thoughts are they should call them quotes or tweets rather then calling them poetry. Thanks for the video it was very funny
Hahaha omg love this!
Messy Magic Thanks so much!! 🤩
girl i love your ohtfit
Julie Johnson Thank you!!
I know how you feel and I have four books out (yes I am bragging)
My books are “Musing on the Cricket Game of Life Part 1 1/2”, “An Extravagant Way of Saying Nothing”, “Letters to Roxanne”, and “Writing With Scissors”.
I needed this laugh haha
Im not hating this poets because we all have our own insight...I can only appriciate them but I cant admire their works like how I love other poetries and willing to share it with my love ones
Wow... THANK YOU SO MUCH! I hope you get to check my poems too. It's in my youtube channel and also on IG @missrainbowmoonfire.
(Sorry for my shamless plugging)