This is the day when Humanity declared in one voice: "We will not go quietly into the night! We will not vanish without a fight! We're going to live on! We're going to survive!"
This story has a ton of plot holes. the immediate one I caught is that the survivors entire plotline was warning the fleet about enemy reinforcements the fleet itself detects in literally the next paragraph, yet this information is somehow crucial for the story.
OK wait wait wait wait. You have JUST discovered Humans yet you already know they are expanding ingredients at an alarming rate AND you know their tech level 3 centuries ago?? What's going on here within the first few sentences?
27:31 Soooooo THE Defiant with Colonel -- I mean Executive Officer -- JACK O'Neil -- THE Jack O'Neil -- on the Defiant. OK, where is Samantha and Scotty, in Engineering? Or is Sam and Spock working on the quantum torpedos? Mmmmm and where is Sulu and Cisco? No no no . . .my head hurts. So where is Chen? Whenever Chen shows up, Very Bad Things Happen! Can't wait for the Space Marines, I mean Spartans, to show up, lead by The Master Chief.
Of course, every alien Vader that was captured.They're not gonna let them go ever.They're gonna make their way to earth and make their way to area fifty one and be locked up forever and no just be sentenced to life because of their crimes anyways so they'll never get back to their home
Of course.There's another couple of fleets coming from Earth.Yet that you talked about before the major Fleet.Even coming so when are they gonna arrive?Just after the Zarconian fleet , Another Fleet of the United States arrives and then a couple days later, another, one of the United States fleets arrives.Or should I say Earth and Mars?Oh, and don't forget about all the other places that were sent to help too.Even if there are small forces that would still make a large force eventually with all the numbers
I'm surprised that every place that humans would do would not make it so they have a way to defend it where the impossible odds because they have figured aliens and thought of aliens so long and thinking of all this invasions, they would have weapons with such amount of bullets and be impossible just to disappear just.Like that
How many times do we need to hear they were warned about the Humans, how Humans did not know what was coming, how did the colony get a message to Earth if the did not have FTL communications, how many stories have to tell us how much Humans have overcome, how do you hear booms from space, how is it the defense platform at earth is only kilometers away but earth is light years away, why can't the AI read properly a well earned dislike.
Of course, it could not be the United States because the United States would have set off within 20 minutes.Cause they already have a fleet because united states always has a fleet
i telll you you though, the galactic cancel sure does get around, and chen,and Rodrigues, and all the other people in these stories sure do get around. :)
Well, send a message back to Earth, help.When we haven't met having a vision quickly.Fleet coming in if we're not here.Well we're gonna need a uninstall but I need you to use the backup's backs and revenge your death
All humanity, that's impossible special with so many worlds. And so many worlds with so much weapons. Earth has enough weapons to shoot off. Non-stop, at least in the United States, does for 4 years without even glinching shoot off millions of shots. A second of just missiles without ever running low.
All these stories and it's the same BS every time, usually the same or very similar character names, human ingenuity developing tech beyond that of species eons older in days, it's ridiculous, and I'm getting tired of the AI written crap, a lot of the time also, the same thing said over multiple paragraphs using slightly different words, or in a slightly different way, but why is it always the bloody galactic council, those poor guys are always getting a bad rep, you know, just for once, I wish a story wouod be closer to the truth on what would actually happen if we went to war with a technologically superior race.
Really, get a human to read these as your AI text reader is absolutely useless! "Readout" as "red-out", "reading" as "redding", "debris" with a non-silent s? And many other mistakes! Come on!
This is the day when Humanity declared in one voice:
"We will not go quietly into the night!
We will not vanish without a fight!
We're going to live on!
We're going to survive!"
Commander Jack O'Neal! Stargate reference or coincidence I don't care
Best character ever. The jack sparrow of space.
Also Adama Batelstar Galactica
Just the AI going wild
For clarification: defining a kill area is not a strategy it’s simply tactics or merely an operation if embedded in a battle plan.
"If the Continuum has told you once, they've told you a thousand times, DON'T PROVOKE THE HUMANS."
This story has a ton of plot holes. the immediate one I caught is that the survivors entire plotline was warning the fleet about enemy reinforcements the fleet itself detects in literally the next paragraph, yet this information is somehow crucial for the story.
That's the problem with AI writing.
An AI does not remember, what it said a sentence ago.
Unheated, they must be cold.
Going to need a long time to heal my injuries from falling in all the gaping plot holes. Crap.
OK wait wait wait wait. You have JUST discovered Humans yet you already know they are expanding ingredients at an alarming rate AND you know their tech level 3 centuries ago?? What's going on here within the first few sentences?
I don't know why I keep listening to these :)
Just think of it as a lesson in how not to write stories. Guess we can learn something from AI
And of course , I sent it to all the other colonies that we set up anywhere between because I know everybody would come to help
Number One, arm the DDT torpedoes.
27:31 Soooooo THE Defiant with Colonel -- I mean Executive Officer -- JACK O'Neil -- THE Jack O'Neil -- on the Defiant. OK, where is Samantha and Scotty, in Engineering? Or is Sam and Spock working on the quantum torpedos? Mmmmm and where is Sulu and Cisco? No no no . . .my head hurts. So where is Chen? Whenever Chen shows up, Very Bad Things Happen! Can't wait for the Space Marines, I mean Spartans, to show up, lead by The Master Chief.
Of course it's not over yet
Of course, every alien Vader that was captured.They're not gonna let them go ever.They're gonna make their way to earth and make their way to area fifty one and be locked up forever and no just be sentenced to life because of their crimes anyways so they'll never get back to their home
Of course.There's another couple of fleets coming from Earth.Yet that you talked about before the major Fleet.Even coming so when are they gonna arrive?Just after the Zarconian fleet , Another Fleet of the United States arrives and then a couple days later, another, one of the United States fleets arrives.Or should I say Earth and Mars?Oh, and don't forget about all the other places that were sent to help too.Even if there are small forces that would still make a large force eventually with all the numbers
New Eden, that's quite a ways away from Earth. If it's the place I'm thinking of which might be Pandora.
It’s a Prothean dig site
The Warning Unheated? 🤣
Ya, not that great. I've heard many stories like this already, was it made with AI?
@@wfirebaugh more than likely. they should be able to proof read the text before they publish in a perfect world. lol
Teenage fiction. Every feelgood cliché imaginable.
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and so many unneeded frazes.. testaments, tapestries.. all those parts could be removed giving this story at least some pace
Well, that doesn't sound like the United States at all, but it does sound like NASA 2.
The civilian part of it anyways.
Which doesn't make sense
Commander Jack O`neel..realy?.. :)
They even godt his rank wrong 😅
O'Neill, 2 Ls
Another story written by an AI...
You can tell the author was not a combat vet
Awful
I'm surprised that every place that humans would do would not make it so they have a way to defend it where the impossible odds because they have figured aliens and thought of aliens so long and thinking of all this invasions, they would have weapons with such amount of bullets and be impossible just to disappear just.Like that
How many times do we need to hear they were warned about the Humans, how Humans did not know what was coming, how did the colony get a message to Earth if the did not have FTL communications, how many stories have to tell us how much Humans have overcome, how do you hear booms from space, how is it the defense platform at earth is only kilometers away but earth is light years away, why can't the AI read properly a well earned dislike.
Of course, it could not be the United States because the United States would have set off within 20 minutes.Cause they already have a fleet because united states always has a fleet
And for God's sake : Don't Touch Their Boats !!
😂😂😂
29:00 A bit clumsy.
i telll you you though, the galactic cancel sure does get around, and chen,and Rodrigues, and all the other people in these stories sure do get around. :)
Ope another scientist named Dr Chen. Looking AI written 😂
What do you think will happen now
Said Alina to Marcus
Well by the looks of it and that little finger reaching for the other
I'D SAY BABY'S 😂😂😂
This is very bad.
Well, send a message back to Earth, help.When we haven't met having a vision quickly.Fleet coming in if we're not here.Well we're gonna need a uninstall but I need you to use the backup's backs and revenge your death
All humanity, that's impossible special with so many worlds. And so many worlds with so much weapons. Earth has enough weapons to shoot off. Non-stop, at least in the United States, does for 4 years without even glinching shoot off millions of shots. A second of just missiles without ever running low.
We orbit a WHITE star. jeeze, sci-fi writers need to get it right.
Its AI written
Crap. New species discovered, full catalogue of Intel came with it or what? Not only superficial but deep knowledge. Sure.
Ok, if they have debris from prior incursions, how is it the admiral said they were unknown to them
All these stories and it's the same BS every time, usually the same or very similar character names, human ingenuity developing tech beyond that of species eons older in days, it's ridiculous, and I'm getting tired of the AI written crap, a lot of the time also, the same thing said over multiple paragraphs using slightly different words, or in a slightly different way, but why is it always the bloody galactic council, those poor guys are always getting a bad rep, you know, just for once, I wish a story wouod be closer to the truth on what would actually happen if we went to war with a technologically superior race.
It appears to me that time wasting and use chatter is the order of the day. Another last dish miracle that leads to victory ?
Really, get a human to read these as your AI text reader is absolutely useless! "Readout" as "red-out", "reading" as "redding", "debris" with a non-silent s? And many other mistakes! Come on!
Warning! Another WOKE story
CCP AI model
@@asgardhomestead7076woke is progressive not ignorant and regressive,.
You probably don’t even know what woke is please get off your old recliner and quit watching Fox News which is nothing but right wing nonsense 😂😂😂
Thanks for the warning
@@rogerkatakowski323progress can be destructive to other cultures you dum ba ss😅
*inhale intensifies*