Honestly, one of the BEST things in the movie was just how well Mario and Luigi connected as brothers: and it just feels like a shame that they we DON'T see that more then we do.
@@macmadness5932 Older audiences would have probably preferred songs that matched Mario Bros instead of songs that sounded like they were chosen from focus groups. I mean, as a friend of mine put it, they COULD have used “Superstar” as a pop song. It was RIGHT THERE. And it’s particularly less generic and more related to Mario Bros than “I need a hero”.
I've seen that bit before, but the delivery of "Is that a frog suit?" "I won't tell anyone how I saved you if you don't tell about the suit." "DEAL!" actually got me.
I love the idea of giving Luigi more to do, the addition of the Sand Land scene, and Bowser being made even more menacing. I still think the movie is great as it is, but I think this script would have made it fantastic.
I hate the fact Nintendo got rid of him because I personally believe that it would have given us an idea of how the Toad's life cycle goes. For example, When an old Toad dies they bring new life to newborn Toads after being buried in the ground for some time. Sure, we can keep the fact that the Toads can live longer than humans but don't make them immortal. Also, during the beginning of this rewrite, the Mario Bros. were doing a good job of doing what they do best and I think that Foreman Spike was secretly sabotaging their hard work. And he was the one who cut the fuel line of the Mario Bros' Van when he overheard them when they got the job to help Mayor Pauline's plumbing problem.
Yep. Universal and Nintendo missed a golden opportunity with this storyline. I mean I get that Peach is a girl boss, but even she needed help at some point.
OMG yes. I have this headcanon-ish opening where Bowser is raging in his castle about not marrying Peach when a portal opens and King Boo floats out, him and Bowser have a debate on who's the better villain, then we get introduced to KIng Boo's main weapon: the Painting which he slams down on Bowser and traps him (at this point Bowser is still small and in a jar) then goes to take the Dark Moon.
That's for sure. I mean I like Despicable Me, but it's nowhere near as good as classic Disney, Pixar, Don Bluth, and even DreamWorks animation. Illumination is more about marketing and promoting merchandise than story, plot, and character.
As much as I love this movie, I do wish it went on for a little longer than 90 minutes, even an extra 10 would’ve given the narrative more significant depth which you excellently provided.
Yeah, I think it’s funny that the Mario Movie is 92 minutes and 17 seconds, just barely shorter than this video. Bro basically just made another Mario Movie.
Most animated kids films are traditionally an hour and 20 minutes, both The SpongeBob SquarePants 2005 and Simpsons Movie are an hour and 20 minutes so why should Mario be longer? Only Sonic 2 was 2 hours even THEN just by a couple minutes extra lmfao
A few things I would like add is: 1. The Rainbow road shortcut could've been created by the Power Star. 2. I would've LOVED it if Luigi says something like, "You need a Player 2?" or, "Need a Co-op Partner?" when he's saving Mario, because it really adds the feeling of when you play the games and your friend, or most likely your brother/family member, joins in and helps you out. 3. After Mario & Luigi defeat Bowser, all the 7 power stars show up again, and Toadsworth returns them back to their kingdoms.
2nd feels a bit cringe idk. it could be better if, when luigi storms off to play kid icarus in the first act, and mario shows up to comfort him, he says 'need a player two' or smth. then it would be a callback.
I WANNA SEE A REANIMATED COLLAB WITH THIS STORY IT WAS SOOO GOOOD❤❤❤ This was a great video Chariii5, I absolutely loved the new story, you and the illustrators did a fantastic job on this
It's cool to see you tackle a story with this kind of broad appeal approach. Your passion comes through as always, the amount of drawings you had to do man. Maybe when Bowser's knocked back by the chest he rolls over cause of his shell and lands on his stomach?
@@Charriii5Hey, Charriii! If you want some additional ideas for little edits, I'm happy to share! ▪︎First off, as a little aesthetic change, let's have the Snow Kingdom co-inhabited by both Penguins and Shiverians. Hey, it's not my fault I'm an Odyssey fanboy. ▪︎Let's also make the travel montage a little more fleshed-out. We could see the trio buying a sombrero or riding Jaxis in Tostarena, blasting out of the cannons or being dragged around on the end of a Chomp chain on the Battlefield, finding out Toad has a Fuzzy on his head in the Rock-Candy Mountains, or my personal favourite, Mario getting eaten by a Yoshi and referencing one of his most iconic lines from the Super Mario World TV Show - "Now I know how a meatball feels!" ▪︎During the scene in the Fire Flower Fields, we can touch upon the Mario-Toad dynamic with Mario talking to Toad about how sometimes he feels insignificant in his world, with Toad replying that he secretly feels the same way. Peach isn't just the Kingdom's princess, she's their idol too - strong, tactical, and capable of putting up a fight, whereas the Toads are small, frail and mostly quite cowardly. Then, we can have Mario say that Toad is contradicting his heroic actions back in the temple, saying that size is just a bunch of numbers. Later, instead of Toad being held captive at the wedding, he might be allowed to go free with the others, and that's where he motivates his associates into crashing the wedding and taking back their princess, their idol, and their hero! You said you wanted more Toad in the flick? Mail call for one Mister Charriii? ▪︎Another aesthetic alteration here - you've got seven stars. Why not make them all different colours like in the RPG of the same name? ▪︎A little idea for the credits - have Mario and Luigi take a tour of the Mushroom Dimension meeting Peach, Toad, DK, E-Gadd and Dorrie along the way. As the credits roll, we see the heroes platform through the environments of the different Kingdoms akin to in the 2D Mario games, before they re-emerge in Brooklyn to attend a festival in their honour. After all, as amazing a song as Peaches was, it must be a bit lonely being the only fully lyrical Mario song in the movie, so squeezing Jump Up in there at the very end would be a super welcome treat.
This was a really great rewrite that provided fixes to a lot of the problems some people had with the movie. You really have a knack for creating cohesive stories and put a lot of effort into this.
That's for sure. I mean he plugged up the majority of the plot holes that the original film had and made an actual story both interesting and entertaining.
I do agree that Luigi should be the one storming off and Mario being nice, as fans typically tend to make Mario look like a bad brother when in reality he actually cares. Edit- Also, I feel like Mario should have TOTALLY used more than the Tanooki Leaf and Cat Bell. The Fire Flower is his most iconic form, and even the Propeller Suit or Boomerang Flower would have totally worked. Maybe Mario steals a Koopa’s shell and spins around in it like the Blue Shell.
Y'know, for all the accusations that Chris Pratt gets about supposedly "never playing a Mario game once in his entire life", he sure as hell knows that Mario is a good brother to Luigi more than a lot of supposed "loyal Mario fans" do...
I kind of wished that Peach still said that Mario is not important when they left because when she and Toad returns to The Mushroom Kingdom and announces that Mario didn’t make it one of the many toads could reply “Who’s Mario?” Making Peach really see how much she took Mario for granted.
I don't understand why, but for some reason, I always feel way more fear in fearful moments in fan works than in the actual work, probably because they're a lot more unpredictable. I loved this. I did enjoy the movie for the same reason as everyone else, the Mario celebration, but the more fleshed out story arcs of the brothers would've made me love it.
That's an interesting point. I also feel that sometimes. For this in particular, I'd point out 1:16:55, Charriii's narroration along with the art of the characters relief turning to fear and especially the use of the pipe sound, somehow make it kinda creepy as it starts up slow but gradually builds pace all came togetger to make me feel really tense.
Fans don't have the problem of working within a budget (mostly), they can make their stories as wild and fantastical as they want, but they also know how to properly respect the source material and characters.
As a two-time theater-watcher of the Super Mario Bros. Movie and as an unashamed Mario stan, I LOVED this rewrite--you took what was already pretty damn great and made it EVEN BETTER. 10/10, I wanna see you fan pre-write the sequel already mate.
After watching this I'm a little sad that this wasn't the end product we got, because just like with your Forces rewrite, you found a way to dissect nearly every detail of the story and found a way to either improve on what a specific scene was trying to accomplish or change it into something new entirely. I've really been loving these types of videos and can't wait for the next one!
Super late to this and I apologize for that. With that said, I enjoyed your take on it. Especially since they really didn't give Luigi much to work with. Glad to hear your take on this.
31:30 This change alone makes me infinitely more endeared to the movie and Princess Peach as her character was presented here. I didn't mind Princess peach being good at the obstacle course, especially, like you mentioned, with the added reality she was raised here. But it felt needlessly...idk...for lack of a better way to put it.... or uh... I'll just say, It felt like a weird add on to say she got it on her first try. Really...dehumanized her in a way and made her less relatable. Such a simple change to it like you did of saying she had pleny of time to get it does so much in my opinion
While I'm fine with the Princess being a girl boss. But when she wins all the time against her opponents and finishes the obstacle on her first try, that turns her into a Mary Sue.
F all that. It turns her into an opportunist. My main gripe about her characterization is that she neither had an export to represent her kingship, nor did she have her own flag so to speak For all the wizardry and magic, she still has to rely on manpower. And the movie insults your intelligence by craftily replacing it with kong power. Like what's all that about? Imploring other nations "he'll come for you too" while it's clearly you Bowser wants. Like the guy doesn't even want her assets or her home. He wanted their itemship which is a you problem Matter of fact, it's a problem known to man which is older than dirt. Women trying to convince us that their safety is above all without actually indicating what makes them essential. And before this becomes an Andrew Tate sermon, I'd like to mention there are a lot of things women have to offer to be valuable. My problem is that both real women and Peach, seldom elect themselves for show and tell. If you can't even be bothered to play a role, you don't deserve to be the main character And it comes full circle. THIS peach _can_ skip to the loo, but tells Mario that the fate of the world is his burden. See, it wouldn't matter if she were a queen of a bunch of mushrooms or the queen of the ashes, she doesn't identify with her own humanity, so she can be whatever the situation calls her to be- a damsel in distress or a girl boss You put the pieces together and the symbolism is plain as day. A dragon comes in to court the woman not expecting for one second to be spurned. And why should he? Her identity is as amorphous as anything you could orient with magic
@@normadgarmez7026 Yeah there are moments in the movie where Peach is a little *too* good at everything. And I can't help but notice that half of the finale carefully adheres to the golden rules in Modern Hollywood Writing: "No woman should ever make mistakes nor be saved by a man." Which is *ignorant* to begin with. Just because a female character is labeled "damsel in distress" doesn't automatically make her helpless, if written skillfully. However, we can be thankful that at least Peach doesn't taught, belittle and overshadow the main protagonist of movie, as she actually helps and supports Mario through his journey. And she's a pretty likeable character all to herself. (Unlike other certain girl bosses)
They completely butchered her character in this movie. In the games, she is kind, caring, and helpful, but she will beat the crap out of you if you upset her, however she isn’t stronger than Bowser. In this movie, she is just a strong, and independent girlboss who is stronger than everyone.
I personally don’t have much of a problem with the story we got, but regardless I would’ve loved the movie even more if we got this, hope we get more rewrite videos cause this and the Forces one were so good
it REALLY sucks that a lot of people ignore the storys glaring flaws simply because of all the references and because its "mario". a video game movie NEEDS a competent narrative. i could care lesss about "oh look its the thing" the fact that a story that incomplete got over a BILLION FREAKING DOLLARS kind of pisses me off.
@@slimgrim3607it's not that deep. It is a MARIO movie. It doesn't need a deep narrative to work. Especially if it's meant for children and adults just trying to watch a fun movie. How is the story incompent anyways? It works just fine.
@@islesofforeignrails7917because the movie does what it needs to. Entertains. You think people watch action movies for the story? Not every movie has to be story oriented.
I’d add another change to the Mario vs DK fight: have Mario learn to be less reliant on power ups to be a hero and think more on whit and strategy. I’d have Mario even pick up a hammer and smash DK’s barrels being hurled at him like in the classic game. I’d even have the way DK gets taken down be exactly how the arcade game plays out, by removing the beam supports and have DK tumbling down to the bottom of the arena KOed. It’s not only a great reference but a great way for Mario’s character to build beyond going auto-pilot whenever he powers up.
I can't barely stand for how SUPER GENIUS you are explaining about the Brooklyn Flood Accident which is the snow kingdom melted by Bowser to getting the Super Star/Power Star at 26:36 That is the point not only explained why the city is flooded which directly back to the most beginning scene, and also explained the motive why Mario Bros. come here at the beginning, and also give Mario a more serious motive to defeat Bowser instead of just saving Luigi and help them because justice, even better explained both world are connected more closely and make them linked together and make all the sense! This is the first time I see and knowing about the REWRITTEN video, but it already amazed me for how make the movie even better than I know, Thank you Although I glad to see if the movie is extended, it will might make a 3 hour-long movie if the story is possible flowXD
I think we only miss the chance to show Princess Daisy, who also had a kingdom and although not story-wise important (Pauline is still important since Daisy only show in Super Mario Land, that barely people known about it) but still nice to add into the Sand Kingdom, unless we need clarify that Sarasaland is not the Sand Kingdom where Mario and Captain Koopa fought, and they didn't had the Power Star since people love calling that Sand Kingdom showed in the council are reference of Sarasaland, while Mario and the gang travel to another Sand Kingdom in Odyssey, which named Tostarena because the inverted pyramid, I really hope both kingdom can merge together since they really just huge desert and better known as "Kingdom" but with no royalty
At 50:25, I think the Cranky Kong's purpose is fine, but in REWRITEEN version it make another little confusion, since they ask both Power Star and Donkey Kong's aid, but if Cranky Kong really think they should take both of them only if they can fight his son, doesn't mean they only can just need Power Star since they able to fight Donkey Kong? I know this is the joke for Cranky Kong and all the Kongs believing nothing can fight Donkey Kong that easily and just a excuse to let them leave so they no need included in these mess Since in the Original Movie, Cranky Kong taunt Mario by saying hope this fight not ended in 5 seconds and give Power-Up for Mario‘s advantages，I think is better if Cranky Kong let them survival in the fight like 5 min，but Mario surprised everyone by beating Donkey Kong so hard（maybe less damage from the movie，but still win） at the end of the fight，already burst the limitations of the Kongs’ imagination. For Cranky Kong's dialogue in 52:34, I prefer changing to "He think he want grow bigger, but he is still too SMALL to GROW" from "I guess he picked up the wrong mushroom" yeah, this is the third time calling Mario small just few minutes ago, and maybe my lines isn't good enough, but I still hope it can make the jokeXD
THIS. THIS RIGHT HERE!!! Loved this rewrite so so much. I wish we got this version in theaters. Just some slight tweaks and a few bigger ones could’ve turned this from a fun throwaway film into something with more substance. Also those drawings and the editing in general was phenomenal. Great work.
Fun Fact: Toadsworth and Toadette was cut from the film. Most likely saving their appearance for the sequel. Toadette was teased on a poster in the background.
I can’t express enough how much I love this, the way you made things tie together, and line up with each other is actually insane, with Luigi playing a much bigger role an adding to the story is just too good. Absolutely amazing job to you, and everyone who helped you with it!!!
I love these rewrite vids. The care and effort you put into extending scenes that needed a little extra love, the creative changes, the art, the voice acting, the pacing. Its all so good and I really love the changes you've drafted out. My biggest issue was definitely that, while I liked the movie, the pacing was pretty rushed. Yeah its a kids movie, and this seems to be more for the spectacle than say the Sonic movies were, but that doesn't mean it needs to just be all pretty visuals and "look remember this reference?!". It felt lacking, I like it but it still felt that way. But I love your changes, I love the extra focus on Luigi who I agree was very underutilized in the actual film, I love the way you slow things down a little more so that the smaller moments have time to shine. I hope that, should a second movie get announced in the future, they take more time to develop the rest of the cast and give it the same sort of care and attention you laid out here. Also dude, I love how far your voice acting and art has come. Your range is great, your impressions are pretty spot on. I love that you've been getting more dynamic and confident in your art skills as well. Its been fun watching you grow and change and improve as a content creator and I'm excited to keep watching your growth as time goes on. You're a rockstar as always Charriii, keep up the good work!
Now this , THIS is exactly what I would want the movie to be. Not needing to be a masterpiece but at least trying make us care more about the characters and the world of Super Mario Bros. You managed to make me care about everyone and pick my interest in the rewrite than the movie ever could. I also give you credit for the reimagened drawings, the artstyle is adorable and they perfectly describe how the scenes would go. 👍 (Edit: I would only disagree with putting Egad to the film as I feel like the movie already has a huge cast and putting him would be a bit too much)
Yeah, I'd say the Luigi's Mansion side-plot was spooky cool, but it doesn't feel all that necessary at all in the grand scheme of things. Charriii5 should saved that part for a future spin-off film. He should've given Luigi an entire subplot dedicated to where he has to escape Bowser's ship while also learning to be brave. Also, I would cast David Tennant as the voice od E. Gadd.
@@jwroot yeah you're right. The mansion sideplot would be a bit too much. With that said I still wish that Luigi had more screentime rather than doing nothing for the most part. I did found out that originaly they wanted to give him more scenes and be more active in the plot from the concept art but they decided to scrap it because acording to the executives children don't have the attention span longer then 90 minutes. That is the actual reason why the movie was so short. 😮💨
@@antonyproduction-1People like you are kinda the reason we’re getting these mediocre movies lol. Saying it was fine as it was when there are genuine criticisms towards the film just shows how much of a fan boy you are.
@@supetendo5106 I mean the movie that Illumination wrote is fine. It’s a great callback for Mario fans while being a fun movie for little kids. But I will admit that the movie is flawed in a few departments like the story and music. Why do we need 80’s pop music when we already got an instrumental version of the Mario ost. In the words of the giant coconut crab from Moana, I can’t concentrate, just pick one, pick one!!!
Spoilers to people who haven't watched yet I got so invested into this video that i literally gasp in realization when i saw the chest shoot out of the poltergust at the end of the script, remembering the moment when the chest was sucked up earlier. Honestly this is an amazing rewrite and i do hope that someone in the future would turn this into an actual fan made movie 🙏
Huh I saw that coming from the moment he pointed out the chest in the beginning and when he said set to blow I knew that this was the moment the last star would appear Chekhov's gun and all that
True. I was waiting for a scene of Bowser harnessing the power of the stars he has for something. Maybe have him take over a part of Peach's castle or something when he's demanding her to marry him as a cute little callback to how that works in Mario 64. I don't know, just something to explain why the Power Stars are powerful or even necessary
@@HyLionoh true true. As of now we just know power stars are “powerful” and “will make me unstoppable” not really why so that’s probably something that could be expanded on.
Agreed, I love this rewrite and one of the few things it leaves me wondering is how to better explain the mcguffins. I like the change from 1 star to 7 for plot reasons but it feels weird that you need 7 to get what is just a superstar. Maybe they could be changed into silver stars and when Egadd explains to Luigi that he's looking for them he also explains that when 7 are gathered they combine to create a superstar, which would make its wielder unstoppable. Or maybe Peach explains that to Mario around the time he learns about powerups, whatever. And that way once all 7 gather in the same place at the finale, it becomes just like in the original movie with a single super star instead of mario and luigi reaching for a bunch of stars.
19 minutes in and I already LOVEEE THIS OH MY GOSH This feels like the movie I wanted the entire time. I can already tell how the pay off is just gonna feel THAT much more satisfying
OH. MY. GOD. I was planning on checking out like 5-10 minutes of this nothing more. And I ended up watching this like it WAS the Mario movie. This video is absolutely brilliant. I think it does the movie the justice it absolutely deserved, giving more of a focus on BOTH Mario and Luigi, Giving the blue shell more focus, and giving DK and Mario the perfect balance of friend and rivalry he deserved. And that god damn pay off. I can’t believe this isn’t the version of the movie we got. I screamed (into my pillow) in excitement when the poltergeist came back in relevance by the very end, and the TV scene with both Mario and Luigi makes all the sense in the world. Fantastic fantastic work. Like brilliant. I would watch *THIS* movie a million times over.
Man, this was a fun watch! I love the stuff you added, cuz it's not a complete re-vitalized story, but rather adding some smaller scenes to add to the movie, to make the end product have more impact (besides the scene with the dog, I'm glad I'm not the only one who wasn't a fan of that scene lol). The drawings and the voice over was super fun too. Also, if I could add one thing to this that I think would be cool, is when Egad is explaining to Luigi that this haunted land was a Kingdom that Bowser took over, Egad could explain how it was originally Bowser's OWN Kingdom that he destroyed long ago, in search for power, and once he conquered it, he scooped a big chunk of the mountain to be the big ass airship we see in the movie. But now that he's older, and we see how Bowser acts now, we can tell that he regrets those events, due to how lonely he is. It could add an extra layer to Bowser, as to how he ended up like this (plus make him more threatening), and also explain why this kingdom looks the way it does: Dead trees, small lava pools, abandoned castles, Dry Bones and Boos. Admittedly, it does sound a little dark for Mario, but it made sense to me.
Yeeeeaaah but nah I disagree, if we get a rewrite, I think Bowser should care for his minions like he does in the games. And game Bowser would NEVER destroy his own kingdom and kill who knows how many of his own citizens. I want Bowser, not near pure evil turtle lol. Bowser's still pretty evil, but one of Bowser's recurring traits is that he cares for his troops, which wasn't shown in the movie. I'd still keep him burning the Koopa into a dry bones scene tho because it was hilarious lol, and also because it's not really murder- I mean technically yeah it is, but the Koopa can still speak, think and etc just as fine as a dry bones so it's not so bad.
i think this movie suffers from what i like to call “first film syndrome” where in the first film of either a trilogy or anything bigger its meant to establish the world and the characters to both a general audience and its fans and thus suffers on other aspects. into the spiderverse and sonic the hedgehog 1 suffered from this as well where they’re establishing locations, characters and themes but when you look outside of that theres… little substance. but then they bounce back in the sequel where the chains are finally off and they’re able to truly show what they want to show and do what they want to do. the mario movie is currently going through that now and once the strike ends we’ll definitely see mario truly spread his wings and become something greater.
That’s… actually very good logic. I loved Sonic 2 more than the first film, simply because there was more. They did more with the characters and made a story that was well written, had memorable locations and references, and a wonderful cast to voice the characters.
This sort of thing is how Spider-Verse can work without the sheer scale and insanity of everything becoming overwhelming, because you still follow the story of one or two characters with their specific needs and you see their arc all the way through from start to finish. It’s in a fantastical and insane world but the story is still about one guy with a simple dream.
Can I just say how great of a voice actor you are? I've been watching a lot of your Sonic Comic streams, and those along with this really show your versatility as a VA! Great video, also! The Dorrie bit was probably my favorite, although personally I would go a bit more simplistic and just make Dorrie Engurde, great scene though.
24:57 Fun fact: Mario was originally intended to enter Peach's castle through a secret pipe system, according to concept art. Mario would've then traveled through the pipe and crash-landed straight on to the world map in the courtroom where Peach and the Toads are discussing Bowser's attack, including Toadsworth and Toadette.
This is way better than the actual movie. I still like the finished film we got as it is, but even when I first saw it, I always felt like there was a lot of things missing from it. And this rewrite scratches all those itches.
seeing these fan rewrites of popular franchises makes it clear to me that only fans can tell a franchise's story better than the actual big companies that own/produced them. the way how charriii explains/references certain details like professor e. gadd assisting luigi or toadsworth being absent for the majority of the franchise clearly shows that he knows a lot of his super mario history.
All of this is a pretty perfect rewrite. Though Dorys inclusion should be set up a bit better as to make it in a sense a chekhovs gun situation. Maybe as Mario and DK are falling, DK gets snarky and falls very quickly towards the water knowing that the water will just break his fall like it does in the games so he can assess the situation once he surfaces. Have the perspective shift to Mario as he goes slightly into the water as DKs seen deeper into the water but deep enough to notice that once he stops falling and is starting to float, he's hit hard by a massive object that's barreling up to the surface to avoid something else. Mario barely gets out of the way to catch a breath at the surface as what pops up and goes airborne is Dory with DK on its snout and the morray eel right behind it, presumably trying to hunt it or defend the waters underneath bowsers castle for some reason. Then, after showing that there's still tension to be had, DK falls off relatively close to Mario and the Frog suit scene acts out as you described it. I think it makes it more rewarding to see that Mario has a reason to be afraid of this thing because he previously knew it was in the water, it also strengthens Mario's point that he and DK didn't think their idea of getting out of the morray through. I also think that having a little blue wooden dory in the waters of the map around the start would also be kinda cute since it would be subverting the audiances expectations that it's a barely talked about reference to Mario 64, 3D world, or Odyssey (I forget which one) and show that the refrence was a set up for their appearance.
Oooo I like that. It gives time for Mario’s perspective to be emphasized without realizing he’s afraid of nothing, even though the audience might catch on a bit earlier and shows even more how unfamiliar he is with this world. ^^
An idea that I've had in my head for a new Super Mario Bros. movie before this one finally came out was for there to be an opening montage of Mario and Luigi trying out different jobs and failing until they become plumbers as a cute little nod to the various jobs they've taken in earlier games before officially becoming plumbers. I also always liked to interpret Mario Bros. as being a prologue to Super Mario Bros. as a kid where Mario and Luigi try to fix an unusual plumbing problem only to then be attacked by all these creatures until eventually deciding to go inside the pipes to see where they came from which transports them into the Mushroom Kingdom.
I loved the movie but it always felt like the movie was 10-20 minutes too short, and this rewrite fills in the blanks, tightens the narrative, and fleshes out the characters (especially giving Luigi a purpose in the story!) Hopefully the inevitable sequel to the movie addresses the lack of substance and make something as effective as your rewrite. Well done Charriii!!
Something I woulda changed about the Mario vs DK fight scene is having the audience chant “He’s bigger, faster, and stronger too! He’s the first member of the DK Crew!” Before he made his appearance, that would’ve amped up DK’s danger level to have an entire stadium of Kongs know a chant about how powerful he is, as well as an extra nod to the DK rap
I really don't know how i can say how much i loved this rewrite, like this is what I would want from a Super Mario Bros. MOVIE, rather than just a bunch of while cool, references that all in all mostly lack substance I was like completely hooked on this rewrite, like picturing it like damn that wouldve been 100x better, amazing job!
This rewrite is incredible! As much as I love the movie as it is, I wouldn't complain if this is how it turned out. Also, I love how you added Dorrie, Its nice seeing some representation on a lesser known Character.
32:03 Shigeru Miyamoto suggested that Mario doesn't like mushrooms as a joke. 37:09 - 37:15 I didn't even notice that. Good job with the rewrite in general; I like how you gave Luigi more to do and provided a reason for the Bomber/Banzai Bill's eye to be attacked. Keep at it Charriii5; I can see you having a future as a creative writer.
I'm really a fan of this movie but we can all agree that the story and narrative can improve I really like the rewrite that you propose as it fixes and expands several things that I would have liked to see better implemented with this that apparently the film team is not unaware of the criticisms that are made of it, I hope that they use them as feedback for the sequel Great Video
I didn't like having a baby Peach enter through the tunnels, her parents are King and Queen Toadstool it would've been a nice callback to them as they've kind of disappeared from lore Amazing re-write!
Seeing this rewritten makes me wish some of this stuff was in the final product. You did a great job inplemeting certain elements that could've work in the movie. I love how you put in E.Gadd as a partner for Luigi to make it so that way Luigi has things to do rather than be in a cage most of the time.
40:02 Long before your rewrite, I've actually written an entire Pitch regarding this very scene. I was kind of upset that it didn't expand much longer as it would have been the perfect time for Mario, Peach and Toad to properly develop as characters and interactions. I made Mario and Peach sit down by the fire after looking up at the stars. Mario begins to talk to Peach again only to see her hugging her knees looking forlorn. Mario's unsure why she's feeling this way and decides to give her some space and talk to Toad. Toad is really happy to finally go on an adventure he always desired, whereas Mario's mildly annoyed with him. Toad would ask Mario if he and Peach really are from another world and says he's very jealous but curious. Mario says he can't believe he did all that training to rescue his brother only to see Toad just come along without any training he did. Toad reassures Mario he knows about survival and says with confidence he can take care of himself just fine. Mario asks what sort of talents do you have? Toad says he can play a flute, cook, pack gear and goes pick up a Fire flower and combines it with a big cube of ice, turning it into an Ice Flower. (The very same one in the climax) Mario's quite impressed. Mario complements Toads upbeat energy but asks why exactly he calls me his best friend despite only just meeting each other. Toad explains because he has no friends. And this is where I gave Toad a bit of a 'Perrito edge' to him as he talks about his backstory in which his peers disliked Toad's hyperactive energy and trick him into throwing him in mud. Mario apologizes but Toad waves his hand away and says he's gotten that a lot. Toad says he never thought he would go on this type of adventure with the Princess and another human and says they made his life pretty special. Mario smiles and says you're not so bad little mushroom man. Mario decides to talk to Peach again, still looking forlorn. Mario asked Peach why she's feeling this way? Peach is afraid to respond. But Mario assures her that whenever his brother felt down, he can always talk to him. Peach finally opens up to Mario that she's sad. Sad for explaining her origins as she's unsure where she came from. Her eyes begin to water up as she says despite not knowing where she really came from or who her parents are, she's really happy the Toads found her and raised her as she doesn't know where she'd be if they were never there for her now. Mario pats Peach on the shoulder. Suddenly, an idea pops in the plummer's head and says to Peach that after they defeat this Bowser guy, Mario can show Peach Brooklyn and what it's like living there. Peach chuckles and says that's not a bad idea and that she wouldn't mind taking a sabbatical from being a ruler. Mario promises Peach that they know they can win as long as they don't back down. And the Pitch ends with Mario and Peach and even Toad having an endearing bond with each other.
Aww. That’s very sweet. I could see Toad being outcasted as the weird one for his hyperactive personality. That’s something I feel all the time, especially as a teenager in high school. And the fact you wrote this as a type of bonding moment, where they all let out their problems and have them resolved as friends to understand each other more makes it even better. You did wonderful.
@@asherrudick3912 I felt the Fire Flower Field scene we got was way too short. With how fast the movie's pacing was, I thought that scene would've been the perfect moment for the movie to take a breath. Thank you very much.💙
This should've been my favorite scenes of all time but i would like to add some, toad is kinda relatable to me because making friends is hard one thing i like to add that he doesn't have any friends with toads that usually doesn't care about him which it makes it hard for him, and we see slowly develop to each character to get know each other easily to things like peach asking mario Brooklyn safe to go out? Because peach doesn't know where shes comes from and doesn't know is it safe or she cant remember anything, we cut to mario and see him kinda feels bad for them how toad doesn't have any friends and peach can't remember where she cames from, after mario tells peach its safe out in Brooklyn and he can show her around after defeats bowser which is also gives peach an idea she include celebrate for cake just like mario 64 ending to give them feel special for them and feel very rewarded after completing the game, which gives mario and toad feels really happy to each other and they are sure they are gonna save luigi and defeating bowser Few things i like to add is instead of a normal tree theres a acorn tree from super mario bros u and the sky could use a star reference like the stars from n64 paper mario or a rosalina lumas star shaped or even heck, add a star shaped from any character icons in that scene like solving a big dipper, but anyway thats a great expanded scene idea!
This version is incredibly interesting and compelling. I was writing something fun around this movie but your version is much more enjoyable so I think I'll use this version as my setting instead. Thanks for the inspiration!
25:40 I think the slow-mo interaction between Mario and Peach in the movie was great. It's the first sign we have that she can actually fight for herself and it's a fun subversion of the "slow-mo smitten" segment we've seen so many times. Plus it's funny how she easily takes Mario down. Mario's love interest for Peach has always mostly kept to a minimum, and I can see how and if they get to be together at the end of a trilogy it would be slowly knowing each other instead of a "love at first sight" scenario; it would be a nice buildup and there would be plenty of room of why they should and could be together instead of just because they're the main characters. 34:40 I always thought of that scene of how Luigi felt so powerless and that he couldn't do anything by himself; Mario always had to be there for him because he was too weak. It's something he grew out of when he blocked Bowser's fire breath at the end but it's the bare minimum of a payoff, just like the "you never give up" thing. 37:55 I think their "intelligence" are the Cheep Cheep; when Mario first entered the Mushroom Kingdom, a Toad is carrying a plastic bag with some water and a Cheep Cheep inside. When it looks at Mario, it looks at him with suspition. Also, the Cheep Cheep that stuck on Mario's face made it clear that they know Mario's on an adventure with Peach. 38:50 Mario can add to that and say how they are plumbers from Brooklyn, Toad asks "what's a plumber?" and Toad later replies "Does that mean you can build warp pipes?". Mario says he doesn't know how they work; Peach responds with "they can't be too different right?"; this is Mario's first idea of actually living in the Mushroom Kingdom and building warp pipes. 40:40 Sequel bait. No doubt in my mind. I'd love it if Mario tells Peach about how much he loves his brother, and her asking how having a brother must feel like. The payoff of this could have been that they'd introduce Daisy in the sequel, and having a sisterly bond with her. 49:15 Not only that, but apparently the Super Star theme from the movie's climax was originally going to be replaced with Van Halen's "Jump". The composer fought with tooth and nail so that they kept it with the original composition made for it and I'm so glad that he at least got to salvage that scene. That was one of the movie's highlights. 56:05 Also, Funky Kong got Toadsworth'd in this movie. He could have been the engineer who designed all those karts. 59:30 This part could also have a father-daughter moment between Toadsworth and Peach. Peach telling him she doesn't know what to do anymore. Toadsworth says "the same thing Master Mario has done till the end; not giving up". Peach looks out the windows and sees Bowser's ship coming close, understanding what she has to do; she asks him to lead the Toads if she doesn't make it. Toadsworth says "my child. I've been proud of you since you arrived; ever since I carried you in my arms I knew you were going to be the bravest and noble out of all of us. I know you'll return to your people." He gives her his final blessing and leads the Toads out of the castle. Peach is now fully determined, picks up the axe and goes to fight Bowser. 1:01:28 My guess is that they had material for a 120-minute movie but Illumination insisted on around 90-minutes. They had to cut corners and many things were left unresolved. 1:06:50 Mmh... this one I disagree a bit; haivng Dory around is just as unlikely (or even less so) than DK knowing how to drive the rocket barrel. Since it's also a reference to Donkey Kong Country Returns. 1:12:35 I know how: by doing a callback to Mario's training montage. He visualizes the enemies as the props he avoided and doing all the cool stunts he did to (almost) finish the training level. 1:17:30 I think they're not concerned because time works differently between Brooklyn and the Mushroom Kingdom, time relativity and stuff. This could have been clearer if her mom yells "Mario! Luigi! Breakfast's ready"; as they're confused because they're not coming to join them, their dad says "Maybe they went early" to further established that most of the movie happened overnight for Brooklyn, but it was several days-weeks in the Mushroom Kingdom. This will also be handy when and if they bring Rosalina to a second or third Mario movie; she's said to be near a thousand years old but doesn't look older than twenty. I'm sure i'm basing this on a Game Theory video but it works in this context.
To be fair to the movie(‘s Latin American Spanish dub!), when Bowser takes the star, he states “Now I’m invincible!”, which gives the impression that this is indeed a Super Star, and not a Power Star. Amazing rewrite, as always!
If there’s one thing i WISH they had done during the original film, it would be to have the final fight against bowser use bros attacks from the alphadream games, maybe something like them using bounce or swing bros to show their unorthodox fighting style, it was a majorly missed opportunity to not implement anything from the alphadream series
This was an amazing rewrite. You were able to set up a number of elements that you could see where pieces of the finale were coming together. I genuinely wish this was the version of the movie we got.
there is so much effort and love put into this rewrite, man. each rewritten scene/dialogue is so well put together and it really fits. this video deserves much more attention.
This video pretty much sums up my opinions on this movie. I remember leaving the theater feeling entertained, but it just felt like stuff happening without much substance. I’m glad there’s a video that addresses this and offers an alternative to improve on it
I think a better use/role for Toad was for him to initinally be rejected by Peach, treated as a joke castaway that just couldn't be gotten rid of. This would make the moments where he stays with and helps Peach during the evacuation even stronger, mirroring the same determination as Mario. Other than that, this is fantastic. After watching the original movie, I was kind of in denial about it, telling myself that it was good, but I couldn't help but think it could've been so much more. You delivered perfectly, fixing basically every flaw from the original, while also making it an even truer Mario Movie than the supposed "safe adaptation". It's sad in a way, because I can't accept the fact that this isn't a real thing after watching this video, because it would've been my favourite movie of all time if it were.
That's for sure. I mean he literally solved most of the plot holes in the OG movie, And in a podcast no less. illumination better live up to their name or else they become like Blue Sky Studios.
Whoa! I just imagined the whole movie in my head! I WANT IT NOW
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When it comes to the portrayal of Bowser, one thing I like from the RPGs that I did not really see in the movie or this rewrite is that Bowser is not really abusive to his minions. The minions are loyal to him out of genuine admiration, rather than just fear.
Absolutley love this rewrite! You definitley helped refine the movie and balance the spectical of it as well as the story and character moments, great job Charriii!! I can't wait to see what other videogames/movies you rewrite in the future!!
This rewrite is fantastic, I wish this is what we got! It would’ve satisfied hardcore fans while also still being a movie with a well written story. It sucks that we’re just stuck forever with what we got knowing how much better it could’ve been.
Yeah, me too. Wish the movie was like this and people would have like it better. At least, we have something that can satisfied the fans but not for the audiences sadly. But great rewrite due.
You pretty much fixed the entire movie with this rewrite. It’s actually really impressive. If this had been the movie, I would have enjoyed it that much more. Especially with Peach. Peach has been capable in the games plenty of times, but I feel like the movie mishandled and misunderstood her, both in personality and capabilities. She was capable in the games, but never borderline unstoppable. You basically hit the nail on the head: She’s too perfect, something that the Mario Movie’s interviews reveal was very much intended unfortunately. Your rewrite fixes just enough about her to make me like the movie version more. And giving Luigi more to do was awesome.
I agree that Peach's flaw is that she may seem too proud of her capabilities but even then in the movie she does also want to ask for help - making her competent but still needs help OR keep being hypercompetent but arrogant and later peg her down a bit.
She's not even too perfect at all, did you watch the movie? She was forced to surrender ffs. This overton window of how capable women in media are allowed to be is still so far right it's sad. 😂
@@yungmuney5903 She surrendered willingly rather than by actually being defeated, and then oop! Turns out she had a back-up plan that allowed her to defeat everyone at the wedding, rather than actually be in a situation where she needs to be bailed out for once. You conveniently left that detail out.
@@railroader2431 fuckboy. Watch the movie again. There's even a youtube video of her meeting Bowser, tell me what actually happened in there. It's not like a Toad was being CURSHED ALIVE RIGHT NEXT TO HER OR ANYTHING. Don't worry, I'll fact check.
15:23 I think the reason why its Kid Icarus is because the game over screen "Im Finished!" Is supposed to be a visual representation on how Mario feels about his plumbing business and he fears that it will fail which is why Mario is seen through the reflection of the tv sceen.
Yeah, this rewrite was a lot better than I though! This was an amazing retold-story and I like the Power Stars making a major role and even acquiring the Dinosaur Island’s Power (star as reliable as they can be Go Team Yoshi!) but also bringing in some cameos like Toadstool and Professor E. Gadd in the story. Making Luigi do more is a lot better than what we got in the original. Not saying he was useless but just him being more involved with Mario is so good because they’re BROTHERS! And yes I’m super happy that Yoshi will be in the sequel and I am all ready for it!
This was AMAZING! So many scenes where I got goosebumps, exlaiming "Oh my god!" only by your narration and sketches. Love the drawings. You established and revealed so many details that were simply missing from the original film. Hopefully Nintendo and Illumination go this route for the next movie, exploring the characters more, and Luigi simply NEEDS more screen time.
All that being said, I liked it! And I think your rewrites made a lot of sense. Sometimes watching these videos is more fun for me than Hollywood movies anymore, (And THANK YOU for the comment about Peach; not every female character HAS to be a "girl boss". They can be at least a LITTLE vulnerable.) Great job! =)
I mean…. Princess Peach does have a weakness in this movie, it’s that she cares way too much about wanting to save her people. And before you claim that it’s not an actual weakness, it can actually be a weakness to an extent. Like someone you really care about gets kidnapped or is in trouble, and you want to save them, even though there is a likely chance you won’t survive or it is a trap. Heck, Empire Strikes Back shows the cons about caring way too much, as the main protagonist later gets his hand chopped off.
@@UltimateDespairado I didn't say she was completely without a weakness. I just I agree with the host that she and other such characters could use a bit more emotional vulnerability. (the first 'Wonder Woman' movie and 'The 5th Element' are perfect examples) You're not wrong, I just think you misunderstood my point. =)
Exactly. Look no further than other princesses that are strong in their own right, like Snow White ( animated), Sheeta ( Castle in the Sky), Sailor Moon, and Wonder Woman.
This was so awesome!!! You adressed basically all the issues I had with the flim myself and made them better. I remeber while watching the movie I was really hoping that since Peach commented on how brave Toad is it woudl lead to him becoming "captain" and therefore making him our Captian Toad. And while that didn't happen in this rewrite I understand why - it's hard to force Toad into scenes. I didn't think much on Toadsworth not being in this movie at first but now that you mention it I agree!! It is werid he wasn't here! This rewrite is amazing - I love how you took what the movie sort of layed out but never fully went through with or just kinda left there and gave it reason - or if it had no purpose, to actually remove it. I had never actually heard the orginally music made for the Kart scene and it's so good!! Honestly mad that that wasn't kept in the movie but thank you for telling me about it. Great job!! I'm super excited for any future rewrites!!
I feel like a sub-plot with Luigi trying to escape with the other prisoners would've been really funny and better to add than some of the filler scenes. Maybe after Peach and Toad are taken in there could be a scene of Luigi freeing Toad who grabs a Ice Flower from the penguins and goes to give it to Peach.
I gotta say, I loved every second of this rewrite! I think that you did a great job keeping what made the movie so enjoyable, while also adding a coherent story and narrative! I also wanna point out that the length of this video is almost exactly the same as the Mario movie’s runtime only being 14 seconds apart! I find that to be pretty cool.
Your rewritten version of the movie is much better than the real story, it kind of makes sense that it will follow the games stories. It also does give the super show vibe when the brothers get sucked into the tube into the fantasy world.
I was actually hoping for a Luigi’s Mansion scene in the original movie and was a little disappointed that it didn’t happen, and Luigi definitely deserved more screen time. I also love the idea of Toad being more relevant to the story
Funny enough, Toadsworth was in the concept art. There is concept art of Mario in what seems to be like a powerup room similar to galaxy 2. In this room, Mario is checking out a fire flower (which there is also concept art of Fire Mario) and behind him are Peach and Toadsworth.
Yeah, i mean, they have been getting a LITTLE better at video game adaptations in the last couple of years, but even so, they've still got a LOT to learn when doing this sort of stuff. Or at least, i hope they'll learn...
@@worthybutter2004 Yeah, I hope they learn to ACTUALLY make it like the original source material. Plus, It's weird that the Fans are making Video game Adaptions Way better than Hollywood themselves. I mean, the fans should get hired and Direct a better Film than the Studios changing it for no reason to make it not like the Game. The fans always gets it right. But Hollywood should always listen and Learn their lesson.
From a cynical marketing perspective, I completely understand why Mario and Luigi are separated. Nintendo and Illumination are testing audience reactions to Luigi on his own. A lot of it is based in psychology. In February 2022, Charlie Day expressed interest in Luigi's Mansion after watching his son play it. Fast forward to March 2023 when the promotional material for the movie is in full swing. Day is now not only in favour of a Luigi movie but Chris Pratt talks about a "Nintendo Cinematic Universe" and specifically mentions Luigi's Mansion. Every review under the sun has complained about Luigi's screen time. Miyamoto and Meledandri are reading every single one and quoting the Hulk: "I see this as an absolute win". Couple that with videos, tweets, articles, comments, etc of how they're teasing Luigi's Mansion and there you go. People don't just want Mario and Luigi to go on an actual adventure together in the inevitable sequel. They want Luigi to have his own movie.
I know that others have said this, but your re-writes are incredible, and the detail and thoughtfulness you put into them is astounding. Keep doing what you're doing, this is amazing! :D I also agree that it is UNBELIEVABLE that Toadsworth got shafted from this movie
Yet another Fan Rewrite being better than the Original, Great Work with the Writing and the Illustrations were a Great Addition, Bravo to you Charriii5. You're a Super Star!
I think it woulda been fantastic if Peach baked a cake for Mario and Luigi at the end, and you heard "Thank you so much for watching my movie!" from charles Martinet
I think there should have been a third sequence of Kamek informing Bowser Jr of his father's defeat and the young prince intending revenge decides to call for his cousins the koopalings.
I love the addition of the wrap up at the end especially, and I can just imagine Lumalee being the last person the bros say hello to, only to be met with a "You only delayed the inevitable :D" as they warp through the pipe
Honestly, theres so much things I would want to say about how good this rewriting is! But I really don't want to build a text wall here 😅 So I'm only gonna said what affected me the most, and that is how you managed to no only improve but CREATE an actual plot to Luigi. The character development and he's on "side story" with proper elements and characters, and of course, the idea of E Gadd being he's guide and support character is truly be awesome!
This rewrite was a better version of the Mario Movie that I didn't even know I needed! I couldn't help but notice, throughout the entire movie, that Luigi didn't get enough characterization and it was super disappointing. Along with some things not making sense or escalating too quickly. ESPECIALLY when Peach crashed the wedding as if all the circumstances just went poof. This more brotherly ending that you made made my cry. So good.
I love how it's unanimously agreed that Luigi needed more screentime.
And that the pacing of the story was not good and the 80's pop songs were completely unneeded.
Honestly, one of the BEST things in the movie was just how well Mario and Luigi connected as brothers: and it just feels like a shame that they we DON'T see that more then we do.
@@jwrootI honestly toned out all the pop songs except "I need a hero" cause it was so unbelievably bland and generic to put there.
i think those songs were for older audiences, i was fine with em
@@macmadness5932 Older audiences would have probably preferred songs that matched Mario Bros instead of songs that sounded like they were chosen from focus groups.
I mean, as a friend of mine put it, they COULD have used “Superstar” as a pop song. It was RIGHT THERE. And it’s particularly less generic and more related to Mario Bros than “I need a hero”.
I've seen that bit before, but the delivery of "Is that a frog suit?"
"I won't tell anyone how I saved you if you don't tell about the suit."
"DEAL!"
actually got me.
Same here
Same
I love the idea of giving Luigi more to do, the addition of the Sand Land scene, and Bowser being made even more menacing. I still think the movie is great as it is, but I think this script would have made it fantastic.
I agree but tbh the film was really cool and so fun !
@@IdentifiantE.SYeah, all things considered I was really impressed with the whole movie.
@@NinjaPhooka Same 😄
Still love The Mario Movie, But the Rewrite of the Movie makes it even more perfect. ❤
No this rewrite doesn’t work and bowser was already more menacing. He doesn’t need to be more
Toadsworth being Peach's parent through her childhood years is SO GOOD. The story is writing itself here!
I hate the fact Nintendo got rid of him because I personally believe that it would have given us an idea of how the Toad's life cycle goes. For example, When an old Toad dies they bring new life to newborn Toads after being buried in the ground for some time. Sure, we can keep the fact that the Toads can live longer than humans but don't make them immortal.
Also, during the beginning of this rewrite, the Mario Bros. were doing a good job of doing what they do best and I think that Foreman Spike was secretly sabotaging their hard work. And he was the one who cut the fuel line of the Mario Bros' Van when he overheard them when they got the job to help Mayor Pauline's plumbing problem.
That's for sure. But as always we got to let the lady teach herself and not not have a male figure. But vise versa is fine.
Rip toads worth 😢
Speaking of Toadsworth, I believe *Jim Cummings* would have been a great choice to voice him, even for a small role.
Yep. Universal and Nintendo missed a golden opportunity with this storyline. I mean I get that Peach is a girl boss, but even she needed help at some point.
I have one thing to say. Well, two, but it still gets the point across.
1. Amazingly well-done rewrite, Charii.
2. We need a Luigi's Mansion movie.
I THINK they already confirmed or at least mentioned one.
HOPEFULLY, the sequal expands upon it more, i understand its hard for the animators to fit everything they wanted to see in there.
OMG yes. I have this headcanon-ish opening where Bowser is raging in his castle about not marrying Peach when a portal opens and King Boo floats out, him and Bowser have a debate on who's the better villain, then we get introduced to KIng Boo's main weapon: the Painting which he slams down on Bowser and traps him (at this point Bowser is still small and in a jar) then goes to take the Dark Moon.
Absolutely!
And a dk movie
Wow. If this rewrite was in the Super Mario Bros Movie, this could've been and with no exaggeration the BEST Illumination film ever.
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That's for sure. I mean I like Despicable Me, but it's nowhere near as good as classic Disney, Pixar, Don Bluth, and even DreamWorks animation. Illumination is more about marketing and promoting merchandise than story, plot, and character.
Isn’t it already the best illumination movie ever😎
@@TylerBurke-fb2pb imo despicable me is a bit better but this is a close second
@@CapitanJorge24 gotta hard disagree with ya there mate
As much as I love this movie, I do wish it went on for a little longer than 90 minutes, even an extra 10 would’ve given the narrative more significant depth which you excellently provided.
Right there with you
Yeah, I think it’s funny that the Mario Movie is 92 minutes and 17 seconds, just barely shorter than this video. Bro basically just made another Mario Movie.
I also loved the Mario movie, but this was a great re-write and wish the original was just a little longer as well!
Most animated kids films are traditionally an hour and 20 minutes, both The SpongeBob SquarePants 2005 and Simpsons Movie are an hour and 20 minutes so why should Mario be longer? Only Sonic 2 was 2 hours even THEN just by a couple minutes extra lmfao
I agree. The movie definitely should've been a bit longer. At least 2 hours.
A few things I would like add is:
1. The Rainbow road shortcut could've been created by the Power Star.
2. I would've LOVED it if Luigi says something like, "You need a Player 2?" or, "Need a Co-op Partner?" when he's saving Mario, because it really adds the feeling of when you play the games and your friend, or most likely your brother/family member, joins in and helps you out.
3. After Mario & Luigi defeat Bowser, all the 7 power stars show up again, and Toadsworth returns them back to their kingdoms.
2nd feels a bit cringe idk.
it could be better if, when luigi storms off to play kid icarus in the first act, and mario shows up to comfort him, he says 'need a player two' or smth. then it would be a callback.
@@Cyclone3603 Yeah, that's much better. It's cheesy, but it's the good kind of cheese.
I WANNA SEE A REANIMATED COLLAB WITH THIS STORY IT WAS SOOO GOOOD❤❤❤
This was a great video Chariii5, I absolutely loved the new story, you and the illustrators did a fantastic job on this
MAKE IT HAPPEN
Plsssss
Let me write the script
Yea Yes Pls
Omg yes please
Rewritten Bowser: "A stupid red hat"
Cappy: Ok time to die
It's cool to see you tackle a story with this kind of broad appeal approach. Your passion comes through as always, the amount of drawings you had to do man.
Maybe when Bowser's knocked back by the chest he rolls over cause of his shell and lands on his stomach?
Love you, Greg. ❤
I just wish Bowser didn't have back spikes so we could have him on his back like the silly little turtle he is.
@@Charriii5 ... Wouldn't the spikes be another reason for Bowser to get stuck?
@@Charriii5Hey, Charriii! If you want some additional ideas for little edits, I'm happy to share!
▪︎First off, as a little aesthetic change, let's have the Snow Kingdom co-inhabited by both Penguins and Shiverians. Hey, it's not my fault I'm an Odyssey fanboy.
▪︎Let's also make the travel montage a little more fleshed-out. We could see the trio buying a sombrero or riding Jaxis in Tostarena, blasting out of the cannons or being dragged around on the end of a Chomp chain on the Battlefield, finding out Toad has a Fuzzy on his head in the Rock-Candy Mountains, or my personal favourite, Mario getting eaten by a Yoshi and referencing one of his most iconic lines from the Super Mario World TV Show - "Now I know how a meatball feels!"
▪︎During the scene in the Fire Flower Fields, we can touch upon the Mario-Toad dynamic with Mario talking to Toad about how sometimes he feels insignificant in his world, with Toad replying that he secretly feels the same way. Peach isn't just the Kingdom's princess, she's their idol too - strong, tactical, and capable of putting up a fight, whereas the Toads are small, frail and mostly quite cowardly. Then, we can have Mario say that Toad is contradicting his heroic actions back in the temple, saying that size is just a bunch of numbers. Later, instead of Toad being held captive at the wedding, he might be allowed to go free with the others, and that's where he motivates his associates into crashing the wedding and taking back their princess, their idol, and their hero! You said you wanted more Toad in the flick? Mail call for one Mister Charriii?
▪︎Another aesthetic alteration here - you've got seven stars. Why not make them all different colours like in the RPG of the same name?
▪︎A little idea for the credits - have Mario and Luigi take a tour of the Mushroom Dimension meeting Peach, Toad, DK, E-Gadd and Dorrie along the way. As the credits roll, we see the heroes platform through the environments of the different Kingdoms akin to in the 2D Mario games, before they re-emerge in Brooklyn to attend a festival in their honour. After all, as amazing a song as Peaches was, it must be a bit lonely being the only fully lyrical Mario song in the movie, so squeezing Jump Up in there at the very end would be a super welcome treat.
@@Charriii5Maybe his back spikes could break, like when you stun him in the first Galaxy game?
@Charriii5 well, in some of the games, his spikes are retractable, so it wouldn't be weird
I firmly believe that Nintendo held Illumination at *gunpoint* when they made the movie-
This was a really great rewrite that provided fixes to a lot of the problems some people had with the movie. You really have a knack for creating cohesive stories and put a lot of effort into this.
You know, this movie could've been 2 hours long if the team behind the movie would've put more time into it.
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@@Jadinite-2006Like doesn't Spider-Man Spiderverse movies at least are 140 minute movies, I'm sure kids would still be entertained at that length.
@@zjzr08 Eh true, I can be wrong at times and that's okay
That's for sure. I mean he plugged up the majority of the plot holes that the original film had and made an actual story both interesting and entertaining.
So glad I got the chance to watch the Mario Bros. Movie, but DAMN this is even better
I do agree that Luigi should be the one storming off and Mario being nice, as fans typically tend to make Mario look like a bad brother when in reality he actually cares.
Edit- Also, I feel like Mario should have TOTALLY used more than the Tanooki Leaf and Cat Bell. The Fire Flower is his most iconic form, and even the Propeller Suit or Boomerang Flower would have totally worked. Maybe Mario steals a Koopa’s shell and spins around in it like the Blue Shell.
And I agreed it shows how Mario is caring he is and I also so wish they did more with Luigi instead of cutting him out 90% of the movie.
Y'know, for all the accusations that Chris Pratt gets about supposedly "never playing a Mario game once in his entire life", he sure as hell knows that Mario is a good brother to Luigi more than a lot of supposed "loyal Mario fans" do...
@@Goomba1309 Hell even I do know that and I'm a SONIC FAN
@@Goomba1309I don’t think he wrote the movie.
@@tonyhakston536what's funny is that I really don't think that matters whatsoever
I kind of wished that Peach still said that Mario is not important when they left because when she and Toad returns to The Mushroom Kingdom and announces that Mario didn’t make it one of the many toads could reply “Who’s Mario?” Making Peach really see how much she took Mario for granted.
I don't understand why, but for some reason, I always feel way more fear in fearful moments in fan works than in the actual work, probably because they're a lot more unpredictable.
I loved this. I did enjoy the movie for the same reason as everyone else, the Mario celebration, but the more fleshed out story arcs of the brothers would've made me love it.
I agree with you
That's an interesting point. I also feel that sometimes. For this in particular, I'd point out 1:16:55, Charriii's narroration along with the art of the characters relief turning to fear and especially the use of the pipe sound, somehow make it kinda creepy as it starts up slow but gradually builds pace all came togetger to make me feel really tense.
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Fans don't have the problem of working within a budget (mostly), they can make their stories as wild and fantastical as they want, but they also know how to properly respect the source material and characters.
@@julianemery718 that it’s true 👍
As a two-time theater-watcher of the Super Mario Bros. Movie and as an unashamed Mario stan, I LOVED this rewrite--you took what was already pretty damn great and made it EVEN BETTER. 10/10, I wanna see you fan pre-write the sequel already mate.
The rewrite is amazing. The Luigi part makes a good plot for a sequel of what happened to Luigi during Mario’s journey to save him
"If you're gonna stomp a Turty in Act 3, you need to show a Turt in Act 1. It's science bro. Perchance"
-Sun Tsu
After watching this I'm a little sad that this wasn't the end product we got, because just like with your Forces rewrite, you found a way to dissect nearly every detail of the story and found a way to either improve on what a specific scene was trying to accomplish or change it into something new entirely. I've really been loving these types of videos and can't wait for the next one!
Super late to this and I apologize for that. With that said, I enjoyed your take on it. Especially since they really didn't give Luigi much to work with. Glad to hear your take on this.
Why does this only have 3 likes!?!?!?
I honestly love this rewrite, even as someone who liked the original as little more than just a fun movie to turn your brain off to
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This change alone makes me infinitely more endeared to the movie and Princess Peach as her character was presented here.
I didn't mind Princess peach being good at the obstacle course, especially, like you mentioned, with the added reality she was raised here. But it felt needlessly...idk...for lack of a better way to put it.... or uh... I'll just say, It felt like a weird add on to say she got it on her first try. Really...dehumanized her in a way and made her less relatable.
Such a simple change to it like you did of saying she had pleny of time to get it does so much in my opinion
God forbid women having talent that isn't stereotypical lmao
While I'm fine with the Princess being a girl boss. But when she wins all the time against her opponents and finishes the obstacle on her first try, that turns her into a Mary Sue.
F all that. It turns her into an opportunist. My main gripe about her characterization is that she neither had an export to represent her kingship, nor did she have her own flag so to speak
For all the wizardry and magic, she still has to rely on manpower. And the movie insults your intelligence by craftily replacing it with kong power. Like what's all that about?
Imploring other nations "he'll come for you too" while it's clearly you Bowser wants. Like the guy doesn't even want her assets or her home. He wanted their itemship which is a you problem
Matter of fact, it's a problem known to man which is older than dirt. Women trying to convince us that their safety is above all without actually indicating what makes them essential. And before this becomes an Andrew Tate sermon, I'd like to mention there are a lot of things women have to offer to be valuable. My problem is that both real women and Peach, seldom elect themselves for show and tell. If you can't even be bothered to play a role, you don't deserve to be the main character
And it comes full circle. THIS peach _can_ skip to the loo, but tells Mario that the fate of the world is his burden. See, it wouldn't matter if she were a queen of a bunch of mushrooms or the queen of the ashes, she doesn't identify with her own humanity, so she can be whatever the situation calls her to be- a damsel in distress or a girl boss
You put the pieces together and the symbolism is plain as day. A dragon comes in to court the woman not expecting for one second to be spurned. And why should he? Her identity is as amorphous as anything you could orient with magic
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Yeah there are moments in the movie where Peach is a little *too* good at everything. And I can't help but notice that half of the finale carefully adheres to the golden rules in Modern Hollywood Writing: "No woman should ever make mistakes nor be saved by a man." Which is *ignorant* to begin with. Just because a female character is labeled "damsel in distress" doesn't automatically make her helpless, if written skillfully.
However, we can be thankful that at least Peach doesn't taught, belittle and overshadow the main protagonist of movie, as she actually helps and supports Mario through his journey. And she's a pretty likeable character all to herself. (Unlike other certain girl bosses)
They completely butchered her character in this movie. In the games, she is kind, caring, and helpful, but she will beat the crap out of you if you upset her, however she isn’t stronger than Bowser. In this movie, she is just a strong, and independent girlboss who is stronger than everyone.
I personally don’t have much of a problem with the story we got, but regardless I would’ve loved the movie even more if we got this, hope we get more rewrite videos cause this and the Forces one were so good
it REALLY sucks that a lot of people ignore the storys glaring flaws simply because of all the references and because its "mario". a video game movie NEEDS a competent narrative. i could care lesss about "oh look its the thing" the fact that a story that incomplete got over a BILLION FREAKING DOLLARS kind of pisses me off.
I agree 👍
@@slimgrim3607it's not that deep. It is a MARIO movie. It doesn't need a deep narrative to work. Especially if it's meant for children and adults just trying to watch a fun movie. How is the story incompent anyways? It works just fine.
@@islesofforeignrails7917 spoilers (jk lol)
But I can see you're point. But it doesn't need a narrative to work
@@islesofforeignrails7917because the movie does what it needs to. Entertains. You think people watch action movies for the story? Not every movie has to be story oriented.
I’d add another change to the Mario vs DK fight: have Mario learn to be less reliant on power ups to be a hero and think more on whit and strategy. I’d have Mario even pick up a hammer and smash DK’s barrels being hurled at him like in the classic game. I’d even have the way DK gets taken down be exactly how the arcade game plays out, by removing the beam supports and have DK tumbling down to the bottom of the arena KOed. It’s not only a great reference but a great way for Mario’s character to build beyond going auto-pilot whenever he powers up.
Great! I'd also add a cinematic rendition of the classic DK theme during the fight, too!
I was thinking the same thing the whole time.
Well, I think that Mario would throw the hammer at Donkey Kong, like in the Pixel movie. It's pretty cool, right?
I can't barely stand for how SUPER GENIUS you are explaining about the Brooklyn Flood Accident which is the snow kingdom melted by Bowser to getting the Super Star/Power Star
at 26:36
That is the point not only explained why the city is flooded which directly back to the most beginning scene, and also explained the motive why Mario Bros. come here at the beginning, and also give Mario a more serious motive to defeat Bowser instead of just saving Luigi and help them because justice, even better explained both world are connected more closely
and make them linked together and make all the sense!
This is the first time I see and knowing about the REWRITTEN video, but it already amazed me for how make the movie even better than I know, Thank you
Although I glad to see if the movie is extended, it will might make a 3 hour-long movie if the story is possible flowXD
I think we only miss the chance to show Princess Daisy, who also had a kingdom and although not story-wise important (Pauline is still important since Daisy only show in Super Mario Land, that barely people known about it) but still nice to add into the Sand Kingdom, unless we need clarify that Sarasaland is not the Sand Kingdom where Mario and Captain Koopa fought, and they didn't had the Power Star
since people love calling that Sand Kingdom showed in the council are reference of Sarasaland, while Mario and the gang travel to another Sand Kingdom in Odyssey, which named Tostarena because the inverted pyramid, I really hope both kingdom can merge together since they really just huge desert and better known as "Kingdom" but with no royalty
At 50:25, I think the Cranky Kong's purpose is fine, but in REWRITEEN version it make another little confusion, since they ask both Power Star and Donkey Kong's aid, but if Cranky Kong really think they should take both of them only if they can fight his son, doesn't mean they only can just need Power Star since they able to fight Donkey Kong?
I know this is the joke for Cranky Kong and all the Kongs believing nothing can fight Donkey Kong that easily and just a excuse to let them leave so they no need included in these mess
Since in the Original Movie, Cranky Kong taunt Mario by saying hope this fight not ended in 5 seconds and give Power-Up for Mario‘s advantages，I think is better if Cranky Kong let them survival in the fight like 5 min，but Mario surprised everyone by beating Donkey Kong so hard（maybe less damage from the movie，but still win） at the end of the fight，already burst the limitations of the Kongs’ imagination.
For Cranky Kong's dialogue in 52:34, I prefer changing to "He think he want grow bigger, but he is still too SMALL to GROW" from "I guess he picked up the wrong mushroom"
yeah, this is the third time calling Mario small just few minutes ago, and maybe my lines isn't good enough, but I still hope it can make the jokeXD
THIS. THIS RIGHT HERE!!! Loved this rewrite so so much. I wish we got this version in theaters. Just some slight tweaks and a few bigger ones could’ve turned this from a fun throwaway film into something with more substance. Also those drawings and the editing in general was phenomenal. Great work.
Fun Fact: Toadsworth and Toadette was cut from the film. Most likely saving their appearance for the sequel. Toadette was teased on a poster in the background.
Why for some reason, do I picture Kristen Schirtz (voice of Mabel), as Toadette?!!
More because the movie had to follow Nintendo mandates of not including any unique looking Toads.
@@jlev1028 cough cough Paper Mario : Sticker Star cough cough
@@jlev1028there’s Mario mandates?
@@NickMario1true 👍
I can’t express enough how much I love this, the way you made things tie together, and line up with each other is actually insane, with Luigi playing a much bigger role an adding to the story is just too good. Absolutely amazing job to you, and everyone who helped you with it!!!
I love these rewrite vids. The care and effort you put into extending scenes that needed a little extra love, the creative changes, the art, the voice acting, the pacing. Its all so good and I really love the changes you've drafted out. My biggest issue was definitely that, while I liked the movie, the pacing was pretty rushed. Yeah its a kids movie, and this seems to be more for the spectacle than say the Sonic movies were, but that doesn't mean it needs to just be all pretty visuals and "look remember this reference?!". It felt lacking, I like it but it still felt that way. But I love your changes, I love the extra focus on Luigi who I agree was very underutilized in the actual film, I love the way you slow things down a little more so that the smaller moments have time to shine. I hope that, should a second movie get announced in the future, they take more time to develop the rest of the cast and give it the same sort of care and attention you laid out here.
Also dude, I love how far your voice acting and art has come. Your range is great, your impressions are pretty spot on. I love that you've been getting more dynamic and confident in your art skills as well. Its been fun watching you grow and change and improve as a content creator and I'm excited to keep watching your growth as time goes on. You're a rockstar as always Charriii, keep up the good work!
Nice comment Kira where is your death note ? 🤔
Nope the pacing wasn’t rushed and no scene needed extra love, the art and the voice acting and the pacing in this rewrite sucks and it’s all not good
It does mean it needs to be pretty visuals and the story doesn’t need to be over complex. It doesn’t feel lacking
Luigi wasn’t underutilized and slowing things down doesn’t make it great and smaller moments shouldn’t have time to shine
No the cast is fine in the actual movie
Now this , THIS is exactly what I would want the movie to be. Not needing to be a masterpiece but at least trying make us care more about the characters and the world of Super Mario Bros. You managed to make me care about everyone and pick my interest in the rewrite than the movie ever could. I also give you credit for the reimagened drawings, the artstyle is adorable and they perfectly describe how the scenes would go. 👍
(Edit: I would only disagree with putting Egad to the film as I feel like the movie already has a huge cast and putting him would be a bit too much)
Man I would replace E. Gadd with Yoshi lmao
Yeah, I'd say the Luigi's Mansion side-plot was spooky cool, but it doesn't feel all that necessary at all in the grand scheme of things. Charriii5 should saved that part for a future spin-off film. He should've given Luigi an entire subplot dedicated to where he has to escape Bowser's ship while also learning to be brave.
Also, I would cast David Tennant as the voice od E. Gadd.
@@jwroot yeah you're right. The mansion sideplot would be a bit too much. With that said I still wish that Luigi had more screentime rather than doing nothing for the most part. I did found out that originaly they wanted to give him more scenes and be more active in the plot from the concept art but they decided to scrap it because acording to the executives children don't have the attention span longer then 90 minutes. That is the actual reason why the movie was so short. 😮💨
Absolutely agree!!
@@messyjoy899 Who cares if they have short attention spans, they'll just have to learn how to pay closer attention one way or other, anyway.
Man, this rewrite is amazing, I wish this was the movie we got.
Nah it fine
I agree! I definitely wish this was the version we could've got.
@@antonyproduction-1People like you are kinda the reason we’re getting these mediocre movies lol. Saying it was fine as it was when there are genuine criticisms towards the film just shows how much of a fan boy you are.
@@supetendo5106 I mean the movie that Illumination wrote is fine. It’s a great callback for Mario fans while being a fun movie for little kids. But I will admit that the movie is flawed in a few departments like the story and music. Why do we need 80’s pop music when we already got an instrumental version of the Mario ost. In the words of the giant coconut crab from Moana, I can’t concentrate, just pick one, pick one!!!
@@UltimateDespairado”giant coconut crab from Moana” TAMATOA BABY!
Spoilers to people who haven't watched yet
I got so invested into this video that i literally gasp in realization when i saw the chest shoot out of the poltergust at the end of the script, remembering the moment when the chest was sucked up earlier. Honestly this is an amazing rewrite and i do hope that someone in the future would turn this into an actual fan made movie 🙏
Samee
Nintendo would have two reactions, either DMCA that or replace the movie. The odds are 10 to 90.
I screamed into my pillow from that reveal. I was IN IT. 😂😂
Huh I saw that coming from the moment he pointed out the chest in the beginning and when he said set to blow I knew that this was the moment the last star would appear
Chekhov's gun and all that
You literally gasped?
This seems a lot better than the original, but I feel like you could’ve explained the power stars and what they do on their own more
True. I was waiting for a scene of Bowser harnessing the power of the stars he has for something. Maybe have him take over a part of Peach's castle or something when he's demanding her to marry him as a cute little callback to how that works in Mario 64. I don't know, just something to explain why the Power Stars are powerful or even necessary
@@HyLionoh true true.
As of now we just know power stars are “powerful” and “will make me unstoppable” not really why so that’s probably something that could be expanded on.
That's a very good point. But at least he made the story better.
Agreed, I love this rewrite and one of the few things it leaves me wondering is how to better explain the mcguffins. I like the change from 1 star to 7 for plot reasons but it feels weird that you need 7 to get what is just a superstar. Maybe they could be changed into silver stars and when Egadd explains to Luigi that he's looking for them he also explains that when 7 are gathered they combine to create a superstar, which would make its wielder unstoppable. Or maybe Peach explains that to Mario around the time he learns about powerups, whatever.
And that way once all 7 gather in the same place at the finale, it becomes just like in the original movie with a single super star instead of mario and luigi reaching for a bunch of stars.
Honestly, to leave the Star power up as is would work better for this story. The Star power up is the
19 minutes in and I already LOVEEE THIS OH MY GOSH
This feels like the movie I wanted the entire time. I can already tell how the pay off is just gonna feel THAT much more satisfying
OH. MY. GOD.
I was planning on checking out like 5-10 minutes of this nothing more. And I ended up watching this like it WAS the Mario movie.
This video is absolutely brilliant. I think it does the movie the justice it absolutely deserved, giving more of a focus on BOTH Mario and Luigi, Giving the blue shell more focus, and giving DK and Mario the perfect balance of friend and rivalry he deserved.
And that god damn pay off. I can’t believe this isn’t the version of the movie we got. I screamed (into my pillow) in excitement when the poltergeist came back in relevance by the very end, and the TV scene with both Mario and Luigi makes all the sense in the world.
Fantastic fantastic work. Like brilliant. I would watch *THIS* movie a million times over.
Man, this was a fun watch!
I love the stuff you added, cuz it's not a complete re-vitalized story, but rather adding some smaller scenes to add to the movie, to make the end product have more impact (besides the scene with the dog, I'm glad I'm not the only one who wasn't a fan of that scene lol).
The drawings and the voice over was super fun too.
Also, if I could add one thing to this that I think would be cool, is when Egad is explaining to Luigi that this haunted land was a Kingdom that Bowser took over, Egad could explain how it was originally Bowser's OWN Kingdom that he destroyed long ago, in search for power, and once he conquered it, he scooped a big chunk of the mountain to be the big ass airship we see in the movie.
But now that he's older, and we see how Bowser acts now, we can tell that he regrets those events, due to how lonely he is.
It could add an extra layer to Bowser, as to how he ended up like this (plus make him more threatening), and also explain why this kingdom looks the way it does: Dead trees, small lava pools, abandoned castles, Dry Bones and Boos. Admittedly, it does sound a little dark for Mario, but it made sense to me.
Yeeeeaaah but nah I disagree, if we get a rewrite, I think Bowser should care for his minions like he does in the games. And game Bowser would NEVER destroy his own kingdom and kill who knows how many of his own citizens. I want Bowser, not near pure evil turtle lol. Bowser's still pretty evil, but one of Bowser's recurring traits is that he cares for his troops, which wasn't shown in the movie.
I'd still keep him burning the Koopa into a dry bones scene tho because it was hilarious lol, and also because it's not really murder- I mean technically yeah it is, but the Koopa can still speak, think and etc just as fine as a dry bones so it's not so bad.
I agree this was a fun watch.
i think this movie suffers from what i like to call “first film syndrome” where in the first film of either a trilogy or anything bigger its meant to establish the world and the characters to both a general audience and its fans and thus suffers on other aspects. into the spiderverse and sonic the hedgehog 1 suffered from this as well where they’re establishing locations, characters and themes but when you look outside of that theres… little substance. but then they bounce back in the sequel where the chains are finally off and they’re able to truly show what they want to show and do what they want to do. the mario movie is currently going through that now and once the strike ends we’ll definitely see mario truly spread his wings and become something greater.
That’s… actually very good logic. I loved Sonic 2 more than the first film, simply because there was more. They did more with the characters and made a story that was well written, had memorable locations and references, and a wonderful cast to voice the characters.
These rewritten videos are more entertaining (and more time consuming, too) than most video essays. Excellent job as always, Charriii!
This sort of thing is how Spider-Verse can work without the sheer scale and insanity of everything becoming overwhelming, because you still follow the story of one or two characters with their specific needs and you see their arc all the way through from start to finish. It’s in a fantastical and insane world but the story is still about one guy with a simple dream.
Can I just say how great of a voice actor you are? I've been watching a lot of your Sonic Comic streams, and those along with this really show your versatility as a VA!
Great video, also! The Dorrie bit was probably my favorite, although personally I would go a bit more simplistic and just make Dorrie Engurde, great scene though.
Thanks so much, Nate!
charriii5, I know this will take long, but could you make a eww of sonic advance?
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Bro that E. Gadd voice was perfect 😭
24:57 Fun fact: Mario was originally intended to enter Peach's castle through a secret pipe system, according to concept art. Mario would've then traveled through the pipe and crash-landed straight on to the world map in the courtroom where Peach and the Toads are discussing Bowser's attack, including Toadsworth and Toadette.
This is way better than the actual movie. I still like the finished film we got as it is, but even when I first saw it, I always felt like there was a lot of things missing from it. And this rewrite scratches all those itches.
seeing these fan rewrites of popular franchises makes it clear to me that only fans can tell a franchise's story better than the actual big companies that own/produced them.
the way how charriii explains/references certain details like professor e. gadd assisting luigi or toadsworth being absent for the majority of the franchise clearly shows that he knows a lot of his super mario history.
All of this is a pretty perfect rewrite. Though Dorys inclusion should be set up a bit better as to make it in a sense a chekhovs gun situation. Maybe as Mario and DK are falling, DK gets snarky and falls very quickly towards the water knowing that the water will just break his fall like it does in the games so he can assess the situation once he surfaces. Have the perspective shift to Mario as he goes slightly into the water as DKs seen deeper into the water but deep enough to notice that once he stops falling and is starting to float, he's hit hard by a massive object that's barreling up to the surface to avoid something else. Mario barely gets out of the way to catch a breath at the surface as what pops up and goes airborne is Dory with DK on its snout and the morray eel right behind it, presumably trying to hunt it or defend the waters underneath bowsers castle for some reason. Then, after showing that there's still tension to be had, DK falls off relatively close to Mario and the Frog suit scene acts out as you described it. I think it makes it more rewarding to see that Mario has a reason to be afraid of this thing because he previously knew it was in the water, it also strengthens Mario's point that he and DK didn't think their idea of getting out of the morray through. I also think that having a little blue wooden dory in the waters of the map around the start would also be kinda cute since it would be subverting the audiances expectations that it's a barely talked about reference to Mario 64, 3D world, or Odyssey (I forget which one) and show that the refrence was a set up for their appearance.
Oooo I like that.
It gives time for Mario’s perspective to be emphasized without realizing he’s afraid of nothing, even though the audience might catch on a bit earlier and shows even more how unfamiliar he is with this world. ^^
An idea that I've had in my head for a new Super Mario Bros. movie before this one finally came out was for there to be an opening montage of Mario and Luigi trying out different jobs and failing until they become plumbers as a cute little nod to the various jobs they've taken in earlier games before officially becoming plumbers. I also always liked to interpret Mario Bros. as being a prologue to Super Mario Bros. as a kid where Mario and Luigi try to fix an unusual plumbing problem only to then be attacked by all these creatures until eventually deciding to go inside the pipes to see where they came from which transports them into the Mushroom Kingdom.
I loved the movie but it always felt like the movie was 10-20 minutes too short, and this rewrite fills in the blanks, tightens the narrative, and fleshes out the characters (especially giving Luigi a purpose in the story!)
Hopefully the inevitable sequel to the movie addresses the lack of substance and make something as effective as your rewrite.
Well done Charriii!!
Something I woulda changed about the Mario vs DK fight scene is having the audience chant “He’s bigger, faster, and stronger too! He’s the first member of the DK Crew!” Before he made his appearance, that would’ve amped up DK’s danger level to have an entire stadium of Kongs know a chant about how powerful he is, as well as an extra nod to the DK rap
i remember watching this movie in theaters on day one, and watching someone rewriting is just heartwarning to me
I really don't know how i can say how much i loved this rewrite, like this is what I would want from a Super Mario Bros. MOVIE, rather than just a bunch of while cool, references that all in all mostly lack substance
I was like completely hooked on this rewrite, like picturing it like damn that wouldve been 100x better, amazing job!
This rewrite is incredible! As much as I love the movie as it is, I wouldn't complain if this is how it turned out. Also, I love how you added Dorrie, Its nice seeing some representation on a lesser known Character.
32:03 Shigeru Miyamoto suggested that Mario doesn't like mushrooms as a joke.
37:09 - 37:15 I didn't even notice that.
Good job with the rewrite in general; I like how you gave Luigi more to do and provided a reason for the Bomber/Banzai Bill's eye to be attacked.
Keep at it Charriii5; I can see you having a future as a creative writer.
This is the way, he can definetly make it into the industry is he wishes to. These rewrites are really helping him sharpen his intellectual sword!
I'm really a fan of this movie but we can all agree that the story and narrative can improve
I really like the rewrite that you propose as it fixes and expands several things that I would have liked to see better implemented
with this that apparently the film team is not unaware of the criticisms that are made of it, I hope that they use them as feedback for the sequel
Great Video
I didn't like having a baby Peach enter through the tunnels, her parents are King and Queen Toadstool it would've been a nice callback to them as they've kind of disappeared from lore
Amazing re-write!
Seeing this rewritten makes me wish some of this stuff was in the final product. You did a great job inplemeting certain elements that could've work in the movie. I love how you put in E.Gadd as a partner for Luigi to make it so that way Luigi has things to do rather than be in a cage most of the time.
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Long before your rewrite, I've actually written an entire Pitch regarding this very scene. I was kind of upset that it didn't expand much longer as it would have been the perfect time for Mario, Peach and Toad to properly develop as characters and interactions. I made Mario and Peach sit down by the fire after looking up at the stars. Mario begins to talk to Peach again only to see her hugging her knees looking forlorn. Mario's unsure why she's feeling this way and decides to give her some space and talk to Toad. Toad is really happy to finally go on an adventure he always desired, whereas Mario's mildly annoyed with him. Toad would ask Mario if he and Peach really are from another world and says he's very jealous but curious. Mario says he can't believe he did all that training to rescue his brother only to see Toad just come along without any training he did. Toad reassures Mario he knows about survival and says with confidence he can take care of himself just fine. Mario asks what sort of talents do you have? Toad says he can play a flute, cook, pack gear and goes pick up a Fire flower and combines it with a big cube of ice, turning it into an Ice Flower. (The very same one in the climax) Mario's quite impressed. Mario complements Toads upbeat energy but asks why exactly he calls me his best friend despite only just meeting each other. Toad explains because he has no friends. And this is where I gave Toad a bit of a 'Perrito edge' to him as he talks about his backstory in which his peers disliked Toad's hyperactive energy and trick him into throwing him in mud. Mario apologizes but Toad waves his hand away and says he's gotten that a lot. Toad says he never thought he would go on this type of adventure with the Princess and another human and says they made his life pretty special. Mario smiles and says you're not so bad little mushroom man.
Mario decides to talk to Peach again, still looking forlorn. Mario asked Peach why she's feeling this way? Peach is afraid to respond. But Mario assures her that whenever his brother felt down, he can always talk to him. Peach finally opens up to Mario that she's sad. Sad for explaining her origins as she's unsure where she came from. Her eyes begin to water up as she says despite not knowing where she really came from or who her parents are, she's really happy the Toads found her and raised her as she doesn't know where she'd be if they were never there for her now. Mario pats Peach on the shoulder. Suddenly, an idea pops in the plummer's head and says to Peach that after they defeat this Bowser guy, Mario can show Peach Brooklyn and what it's like living there. Peach chuckles and says that's not a bad idea and that she wouldn't mind taking a sabbatical from being a ruler. Mario promises Peach that they know they can win as long as they don't back down.
And the Pitch ends with Mario and Peach and even Toad having an endearing bond with each other.
Aww. That’s very sweet. I could see Toad being outcasted as the weird one for his hyperactive personality. That’s something I feel all the time, especially as a teenager in high school. And the fact you wrote this as a type of bonding moment, where they all let out their problems and have them resolved as friends to understand each other more makes it even better. You did wonderful.
@@asherrudick3912 I felt the Fire Flower Field scene we got was way too short. With how fast the movie's pacing was, I thought that scene would've been the perfect moment for the movie to take a breath.
Thank you very much.💙
This should've been my favorite scenes of all time but i would like to add some, toad is kinda relatable to me because making friends is hard one thing i like to add that he doesn't have any friends with toads that usually doesn't care about him which it makes it hard for him, and we see slowly develop to each character to get know each other easily to things like peach asking mario Brooklyn safe to go out? Because peach doesn't know where shes comes from and doesn't know is it safe or she cant remember anything, we cut to mario and see him kinda feels bad for them how toad doesn't have any friends and peach can't remember where she cames from, after mario tells peach its safe out in Brooklyn and he can show her around after defeats bowser which is also gives peach an idea she include celebrate for cake just like mario 64 ending to give them feel special for them and feel very rewarded after completing the game, which gives mario and toad feels really happy to each other and they are sure they are gonna save luigi and defeating bowser
Few things i like to add is instead of a normal tree theres a acorn tree from super mario bros u and the sky could use a star reference like the stars from n64 paper mario or a rosalina lumas star shaped or even heck, add a star shaped from any character icons in that scene like solving a big dipper, but anyway thats a great expanded scene idea!
This version is incredibly interesting and compelling. I was writing something fun around this movie but your version is much more enjoyable so I think I'll use this version as my setting instead. Thanks for the inspiration!
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I think the slow-mo interaction between Mario and Peach in the movie was great. It's the first sign we have that she can actually fight for herself and it's a fun subversion of the "slow-mo smitten" segment we've seen so many times. Plus it's funny how she easily takes Mario down.
Mario's love interest for Peach has always mostly kept to a minimum, and I can see how and if they get to be together at the end of a trilogy it would be slowly knowing each other instead of a "love at first sight" scenario; it would be a nice buildup and there would be plenty of room of why they should and could be together instead of just because they're the main characters.
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I always thought of that scene of how Luigi felt so powerless and that he couldn't do anything by himself; Mario always had to be there for him because he was too weak. It's something he grew out of when he blocked Bowser's fire breath at the end but it's the bare minimum of a payoff, just like the "you never give up" thing.
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I think their "intelligence" are the Cheep Cheep; when Mario first entered the Mushroom Kingdom, a Toad is carrying a plastic bag with some water and a Cheep Cheep inside. When it looks at Mario, it looks at him with suspition. Also, the Cheep Cheep that stuck on Mario's face made it clear that they know Mario's on an adventure with Peach.
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Mario can add to that and say how they are plumbers from Brooklyn, Toad asks "what's a plumber?" and Toad later replies "Does that mean you can build warp pipes?". Mario says he doesn't know how they work; Peach responds with "they can't be too different right?"; this is Mario's first idea of actually living in the Mushroom Kingdom and building warp pipes.
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Sequel bait. No doubt in my mind. I'd love it if Mario tells Peach about how much he loves his brother, and her asking how having a brother must feel like. The payoff of this could have been that they'd introduce Daisy in the sequel, and having a sisterly bond with her.
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Not only that, but apparently the Super Star theme from the movie's climax was originally going to be replaced with Van Halen's "Jump". The composer fought with tooth and nail so that they kept it with the original composition made for it and I'm so glad that he at least got to salvage that scene. That was one of the movie's highlights.
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Also, Funky Kong got Toadsworth'd in this movie. He could have been the engineer who designed all those karts.
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This part could also have a father-daughter moment between Toadsworth and Peach. Peach telling him she doesn't know what to do anymore. Toadsworth says "the same thing Master Mario has done till the end; not giving up". Peach looks out the windows and sees Bowser's ship coming close, understanding what she has to do; she asks him to lead the Toads if she doesn't make it. Toadsworth says "my child. I've been proud of you since you arrived; ever since I carried you in my arms I knew you were going to be the bravest and noble out of all of us. I know you'll return to your people." He gives her his final blessing and leads the Toads out of the castle. Peach is now fully determined, picks up the axe and goes to fight Bowser.
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My guess is that they had material for a 120-minute movie but Illumination insisted on around 90-minutes. They had to cut corners and many things were left unresolved.
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Mmh... this one I disagree a bit; haivng Dory around is just as unlikely (or even less so) than DK knowing how to drive the rocket barrel. Since it's also a reference to Donkey Kong Country Returns.
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I know how: by doing a callback to Mario's training montage. He visualizes the enemies as the props he avoided and doing all the cool stunts he did to (almost) finish the training level.
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I think they're not concerned because time works differently between Brooklyn and the Mushroom Kingdom, time relativity and stuff. This could have been clearer if her mom yells "Mario! Luigi! Breakfast's ready"; as they're confused because they're not coming to join them, their dad says "Maybe they went early" to further established that most of the movie happened overnight for Brooklyn, but it was several days-weeks in the Mushroom Kingdom. This will also be handy when and if they bring Rosalina to a second or third Mario movie; she's said to be near a thousand years old but doesn't look older than twenty. I'm sure i'm basing this on a Game Theory video but it works in this context.
To be fair to the movie(‘s Latin American Spanish dub!), when Bowser takes the star, he states “Now I’m invincible!”, which gives the impression that this is indeed a Super Star, and not a Power Star.
Amazing rewrite, as always!
If there’s one thing i WISH they had done during the original film, it would be to have the final fight against bowser use bros attacks from the alphadream games, maybe something like them using bounce or swing bros to show their unorthodox fighting style, it was a majorly missed opportunity to not implement anything from the alphadream series
This was an amazing rewrite. You were able to set up a number of elements that you could see where pieces of the finale were coming together. I genuinely wish this was the version of the movie we got.
there is so much effort and love put into this rewrite, man. each rewritten scene/dialogue is so well put together and it really fits. this video deserves much more attention.
I LOVE this rewrite. I don't think I can even form a proper sentence to show how much.
This video pretty much sums up my opinions on this movie. I remember leaving the theater feeling entertained, but it just felt like stuff happening without much substance. I’m glad there’s a video that addresses this and offers an alternative to improve on it
It's to be expected from the studios that make Minions. But also Nintendo with the people in charge who want more gameplay hardly any story.
I think a better use/role for Toad was for him to initinally be rejected by Peach, treated as a joke castaway that just couldn't be gotten rid of. This would make the moments where he stays with and helps Peach during the evacuation even stronger, mirroring the same determination as Mario.
Other than that, this is fantastic. After watching the original movie, I was kind of in denial about it, telling myself that it was good, but I couldn't help but think it could've been so much more. You delivered perfectly, fixing basically every flaw from the original, while also making it an even truer Mario Movie than the supposed "safe adaptation".
It's sad in a way, because I can't accept the fact that this isn't a real thing after watching this video, because it would've been my favourite movie of all time if it were.
You know Illumination is doomed when a fan's rewriting is better than their movie.
Also, I would call this "The Super Mario Bros Movie Deluxe".
You mean the "Deluxe Cut"?
@@TheIrreverentUncleAl Exactly!
@charriii5319 BOTS 🤦
That's for sure. I mean he literally solved most of the plot holes in the OG movie, And in a podcast no less. illumination better live up to their name or else they become like Blue Sky Studios.
I say we blame Nintendo more for this than Illumination; they’re the ones who are trying to keep Mario as "light-hearted" as possible
Whoa! I just imagined the whole movie in my head! I WANT IT NOW
When it comes to the portrayal of Bowser, one thing I like from the RPGs that I did not really see in the movie or this rewrite is that Bowser is not really abusive to his minions. The minions are loyal to him out of genuine admiration, rather than just fear.
Absolutley love this rewrite! You definitley helped refine the movie and balance the spectical of it as well as the story and character moments, great job Charriii!! I can't wait to see what other videogames/movies you rewrite in the future!!
This rewrite is fantastic, I wish this is what we got! It would’ve satisfied hardcore fans while also still being a movie with a well written story. It sucks that we’re just stuck forever with what we got knowing how much better it could’ve been.
It sucks we can't be thankful for what we fucking get instead of appreciating WHAT WE GOT!! FUCK THE FANS!!
Yeah, me too. Wish the movie was like this and people would have like it better. At least, we have something that can satisfied the fans but not for the audiences sadly. But great rewrite due.
You pretty much fixed the entire movie with this rewrite. It’s actually really impressive. If this had been the movie, I would have enjoyed it that much more.
Especially with Peach. Peach has been capable in the games plenty of times, but I feel like the movie mishandled and misunderstood her, both in personality and capabilities. She was capable in the games, but never borderline unstoppable.
You basically hit the nail on the head: She’s too perfect, something that the Mario Movie’s interviews reveal was very much intended unfortunately. Your rewrite fixes just enough about her to make me like the movie version more. And giving Luigi more to do was awesome.
I agree that Peach's flaw is that she may seem too proud of her capabilities but even then in the movie she does also want to ask for help - making her competent but still needs help OR keep being hypercompetent but arrogant and later peg her down a bit.
She's not even too perfect at all, did you watch the movie? She was forced to surrender ffs. This overton window of how capable women in media are allowed to be is still so far right it's sad. 😂
@@yungmuney5903 She surrendered willingly rather than by actually being defeated, and then oop! Turns out she had a back-up plan that allowed her to defeat everyone at the wedding, rather than actually be in a situation where she needs to be bailed out for once.
You conveniently left that detail out.
@@railroader2431 fuckboy. Watch the movie again. There's even a youtube video of her meeting Bowser, tell me what actually happened in there. It's not like a Toad was being CURSHED ALIVE RIGHT NEXT TO HER OR ANYTHING. Don't worry, I'll fact check.
Well, at least Peach didn't constantly belittle or overshadow the main protagonist of the movie. That could've been FAR worse.
15:23 I think the reason why its Kid Icarus is because the game over screen "Im Finished!" Is supposed to be a visual representation on how Mario feels about his plumbing business and he fears that it will fail which is why Mario is seen through the reflection of the tv sceen.
Yeah, this rewrite was a lot better than I though! This was an amazing retold-story and I like the Power Stars making a major role and even acquiring the Dinosaur Island’s Power (star as reliable as they can be Go Team Yoshi!) but also bringing in some cameos like Toadstool and Professor E. Gadd in the story. Making Luigi do more is a lot better than what we got in the original. Not saying he was useless but just him being more involved with Mario is so good because they’re BROTHERS! And yes I’m super happy that Yoshi will be in the sequel and I am all ready for it!
This was AMAZING! So many scenes where I got goosebumps, exlaiming "Oh my god!" only by your narration and sketches. Love the drawings. You established and revealed so many details that were simply missing from the original film. Hopefully Nintendo and Illumination go this route for the next movie, exploring the characters more, and Luigi simply NEEDS more screen time.
Yep after seeing this Charriii5 should be the story writer for the sequel
what i learned from this:
-luigi and toad need way more development
-bowser is the best character
All that being said, I liked it! And I think your rewrites made a lot of sense. Sometimes watching these videos is more fun for me than Hollywood movies anymore, (And THANK YOU for the comment about Peach; not every female character HAS to be a "girl boss". They can be at least a LITTLE vulnerable.) Great job! =)
I mean…. Princess Peach does have a weakness in this movie, it’s that she cares way too much about wanting to save her people. And before you claim that it’s not an actual weakness, it can actually be a weakness to an extent. Like someone you really care about gets kidnapped or is in trouble, and you want to save them, even though there is a likely chance you won’t survive or it is a trap. Heck, Empire Strikes Back shows the cons about caring way too much, as the main protagonist later gets his hand chopped off.
@@UltimateDespairado I didn't say she was completely without a weakness. I just I agree with the host that she and other such characters could use a bit more emotional vulnerability. (the first 'Wonder Woman' movie and 'The 5th Element' are perfect examples) You're not wrong, I just think you misunderstood my point. =)
@@BuckarooBanzai84 oh okay. Thanks for clarifying.
@@UltimateDespairado Don't mention it. Take care! =)
Exactly. Look no further than other princesses that are strong in their own right, like Snow White ( animated), Sheeta ( Castle in the Sky), Sailor Moon, and Wonder Woman.
This was so awesome!!! You adressed basically all the issues I had with the flim myself and made them better. I remeber while watching the movie I was really hoping that since Peach commented on how brave Toad is it woudl lead to him becoming "captain" and therefore making him our Captian Toad. And while that didn't happen in this rewrite I understand why - it's hard to force Toad into scenes. I didn't think much on Toadsworth not being in this movie at first but now that you mention it I agree!! It is werid he wasn't here!
This rewrite is amazing - I love how you took what the movie sort of layed out but never fully went through with or just kinda left there and gave it reason - or if it had no purpose, to actually remove it.
I had never actually heard the orginally music made for the Kart scene and it's so good!! Honestly mad that that wasn't kept in the movie but thank you for telling me about it.
Great job!! I'm super excited for any future rewrites!!
I feel like a sub-plot with Luigi trying to escape with the other prisoners would've been really funny and better to add than some of the filler scenes.
Maybe after Peach and Toad are taken in there could be a scene of Luigi freeing Toad who grabs a Ice Flower from the penguins and goes to give it to Peach.
Charri5 could done that instead of doing an entire sublot that should be saved for the Luigi's Mansion spin-off film.
I gotta say, I loved every second of this rewrite! I think that you did a great job keeping what made the movie so enjoyable, while also adding a coherent story and narrative! I also wanna point out that the length of this video is almost exactly the same as the Mario movie’s runtime only being 14 seconds apart! I find that to be pretty cool.
This rewrite makes the final movie feel like a first rough draft.
Maybe it was and because it has the Super Mario IP, it would be successful. Which it was, but now how are you going to follow it up long term.
Your rewritten version of the movie is much better than the real story, it kind of makes sense that it will follow the games stories. It also does give the super show vibe when the brothers get sucked into the tube into the fantasy world.
I was actually hoping for a Luigi’s Mansion scene in the original movie and was a little disappointed that it didn’t happen, and Luigi definitely deserved more screen time. I also love the idea of Toad being more relevant to the story
Funny enough, Toadsworth was in the concept art. There is concept art of Mario in what seems to be like a powerup room similar to galaxy 2. In this room, Mario is checking out a fire flower (which there is also concept art of Fire Mario) and behind him are Peach and Toadsworth.
Yo, all these rewriting videos are pretty cool to watch. And this one was very long yet definitely worth to watch
Agreed.
Better than Hollywood doing their job on Adapting Video games into movies.
Yeah, i mean, they have been getting a LITTLE better at video game adaptations in the last couple of years, but even so, they've still got a LOT to learn when doing this sort of stuff.
Or at least, i hope they'll learn...
@@worthybutter2004 Yeah, I hope they learn to ACTUALLY make it like the original source material. Plus, It's weird that the Fans are making Video game Adaptions Way better than Hollywood themselves. I mean, the fans should get hired and Direct a better Film than the Studios changing it for no reason to make it not like the Game. The fans always gets it right. But Hollywood should always listen and Learn their lesson.
Fun Fact: Luigi's Mansion was planned for the film, but is gonna be made into a spin off film along with Donkey Kong Country.
From a cynical marketing perspective, I completely understand why Mario and Luigi are separated. Nintendo and Illumination are testing audience reactions to Luigi on his own.
A lot of it is based in psychology. In February 2022, Charlie Day expressed interest in Luigi's Mansion after watching his son play it. Fast forward to March 2023 when the promotional material for the movie is in full swing. Day is now not only in favour of a Luigi movie but Chris Pratt talks about a "Nintendo Cinematic Universe" and specifically mentions Luigi's Mansion.
Every review under the sun has complained about Luigi's screen time. Miyamoto and Meledandri are reading every single one and quoting the Hulk: "I see this as an absolute win". Couple that with videos, tweets, articles, comments, etc of how they're teasing Luigi's Mansion and there you go. People don't just want Mario and Luigi to go on an actual adventure together in the inevitable sequel. They want Luigi to have his own movie.
Wait wut
Source?
Luigi was so heavily sidelined in the original movie.
I'm glad he got more screen time and involvement in this rewrite.
I know that others have said this, but your re-writes are incredible, and the detail and thoughtfulness you put into them is astounding. Keep doing what you're doing, this is amazing! :D I also agree that it is UNBELIEVABLE that Toadsworth got shafted from this movie
"In that case, why not just stay in Brooklyn?"
Rent.
I had been itching to rewrite this film after writing a script of my own prior to the film's release. It's so awesome to see you tackle it!
41:00 "If you're gonna stomp a turty in act 3, make sure you show a turt in act 1. It's science bro. Perchance." -Anton Chekhov, probably
You want to save luigi?
You gotta go to bowsers coney island dicso palace theres a refrence for you
Yet another Fan Rewrite being better than the Original, Great Work with the Writing and the Illustrations were a Great Addition, Bravo to you Charriii5. You're a Super Star!
1:23:48 Remind you of anyone? (Cough)(Cough) Captain Marvel.
I think it woulda been fantastic if Peach baked a cake for Mario and Luigi at the end, and you heard "Thank you so much for watching my movie!" from charles Martinet
I think there should have been a third sequence of Kamek informing Bowser Jr of his father's defeat and the young prince intending revenge decides to call for his cousins the koopalings.
I love the addition of the wrap up at the end especially, and I can just imagine Lumalee being the last person the bros say hello to, only to be met with a "You only delayed the inevitable :D" as they warp through the pipe
Honestly, theres so much things I would want to say about how good this rewriting is! But I really don't want to build a text wall here 😅 So I'm only gonna said what affected me the most, and that is how you managed to no only improve but CREATE an actual plot to Luigi.
The character development and he's on "side story" with proper elements and characters, and of course, the idea of E Gadd being he's guide and support character is truly be awesome!
This rewrite was a better version of the Mario Movie that I didn't even know I needed! I couldn't help but notice, throughout the entire movie, that Luigi didn't get enough characterization and it was super disappointing. Along with some things not making sense or escalating too quickly. ESPECIALLY when Peach crashed the wedding as if all the circumstances just went poof. This more brotherly ending that you made made my cry. So good.