Watch your backgrounds. The fire hydrant location, you were so focused on the model you didn’t notice the distracting elements on the left side of the frame. As Picasso said, “art is the elimination of the unnecessary.” You shot almost all at 40-50mm. Crank that puppy out to 105 shoot wide open and full body. Try some shots at 24mm full body or close up. Vary your perspective and your clients will enjoy the variety of looks. You shot at 6.3 a lot. I read your reply about shooting for more DOF. DOF is related not only to aperture but lens to subject distance. F4 was plenty for the DOF you needed considering you were shooting between 40-50mm and mostly full body. Watch your cropping, too. You chopped off feet and legs. Simple rule, crop above the knee. If you crop below the knee show the feet. Same goes for elbows. You’re on the right track. Just keep shooting and put some of these tips to use. You’ll be a pro in no time.
The photos are crazy overexposed, with unnecessary vignette and too much post-processing for the skin, it looks unnatural. Also as it is a portraiture photography, you should pay attention at max to the person you are shooting, and separate the person from background. Even though this is not a portrait lens, at least you could have used f4 and longer ends to get some background separation. I agree that it's not always the true 'give me my bokeh' but your background does not tell any story, only gets me distracted. You should first improve your photography skills before shooting a video, don't understand who did like this
NIce 1, kool props - fire hydrant at 2:50 lol
Haha thanks man! I appreciate your support!
I love it!! Love the music choice and the way you put it together! Amazing!!
Thank you for sharing your amazing fashion sense with me! Really enjoyed our collaboration on this!
Mike, I wish you the best. I hope your channel grows and grows. Great job!
Rubin Banuelos Muchos Gracias amigo!
Watch your backgrounds. The fire hydrant location, you were so focused on the model you didn’t notice the distracting elements on the left side of the frame. As Picasso said, “art is the elimination of the unnecessary.”
You shot almost all at 40-50mm. Crank that puppy out to 105 shoot wide open and full body. Try some shots at 24mm full body or close up. Vary your perspective and your clients will enjoy the variety of looks.
You shot at 6.3 a lot. I read your reply about shooting for more DOF. DOF is related not only to aperture but lens to subject distance. F4 was plenty for the DOF you needed considering you were shooting between 40-50mm and mostly full body.
Watch your cropping, too. You chopped off feet and legs. Simple rule, crop above the knee. If you crop below the knee show the feet. Same goes for elbows.
You’re on the right track. Just keep shooting and put some of these tips to use. You’ll be a pro in no time.
The tail spin at the door got me, nice chapture ~
What was the point of photographing at f6.3???(
Why not use f4???
On point aesthetic! 💐
Melissa Feild Thank you! We lucked out with that pink hydrant!
Awesome pics brother 🔥🔥 9.25 is my fav.
WhosYourBrad thank you! That’s so nice of you to say!
Great Shots, I would love to try this lens on my R5. I have the kit version of it I got for free from a buddy of mine.
Thank you! It is a very clinical lens, optically without faults. Thanks for watching!
Check out the luminar neo software
🙂
I prefer SOOC
на видео она выглядит лучше чем на фото
It is not lens for portraits. No bokeh effect.
The photos are crazy overexposed, with unnecessary vignette and too much post-processing for the skin, it looks unnatural. Also as it is a portraiture photography, you should pay attention at max to the person you are shooting, and separate the person from background. Even though this is not a portrait lens, at least you could have used f4 and longer ends to get some background separation. I agree that it's not always the true 'give me my bokeh' but your background does not tell any story, only gets me distracted.
You should first improve your photography skills before shooting a video, don't understand who did like this
Forgot to mention your crazy 2000 iso to compensate that closed aperture, you don't understand what you are doing, for real
Thank you for your thoughtful and detailed criticisms. I will work hard on improving my craft moving forward. 😊
@@jumpyee Bro relax, please don’t cry 🤣😂😂😂
fail :)))