Thoroughly enjoyed the story. I was glad the writer(s) covered disease contamination precaution as part of first contact. I don't usually listen to audio stories. This turned out to be a pleasurable experience. The illustrations really helped me to visualize the characters, and are of excellent quality.Having narration from different voices also made it easier to follow. The Greys and the other 2 species that were predatating on Earth seem worthy adversaries. .
true ,though i where a little 'disappointed' about the belts magic gravity control as that kind of tech scaled up more or lees make any civilization not wielding it to helpless but suppose it might be like the concept of 'gravity plating' causing artificial effects between two mirroring projectors so suppose the belts might have some sort of limitation like that themselfs it be sort of dull if the technical difference is to vast
I sometimes fall asleep listening to stories, this one kept me awake and listening! I especially liked the guy breaking his hand on Mira's cheek. Ignorance is no substitute for knowledge..
This channel popped up for me and I'm very happy I decided to listen. Love the stories and especially the well thought out alien views. Long ago I thought of audiobooks and how they could be done more like the old radio shows with different actors and sound effects, but after much thought decided it would be too costly to produce, you know paying multiple actors and a sound effects specialist. Despite the lack of sound effects or music these stories are very engaging. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love how he was so shocked that she had scored extremely high on the endurance test while exhausted. He should have also factored in, she did it on an empty stomache.
Well thought out plot and very well narrated. The story is nice and I like the way all obvious ia hidden in plain sight. I am a very picky listener coz of some very wierd and downright outrageous stories. Thankfully this one I relished very much. Thank you for your efforts
2:01:00 Should have said MMC, which is the actual rate designator for Chief Machinist Mate in the Navy. We use the rate designator and then rank indicators. For example, I am an Information Systems Technician Second Class, so mine is IT2.
I can understand her disbelief at the aliens being so friendly, and civilized by our standards, its first contact and its more likely that most aliens would be too different from us to think similarly.
A hallmark of good sci-fi is that it makes you think within the narrative and suspend disbelief such that we assume they'll think like us. I'm sure there are stories of aliens who think radically different, like in Independence Day
Damn this needs to be made a book. like the Shogun in 3 huge arse parts. And a Movie and a Tv Series. And all that combined. Thank you for your effort and for your time creating this.
Mmmmm😊...I'd like to say this wonderful story is like when one is discussing/reviewing a movie or TV show...this one is the difference between just an action film, or what i call just a slice em dice em film, and a REAL film with plot development ❤❤❤❤ and lots of what sci-fi that sounds very believable❤ ...it also doesn't go into wayyyy to much engineering detail that IMHO substitutes for good story content/writing❤ as well as also quickly gives character development for each alien race, and each individual that ends up representing the various alien races❤❤❤❤....this story has the amazing ability of all that i believe balances great storytelling for all possible audiences ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ TONS more like it PLEASE👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great story love the characters, the plot and the narrator's voice❤️❤️❤️ Thank you for posting this story you have gotten yourself a new subsciber🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩
This was far and away the best one of these stories I've heard. It ended so abruptly, hoping there will be a completed story as to when Mayia gets back to Earth.
a comet to feed the algorythm btw lately i am hocked to this kind of stuff and i must say this story and Nature of Predators are the best sci fi story i encounter manny storys are plane and clearly Ai written. this is a pleasant suprice 10/10
I sat down to fill a quick 20 mins with a sci fy story on YT, like I do now and then, to find out I listened for 2 hrs and it's only part 1/11! (and yet i keep listening)
It’s called adrenaline when your body produces it. Should you have to take a shot of it due to an allergic reaction then it’s epinephrine. At least in my country it is
Sturgeon, Asimov's, Heilein... when I was in my teens. Then WW1 flying novels. WW2 adventures as a 16 yr old. Love reading! Now listening. Superb stuff, guys. 😊
A very outstanding video. it went into details about the different groups or races of people she met and what they thought of her. it was good to hear that she didn't have killing them on her mind she met them also it was something else when they offered t o help repair her ship. To it was something else when t hey told her he gray people wanted to take the people of earth as slaves. will be looking to see how this series come out. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
Later the leader of the "bird poeple" asked : How did a crewmate of mine break several bones in the training area? The human: he trying hiting me has hard as he could but did not know the density of humans and broke all the bones of the area of contact and the connected bones.
2:14:19 Technically the human mouths can still be quite deadly. Germs found in our saliva can lead to serious infections and illness, with the bacteria from a bite of one with a broken tooth being more severe. Having gotten pneumonia from my own two dead teeth, thanks to a botched wisdom teeth surgery, I can attest to how close it came to killing me.
For most too much meat without fruits and veggies is not good but I think some humans could get by on an all meat died for years. The same issue would be true for all plant food. Supplements are required.
GREAT JOB.... I have listen to all of them as I found them.... Now you added #11 and you put them all in 1 pack..... THANK YOU VERY MUCH..... So what did I do..... I clicked on the new pack laid down on my couch and listened to it from the start all the way through AGAIN...... ONLY QUESTION....???? When is 12 and 13 coming out.... Please add soon...... If it was me putting in all this work I would cut this pack down to 1 - 10 then start a new pack at 11 and go from there.... Up to you.... Just my thinking.... KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
"that sounds wasteful"
"that is less wasteful"
I busted out laughing from that interaction 1:02:00
It is nice to see a story that knows the difference between sentient and sapient.
Two hours, yet still too short. Was shocked it was over already. Can't wait for the next part! :)
AGREED!!👍👍
@@beverlycrusher9713 😮😮😮😮
The aliens start to breed humans for food, and like politicians worldwide the eat babies,
me also!
Let’s have some more please and will delete the others.
"You have fine looking air holes, Mira."
Now that's a new one...!! 🤣 🤣 🤣
Must of been a close up on the face. Our nose takes up more room then most poeple think it does.
Thoroughly enjoyed the story. I was glad the writer(s) covered disease contamination precaution as part of first contact. I don't usually listen to audio stories. This turned out to be a pleasurable experience. The illustrations really helped me to visualize the characters, and are of excellent quality.Having narration from different voices also made it easier to follow. The Greys and the other 2 species that were predatating on Earth seem worthy adversaries. .
same here I would of done the same thing make sure not to spread unknown pathogens
true ,though i where a little 'disappointed' about the belts magic gravity control as that kind of tech scaled up more or lees make any civilization not wielding it to helpless but suppose it might be like the concept of 'gravity plating' causing artificial effects between two mirroring projectors so suppose the belts might have some sort of limitation like that themselfs
it be sort of dull if the technical difference is to vast
I sometimes fall asleep listening to stories, this one kept me awake and listening!
I especially liked the guy breaking his hand on Mira's cheek. Ignorance is no substitute for knowledge..
yea klingons!
This channel popped up for me and I'm very happy I decided to listen.
Love the stories and especially the well thought out alien views.
Long ago I thought of audiobooks and how they could be done more like the old radio shows with different actors and sound effects, but after much thought decided it would be too costly to produce, you know paying multiple actors and a sound effects specialist.
Despite the lack of sound effects or music these stories are very engaging.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Glad you enjoyed it. I used to listen to those old radio shows too. Loved them...
I love how he was so shocked that she had scored extremely high on the endurance test while exhausted. He should have also factored in, she did it on an empty stomache.
Credit where credit is due, good story and a good mix of voices - very well done.
Well thought out plot and very well narrated. The story is nice and I like the way all obvious ia hidden in plain sight. I am a very picky listener coz of some very wierd and downright outrageous stories. Thankfully this one I relished very much. Thank you for your efforts
Love that you used different voices for the different characters.
Lots of story channels dont bother and its hard to follow sometimes
Glad you enjoyed it!
Correctamundo Higher Fives iffin Yur didgets Match Up. Funzies in sight Metinks
😅 Eggzackly so
It's all AI voices.
Well done! GREAT STORY SIR!!
I haven't been caught up by a story like this in some time. 👍 Thanks!
Puhleeeze give us more!
Will do!
2:01:00 Should have said MMC, which is the actual rate designator for Chief Machinist Mate in the Navy. We use the rate designator and then rank indicators. For example, I am an Information Systems Technician Second Class, so mine is IT2.
I have loved this series so far. It is like reading a very well written Sci Fi book. I like voices also.
Glad you enjoy it!
Bravo very clearly and excellently written. Best story I've stumbled across.
This was good
I can understand her disbelief at the aliens being so friendly, and civilized by our standards, its first contact and its more likely that most aliens would be too different from us to think similarly.
A hallmark of good sci-fi is that it makes you think within the narrative and suspend disbelief such that we assume they'll think like us. I'm sure there are stories of aliens who think radically different, like in Independence Day
There are other aliens that are evil...
"Be glad that your injury came from you hitting me, and not from me hitting you"
Damn this needs to be made a book. like the Shogun in 3 huge arse parts. And a Movie and a Tv Series. And all that combined. Thank you for your effort and for your time creating this.
I was pleasantly surprised by my discovery of your channel today. I throughly enjoyed this first story!!
Welcome aboard! Glad you enjoyed it 😊
Very nicely done! Great storytelling, and appreciated the pictures as well. Brings color to the story. Hope there is more to this storyline coming.
Thank you so much!
Really good story. I hope you keep it going.
This is the best I’ve ever seen and heard from any of the You-Tube Si-Fi stories. Well done. Let’s have more please and thanks.
Wow, thank you!
Mmmmm😊...I'd like to say this wonderful story is like when one is discussing/reviewing a movie or TV show...this one is the difference between just an action film, or what i call just a slice em dice em film, and a REAL film with plot development ❤❤❤❤ and lots of what sci-fi that sounds very believable❤ ...it also doesn't go into wayyyy to much engineering detail that IMHO substitutes for good story content/writing❤ as well as also quickly gives character development for each alien race, and each individual that ends up representing the various alien races❤❤❤❤....this story has the amazing ability of all that i believe balances great storytelling for all possible audiences ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ TONS more like it PLEASE👍👍👍👍👍👍
Thanks!
Ur Welcome man!
Better written than many of the stories.
1:33:35 wait... _destroyer???_ oh, _please tell_ me that they didn't _only_ have those Faraday spheres onboard because it was a _military_ ship...
I love the story🤯✨️
Great story love the characters, the plot and the narrator's voice❤️❤️❤️ Thank you for posting this story you have gotten yourself a new subsciber🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩
Glad you enjoyed it!
Refreshing story. Not one that involves a ton of combat or espionage or underdog or OP status.
This was far and away the best one of these stories I've heard. It ended so abruptly, hoping there will be a completed story as to when Mayia gets back to Earth.
Here's another series that has captured my attention.....watched series 1-11, now looking for more..
I was there through it all. Spectacular !!!
That escalated quickly...the rest of the crew died?! First sentance
I guess I don't need to bother listening. thanks for the spoiler.
@@jeremyfrogg798its a 2 hour story, and thats literally the first thing that happened
@@zekedelsken9963do they not teach irony in schools anymore?
Absolutely loved this one, thanks heaps.
Glad you enjoyed it
That was fantastic! I hope this series continues, it will be disappointing if it does not.
Another enjoyable story......something different, vey good :)
Riveting story..start to end.
I like how the main characters
In sci-fi stories are not always male👍😎
This is really good. Can’t wait to hear more.
now that was a great and funny story!
Great story. And, no AI narrator. Good job.
Much appreciated!
I like that you bundled it up, but I was hoping for a new one!
Don't worry a new one is coming up next week! Very soon!
@@SciFiStarStoriesI freakin loved this man! Thank you!
@@SciFiStarStoriesThe additional voices add so much to the characters.
Eggzackly Correctamundo citizen grasshopper
a comet to feed the algorythm btw lately i am hocked to this kind of stuff and i must say this story and Nature of Predators are the best sci fi story i encounter manny storys are plane and clearly Ai written. this is a pleasant suprice 10/10
Well Done - Thank You - Eagerly awaiting more
I'm not really into sci fi but this was fantastic and enjoyable, the imagination of some folk is great.
Great story. Better than 90% of the HFY I've listened to.
Where's the rest of the story?
Really liked this one.
Thank you I really like it.
You're welcome 😊
Good story. Thanks for posting.
Good story . Keep up posting my friend
Nice, very nice.
Has to be one of the best sci fi stories I’ve heard very well done thank you very much
Glad you enjoyed it!
Love this story!!!
Really amazing story, i hope there is a next part to it ❤ I'd like to know how it went😅
Warm rocks to you!
What a good story.
If unable to provide an isolated area, she could have just attached the bodies to the exterior of the ship to keep them frozen.
Is this where i put the thumbs
Up!!👍👍👍👍👍
great story thank you
Very good 😊more please 🙏
More to come!
I sat down to fill a quick 20 mins with a sci fy story on YT, like I do now and then, to find out I listened for 2 hrs and it's only part 1/11!
(and yet i keep listening)
Sorry to disappoint, but it's not part 1/11. It's parts 1-11.
I thought this Syfy story was well researched to draw your attention to the story line. Thank you for sharing.
I’m a little disappointed she didn’t think to use space as the refrigerator. However, the rest of the story has been so far so so good.
"You're species doesn't secrete the pharmaceutical brand name for the actual hormone known as epinephrine?"
It's called adrenaline in other countries.
It’s called adrenaline when your body produces it. Should you have to take a shot of it due to an allergic reaction then it’s epinephrine. At least in my country it is
Really great story.
Thanks for listening
I'm very interested to hear more about this story it's very interesting
Funny how at the start, they didn't say anything about being Free when they compared the Galactic Federation to the Slavers......lol
this was a very good story and i am a sci fi fan and have been for at least 65 years one of my first books was have space suit will travel
Sturgeon, Asimov's, Heilein... when I was in my teens. Then WW1 flying novels. WW2 adventures as a 16 yr old. Love reading! Now listening. Superb stuff, guys. 😊
So far ranked as in top three I have listened to
COOL SCIFI STORY👍
A very outstanding video. it went into details about the different groups or races of people she met and what they thought of her. it was good to hear that she didn't have killing them on her mind she met them also it was something else when they offered t o help repair her ship. To it was something else when t hey told her he gray people wanted to take the people of earth as slaves. will be looking to see how this series come out. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
Humans are omnivores where opportunists will eat anything and everything that we can eat
it could be fun if some one from netflix made it in a film or a short series.
Entertaining!
Later the leader of the "bird poeple" asked : How did a crewmate of mine break several bones in the training area?
The human: he trying hiting me has hard as he could but did not know the density of humans and broke all the bones of the area of contact and the connected bones.
Part 12 please, part 12 please, part 12.... wait, did I ask for part 12 already? ahh who cares. Part 12 please hurry.
Thank you
You're welcome
Definitely gonna sub
Welcome!
Mom would be proud of me. I didn't make one joke about the Skeet.
2:14:19 Technically the human mouths can still be quite deadly. Germs found in our saliva can lead to serious infections and illness, with the bacteria from a bite of one with a broken tooth being more severe. Having gotten pneumonia from my own two dead teeth, thanks to a botched wisdom teeth surgery, I can attest to how close it came to killing me.
For most too much meat without fruits and veggies is not good but I think some humans could get by on an all meat died for years. The same issue would be true for all plant food. Supplements are required.
GREAT JOB.... I have listen to all of them as I found them.... Now you added #11 and you put them all in 1 pack..... THANK YOU VERY MUCH..... So what did I do..... I clicked on the new pack laid down on my couch and listened to it from the start all the way through AGAIN...... ONLY QUESTION....???? When is 12 and 13 coming out.... Please add soon...... If it was me putting in all this work I would cut this pack down to 1 - 10 then start a new pack at 11 and go from there.... Up to you.... Just my thinking.... KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
Thank you! And part 12 is coming out very soon...An I think I will do a new pack too.
Turned to this new alien
Good story.
Thos was awesome. Os there a part 2 to this
2 1/2 days of insomnia. LOL! Try 18-21 days awake for 3 months, with only 2-4 hours of medicated sleep in between bouts.
Virtual hugs.
Wrll done.
Great and awesome story. My stupid thoughts automatically said hair porn. And of course I laughed 😂. 😊❤
This is an awesome story. Did you write it?
You can find the link to the author's reddit in the description
What do you use to edit the voices together?
I use eleven labs, give it a try: try.elevenlabs.io/uxdhdnpq1omq
@@SciFiStarStories Thanks, it works a treat.
Brilliant
but I have to add that ot was short , concindering a siquel? cogratulations to the writer
This one goes to eleven.
Punny. 3/5
Your name wouldn't happen to be Nigel Tuftnel, would it?"
in the first chapter the voice of the lizard s'sveda is that done by another youtuber called Naturally RP voice over?
No the voice is AI generated...
@@SciFiStarStories it maybe A.I. generated but the sample for that voice has to come from somewhere, not that i mind though its a good sounding voice.
it would take 6 months to exchange a greeting with Earth... not just days with modern communication.
It depends Which tech they use i think?
You don't need refrigeration in space, space itself is cold. She could have put their bodies in an airlock and turned the heat off.
"attended to your sleep cycle", "hydration fluid'.
No language works in duch a way.
What fun
I wonder if he showed her the 3 sea shells
It bugs me when we talk about one ship being "over" another in space too. In front, behind, and alongside is all you get I space.