We Were Sent to Find an Ancient Weapon Called Human ( Part 1 to 11) | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi Story

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  • @ihspstanktribe
    @ihspstanktribe หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Argoll and Tic-Toc's banter is freaking hilarious! 😂

  • @RobNobelo
    @RobNobelo 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +29

    Apple banana orange... lol
    This is now my safe phrase.

  • @goodcitizen64
    @goodcitizen64 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +108

    Great series but the AI has some issues that could be easily corrected with a human actually proof reading the stories before releasing!

    • @avanap8096
      @avanap8096 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      Seriously? I've blocked all others while not great. Not bad!

    • @Scot_WestTexas
      @Scot_WestTexas 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Yup. I’m outta here

    • @nightwind6515
      @nightwind6515 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      I think this quite bad actually. Why not just use human narrator which is leaps and bounds better? A rhetorical question...

    • @avanap8096
      @avanap8096 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@nightwind6515 statement!

    • @kimwilliams722
      @kimwilliams722 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      What is the matter with you people do you think that everybody is so sadly ingrained in perverse behavior that we enjoy such ignorant rotten profanity it's stupid and seriously annoying please stop it

  • @kelvunmedina90
    @kelvunmedina90 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Im just glad that this series is still alive and kicking. Had to go to Reddit just to make sure

  • @josephgauthier7797
    @josephgauthier7797 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +40

    great series. really went all out with the multiple characters
    awsome job even if the AI had issues still awsome series well done thank you👏🤙

    • @noelhaugh1
      @noelhaugh1 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Frfff🎉🎉rrr😢

    • @Kappa760
      @Kappa760 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Yeah i like it🎉

  • @TimothyLipinski
    @TimothyLipinski 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    Great Video ! The "Humans" do not need an earth style planet to open a solar system ! What is needed is an Ort Cloud for water (H2O) and an asteroid belt for metals and other material ! The materials will be used to build Space Colonies ! Small bicycle wheel Colonies a mile in diameter with an inner tube that is four hundred feet in diameter will support a population of ten thousand "humans" ! Then larger colonies can be built of pairs of tin cans that are four miles in diameter and twenty miles long with three panels of glass alternating with three panels of land area ! The large Colonies will hold a population of millions of "Humans" ! tjl

  • @hamzazeroug4851
    @hamzazeroug4851 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    2:15:58 APPLE A BANANA ORANGE 😂😂

  • @brandonheckman6004
    @brandonheckman6004 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    This was awesome I really hope you continue it with a like whatever the next part would start at 12:00 and up

  • @cataclysmunknown7110
    @cataclysmunknown7110 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Trying to figure out if his armor us more sleek, like Mjolnir armor, or more Ultalitarian, bulky, and oppressive like tacticus armor. Seems more like Mjolnir armor to me atm.
    Also Lizra is adorable. Argue and tic tac remind me of a barbarian quarreling with his wizard companion.

    • @LiveFreeOrDieDH
      @LiveFreeOrDieDH 24 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Based on the description, I think you should google "Halo Spartan" for what the armor would look like.

    • @cataclysmunknown7110
      @cataclysmunknown7110 24 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@LiveFreeOrDieDH that's Mjolnir armor. That's what I was thinking

    • @LiveFreeOrDieDH
      @LiveFreeOrDieDH 24 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@cataclysmunknown7110 Ah, right. My knowledge of Halo lore is somewhat rusty.

    • @cataclysmunknown7110
      @cataclysmunknown7110 24 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@LiveFreeOrDieDH no, but thank you for confirming that. I appreciate it.

  • @davio8605
    @davio8605 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    at last a story where the humans aren,t the greatest, most moral species in existance.... thankyou my friend

    • @XpaceTrue
      @XpaceTrue 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      There's nothing wrong with stories like that. It's all good. Variety makes life more interesting and everyone is entitled to their own tastes. But... this does *not* match with the definition of the HFY (Humans, Fuok Yeah!) genre. And that makes the title of this video pure clickbait. As long as video creators get away with using click-baity titles without complaint or consequence, the more often it happens... and the more *frustrating* it becomes for *everyone* to find the type of content viewers want.

    • @armadillotoe
      @armadillotoe 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      I would like a story in which humans are the best and worst. Reality is too complicated it seems.
      I would also enjoy a story with an average human, not a genetically enhanced, ex-supersoldier

    • @RobertStewart-i3m
      @RobertStewart-i3m หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@armadillotoe How about a fast food worker? Goes all French fries scooper on someone

  • @bigal2876
    @bigal2876 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I would love to have a screen saver with all these pictures, or lock screens.

  • @leralu198525
    @leralu198525 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    "I remain here because I choose to, You remain alive because i choose, am I understood?" pure effing fire line

    • @gwolfstahl
      @gwolfstahl หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Is his human partner - Masterchief?! 😮

  • @benmaxwell3808
    @benmaxwell3808 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Ensigns do not out rank captains

    • @kingbillycokebottle5484
      @kingbillycokebottle5484 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Maybe captain becomes a non commissioned rank, like tacking it above WO1.

  • @michaelturner3922
    @michaelturner3922 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    The only thing about ALL of these stories is NOBODY proof listens or edits just completely reliant on the AI to do all the work maybe lack of motivation beyond pumping out more "content" I mean the simplist thing or really the most obvious upgrade to put "you" above the rest would be proof read/listen and a simple edit.

    • @TheDingo80
      @TheDingo80 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Thank you! Glad someone else had the same observation I did.

    • @XpaceTrue
      @XpaceTrue 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      I agree. Channels like this automate or at least streamline their creation process so it happens quickly, cheaply and with little effort. It's all about the algorithm, views and ad revenue. At least this channels gives credit and links the story. Many channels don't even bother doing that much. Some creators even release content on multiple accounts in case they get too many strikes or otherwise shut down.

  • @maryy1370
    @maryy1370 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

    The basic logic of Zate is incredibly faulty. I'm only at 1:10:00 and - even with real world bias - I can think of a completely different scenario.
    Zate says that "humans" originate from the same system, despite that seeming impossible?
    Scenario: Elyrians created the humans as weapons of war and treated them as complete fodder. Eventually, humans escaped their control and struck back (Skynet style). The Elyrians couldn't win against them and decided to flee the system to try to escape.
    No one likes admitting that they did abominable things, so the elyrians themselves deleted the information on humans, maybe to make themselves look innocent in the event. Afterall, most people are more sympathetic to refugees rather than war criminals.
    Later, *some* elyrians - knowingly or unknowingly - either gave the Core information on humans or maybe the Core found mentions of them in data files the elyrians had missed destroying? Maybe they were able to find some humans that had been left in cold storage and the Core used them sparingly as a covert ops team - but didn't know how to make more. That would explain why the Core, despite apparently having had *some* Humans to do missions, are not using them NOW even with there being a succession and cold war.
    That would explain why the Core wants so much resources and what their goal is: they're trying to recreate humans. The captain even SAID that the Core was trying to find a way to create an easy source of soldiers/war fodder.
    The elyrians could have done as much as they could to hide their actions and have deliberately made sure that no new generations knew about their species crimes. And after the Core found out about Humans, I can see them doing their best to destroy all other data about them in order to monopolize the knowledge and try to recreate them in secret. This also explains why some elyrians are recruited to the Inner Ring. Who else would you get to work on recreating humans other than the ones who had originally made them?
    This makes a heck of a lot more sense than thinking that Humans (a people created to be little more than living weapons and who have no distinct society or independence) somehow - what, destroyed the elysians, then got ahead of them and became the Core and established a whole hidden civilization BEFORE the elyrians got there?
    If humans had any kind of willing presence in the Core, there would be more of them. If there were more of them, then this Outer Frontier could never have broken off.
    Zate is an idiot. So much for them being smart or logical.
    Yes, that's not how the story goes (since I've now gotten further), but it's a good possible scenario.

    • @ronniebentley5847
      @ronniebentley5847 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Damn you not have a real life?

    • @maryy1370
      @maryy1370 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      @@ronniebentley5847 I weep at the state of school systems that have turned people off of comprehensive thinking.

    • @lordomacron3719
      @lordomacron3719 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      That’s the danger of pure logic. Faulty premises lead to false conclusions.

    • @sandwiches-o3f
      @sandwiches-o3f หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@maryy1370When I was in school, I was too busy doing real work to write a thesis about a silly little story on youtube 😂😂😂

    • @Fluffy2Buffy
      @Fluffy2Buffy หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yet here you are...​@@sandwiches-o3f

  • @Agg1E91
    @Agg1E91 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    "inWEgo crew!" That is certainly one way to pronounce it.

  • @davidturner4824
    @davidturner4824 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Great story, very interesting. Wonder what happened to Humans like us and our civilization?

  • @adarkwind4712
    @adarkwind4712 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    "He'll come willingly"
    . . . . Yeah . . . . . F*** that.

  • @imperatorja
    @imperatorja 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +23

    Any resemblance to Master Chiff and Cortona is not intentional

    • @adarkwind4712
      @adarkwind4712 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Lol

    • @NM-tl6pe
      @NM-tl6pe หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      When you order Master Chief from Temu.

    • @mistercomment1622
      @mistercomment1622 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

      This happens in a lot of SciFi stories

    • @iamanidiot8624
      @iamanidiot8624 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Was looking for this comment 😂

  • @scinanisern9845
    @scinanisern9845 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    So then, the only thing accomplished by going to that world was getting threatened, tracked, hacked and ripped apart to escape it? Complete waste of time. They send out all kinds of search teams to find human and then it turns out they know where lots of humans are and when this one arrives they harass him tag him and send him on his way??? Jeez.
    In the beginning... the end.

  • @heraldbriones9740
    @heraldbriones9740 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I can't imagine what elyrian specie's looks like in the visual looks human but what actually looks like

  • @atlasjunky7677
    @atlasjunky7677 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Lol the beginning where he sort of just punches it and they act like it was a planned thing not a impulse thing lol

  • @ernestmac13
    @ernestmac13 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    The mosern looking bridge he was on; is the Bay Bridge, which connects the cities of Oakland, Treasure Island, and Sam Francisco. The Bay Bridhe is actually two bridges connected by an island, via a tunnel that goes through the island. I was born and raised on the largest island inside the San Francisco Bay, called Alameda which used to be home to Alameda Naval Air Station, which is still being reincorporated. I hope to move back to Alameda; it's about 2 miles wide and 4 miles long, has some 80,000 residents, and is a great place to live.

  • @tonycapri2608
    @tonycapri2608 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Lizra seems like a small squirrel or something, but we still get pretty women pictures!!! Also why the lists of names - havent got the memo??

  • @tamatirogerson6421
    @tamatirogerson6421 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Brilliant 😸👌 thank u so much 😸 more of this story plzzzzz!! 1 in 10 hfy stories are awesome, the rest are lazily written plotless crap

  • @lunarwrase
    @lunarwrase 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

    Did human just become James Earle Jones?

    • @DEATH-THE-GOAT
      @DEATH-THE-GOAT 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Yes, you did

    • @RobertStewart-i3m
      @RobertStewart-i3m หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      ​@@DEATH-THE-GOAT And Vader is in the house!

  • @ricosuave4465
    @ricosuave4465 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

    I love that Tic-Tac is voiced by the voice of Ben Shapiro! LOL

  • @seventhson27
    @seventhson27 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    IT REALLY IRRITATES ME when I get interewsted in these stories. Then just get left twisting in the wind.

  • @sandrarruhl492
    @sandrarruhl492 28 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    What universe does an ensign out rank a captain? One where the ensign is so loyal to their orders they must be counter ordered by even higher BRASS. Remember, they were biologically modified.

  • @qRevengerr
    @qRevengerr หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    More parts coming up? I sa that the op had more chapters made and this storyline is amazing!

  • @ventusvero4484
    @ventusvero4484 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    The valley girl voice kills me 2:30, she sounds so annoyed.

  • @SeducingJackel
    @SeducingJackel 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I enjoyed this one, very good, would have been more immersive if it wasn't for the characters voices changing multiple times, a little continuity would go along way. I have more questions.. is there, will there be more?
    Thanks for the story!

  • @mistercomment1622
    @mistercomment1622 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Apple a Banana Orange? WTF?

  • @charlespipes9288
    @charlespipes9288 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I bet it was the "brown coats"

  • @RJ-zi8hw
    @RJ-zi8hw หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Story is good so far but the AI keeps changing the voice of the human and it’s a bit confusing.

  • @WinterWeaver
    @WinterWeaver 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    "Apple a Banana Orange"

  • @etherealpast3984
    @etherealpast3984 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I love stories like this and it's frustrating that words, punctuation, and grammar are wrong. It takes you out of the immersion. I volunteer myself as a potential voice actor. Male, deep, and magnetic. Not unpleasant to listen to and better at reading than writing. Id love to read some stories like this to those who are willing to listen.

  • @kaymynkaliel4141
    @kaymynkaliel4141 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I was wondering how you were able to generate multiple voices and have them in sync to create a conversation that almost sounds real. If you can please explain the process of doing this would really help me out.

  • @moanawalters945
    @moanawalters945 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Came down

  • @AliceGutierrez-x4u
    @AliceGutierrez-x4u 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Taylor Kevin Lewis Cynthia Lopez Anthony

  • @halo12390
    @halo12390 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Them aliens sound sus

  • @01100101011100100111
    @01100101011100100111 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    "A Short Sci-Fi Story"
    two hours and forty minutes long
    How long would a Medium Sci-Fi Story be, then?

    • @StrangeUncle01
      @StrangeUncle01 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Hundred or less hours. Some of the stuff r/HFY runs to hundreds of pages of 40,000 word long chapters.

    • @lostinthought38
      @lostinthought38 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      There's a really good one I sat through a few months back, the new species or something and it was around 8 hours or so if I remember 😂 im waiting on the next chapter so probably another 8 hours to complete 😀

    • @RobertStewart-i3m
      @RobertStewart-i3m หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@lostinthought38 Sounds good. Can you give more info so I can find it?

  • @scinanisern9845
    @scinanisern9845 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Apple a banana orange???

  • @NguyễnAnh-w9x
    @NguyễnAnh-w9x 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

  • @keithfr1
    @keithfr1 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Did they steal gould,from stargate

    • @armadillotoe
      @armadillotoe 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      And Darth from star wars.

    • @HyperionStudios
      @HyperionStudios 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Don't forget Halo

    • @RobertStewart-i3m
      @RobertStewart-i3m หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@armadillotoe Yeah Darth metal box?

  • @jorgebarrientos7726
    @jorgebarrientos7726 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Its weird hearing teryl rothery as an AIs voice

  • @robertmccracken6930
    @robertmccracken6930 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    In what universe does an ensign out rank a Captain? Lost me right there not going any further. That ruined the whole thing

  • @kingbillycokebottle5484
    @kingbillycokebottle5484 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Did anyone notice chapter two? THE ALIENS BECAME SOUTHERN! YEEEEEEEEEE BOYYAHH! WE ARE SO BACK! SPACE CONFEDERACY FOREVER!

    • @kingbillycokebottle5484
      @kingbillycokebottle5484 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I hates de space yankee, I hates de space union and I hates de space eagle!
      Tune of dixie
      Oh way out there in the outer stations
      lesser races all know their places.
      Sing along, and carry on
      March along, to space dixie
      For in the outer reaches
      Girls as sweet as peaches
      Come along and take us to the merry beaches
      Come along come along sing along t'space Dixie.
      Oh I was I was in Dixie
      In space! In space!
      Where we're the race that owns the place
      In space! In space!
      Space Dixie.
      Away away away out back space Dixie!!!

  • @MillDonald-g3p
    @MillDonald-g3p 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Garcia Matthew Smith Brenda Brown Angela

  • @cephalonrevan2546
    @cephalonrevan2546 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Apple a banana orange!

  • @bigtingz8440
    @bigtingz8440 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Where can I find the rest of the story ?

  • @PrimalsTrucking
    @PrimalsTrucking หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Is the human a spartan? 😂

  • @genergoebel
    @genergoebel 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Will there be more?

  • @DuyKhanh-rt4gn
    @DuyKhanh-rt4gn 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    hay wa

  • @akoni024
    @akoni024 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Part 12?

  • @JesseBurtone
    @JesseBurtone 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hernandez Jose Lewis Shirley Robinson Linda

  • @whitehazegruntz250
    @whitehazegruntz250 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    21:20 they where not also unknowingly ejected sense the other set knowingly was. How u worded it means both sides didnt know and thats your slip up . As a viewer its my job to correct u sense u can get paid from adds u should be corrected

  • @blakekratzer407
    @blakekratzer407 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The audio sounds like it was mixed by Tommy Wiseau

  • @lhvikingp2436
    @lhvikingp2436 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Part 12??

  • @HoanNguyen-uc9zk
    @HoanNguyen-uc9zk 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    OK . Thanks

  • @ihspstanktribe
    @ihspstanktribe หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ok, im seriously hating Zate right now.

  • @dylanlarson278
    @dylanlarson278 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Why does the term apple banana orange keep popping up?

  • @VictoriaCruz-f7r
    @VictoriaCruz-f7r 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lee Lisa Jones Cynthia Taylor Scott

  • @XnndjehdhkNxndjhds
    @XnndjehdhkNxndjhds 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Gonzalez Carol Clark Elizabeth Clark Michael

  • @DarrellHolmes-q3u
    @DarrellHolmes-q3u 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Davis Lisa Rodriguez Cynthia Clark Carol

  • @dragonshoarddesign3094
    @dragonshoarddesign3094 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Some of the a I voices you used were gsome of them are very robotic and don't know how to read

  • @NaimSonkan
    @NaimSonkan 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Davis Daniel Hernandez Daniel Martin Jessica

  • @HubbardKirk
    @HubbardKirk 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Martinez Barbara Davis Barbara Davis Carol

  • @kangdeplo5179
    @kangdeplo5179 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ok

  • @dutchboy9273
    @dutchboy9273 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    😢. Lousy AI ruined the story

  • @armadillotoe
    @armadillotoe 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I think it is a shame that soon AI will make intellectual study, imagination, and the self-discipline to learn obsolete.

  • @archivis
    @archivis 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    O(

  • @Kong840
    @Kong840 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    God that A.I. is awful. Seemed interesting but couldn’t get past the sound. Just pay the couple hundred bucks to have someone read it.

  • @leyphon7566
    @leyphon7566 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Honestly getting tired of the ai voices. Would rather a real person read it but without seeing that person's face constantly like in a lot of other stories on yt.

    • @joelceda3500
      @joelceda3500 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Try Starbound HFY, they read and voice-act the stories and the stories themselves are in my understanding human-written. Or at least human-posted. One of the better channels around.

  • @richardlindley2821
    @richardlindley2821 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Story good. The flip flop of different voices playing the same character is horrible, absolutely ruined it.

    • @richardlindley2821
      @richardlindley2821 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Also voices completely not matching a character too, ruined it. But still, good story.

  • @mistbehaved185
    @mistbehaved185 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The ai story teller here is bad...

  • @luxembourg7653
    @luxembourg7653 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Terrible Siri and LA brat voices 👎

  • @sproket168
    @sproket168 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Shit

  • @charleslamontagne983
    @charleslamontagne983 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This story is pathetic

  • @williamderro9600
    @williamderro9600 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Voice actors are terrible

  • @GamezGlitchZ
    @GamezGlitchZ หลายเดือนก่อน

    They found MasterChief 😂

  • @DrGeoffreyReed
    @DrGeoffreyReed หลายเดือนก่อน

    ...glacing...? AI sucks

  • @AdriannaGarlock-x5q
    @AdriannaGarlock-x5q 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Harris Mary Perez David Jones Christopher

  • @AnthonyCole-j7q
    @AnthonyCole-j7q 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Wilson Charles Martinez Carol Anderson Carol

  • @VincentTab-r2g
    @VincentTab-r2g หลายเดือนก่อน

    Young Shirley Moore Lisa Rodriguez Sharon