Thank you for continuing the voyages that started so long ago. Never thought I would get this experience again in 2023. Outstanding work. Congratulations to cast and crew!
@@avalonuniverse6327 I've been impressed by all of your episodes. That's why I was surprised and disappointed by the HUGE flaw in temporal mechanics logic.....until the ending. Beautifully done! My only criticism is that the words and lip movements didn't sync when the Ganali first started speaking. That was only for the first sentence or two. But you didn't go back and correct this with a reshoot.
@@mitros4 The momentary loss of sync was, no doubt, a consequence of the two communications system (Federation and Ganali) completing the transmission and translation protocol negotiations that would be necessary for two comm systems, alien to each other, to permit communications to take place between the two crews. Of course. That's it. ;-) Beyond that, I've not had time to review the plot sequence, which I would like to do as I did not catch how the plot resolved (surprise!) the way it did. Would you be able and willing to sort this out for me? Thank you.
Ah ha the Legend that is Mr Vic Minogna has put his magic in this i thought it did it had that feel ....and his set i guess!!!.....Well done to all brilliant!!
I was very grateful to be asked to be a part of this. The friendship I have formed with Ray Tesi is incredibly important to me. He's a man working hard to keep a dream alive by creating Neutral Zone Studios. He's doing it for the entire fan film community. It's an honor to be a part of that mission!
Well done, everyone! Thanks for being in this project. It took time, but we managed to get this one out, pandemic delays notwithstanding! Thank you all again. ❤❤
There is just something about the adventure to be had in the TOS era that makes it the most enjoyable for fan films. Probably having high quality sets doesn't hurt either.
That was pretty good. I found this in the historical archives and I am making this available to my entire crew. Captain D Robert Towne, Commander of USS Lysander, NCC-540.
Outstanding job all the way around. Great story, acting, and special effects. Congratulations to team Avalon and Neutral Zone Studios on another fantastic production.
Absolutely first rate!!! I really enjoyed it. It blew me away when I saw the time scout ships! I have been searching for 2 years for the shots I need for our film. I'm dying to get a teaser reel done so we can raise funds to come back to Kingsland and Neutral Zone studios and make a fan film. I need an intro with the scout timeship coming through the rift and circling the USS Yorktown (TOS era like yours). The Yorktown tries to evade as the scoutship circles, drops the shields around the hanger bay and lands inside. Next shot for later of the Wells class timeship ripping open the rift and coming through, coming nose to nose with the Yorktown. I love what ya'll did. It was a great story, great acting, and great cinematography! Aces all around!
Outstanding! You people keep delivering quality Star Trek episodes of stellar caliber! Keep up the phenomenal work. I think you know it is greatly appreciated.
Excellent work by all involved, acting was good, direction and editing excellent, costuming ON POINT! Visual effects ON POINT. But most of all, the story. . . . .pure classic TOS use of allegory. This is what Star Trek is all about. Keep up the great work!!
Agreed. He is one of the most convincing actors in a captain role, even including the various professional series. It may help that Vic was the director. He is really the best director in the ST universe for the consistency of form and format, amateur or professional. Who wrote this script. I missed that credit. One of the best stories I've seen in the ST context.
A very pretty picture of what happens when someone starts messing with timelines... I admit expecting a different solution to Commander Quinn's dilemma and so the solution presented surprised me. Well done!
Pretty solid story. Only one real critique is for the shuttle shots it would of helped for the actors to have a practical object to rest their hands on. Hover hands, and gripping nothing at the end that didn't match up with the CG. The 60's era ships, lighting and feel was pretty spot on. Had to check and yup Scotty did theorize about trans-warp nice nugget of lore there.
The war was always part of the normal timeline, and the Federation refused to help as they haven't made first contact yet. So, time was changed and the Federation made an early contact and hence was able to provide protection.
Not only that, but thanks to the early contact and intervention to prevent the war, Jilan doesn't need to steal a time ship and is instead recruited to become an agent.
WHAT A SUPERB ACTING, DIRECTING, PRODUCTION THIS EPISODE WAS . EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS EPISODE WAS EXCEPTIONAL LOVED THE CHARACTERS, SETS, DIALOGUE IT WAS FLAWLESS REMINDS ME OF THOSE ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL AND FABULOUS STAR TREK CONTINUES EPISODES. OH I FORGOT THE MUSIC FIT PERFECTLY INTO THE STORY!!GARY BAILEY KING OF DARKNESS
Greetings from sector 001, @avalonuniverse6327, I trust that you are all well. Many thanks for your lovingly crafted AND CORRECT (as per the Roddenberry Timeline)visual log. I would like to inquire about any other forays into the "Mirror Universe"-post NCC-1701 period.❤
Ohh my god I just got addicted to you guys the last few months, your storytelling is amazing! and I like your creative chances you take, they really work well
Don Horan wrote a top notch science fiction script and story. Refreshing. Vic is a great director and xan always get amazing performances that feel right for the context. All the actors were great, especially the senior command on the Constitution. The portrayal of the Captain was the believable best I've seen in decades.
Another well acted, well written & scripted, work of excellence & morals. Avalon Universe has again outdone & outperformed above & beyond!! Thank you all for a beautifully done episode!! More please
This was so jacked up! I loved it!!!! There are times fan made things can be really, to some, not so good, but for others great. With this in mind I’m very open to all types of fan material. Ok about this gem. Not gonna spoil it, but I was definitely not expecting most of it. Wow! Good acting, costumes, and well everything. For an old fart like myself, I believe Star Trek is probably the best platform to tell countless stories from one episode to several episodes like 1-3, or 1-100, then on to movies. It takes time to plan, write the story, build the main sets, location….basically it takes dedicated people who love to come together and make something special for all to enjoy. From a favorite character to hated or best acting. Music choice to set the mood. This was blended in nicely. It all fit. It drove all the scenes, but it was so seriously jacked up on Trek-roids I just had to say it….. This was really good. Another Trek Gem to save-n-share. Best Wishes to all involved and I hope to see more in the future.❤💐✌️
At 00:50 I just don't feel her urgency and excitement at the thought of maybe being hit and defending herself and her ship. She just doesnt seem natural, as if shes never been in anything exciting or dangerous, or anything close to being hurt. However, other scenes i feel are genuine and very well done. I applaud this fan edit. Thank you for it.
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tbh I thought it was pretty decent
@@noidont8149 Thank you!
@@avalonuniverse6327 your welcome!
Fine story, good acting, outstanding visuals.
I can't imagine rude comments on this film. It was really engaging with extremely convincing acting as well as a very good surprise bow at the end.
To the cast and crew that made this startrek TH-cam movie......thank you.........this is startrek at it's best 😁👍👍👍👍minds open 🤔??????
This is definitely one of the most well-thought-out fan episodes of Star Trek I’ve ever seen 🖖
I love how everything looks. The visuals are amazing and the cast feels Star Trek
The Amazon Universe Continues To Amaze The Mind!!!! May You Continue To Live Long & Prosper.
Thank you! I really appreciate that indeed!
Thank you for continuing the voyages that started so long ago. Never thought I would get this experience again in 2023. Outstanding work. Congratulations to cast and crew!
A very well written story and very well produced. Avalon Universe does it again!
Thank you! The film was a collaboration with Neutral Zone Studios and directed by Vic Mignogna!
@@avalonuniverse6327 thank you sooo much for having correctly fitting costumes..lolol
@@avalonuniverse6327 I've been impressed by all of your episodes. That's why I was surprised and disappointed by the HUGE flaw in temporal mechanics logic.....until the ending. Beautifully done!
My only criticism is that the words and lip movements didn't sync when the Ganali first started speaking. That was only for the first sentence or two. But you didn't go back and correct this with a reshoot.
@@mitros4 The momentary loss of sync was, no doubt, a consequence of the two communications system (Federation and Ganali) completing the transmission and translation protocol negotiations that would be necessary for two comm systems, alien to each other, to permit communications to take place between the two crews. Of course. That's it. ;-)
Beyond that, I've not had time to review the plot sequence, which I would like to do as I did not catch how the plot resolved (surprise!) the way it did. Would you be able and willing to sort this out for me? Thank you.
@@avalonuniverse6327 YOU GUYS ROCK!!
Ah ha the Legend that is Mr Vic Minogna has put his magic in this i thought it did it had that feel ....and his set i guess!!!.....Well done to all brilliant!!
I was very grateful to be asked to be a part of this. The friendship I have formed with Ray Tesi is incredibly important to me. He's a man working hard to keep a dream alive by creating Neutral Zone Studios. He's doing it for the entire fan film community. It's an honor to be a part of that mission!
I love the avalon universe! It adds to the cannon in ways i doubt Paramount will ever tread. Excellent job! I'm looking forward to the next one!
One of the better fan produced episodes. War and plague always foster innovation and progress. Earth history shows this simple fact.
I love this. Well done for a fan film ! Plays like a real Star Trek episode like it should be done. Bravo !!
Just AWESOME!!! This is the Star Trek adventures I enjoy watching.
Debate over what is 'ethical' from different viewpoints. THIS is Star Trek.
Star Trek was always at its best when it made us ask questions, and address the human condition.
Yet another incredible story brought by Avalon. Fantastic as always. 👏👏👏👏👏🖖
Thank you so much!
Well done, everyone! Thanks for being in this project. It took time, but we managed to get this one out, pandemic delays notwithstanding! Thank you all again. ❤❤
This was great episode - enjoyed the acting, sets, special effects and story.
Thanks for making and posting.
There is just something about the adventure to be had in the TOS era that makes it the most enjoyable for fan films. Probably having high quality sets doesn't hurt either.
Nailed the TOS Star Trek vibe! Camera techniques, sets, lighting, music...and good acting too. Well done Avalon!
Thanks Mr. Trek! We appreciate you watching our films!
This is a really good production. Live Long and Prosper
Well Done, Thanks to all involved, enjoyed it
Thank you Jeff!
Great Episode and story line. Thank you Avalon Universe
Amazing the production values we see in fan films these days.
Thank you Emsley!
That was pretty good. I found this in the historical archives and I am making this available to my entire crew. Captain D Robert Towne, Commander of USS Lysander, NCC-540.
Qapla!! Always enjoy your work..keep the faith alive !!
I really appreciate that Jim!
Well done. A timely story in the spirit of TOS. ❤ the TOS look!
Fantastic job every one excellent script and directing enjoy every second, glad to see Vic Mignogna still involved with this baby.
Thank you Robert!
Outstanding job all the way around. Great story, acting, and special effects. Congratulations to team Avalon and Neutral Zone Studios on another fantastic production.
You're up next Lezlie! on July 28th!
This was great! I loved the acting and the twist, haha. Also love the shoutout to T'Pol!
Absolutely first rate!!! I really enjoyed it. It blew me away when I saw the time scout ships! I have been searching for 2 years for the shots I need for our film. I'm dying to get a teaser reel done so we can raise funds to come back to Kingsland and Neutral Zone studios and make a fan film. I need an intro with the scout timeship coming through the rift and circling the USS Yorktown (TOS era like yours). The Yorktown tries to evade as the scoutship circles, drops the shields around the hanger bay and lands inside. Next shot for later of the Wells class timeship ripping open the rift and coming through, coming nose to nose with the Yorktown. I love what ya'll did. It was a great story, great acting, and great cinematography! Aces all around!
this is cool beyond words keep up the good work
The true feel of TOS! Outstanding. Actors were off the hook!!!
Thank you so much!
Outstanding! You people keep delivering quality Star Trek episodes of stellar caliber! Keep up the phenomenal work. I think you know it is greatly appreciated.
Thank you Basil!
Oh bravo, mon captain!! Well done!
Thank you!
Awesome story the acting was spot on from everyone, the CGI was excellent in short an amazing episode.
Amazing story and the effects were wonderful keep up the great work.
well done, good writting !
Awesome story written
Fun and enjoyable. Looking forward to more from all concerned.
The music from TOS is maybe the best ever written for a scripted series.
This was done very well, good job to all involved. Thank you 😊
Great story. Thanks!
what a great episode, loved it, everything was Fantastic
Excellent work by all involved, acting was good, direction and editing excellent, costuming ON POINT! Visual effects ON POINT. But most of all, the story. . . . .pure classic TOS use of allegory. This is what Star Trek is all about. Keep up the great work!!
Thank you so much for your kind words! It really means a lot!
@@avalonuniverse6327 Your very welcome and THANK YOU for all the outstanding work you all do!
Fascinating, they've brought Covid into Star Trek world.
No worries. Only the vaccinated are the only ones affected. Those who refused the vaccine actually survived. Just like this new virus of covid.
That was awesome!!
Hope to see more time travel adventures of Quinn and ja'lon, now that their a team
An excellent tale! The solution to the dilemma was well done.
Thank you CW!
This story looks good to me
Well done to all involved.
Directed by Vic Mignogna! Awesome!
Captain was amazing. Need him on more!
He IS pretty cool!!
Thank you so much! That's so kind.
Agreed. He is one of the most convincing actors in a captain role, even including the various professional series.
It may help that Vic was the director. He is really the best director in the ST universe for the consistency of form and format, amateur or professional.
Who wrote this script. I missed that credit. One of the best stories I've seen in the ST context.
@@STho205 The script was written by Don Horran
A very pretty picture of what happens when someone starts messing with timelines... I admit expecting a different solution to Commander Quinn's dilemma and so the solution presented surprised me. Well done!
Absolutely awesome story well done ❤🌹❤👍👍👍👍👍
This was very well done, would be good to see more of Captain Chandler. The actor was really good.
Thanks so much!
Bloody good stuff!! loved the outfits of the future too.
Thrilling. That was.. absolutely thrilling. Great job everyone, really well done 👏
Good twist to an obvious storyline. I thought she was alone in her timeship.
Excellent, and a fantastic ending :) Hats off to the entire team :)
Very Star Trek. Good one.😄👍🏾
Pretty solid story. Only one real critique is for the shuttle shots it would of helped for the actors to have a practical object to rest their hands on. Hover hands, and gripping nothing at the end that didn't match up with the CG. The 60's era ships, lighting and feel was pretty spot on. Had to check and yup Scotty did theorize about trans-warp nice nugget of lore there.
Well done again, you all knocked it out of the park...Thank you for your hard work....
That was really good, I’m bit confused at the end of the story but I loved it nonetheless
The war was always part of the normal timeline, and the Federation refused to help as they haven't made first contact yet. So, time was changed and the Federation made an early contact and hence was able to provide protection.
Not only that, but thanks to the early contact and intervention to prevent the war, Jilan doesn't need to steal a time ship and is instead recruited to become an agent.
WHAT A SUPERB ACTING, DIRECTING, PRODUCTION THIS EPISODE WAS . EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS EPISODE WAS EXCEPTIONAL LOVED THE CHARACTERS, SETS, DIALOGUE IT WAS FLAWLESS REMINDS ME OF THOSE ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL AND FABULOUS STAR TREK CONTINUES EPISODES. OH I FORGOT THE MUSIC FIT PERFECTLY INTO THE STORY!!GARY BAILEY KING OF DARKNESS
Definitely a continues feel. It was shot on their sets, and directed by Vic.
THAT WOULD DO IT, STILL YOUR CREW IN ITSELF WERE ALL FANTASTIC ACTORS AND ACTRESSES AND I AM AT AWE OF THEM ALL!!GARY BAILEY KING OF DARKNESS
@@avalonuniverse6327
The director played James Kirk in continues.
A Superb Job Indeed@@avalonuniverse6327 : you folks are AMAZING!!!
Very enjoyable.
Good one! Thanks!
Brilliant show and no red shirt was harmed in the making of this episode 😅
I’m loving this production!!!❤
This seems pretty good. And by the way 161, as in 161 comments is divisible by 7.
Greetings from sector 001, @avalonuniverse6327, I trust that you are all well. Many thanks for your lovingly crafted AND CORRECT (as per the Roddenberry Timeline)visual log. I would like to inquire about any other forays into the "Mirror Universe"-post NCC-1701 period.❤
What a great episode!!! Thinking about that pros and cons will make my day.
Thank you!
You have to wonder how the virus was "accidentally released during a flyby". Another well done episode of Tales From The Neutral Zone.
Fantastic! Loved it! I'm sharing the Trek out of this one!
Great episode well done
Thank you Gary!
I would recommend general court martials for both of those characters, if I was in Star Fleet that is.
WELL Done....Hot Damn that's some good Star Trek
Ohh my god I just got addicted to you guys the last few months, your storytelling is amazing! and I like your creative chances you take, they really work well
Thank you for watching our films! I'm glad that you like them!
That was so cool. Well done everyone, well done!!
This is awesome!! Great job!!
Don Horan wrote a top notch science fiction script and story. Refreshing.
Vic is a great director and xan always get amazing performances that feel right for the context.
All the actors were great, especially the senior command on the Constitution. The portrayal of the Captain was the believable best I've seen in decades.
Why, thank you!
that was an awesome story! thank you 🙂
Great Job!!!😊
Another well acted, well written & scripted, work of excellence & morals. Avalon Universe has again outdone & outperformed above & beyond!! Thank you all for a beautifully done episode!! More please
Thank you! The film was a collaboration with our friends at Neutral Zone studios. They did so much to make this film what it is!
@@avalonuniverse6327 the Time Ship shuttle is kind of cute😁😁🥰🥰!!
This was good.
Awesome actor's thank you.
The de facto forced world wide vaccination aside - a clear violation of the rule of non-interference; this is well sorted and entertaining. Thanks.)
Nicely Done, Bravo Zulu!
Thank you Wright!
Wibbly wobbly...
Best I have seen in years ! Well Done.😀👍
As always, these fan films continue to get better and better. Plus that ending was not something I expected.
Nice!!!
Gorgeous, ace
That was a pretty good plot line and outcome. Entertaining, thank you!
Thank you for watching our film!
Good job. Always amazes me the special effects that can be done by smaller producers these days.
This was excellent! A really good story! Well Done!
Well done. I was surprised by the twist. Didn't really understand how, but not saying anything. Don't want to spoil for viewers.
impressive
I'm pleased, this was STAR TREK, not the Abomination that's being written and produced by CBS...
Very good!
This was so jacked up! I loved it!!!! There are times fan made things can be really, to some, not so good, but for others great. With this in mind I’m very open to all types of fan material.
Ok about this gem. Not gonna spoil it, but I was definitely not expecting most of it. Wow! Good acting, costumes, and well everything. For an old fart like myself, I believe Star Trek is probably the best platform to tell countless stories from one episode to several episodes like 1-3, or 1-100, then on to movies.
It takes time to plan, write the story, build the main sets, location….basically it takes dedicated people who love to come together and make something special for all to enjoy. From a favorite character to hated or best acting. Music choice to set the mood. This was blended in nicely. It all fit. It drove all the scenes, but it was so seriously jacked up on Trek-roids I just had to say it…..
This was really good. Another Trek Gem to save-n-share.
Best Wishes to all involved and I hope to see more in the future.❤💐✌️
At 00:50 I just don't feel her urgency and excitement at the thought of maybe being hit and defending herself and her ship. She just doesnt seem natural, as if shes never been in anything exciting or dangerous, or anything close to being hurt. However, other scenes i feel are genuine and very well done. I applaud this fan edit. Thank you for it.