[Ep 1] RWBY might need a rewrite... so i did it || Hypothetical RWBY reboot

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  • @sunnysunsins
    @sunnysunsins  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Please turn on the closed-captions, because istg this is unwatchable without them... Feel free to roast me for it
    Also feel free to tell me what i might need to improve for next uploads. Are the "Sunmotes" on the side too distracting? Should i keep them for intros-outros only? Should i add background music? Should i keep adding bloopers? Am i yapping too much- well, this one can't be fixed i'm afraid.

    • @CerberusGoosen
      @CerberusGoosen 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Honestly, I didn't feel a need to use CCs. Your enunciation seemed fine to me. Was able to perfectly track everything you said.

  • @CelticPhoenix
    @CelticPhoenix 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

    I'll try to keep an eye on this (TH-cam notifications willing)! I'm always excited to see more fans taking their stabs at rewriting RWBY, especially having the bravery to call out the early Volumes for their notable flaws! You've also got a very lovely art style, makes for a very pleasant viewing experience. I can't wait to see what you come up with!

  • @mariapazgonzalezlesme
    @mariapazgonzalezlesme 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    You cooked a whole restaurant with this soft rewriting / AU / ideas. Kudos!
    A thing that FNDM is not fully getting is that RWBY even during his early chapters were never that good to begin with, a while Beacon Era is indeed chill to enjoy, it wasn't that well-developed, honestly, the fact that Beacon Academy could be used as tool of worldbuilding feels like a waste.
    I also loved that you gave Blake a pair of shades and shawl (?), in honestly shows how much is hiding her identity.
    Extra words; the Sunmotes are funny to watch, it shows how much expressive you are! And no, don't add background music it could be distracting.

    • @demonic_myst4503
      @demonic_myst4503 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Wasnt that well developed
      Umm and yang going from season 4 lesrning nit to run hesd first to season 7 “if u dont stand and fight a unwinable battle u a coward” Is “good development”

  • @genericartist3553
    @genericartist3553 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I can't wait to see what you've done with the story! I'm especially excited to see what you will do with WTCH especially Tyrian! If I was to personally redesign him I would make him more of an anthropomorphic Scorpion than just a man with a tail, since I like anthropology animals (especially anthro bugs/arachnids) better than human characters.
    I'd personally write Tyrian as a former Schnee Dust Company slave who developed Sadistic and Masochistic tendencies to cope with the abuse he probably suffered, but killing his abusive master, unlocking his semblance, and escaping from the mines. He then would meet Salem who he realises is the Witch from the legends he read and idolised growing up, maybe relating to how the world demonises them both or something, leading to him becoming her loyal worshipping follower. Maybe we could also relate his fairytale origin of 'The Scorpion and The Frog' where he could put up the mask of insanity since he could believe that's 'just his nature' like the Scorpion believes stinging is 'just his nature'. This could give him beef with Blake because she was a part of the White Fang and he could personally hate the White Fang because maybe the Schnee Dust Company used them as an excuse to treat their workers unethically and horrid, and also be a Scape goat for Racists to treat Faunus badly, which could make Blake reevaluate her previous beliefs about the White Fang. He could hate Weiss because she's a Schnee and daughter to the man who abused him for so long and caused his descent into 'madness', we could have a scene where his coat and shirt-thing get torn of in a fight with Weiss and reveal 'SDC' along with many scars adorning his back. Seeing this could make Weiss reassess what her family has done to the Faunus and how her family has ruined many Faunus' lives, and make her even more motivated to defy her family's name, maybe even Whitley could get some development and maybe make him set on the goal of using the Schnee's resources to help others, especially the Faunus.
    This backstory could also help with interactions with the other members of WTCH. First of all he and Cinder could have scenes where they both connect with them both being slaves in the past and that they both killed their abusive masters, we could also learn in more detail about what Cinder wants with Salem and how she met her and led Cinder down this dark path. Maybe we could have Watts (instead of being a racist) think that the White Fang were justified in their actions and were the reason Faunus finally got equal rights, since the White Fang where the only reason the Atlas elite listened to the Faunus and finally gave them equality in his mind. This could be the reason why he's a disgraced Atlassian scientist because he had views of the White Fang that Atlas didn't agree with, maybe Jauc could have even manipulated IronWood into thinking he was a Terrorist and led to Watts becoming disgraced and then joining Salem. This could lead to interesting conflicts between them and be better than just 'WATTS IS RACIST' which in my opinion would just be low hanging fruit. Finally, maybe Hazel could be the only person Tyrian would be comfortable with, letting his mask fall around him, instead of being the crazy madman he is around everyone else, he could be his true vulnerable self around Hazel and show his true emotions and maybe they could open with each other (and Hazel would also open up about his trauma to, for the record), maybe Hazel could question Salem and her motivations, but Tyrian could rationalise it since Salem is his Queen so it makes sense that he would rationalise everything with her. Maybe they could realise together that Salem is lying to them and either cause them all to revolt against Salem (which is unlikely), or just have both Tyrian and Hazel leave Salem and Redeem themselves, but to be honest I probably wouldn't want that. Hazel and Tyrian could have on the outside this very interesting dynamic of the crazy, evil one and the calm, somewhat nice one. However, underneath the surface when no-one is around they could genuinely understand and support each other, maybe we could even get some romance out of it (yes I ship them because the concept of the man (Tyrian) who caused the end of the first gay relationship and a massive queer baiting controversy not being straight himself is really funny to me, also I wouldn't kill Hazel, I'd keep him alive).
    But all of this is just a personal head cannon, and I'm sorry this comment is so long, and I'm looking forward to what you have in store.

    • @sunnysunsins
      @sunnysunsins  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Well, some of the points in your take are similar to what i've cooked up, but in a very different way :3

    • @genericartist3553
      @genericartist3553 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@sunnysunsins OH MY GOD THANK YOU!!!!!

    • @genericartist3553
      @genericartist3553 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@sunnysunsins Also oops sorry for accidentally somewhat predicting and spoiling it.

  • @Rose-the-fox
    @Rose-the-fox 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Lmao I love the Russian rant in the middle,, Also waaa your random appearances are so cute 🥺🥺🥺

  • @lrose8986
    @lrose8986 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Amazing video and I love the final illustration!!! :D

  • @Gremmllin
    @Gremmllin 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    You are probably the only creator I can understand lmao

  • @gmain13l
    @gmain13l หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    "Я заменю это на лор потому что я не могу это выговорить" - я на каждом уроке английского :) наверное начинать писать на английском будет странно так что удачи с проектом!

    • @sunnysunsins
      @sunnysunsins  หลายเดือนก่อน

      Та ниче, нормас на любом. Яж-то понимаю

  • @laraprisma6381
    @laraprisma6381 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Personally, I think you were too harsh on the people who criticize and rewrite RWBY. They genuinely love the show and saw potential in the show and just found themselves disappointed with the writing and plot choices the writers made.
    Not one of them has even indicated that they assume what Monty wanted or didn't want, they just don't trust the other writers' judgment because for all they know, they may just be using Monty as a way of deflecting criticism.
    Like claiming that Bumblebee was always planned or that everafter was also planned for the show just to appear 9 volumes later without even being hinted at or mentioned before.
    And also, fans will also eat anything the show gives no matter how bad it is. Both sides can be bad and have issues, but I think fans have a right to criticize the show they have been watching for years.
    But they also shouldn't harass each other. Also, the RWBY fandom is very toxic, doxxing critics and accusing them of homophobia for not liking some of the writers' decisions.
    Overall, not every RWBY fan is bad and not every RWBY critic is bad. Either way, I'm excited about your rewrite.

    • @sunnysunsins
      @sunnysunsins  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      @laraprisma6381 oh i will explain in the following videos why i have that harsh take on "critics", esp in the controversial upcoming ep 4, 5 and 6. Short version: there are some people who do bring up good points (like the bee deflection or faunus plot being a bad parallel), but there are others who take it WAAAAAY too fucking far and legitimately spread misinformation that has been literally disproven more than half a decade ago just because they want to hate the things they hate

  • @robertaslanian2564
    @robertaslanian2564 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I recommend that you show watch Celtic Phenix’s RWBY Rewrite for inspiration. His outtakes are really good and maybe inspirational to you.

    • @sunnysunsins
      @sunnysunsins  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @robertaslanian2564 he's the same guy who came up with "Torchwick Oz host" thing, so no. I shall not.

  • @demonic_myst4503
    @demonic_myst4503 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Im curius where this goes rewriting the early parts doesntfix the series very well unless maybe make less of a character assassination by actualy making iron wood someone who would kill politicians as early as his first apearence so it doesnt feel like they only did it to kill any nuonce of the decition in season 7
    Because damn that shoft
    Season 7s end felt so dumb picking a 1 % chance to save maybe a thousand people by risking a billion peopels lives then instesd of exsploring the moral nuonce of the sitiation in season 8 the writers had a hissy fit people criticised them and made iron wood become a psychopath who kills for fun just to say fuck ypu to anyone wanting a nuonced aproach

    • @sunnysunsins
      @sunnysunsins  หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Honeybun, Ironwood's first appearance was him bringing an entire army with him bc he was scared of losing control of the situation. His another major moment at the end of that same volume was trying to kick Oz out of Vale council and taking over the whole festival, bc he was scared of losing control over situation and couldn't calm the fuck down and wait. And volume 7-8 is him losing control over situation and jumping to drastic measures. The more control lost, the more drastic his measures are. He was always this way, you just decided to ignore it/forget it, because "daddy IW" of volume 4 and early 7.
      And i would ask you to refrain from screeching at the writers in my comment section, this is not a place for it. Just because the story didn't go the way you headcanoned it to go, doesn't mean it's bad or badly written.

    • @demonic_myst4503
      @demonic_myst4503 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@sunnysunsins jumoing from lets save who we can to shooting gov offiicals was not logical progression sorry if u cant handle criticism but the snarky narcissism is real childish

    • @demonic_myst4503
      @demonic_myst4503 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@sunnysunsins you warping things big time be brought defence because he wanted people feel safe sorry but its made clear every time sorry is uou delude self to kiss the writers feet but grow a backbone and learn think for yourself

    • @sunnysunsins
      @sunnysunsins  หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@demonic_myst4503 mmm an ironwood fanboy in the wild, been a whole since i've seen one.
      Sorry sweetie, militaristic propaganda doesn't work on me. Ironwood's entire character is based on overreacting, bringing a nuke to a gunfight. He thinks he's protecting people, but he doesn't think about the implications of his actions and how they actually look like. He's a military man, his every decision is made on show of strength. And Salem herself said - there will be no victory in strength.
      Also, i'm perfectly comfortable calling out shit on any side, be it writers and their plotholes and shoehorns, or you, my sweet soyboys and your terrible takes. Maybe you should take your own advice and think for yourself instead of licking boots of militaristic mindsets

    • @demonic_myst4503
      @demonic_myst4503 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@sunnysunsins you voukd make a drinking game over the delusions u have and misinformation
      1 wanting keep peoppe safe isnt same as fear of loss of control
      2 he never gried kick ozz ofthe council thats comoletly unfounded claim he offered protection for a festival because terorists were active
      3 their was nothing drastic in his decirions before season 7 infact his entire behavior that u may deem drastic was stated ro be corect in season 6 when the entire plot was the main grouo being mad at oszpin fornthe same secrets iron wood wss mad at him over you cant call iron woods issue with ozbins inaction in season 3 as dramatic without criticising season 6 if he dramatic so is team rwby in season 6 and ozbin should never apolagised
      4 childish and low key homophobic asuming any like for iron woof is gay atraction
      5 team rwby diciion caused the fall of atlas and proved iron wood right anyway plus numerically he was right nothing do liking him its basic war stratgy save 9 by losing 1 imstesd of save 1 and kill 9 saving mantle risked billions of lives that iron wood tried to save Rwby rusked the entire world for what 5% of the world thats like america nuking everyone so it had no possible enemies team rwby were drastic

  • @demonic_myst4503
    @demonic_myst4503 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The early seasons are the most well written so fixing them still leaves the series in a garbage fire by kate volumes and doesnt fix any the schisms in the comunity

    • @sunnysunsins
      @sunnysunsins  หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Well written how? The endless plotholes? Characters not interacting? All the other things i literally mentioned in this video? I will not be repeating myself, v1-3 are just setup, v4-9 are the actual story. If you don't like it, it's a you problem.
      Again, just because it didn't go the way you headcanoned it to, doesn't mean the show is bad. I know you're probably used to people just nodding in agreement and shitting on the show, but i am not like that, i don't give a shit about your takes and i will not tolerate this kind of mindset in my comments. Cry about it somewhere else. I hear judgemental critter is still spewing venom every other business day and twice on sundays, maybe there your cries of "new volumes bad" will be heard and echoed