First fight mentioned a phrase " a slow, quick movement". When creating these AI stories, please proof listen before you post it. Also, over use of buzz words and repetitive adjectives are becoming more and more cliche. Other than that, a good premise
"Jack Carter", eh? Are his parents named Jack & Samantha? Perhaps he's traveled via some sort of round iris-like portal?
Naw, he used to be a US Marshall and has a Daughter named Zoey
His step- sister is Sarah Chen. I'm sure ot it.
First fight mentioned a phrase " a slow, quick movement". When creating these AI stories, please proof listen before you post it. Also, over use of buzz words and repetitive adjectives are becoming more and more cliche. Other than that, a good premise