"I Got Hired At A Diner In Nebraska For The Graveyard Shift, The Rules Are Weird" Creepypasta
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- This one gets weird...
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What I love about these "Weird list of rules" stories is the fact that these rules can only exist if some kind of corrupt higher up went through countless employees to find out how to satisfy these anomalies
SCP
Exactlyyyy.
Its fucked up but you're rht😢👍😳
And when they Fuck up one of the rules
Lol I always think about that whenever something happens that wasn’t in the rules.
This went from "The Graveyard Shift" to "Guardians of the Galaxy" real quick.
This is star lords true back story
THATS WHAT IM SAYING WHAT EVEN HAPPENED WHERE DID THE RACCOON COME FROM WHY IS THERE TWO OF HIM WHY IS THE MOON A LIGHTBULB IM LOSING MY MIIIIIND
@@morgyj4322 yeah little confused but I enjoyed the twist
@@morgyj4322 he was a clone of himself that got stuck in a loop I think
Omg you're right lol
This sounds like someone started a "rules" story, got high halfway through, and then tied the story up.
Had the same thought
The topic is over done. Too many lately. So easy to see the mediocrity of them now.
This story is smoking the good stuff. 😂
Talking raccoons my guy.....talking freaking raccoons
Lmao . ." I was going to write a story But Then I Got High"
Putting this in my “pastas that really punish you for zoning out” playlist
Link that playlist, I must see it
Fr list
Bro…that’s real.
Gotta say this is one of the hardest stories to follow that I’ve heard in a while. It’s literally just some dude tripping on acid by the end.
I just started this but the most unbelievable thing so far is calling a little under 9 dollars an hour a good paying job lol.
If he's wait staff 8.25 is a great rate. Alot of places pay wait staff $2.25. As long as their tips make their total pay equal to minimum wage then the employers dont have to pay more.
@@Ciara_Foxx mmk I kk
@@Ciara_Foxx should be illegal to pay your staff less than what i give my preschooler for an accumulated hour of chores.
Tips really need to go.
@@GrifoStelle No tips don't need to go away, minimum wage for wait staff needs to go up.
Depends on where you live in the world, but 9 dollars in the U.S is absolutely atrocious. You may as well have a house made out of cardboard to use that small amount of money effectively.
😩…yeah, I just couldn’t get into this story. As soon as the narrator mentioned the talking raccoon and being in ‘space’, I was like “Nah. I’m done.” I was so lost that I couldn’t even finish the story. Seven minutes left and I have zero need to know how the tale ends.
Stupid. That's how it ends.
Yep I’m with you I’m at 3 min so may as well finish it 🤷🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️
@@lynnetrathen4587 same lol
Excuse me the what? "talking raccoon"?? Good thing I looked at the comments before I wasted my time listening to this
Yeah, it got real confusing real fast.
I found it hard to visualise this story, I got so lost!
The ending is pretty muddled
@@melanieortiz712 yeah, hank is just wanted money to get out to nebraska but instead he got a set of rules and then end up in a void with a raccon and many hank's around him, the thing he can do is to have a copy of him and hope he never repeat the cycle again.
I couldn't hear the guy. So many words were being mumbled and I got lost.
@@alphahead2741
Sorry...I got lost in your explanation
I’m glad I’m not the only one who got lost in this
guys just cause the story is weird doesn’t mean you should dislike the video, mr creeps doesn’t write these stories.. He just reads them for us.
He is free to choose which stories he narrates, though, so I think it can actually be helpful if people like or dislike his videos, so he knows what his audience likes and what not. That said, I do feel it is more helpful to leave a comment with more details, like WHY you disliked the story.
One thing I personally like is how he divides the stories into playlists for separate categories, so people who displike a certain type of story by default can steer clear from them.
Is it just me or did this go from creepy rules story into some kind of weird lsd trip? Lol
LSD can do that lol
Little does he know he got n-bombed😂
I swear , after these stories , I go to bed and I can hear voices ( plural ) in my head . The sentences are random and incomprehensible but have proper words in them .
@@sravans149 hypnogogic hallucination?
@@vincem257 I have no clue but it happens when I remove my AirPods mid story and try sleeping , last night I slept with my AirPods in and I could listen to the story but it was getting slowly inaudible and I could understand much and I slept but I am sure it was a single voice from the video I was listening from .
I mean this thing or anomaly im experiencing isn't that bad , just confusing but sleep paralysis was way worse even without any hallucinations , I could barely see my arms and I couldn't move my body when I tried to get up .
Tune in next week for "I Found Out Why No One Out Pizzas The Hutt. Now I Wish I Hadn't."
That would be a good one lol
I kinda wanna write something about this 🤣
Lol
@@chrispeters1020 do it
This comment cracked me up. Read it just as this story took a hit off of whatever it's smoking. 🤣
Fun animal fact: Sloths can take up to a month to completely digest a single leaf.
They’re also most likely to die while using the bathroom
This is a fun fact
@@falcongamingproductions9938
Seems like Sloths and Elvis Pressley have something in common.
@@firewarrior5828 BRO LMAO I lost it, good shit.
@@yaboighandiyo6510 that's what elvis thought when entering the bathroom.
Rule 1: at 3:00am take the G off of the Graveyard sign, play spooky scary skeletons, and wake the skeletons with the bell provided.
Glad too see you're still going strong commenting ever since me the CIA and NSA left.
Yeah I feel like the only one left but imma keep going.
I may not comment much (lost interest in these videos up until a few days ago) but I'm here Plague
I recognize yall
I will never forget anyone here
This one was good for the first half, but then I got lost and suddenly didn't understand what was happening 😅
Every rulepasta:
This new place I'm at has strange rules. I wonder how they got them...*creepy thing happens*...oh...that's why.
I mean there are places in the world like this. I have a friend in romania that says they warn travelers not to go into the woods between certain times and on certain days and to never answer the door if they hear a knocking. They claim its wild animals that cause a lot of it,mainly wolves and that they just don't want people dying but there are way too many rumors of otherworldy things there. Just like how there are stories of soldiers saying they seen creatures in the middle east,generally speaking if locals tell you to be careful, its generally for a good reason. In ireland they warn you not to chase any fae you see otherwise you'll enter their world and be lost, on native american lands they warn you not to follow lone coyotes, pick up hitch hikers at night that are dressed badly or to open your door for any reason at night time due to wendigos and skinwalkers.
A friend once told me that reading scary stories on TH-cam would be the easiest job possible. I asked why he didn't do it then. He said he couldn't compete with Mr. Creeps voice, tone, and rhythm . Lol
Good story? 🤡
Fair point
Side comment: Imagine being this guy above me, to be that jealous of a comment.. and he calls others a clown... how pathetic can one loser be..?
@@alexhagedorn1365 true
@@alexhagedorn1365 damn i really triggered you. Sorry 🤡 didn't know you'd cry so hard
@@alexhagedorn1365 lmao I know he cryin
"ham burgler" how you gon call people clowns with that name
Sooo fucking confusing like I got lost when he started his second night because the rules were entangled and being wierd
I feel that. I followed it fairly okay until the door bit. Feels almost like the author wanted to merge multiple ideas and didn't make it flow very well. First part was solid though!
@@alexdethrose1910 the way i’m perceiving it as the rules are a test essentially. he’s stuck in an infinite loop making the same mistakes he’s destined to make, for example not killing the raccoon the first day, which if that would happen the events later on in the story wouldn’t happen theoretically breaking that cycle, you can also look at it like it’s a dream, where you can perceive everything. and nothing, all at once, and in dreams time is always weird, or you just don’t see it at all
@@alexdethrose1910 ikr
@@xdra7657my understanding is that the loop was intended for the Mc to check on his family. He said he created a copy to undergo the loop. I parsed that Mc become some kind of deity like being. He was able to create a copy and insert it into the past and exists in some weird limbo state where his existence is decided by his will. "you only need to think and it will happen" I'm not sure whether or not the raccoon exists as a lucky tagalong towards apotheosis or if it's something he created with his will to bounce his thoughts off of. It might also be another copy of himself for all we know. In addition, he doesn't have the personal desire to leave this place, he was only concerned about how his disappearance would affect his family.
"Living in Nebraska is boring"
Story dropping truth bombs right off the bat. Lol
*Is from Nebraska*
But corn is soooo awesome!! 😂😂😭😭😭😭😭😭
@@gen4670 Iowa beats us Nebraskans in corn production 🥲
Nebraska isn't boring in the populous Southeast becuase there are always things to do in Lincoln or Omaha like normal cities but it's a much different story basically everywhere else. My mom works in Valentine, NE it has about 14k population and is considered the "big city" of the area becuase it's the biggest population center for 4 hours in every direction, you run out of shit to do real fast.
I live in Lincoln. As much as I want to get back out to the wild yes Omaha and Lincoln have plenty to do. You can also travel. I really don't get the jokes about Nebraska, but I'll play along.
@@hcook1023 biggest lie 😤😤😤 we got you beat in that and soy beans💪💪💪
3:23 RULE 1
3:33 RULE 2
3:47 RULE 3
4:03 RULE 4
4:20 RULE 5
4:35 RULE 6
4:46 RULE 7
5:02 RULE 8
5:19 RULE 9
Next week: “I was on my way to work when I found a snickers bar in my car’s front seat... I’m allergic to chocolate.”
I am so lost. Story started strong, ended with no understanding.
Once the Raccoon started talking, I completely checked out lol
he's already gone through everything and is in a loop slowly trying to figure it out
This is star lords ACTUAL back story
This goes from horror to completely insane
Trying to understand this story is like a freaking acid trip
The author was clearly on LSD writing this story
WHERE DID THE RUIES EVEN COME INTO PLAY
We went form a horror story to a bad drug trip real quick
This man thought he was smoking sativa at work, but it was salvia.
As a Nebraskan, I can confirm that it’s all corn and we all have rules to survive night shifts
I love these rules type stories. I love how there are so many! I don’t think “it’s overdone” because I’m not a scary story snob who needs a whole triple A film in audio book form. I like these because I think “could I follow these rules?” Sometimes yea I could. And others I’m like “ima die soon as I clock in late LMAO”
100 miles is nothing compared to having to go for 1000 MILES, and yes I’m making my way downtown.
Walking fast
Faces past and I'm homebound
There are more things to do in life then shooting things and grilling steaks? Lies!
🤙💥💯
I needed this break from a really tough day. I just wanted to say thank you and to let you know how much you are appreciated for doing this video's because sometimes life came really be a horrible thing but this great story's help me realize that we all need to take mental break from the so called real world and relax with a good friend who's really great at telling stories. So again thank you for all you do to be that good friend with a great story.
🤟🤓👍
I just got done working 10 months straight of night shift in a lab and everytime i hear stories like this it makes me want to make one of my own but im horrible at writing
Just write everything down. Then edit it a couple times with better punctuation and stronger synonyms for common words. You can do it man
Don't worry. Whoever wrote this one is also horrible at writing, and it made it on the channel!
I mean, this one ain't exactly an award winner
Ahhhh, damn. Another rules. At least he has a gun.
Boy, I could dig an Omelette right now..
Aha! Everyone is strapped up, finally some people that at the least take an interest in survival.
Julie literally said 'NOT ON MY WATCH'
Well, this has been a hell of a trip
Dang how is he just gonna throw shade at Henrietta's makeup like that 💀
This place is getting 2 stars on Yelp
This is like a challenge where one guy writes the beggining of a story, another writes the ending and a third guy has to make them work together somehow
For some reason I found it really hard to follow this story, too many random things were mentioned at once and I just got lost.
Omg I didn't think you would but you actually managed to make another " THERE ARE WEIRD RULES I HAVE TO FOLLOW"
LOL
I was gonna speak... but ... THERES A LIST OF RULES I HAVE TO FOLLOW ...
😂🤣🤣
New challenge, write a creepypasta without having the entire premise and something about rules in the title!
how about you do it yourself and dont be a lazy fat boy
I listen to these every night before bed. Love em!
I had to replay becuase I thought I missed some major part, for me it went from 0-9000 real quick
Homie went from casually working in a diner to letting a door to an eldritch plane open and attaining some kind of godhood
Tune in tommorrow for: "I did a one star review on yelp. I wish I hadn't."
Make this
The amount of truth in the first 5 words “Living in Nebraska is boring “ just….it made my day 😂
I love listening to these stories. Also your voice is super relaxing.
A struggle to stay awake but need to hear ending.Love this mind twister.Agree with you💜🐾
Fine ass Voice
He has the most annoying voice though. Speaks without punctuation and slurs words too often
@@staymad3630 so don't listen? I've been listening to him for 2 years and his slurring and mispronounced words are negligible. If it's not, there are plenty of other creepy pasta narrators
Honestly his voice is so soothing to me.
Vaas: Did I ever tell you the definition of insanity?
I got to the end of this story and it just felt like a poor man's Bioshock Infinite.
the scariest part of this is that there was a building in nebraska
This RULES!!!!
Da punz
Ahhh....I see what you did there! 👏👏👏
Yesterday it was my turn. Today it is yours. Tomorrow.. we’ll see
@@mihneazoican2479 lol
@@mihneazoican2479 we will see who it is tomorrow indeed
This helps me so much when I was in school but I still listen to him once and a while but man this was the best in school
I've been waiting this for whole day!
Catching up on Mr. Creeps content 🖤 Forever my favorite 💯
Love love love these rule list stories!!
Omg I almost crapped myself lol.in the part of the story where you said your phones battery was draining,my phone pinged that I had 15% battery left
As a Nebraskan I can say this is just normal day.
I wouldn't worry about it.
You Nebraskans learn about your omnipotence through a sentient raccoon that appears in your personal time loop?
Can confirm. Grew up in the suburbs of Omaha and was good buddies with a talking raccoon.
@@aduckwithayoutubechannel Yes.
@@termitesc.aardwolf3644 Same, 'cept I'm a few miles south of you more in the Nebraska City area.
@@the_ogre1234 I lived in the west suburbs of Omaha pretty close to Boys Town. Now I live in San Diego California.
That sweetarts commercial was the biggest jump scare I've ever had whilst trying to enjoy a creepypasta
I knew the ending would happen like a few minutes in, so glad I was right
Thankyou for intriguing story would love to hear more of it💜🐾
This feels like a fever dream
Raccoon talks “I think it knows me from somewhere and this is getting out of hand...” how high are you Hank?
Love the thumbnail art great story you never disappoint
Girl what ,, I zoned out for 3 seconds and now he’s talking to a raccoon
Another great story, thank you creeps
I live for these stories. Mr. Creeps has such a GOD voice. Super soothing. I sometimes fall asleep listening cause I find it easy to relax and enjoy these videos
Man I love list of rules storys they’re the best
We’ll talk about a roller coaster of confusion but it was well worth it
I finally fulfilled my dream of making it to the NBA there is a strange set of rules every time I score a basket😄😂😄😂
I put this on while cleaning my room and zoned out a minute. Then I heard about a raccoon and I just listened to whatever nonsense the ending was 😂
That was a great story with the chef I really enjoyed it thank you
“Decent paying job” “$8 an hour” 🥴
Those first sentences in this story were valid tbh
Funny enough. Driving through Nebraska while listening to this creepy pasta located in Nebraska.
Gotta love those LS (Loop Stories)
LOL. Love this story, scary and very funny.
I LOVE "RULE" STORIES!!!!!
Sounds like someone had too much acid at work.
It sounded like the writer was writing a story and then decided they wanted to right another and tried to change it up after that
My new favorite story
Hey past me it's still our favorite... Hi-five *slap*
27:35 We got philosophycal, I am not even creeped out anymore lol
you need to do more cryptid stores
like wendigos and skinwalkers those kind of cryptids
These are addictive
As a man who lives in Nebraska, I can belive it if this is a true story
Ayyyy Nebraska Gang!!
Ok first... I will live and die in Nebraska. It's my home and it isn't boring. Whiskey, steak, corn and guns. Also/second, I've seen people complain about rule stories. Y'all don't have to listen to em', but you could try to switch it up. I have noticed rule stories popping up more consistently recently. Your channel your... rules.... heh heh heh. I enjoy the stories either way.
For the most part it is boring
But also delishious
Growing up here this just sounds like a Tuesday night in Nebraska
This took a weird confusing turn
this is pretty common in nebraska
"Living in Nebraska... " love those Nebraska stories
This goes from Stephen king to H.P Lovecraft's real fast 😂
What is this ending??🤣🤣🤧 lol I love it either way
A raccoon that makes puns pretty sweet lol
This story is good af
I really like this one especially the ending
The surrealism actually got to me for a second. What was I saying? Oh yeah. The surrealism actually...
A night shift story and rules perfect
This story went from normal to tripping on acid in no time....
DAMN! that was a good one...
As someone who is from Nebraska. The first 13 seconds is 100% true. The rest is history
"living in Nebraska..."
I'm too scared to continue now! At least Iowa has some hills
This kinda sounds like a regular show plot