BEST METHOD for COMPARING POEMS I have CHANGED MY MIND
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is now to late?
no cuz im doing it as well🤣🤣
@@user-fv7rk1ye5ewe love some last minute revision lol😢
@@user-fv7rk1ye5ebro the exam is today we may be cooked but think about all the people who don’t revise at all
Used this in mocks and got 26/30, will be using this on monday!!
Just want to let you know sir that because of your videos i achieved 72/80 In each Language Paper for mocks and i used to get 2s before so just want to thank you.. Such an Inspiration you really are
Wow, that sounds too good to be true!
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I have a test on the comparison question tomorrow, so glad that you posted this right before the day which is really helpful, thanks a lot!
Comparing poems has always felt slightly daunting to me, cheers for the advice! 😄
I have got a comparison question coming up, thanks for the advice
Could you please do a video with a full mark response that uses this method? Thank you so much Mr Salles!!
you literally got me through my English GCSEs! I can't thank you enough!!
Your thanks is enough, but there is always SuperThanks!
Hello sir, I would like to express my appreciation for your videos and amazing teaching. Your videos on language paper 2 helped me achieve 69/80 in my mock, a grade 9, when I was stuck at grade 7/8 for the whole year. Thank you!
Hey, we’ll done
Could you please show us a model answer for love and relationships with this structure or a similar structure please!
Just did my assessment of Friday ☹️ will use this on my mock though
@Mr Salles Teaches English
So just to confirm on the structure...
You do OTTER for the first (favourite) poem,
Then about 3 sentences to compare both,
Then do OTTER again for the other poem,
Then a conclusion.
Exactly
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish wouldn't that be 8 paragraphs then and that way a bit much?
Just about to plan and write an essay for poetry! Just in time.
Mate this guys a legend
Sir, I do have a question, do you have a video going through all the structure forms and explained, such as caesura, iambic pentameter tetrameter when related to poems? If you have then can you link it in the comments
thanks for your help, i got 72/80 in my english lang mocks and 40/40 in my paper 2 section b question,I cannot SUPERTHANK you enough!!!, hopefully I will be able to replicate these in my gcse's
Well done! What a brilliant achievement.
would you recommend doing the 3 sentences of comparison at the beginning as an introduction?
Mr Salles, what’s your prediction in love and relationship poetry?
Hi Sir, I have a question so we do OTTER then the comparision like you did in Exposure and bayonet charge then you do the other poem with OTTER again ?
Thank you
Thank you sir on my last language paper two mock I got 74/80 thanks to your videos, have my literature mock after half term and am hoping for a similar result then!
Well done, good luck!
Hey sir! Could i apply this to the WJEC examination board? And could i use this technique for unseen poetry too. Thank you for everything. I’ve only recently discovered your channel and despite you doing AQA normally i still use your videos because they’re so informative and useful i just wish i’d found it before rather than now since it’s so close up to the exams. I hope i can still make a difference in my literature
"Put your pen down, and go home" I need you as my teacher 😂
what would technique be ? like just finding a qoute within the poem not the beginning or ending
Sir , how do you apply the same quotations to different themes
Do I have to write about the effect of language in English literature
@mr salles teachers english, is this only just for aqa or can i use it for edexcel
Hello sir... what exactly is a form and structure... i am quite confused abt ?
so i could write one paragraph on the two paragraphs and the rest on just the one?
Thank you so much for these videos,I managed to get 29/30 in my comparative poetry essay just from watching them!
That is very cool!
Last minute revision... just wondering if this technique can be used on both Power and Conflict poetry and also Unseen Poetry?
Yes
im aiming for a 4 so pls give me more tips
@Mr Salles Teaches English
Where is context meant to be in this though? Should I just do a couple PEACE paragraphs instead of the two 'T's (which stand for technique)?
There is no real requirements for context in this question. The context is the poem itself. For example, if you know that exposure is written about Owens experience in the First World War, that’s half of sentence, and is all the contacts you need.
Will this structure also work for the Love and Relationships Section of poetry? Also does it matter if you decide to start with your other poem first rather than the poem given to you?
1.Yes
2.No
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Thank you, could you make some more videos on love and relationship poetry if possible sir?
i have so many questions how would u write about language form and structure in one OTTER paragraph and how many paragraphs would u write and how would u compare the two poems at the end
Each part of otter is a separate paragraph
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish It would helpful to do a video on using this technique and testing it out on a example question?
Hey sir, I got 62/80 on my language paper 2 this is all thanks to you!!
Would you like to see the response to the questions i did?
Thank you, yes! The about section of my channel is the easiest way
How many paragraphs for this?
is one sentence on form enough to get it ticked on the mark scheme?
Yes
can they repeat a poem.. like the question is always smth like ~describe the relationship~ so they cant rlly change the question.. (do i rlly hv to learn ALL these 15 stupid poems 😭)
does this work for edexcel literature paper 2 aswell
yes most lilkely
Do you think it's smart if I reference form and a small sprinkle of context in my thesis?
Only if it links to the poet’s purpose
Hi, so are you saying to scrap FOSSE?
I’ve just rearranged FOSSE, as I explain in the video
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish thanks sorry I keep asking lots of silly questions 🤣
If I study 4 poems really well as well as the other 11 poems and then memorise those couple of comparative sentences for the comparisons between poems within each theme (just as I would memorise the thesis statement for the other texts), do you think I would get a grade 9?
Yes
Could rather than would
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish So would it come down to depth/ perceptiveness of language structure and form analysis, context and then linking to the poet's purpose?
Hi sir, so is one poem written first then the other paragraph, or are the both compared going along in each paragraph?
I hoped I was super clear about this in the video!
Go to 3:20 he explains it there
So I write everything about 1 poem, write a few sentences about how it differs with the other poem, and then write everything about the 2nd poem?
Yes, and you will notice similarities or differences while you write about the second poem
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Should I plan my answer though and write down some differences before I start writing though?
Hi Sir, im a bit confused. Is it One OTTER paragraph, which will overall cover ONE point. and then continue doing this. Or will OTTER cover the whole answer?
Otter is one whole poem
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish So 2 otters in total, to cover 2 poems?
is this for aqa or edexcel english ? i have a edexcel english mock tomorrow i think i will do alright i failed and got a 3 last year , now im in college and i hope to pass now as im doing edexcel not aqa. Also will we be doing edexcel or aqa english in the real exams later in the year?
AQA
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish ok
In my exam I did one big paragraph about kamikaze and one about emegree is that bad?
No
Does this still work if you do, like 4/5 paragraphs on one poem, answering the question, then do another 4/5 paragraphs on the second poem and compare similarities/differences of each section of the previous one? I did this today and it didn’t look right for me 😂
Yes
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish thank you 🙂
This feels illegal haha. Absolute cheat code, and I was panicking about the poetry section...
Is this FOSSE?
you never said anything about context, is that not important in comparasion?
The context is the poem itself and the poet’s purpose
i mean the like life of the poet, for example the Romantic period or like authoritarian rule or how some poets challenged the status quo etc@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
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Is that from JJK?
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yuor seriously telling me the 1st video i see after my english mock is this
ONG BRO IM SO PISSED. I GOT 22/30 ON POEMS
@@battlemachine9031 Bro thats good.
Im out here gettin 13/20
OTTER IS FRAUDULENT I LOST 20 MARKS
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Just asking, would need to refer to context when comparing poems or would you loose marks for not using context @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
You do need to include context for the poetry anthology. You might lose some marks if you don't , i have from my own experience.
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