Mr Salles I genuinely would like to offer my heartfelt thanks for this video. You have just made me understand what I had been waiting for so far. May God bless you
to all studying inspector calls: you killed her - damn you- damn you (ao2 fragmented speech and repetition of damn you creating a sense of aggression and tension between eric and sybil) ao3 (yap abt younger generation vs older generation and how socialism links to this) she looked young and fresh ( gerald says this a02 semantic field of meat and animals aka zoomorphism showing objectifying of women) ao3(suggests how even gerald is a slave to capitalism as he cant marry whom he wants to but the wealthy) unsinkable absolutely unsinkable (ao2 repetition emphasising birlings views plus dramatic irony) ao3 ( 1945 viewers know the titanic has sunk so birlings yapping) if men do not learn that lesson they shall be taught it in fire and blood and anguish (ao2 polysyndeton means repetition of conjugations such as 'and' so the consequences are emphasised also creates a semantic field of hell.) ao3 (link it to how the inspector is always 'cutting in" so he cooks capitalism) clothes mean something quite different to a women (ao2 is a euphemism which means an expression substituted for one considered to be too harsh or blunt when referring to something unpleasant or embarrassing.) ao3 (this shows how women are forced to hide their opinions due to expectations. it also suggests that women are respected by their clothes which suggests how they are victims to capitalism.) it was a hellish thing to see- oh my god (ao2 juxtaposition between hellish and god suggests the extent to which the rape has cooked eric. The fragmented speech emphasises this. this is also a euphemism)
I'm sorry but your not hyped up enough. Your channel is actually lifesaving. And I'm not just saying that. YOUR ACTUALLY AMAZING!! thank you soooooooooooo much
@@nxha137 mainly the 'all of the themes' inspector calls videos, and watched a lot of essays in his videos and used some of the analysis in them. also used physics and maths tutor for more analysis
this is an amazing video. i have gcses very soon and would love a 9. im currently following the edexcel examboard but most of this video has been incredibly helpful.
What I like to do at the end of my essays is to talk about how priestly did not portray the Berlings as be portrayed the cap family from his previous litrscy pieces 'black out in gretly' suggesting his prespective on capitalism has been calmed as British society over time has changed or is
Hi Mr Salles, I’m sure you get this question all the time but for a grade nine question, roughly how many quotes should we use for aic in aqa. Great videos by the way, I went from a 7 to a 9 In my recent mocks for lang and lit
Hi sir, I have just finished my mock exam and I believe I've done fantastic due to the points you gave in this video and other ones too (so thank you so very much). However, I didn't have enough time to write a conclusion. Do you think this will severely limit the grade I achieve or will it be just a case of not being able to get a couple of marks or so. Your kind reply will be highly appreciated. Thank you
my teacher was literally speaking to me about this cuz I'm always running out of time in my mocks. The conclusion isn't necessary, its just a good way of ending the essay. It shouldn't effect your overall results at all if you've made a solid essay. You should be good 👍🏼
should I apply this "entrepreneur" method to the rest of the texts as well? for example in macbeth paragraphs on God and the betrayal of the gift of free will
I definitely would! Have an idea in your head about what you will say for each key theme along with fitting quotes and just adapt this to the question you’re given
Hello Sir! So does that mean for our modern prose question(An Inspector Calls), we'll have two choices to pick from one on a character and one on a theme. We can pick one out of the two and write about it...?
Hi, my creative writing is not the best as i dont use ambitious vocab. Pls could you recommend how i can improve my vocab.. could you please suggest some books i can read, which help a lot with english. P.S. i do aqa english language and aqa english literature
somehow, i learnt all my ambitious vocab from the internet. usually finding argument like on reddit (don’t use it but pretty sure its got some incels who use big vocab) or yt ones. if you don’t know a word then you google it. this might help more than a thesaurus or something as its quite a large task. if this doesnt work, borrow words from top essays.
Couldn't you talk about the name 'Daisy Renton' itself being a pun. Daisy = innocence - link it to bible/religous imagery//Mary. Renton = 'Rent' she's renting her self. Juxtaposition of the idea of innocence and being cleen and being in a dirty place like a brothel.
Hi Sir, I know you're busy with all your other bits, but do you offer a service or a way that you can read my AIC essay and give me feedback, ideally for free? Many thanks, love your advice :D
10 second of Mr salles = 1 year of school
This dude brought me from a 4 to an 8 in my last mocks i love him. Got an essay on this on Friday this could not be more perfectly timed
Good luck
What did you get
8 really happy with it
@@jamieharding5747what was the question?
@@jamieharding5747 damn, well done.
POV: you are watching this video before English literature paper 2...
Yup🙂↕️
Yeah hate edexcel
@@motionprimeaep Nah that will get you into colleges/ 6th forms dw!
@@motionprimeaep oh alr gl! im already predicted an 8-9 so im hoping for an actual 9-9!
@@motionprimeaep true
This guys a legend makes English so much easier
Mr Salles I genuinely would like to offer my heartfelt thanks for this video. You have just made me understand what I had been waiting for so far. May God bless you
POV: you have ADHD and you're here to pull an all-nighter because you haven't studied a single minute on Lit paper 2
help guys bit too accurate
Fr 😂
icl that is genuinely so spot on
so real (i kept getting distracted and didn't get anything done im cooked)
@@sara-gz3hi LMAOO WE BOTH REVISING A FRE MINS BEFORE
to all studying inspector calls:
you killed her - damn you- damn you (ao2 fragmented speech and repetition of damn you creating a sense of aggression and tension between eric and sybil) ao3 (yap abt younger generation vs older generation and how socialism links to this)
she looked young and fresh ( gerald says this a02 semantic field of meat and animals aka zoomorphism showing objectifying of women) ao3(suggests how even gerald is a slave to capitalism as he cant marry whom he wants to but the wealthy)
unsinkable absolutely unsinkable (ao2 repetition emphasising birlings views plus dramatic irony) ao3 ( 1945 viewers know the titanic has sunk so birlings yapping)
if men do not learn that lesson they shall be taught it in fire and blood and anguish (ao2 polysyndeton means repetition of conjugations such as 'and' so the consequences are emphasised also creates a semantic field of hell.) ao3 (link it to how the inspector is always 'cutting in" so he cooks capitalism)
clothes mean something quite different to a women (ao2 is a euphemism which means an expression substituted for one considered to be too harsh or blunt when referring to something unpleasant or embarrassing.) ao3 (this shows how women are forced to hide their opinions due to expectations. it also suggests that women are respected by their clothes which suggests how they are victims to capitalism.)
it was a hellish thing to see- oh my god (ao2 juxtaposition between hellish and god suggests the extent to which the rape has cooked eric. The fragmented speech emphasises this. this is also a euphemism)
bro is carrying my english lit grade cheers
wow thank u
Damn Tysm dude
@@kishi8906 icl im doing ocr and idk any poetry and the test is tmrw😅
BHAHA i love how u also used words like cooked and yapping it helps me understand it more
I'm sorry but your not hyped up enough. Your channel is actually lifesaving. And I'm not just saying that. YOUR ACTUALLY AMAZING!!
thank you soooooooooooo much
I appreciate that!
Wow,this has changed my whole perspective on how to tackle english,thank you for the amazing videos! They are life savers 😅
Happy to hear that!
I was lost in what to do for AIC but now I feel much more confident, tysm!
MR SALLES IS A LEGEND FULL STOP😭🔥
I have my edexcel lit paper 2 tomorrow, Mr.Salles saves my life
thank you so much for bringing my grade from a 5 to a 9
Well done on your hard work!
i got 27/30 on my inspector calls mock essay from your videos! thank you
what videos did you watch?
@@nxha137 mainly the 'all of the themes' inspector calls videos, and watched a lot of essays in his videos and used some of the analysis in them. also used physics and maths tutor for more analysis
with what videos?
ive got a mini test on an inspector calls tomorrow and i havent even thought about it since year 10 so lets see if this video is magic
How did it go
howd it go
@@kamijo0o0o dont remember the mark, but i remember this video giving me alot of resources to write a decent essay
this guys so cute, ur my english teacher now. i have my first mock tomorrow n i might not be cooked anymore
What question was it
exam tomorrow, gonna use this video and inshallah it
How did it go
relatable LMFAO inahllah my way thorugh the mocks
Got a mock tomorrow morning,wish me luck
Same here
Same
what did u get?
@@Multiverse... Grade 4 😭
@@Unique7_7u passed!! well donee
Could you explain about the way how to form the thesis statement with the t(red points and what would that look like. Thank you!
thank you mr salles, me and my mate love your videos and you. You are helping us so much and making English better in general.
That link to Christian society was absolutely 🔥🔥🔥 I am definitely using that on my exam tomorrow. Thank you!
This guy clutches up better than prime ronaldo
Time to lock in once again!
Thanks so much! I got 32/34 on the Inspector Calls question and a grade 9 overall
Excellent!
how omg
thanks man, i really hope this works for my essay tomorrow! 🤞🤞
Revising 2h before my English lit exam I am cooked 🔥🔥🙏🙏
love mr salles fully carries my gcses
this is an amazing video. i have gcses very soon and would love a 9. im currently following the edexcel examboard but most of this video has been incredibly helpful.
Best of luck! Glad it works for you.
How was literature paper 1?
@@UrMum-rf6ko thanks to this man it went very well
gonna use this to help with my homework due tmr thanks
This bumped me up from a grade2 to and grade6
What I like to do at the end of my essays is to talk about how priestly did not portray the Berlings as be portrayed the cap family from his previous litrscy pieces 'black out in gretly' suggesting his prespective on capitalism has been calmed as British society over time has changed or is
Hi Mr Salles, I’m sure you get this question all the time but for a grade nine question, roughly how many quotes should we use for aic in aqa. Great videos by the way, I went from a 7 to a 9 In my recent mocks for lang and lit
Nicely done! 13+ quotes
Hi sir, I was wondering if you could do a similar video for Great Expectations? Thankyou
Nobel Prize loading, this is gold
Thanks
Mr salles you are a legend
thank you you are a king 🤞
Hi sir,
I have just finished my mock exam and I believe I've done fantastic due to the points you gave in this video and other ones too (so thank you so very much). However, I didn't have enough time to write a conclusion. Do you think this will severely limit the grade I achieve or will it be just a case of not being able to get a couple of marks or so. Your kind reply will be highly appreciated.
Thank you
my teacher was literally speaking to me about this cuz I'm always running out of time in my mocks. The conclusion isn't necessary, its just a good way of ending the essay.
It shouldn't effect your overall results at all if you've made a solid essay. You should be good 👍🏼
4:47-5:12 could I reference points like this in the exam? would it count as AO3?
Yes
can you give an example of the 3 points to be used in the thesis please?
this is saving my grades
Should you write about the theme or character
Theme is easier for top grade
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish sir the exam is over and they only gave character questions for AIC
should I apply this "entrepreneur" method to the rest of the texts as well? for example in macbeth paragraphs on God and the betrayal of the gift of free will
I definitely would! Have an idea in your head about what you will say for each key theme along with fitting quotes and just adapt this to the question you’re given
Hi, this video is really useful thank you! I’m new to your channel so I was wondering what a thesis statement is? It sounds very useful😊
an introduction
got 26/30 in my aic essay yay
Would Priestleys point of view be ao1 or ao3
2 and 3
thank you for this
if we learnt only these quote could we still acheive top grades or should we learn more
Yes to both questions
relying on ur videos to pass english 🙏
How would you structure the essay?
whts ur xam board?
@ Aqa
@bluelizzard0840 ok mines edexcel
is this video compatible with the Eduqas exam board?
Hello Sir! So does that mean for our modern prose question(An Inspector Calls), we'll have two choices to pick from one on a character and one on a theme. We can pick one out of the two and write about it...?
Yes
so helpful !
Thank you sm
But I thought last year the paper had two character questions
Hi, my creative writing is not the best as i dont use ambitious vocab. Pls could you recommend how i can improve my vocab.. could you please suggest some books i can read, which help a lot with english. P.S. i do aqa english language and aqa english literature
Just look and study a thesarus and look for words that have similar meanings that youve never heard of before.
somehow, i learnt all my ambitious vocab from the internet. usually finding argument like on reddit (don’t use it but pretty sure its got some incels who use big vocab) or yt ones. if you don’t know a word then you google it. this might help more than a thesaurus or something as its quite a large task. if this doesnt work, borrow words from top essays.
@@OilRig-1 true. Oxidation is loss Reduction is gain
@@cantrhinkofanamwsoooo7875 omg haha i never thought anyone would get that!
What board is this for?
AQA
cheers lad
Couldn't you talk about the name 'Daisy Renton' itself being a pun. Daisy = innocence - link it to bible/religous imagery//Mary. Renton = 'Rent' she's renting her self. Juxtaposition of the idea of innocence and being cleen and being in a dirty place like a brothel.
Yes
Used this in my exqm 😭😭
Got a 9 with this analysis 🔥🔥
nice grapes
"Hey Presto, Abracadabra and Shazam"
what emoji is that 😭
one for Jekyll and Hyde?
just joined form tiktok
🐐
i love patriarchy
said Gerald
Is this Edexcel
doesnt matter its still the same text
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Hi Sir, I know you're busy with all your other bits, but do you offer a service or a way that you can read my AIC essay and give me feedback, ideally for free? Many thanks, love your advice :D
i am cooked
thats so skibidi
why was the girl getting proposed 💀💀💀