Unseen Poem Comparison Sorted!
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 19 มิ.ย. 2024
- How to get from 4 marks to the full 8 marks
0:00 Is it IMPORTANT?
0:57 TIME LIMIT
1:24 HOW to GET 4 MARKS out of 8
2:47 WHAT METHODS?
4:20 HOW MANY QUOTATIONS?
4:50 HOW TO COMPARE
5:58 HOW to get 7-8 marks out of 8
7:20 How many WORDS
7:50 How many QUOTES?
8:40 How many METHODS?
9:05 What about STRUCTURE?
9:40 The POET'S PURPOSE
10:25 How many COMPARISONS?
10:37 No CONCLUSION?
10:50 How to START
11:35 How to get 5 or 6 MARKS
12:40 Which CONNECTIVES?
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GL to everyone tmr!
You too habibi
It better be a easy poem
You to! ☺️
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You too 😘
All the best everyone, inshAllah everything will be okay!
you too bro inshallah
me too pls i want an inshallah! (in this comments we ALL PASS)
@@crimblox2662 inshallah you will do really well bro
@@ringatyrongingo5896 Inshallah
Inshallah
I'm gonna pull a lady macbeth and summon the spirit of Mr Salles and Mr Everything English to guide me in the exam tomorrow.
LMAOOOO
in my ppe i only did 2 paragraphs for this question and got 7/8
my paragraph structure was
find similarity (can be simple) between 2 poems
quotes + explain shortly their effect
reader response for 1 of them
use writer's tone/purpose (what you think they're writing for e.g. to show importance of love) to explain how the presentation of the points are different in the poems
Great
Ty
I don't get that last bit, wdym by use the tone to explain it
wdym explain shortly their effect, like a simple anaylsis?
@@NA-pe8tu like if they both present love as being everywhere for example one might have an angry tone while the other has a positive tone about love which shows that the poems present the point in different ways
Thank you so much sir, you don't know how much your videos have helped me in these exams!
I feel like spot the similarity or difference of poets purposes them compare their effects on readers are good to get higher marks, as for me I automatically go to thinking about bigger things that are usually count as insightful
Thank you so much!
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cuz of mr salles
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Thank you sir this has really helped me i am now prepared for tomorrow🤩
I’m not 😃
@@distractedbythisfacade same
Doing it today scared this has helped so much
Thank you, goodluck everyone
Simile, metaphor, repetition, personification, alliteration, contrast
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Good luck everyone, you'll all ace it!!
u too!
you yo
Alan bold describes Autumn in a negative light, illustrating that it is an 'experienced robber' of the 'green stuff', suggesting that the poet doesn't like the fact that it takes the leaves of trees. The adjective 'experienced' in the simile used in 'like an experienced robber' presents Autumn as something that regularly takes away the leaves, implying that the poet does not like this. The noun 'robber' is a personification, depicting Autumn as someone that takes the leaves that aren't really theirs.
Comparatively, Billy Collins' poem is about Spring (not Autumn like the last poem). The poet describes spring with the superlative 'perfect', portraying spring as the best season. Furthermore, the poet describes the 'warm intermittent breeze', which illustrates a breeze that is soothing from the adjective 'warm'. The noun 'breeze' demonstrates that it is a light wind that isn't harsh: it is able to calm you. Through this, Collins is able to successfully illustrate that they believe spring is the best season.
this was done in 5 mins, but I'm just not sure if this would be near the top of the mark scheme? (for 2017 aqa unseen)
good analysis but limited comparison, i'd guess 6/8
@@alexj1295 Alan bold describes the sky of Autumn as being 'red with a quiet rage'. The colour 'red' and the noun 'rage' creates imagery of the Earth being angry that Autumn has arrived, 'cunningly' taking away the leaves like a 'robber'. Comparatively, the poet of 'Today' describes spring as being 'blue and white', which are colours symbolising purity (from the white) and tranquillity (from the blue). As a result, the poet of 'Today' presents Spring as calming and soothing, whilst the poet of 'Autumn' presents autumn as menacing and unforgiving of what it takes.
right, if I added this, would it bump it up a bit?
@@edgarboekdrukker5429 respectfully that person was probably a student like u
idk id say your analysis could be developed but for 5 minutes off the top of your head its good, in the exam youd probably think of a better analysis after the flow of writing and stuff.
im a student but i dont think you made a clear difference. I dont think one being autumn and one being spring is enough. I would have explained how one is supporting weather and seasons and the other is condemning it
Thanks mate
Was just thinking about this question, Thanks sir :)
Good luck!!
thanks sir!!!
Cheers G, My GOAT
God bless you sir
Hi, I’m just wondering, for the exam tomorrow can you do the questions in any order or do I have to do Macbeth first? Thanks
Good luck tomorrow everyone!
I got 6/8 in my mock with 116 words but didnt get higher cause i didnt use structure.
Thx boss
when you say 4/5 comparisons, does that mean that one comparison is about both poems? so at least 4 paragraphs on both poems?
Do you have any tips for Much Ado About Nothing?
man like salles
100k subs soon come
can u make a playlist for romeo and juliet? just more easier to navigate
you can make one yourself if you just create a new playlist
I’m so nervous for Romeo and Juliet tomorrow!!
Yeah me too haha - it will be fine though!!
Same hope it's abt romantic love or family relationship
honestly
i bet you guys all aced it :) i did macbeth and didn't get time to flick through the other q's, so out of sheer curiosity what was the romeo and juliet question?
Macbeth was 'how does shakespeare present macbeth's fears'
@@lmon3163 Yes i looked at the macbeth one out of curiosity 😭😭, it was actually pretty good it was about how shakespeare presents romeos feelings towards juliet. Hope it went well for you❤️
thank youu for some reason my english teacher had conveniently decided to go on holiday this week so cant contact him lol
that's annoying 😭 my teacher decided to blank our emails all half term. honestly teachers on youtube are more reliable
Hey sir,
Can you make Grade 9 resources on Frankenstein?... It's for the life of my GCSE's!
Hi Sir in Macbeth will I be penalised by the examiners if I make a link to Shakespeare's poem involving Lucrece and Tarquin, and how this could link to Macbeth seeing murder as attractive?It is in your revision guide but I would just like to double check
You will be fine with that 🙂
That's good A03 marks
What does this link to
Wait could you explain this more ?
@Rihanna 1245 Tarquin is a Roman prince I think who shakespeare wrote a poem about he basically rapes someone and Macbeth talks about him while on his way to kill Duncan. I would argue shakespeare is making the regicide seem even more horrible but you could also say he's making it attractive I guess
Is it okay if we get a question on the Macbeth section on the supernatural can we talk about Macbeth and Banquos reactions to the supernatural and how they differ or is that irrelevant to the question ?
its relevant :)
@@divine.3766 thank you ‘
Can we use quotes and explanations from the first poem if they are suitable for the second question?
That's the point of question. You compare the second poem to the first question. So yes, most definitely use quotations from both.
@@joshquinn4964 I think they mean from the first question
for the first question no, for the first only analysis of the first poem
the second question you have to use both as that’s the point of the question
hope that helped :)
Praying the Macbeth question is on Macbeth or Lady Macbeth
Praying for Lady Macbeth :)
Plsss. But then again knowing aqa I wouldn't be surprised to see banquo or Macduff or smth
@@chicomoon00 i don't think it will be about Lady Macbeth, she came for the November 2020 paper
i have a horrible feeling it’s going to be a theme question
@@chicomoon00 I swear if its on Macduff or Banquo i might cry
My student says he got a grade 8 in literature but would like to get to grade 9 how do you move someone on from? Please please no one really talks about GCC AQA anthology for example they don't give much modelling for example there are lots of examples where you're explaining how to structure answers but not ones where you write them on the board. And please please please can you show an example on the whiteboard of how you write for effect and using advanced terminology thank you so much.
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do you only need to find similarities? or should you mention differences for top marks? thanks!
It depends on the question.
If it doesn’t specify then do both.
@@Unndecided i thought you do both as it almost always says both but i might be wrong
Either or both
Hi. Can we use the same quotes if necessary for the 24 marker and 8marker?
Yeah they're different questions and they'll be marked by different people so it doesn't matter
Yh
Aight thanks
@@alexlyon3833 omg really, I though 1 examiner marked the entire paper?
Yes
As always love your teachings and was wondering if any suggestion could be made for a possible video request that you sometimes list on the video pages
Trying to ask if the student with your book could have all the A questions with each one having it's on a long time watch got possible pages in your books to study best with according to what you say in possible videos
I did not want to ask because you provide most of everything for studies already and especially in your books
But videos for students with your book that want no distraction of who is who but just the writing of it because we have the great writings of plays in your library videos already
But something for the student who has and loves your books and which pages best to study with each one of the A's questions separately in each one of the possible learning videos that us being requested
Whenever you do a possible suggestion page again and thought to put my suggestion before that page is entered as you some have on those single page videos
Something for the student with your amazing 📚 we kind of want videos just for us, I know I speak for not all the students but if I want something for just the student with your study guide books
I know there must be others who want to turn to the page you suggest to use to focus on in structuring whatever it is to be compared better with whatever best you say of it
Thank you and just a student request because I know you are a very busy man but if and only when you take suggestion requests for possible videos could this possible suggestion on just A questions and how best to answer according to your book's information and videos
Something like that 😊
Isn't this paper 2?
2:15mins with AIC, comparison Poetry and unseen poetry?
they did it differently in 2022
In language Paper 1 Q5, I wrote a description but didn't write a title thinking that I'd think about it at the end but I time was too tight and it slipped out of my mind. Will I be heavily penalized?
you don't even need a title for that
yes ur losing all ur marks and getting disqualified from all aqa exams
@@supercat5meow864 😂😂😂
No
what if you compared the wromge poems? would you still get marks?
no
do you write a paragraph for every comparison you make? so 6 paragraphs to get 7/8 marks?
No dont waste ur time, like 3ish small paras id say (but for my mock i wrote like one massive para, one page long and got 8/8)
3 paragraphs ,3 comparisond
6??? no way
@@Ika-zg7vz thank u
@@Ika-zg7vz what was your structure was it like 'point between comparing then evidence then effect' and repeat
ugh im so scared for eng lit on macbeth, idk what type of question can come up
honestly anything can come up😭
PEOPLE ARE SAYING MENTAL HEALTH OR KINGSHIP…kill me now pls 🔫
@@Ika-zg7vz i know why they are saying that but i dont think it'll be something on that because we had been in lockdown and we didn't learn about the mental health and kingship that much so i dont think the aqa will give us a question on that
Probably free will Inshallah
@@Ika-zg7vz kingship sounds good
do you have any predictions on the theme of the poem?
i feel like it might be conflict, they've done a few on life so not much else they could ask about that and they've asked about love already too
gl to everyone today
in 2 hours now i’m so screwed
Hi sir, will they take our Macbeth essay and give us the unseen separately like in paper 1, also how long should we spend on Macbeth?
On a separate note, I only managed to put 2 quotes in for my acc essay (one from extract and one from elsewhere) but I linked them together and elsewhere in the play, a bit of context (less than I'd liked) but I managed to write about 2 and a half pages on it. Is it a huge problem because I didn't use more quotes, I analysed both quotes to the best I could with the help of your videos (obviously) but even still, rushed over the conclusion and didn't have time to check over my work. Is it a huge problem that would force the examiners to downgrade me?
we'll be given them at the same time
they're all in one paper
Yh ur gonna have to manage ur own time for this one spend max 55 on macbeth id recommend (even though ik ill spend longer - which isnt good😭😩😩😩)
@@Ika-zg7vz ong i spend like wayyy too long on everything else but unseen 😭😭
@@dahlia5644 samee for my mock i had like 30 mins left ☠️☠️☠️
how many paragraphs do you need to write?
id say 3, with 2 comparison points in each?
what a guy
PLEASE WHAT WAS THAT TINY LITTLE PASSAGE
Mr Salles are you an examiner
No, but I have Exam Pro
Gl guys 🍀
how did everyone find maths?
I do edexcel and I can say it’s the easiest paper I’ve ever done
@@KSinghhhM def better than the 1st paper
@@KSinghhhM woah that's smart of u 🤩🤩
@@brycerosling7847 what are the chances
@@rossrobinson9756 hahhaha hello mate
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