Personal statement introduction | Live edit

Additional tip below 👇
Here is the winner of my audit giveaway!
I edited their introduction to give you guys tips on how you can improve yours. There are some really key points in this example that I see time and time again, so I hope you found it useful! It's my first one, should I do it again? Let me know!
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For your additional tip, you might also consider adding a line or two to personalise to the school. Does a particular part of your experience align with the school? Can you relate to their key values etc.
Like I said in my reel, I help people secure teaching jobs. Personal statements are one of the forms of support as I know what a crucial role it plays in helping you get shortlisted. If you'd like me to take a look at your statement thoroughly (not an audit like this), get in touch.
Did you find this helpful? Would you like me to do another one? Leave a comment below. 40 comments and I'll do it 🙌
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[@خذنفس-ق7ج]

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[@PetitePrimary]

Thank you, I really appreciate it 😊