Clint Eastwood’s Unforgiven Scene REMADE: Short Film DVD Commentary w/o the DVD

A Short Film DVD Commentary without the DVD. I directed a scene from Clint Eastwood's Unforgiven. The short film I did in college taking a scene from the film shows me make mistakes and utilize a cool one shot camera move.
Filmmakers first short. What if Unforgiven used camera moves? What did I learn from some of my first short films?
00:00 - Intro
00:30 - Unforgiven Short Film Commentary
03:00 - Interviewing the Director
08:13 - Short Film / Scene Clean

[@dollyintomeaning]

I have some more thoughts. 1) could have had the characters come closer to camera also for more variety 2) could have staged a couple moments better by thinking in terms of shots within the shot for example
02:16 - give the girl a little more of the frame so she isn't cut off. Possibly have her inch closer or have camera rotate around and stop at same time but having gone further