IELTS Writing task 1: describing a diagram
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 16 ส.ค. 2024
- Learn how to get a band 9 in IELTS Academic Writing task 1 if you have a diagram question. See a diagram question sample, model answer and useful vocabulary.
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Unfortunately, tables's description is missing :(
The diagram depicts information about steel rods production in the furniture industry. Overall, it is clear that the method of manufacturing consists of eleven stages, beginning with the collection of raw materials and ending up with the inspection.
Firstly, the raw materials, which are iron ore, yellow ore, or carbon, are gathered and handed over to the processing area. Collected materials are then melted through a slit, heated to a temperature of 1300 to 1500 degrees Celsius. Next, this is transferred to a smelting cabin to undergo refinement before it is placed in a pouring machine to produce candescent metal and poured into ingots.
In the subsequent stage, ingots are then connected to a cooling reservoir at a temperature of 60 to 100 degrees Celsius. The next step is the strand casting in which metal goes through nozzles and the strands of cooled metal are made. Following this, metal passed through rollers and a machine for the heat treatment. The surface is then checked through a measuring automaton and a cutter is used in a sizing process. Finally, steel rods are stamped and ready to undergo inspection.
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In my eyes, it is exact describing for diagram but keep in mind about total words. I think it is exceed the limit.
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0:45
2:03 Questions you need to ask yourself about the diagram
2:24 Band 9 answer structure
3:21 Introduction
5:09 Overview
7:21 Specific Features
12:02 Second paragraph(Features)
12:50 Third paragraph(Features)
13:19 Full paragraph
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steel rods are produced in the furniture industry, not, 'for the furniture industry'.
(introduction)
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You are doing great, however, if I used your overview technique, I wouldn't achieve more than 6-6.5 at most for the lack of information. I guess the stages should be mentioned as the following:
Overall, the production process is divided into four main stages: mining, heating, metal forming, and inspection.
That would be marked as a better overview for the process and your band should be 7+
I mean no offense and i am actually still studying but I thought that I should've mentioned that
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