E.B. Andrews
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How to Write Magic Systems -- Overview: Attack on Titan, Star Wars, Harry Potter, and Avatar
Mastering the Mystical: Crafting Captivating Magic Systems Like Avatar & Beyond (Writing Lesson)
Does your magic system feel more like parlor tricks than a force that shapes your world? Unleash the power of a well-defined magic system! Dive into iconic examples from Attack on Titan, Harry Potter, Avatar: The Last Airbender, Star Wars, and Death Note, and learn how to create magic that's both awe-inspiring and integral to your narrative.
This writing lesson explores:
Defining the Rules and Limitations: From bending elements (Avatar) to wielding the Force (Star Wars), magic needs structure. We'll analyze how these worlds establish boundaries for their power systems.
Magic & World-Building: How does magic arise and influence the societies in your story? We'll delve into the rich tapestries of Avatar, Harry Potter, and Attack on Titan to see how magic shapes their cultures and conflicts.
Magic as a Plot Device: Is magic the solution or the source of problems? Analyze how Death Note and Star Wars use their magic systems to drive conflict and character development.
Whether you're writing fantasy, sci-fi, or any genre with fantastical elements, learn how to build a magic system that elevates your story to epic heights!
#writinglesson #magicsystem #worldbuilding #fantasywriting #fictiontips #creativewriting #avatarthelastairbender #harrypotter #attackontitan #starwars #deathnote
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How to Write Dystopian Fiction -- Fallout Universe
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How to Write Multiple Main Characters -- Fallout TV Show
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How to Write Magic Systems -- Attack on Titan
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From Titans to Transformation: Building a Captivating Magic System Like Attack on Titan (Writing Lesson) Does your magic system feel more like smoke and mirrors than a force that drives your story? Unleash the power of a well-defined magic system! Dive into the surprisingly nuanced "Titan powers" of Attack on Titan and learn how to craft a magic system that's both awe-inspiring and integral to ...
How to Write a Horror Story -- Late Night with the Devil
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How to Make Character Motivation -- Tommy Shelby from Peaky Blinders
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Is your character's motivation as sharp as a Peaky Blinder's razor? Unleash the power of complex desires! Join us as we dissect the enigmatic Tommy Shelby from Peaky Blinders, exploring what truly drives this ruthless gangster. This writing tutorial will equip you with: Techniques to craft multi-layered motivations that fuel your characters' actions. Strategies to weave past trauma, ambition, a...
How to Make a Suspenseful Story -- Omni Man from Invincible
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Want to leave your readers breathless with suspense? Dive into the case study of Omni-Man's shocking reveal in Invincible and learn how to craft moments that leave your audience reeling! This writing vlog explores: Building tension and anticipation throughout your narrative. Planting seeds of doubt and foreshadowing for impactful reveals. Using cliffhangers and twists to keep readers hooked. Cr...
How to Write a Villain Main Character - Eren Yeager from Attack on Titan
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Unleash the Titan Within: Crafting a Compelling Main Character Like Eren Yeager (Attack on Titan) Struggling to craft a main character that grips readers (or viewers)? Dive deep into the psyche of Eren Yeager, Attack on Titan's iconic protagonist, and learn how to build a main character who drives the story forward! This video explores: Developing a captivating protagonist with a clear goal and...
How to Make Better Side Characters - Iroh from Avatar the Last Airbender
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Unleash the Power of Side characters! Craft Unforgettable Characters Like Iroh from Avatar the Last Airbender! Want your side characters to steal the show (without overshadowing the hero)? Learn how to develop compelling supporting characters with depth and purpose, using Iroh, the beloved uncle from Avatar: The Last Airbender, as our guide! This video dives into: Building complex motivations a...
Zuko's Trial by Fire - Avatar: The Last Airbender
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I like Zuko because he looks like my channel picture but with a scar.
Can Laughter Conquer War? Analyze Aang's Unique Path to Saving the World
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A pacifist with the power of a hurricane? Join us as we peel back the layers of Aang, the reluctant hero fighting for a world he barely remembers.
Can He Truly Change? - Kratos from God of War Valhalla
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Laughing in the Face of Darkness: A Deep Dive into Heath Ledger's Iconic Joker
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The Darkness of Calvin Candie
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Beyond Fury: Exploring the Strategic Depths of 2019 God of War's Kratos
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The Scars of Loss: How Trauma Shapes Jin Sakai in Ghost of Tsushima
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  • @jacksontaylor290
    @jacksontaylor290 12 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Keep up the great work! This channel will explode eventually!

    • @E.B.Andrews
      @E.B.Andrews 11 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      Thank you for the support! Let me know if you have any topic ideas.

  • @harryk302
    @harryk302 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Love your videos mate!

    • @E.B.Andrews
      @E.B.Andrews 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Thank you my dude! Let me know if you have any ideas for future videos.

  • @sigmahuxxer6429
    @sigmahuxxer6429 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Can’t let gang know I fw millennial fallout video essays

  • @RecbyVideos
    @RecbyVideos 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Real underground youtube

  • @justsomeguy6240
    @justsomeguy6240 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Bro how do you not already have at least 500k subs? Your tone and delivery are so fire.

    • @E.B.Andrews
      @E.B.Andrews 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

      We’ll get there soon enough. You get to be one of the first thousand though, so that’s pretty cool. Thank you for the support!

  • @Not_A_Social_Media_Influencer
    @Not_A_Social_Media_Influencer 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

    And you do deserve way more subscribers!

  • @Not_A_Social_Media_Influencer
    @Not_A_Social_Media_Influencer 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Great video thank you! I've watched this film about 10 times now and it just keeps getting better!

  • @skiavariants1975
    @skiavariants1975 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Wow, I do not expect this to be so high quality, continue the good job 👍

  • @ThatGuyNamedFrost
    @ThatGuyNamedFrost 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

    When you eventually blow up, get an increase in production value, and get 500k subscribers, remember I was here appreciating everything you were putting out and thinking to myself “Oh yeah, this guy is going places.”

    • @ThatGuyNamedFrost
      @ThatGuyNamedFrost 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Also, I highly recommend watching LocalScriptMan and SavageBooks for editing ideas. They’re both writing channels and I think you would like them a lot.

  • @hyrumjohnson420
    @hyrumjohnson420 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Holy crap, how has your channel not blown up yet? This was incredible, walking the ever-so-fine line of commentary that adds and deepens what we've just seen without blandly stating the obvious "so this just happened" sort of thing. Thank you so much, I've just started digging through your content and it's incredible. As an aspiring author, this is so incredibly useful as I'm trying to iron out a remarkably good-hearted character set in the most morally vicious dilemmas war can offer. Thank you again, so much.

    • @E.B.Andrews
      @E.B.Andrews 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Oh dude that’s awesome. I didn’t think anyone actually came here for writing advice. I just thought it was for the laughs. Hopefully you keep getting value out of the channel. Thank you for the support!

    • @marcoschneider2107
      @marcoschneider2107 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@@E.B.Andrews actually I subscribed because of your writing advice videos. Now i am more than pleased and at the same time confused that you had produced such great and thoughtful essays on interesting topics that had less than 100 views. I'm currently writing a story myself and always look for new advice to compare it against. You really have some fresh new ideas or rather a way of breaking it down that isn't just the same writing rules most channels regurgitate. Keep up the good work, its just a matter of time till the algorithm promotes you to a wider audience.

  • @vietdragon5174
    @vietdragon5174 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    still waiting for the explaination or link to a full video that works

    • @E.B.Andrews
      @E.B.Andrews 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Check it now. Should be linked.

  • @bruhism173
    @bruhism173 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    5:25 this was a key factor in aot's showing, every weeks we were left on a cliff hanger wondering what would happen for a week 6:40 yeah isayama definitely fucked up the ending smoking fent bruh. 8:50 believe it or not, before the reveal, I guessed it right that eren was in control in a different point in time veiwing the first episode and guiding Dina to his mom, I still cant tell you why he did it but I guessed that right, and then something else i realized, is eren did the same thing during s2 and led dina towards them and hannes ends up being eaten, potentially to further breakdown and keep eren on track and unlock the power of the founder, but I was somehow able figure that out so eren seeing into the past and future did not come as a surprise rather than a shit, I am starting to predict this.

  • @demonicdude1328
    @demonicdude1328 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Eren should have finished the rumbling

  • @gamerstheater1187
    @gamerstheater1187 17 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Using a baby hamster for Carla's death is peak humor

  • @gamerstheater1187
    @gamerstheater1187 17 วันที่ผ่านมา

    "I'd have to make my money off youtube to recoop my loses" I had to make a quick check and noticed that you match the requirements for monetization (or at least basic monetization)

  • @roban2799
    @roban2799 17 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Amazing video man! I love both Attack on Titan and fantasy writing so this was such an interesting video for me. Gonna watch your other videos right now and I'm excited to see what you'll upload in the future

  • @ironheavenz
    @ironheavenz 17 วันที่ผ่านมา

    We did see Eren's ability to see the future in the past - We know from episode 1 that Eren somehow sometimes sees the future - We know memories are a weird thing that can be shared through weird ways like touching a royal blood - We know king Fritz' will overwrites the mind of the titan shifter if it's royal blood, meaning memories can travel through time - We have several references to characters kind of hallucinating memories, the most obvious one being the Owl and his reference to Mikasa and Armin - We know that somehow the founding titan acts like a god of eldians - It is mentioned that for some reason the attack titan can see the future sometimes and nobody is sure why - We learn that time in the paths dimension is a weird thing - When Eren is looking at his father's memories his father doesn't see Eren, he sees Zeke, implying he is seeing through Eren's eyes, implying that the memories can travel backwards somehow Finally Eren gets control over the founding titan and it all snaps together, Eren's been reading memories and sending memories back

  • @harryk302
    @harryk302 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Yoo this was good!! Hope you get big bro

  • @SamuelPulkkinen-jp8ev
    @SamuelPulkkinen-jp8ev 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The only real cheating was when Reiner did his "transferring consciousness to his body"-shite in the fight for Shiganshina. Never was hinted, never was given a sensible explanation in the context of the Titan powers and never came up again, just an excuse to have a false death twice.

  • @SamuelPulkkinen-jp8ev
    @SamuelPulkkinen-jp8ev 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    What I always felt fascinated by (well, when it got revealed) was how biological Isayama made his magic system in AoT. You can write a bunch of methods to have a piece of someone serve as the "source" for the magical power, drinking someone's blood or eating their heart are very tropey methods of "transferring" some power from person to person, but then you say something so out of the ordinary and weirdly specific like "spinal fluid". "That's a concept a scifi series would be more likely to use, they even something scientific as injections", I sit there wondering. "And that seems so impractical of a power source, almost as if the power doesn't exist for the convenience of use. Is there a reason why specifically spinal fluid?"

  • @piotr7448
    @piotr7448 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The peak of villanous villanity.

  • @spinningredchair8092
    @spinningredchair8092 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    We were actually given hints about Eren being able to see into the future from the very first episode! Before Eren wakes up, theres flashes of events that have yet to come, like the wall being broken, or Tyber being eaten! If you pay attention to the end of Season 3 Episode 12, theres a really out of place glitchy teaser for the coming events of Levis choice between Armin and Erwin, but it wasnt just a glitchy design choice. It was Eren! Sending memories (of the future) back to us the viewer! To get use to do what he wanted (which was to keep watching). Everyone is a slave to freedom, even us.

  • @KeemJL
    @KeemJL 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    W algorithm

  • @Lilo_D._Boom
    @Lilo_D._Boom 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I haven't watched the video, but I'm confused... Magic system?

    • @E.B.Andrews
      @E.B.Andrews 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Check out this week’s video (May 11th). I go over what magic systems are. Thank you for checking out the channel!

  • @Cybertron-vw4oh
    @Cybertron-vw4oh 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This is really good how does it only have 5 likes?

  • @trotskyboi8830
    @trotskyboi8830 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Less than 1k subs???????????? The quality of this video is fantastic! Also the points of this video are imo spot on, and bad magic systems can feel so cheap.

  • @patryk8719
    @patryk8719 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This perfectly explains why the power system in jjk is bs

  • @littleredruri
    @littleredruri 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I desperately don't want to explain the magic system in one big exposition dump but it also is starting to seem like the only way to eliminate any misunderstandings about it...

  • @No-I-dont-want-that
    @No-I-dont-want-that 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Damn. You don't know how much I like AoT's magic system. I wanted something similar. I searched the whole internet and found no major analysis. Thanks for this video.

  • @shellofwhatwas1563
    @shellofwhatwas1563 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I feel like having 1 or 2 characters cheat the magic system is not too bad of a thing, so long as the way they cheat it is consistent. For example, toji's heavenly restriction in Jujutsu Kaisen sets him directly outside of the bounds of the power system by just giving him absurd strength and literally removing his access to the main magic system, but you don't see anyone complaining about it because the way he breaks the magic system is consistent and cool.

  • @sparksdog8111
    @sparksdog8111 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Can I just say, you have excellent humor and the dry delivery of it all is perfect for the video essay format.

  • @StormWolf01
    @StormWolf01 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Eren's ability to see into the future was displayed in one of the first scene of the first episode, where he dreams of a bunch of things, including his mom being killed. When he wakes up, he has tears in his eyes, which Mikasa comments on.

  • @aguy6707
    @aguy6707 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    i agree from your example of attack on titan. and it show that perspective is one of the important aspek of it. also that rules that intended to makes boundaries of that said magic like in real life and make logical sense. to me i have a question, how to tells a viewers that set rules of the implement the magic system in the world where everyone include your protagonist already knew everything of that magic system? it become sorta like everyday use in the world of that. the the source, the rules, the limitation and many more like in my hero academia, but more fun?

  • @RoadTo1000Books
    @RoadTo1000Books 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Subbed. Gonna screenshot your subscriber count to prove that I was here when you were less than 600 haha.

  • @Tubbinater10
    @Tubbinater10 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Just found this channel, and dude, your quality and dedication to both these 10-25 minute videos and long format 1 hour + videos are definitely underrated.

  • @pojoh2585
    @pojoh2585 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Bro you are really good. Looks like youtube shadow banned you. You have a good mic, a good analysis. But, if I can give some advices, tell us until which season you are gonna spoil (I finished Peaky Blinders but I'm thinking about your others videos). And maybe, don't put long metaphor. Like Tom Brady, ok he's famous on the US, but "only" on the US. You miss a lot of english-speaking people from all over the world, people can stop the vid if you speak during 1min about an athlete they don't know, if they don't understand your jokes and parallels, they'll leave. Otherwise, you are doing a good job. Share your videos, and they will have a lot of views. (Maybe change the fonts of the thumbnail too, they don't look like as professional as your mic and analysis do, that's unlucky) Good job. Thanks for the vid. And sorry if my comment sounds negative, I've tried to make it constructive... 👍

  • @EugeneHKrabs-ie1lc
    @EugeneHKrabs-ie1lc 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    You forgot the 5th rule: In your magic system you have to have the ability to lose it all.

  • @b.p.879
    @b.p.879 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I love how at 8:49 the lighting ring above the Vault-Tech meeting looks kinda like an expanding pressure wave from a nuke!

  • @nestorv7627
    @nestorv7627 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Your analysis would've been perfect if you had mentioned that this "new power" of Eren's was actually foreshadowed, so in a sense it wasn't a total surprise.

  • @cjkalandek996
    @cjkalandek996 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I think there's a bit of a debate on whether or not the power of the Titans could be considered magic, as there's bit more of a science/biology aspect to it. Then again, the same could be said about vampirism and lycanthrope.

    • @E.B.Andrews
      @E.B.Andrews 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      In terms of storytelling, I just lump everything outside our laws of physics as magic. I talk about it a little in yesterday’s video, but overall, the same loose rules apply. We just wanna keep our story logic consistent.

  • @BlazeStorm
    @BlazeStorm 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Great video, always love me some Attack on Titan content but this was informative too!

  • @mucicafrajer9882
    @mucicafrajer9882 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This is so massively underviewed. The quality is of a 500k+ sub channel

    • @E.B.Andrews
      @E.B.Andrews 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I appreciate that my dude! We’ll get there. I might go crazy well before then, but that’s half the fun.

  • @seg162
    @seg162 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    On a basic level, I really liked how there wasn't power scaling as much as there was "punch -> turn into bigger person -> punch but bigger"

    • @whiteraven562
      @whiteraven562 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Yeah, we see whenever ERen fights another shifter that it's still down to which of them is better at martial arts

  • @LuckSMTS
    @LuckSMTS 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Great video dude!

    • @E.B.Andrews
      @E.B.Andrews 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Appreciated my dude. Gonna keep em coming til I go crazy/run out of ideas.

  • @tomigun5180
    @tomigun5180 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    More like: How NOT To! They all had ZERO emotional weight. And there was ZERO connection between them. No true love. No real friendship. Nothing they did had real consequences. Now compare all this with The Last Kingdom's great story and wonderful characters, and everything I said will become painfully obvious!

  • @AbhijeetSingh-nm2ll
    @AbhijeetSingh-nm2ll 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Save mikasa armin if you want to stop this cycle

  • @adrianvanleeuwen
    @adrianvanleeuwen 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I really enjoyed the Fallout series, with interesting characters. I have never played the game, so the reveals were very interesting as the story progressed. Well-developed plotting and well-written characters with emotional content.

  • @RenStrive
    @RenStrive 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Will you make how to not version or a second part of it? I am talking about Paths and Founder Titan since it destroyed how the magic System work

  • @DrGonzoInc
    @DrGonzoInc 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Awesome analysis. I recomend Brandon Sanderson’s free lectures on yt. They are a goldmine for creative writing from one of the biggest in the game

  • @ginger8052
    @ginger8052 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Great vid! One complaint though is the bleep around 3:30ish mark. It was just way too loud and abrupt. Literally took me out of the entire thing to write this. Just somethin to keep in mind in future stuff? Anyways good shit