While that is actually kind of funny, a part of me wonders if Bee would ever be that petty. Younger Autobots like Hot Rod would totally do it. But I think my version of Bee is a bit more mature for that lol Nonetheless, not a bad idea!
I did not see Megatron's death coming: forming a truce between him and Optimus, ending the war between the Autobots and Decepticons, only to be stabbed (or shot) in the back by a certain weasel of a Prime, but Ironhide kills him instead of the noble Optimus. The voice acting was brilliant too, especially when re-enacting Sentinel's death. Dr. Arkeville's mechanical awakening, harking back to G1 is always a plus, so was Mirage's sacrifice, Ironhide replacing Optimus in THAT viral video moment for his fallen Wrecker brothers, Megatron's tyrannical reign of terror, Team Goldbug and Spike's resourcefulness, Soundwave's death, and the Autobots and Spike paying tributes at the cemetery and parting ways in the epilogue. I'm in awe at this magnificent beast's majesty, from beginning to end. This should be in a museum so it will be preserved throughout history.
Yeah, I thought that sentinel prime would see the error of his ways and Megatron would kill him, but the opposite happened which i didn’t see coming at all
You know it JUST now dawned on me..... YOU made Soundwave grow along these Rewrites JUST as much as Bumblebee had.... you made him HIS PERFECT MIRROR. What Bee COULD have become if he stayed as a blind loyalist and never took charge in his own way. Soundwave may have had minions but even then he was STILL held back by Megatron being where he got his orders from.... and in the end? SPOILERS That's what costed him his life. His indecision. Edit: Also... DAMN you... you made me CRY OVER *MEGATRON* DYING!
I have some ideas for the next trilogy. Tf4 1. The opening would have Primus and Unicron’s fight at the dawn of time and have Unicron’s spirit trapped inside a planet which is not going to be Earth. 2. An Autobot crew led by Ultra Magnus (Elita One, Hot Rod, Hot Shot, Windblade, Bulkhead, Hound, Crosshairs, Drift and Prowl) gets chased by Lockdown who is trying to get his hands on the Anti Matrix (Unicron’s counterpart to the Matrix of Leadership) and meets up with Optimus’ Autobots on Earth. 3. Hot Rod and Hot Shot would be twin brothers, similar to Sunstreaker and Sideswipe. 4. Lockdown’s client would be Unicron and his heralds, not Quintessa 5. KSI drones would be completely removed 6. Lockdown’s crew would be comprised of Doubledealer, Flamewar, Bug Bite, Exhaust and Sixshot. TF5 (rewrite of Rise of the Beasts) 1. The Dinobots will be part of the Maximals with Grimlock as Optimus Primal’s second in command. 2. The Terrorcons would be led by Galvatron with Scourge and Cyclonus as his 2 lieutenants and have Nightbird, Batttletrap, Sideways and Slipstream as Terrorcon foot soldiers. 3. Rattrap and Tigatron will have cameos at the start of the film, getting killed off by Galvatron or Scourge. 4. If Bumblebee gets killed off and later gets revived by Energon, maybe have Airazor resurrected as well after she got corrupted by Dark Energon and gets killed by Optimus Primal. 5. All the named Terrorcons are spared except Sideways and Nightbird and get sucked into the Transwarp portal with Optimus and the Anti Matrix. 6. The GI Joe concept is completely removed. 7. The final scene will have Optimus floating inside Unicron who then says “Prime.” TF6 1. Unicron reformats Optimus into Nemesis Prime. 2. The final battle would be similar to Avengers Endgame. 3. Bumblebee reunites with Spike, Chip and Carly. I came up with those ideas to make Unicron and his heralds the central antagonists of the next trilogy.
Thanks for my ideas, but we need to give Pheonix Studios a break from rewriting and video making. Also, I have some new ideas for the TF4 rewrite: KSI and Cemetery Wind will be replaced by Mech from Transformers Prime, and they will have 2 man made transformers: Soundblaster (which was rebuilt from Soundwave) and Exhaust (who is rebuilt from Wheeljack) and use Unicron’s anti matrix as a power source to build and give life to their drones. Mech’s purpose of making those drones in this rewrite wasn’t authorised by the government. Later on in the rewrite, Lockdown will use the Anti Matrix to take control of Exhaust and Soundblaster. Also, Lockdown’s crew will fulfil the 5 man band trope with Lockdown as the leader, Bug Bite the lancer, Sixshot the big guy, Doubledealer the smart guy and Flamewar as the heart. At the resolution of the film, Mech would be arrested for unauthorised drone construction. Also at the start of the film, Ultra Magnus’ crew will scatter in escape pods across earth before their ship gets destroyed by Lockdown. This will give Shockwave and some of his decepticons more character in this rewrite.
Most of this isn't too bad, my only notes are I'd make the sheer number of new characters a little less extreme. Trim out either Bulkhead or Hound, Crosshairs, Prowl, and probably Windblade, as well as some of Lockdown's henchmen. Also, hell no to killing off Rattrap at the start of Rise of the Beasts. Tigatron is bad enough, but Rattrap is one of the BEST Beast Wars characters. Either use him well or don't use him at all, I say.
@@Nomad958 So instead of bringing in creativity and others to show their talents let's just cut corners? Idk if you know about this, but that's a no-no in fiction.
There's nothing else i can say other than this rewrite is amazing. Unlike Bayverse, it was; - Amazingly written - I actually cared for the characters - Deaths were meaningful - Both humans and Cybertronians get a good amount of focus - Respects G1 while doing it's own thing - Themes gave me feels (no sacrifice, no victory and faith in leadership were my favourite) - Transforming being an integral part of Cybertronian culture is an awesome idea Honestly, it makes me feel jealous and ashamed of my own poor writing skills 😓
This was an amazing rewrite series you have made and fixed. In all honesty you don’t have to rewrite Age of Extinction and The Last Knight cause your Transformers 3 rewrite left things on such a phenomenal note continuing it is the same as Marvel continuing the MCU it’s not a bad idea, but it’s gonna hard to top yourself after a long journey not only for yourself but also for the characters that you have dedicated to personally shaped. So all I can say is I salute you and for your journey. Sorry in advance if this sounds preachy.
Wow it's like....an actual movie with a real story, characters, character development, and steaks. It's not a Michael Bay fetish video where it's just bay saying hey see that cool robot with a hot woman next to it? want me to blow it up? Wanna see it again on repeat?
As the dude who was responsible for casting the VA’s for this video, it’s awesome to finally see it come to fruition. I love this series and what it has done for my favorite movies. Here’s to the future!
This is the Best (Rewritten) Conclusion I have ever heard and now with the Original Trilogy done. Now, we have the Knigh- wait, I mean the Unicron Trilogy underway, but like you said at the end of the video, I rather you focused on your life than sitting down and writing/typing 24/7. But still, this was an amazing video, I hope we will all see you soon. Til' All Are One.
Transformers 4 rewrite. We have a opening montage of Optimus prime narrating what happen after the Battle of Washington with both Autobots and Decepticons being hunted down by a organization called Cemetery Wind, with humanity superior like thoughts. (Almost like imperium) As a unknown ship arrives to earth being pursued by a bigger one. While hiding out in a city Ratchet in a different vehicle form is overhearing noises and gunfire as he looks to see a cybertronian being hunted down by a group of Cemetery wind soldiers. Despite wanting to help Ratchet is reluctant as he knows if he reveals himself, he'll be targeted too. Getting a better look he sees a red autobot with yellow flames being pinned down as he spots another cybertronian trapping him as he captures the Autobot. Ratchet will then recognized this cybertronian as Lockdown as he starts to have flashbacks to the war when he was with some autobots when Lockdown came in and toke them all out for a bounty. Returning to the present, he looks in dismay as Lockdown takes the helpless prisoner back to his ship hoping to interrogate him. Waiting almost 30 mins he moves out of the city knowing that he can't sit around and do nothing as he goes to try to find others. At a city we see a man with a trench coat and a pistol walking on the street way as he has his bag hanging around him. This man is Cade yeager, who unlike the actual movie was a member of NEST and when it was disbanded he left out of disgust for what he considers to be a betrayal. (he's a rambo like character.) Heading into a restaurant he notices a girl outside who looks alone. ((Hope you like this so far, if you want me to keep going just let me know. Otherwise i'll leave it here.
If the Dinobots come back it would be cool to have Slash, Snarl, Scorn, Slug, Swoop, Sludge, and Grimlock all together. Especially, since alot of these guys had concept art but never made it into the Final Cut. Slash: 50 ft tall, carries a pair of Energon Scythes, 47 ft tall Velociraptor Alt Mode. Snarl: 65 ft tall, carries an Energon Sword and Cybertanium Battle Axe, 59 ft tall Stegosaur Alt Mode. Scorn: 87 ft tall, carries a left forearm-mounted Cybertanium Spiked Whip, 59 ft tall Spinosaur Alt Mode. Slug: 75 ft tall, carries a Cybertanium Mace, 40 ft tall Triceratops Alt Mode. Swoop: 57 ft tall, carries both a Cybertanium Sword, and Fusion Crossbow, 53 ft wingspan Pterodactly Alt Mode (unlike the movie, he only has 1 head). He can fire energy bolts from his beak. Sludge: 71 ft tall, carries dual Cybertanium Spiked Lances, 61 ft tall Brontosaur Alt Mode. Grimlock: 84 ft tall, carries both a Cybertanium Mace and retractable Energon Flail, 63 ft tall Tyrannosaur Alt Mode. All the Dinobots can talk.
18:10 - 18:34 Optimus prime: hang on my autobots! The driller suddenly comes out and crushes prime's jetpack. Soundwave: you your time is up Bumblebee: No... (grunts) wheeljack!😢 Decepticon Protoform: get down autobot scum! Wheeljack looks back at bee one last time Wheeljack: stay strong bee... Soundwave: any last words? Wheeljack: get fraged decepticon, you will never win! Soundwave then picks wheeljack up on a chokehold, soundwave then blasts wheeljack in the chest He then twists wheeljack as the autobot mechanic falls to his knees before getting shot in the back by soundwave before his corpse falls to the ground as his optics and antennas flicker on and off before fading away. Bumblebee and the other autobots watch in horror as bee looks into wheeljack's lifeless eyes Bumblebee: goodbye my old friend... Soundwave: your next littlebug! Bumblebee: get off! Bee will then see spike and as spike tears up Bumblebee: we had one hell of a run...
18:34 - 19:56 *Rumble:* "Hehehehehehe... Hey, what's with the whistlin' noise?" _Missiles are seen heading their way._ *Soundwave:* "Incoming!" *Rumble:* *_"OH SHI-"_* _The street is heavily bombarded as Team Goldbug and Dr. Arkeville take cover, several Decepticons being killed by the missiles._ *Epps:* *_"GET DOWN!"_* _The Autobots use the distraction to break free and start fighting back again, overwhelming the remaining 'Cons. Spike spots several N.E.S.T. Ospreys heading their way. Cut to inside an Osprey, where Lennox and his men prepare to land._ *Lennox:* "Alright, here we go! Here we go! Director Faireborn, we've established contact. We got the Autobots free just in time. Preparing to make landfall now." _Back on the ground, Spike lights up a flare and waves it to alert the N.E.S.T. troops._ *Spike:* *_"HEY!!! DOWN HERE!!! HEY!!!"_* _As the Ospreys fly overhead, Ratchet laughs and jumps up, pumping his fist into the air._ *Ratchet:* "You were right, Chip! It can't rain forever! Oh, bless the AllSpark!" _Chip is seen giving a wholesome smile in the control room. Back in Washington, Sentinel clenches his fists and growls in frustration as he sees all this happen._ *Sentinel:* "Enough of this nonsense! How they all fail to understand... that the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." _He activates the Space Bridge, opening a portal that brings Cybertron into Mars' orbit. Elsewhere, Megatron sees this happen and freezes in place, his optics and mouth wide open in shock at the sight of his beloved homeworld. He is completely oblivious to other Decepticons trying to address him over intercom._ *Ratbat:* "Lord Megatron! Lord Megatron, come in! The human insects just launched a counterattack, and the Autobots are free again!" *Rumble:* "They've got us pinned down! We're gettin' ripped apart here! Whadda we do?!" *Ratbat:* "What are your orders, master?! Master?! What are your orders?! Master!" *Rumble:* "Boss, whadda we do?!" *Ratbat:* "Orders! *_ORDERS, MASTER!"_* *Megatron:* "Cybertron... you are saved... at last..."
Yeah I envisioned him as still being a Cybertronian tank in this rewrite. He and his Decepticon protoforms will need Earth-based vehicle modes once they go into hiding. Perhaps that can be his final command to his troops before they all split up and go their separate ways? Could also be his very last line in the film.
@phoenixstudios9078 if you plan to give him an earth mode, I recommend he goes for an apache helicopter in case he ever gets targeted by the government so he can make a quick getaway. Plus that's the vehicle mode he used in the 2007 game.
Fucking baller rewrite. Absolutely better than what we got for the actual movie. Now, someone make a film-length animation on TH-cam following this premise. And Phoenix, I hope that one day you do get to the new Trilogy. But if you can't, that's fine. You have work to get to, and I'm sure everyone else can agree with me.
Some Transformers 4 rewrite ideas that you can use: - the scene opens up with Optimus Prime, Elita 1, and Glitch going on a recon mission and we get to see their friendship through some jokes and mentions about their past, Eventually, they get ambushed by a group of Decepticons and Glitch falls down a cavern and presumably dies. -We cut to the present day, a Decepticon, Black Shadow is running away from something playing music. While Black Shadow runs away, he gets ambushed and shot in the leg by a giant Transformer, Tesarus. Black Shadow crawls away and gets cornered by the rest of the D.J.D. (Helex, Kaon, Vos, The Pet, Thesaurus, and Nickel), He begs them to spare him and says that the war is over but he stops when he hears music playing, Tarn approaches him and says “Until Megatron says otherwise, it isn't” Black Shadow responds, "But he-” But before Black Shadow can tell Tarn that he did, Tarn stabs Black Shadow in the chest and rips out his spark. -A new set of pods lands on Earth, and a new team of Transformers consisting of Elita 1, Whirl, Hound, Crosshairs, Drift, Windblade, and Hot Rod. They receive a distress beacon coming from an abandoned building and they find Optimus’ body in stasis mode. After some work, they reactivate his body. The scene will be similar to the part where Cade brings him back. Optimus points a gun at them but Optimus calms down at the sight of Elita. -When Team Prime and Team Elita regroup, they discuss what they’ll do and how they’ll get back home. While the team gets along, Optimus and Elita will have a private talk away from the others, They’ll talk about if anything will be the same anymore after losing so many friends to the war. They almost share a moment together but they notice Whirl and Hot Rod watching. -During the Highway battle, The D.J.D. is chasing the group but Tarn is specifically going after Optimus. The battle will play out similar to Optimus’ fight with Galvatron but he will be replaced with Tarn. When Optimus gets the upper hand, he gets shot from behind. They look to see Lockdown and his ship approaching them. Optimus weakly speaks “Lockdown” They continue to have the same conversation they did in the movie but Lockdown will point out Tarn for having a huge bounty on his head and decides to take them both. -While on Lockdown’s ship, Optimus and Tarn will be placed into their cells and they get into a heated argument. We also get introduced to Lockdown’s crew, Stinger, Nightbird, Bug Bite, Soundblaster, Thrust, and Double Crosser. The Dinobots will also be in the cells next to Optimus and Tarn -To summarize the next few parts: Elita and the rest of the Autobots are getting hunted by the D.J.D. and Optimus, Tarn, and the Dinobots work together to escape Lockdown’s ship. Optimus and Tarn will have an emotional moment where it’s revealed that he was Glitch and he switched sides after Shockwave brought him back, they part ways after that. Tarn won’t be seen for a while -The Climax battle will have Optimus fight Lockdown but Lockdown gets the upper hand in the fight. Tarn will surprise attack Lockdown while Elita tries to remove the Star Saber from Optimus’ chest. Optimus will kill Lockdown the same way he did in the movie. -They try to help Tarn but he’s already dying from the wounds he got from Lockdown, They accompany their friend in his last moment as he says “Till all are one” -For an after-credit scene. I can't decide if it should be about the Quintessons or Unicron. To summarize both: Quintessa and the rest of the Quintessons will be shown giving orders to Nemesis Prime (Nova Prime) to retrieve the All spark. For Unicron, it will show him drifting through space and talking to Galvatron, Cyclonus, and Scourge. He’ll talk the same way or at least similar to how he talked to Scourge in Rise of the Beasts. Or maybe he can talk to Megatronus Prime since he was a herald of Unicron in one of the comic lines and since Liege Maximo was the Fallen in the Transformers 2 rewrite (Sorry if I explained some parts badly or if I said too much)
And thus ends the greatest trilogy that never was. Despite it ending on a somber note I kinda like it that way as it gives us an ending we don't see a lot on film. The characters win but their government strips them of their status and honor despite everything they have done, the ongoing war ends with a truce between the two leaders and maybe they forgive each other and despite Optimus now being seen as a fugitive he still has faith in the humans. I would totally okay with this being the end of your Transformers rewrite and rewrites in general since like you said you have a lot of obligations and priorities in both your professional and personal life. It all started with Transformers, it's only fair that it ends with Transformers
Now this is what i wish to be the original film, this was just to show how Bay failed in several aspects of the movie, the truce part, now that is what i'm talking about, real Optimus would accept it even feeling doubt on Megatron, Megatron still died and you putting Ironhide as the killing streak guy worked way better, like you said, you're not sure if you'll do the "Unicron trilogy" of the movies, and i respect that, but if you ever do, i'm sure you would do it awesome, your a great writter man, good job!
So far your rewrite of transformers 3 is now my favorite story in this series. All three of your transformers rewrites are truly amazing to listen too, megatrons death in this story was bittersweet and tragic. The first trilogy is amazing, if you do decide to continue the second trilogy... take as much time as you need. You deserve a break after creating this masterpiece of storytelling in my opinion. Don't rush yourself and don't let anyone tell you otherwise, take your time and I'm sure when your ready... we'll support your rewrites no matter the cost. I had to use that line just because. Take care, until we the fans meet again.
Oh heck yeah! Just saw this pop up and immediately jumped in! Really love this rewritten trilogy. Would like to see a continuation, but I understand if you need a break. This seems like a good place to end for now or ever.
I loved this Rewrite soi much! Can't believe you actually used the OG ending for the DOTM Rewrite! Very respectful and impactful deaths to Mirage, Wheeljack, Megatron etc. Loved that you use Theorymus' SFM video for the ending.
Imagine how cool if it would be if the other humans from the other Transformers cartoons appeared in Age of Extinction or The Last Knight Like Miko or Jack from Transformers Prime hell maybe even Sari Sumdac from animated could be a main character for extinction That'd be a legitimately cool idea to take other human characters from the franchise and put them in the movies
Transformers 4 Rewrite: The movie as Ratchet and Shockwave are trying to avoid being caught by Cemetery Wind. Already a number of Decepticon Protoforms have fallen victim to this CIA Black Ops Unit. When the duo get surrounded, Ratchet tries to plead to the humans to stand down and reveals the truce between Autobots and Decepticons. Some humans pause upon this revelation, but Ratchet gets shot by Lockdown. His dying words are for Shockwave to run, a move that he deems logical with a hint of reluctance in his tone. By now, most of the humans who fled have been arrested by Cemetery Wind. James Savoy looks eager to find Spike and Carly after Epps wounded him, refusing to come in quietly. NEST was dissolved with Faireborn, Chip, and Lennox now running the TRF. While Cemetery Wind solely works for the American government, the TRF serves the United Nations which has a softer attitude towards the Transformers. Spike and Carly find themselves on the run from Lockdown and his mercenaries until Optimus and Bumblebee intervene. Bee escapes with the humans, but Optimus is injured and goes into hiding in Cade Yeager’s place. One major problem: Cade is a major supporter of Cemetery Wind, or more accurately he really hates the Transformers. His wife was in Washington during the last movie and perished. Now Cade will do whatever it takes to protect his daughter, including making weapons and applying to join Cemetery Wind, though he’s been refused multiple times. At first, Cade is excited when he realizes he has Optimus Prime. Besides the big reward which will pay off his bills, Cade would also be seen as a national hero and could leverage it to join Cemetery Wind. After ordering his assistant Lucas to call the CIA, Cade taunts Optimus and calls him a murderer. When the Prime awakens, Cade stands firm determined to not let Optimus reach his daughter. He’s thus shocked when he hears Prime talk about his past and what went down at Washington. Cade loses his nerve, realizing the Transformers aren’t the cold heartless machines he thought they were. When Cemetery Wind and Lockdown show up, instead of Shane a Decepticon shows up to take the humans away while Optimus covers them. Lucas’s death hits harder as Lucas wanted nothing to do with the Transformers and was just along for the ride because Cade was his only friend. This is what destroys any remaining anti-Transformers hatred Cade and his daughter had. Optimus and the Decepticon, who is called Drift, regroup with Bumblebee, Spike, Carly, Shockwave, Arcee, and Steeljaw. Looking into Steeljaw’s memories, the group learns he and Ironhide ran into the other Decepticon protoforms in a trap. They all fought to the bitter end, taking out many mercenaries and humans with Steeljaw reluctantly fleeing after Ironhide ordered him, refusing to let another Wrecker die on his watch. Steeljaw’s memories reveal the dead Transformers were taken by Cemetery Wind instead of by the mercenaries, who reveal that Lockdown is waiting for his employer to come to Earth. Learning from their friends in the TRF about a sudden surge in tech and weapons, the group realizes TRF’s supplier, Blackrock Industries, is working with the US government to advance their Cybertronian technology. Filled with rage, the group attack Blackrock Industries where they learn their dead friends are being used to create a drone army of Transformers led by Lockdown’s employer, Galvatron who just arrived. Just as Megatron was an apprentice to the Fallen, Galvatron was the same. However Galvatron became too arrogant and tried to overthrow Megatron and the Fallen. Shockwave knew that Galvatron had barely escaped with his life, but can’t fathom how he was able to repair himself and hire Lockdown. The team is forced to flee, but Optimus and Shockwave get captured by Lockdown while Carly and Tessa get dragged along. The UN and TRF come down hard on the USA and Cemetery Wind, demanding to know why they are working with the mercenaries and why they never arrested Cybertronians. They’re especially angered when they find out about Epps and Team Goldbug being held prisoner and tortured without notifying them or announcing it to the world. Blackrock and his company also have questions as they thought the drones were for TRF, not Galvatron. While Tessa is scared to death, Carly takes charge and leads the girl to safety while Lockdown reveals to Optimus and Shockwave that Galvatron was saved by the creators of the Transformers. They want to get revenge on the Transformers for destroying Cybertron, but they need a big event to draw out the Transformers who have gone into hiding. The capture of the leaders of the Autobots and Decepticons would certainly draw out many, proven by the fact the rest of the team is trying to get to Lockdown’s ship. Just in case, Galvatron has a Cyberforming Bomb. If Prime and Shockwave escaped, Galvatron would detonate the bomb on Earth. Decepticons would assume Galvatron was leading a resurgence on Earth as would the Autobots. Lockdown figures the hidden Transformers would respond more fiercely if they heard of the deaths of the leaders, so he dumps Optimus and Shockwave into a part of the ship where he keeps the Dinobots, a team of Autobots experimented on by Shockwave to be more aggressive. They didn’t like Optimus much either. The escape happens like in Age of Extinction, but it’s Shockwave who proposes leaving Earth to its fate. The team can simply transmit from their new ship what actually happened and can then rally their scattered people to take on their creators. When Optimus refuses to abandon humanity, Shockwave challenges Optimus to a duel for leadership. Spike and Cade however talk Shockwave out of the duel with help from Drift, asking if Shockwave truly wants any more innocents to suffer at the hands of Transformers. Shockwave reveals that logic dictated to him that the war didn’t make any sense and thus all the lives lost in it were for nothing. He had led the Decepticons on the Moon in hopes of protecting them, but his priorities temporarily shifted when he learned Cybertron was dead. Now, Shockwave is determined to prevent the loss of more innocents. Blackrock got his hand on the Cyberforming Bomb when Galvatron left it unattended at his company headquarters, so he runs to Tokyo where the headquarters of Blackrock Industry’s Asian Branch is. Blackrock calls the TRF suspecting that things weren’t kosher and when they connect him to the group, he is horrified that he’s holding onto something that can wipe out the city. Galvatron and Lockdown rush to Japan as well as the group and a vicious battle breaks out. Dinobots tear through drones, Autobots and Decepticons take down mercenaries, and the humans get some payback against Cemetery Wind. Lockdown and the remaining drones are wiped out when the Cyberforming Bomb goes off outside Tokyo while Galvatron flees with the remaining mercenaries, determined to get revenge. Cemetery Wind is exposed for their crimes and the US government is forced to join the TRF lest they receive sanctions far heavier than ever other in history. The Autobots and Decepticons along with their human friends are cleared of all charges, though most of humanity still fears the Transformers. Despite trying to warn the rest of their kind not to come, the group can only watch as Autobots and Decepticons arrive on Earth. Optimus puts Shockwave and Bumblebee in charge of the new arrivals and hunting down Galvatron while he plans to gather Transformers remaining in hiding so they can be prepared for the return of their creators: the Quintessons.
28:45 - 29:05 @ phoenix studios, thank you so much for using my comment for this scene! I didn't know you would use it for your video! Thank you so much!
I’ve waited so long for this final part and you did not disappoint one bit!! I watched it last night to let the details soak in, and man, oh man, where do I start?! The amazing use of battle tactics, the perfect balance of human and Transformer scenes, Mirage’s last hurrah, Wheeljack’s execution, the final charge against the Decepticons, Megatron and Sentinel’s deaths!! For a minute, I was actually kinda scared you'd kill off Bee and Arcee too: I'm glad they live to fight another day. You have no idea how happy you made me when you used the original DOTM ending from the novel. I also watched the 3D animation of it, and I sincerely hoped you’d use that ending truce between Optimus and Megatron for your rewrite: and once that scene came up, I felt like a kid again watching this film for the first time. Your character development and action scenes are truly something to behold. And I was especially blown away by the entire team splitting up in the end. You just created the PERFECT segue into Age of Extinction, if you ever choose to rewrite that film too. Overall, I’m so honored to have been able to watch this entire rewritten TF trilogy! I hoped that it would tie everything up with a neat bow, and you delivered like Amazon Prime! Even if you don’t choose to rewrite AOE and TLK, I’m perfectly fine with that. If your versions of the Bayverse films are what we got in theaters instead of canon, than I can say with absolute certainty that it would’ve stood alongside Lord of the Rings, Christopher Nolan’s Batman Trilogy, and Star Wars Ep. 4-6 as one of the greatest movie trilogies of all time. For now, you’ve more than earned a break. Take as long as you need to rest and recharge from the extensive rewrite you gave to us. ‘Til next time. ‘Til all are one!!
Dude I've been waiting for fraggin years for this video to come out. I know it must've been a pain to write all this and come up with all these intriguing ways of modifying and keeping some scenes from DOTM. I love the human characters and I really love that Megatron put all his faith in shockwave and soundwave. The balancing between the humans and transformers is chefs kiss. Even if it takes years I hope you do AOE and TLK because those film needs serious help.
I can’t believe we could have got probably one of the greatest trilogies of all time if you were the writer and Bay action director. This trilogy alone is on the same level as Dark Knight and LOTR in my opinion. Now I can’t imagine what you have in store for us in second trilogy if it ever happens, the ending was very satisfying but i hope that you can continue your series, it means alot to all your fans bro🫡💪😁
Thank you! Personally I don't think I'm a sophist aced enough writer to be compared to the writers of masterpieces such as LOTR and The Dark Knight trilogy. But I appreciate the support all the same :)
I once heard someone pitch that Unicron being Earth in the bayverse would lead to an End of Evangelion like story where humanity is compelled to awaken Unicron, as his white blood cells. And that part of it would require a full planetary evacuation prior to the final showdown If that’s what a simple elevator pitch of Unicron’s awakening would be like, I cannot *wait* to see you slowly build up to that
That is awesome!😁 And the ending is way better than the original and i know it’s too early for the rewrite of Age of Extinction but I like most parts of the movie like Lockdown and human villains are motivated by lose of loved ones and vengeance and their radical and anti transformer believes and tragedies of war and the Dinobots! And I want to see Nightbird as a man made transformer and Starscreams ghost and the public stands for the autobots and the brilliant cameos of Peter Cullen and Frank Welker stood out for Optimus Prime and its a reference and homage to the episode of Justice League Unlimited. And also the Quintessons have a larger role as cunning yet evil deceivers to manipulate humanity into their own self destruction.
Hot damn, that was a rewrite. I got say, this was well worth the wait. I've been saving all my thoughts for this part so here we go. First off I was iffy on the idea of Ironhide living back when you posted a poll on your community tab, however, after seeing Sparkplug get killed off in part 2, I've got to say it was a very fair trade off, since they bonded over their shared backgrounds as soldiers in your 07 rewrite, and it helps progress Spike's character arc in this rewrite, also him killing Sentinel Prime felt so cathartic, I was like "Hell yeah! Kill that Bastard!". love you give him Bayverse Prime's thirst for blood, since we still got a version of the kill steak. Also his relationship with Steeljaw and use of chainsaw gun kind of remined me of Denji and Pochita from Chainsaw Man. Secondly Sentinel's betray here was more logical than in the OG, especially since it falls apart lore wise once you think about it too much, PointlessHub probably explained it best as to how convenient and contrived the plan was in his Transformers videos, and while I liked his original colors and vehicle mode I like the blue and orange on him as they remind me of his Transformers Animated counterpart. Thirdly, I hated Mirage your ROTF rewrite but I felt kind a sad when he died, you really did a good job developing him considering how different he was to his ROTB counterpart (also your TF2 rewrite low-key predicted Autobot team). Fourth I loved how the ending borrowed from the original ending of DOTM with the truce, and seeing Sentinel use Liege Maximo's staff since I have been dying to see that, funnily enough I once suggested Shockwave making the truce with Optimus to to him being logical. Fifth I liked how Sam wrapped up his arc by killing Ratbat. Sixth, the Autobots coming together to kill Soundwave was an epic scene and I love how it emphasized the bond between them. They're more than friends, they're family. Seventh, at the ending I'd like to imagine as Optimus makes his speech, he stares upon a Freightliner cabover truck similar to G1, he scans it before transforming hitching up to his trailer and rolling out as Linkin Park's Iridescence plays in the background. I got a say this was a blast to watch and as much as I want to watch the T4 and TF5 rewrites and TF6, I can understand why you may not get to them. At the end of the day other priorities should take precedent over TH-cam. If you can't make rewrite videos for those films it'd be cool if you could share with us in a post or something of the ideas you had in mind for those. I got to say, and I'm saying this as something who grew up and loves the Bayverse, this was great, and if you can't make any more TF rewrites, you at least ended on a high note.
5:45 Giving real "From the moment I understood the weakness of my flesh, it disgusted me" vibes All in all, every single one of your rewrites is even better than the last
As someone who grew up with the Bayverse, I adore this series! Can’t wait for your rewrite of transformers 4. Maybe we’ll get some new rookie wreckers for ironhide to command and train, and I’d love to see how you would handle the dinobots. Maybe the dinobots could combine into a combiner that makes devastator look like small fry. As for who I’d like to see as the rookie wreckers, maybe quickswitch, whirl, impactor, and maybe team bullet train (Railspike, rapid run and midnight express, who combine into Rail racer).
Wow. Not only did we lose Wheeljack, but we also had Mirage go out in a figurative and literal blaze of glory. He sure won't (spoilers for Rise of the Beasts ahead!) come back as an Iron Man suit (or another car model) from *that.* Nice nod to the end of the G1 show's series premiere, too. I expected the original, scrapped ending for Dark of the Moon to be used and remixed in some fashion, but I didn't expect that it and the ending that we *did* get in the original film would be combined by having Megatron make a genuine truce with Optimus, but get killed off anyway, and not only by the hand of a Prime, but by the hand of another *fallen* Prime, in about the exact same way in which Megatron dealt with Liege Maximo. In the end, *both* villains did the backstabbing: Megatron figuratively, and Sentinel *literally.* It's ironic. Sentinel opposed Liege Maximo's destructive pride, treachery and inability to comprehend the value of other life forms, along with the other Primes, but now, though unwittingly, he has avenged him, and become just *like* him in his *own* destructive pride, treachery and the inability to comprehend making peace with an enemy. Now, going to be transparent, after how much more reluctant Sentinel had been characterized in the previous part, I'm of two minds about his fate here. On one hand, I figured that his begrudging assistance of Megatron would become more and more of a source of great regret the further along the master plan came, and he'd be much more apologetic to Optimus for his betrayal, only sharing the same wish as everyone else at his core. I imagined a burned out old man who doesn't want to conquer anything, or destroy worlds (let alone Earth), or bring further harm to mankind, or go down in Transformer history as a supreme, unstoppable god, just go back to Cybertron and see it in it's former beauty, even if for only one last time, with Optimus not regarding him in his final moments with disgust, but with pity in that he let his war scars control his actions in the end, followed by his ancient mentor hoping his fellow Prime brethren will forgive him as he succumbs to his wounds inflicted on him by his old nemesis and joins the AllSpark; aside from sitting back while Arkeville detonated the power plants around the country, I felt there was a naturally laid out path to that point. On the *other* hand, I can understand such a sequence coming out as being too similar to *Megatron's* character development, and honestly, dang, is it satisfying to see Ironhide and Sentinel's roles from the original film *reversed!* Oh yeah, and I must reiterate, Hip hip *hooray!* Ironhide lives! Even better, not only does he avenge the Wreckers, he avenges his canon counterpart with his own cannons! Justice for the Autobots' weapon specialist has been served, at long last! Oh, catharsis over fiction has never felt so good! That aside, with how much Sentinel's once good judgment had become corrupted by this point, doing him in didn't feel as much like the spiteful execution it was in the original film. Rather, it felt more like a mercy kill. His psyche had been damaged beyond all hope of healing, and as a result, he played a part in darn-near causing the end of the world, so it became clear that he, pardon the pun, was *far* past his prime, and somebody needed to put this broken, perpetually angry, rampaging old coot out of his misery. Though, another part of me kind of wishes we got some last words about Sentinel from Optimus and, of all the characters, Chip. Picture Chip witnessing the end of the battle and Sentinel's last fast one before his death, and saying "I guess he was no George Washington after all.", and Optimus taking one, final look at the dead, disgraced Prime and lamenting "All these millennia, I thought he was made of sterner stuff." Now, *this* detail, I don't know if it was on purpose, but the last remaining Autobots by the end of this rewrite are the core cast of Transformers: Prime, just with Bulkhead swapped out for Ironhide, and Steejaw added as the Team Pet. Fantastic show, so I can appreciate that a lot. Another surprise is that Shockwave ended up being the last surviving named Decepticon in this story, and with Liege Maximo, Starscream, Soundwave and even Megatron now dead, he is effectively the Decepticons' new leader. That opens up a new world of possibilities for the Transformers' adventures going forward. Poor Starscream, though. Megatron has fallen, and he didn't live to see it. XD So, instead of his "The day will never come that we forsake this planet and it's people." speech, Optimus sends out a warning to avoid Earth to the remaining Autobots across the galaxy. Should we ever see the Transformers 4 rewrite come to pass, looks like Crosshairs, Hound and Drift will be missing *that* memo. Okay, finally, I want to take this as an excuse to share my personal subtitles for your Transformers 2 and 3 rewrites. I call the second installment "The Prime Legacy", and the third "Darkness of Two Worlds". I've been holding on to those subtitles for *months* now, and I swear I thought for a good long while about the stories and themes of these rewrites before deciding on them (though I came up with The Prime Legacy more easily than Darkness of Two Worlds). What do you think? Now, whatever project you want to do next, take as much of a break from Transformers, and video making in general, as you need before tackling it, and thank you again for making these excellent alternatives to films that have been key features in my life since I entered my teen years! Until that day... 'til all are one!
Thank you very much for the heartfelt feedback! I actually like those subtitles a lot! To the point it is making me regret following the action movie trend of just naming each sequel by their numerical order.
@@phoenixstudios9078 You're welcome, good sir! Something I almost forgot: did you know your Transformers rewrite series has a TV Tropes page? I discovered it some time ago after Transformers 3 - Part 2 came out, and I've been editing it.
As a someone who’s been a transformers fan since I was a kid (2004) I grew up with these movies and this rewrite series was perfect I hope you carry on with other rewrite series!
Hopefully (whenever you find time!) That you do the rewrite for TF4 & TF5 & then a part 6. I cannot wait to see how you'll handle Galvatron, Cyclonus, Scourge & Unicron🤘🏼 Amazing video aswell!
Yeah, maybe have them as their own characters, not rebuilt versions of previous Decepticons but Terrorcons created by Unicron and have them and Unicron as the central antagonists of the sequel trilogy and not Lockdown and Quintessa/the Creators. Also among the Terrorcons, I fine with Battletrap and Nightbird, but I also want to see Sideways and Slipstream as members of Unicron’s Terrorcons army.
@@slickmanfonzthatanti-trollmaybe have Soundwave rebuilt as Soundblaster, Laserbeak as Buzzsaw and Wheeljack as Exhaust. Maybe have them be built by Mech and brought to life by Unicron’s Anti-Matrix (a counterpart to the Matrix of Leadership), which crashed in the Arctic and later have the drones taken over by Lockdown and his crew who are trying to get the Anti Matrix back to Unicron.
really not sure how I feel about the whole "redeeming Megatron" thing, but I do kinda like how his death at the hands of Sentinel kinda mirrors the death of the fallen at his own hands. Certainly interesting!
This came at a great time, thank you. I do hope you'll continue for AOE and TLK, but I did had an idea for Lockdown where he doesn't kill Ratchet but keeps him alive as bait for Optimus and other Autobots but he also has a sick habit of taking something from each of his captures, like taking a scanner from Ratchet, this way Ratchet isn't killed off in an unfair and gut renching way won't happen to just make room for a new cast that was completely unnecessary.
The last thing arkeville hears is someone who he considers insignificant admiting he's a mere human before getting blasted by that said someone. Spike basically became a badass for sparkplug! 🫡🫡🫡
*This is a major improvement from the original movie! I however do have a suggestion for the 4th movie if you do commit to making it.* *If the whole knight theme is still included, have somebody other than Optimus be a knight. Dude’s already a prime, he doesn’t need to be a knight.*
Excellent rewrite of Transformers 3, @Phoenix Studios. I did like alot of the changes and addition elements such as the combination of both the film and novelisation scene of Optimus, Megatron, and Sentinel confrontation (the truce and the death of both Megatron and Sentinel), Ironhide's rampage, kept Shockwave alive, Spike's arc and his farewell to Optimus and Bumblebee, etc. I can't wait for your rewrite of Transformers second trilogy (4, 5, and 6) but take your time and you deserve a long break. Keep up the great work @Phoenix Studios. Until then "Till All Are One".
FINALLY. Edit: This triology that youve created is amazing in every way! Its a rollercoaster of emotion, and the ending is just so sentimental. Optimus remaining hopeful despite the circumstances, and the ferocious Megatron having a change of heart only to be slain by Sentinel was truly something. I was genuinely hoping that Megatron would live to see Cybertron restored from their unity, but its a ballsy move from you. We writers should learn to be more audacious with our writing, especially in this modern world. Like Optimus said, and in acknowledgement to your life, may fortune be found in your travels to life. God bless you man. Till all are one. Also, you got VOICE ACTORS involved in this masterpiece youve made!? Awesome! Edit 2: Just realized. Could you explain why didn't Megatron bother to tell that Sentinel has the staff and he could very well use it? Just asking because I felt like there's a little error there. But I digress. It's still a fantastic rewrite and it's the type of stuff we should be striving for as writers. Excellent stories!
This was a great re-write for the trilogy that I grew up with. Take care of yourself and I'll be waiting for your return to the Transformers scene with the 4th instalment (or not as it's entirely up to you). Till next time, till all are one
I just realized that Arcee is the last living member of the second wave of Autobots now. Poor girl is gonna have survival guilt i presume
Oh great, she'll fully become Tf Prime Arcee soon
@@thesymbiotenation.4552she’ll probably get the blue paint job for ther evasion mode too
"Do not lament his absence, for in my spark, I know this is not the end, merely a new beginning. Simply put, another transformation" -Optimus Prime
Exactly.
The “ONLY” thing I would change is when soundwave dies bee would switch back to his voicebox to mimic him tauntingly
While that is actually kind of funny, a part of me wonders if Bee would ever be that petty. Younger Autobots like Hot Rod would totally do it. But I think my version of Bee is a bit more mature for that lol Nonetheless, not a bad idea!
I did not see Megatron's death coming: forming a truce between him and Optimus, ending the war between the Autobots and Decepticons, only to be stabbed (or shot) in the back by a certain weasel of a Prime, but Ironhide kills him instead of the noble Optimus. The voice acting was brilliant too, especially when re-enacting Sentinel's death. Dr. Arkeville's mechanical awakening, harking back to G1 is always a plus, so was Mirage's sacrifice, Ironhide replacing Optimus in THAT viral video moment for his fallen Wrecker brothers, Megatron's tyrannical reign of terror, Team Goldbug and Spike's resourcefulness, Soundwave's death, and the Autobots and Spike paying tributes at the cemetery and parting ways in the epilogue. I'm in awe at this magnificent beast's majesty, from beginning to end. This should be in a museum so it will be preserved throughout history.
Yeah, I thought that sentinel prime would see the error of his ways and Megatron would kill him, but the opposite happened which i didn’t see coming at all
The ending of this rewrite transitions way better into Age of Extinction than the original.
i love what you’ve done with ironhide in this rewrite. he definitely should’ve been in the final battle to begin with.
Absolutely. The only change I would make is for Ironhide to kill Sentinel using the Rust Gun.
@@screamerlover5781 something i wish optimus would’ve done in the original film just to get some solidarity for what happened to ironhide.
@@estevangarcia1089he did in the novelization
“Babe Wake up: Phoenix studios released DOTM rewrite part 3!”
*Springs to life with clicking intent*
I just realized: Mirage uploading a virus to the enemy fleet is the exact strategy R2 used in the Rise of Skywalker rewrite's finale.
Yea they even both died trying to disable the fleet
That is how you end a trilogy on a high note
It was an honor to voice Optimus Prime!🫡
Great story!! 👍💥
You did great man!😎🔥
You were amazing. Very good job
@@Supersaurus4 thx
@@legendxd1295 thx
Dude, your Optimus was spot on! Won't be surprised if you end up voicing him eventually haha.
You know it JUST now dawned on me..... YOU made Soundwave grow along these Rewrites JUST as much as Bumblebee had.... you made him HIS PERFECT MIRROR. What Bee COULD have become if he stayed as a blind loyalist and never took charge in his own way. Soundwave may have had minions but even then he was STILL held back by Megatron being where he got his orders from.... and in the end?
SPOILERS
That's what costed him his life. His indecision.
Edit: Also... DAMN you... you made me CRY OVER *MEGATRON* DYING!
Dude just casually wrote a better trilogy than a group of professional writers.
Frankly, I wouldn't mind waiting so long for the next trilogy to start because this is an amazing ending.
I have some ideas for the next trilogy.
Tf4
1. The opening would have Primus and Unicron’s fight at the dawn of time and have Unicron’s spirit trapped inside a planet which is not going to be Earth.
2. An Autobot crew led by Ultra Magnus (Elita One, Hot Rod, Hot Shot, Windblade, Bulkhead, Hound, Crosshairs, Drift and Prowl) gets chased by Lockdown who is trying to get his hands on the Anti Matrix (Unicron’s counterpart to the Matrix of Leadership) and meets up with Optimus’ Autobots on Earth.
3. Hot Rod and Hot Shot would be twin brothers, similar to Sunstreaker and Sideswipe.
4. Lockdown’s client would be Unicron and his heralds, not Quintessa
5. KSI drones would be completely removed
6. Lockdown’s crew would be comprised of Doubledealer, Flamewar, Bug Bite, Exhaust and Sixshot.
TF5 (rewrite of Rise of the Beasts)
1. The Dinobots will be part of the Maximals with Grimlock as Optimus Primal’s second in command.
2. The Terrorcons would be led by Galvatron with Scourge and Cyclonus as his 2 lieutenants and have Nightbird, Batttletrap, Sideways and Slipstream as Terrorcon foot soldiers.
3. Rattrap and Tigatron will have cameos at the start of the film, getting killed off by Galvatron or Scourge.
4. If Bumblebee gets killed off and later gets revived by Energon, maybe have Airazor resurrected as well after she got corrupted by Dark Energon and gets killed by Optimus Primal.
5. All the named Terrorcons are spared except Sideways and Nightbird and get sucked into the Transwarp portal with Optimus and the Anti Matrix.
6. The GI Joe concept is completely removed.
7. The final scene will have Optimus floating inside Unicron who then says “Prime.”
TF6
1. Unicron reformats Optimus into Nemesis Prime.
2. The final battle would be similar to Avengers Endgame.
3. Bumblebee reunites with Spike, Chip and Carly.
I came up with those ideas to make Unicron and his heralds the central antagonists of the next trilogy.
It has to work. This guy has to use it. If not it’s wasted potential.
Y'all are amazing writers I could never
Thanks for my ideas, but we need to give Pheonix Studios a break from rewriting and video making. Also, I have some new ideas for the TF4 rewrite: KSI and Cemetery Wind will be replaced by Mech from Transformers Prime, and they will have 2 man made transformers: Soundblaster (which was rebuilt from Soundwave) and Exhaust (who is rebuilt from Wheeljack) and use Unicron’s anti matrix as a power source to build and give life to their drones. Mech’s purpose of making those drones in this rewrite wasn’t authorised by the government. Later on in the rewrite, Lockdown will use the Anti Matrix to take control of Exhaust and Soundblaster. Also, Lockdown’s crew will fulfil the 5 man band trope with Lockdown as the leader, Bug Bite the lancer, Sixshot the big guy, Doubledealer the smart guy and Flamewar as the heart. At the resolution of the film, Mech would be arrested for unauthorised drone construction. Also at the start of the film, Ultra Magnus’ crew will scatter in escape pods across earth before their ship gets destroyed by Lockdown. This will give Shockwave and some of his decepticons more character in this rewrite.
Most of this isn't too bad, my only notes are I'd make the sheer number of new characters a little less extreme. Trim out either Bulkhead or Hound, Crosshairs, Prowl, and probably Windblade, as well as some of Lockdown's henchmen. Also, hell no to killing off Rattrap at the start of Rise of the Beasts. Tigatron is bad enough, but Rattrap is one of the BEST Beast Wars characters. Either use him well or don't use him at all, I say.
You cooked well. I can see this working
The voice actors did a great job.
Your welcome! I was the casting director
VOICE ACTING? Oh hell yeah, this is gonna be awesome.
@@1028PixelProductions give my compliments to all the actors!
Barely it was mid af just use ai voices
@@Nomad958 So instead of bringing in creativity and others to show their talents let's just cut corners? Idk if you know about this, but that's a no-no in fiction.
Ironhide isn't lost in the sauce. The sauce is lost in him.
The Epilogue is legit actually sad, like damn that shit so emotional 😭
Ironhide dealing the final blow to Sentinel was poetic
He got his revenge from his original fate by sentinel
There's nothing else i can say other than this rewrite is amazing. Unlike Bayverse, it was;
- Amazingly written
- I actually cared for the characters
- Deaths were meaningful
- Both humans and Cybertronians get a good amount of focus
- Respects G1 while doing it's own thing
- Themes gave me feels (no sacrifice, no victory and faith in leadership were my favourite)
- Transforming being an integral part of Cybertronian culture is an awesome idea
Honestly, it makes me feel jealous and ashamed of my own poor writing skills 😓
This was an amazing rewrite series you have made and fixed. In all honesty you don’t have to rewrite Age of Extinction and The Last Knight cause your Transformers 3 rewrite left things on such a phenomenal note continuing it is the same as Marvel continuing the MCU it’s not a bad idea, but it’s gonna hard to top yourself after a long journey not only for yourself but also for the characters that you have dedicated to personally shaped. So all I can say is I salute you and for your journey. Sorry in advance if this sounds preachy.
But at the same time, he can actually fix the Dino bots
I really want to see the Age of Extinction and The Last Knight rewritten! And if possible, a pitch and story of Transformers 6!
@@gek0kidDid you not see the video? Phoenix is a busy guy. He isn’t a genie.
@@screamerlover5781 I did. I'm patient. I'm just saying that *I* for one, want to see Age of Extinction and Last Knight rewrites.
Agreed this ending of Transformers 3 was so perfect :)
THE PHOENIX KING HAS RETURNED
The ending gives off Revenge of the sith vibes mixed with a bit of Guardians of the galaxy vol.3 vibes😢😢😢
Wow it's like....an actual movie with a real story, characters, character development, and steaks.
It's not a Michael Bay fetish video where it's just bay saying hey see that cool robot with a hot woman next to it? want me to blow it up? Wanna see it again on repeat?
One of my favorite descriptions of Michael Bay lol
As the dude who was responsible for casting the VA’s for this video, it’s awesome to finally see it come to fruition. I love this series and what it has done for my favorite movies.
Here’s to the future!
dude, props to you, the cast especially Optimus and sentinal where amazing
Thanks for casting me as Optimus for this awesome story.
@@toluadejumo8596thanks man. Benjamin Lumpkin was Optimus and Martinni was Sentinel (Martinniwas also Ironhide and Shockwave)
@@benjaminlumpkin107 Casting anyone else would have been a sin bro lol
This is the Best (Rewritten) Conclusion I have ever heard and now with the Original Trilogy done. Now, we have the Knigh- wait, I mean the Unicron Trilogy underway, but like you said at the end of the video, I rather you focused on your life than sitting down and writing/typing 24/7. But still, this was an amazing video, I hope we will all see you soon. Til' All Are One.
I really hope you eventually do the next TF Trilogy because there's so much more wasted potential in those movies than the original three.
Yeah I think that's something we can all agree on. Especially considering AOE was sooooo close to being so good!
Hey! Here’s an idea!💡 Lennox has a daughter, right? Why not include her in the sequel trilogy?
@@phoenixstudios9078hi I'm a big fan and I was wondering if you can help me make a fan-made version of Avengers the Kang Dynasty
I JUST BINGED WATCHED IT ALL THE PAST 2 DAYS NOT KNOWING THAT THIS WAS COMING. I FELT IT IN MY SPARK
Transformers 4 rewrite.
We have a opening montage of Optimus prime narrating what happen after the Battle of Washington with both Autobots and Decepticons being hunted down by a organization called Cemetery Wind, with humanity superior like thoughts. (Almost like imperium) As a unknown ship arrives to earth being pursued by a bigger one.
While hiding out in a city Ratchet in a different vehicle form is overhearing noises and gunfire as he looks to see a cybertronian being hunted down by a group of Cemetery wind soldiers. Despite wanting to help Ratchet is reluctant as he knows if he reveals himself, he'll be targeted too. Getting a better look he sees a red autobot with yellow flames being pinned down as he spots another cybertronian trapping him as he captures the Autobot.
Ratchet will then recognized this cybertronian as Lockdown as he starts to have flashbacks to the war when he was with some autobots when Lockdown came in and toke them all out for a bounty. Returning to the present, he looks in dismay as Lockdown takes the helpless prisoner back to his ship hoping to interrogate him. Waiting almost 30 mins he moves out of the city knowing that he can't sit around and do nothing as he goes to try to find others.
At a city we see a man with a trench coat and a pistol walking on the street way as he has his bag hanging around him. This man is Cade yeager, who unlike the actual movie was a member of NEST and when it was disbanded he left out of disgust for what he considers to be a betrayal. (he's a rambo like character.) Heading into a restaurant he notices a girl outside who looks alone.
((Hope you like this so far, if you want me to keep going just let me know. Otherwise i'll leave it here.
The voice acting of Megatron was so spot on. Bravo to the VA for hitting that Prime/TF5 megs range
Bruh so far you've written a stellar story for all three Transformers. Hopefully you'll do Age Of Extinction and The Last Knight as well🙏
This is the best rewrite ever
As well as his version of transformers 6.
Which we know now to be Rise of the Beasts
@hackerex4787 rise of the beasts is a reboot, there won't be a conclusion to the bayverse unfortunately
@@niceone9145 dang it…
Now this guy should be a director excellent rewriting
If the Dinobots come back it would be cool to have Slash, Snarl, Scorn, Slug, Swoop, Sludge, and Grimlock all together. Especially, since alot of these guys had concept art but never made it into the Final Cut.
Slash: 50 ft tall, carries a pair of Energon Scythes, 47 ft tall Velociraptor Alt Mode.
Snarl: 65 ft tall, carries an Energon Sword and Cybertanium Battle Axe, 59 ft tall Stegosaur Alt Mode.
Scorn: 87 ft tall, carries a left forearm-mounted Cybertanium Spiked Whip, 59 ft tall Spinosaur Alt Mode.
Slug: 75 ft tall, carries a Cybertanium Mace, 40 ft tall Triceratops Alt Mode.
Swoop: 57 ft tall, carries both a Cybertanium Sword, and Fusion Crossbow, 53 ft wingspan Pterodactly Alt Mode (unlike the movie, he only has 1 head). He can fire energy bolts from his beak.
Sludge: 71 ft tall, carries dual Cybertanium Spiked Lances, 61 ft tall Brontosaur Alt Mode.
Grimlock: 84 ft tall, carries both a Cybertanium Mace and retractable Energon Flail, 63 ft tall Tyrannosaur Alt Mode.
All the Dinobots can talk.
Maybe have the Dinobots as part of the Maximals.
Got tears man, knowing that we could all have that ending truce if the novelization wasn't leaked and how beautifully you gave the ending justice.
18:10 - 18:34
Optimus prime: hang on my autobots!
The driller suddenly comes out and crushes prime's jetpack.
Soundwave: you your time is up
Bumblebee: No... (grunts) wheeljack!😢
Decepticon Protoform: get down autobot scum!
Wheeljack looks back at bee one last time
Wheeljack: stay strong bee...
Soundwave: any last words?
Wheeljack: get fraged decepticon, you will never win!
Soundwave then picks wheeljack up on a chokehold, soundwave then blasts wheeljack in the chest
He then twists wheeljack as the autobot mechanic falls to his knees before getting shot in the back by soundwave before his corpse falls to the ground as his optics and antennas flicker on and off before fading away.
Bumblebee and the other autobots watch in horror as bee looks into wheeljack's lifeless eyes
Bumblebee: goodbye my old friend...
Soundwave: your next littlebug!
Bumblebee: get off!
Bee will then see spike and as spike tears up
Bumblebee: we had one hell of a run...
18:34 - 19:56
*Rumble:* "Hehehehehehe... Hey, what's with the whistlin' noise?"
_Missiles are seen heading their way._
*Soundwave:* "Incoming!"
*Rumble:* *_"OH SHI-"_*
_The street is heavily bombarded as Team Goldbug and Dr. Arkeville take cover, several Decepticons being killed by the missiles._
*Epps:* *_"GET DOWN!"_*
_The Autobots use the distraction to break free and start fighting back again, overwhelming the remaining 'Cons. Spike spots several N.E.S.T. Ospreys heading their way. Cut to inside an Osprey, where Lennox and his men prepare to land._
*Lennox:* "Alright, here we go! Here we go! Director Faireborn, we've established contact. We got the Autobots free just in time. Preparing to make landfall now."
_Back on the ground, Spike lights up a flare and waves it to alert the N.E.S.T. troops._
*Spike:* *_"HEY!!! DOWN HERE!!! HEY!!!"_*
_As the Ospreys fly overhead, Ratchet laughs and jumps up, pumping his fist into the air._
*Ratchet:* "You were right, Chip! It can't rain forever! Oh, bless the AllSpark!"
_Chip is seen giving a wholesome smile in the control room. Back in Washington, Sentinel clenches his fists and growls in frustration as he sees all this happen._
*Sentinel:* "Enough of this nonsense! How they all fail to understand... that the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few."
_He activates the Space Bridge, opening a portal that brings Cybertron into Mars' orbit. Elsewhere, Megatron sees this happen and freezes in place, his optics and mouth wide open in shock at the sight of his beloved homeworld. He is completely oblivious to other Decepticons trying to address him over intercom._
*Ratbat:* "Lord Megatron! Lord Megatron, come in! The human insects just launched a counterattack, and the Autobots are free again!"
*Rumble:* "They've got us pinned down! We're gettin' ripped apart here! Whadda we do?!"
*Ratbat:* "What are your orders, master?! Master?! What are your orders?! Master!"
*Rumble:* "Boss, whadda we do?!"
*Ratbat:* "Orders! *_ORDERS, MASTER!"_*
*Megatron:* "Cybertron... you are saved... at last..."
WOW YOU NOTICED THOERYMUS ALL TRANSFORMERS FANS COMMUNITY COME AS ONE. TILL ALL ARE ONE!!! 30:55
I like to imagine shockwave was still in his cybertron form and had to look for a earth vehicle for a bit
Yeah I envisioned him as still being a Cybertronian tank in this rewrite. He and his Decepticon protoforms will need Earth-based vehicle modes once they go into hiding. Perhaps that can be his final command to his troops before they all split up and go their separate ways? Could also be his very last line in the film.
@@phoenixstudios9078give those protoform a some names and personalities
@phoenixstudios9078 if you plan to give him an earth mode, I recommend he goes for an apache helicopter in case he ever gets targeted by the government so he can make a quick getaway. Plus that's the vehicle mode he used in the 2007 game.
@@SZH4thewin One of them should be called Deadlock.
@@eman4630I also imagined the Combaticons, Dreadwing, Acid Storm and Transit (the bus Decepticon from ROTB’s deleted scene) among Shcokwave’s forces.
While DOTM is a guilty pleasure of mine, this version was awesome. I also like how you included elements of the original ending.
NO WAY THE SAME DAY I BINGE IT THE NEW EPISODE COMES OUT!!!!
Hallelujah!!!
Huh
Fucking baller rewrite. Absolutely better than what we got for the actual movie.
Now, someone make a film-length animation on TH-cam following this premise.
And Phoenix, I hope that one day you do get to the new Trilogy. But if you can't, that's fine. You have work to get to, and I'm sure everyone else can agree with me.
Some Transformers 4 rewrite ideas that you can use:
- the scene opens up with Optimus Prime, Elita 1, and Glitch going on a recon mission and we get to see their friendship through some jokes and mentions about their past, Eventually, they get ambushed by a group of Decepticons and Glitch falls down a cavern and presumably dies.
-We cut to the present day, a Decepticon, Black Shadow is running away from something playing music. While Black Shadow runs away, he gets ambushed and shot in the leg by a giant Transformer, Tesarus. Black Shadow crawls away and gets cornered by the rest of the D.J.D. (Helex, Kaon, Vos, The Pet, Thesaurus, and Nickel), He begs them to spare him and says that the war is over but he stops when he hears music playing, Tarn approaches him and says “Until Megatron says otherwise, it isn't” Black Shadow responds, "But he-” But before Black Shadow can tell Tarn that he did, Tarn stabs Black Shadow in the chest and rips out his spark.
-A new set of pods lands on Earth, and a new team of Transformers consisting of Elita 1, Whirl, Hound, Crosshairs, Drift, Windblade, and Hot Rod. They receive a distress beacon coming from an abandoned building and they find Optimus’ body in stasis mode. After some work, they reactivate his body. The scene will be similar to the part where Cade brings him back. Optimus points a gun at them but Optimus calms down at the sight of Elita.
-When Team Prime and Team Elita regroup, they discuss what they’ll do and how they’ll get back home. While the team gets along, Optimus and Elita will have a private talk away from the others, They’ll talk about if anything will be the same anymore after losing so many friends to the war. They almost share a moment together but they notice Whirl and Hot Rod watching.
-During the Highway battle, The D.J.D. is chasing the group but Tarn is specifically going after Optimus. The battle will play out similar to Optimus’ fight with Galvatron but he will be replaced with Tarn. When Optimus gets the upper hand, he gets shot from behind. They look to see Lockdown and his ship approaching them. Optimus weakly speaks “Lockdown” They continue to have the same conversation they did in the movie but Lockdown will point out Tarn for having a huge bounty on his head and decides to take them both.
-While on Lockdown’s ship, Optimus and Tarn will be placed into their cells and they get into a heated argument. We also get introduced to Lockdown’s crew, Stinger, Nightbird, Bug Bite, Soundblaster, Thrust, and Double Crosser. The Dinobots will also be in the cells next to Optimus and Tarn
-To summarize the next few parts: Elita and the rest of the Autobots are getting hunted by the D.J.D. and Optimus, Tarn, and the Dinobots work together to escape Lockdown’s ship. Optimus and Tarn will have an emotional moment where it’s revealed that he was Glitch and he switched sides after Shockwave brought him back, they part ways after that. Tarn won’t be seen for a while
-The Climax battle will have Optimus fight Lockdown but Lockdown gets the upper hand in the fight. Tarn will surprise attack Lockdown while Elita tries to remove the Star Saber from Optimus’ chest. Optimus will kill Lockdown the same way he did in the movie.
-They try to help Tarn but he’s already dying from the wounds he got from Lockdown, They accompany their friend in his last moment as he says “Till all are one”
-For an after-credit scene. I can't decide if it should be about the Quintessons or Unicron. To summarize both: Quintessa and the rest of the Quintessons will be shown giving orders to Nemesis Prime (Nova Prime) to retrieve the All spark. For Unicron, it will show him drifting through space and talking to Galvatron, Cyclonus, and Scourge. He’ll talk the same way or at least similar to how he talked to Scourge in Rise of the Beasts. Or maybe he can talk to Megatronus Prime since he was a herald of Unicron in one of the comic lines and since Liege Maximo was the Fallen in the Transformers 2 rewrite
(Sorry if I explained some parts badly or if I said too much)
The djd in live action would have to make an r rated movie but I DONT CARE DJD WOOOOOOO
@@greninjatron5227a rated r transformers movie? That’s sounds sick.
I always prefer nemesis prime created by unicron he is PURE EVIL
@@SZH4thewin Yeah, I do too but I wanted to do something different this time.
@@ServeTheWheel that’s true but I will not accept humans creating nemesis prime
this trilogy rewrite actually fixed every problem I had with these movies. and without losing much of anything I actually liked. well done.
Imagine we could have had this trilogy… it would have been up there with the dark knight, if not better
And thus ends the greatest trilogy that never was. Despite it ending on a somber note I kinda like it that way as it gives us an ending we don't see a lot on film. The characters win but their government strips them of their status and honor despite everything they have done, the ongoing war ends with a truce between the two leaders and maybe they forgive each other and despite Optimus now being seen as a fugitive he still has faith in the humans. I would totally okay with this being the end of your Transformers rewrite and rewrites in general since like you said you have a lot of obligations and priorities in both your professional and personal life. It all started with Transformers, it's only fair that it ends with Transformers
Now this is what i wish to be the original film, this was just to show how Bay failed in several aspects of the movie, the truce part, now that is what i'm talking about, real Optimus would accept it even feeling doubt on Megatron, Megatron still died and you putting Ironhide as the killing streak guy worked way better, like you said, you're not sure if you'll do the "Unicron trilogy" of the movies, and i respect that, but if you ever do, i'm sure you would do it awesome, your a great writter man, good job!
So far your rewrite of transformers 3 is now my favorite story in this series. All three of your transformers rewrites are truly amazing to listen too, megatrons death in this story was bittersweet and tragic. The first trilogy is amazing, if you do decide to continue the second trilogy... take as much time as you need. You deserve a break after creating this masterpiece of storytelling in my opinion. Don't rush yourself and don't let anyone tell you otherwise, take your time and I'm sure when your ready... we'll support your rewrites no matter the cost. I had to use that line just because. Take care, until we the fans meet again.
Ironhide going berserker mode is a genius idea.
Oh heck yeah! Just saw this pop up and immediately jumped in!
Really love this rewritten trilogy. Would like to see a continuation, but I understand if you need a break. This seems like a good place to end for now or ever.
funny at 17:51 in the original frank welker voiced soundwave "No prisoners only trophies" Now here is megatron in this rewrite saying the same thing
It all comes full circle.
I just turn on my Xbox one fire up TH-cam and saw this video, after watching part 3 all I have to say is this BEST REWRITTEN TRILOGY EVER.
I loved this Rewrite soi much! Can't believe you actually used the OG ending for the DOTM Rewrite! Very respectful and impactful deaths to Mirage, Wheeljack, Megatron etc. Loved that you use Theorymus' SFM video for the ending.
Imagine how cool if it would be if the other humans from the other Transformers cartoons appeared in Age of Extinction or The Last Knight
Like Miko or Jack from Transformers Prime hell maybe even Sari Sumdac from animated could be a main character for extinction
That'd be a legitimately cool idea to take other human characters from the franchise and put them in the movies
Sari Sumdac the main character of age of extinction rewriting FUCK YEEEEEEEESSSSS I LOVE THE IDEA
I would love to see you do Rewrites for the Age of Extiction, and The Last Knight.
Me listening to this: OH HECK YE
me getting to the 30 min mark: YO THIS IS ANIMATED
very neat very neat. GOOD JOB FAM.
I see you! 🙌Thank you!
I SEE YOU TOO!!! Have the best of success in your life, fam! I believe in you!@@phoenixstudios9078
I was thinking about this literally hours before this released and I didn't know it came out until now.
Transformers 4 Rewrite:
The movie as Ratchet and Shockwave are trying to avoid being caught by Cemetery Wind. Already a number of Decepticon Protoforms have fallen victim to this CIA Black Ops Unit. When the duo get surrounded, Ratchet tries to plead to the humans to stand down and reveals the truce between Autobots and Decepticons. Some humans pause upon this revelation, but Ratchet gets shot by Lockdown. His dying words are for Shockwave to run, a move that he deems logical with a hint of reluctance in his tone.
By now, most of the humans who fled have been arrested by Cemetery Wind. James Savoy looks eager to find Spike and Carly after Epps wounded him, refusing to come in quietly. NEST was dissolved with Faireborn, Chip, and Lennox now running the TRF. While Cemetery Wind solely works for the American government, the TRF serves the United Nations which has a softer attitude towards the Transformers.
Spike and Carly find themselves on the run from Lockdown and his mercenaries until Optimus and Bumblebee intervene. Bee escapes with the humans, but Optimus is injured and goes into hiding in Cade Yeager’s place.
One major problem: Cade is a major supporter of Cemetery Wind, or more accurately he really hates the Transformers. His wife was in Washington during the last movie and perished. Now Cade will do whatever it takes to protect his daughter, including making weapons and applying to join Cemetery Wind, though he’s been refused multiple times.
At first, Cade is excited when he realizes he has Optimus Prime. Besides the big reward which will pay off his bills, Cade would also be seen as a national hero and could leverage it to join Cemetery Wind. After ordering his assistant Lucas to call the CIA, Cade taunts Optimus and calls him a murderer. When the Prime awakens, Cade stands firm determined to not let Optimus reach his daughter. He’s thus shocked when he hears Prime talk about his past and what went down at Washington. Cade loses his nerve, realizing the Transformers aren’t the cold heartless machines he thought they were. When Cemetery Wind and Lockdown show up, instead of Shane a Decepticon shows up to take the humans away while Optimus covers them. Lucas’s death hits harder as Lucas wanted nothing to do with the Transformers and was just along for the ride because Cade was his only friend. This is what destroys any remaining anti-Transformers hatred Cade and his daughter had.
Optimus and the Decepticon, who is called Drift, regroup with Bumblebee, Spike, Carly, Shockwave, Arcee, and Steeljaw. Looking into Steeljaw’s memories, the group learns he and Ironhide ran into the other Decepticon protoforms in a trap. They all fought to the bitter end, taking out many mercenaries and humans with Steeljaw reluctantly fleeing after Ironhide ordered him, refusing to let another Wrecker die on his watch.
Steeljaw’s memories reveal the dead Transformers were taken by Cemetery Wind instead of by the mercenaries, who reveal that Lockdown is waiting for his employer to come to Earth. Learning from their friends in the TRF about a sudden surge in tech and weapons, the group realizes TRF’s supplier, Blackrock Industries, is working with the US government to advance their Cybertronian technology. Filled with rage, the group attack Blackrock Industries where they learn their dead friends are being used to create a drone army of Transformers led by Lockdown’s employer, Galvatron who just arrived.
Just as Megatron was an apprentice to the Fallen, Galvatron was the same. However Galvatron became too arrogant and tried to overthrow Megatron and the Fallen. Shockwave knew that Galvatron had barely escaped with his life, but can’t fathom how he was able to repair himself and hire Lockdown.
The team is forced to flee, but Optimus and Shockwave get captured by Lockdown while Carly and Tessa get dragged along.
The UN and TRF come down hard on the USA and Cemetery Wind, demanding to know why they are working with the mercenaries and why they never arrested Cybertronians. They’re especially angered when they find out about Epps and Team Goldbug being held prisoner and tortured without notifying them or announcing it to the world. Blackrock and his company also have questions as they thought the drones were for TRF, not Galvatron.
While Tessa is scared to death, Carly takes charge and leads the girl to safety while Lockdown reveals to Optimus and Shockwave that Galvatron was saved by the creators of the Transformers. They want to get revenge on the Transformers for destroying Cybertron, but they need a big event to draw out the Transformers who have gone into hiding. The capture of the leaders of the Autobots and Decepticons would certainly draw out many, proven by the fact the rest of the team is trying to get to Lockdown’s ship. Just in case, Galvatron has a Cyberforming Bomb. If Prime and Shockwave escaped, Galvatron would detonate the bomb on Earth. Decepticons would assume Galvatron was leading a resurgence on Earth as would the Autobots. Lockdown figures the hidden Transformers would respond more fiercely if they heard of the deaths of the leaders, so he dumps Optimus and Shockwave into a part of the ship where he keeps the Dinobots, a team of Autobots experimented on by Shockwave to be more aggressive. They didn’t like Optimus much either.
The escape happens like in Age of Extinction, but it’s Shockwave who proposes leaving Earth to its fate. The team can simply transmit from their new ship what actually happened and can then rally their scattered people to take on their creators. When Optimus refuses to abandon humanity, Shockwave challenges Optimus to a duel for leadership. Spike and Cade however talk Shockwave out of the duel with help from Drift, asking if Shockwave truly wants any more innocents to suffer at the hands of Transformers. Shockwave reveals that logic dictated to him that the war didn’t make any sense and thus all the lives lost in it were for nothing. He had led the Decepticons on the Moon in hopes of protecting them, but his priorities temporarily shifted when he learned Cybertron was dead. Now, Shockwave is determined to prevent the loss of more innocents.
Blackrock got his hand on the Cyberforming Bomb when Galvatron left it unattended at his company headquarters, so he runs to Tokyo where the headquarters of Blackrock Industry’s Asian Branch is. Blackrock calls the TRF suspecting that things weren’t kosher and when they connect him to the group, he is horrified that he’s holding onto something that can wipe out the city. Galvatron and Lockdown rush to Japan as well as the group and a vicious battle breaks out. Dinobots tear through drones, Autobots and Decepticons take down mercenaries, and the humans get some payback against Cemetery Wind. Lockdown and the remaining drones are wiped out when the Cyberforming Bomb goes off outside Tokyo while Galvatron flees with the remaining mercenaries, determined to get revenge. Cemetery Wind is exposed for their crimes and the US government is forced to join the TRF lest they receive sanctions far heavier than ever other in history. The Autobots and Decepticons along with their human friends are cleared of all charges, though most of humanity still fears the Transformers. Despite trying to warn the rest of their kind not to come, the group can only watch as Autobots and Decepticons arrive on Earth. Optimus puts Shockwave and Bumblebee in charge of the new arrivals and hunting down Galvatron while he plans to gather Transformers remaining in hiding so they can be prepared for the return of their creators: the Quintessons.
10:40 😢 That part got me. I didn't expect that. Bravo man 👏 😊
28:45 - 29:05 @ phoenix studios, thank you so much for using my comment for this scene!
I didn't know you would use it for your video! Thank you so much!
“From the moment I understood the weakness of my flesh, it disgusted me…” said Dr Archerville
And honestly i think you surprisely executed every well the concept of a noble Shockwave who knew respect his adversary
This re write better than what actual we got
Agreed
Man just 2 days after discovering this series
Me 1 day :)
I’ve waited so long for this final part and you did not disappoint one bit!! I watched it last night to let the details soak in, and man, oh man, where do I start?!
The amazing use of battle tactics, the perfect balance of human and Transformer scenes, Mirage’s last hurrah, Wheeljack’s execution, the final charge against the Decepticons, Megatron and Sentinel’s deaths!!
For a minute, I was actually kinda scared you'd kill off Bee and Arcee too: I'm glad they live to fight another day.
You have no idea how happy you made me when you used the original DOTM ending from the novel. I also watched the 3D animation of it, and I sincerely hoped you’d use that ending truce between Optimus and Megatron for your rewrite: and once that scene came up, I felt like a kid again watching this film for the first time.
Your character development and action scenes are truly something to behold. And I was especially blown away by the entire team splitting up in the end. You just created the PERFECT segue into Age of Extinction, if you ever choose to rewrite that film too.
Overall, I’m so honored to have been able to watch this entire rewritten TF trilogy! I hoped that it would tie everything up with a neat bow, and you delivered like Amazon Prime! Even if you don’t choose to rewrite AOE and TLK, I’m perfectly fine with that. If your versions of the Bayverse films are what we got in theaters instead of canon, than I can say with absolute certainty that it would’ve stood alongside Lord of the Rings, Christopher Nolan’s Batman Trilogy, and Star Wars Ep. 4-6 as one of the greatest movie trilogies of all time.
For now, you’ve more than earned a break. Take as long as you need to rest and recharge from the extensive rewrite you gave to us.
‘Til next time. ‘Til all are one!!
I like this new ending. Not all wars have to be ended with one side being obliterated. It’s an amazing message that peace is attainable.
Dude I've been waiting for fraggin years for this video to come out.
I know it must've been a pain to write all this and come up with all these intriguing ways of modifying and keeping some scenes from DOTM.
I love the human characters and
I really love that Megatron put all his faith in shockwave and soundwave.
The balancing between the humans and transformers is chefs kiss.
Even if it takes years I hope you do AOE and TLK because those film needs serious help.
When the world needed him most…. He returned, bless you.🎉
Yes my favorite bayformers movie is finished being rewritten
I can’t believe we could have got probably one of the greatest trilogies of all time if you were the writer and Bay action director.
This trilogy alone is on the same level as Dark Knight and LOTR in my opinion.
Now I can’t imagine what you have in store for us in second trilogy if it ever happens, the ending was very satisfying but i hope that you can continue your series, it means alot to all your fans bro🫡💪😁
Thank you! Personally I don't think I'm a sophist aced enough writer to be compared to the writers of masterpieces such as LOTR and The Dark Knight trilogy. But I appreciate the support all the same :)
Who let him cook?!
I once heard someone pitch that Unicron being Earth in the bayverse would lead to an End of Evangelion like story where humanity is compelled to awaken Unicron, as his white blood cells. And that part of it would require a full planetary evacuation prior to the final showdown
If that’s what a simple elevator pitch of Unicron’s awakening would be like, I cannot *wait* to see you slowly build up to that
Oh, Maybe Unicron will also revive Megatron as Galvatron & Sentinel Prime as either Scourge or Nemesis Prime.
That is awesome!😁 And the ending is way better than the original and i know it’s too early for the rewrite of Age of Extinction but I like most parts of the movie like Lockdown and human villains are motivated by lose of loved ones and vengeance and their radical and anti transformer believes and tragedies of war and the Dinobots! And I want to see Nightbird as a man made transformer and Starscreams ghost and the public stands for the autobots and the brilliant cameos of Peter Cullen and Frank Welker stood out for Optimus Prime and its a reference and homage to the episode of Justice League Unlimited. And also the Quintessons have a larger role as cunning yet evil deceivers to manipulate humanity into their own self destruction.
Maybe have the Quintessons as servants of Unicron, like one of the early drafts of the Transformers 1986 movie.
@@stephenhounsell7257 interesting.
Absolutely phenomenal work for this full trilogy. Till all are one.
YEEEEESSSS, as a TF fan this is the perfect end to a week
43:52 End credits song: The Humbling River by the Puscifer.
38:43 In the scene where Fairborne, Optimus, and Lennox negotiate you should include where Ratchet is repairing Optimus's hand.
Hot damn, that was a rewrite. I got say, this was well worth the wait. I've been saving all my thoughts for this part so here we go. First off I was iffy on the idea of Ironhide living back when you posted a poll on your community tab, however, after seeing Sparkplug get killed off in part 2, I've got to say it was a very fair trade off, since they bonded over their shared backgrounds as soldiers in your 07 rewrite, and it helps progress Spike's character arc in this rewrite, also him killing Sentinel Prime felt so cathartic, I was like "Hell yeah! Kill that Bastard!". love you give him Bayverse Prime's thirst for blood, since we still got a version of the kill steak. Also his relationship with Steeljaw and use of chainsaw gun kind of remined me of Denji and Pochita from Chainsaw Man. Secondly Sentinel's betray here was more logical than in the OG, especially since it falls apart lore wise once you think about it too much, PointlessHub probably explained it best as to how convenient and contrived the plan was in his Transformers videos, and while I liked his original colors and vehicle mode I like the blue and orange on him as they remind me of his Transformers Animated counterpart. Thirdly, I hated Mirage your ROTF rewrite but I felt kind a sad when he died, you really did a good job developing him considering how different he was to his ROTB counterpart (also your TF2 rewrite low-key predicted Autobot team). Fourth I loved how the ending borrowed from the original ending of DOTM with the truce, and seeing Sentinel use Liege Maximo's staff since I have been dying to see that, funnily enough I once suggested Shockwave making the truce with Optimus to to him being logical. Fifth I liked how Sam wrapped up his arc by killing Ratbat. Sixth, the Autobots coming together to kill Soundwave was an epic scene and I love how it emphasized the bond between them. They're more than friends, they're family. Seventh, at the ending I'd like to imagine as Optimus makes his speech, he stares upon a Freightliner cabover truck similar to G1, he scans it before transforming hitching up to his trailer and rolling out as Linkin Park's Iridescence plays in the background. I got a say this was a blast to watch and as much as I want to watch the T4 and TF5 rewrites and TF6, I can understand why you may not get to them. At the end of the day other priorities should take precedent over TH-cam. If you can't make rewrite videos for those films it'd be cool if you could share with us in a post or something of the ideas you had in mind for those. I got to say, and I'm saying this as something who grew up and loves the Bayverse, this was great, and if you can't make any more TF rewrites, you at least ended on a high note.
5:45
Giving real "From the moment I understood the weakness of my flesh, it disgusted me" vibes
All in all, every single one of your rewrites is even better than the last
HELL YEAHH!!!!! IT’S HERE BOISS!!!!!!!!!!!
As someone who grew up with the Bayverse, I adore this series! Can’t wait for your rewrite of transformers 4. Maybe we’ll get some new rookie wreckers for ironhide to command and train, and I’d love to see how you would handle the dinobots. Maybe the dinobots could combine into a combiner that makes devastator look like small fry.
As for who I’d like to see as the rookie wreckers, maybe quickswitch, whirl, impactor, and maybe team bullet train (Railspike, rapid run and midnight express, who combine into Rail racer).
Great idea for rookie Wreckers. In my mind they would consist of Bulkhead, Hound and Crosshairs.
Wow. Not only did we lose Wheeljack, but we also had Mirage go out in a figurative and literal blaze of glory. He sure won't (spoilers for Rise of the Beasts ahead!) come back as an Iron Man suit (or another car model) from *that.* Nice nod to the end of the G1 show's series premiere, too.
I expected the original, scrapped ending for Dark of the Moon to be used and remixed in some fashion, but I didn't expect that it and the ending that we *did* get in the original film would be combined by having Megatron make a genuine truce with Optimus, but get killed off anyway, and not only by the hand of a Prime, but by the hand of another *fallen* Prime, in about the exact same way in which Megatron dealt with Liege Maximo. In the end, *both* villains did the backstabbing: Megatron figuratively, and Sentinel *literally.* It's ironic. Sentinel opposed Liege Maximo's destructive pride, treachery and inability to comprehend the value of other life forms, along with the other Primes, but now, though unwittingly, he has avenged him, and become just *like* him in his *own* destructive pride, treachery and the inability to comprehend making peace with an enemy. Now, going to be transparent, after how much more reluctant Sentinel had been characterized in the previous part, I'm of two minds about his fate here.
On one hand, I figured that his begrudging assistance of Megatron would become more and more of a source of great regret the further along the master plan came, and he'd be much more apologetic to Optimus for his betrayal, only sharing the same wish as everyone else at his core. I imagined a burned out old man who doesn't want to conquer anything, or destroy worlds (let alone Earth), or bring further harm to mankind, or go down in Transformer history as a supreme, unstoppable god, just go back to Cybertron and see it in it's former beauty, even if for only one last time, with Optimus not regarding him in his final moments with disgust, but with pity in that he let his war scars control his actions in the end, followed by his ancient mentor hoping his fellow Prime brethren will forgive him as he succumbs to his wounds inflicted on him by his old nemesis and joins the AllSpark; aside from sitting back while Arkeville detonated the power plants around the country, I felt there was a naturally laid out path to that point.
On the *other* hand, I can understand such a sequence coming out as being too similar to *Megatron's* character development, and honestly, dang, is it satisfying to see Ironhide and Sentinel's roles from the original film *reversed!* Oh yeah, and I must reiterate, Hip hip *hooray!* Ironhide lives! Even better, not only does he avenge the Wreckers, he avenges his canon counterpart with his own cannons! Justice for the Autobots' weapon specialist has been served, at long last! Oh, catharsis over fiction has never felt so good! That aside, with how much Sentinel's once good judgment had become corrupted by this point, doing him in didn't feel as much like the spiteful execution it was in the original film. Rather, it felt more like a mercy kill. His psyche had been damaged beyond all hope of healing, and as a result, he played a part in darn-near causing the end of the world, so it became clear that he, pardon the pun, was *far* past his prime, and somebody needed to put this broken, perpetually angry, rampaging old coot out of his misery.
Though, another part of me kind of wishes we got some last words about Sentinel from Optimus and, of all the characters, Chip. Picture Chip witnessing the end of the battle and Sentinel's last fast one before his death, and saying "I guess he was no George Washington after all.", and Optimus taking one, final look at the dead, disgraced Prime and lamenting "All these millennia, I thought he was made of sterner stuff."
Now, *this* detail, I don't know if it was on purpose, but the last remaining Autobots by the end of this rewrite are the core cast of Transformers: Prime, just with Bulkhead swapped out for Ironhide, and Steejaw added as the Team Pet. Fantastic show, so I can appreciate that a lot.
Another surprise is that Shockwave ended up being the last surviving named Decepticon in this story, and with Liege Maximo, Starscream, Soundwave and even Megatron now dead, he is effectively the Decepticons' new leader. That opens up a new world of possibilities for the Transformers' adventures going forward.
Poor Starscream, though. Megatron has fallen, and he didn't live to see it. XD
So, instead of his "The day will never come that we forsake this planet and it's people." speech, Optimus sends out a warning to avoid Earth to the remaining Autobots across the galaxy. Should we ever see the Transformers 4 rewrite come to pass, looks like Crosshairs, Hound and Drift will be missing *that* memo.
Okay, finally, I want to take this as an excuse to share my personal subtitles for your Transformers 2 and 3 rewrites. I call the second installment "The Prime Legacy", and the third "Darkness of Two Worlds". I've been holding on to those subtitles for *months* now, and I swear I thought for a good long while about the stories and themes of these rewrites before deciding on them (though I came up with The Prime Legacy more easily than Darkness of Two Worlds). What do you think?
Now, whatever project you want to do next, take as much of a break from Transformers, and video making in general, as you need before tackling it, and thank you again for making these excellent alternatives to films that have been key features in my life since I entered my teen years!
Until that day... 'til all are one!
Thank you very much for the heartfelt feedback! I actually like those subtitles a lot! To the point it is making me regret following the action movie trend of just naming each sequel by their numerical order.
@@phoenixstudios9078 You're welcome, good sir!
Something I almost forgot: did you know your Transformers rewrite series has a TV Tropes page? I discovered it some time ago after Transformers 3 - Part 2 came out, and I've been editing it.
@@StacheHand Really? Interesting...that's news to me! Now that just has me really curious. Do you have a link?
@@phoenixstudios9078 I do, but TH-cam immediately deletes comments with links like that. I've sent it through a Patreon message.
can’t wait for the age of extinction rewrite
As a someone who’s been a transformers fan since I was a kid (2004) I grew up with these movies and this rewrite series was perfect I hope you carry on with other rewrite series!
You just had to kill my two favorite autobots. It made a chilling and emotional scene for both RIP Wheeljack and Mirage. Great rewrite.
Hopefully (whenever you find time!) That you do the rewrite for TF4 & TF5 & then a part 6. I cannot wait to see how you'll handle Galvatron, Cyclonus, Scourge & Unicron🤘🏼
Amazing video aswell!
Yeah, maybe have them as their own characters, not rebuilt versions of previous Decepticons but Terrorcons created by Unicron and have them and Unicron as the central antagonists of the sequel trilogy and not Lockdown and Quintessa/the Creators. Also among the Terrorcons, I fine with Battletrap and Nightbird, but I also want to see Sideways and Slipstream as members of Unicron’s Terrorcons army.
@@stephenhounsell7257 Sideways died in TF2. But we'll see since I want to see rebuilt characters
@@slickmanfonzthatanti-trollmaybe have Soundwave rebuilt as Soundblaster, Laserbeak as Buzzsaw and Wheeljack as Exhaust. Maybe have them be built by Mech and brought to life by Unicron’s Anti-Matrix (a counterpart to the Matrix of Leadership), which crashed in the Arctic and later have the drones taken over by Lockdown and his crew who are trying to get the Anti Matrix back to Unicron.
really not sure how I feel about the whole "redeeming Megatron" thing, but I do kinda like how his death at the hands of Sentinel kinda mirrors the death of the fallen at his own hands. Certainly interesting!
Yo this was dope!! :0
Voicing Arcee in another project like this is always a blast and I had fun doing it. ^-^
Amazing video!
This came at a great time, thank you. I do hope you'll continue for AOE and TLK, but I did had an idea for Lockdown where he doesn't kill Ratchet but keeps him alive as bait for Optimus and other Autobots but he also has a sick habit of taking something from each of his captures, like taking a scanner from Ratchet, this way Ratchet isn't killed off in an unfair and gut renching way won't happen to just make room for a new cast that was completely unnecessary.
Great idea. I also imagined having Unicron as Lockdown’s client, not Quintessa/the Creators.
@@stephenhounsell7257 Yeah, that's also a great idea , let him work for Planet eating robotic space Satan rather than whatever the Hell she was.
Frankly i love your idear of Megatron die as a hero
I saw this a night it and is great way to end a series.
Miss this channel man started watching when I was 14/15 and now I’m 19🫡🫡❤️💔
The last thing arkeville hears is someone who he considers insignificant admiting he's a mere human before getting blasted by that said someone.
Spike basically became a badass
for sparkplug! 🫡🫡🫡
*This is a major improvement from the original movie! I however do have a suggestion for the 4th movie if you do commit to making it.*
*If the whole knight theme is still included, have somebody other than Optimus be a knight. Dude’s already a prime, he doesn’t need to be a knight.*
THE MAN IS BACK! AND I FREAKING LOVE THIS ALREADY!!!
What a glorious day
Excellent rewrite of Transformers 3, @Phoenix Studios. I did like alot of the changes and addition elements such as the combination of both the film and novelisation scene of Optimus, Megatron, and Sentinel confrontation (the truce and the death of both Megatron and Sentinel), Ironhide's rampage, kept Shockwave alive, Spike's arc and his farewell to Optimus and Bumblebee, etc. I can't wait for your rewrite of Transformers second trilogy (4, 5, and 6) but take your time and you deserve a long break. Keep up the great work @Phoenix Studios. Until then "Till All Are One".
Bro Im praying to god that Mirage lived and comes back in Tf4 so that him and arcee can be happy you just traumatized me LOL
Yay! Part 3 is finally here!😊❤
FINALLY.
Edit: This triology that youve created is amazing in every way! Its a rollercoaster of emotion, and the ending is just so sentimental. Optimus remaining hopeful despite the circumstances, and the ferocious Megatron having a change of heart only to be slain by Sentinel was truly something. I was genuinely hoping that Megatron would live to see Cybertron restored from their unity, but its a ballsy move from you. We writers should learn to be more audacious with our writing, especially in this modern world.
Like Optimus said, and in acknowledgement to your life, may fortune be found in your travels to life. God bless you man.
Till all are one.
Also, you got VOICE ACTORS involved in this masterpiece youve made!? Awesome!
Edit 2: Just realized. Could you explain why didn't Megatron bother to tell that Sentinel has the staff and he could very well use it? Just asking because I felt like there's a little error there. But I digress. It's still a fantastic rewrite and it's the type of stuff we should be striving for as writers. Excellent stories!
This was a great re-write for the trilogy that I grew up with. Take care of yourself and I'll be waiting for your return to the Transformers scene with the 4th instalment (or not as it's entirely up to you). Till next time, till all are one
He did good work I wish this is in the movie keep up the good work🎉