Autobots who died are also more heroic here. In the Bayverse story, their deaths don't seem important, they just seem to die without any heroic sacrifices. in this version the autobots died after trying their best to protect the earth. I really like the part of Blurr's sacrifice against Megatron, he had put up a fight before his death and Ironhide's reaction when he saw Blurr's death
Bay never cared about any of the transformers' deaths. They are just props used to blow things up. Here they seem like multi layered characters who's deaths have real weight
I think it a nice little touch would be if just before Optimus is sent back from the Allspark, Jazz appears to tell Optimus how he inspired all the Autobots to keep fighting the Decepticons even when they lost hope after Sentinel Prime died. He thinks that if anyone is capable of bringing peace their race, it’s Optimus Prime. Optimus says goodbye to his friend and thanks Jazz for his words before allowing the other Primes to send him back.
I never thought of that but that is a really cool idea! I think it'd be even better if there was a crowd of multiple deceased Autobots but Jazz was the one who was the spokesman for the soldiers Optimus lost under his command. It gives Jazz a few more precious seconds of screen time too :)
@Mario and SonicMayham Megatron actually has more contenders than Optimus. David Kaye and Hugo mainly. Speaking of which, David Kaye for Megatronus and he goes "yeeeeeees" all the time
The fact that Blurr and Jetfire died, my 2 favorite transformers, extremely saddened me. I hate it when blurr dies. He dies almost as much as cliffjumper
Thanks man! I think my new editing style helps make the content more engaging and immersive. I debated on hiring voice actors again but I think I'll save my money for future videos.
@@phoenixstudios9078 You could get voice actors when you tackle Transformers 6, since should be the climatic finale of your Transformers saga. Might as well so your series ends with a bang.
his role in TFA plus him being a gimmick character who has the potential of being utterly broken if badly writen/kept for too long, makes him a big target to get killed off early on to establish a bad guy as a real threat.
SOMEONE HIRE THIS MAN this is an amazing vision and rewrite. You can tell how much care and attention went into this! As a deep Transformers fan, THANK YOU!
Spoiler I honestly gasped when you introduced Shockwave. Good job! Genuinely good. I was listening to this as if it was an audio book. From one writer to another: sterling work, mate!
@@transformersfan500okane3 different stories can do new things with it, you know. Granted, it's typically Megatronus as The Fallen but it's okay to change it up every now and again. Especially in a fan made rewrite
Wow this was amazing, I take back some of my complaints from previoys videos, the entire thing was brilliant, incredible job! The deaths were very sad... but made for great sacrifices, no sacrifice, no victory.
I just watched your whole rewriting and I must say it's very impressive. A rewrite of the bay formers is an idea I had in mind for so long and I'm glad someone's actually doing it. I can't wait to see what Starscream have in mind, I hope he'll prove some competence as leader. Still great job
If I had to grade Starscream on his competency as a leader in my TF 3 rewrite, I'd give him a solid D+ because the majority of the Decepticons' success will come from Shockwave and Soundwave's efforts. They're kinda like the practical employees who don't listen to their arrogant and incompetent boss, but get away with their disobedience because their works brings in great results. If those two officers listened to Starscream's directions, the Decepticons would never be half as efficient as they are in my rewrite.
@@phoenixstudios9078 I see, I kinda feel bad for starscream, once leader of the great seeker armada now so bad at leading that he's turned into a joke (I don't mean your rewrite but the franchise in general) anyway I love that soundwave got to shine since first chapter even if I do wonder how does he carry his minions without a chestbox I especially liked of the first rewrite that quick dialogue between soundwave and starscream on how tracking the allspark was more important than finding megatron, something I would've made too if I were to rewrite the storyline
@@casteddu6740 Yeah in this rewrite, I decided to forego the whole chest box storage thing and Soundwave's minions just follow him and hang out around him like pets.
@@casteddu6740 Exactly. It would've been more of a hinderance than an advantage to have that many yuppies following you around. That's why I swap the minions out between each rewrite. Frenzy, Ravage and Laserbeak were in TF1, but Frenzy died. Then in TF2, Ravage died. Now for TF3, I don't want to give out any spoilers but the roster will definitely change. There will be both additions and subtractions.
This series is incredible so far. Great work man! In addition: HOLY SHIT! That Rogue One esq ending had me all emotional about Jetfire, Blur, and the Twins. How do you take something as disposable as the OG revenge of the fallen and do this is beyond me, but it only makes me wish the writers for the movies we got actually cared about crafting a story and not just making big explosions. Fantastic work.
So, are Arcee and Mirage being set up to be a couple in this universe? They seem quite close, considering they’re introduced while training together, he rescues her from being executed by the Seekers and they share that quite intimate moment at the end as she’s comforting him. Oh, and *_HOT DAYUM!_* Talk about a body count! Still, gotta give props to the fallen Autobots, they sure went down like champs. Blurr in particular hit *_HARD_* cuz of how much of a fan favourite he is and how brutal it was, though the twins’ sacrifice was pretty heartbreaking too and Jetfire definitely redeemed himself in truly epic fashion. Somebody get him an Autobot coloured figure in the third film’s toyline!
I can't wait for your Transformers 3 rewrite. Logically, Shockwave should've been the main antagonist of DOTM. I also want to see Metroplex and Trypticon as well.
Bro, Revenge of the Fallen is already not a good movie, you did *not* need to go this hard! But damn I'm so glad you did. I can only dream of writing a Transformers story this good. What I find especially amazing about this is that, even though Optimus is barely in it, I was still invested from start to finish. Optimus is the reason I love Transformers, and I wouldn't be a fan if he wasn't in it. And yet, despite the lack of Optimus, I was 100% invested in this story. I love the interactions between the Autobots and Decepticons. They actually feel like individuals with genuine chemistry with one another, instead of big cool robots who fight other big cool robots! Buy the toys, kids! I do actually love RotF (both ironically and unironically), but I am still thoroughly impressed. Way to go, dude
Guys, I don't know if I wasn't listening correctly, but in this rewrite, he says that devastator is 48 feet tall. Meanwhile, in an earlier episode, he said jetfire was 50 feet tall. Jetfire is apparently bigger than a literal combiner. 💀
If there is one director that can turn the transformers films around to the right direction it would have to be Andy Serkis because he's the master of motion capture.
Not just Andy Serkis. You'd have to bring along the handful of mo-cap professionals in the industry that work with Serkis, like Terry Notary and Toby Kebbell. I know Serkis has done all of his mo-cap work through WETA Digital in the past.
@@phoenixstudios9078 i bet they will take pages from these movies. Some we very good and some were not good enough. en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:Films_using_motion_capture
I'll keep Michael bay because it would be amazing Just look at the cinematic style That he directs It would look visually stunning and amazing No offense against Andy serkis by the way
Damn This Was Really Good. I Thought Of A Rewrite For The Bayformers Series A While Ago But Haven’t Gotten Around To Doing It. This Kinda Inspired Me To Actually Doing It Tho. Eagerly Anticipating Your Rewrite Of DOTM. Personally It’s My Favourite Transformers Movie And I’m Excited To See Your Take On It.
I have the weirdest idea. Your version of the transformers get sucked into the michael bay films. In their journals, they write down their thoughts regarding the sheer lunacy of this new parallel reality.
Dude this is awesome, you turned a steaming shit like Revenge Of The Fallen into an actually fantastic sequel to your already fantastic rewrite of TF1. I am really excited for DOTM now holy shit
I am so addicted to this rewrite so much but I think you should've added a part where T.C and Skywarp use their powers, better yet using them alongside Starscream before they died. It would've added more hopelessness within the autobots, because of the fact that they were an elite officer. It would've been cool if Skywarp and Mirage fought, Thundercracker against Blurr. For me it adds a little bit more character between the seekers and not only Starscream, Megatron and the other lead decepticons. Which also makes it realistic Also add a little bit of voice lines that has a pinch of their personality like in the comics, for me it gets me all excited!
If you get to the 5th film, Cogman was intended to do what headmasters are known for (forming the head of a larger bot) but for whatever reason it was cut from the film. I'd like a rewrite that uses said feature.
I just love this, it almost make me depressed that people like you are not making these movies, can't wait to see your interpretation of Shockwave ( like are you gonna go for a more IDW based or a TFP loyal one ?)and other remaining autobots for the upcoming movies and characters like dinobots and the mercenary faction from tf4.
I’m really loving this rewriting of the transformers trilogy, you are doing a awesome job with it, I’m looking forward to see the rewriting of Transformers 3 💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥
This was a great rewrite and I especially love the twist to set for the next movie that has the Decepticons actually get away with the energy they came for.
7:51 i think it was said that in bayverse lore turning into devastator was mentally draining for the constructicons. But i only read that somewhere once so idk
10:00 Sideswipe borrows a trick from Arcee's book and drives figure-8s around Devastator's legs as Sunstreaker drives in circles around Devastator, blasting away at him with his guns.
I love your rewrite. It displays more emotional and character development than Bayformers could never do. Spoiler: Although I do have one question. What's your in universe explanation for why Megatron get taken in prison alive? Especially since the Auto Bots and Nest have killed countless Decepticons. So I figured that Megatron would be number 1 on their kill list
Thank you! As a part of the AACA (Alien Autobot Cooperation Act), all Autobots who are registered with NEST have to comply with Earth laws and customs. This includes war trials, which is what Earth's leaders want to hold Megatron accountable for. I know it doesn't get explained in TF2, but it will come up in TF3. Plus, not to mention, holding the leader of the enemy faction hostage is an excellent bargaining chip for peace.
Loved how the autobots that died in your rewrite felt more tragic and heroic making it more meaningful. While with the Bayverse I didn't really feel anything when the characters died
What Revenge of the Fallen should of been. Then again, the writer strike was happening at the time and Paramount didn’t want Bay to delay the film. Can’t wait to see how you tackle DOTM (especially if Shockwave will have a bigger role in your version considering that he got one shotted in the actual film).
I Really Love to see your Rewrite of Transformers 3, 4, 5 and 6 and Sixth Feature Unicron as the Big Bad and an Actual Character and I Really Love the Increased and Improved Character Development in the Rewrite!!!😍🤘👍❣
I love your Transformers series! I’ve been considering doing my own rewrites for a while, but I could never reach your level of imagination! Your plots, dialogue, and character arcs are just what the movies needed, and you delivered! I can’t wait to see what you have in store for Transformers 3!
Blur’s moment gave me chills and his death made me tear up a bit but sideswipe cut me deep bro, He’s my favorite and to know he has a solidified death saddens me but he went out like a warrior
It would be cooler if we could see AstroTrain make some small cameos during the Battle of Peru and taking of to flee the Autobots as a reference from the 1986 movie.
Can't wait for the Transformers 3 rewrite. I even have some ideas you might like to use. Like the theme being "Home is where the heart is". Also. After everything Sideswipe went threw in the last part. And hire, I think he sued have survived.
Amazing rewrite, giving it 4 parts was a great way to flesh out the story. Once again though, a few critiques. While the flashback scenes with prime in the allspark provide a lot of great lore, they also interrupt the pacing in my opinion, and could instead be kept as maybe a bonus feature or tie in comic. Depending on the timing, jetfire's location could be moved from the ice to the museum from the original, and he could have the alt mode from the original as well. The rest of his story can totally be the same though. I also would have spared some of the other seekers, so that we could see the classic trio of starscream, skywarp, and thundercracker in future rewrites.
Gotta admit, I could picture it in my mind's eye when Sideswipe and Sunstreaker were duking it out with the Constructicons. I was even going, "C'mon, guys! You can make it! You can make it!"
Mirage honestly became my favorite while I was watching these. I know he doesnt really die in DoTM, just sorta disappears after a while, though I’m very much hoping that he doesn’t die at some point in the rewrite-
Hey, just wanted to say I love how you write and portray the world and characters of Transformers, which ones are your favourite characters to write and find fascinating to explore, as a aspiring writer and a TF fan I always like to hear how other feel and how they like to explore the franchise
Autobots who died are also more heroic here. In the Bayverse story, their deaths don't seem important, they just seem to die without any heroic sacrifices. in this version the autobots died after trying their best to protect the earth. I really like the part of Blurr's sacrifice against Megatron, he had put up a fight before his death and Ironhide's reaction when he saw Blurr's death
Bay never cared about any of the transformers' deaths. They are just props used to blow things up. Here they seem like multi layered characters who's deaths have real weight
He and Blurr must’ve been close…
I think it a nice little touch would be if just before Optimus is sent back from the Allspark, Jazz appears to tell Optimus how he inspired all the Autobots to keep fighting the Decepticons even when they lost hope after Sentinel Prime died. He thinks that if anyone is capable of bringing peace their race, it’s Optimus Prime. Optimus says goodbye to his friend and thanks Jazz for his words before allowing the other Primes to send him back.
I never thought of that but that is a really cool idea! I think it'd be even better if there was a crowd of multiple deceased Autobots but Jazz was the one who was the spokesman for the soldiers Optimus lost under his command. It gives Jazz a few more precious seconds of screen time too :)
@@phoenixstudios9078 That’s pretty much why I want that
Maybe have Blurr be there as well because he had died by that point.
The one to one fight between Iron Hide and Megatron was such awesome fan service! Shows why Ironhide is Optimus' weapons expert.
I still love the inclusion of Prime Megs' voice at 4:58
Frank Welker's voice is honestly amazing.
@Mario and SonicMayham Megatron actually has more contenders than Optimus. David Kaye and Hugo mainly. Speaking of which, David Kaye for Megatronus and he goes "yeeeeeees" all the time
Theme of this story: Faith in leadership
the story: everyone dies under new leadership.
😂
This film would have been a masterpiece, basically the equivalent to Terminator 2 .
Sideswipe,Sunstreaker,Blurr and Jetfire rest in piece
The fact that Blurr and Jetfire died, my 2 favorite transformers, extremely saddened me. I hate it when blurr dies. He dies almost as much as cliffjumper
THIS IS THE SECOND TIME A COMMENT SPOILS ME THE WHOLE VIDEO, GODDAM, FIRST IT WAS WITH MEGATRON KILLING THE FALLEN, AND NOW THIS!?
@@SunderedSpartanSlayerNo, Optimus and Cliffjumper die all the time, not Blurr.
@@haydennorris8062Blurr and Cliff only died twice my guy. Blurr technically is brought back in one of incidents
Oh thank Primus Arcee didn't die...
I know this is a repost, but seeing this new version makes me more eager to see your rewrite of Transformers 3. No rush though.
Thanks man! I think my new editing style helps make the content more engaging and immersive. I debated on hiring voice actors again but I think I'll save my money for future videos.
@@phoenixstudios9078 You could get voice actors when you tackle Transformers 6, since should be the climatic finale of your Transformers saga. Might as well so your series ends with a bang.
@@thedarklord8388 Not a bad idea 🤔
@@phoenixstudios9078 sorry to disturb but do you still make videos? I hope everything is well with you
@@rayray8664 This school semester has prevented me from making any videos at all.
bro I swear the Transformers writers, both offical and fanon, have something against Blurr personally 💀💀
That’s what I’m saying,bro can’t catch a break💀
his role in TFA plus him being a gimmick character who has the potential of being utterly broken if badly writen/kept for too long, makes him a big target to get killed off early on to establish a bad guy as a real threat.
SOMEONE HIRE THIS MAN this is an amazing vision and rewrite. You can tell how much care and attention went into this! As a deep Transformers fan, THANK YOU!
Spoiler
I honestly gasped when you introduced Shockwave. Good job! Genuinely good. I was listening to this as if it was an audio book. From one writer to another: sterling work, mate!
Thank you so much! ☺️🙌
@@phoenixstudios9078 why did you Have The Fallen be Liege Maximo in this Rewrite, His Nqme was Megatronus
@@transformersfan500okane3 different stories can do new things with it, you know. Granted, it's typically Megatronus as The Fallen but it's okay to change it up every now and again. Especially in a fan made rewrite
@@onenerdygremlin Tbf, Megatronus wasn’t associated with the Fallen until the Aligned continuity took shape
@@screamerlover5781 well, you learn something new every day lmfao
i like the new editing style. Just makes it more immersive and like a movie
A major improvement over the original by a long shot.
Since the second movie was written during the writers strike, this is 1,000 times better.
Wow this was amazing, I take back some of my complaints from previoys videos, the entire thing was brilliant, incredible job! The deaths were very sad... but made for great sacrifices, no sacrifice, no victory.
Ngl Blurr and the Twins death made me cry.
😢
I just watched your whole rewriting and I must say it's very impressive. A rewrite of the bay formers is an idea I had in mind for so long and I'm glad someone's actually doing it. I can't wait to see what Starscream have in mind, I hope he'll prove some competence as leader. Still great job
If I had to grade Starscream on his competency as a leader in my TF 3 rewrite, I'd give him a solid D+ because the majority of the Decepticons' success will come from Shockwave and Soundwave's efforts. They're kinda like the practical employees who don't listen to their arrogant and incompetent boss, but get away with their disobedience because their works brings in great results. If those two officers listened to Starscream's directions, the Decepticons would never be half as efficient as they are in my rewrite.
@@phoenixstudios9078 I see, I kinda feel bad for starscream, once leader of the great seeker armada now so bad at leading that he's turned into a joke (I don't mean your rewrite but the franchise in general) anyway I love that soundwave got to shine since first chapter even if I do wonder how does he carry his minions without a chestbox
I especially liked of the first rewrite that quick dialogue between soundwave and starscream on how tracking the allspark was more important than finding megatron, something I would've made too if I were to rewrite the storyline
@@casteddu6740 Yeah in this rewrite, I decided to forego the whole chest box storage thing and Soundwave's minions just follow him and hang out around him like pets.
@@phoenixstudios9078 I see, though if he had more than 3 that would've been kind of hard for him
@@casteddu6740 Exactly. It would've been more of a hinderance than an advantage to have that many yuppies following you around. That's why I swap the minions out between each rewrite. Frenzy, Ravage and Laserbeak were in TF1, but Frenzy died. Then in TF2, Ravage died. Now for TF3, I don't want to give out any spoilers but the roster will definitely change. There will be both additions and subtractions.
This series is incredible so far. Great work man!
In addition: HOLY SHIT! That Rogue One esq ending had me all emotional about Jetfire, Blur, and the Twins. How do you take something as disposable as the OG revenge of the fallen and do this is beyond me, but it only makes me wish the writers for the movies we got actually cared about crafting a story and not just making big explosions. Fantastic work.
So, are Arcee and Mirage being set up to be a couple in this universe? They seem quite close, considering they’re introduced while training together, he rescues her from being executed by the Seekers and they share that quite intimate moment at the end as she’s comforting him.
Oh, and *_HOT DAYUM!_* Talk about a body count! Still, gotta give props to the fallen Autobots, they sure went down like champs. Blurr in particular hit *_HARD_* cuz of how much of a fan favourite he is and how brutal it was, though the twins’ sacrifice was pretty heartbreaking too and Jetfire definitely redeemed himself in truly epic fashion. Somebody get him an Autobot coloured figure in the third film’s toyline!
I'm imagining the primes calling Optimus Orion saying "on this day Orion Pax you are reborn"
I can't wait for your Transformers 3 rewrite. Logically, Shockwave should've been the main antagonist of DOTM. I also want to see Metroplex and Trypticon as well.
That's interesting. Why do you think it makes more sense for Shockwave to be the main antagonist in TF3?
@@phoenixstudios9078 I hope Ironhide Does not die
@@phoenixstudios9078 I think its because he's much more ruthless than Megatron, especially in the IDW universe. (Best Shockwave)
Man, wasn't that a good movie?
I'm left nothing short of speechless with all that went on these 4 parts. Bravo!
Bro, Revenge of the Fallen is already not a good movie, you did *not* need to go this hard! But damn I'm so glad you did. I can only dream of writing a Transformers story this good.
What I find especially amazing about this is that, even though Optimus is barely in it, I was still invested from start to finish. Optimus is the reason I love Transformers, and I wouldn't be a fan if he wasn't in it. And yet, despite the lack of Optimus, I was 100% invested in this story.
I love the interactions between the Autobots and Decepticons. They actually feel like individuals with genuine chemistry with one another, instead of big cool robots who fight other big cool robots! Buy the toys, kids!
I do actually love RotF (both ironically and unironically), but I am still thoroughly impressed. Way to go, dude
I would just like to point out that originally it was firestorm instead of dirge which means dirge broke the continuity just to die, total dirge move
Guys, I don't know if I wasn't listening correctly, but in this rewrite, he says that devastator is 48 feet tall. Meanwhile, in an earlier episode, he said jetfire was 50 feet tall. Jetfire is apparently bigger than a literal combiner. 💀
If there is one director that can turn the transformers films around to the right direction it would have to be Andy Serkis because he's the master of motion capture.
Not just Andy Serkis. You'd have to bring along the handful of mo-cap professionals in the industry that work with Serkis, like Terry Notary and Toby Kebbell. I know Serkis has done all of his mo-cap work through WETA Digital in the past.
@@phoenixstudios9078 i bet they will take pages from these movies. Some we very good and some were not good enough.
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:Films_using_motion_capture
I'll keep Michael bay because it would be amazing Just look at the cinematic style That he directs It would look visually stunning and amazing No offense against Andy serkis by the way
Damn This Was Really Good. I Thought Of A Rewrite For The Bayformers Series A While Ago But Haven’t Gotten Around To Doing It. This Kinda Inspired Me To Actually Doing It Tho. Eagerly Anticipating Your Rewrite Of DOTM. Personally It’s My Favourite Transformers Movie And I’m Excited To See Your Take On It.
I have the weirdest idea. Your version of the transformers get sucked into the michael bay films. In their journals, they write down their thoughts regarding the sheer lunacy of this new parallel reality.
Sounds like that Transformers Dark Spark video game.
Dude this is awesome, you turned a steaming shit like Revenge Of The Fallen into an actually fantastic sequel to your already fantastic rewrite of TF1. I am really excited for DOTM now holy shit
I’m not even a big fan of Transformers, but these are pretty great. Far superior to the hot mess of Bayformers.
And the shitty bumblebee movie.
@@dropkick2224 Take that back!!!!
I am so addicted to this rewrite so much but I think you should've added a part where T.C and Skywarp use their powers, better yet using them alongside Starscream before they died. It would've added more hopelessness within the autobots, because of the fact that they were an elite officer. It would've been cool if Skywarp and Mirage fought, Thundercracker against Blurr. For me it adds a little bit more character between the seekers and not only Starscream, Megatron and the other lead decepticons. Which also makes it realistic
Also add a little bit of voice lines that has a pinch of their personality like in the comics, for me it gets me all excited!
Can't wait to see your rewrite of Transformers 3.
holy shiet, that was super epic. sounded like a final chapter!
Ive been waitin for this
I wonder how transformers 3 rewrite will be because this rewrite series is good
Took a while, but it was definitely worth the wait. Great work!
Thanks man.
Megatron,Starscream,Soundwave,Laserbeak are the remaining decepticons
the thing i like about this version of transformers 2 is that it feels like a modernized G1 episode.
If you get to the 5th film, Cogman was intended to do what headmasters are known for (forming the head of a larger bot) but for whatever reason it was cut from the film.
I'd like a rewrite that uses said feature.
Phoenix Studious, this story is gold. I enjoyed very much, keep with the good work
How did this man make one of the worst movies in the bay verse into one of the best scripts I’ve ever heard
The benefit of hindsight, lack of studio interference and not being involved in the writer's strike really helped out lol
We heard your warning. We've been waiting.
This was an awesome rewrite!
I can't wait for the transformers 3 rewrite
I just love this, it almost make me depressed that people like you are not making these movies, can't wait to see your interpretation of Shockwave ( like are you gonna go for a more IDW based or a TFP loyal one ?)and other remaining autobots for the upcoming movies and characters like dinobots and the mercenary faction from tf4.
I’m really loving this rewriting of the transformers trilogy, you are doing a awesome job with it, I’m looking forward to see the rewriting of Transformers 3 💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥
I love blur in this i really wish this was the actual movie
This was a great rewrite and I especially love the twist to set for the next movie that has the Decepticons actually get away with the energy they came for.
SPOILERS
"This scene will be based on the battle of Quicksilver and Apocalypse"
Yean and Blur's destiny will be based on the other Quicksilver
8:48 Blurr juggles the grenades at the same time.
7:51 i think it was said that in bayverse lore turning into devastator was mentally draining for the constructicons. But i only read that somewhere once so idk
10:00 Sideswipe borrows a trick from Arcee's book and drives figure-8s around Devastator's legs as Sunstreaker drives in circles around Devastator, blasting away at him with his guns.
I love your rewrite. It displays more emotional and character development than Bayformers could never do.
Spoiler:
Although I do have one question. What's your in universe explanation for why Megatron get taken in prison alive? Especially since the Auto Bots and Nest have killed countless Decepticons. So I figured that Megatron would be number 1 on their kill list
Thank you! As a part of the AACA (Alien Autobot Cooperation Act), all Autobots who are registered with NEST have to comply with Earth laws and customs. This includes war trials, which is what Earth's leaders want to hold Megatron accountable for. I know it doesn't get explained in TF2, but it will come up in TF3. Plus, not to mention, holding the leader of the enemy faction hostage is an excellent bargaining chip for peace.
"Transformers 2: Siege of the Star Harvest".
Loved how the autobots that died in your rewrite felt more tragic and heroic making it more meaningful. While with the Bayverse I didn't really feel anything when the characters died
What Revenge of the Fallen should of been. Then again, the writer strike was happening at the time and Paramount didn’t want Bay to delay the film.
Can’t wait to see how you tackle DOTM (especially if Shockwave will have a bigger role in your version considering that he got one shotted in the actual film).
Someone get this man a movie franchise
I wish they had Shockwave appeared in Ravenge of the Fallen in a post credit scene
Really hopes this continues
I Really Love to see your Rewrite of Transformers 3, 4, 5 and 6 and Sixth Feature Unicron as the Big Bad and an Actual Character and I Really Love the Increased and Improved Character Development in the Rewrite!!!😍🤘👍❣
can't wait till the next one
I love your Transformers series!
I’ve been considering doing my own rewrites for a while, but I could never reach your level of imagination!
Your plots, dialogue, and character arcs are just what the movies needed, and you delivered!
I can’t wait to see what you have in store for Transformers 3!
This is pretty good and cool
Really enjoyed this and the first Transformers film rewrite. I definitely look forward to seeing what you do with the rest of the series.
This was so rad! I cant wait for your transformers 3 rewrite!
GODDANM THIS IS GOOD, But I would probably make the last scene a post credit scene, if you were going for that, amazing! Can’t wait for TF 3
This is my 3rd or 4th time watching this. I love these rewrites!!!
5:32 best line of him
Blur’s moment gave me chills and his death made me tear up a bit but sideswipe cut me deep bro, He’s my favorite and to know he has a solidified death saddens me but he went out like a warrior
Excellent work! Man, I am looking forward to when you do Transformers 3!
Dude to be honest I think I prefer your version than Michael Bay's. You did a amazing job on your rewrite.
Thank you! 🙏
Dude these are amazing. Keep up the good work and can’t wait to see what you have planned for the rest of the movies 🔥
I ran into the channel by accident today and ive enjoyed all of your rewrites
Take your time Phoenix Studios no rush we are calmly waiting for the Transformers 3, 4, 5 and 6 Rewrites😀👍❣🤘
7:50
You've been wanting to do this for so long. Me too dude! And it was worth it!
It was these video that made me subscribe to your channel. I can't wait for your transformers 3 rewrite.
It would be cooler if we could see AstroTrain make some small cameos during the Battle of Peru and taking of to flee the Autobots as a reference from the 1986 movie.
Can't wait for the Transformers 3 rewrite. I even have some ideas you might like to use. Like the theme being "Home is where the heart is". Also. After everything Sideswipe went threw in the last part. And hire, I think he sued have survived.
This is so damn good! Keep it up man!
7:59 "PREPARE FOR EXTERMINATION!"
I really wish that this and your other rewrites were the real live action movies.
Hire this guy for the third trasnformers live action reboot, this is glorious.
Great rewrite
This is Cannon
THIS IS WHAT I WANT! THIS IS THE TRANSFORMER MOVIE I WANT!!!
Amazing rewrite, giving it 4 parts was a great way to flesh out the story. Once again though, a few critiques.
While the flashback scenes with prime in the allspark provide a lot of great lore, they also interrupt the pacing in my opinion, and could instead be kept as maybe a bonus feature or tie in comic.
Depending on the timing, jetfire's location could be moved from the ice to the museum from the original, and he could have the alt mode from the original as well. The rest of his story can totally be the same though.
I also would have spared some of the other seekers, so that we could see the classic trio of starscream, skywarp, and thundercracker in future rewrites.
I kinda hope Thundercracker is revealed to have survived this and appears in TF4 where he becomes a autobot
24:29 the credits
7:11
Is that a reference to the warpath boss fight in the dark of the moon video game?
Gotta admit, I could picture it in my mind's eye when Sideswipe and Sunstreaker were duking it out with the Constructicons. I was even going, "C'mon, guys! You can make it! You can make it!"
Awesome man
dang you killed blur and sideswipe my favorite bots I have a feeling you have it out for me
In the words of Thanos, "...I don't even know you".
@@phoenixstudios9078 I know and you probably never will
Rewriting DOTM when?
Bro turned the worst transformers movie into a masterpiece, and im not just saying that as pinbait, this is genuinely incredible. 👌
Mirage honestly became my favorite while I was watching these. I know he doesnt really die in DoTM, just sorta disappears after a while, though I’m very much hoping that he doesn’t die at some point in the rewrite-
Oh man this was so good. I wish these were canon because it's so much better than Bayformers lol. I can't wait for Transformers 3 rewrite.
Hey, just wanted to say I love how you write and portray the world and characters of Transformers, which ones are your favourite characters to write and find fascinating to explore, as a aspiring writer and a TF fan I always like to hear how other feel and how they like to explore the franchise
Although you added a new theme, "no sacrifice, no victory" still is there. Like a lot of good characters just got killed.
When are you gonna do DOTM
Can’t wait for him to do tf3
Phoenix studios after you are done with the rise of skywalker rewrite are you going to do the prequels