Statement of Purpose: Masters in Architecture Cornell (admitted student 2020)

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  • @LaurenValdez
    @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Vote what should my next video be on in the comments:
    A) Writing tips
    B) Stanford Masters in Ed SOP
    C) How to shorten your essay to 500 words
    D) Other (you tell me!)

  • @georgiflores9949
    @georgiflores9949 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Lauren i just wanted to say thank you sooo much for creating these SoP videos. I watched all of them and followed all your tips and I am happy to say I got admitted to my dream graduate program in Switzerland! Thank you again!

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Awesome thanks for sharing! That's why I make these videos. What kind of program did you get into?

    • @georgiflores9949
      @georgiflores9949 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LaurenValdez I got into a Masters in International Affairs at the Graduate Institute in Geneva

  • @audreyanugerah36
    @audreyanugerah36 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you so much for deconstructing this essay. Though I am not going into architecture, this has made me think deeply about my SOP.

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You are welcome! There are a lot more SOPs I deconstruct on my channel. My mission is to help others learn how to write their SOPs.

  • @ngan9081
    @ngan9081 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much! This was the most insightful sop video with clear examples I could fin on the internet! Look forward to your office hour

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      You are welcome. I have a lot more SOP examples on my youtube channel.

  • @istame3498
    @istame3498 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for making this! I will be applying to this exact program and it so helpful for me to see an example of a strong admission essay. I also don’t have a background in architecture for my undergraduate and this helps my understand how I can still use my non experience and relate it in a way that can still showcase my perspective and appreciation for it.

  • @mushfequssaleheen6498
    @mushfequssaleheen6498 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Grateful to you, indeed

  • @wendychen3686
    @wendychen3686 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much for sharing this! I am going to applying to graduate schools this year. This video really helps me so much!!!

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you for watching! Good luck with the application! Make sure to subscribe and if you are on my email list you will be the first to know about new resources. landing.mailerlite.com/webforms/landing/i0p4x3

  • @hulina734
    @hulina734 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is exactly what I need right now!!! You are so amazing and helpful! ❤❤😍😍

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Happy to help! Thank you! Make sure to subscribe and if you are on my email list you will be the first to know about new resources. landing.mailerlite.com/webforms/landing/i0p4x3

  • @ArchAnime
    @ArchAnime 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Very very helpful!

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for watching, glad I could help! Make sure to subscribe and if you are on my email list you will be the first to know about new resources. landing.mailerlite.com/webforms/landing/i0p4x3

  • @manal3707
    @manal3707 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much you are the best!

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you for watching! Make sure to subscribe and if you are on my email list you will be the first to know about new resources. landing.mailerlite.com/webforms/landing/i0p4x3

  • @michaelasante5002
    @michaelasante5002 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please do you have one for urban planning. I don't know where to start from

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      You can find an urban planning essay here th-cam.com/video/yjhSbp2JWp4/w-d-xo.html

  • @raghadb1508
    @raghadb1508 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Lauren, do you think it is a good idea to bring up the pandemic and how I found ways to further develop my skills this year in the field I am applying for in my SOP? I've had some mixed opinions about it! Please share what you think.

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      If it's relevant to making a strong case for you to succeed in the program. If it's just filler info that isn't strong, leave it out.

  • @alexvaquero9660
    @alexvaquero9660 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank for the video! I’m currently in the BArch program at Alfred state, after I graduate I’m planning to apply to Cornell’s MArch program

  • @michelleroom
    @michelleroom 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Lauren that's a great explanation. I get more idea for my SOP. But if I'm not a background for architecture, what should I put on my portofolio?

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Talk to the admissions staff. They will give you details on what to include in a portfolio. When you don't have architecture experience, generally you will include various kinds of design/artwork. That can be graphic design, drawings, etc.

    • @michelleroom
      @michelleroom 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Woa thank you for replying my question. It helps me a lot.😊

  • @glorialiu1954
    @glorialiu1954 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Lauren, besides the dates posted on your events page currently, when will be the next available sessions for office hours? I was not able to get a spot for any posted dates

    • @LaurenValdez
      @LaurenValdez  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I added more dates for the remainder of the year here laurenvaldez.com/events

  • @fauziatasnim8109
    @fauziatasnim8109 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    How can i contact you Ma'am ? I am working on my SOP and i need your guidance.

    • @emilycarter8922
      @emilycarter8922 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      You might want to check this out th-cam.com/video/5ZUgT5cgTg0/w-d-xo.html

  • @HARPREETKAUR-hd9zc
    @HARPREETKAUR-hd9zc 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you please check my SOP??