Stanford Statement of Purpose Tips: Masters in Education

Reading a Statement of Purpose from a student admitted to Stanford, Harvard, and UCLA for Masters in Education programs.
I read the before version of the essay and share the feedback I gave the student. Then I read the final version of the Statement of Purpose.
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Timestamp
00:31 - Reading Before Version of Statement of Purpose
15:42 - Final Version of Statement of Purpose