"Ghost Ship" A Star Trek Fan Production Segment 2

แชร์
ฝัง
  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 29 ก.ย. 2024
  • “Star Trek and all related marks, logos and characters are solely owned by CBS Studios Inc. This fan production is not endorsed by, sponsored by, nor affiliated with CBS, Paramount Pictures, or any other Star Trek franchise, and is a non-commercial fan-made film intended for recreational use. No commercial exhibition or distribution is permitted. No alleged independent rights will be asserted against CBS or Paramount Pictures.”

ความคิดเห็น • 1.3K

  • @avalonuniverse6327
    @avalonuniverse6327  5 ปีที่แล้ว +133

    Thank you so much to everyone for the kind words and tremendous support for our film! We do plan to make more fan films that take place in our "Avalon Universe" continuity. Please look for our crowdfunding campaign for those films coming soon!

    • @Killerspieler0815
      @Killerspieler0815 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @Avalon Universe -
      Great work ... I hope the evil empire of CBS/Paramount does not strike back (like it happend to Stage9 ) because it is "too good" to be competition.

    • @nestorgarcia5337
      @nestorgarcia5337 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Muy buena la produccion que han hecho, lastima que no incluyeron el idioma español en subtitulos, exitos, siguan mejorando.

    • @ColeMayes
      @ColeMayes 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      These two episodes were 100% refreshing and very entertaining. Great job! Let's see more...please. :)

    • @tywilliamnash5078
      @tywilliamnash5078 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Dude you peeps are Dee BOMB!! Well done, it looks, sounds, and feels right, like it's supposed to. Congratulations. Kudos. Magnifique!

    • @garyhunt764
      @garyhunt764 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      One word brilliant just as good as any of the TV series and I quite believe that this is the forerunner to the original 60s series.
      More please

  • @hyrinshratu
    @hyrinshratu 5 ปีที่แล้ว +79

    "Beck! Science the science!"
    This is in my top 5 greatest lines of dialogue ever.

    • @CardboardSliver
      @CardboardSliver 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Good ol Star Fleet Commanding officer talk.

    • @jorklind
      @jorklind 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      According to RDM, that's how they wrote in the script back in the day: "tech the tech"

    • @josephcontreras8930
      @josephcontreras8930 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      What?!? No reference to mini skirts and gogo boots????

  • @NeverEnuffAmmo
    @NeverEnuffAmmo 5 ปีที่แล้ว +73

    I absolutely loved this! Takes me back to being a kid in the 80's and watching reruns of TOS ....... You guys did a fantastic job!

    • @speedracer1945
      @speedracer1945 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I liked ths concept. Good photography and acting . Nice CGI too .

    • @johnbower7452
      @johnbower7452 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I concur; far and away better than any of the stuff since TNG. This works well and would love to see a series set around this ship and her new crew.

    • @lastofus456
      @lastofus456 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Kool Takes me Back to When i Watched the First Time Star Trek Aired Yep. I'm Old.

    • @a68dart340
      @a68dart340 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      You mean in the 60s when there were no reruns like me?

  • @Dominion69420
    @Dominion69420 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    One of if not the best fan film. Excellent!

  • @davidburton2229
    @davidburton2229 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Craptacular in all the very best ways, most entertaining. Looking forward to more

  • @pondafarr
    @pondafarr 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ok, once I got the campy humor aspect, this DOES fit well within the ST Universe. Well done.

  • @mikepearson9442
    @mikepearson9442 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Amanda Beck ,I think I love you! Fun video.

  • @steve8421
    @steve8421 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Not bad. Not quite as polished as the "Star Trek Continues" series but enjoyable and would definitely watch more.

  • @nukejr555
    @nukejr555 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Best sfx
    Realistic story
    I truly enjoy it
    Oscar worthy acting
    Only one of these are true but I can't wait for the next one.

  • @leerilea1709
    @leerilea1709 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    When do we get more?

  • @emsleywyatt3400
    @emsleywyatt3400 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Gotta love zombie redshirts.

  • @getoverhere1225
    @getoverhere1225 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Would rather watch this than Star Trek discovery.

  • @PQRavik
    @PQRavik 5 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    Why was this so much more fun then anything produced professionally in the last 10 years?

    • @richardkev3077
      @richardkev3077 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Easy. Because the “professionally” produced Trek is made by people who don’t understand Star Trek (Abrams), people who hate Star Trek (Kurtzman), and people who are pushing an agenda that excludes the human characteristics that made Trek great.

  • @johncanfield1177
    @johncanfield1177 5 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    It is so important when someone touches the TOS universe that it is done with love and respect for the line. This fits very nicely, while introducing new elements to the broad base of a well-outlined system. Thank you for the most pleasurable adventure.

    • @neilfranklin5644
      @neilfranklin5644 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Be interesting to see more of the energy entity that would be fascinating.

    • @avalonuniverse6327
      @avalonuniverse6327  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@neilfranklin5644 Watch our Film “Cosmic Stream” for more!

    • @XL-5117
      @XL-5117 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Is it me or does the commander look like Marty McFly?

  • @anthonybarlow5955
    @anthonybarlow5955 5 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    This may sound sappy but watching this made me feel good like old times on the Enterprise thank you for the production

  • @johnshillinglaw8433
    @johnshillinglaw8433 5 ปีที่แล้ว +250

    Other than slightly dorky dialogue... A great effort. Obviously amateur actors but much closer to TOS than the current CBS nonsense. Hope to see more films and the actors again

    • @marlonlacert8133
      @marlonlacert8133 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Who knows, That "slightly dorky dialogue" might be the way people talk in the future!
      Think how the people of 1800's would call our way of talking!

    • @Skybaby79
      @Skybaby79 5 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      Actually, the jokes are the only thing keeping them from being sued.
      With the jokes it's considered "Parody" and thus it falls under 'fair use'.

    • @MervynPartin
      @MervynPartin 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      The acting was, I admit, a little bit wooden, but then, so was the the original Star Trek pilot and look how that developed. This was a very good effort by ALL concerned and I applaud them. Well done. As for the CBS nonsense as you call it, what a disappointment that turned out to be.

    • @marlonlacert8133
      @marlonlacert8133 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@MervynPartin, To be honest, I was thinking that if I was facing such a big problem. I would likely try and see how many cheesy movie lines, That I could use.. Then Poof the actors, start using such lines...
      I was very impressed.. As When I have faced life and death, I get in such morbid type humor too.. Love it!
      And the only wooden acting was with the high commander..
      Then again, it explains this as he is new to his post. And both have some type of past.. And I have seen real people act like this..
      So it may have been meant that way.. Works for me!!!

    • @Booger414
      @Booger414 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MervynPartin I actually thought it was the opposite of wooden, there were a few mannerisms that seemed out of place for the scene. A head tilt here or an inflection there that were definitely acting just not the way I expected for Star Trek.

  • @jyralnadreth4442
    @jyralnadreth4442 5 ปีที่แล้ว +76

    "Get to da Shuttle" XD

    • @jonathanbrown7250
      @jonathanbrown7250 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      I wondered who else got that? I was LOL

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Yea, they did a lot of semi-spoofs, thought I might be watching 'Scary Movie, The Trek'.

    • @Roboprogs
      @Roboprogs 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hmm. Kinda like soundcloud.com/ali-nadem/predator

    • @aurorathearcticwolf4243
      @aurorathearcticwolf4243 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I know where that came from!

    • @amberyooper
      @amberyooper 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Possibly my favorite line in the video!

  • @colincampbell3679
    @colincampbell3679 5 ปีที่แล้ว +137

    Damn.. a sexy tall leggy hot female engineer, Scotty would be in love... with both! The ship 1st then the engineer : )

    • @deepthund
      @deepthund 5 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Both women are very attractive, however I lean more towards the science officer.

    • @josephheston9238
      @josephheston9238 5 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      @@deepthund @Colin Campbell Is this the Ginger vs. Mary-Ann debate all over again?

    • @robertf3479
      @robertf3479 5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      @@josephheston9238 I was wondering who would go there. Personally, I've always thought Mary Ann was hotter than Ginger.

    • @robertf3479
      @robertf3479 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@deepthund Me too.

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Hmm, thought this was ST, not Pulp Fiction. Besides, you forgot 'Betty or Veronica'? And Aldeberon Whisky or Saurian Brandy?

  • @matthewlions8969
    @matthewlions8969 5 ปีที่แล้ว +47

    such a dose of classic trek , couldn't help smiling

  • @BillWJr2
    @BillWJr2 5 ปีที่แล้ว +77

    Fear The Trekking Dead!
    Excellent job! Looking forward to more.

  • @WilliamHBaird-eq2hp
    @WilliamHBaird-eq2hp 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    I really love what you are all doing with the Fan Films! This is real Star Trek Quality!

  • @davidhenderson3400
    @davidhenderson3400 5 ปีที่แล้ว +37

    You know you are having a bad day when you end up with a phaser in one hand and a pipe in the other.

    • @hughdidwell7815
      @hughdidwell7815 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      3:55 We’ll just have to own the situation

    • @MrOarson
      @MrOarson 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      ...and a worse day when the pipe proves to be more effective than the phaser.

    • @josephamendolea3431
      @josephamendolea3431 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      apparently they abandoned flame throwers in the 23rd century :P

    • @jv-lk7bc
      @jv-lk7bc 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@josephamendolea3431 flamethrowers on a spaceship? ..w/marginal life support?

    • @jv-lk7bc
      @jv-lk7bc 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@hughdidwell7815 good thing they just happened to have 3 foil-wrapped nerf(c) broom handles laying on the otherwise bare engineering panel.. somebody got owned. not quite sure who...
      maybe Shatner and his foam "rocks".

  • @zoppie
    @zoppie 5 ปีที่แล้ว +57

    I wanted to comment on the music. Totally original, yet it feels VERY Trekky. Great job!

    • @tydunivan
      @tydunivan 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      zoppie , I fully and wholeheartedly concur! Thanks to the incredible talent of Nicholas McFarland, the music made the show!

    • @Roboprogs
      @Roboprogs 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I also said as much on the first episode but I’ll “me too” this comment 😀

    • @drfabriciomnogueira
      @drfabriciomnogueira 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I love it 😍😍😍😍

    • @nevaehlumiere8019
      @nevaehlumiere8019 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Zoppie....I happened to be reading the credits and noticed that it was original music. I was VERY impressed because it was just very Star Trek-y sounding and blended nicely! So much so, that I didn't even notice it. Gold star to whoever's in charge of the music!

  • @mckinley1767
    @mckinley1767 5 ปีที่แล้ว +50

    To bad that [CBS F/A] doesn't get it that fans are the drive. CBS full access could have millions of subscribers.If they had stuff like this fine work . good job.

    • @BrennaUrbangirl
      @BrennaUrbangirl 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      No CBS All Access would not have millions of subscribers even if they returned to the core ST premise that Gene Roddenberry put in place with TOS. There are a few people such as myself that refuse to pay for yet another subscription service. I already pay for Netflix, for just one show. Everyone outside the US got Discovery on Netflix, why they couldn't just release Discovery on Netflix in the US I have no idea. This is the same reason I will not be subscribing to Disney's streaming service when they release the Star Wars Rogue One spin-off TV series.

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Breanna Lynn, you are welcome to not pay if you choose, but CBS ALREADY has millions of subscribers just for STD alone.

    • @Argonautx66
      @Argonautx66 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Andy Tay they really don’t.

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Argonautx66 Here ya go: www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=decider.com/2018/03/07/cbs-all-access-year-1/amp/&ved=2ahUKEwjemJnSltneAhVKlKwKHZ4qDUAQFjAPegQIBhAB&usg=AOvVaw1Gf47O9DYZavR2SmldTfIy&cf=1

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Star Trek: Discovery’ Launch Drives A Record Number Of New CBS All Access Subscribers
      By Claire Spellberg @c_spellbergSep 25, 2017 at 2:09pm
      Last night, CBS All Access‘ newest show, Star Trek: Discovery, premiered on the subscription streaming platform to record numbers. A CBS press release states that its service “broke a new record for subscriber sign-ups in a single day, eclipsing the previous record held by the 2017 Grammy Awards.” (Worth noting: The network did not include any specific figures or statistics in their press release, so we don’t know if this means they signed up hundreds, thousands, or even millions of new subscribers.)
      The service not only beat its single-day record with the launch of Star Trek: Discovery, it also experienced its best week and month for sign-ups, largely due to the popularity of the Star Trek franchise and the start of the NFL season.
      SEE ALSO

      What Is CBS All Access? How To Watch 'Star Trek: Discovery'
      Rather than consider its Star Trek success a one-off, CBS is doubling down on content and launching an after-show titled After Trek. The show will be hosted by Matt Mira, a popular podcast host, and will be broadcast live at 9:30 pm ET each Sunday after new episodes of Star Trek: Discoverybecome available on demand at 8:30 pm.
      If you’re a Star Trek junkie, you can get CBS All Access for as low as $5.99/month (or $9.99/month if you don’t want commercials). For those looking for something in addition to space exploration, CBS All Access also offers thousands of episodes of CBS classics, live TV options, and plenty of on-demand movies.

  • @jonathanurias1984
    @jonathanurias1984 5 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    Omg even the corniness of this MOST EXCELLENT fan film is better than anything we've had since Enterprise went off the air. Great Job!!!

    • @tydunivan
      @tydunivan 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you Jonathan! We’re glad you enjoyed it and want to keep entertaining our loyal audience. Please share our film. The more who see it, the more support we get, the sooner you can see our next film...

  • @Outer_Nerd
    @Outer_Nerd 5 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    Excellent film. I'd rather watch more of this crew than any other since the reboot.

  • @dennisdenise1
    @dennisdenise1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    Great job ! I enjoyed the off beat humor. Keep making episodes. I’ll be back.

  • @morlockmeat
    @morlockmeat 5 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    FANTASTIC!!! Keep making more! You guys are great! Especially Captain Michael J. Fox! 😆👍👍👍👍

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      That's hilarious!

    • @tydunivan
      @tydunivan 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      morlockmeat , I actually am a professional Michael J. Fox impersonator.

    • @Willpower-74205
      @Willpower-74205 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Whoa, this is heavy! 😉

  • @1977TA
    @1977TA 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    The captain looks like Michael J. Fox. Star Trek To The Future!

  • @obiitom
    @obiitom 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    More lore friendly than STD even if it was meant to be a little tongue in cheek.

  • @DafterThings
    @DafterThings 5 ปีที่แล้ว +146

    Excellent again. It felt more and more like a STOS episode as it went along... with some extra quirky humour :-)

    • @MapleDog
      @MapleDog 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Indeed,hope we get more of these

    • @BrennaUrbangirl
      @BrennaUrbangirl 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@MapleDog The guidelines CBS put out regarding Fan Films limits to two 15 minute episodes total, no more. They can't do more or CBS could sue them.

    • @Corvus__
      @Corvus__ 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Annually?

    • @MapleDog
      @MapleDog 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Yeah CBS are afraid anyone else make better movies,btw since all fan films are not made for profit its an asshole move to do what they did.
      I wonder if the lawsuit was only made for the USA

    • @drmayeda1930
      @drmayeda1930 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@Corvus__
      In total. This is good for a fanfic film but the original enterprise didn't have a system to put forcefields over the breaches. The engineer would have to use a life support belt to enter the areas and install forcefields. They would have sealed off areas with bulkhead. The Enterprise A would have been one of the first active ships to have it.

  • @TheArakan94
    @TheArakan94 5 ปีที่แล้ว +92

    Star Trek fan film regulations are friggin' horrible..
    "The fan production must be less than 15 minutes for a single self-contained story, or no more than 2 segments, episodes or parts, not to exceed 30 minutes total, with no additional seasons, episodes, parts, sequels or remakes."
    We can kiss goodbye to stuff like Star Trek Continues :( This episode you did was truly amazing work. I would love to see whole movie or perhaps series. Awesome cast, effects, story.. Everything. Really good job!

    • @Spacegoat92
      @Spacegoat92 5 ปีที่แล้ว +30

      Sounds like they are afraid the fans will make better content than they can!

    • @SpearM3064
      @SpearM3064 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Keep in mind that the "film regulations" are more like a set of guidelines. "If you do all these things, we promise we won't sue you,' basically.
      But if you *don't* do all those things, then the chance of getting sued depends on whether or not CBS/Paramount likes what you did.

    • @davidhenderson3400
      @davidhenderson3400 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      @@Spacegoat92 It looks like they just did.

    • @BrennaUrbangirl
      @BrennaUrbangirl 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      @@SpearM3064 As Axanar proved they can and will sue. It don't matter how much they like or dislike it.

    • @cwam1701e
      @cwam1701e 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      @@BrennaUrbangirl Paramount/CBS looked the other way for years and years until Axanar came along, and it wasn't about production values - look at Star Trek Continues - that was studio quality production! So why did it change with Axanar? Because they crossed the line and forced the issue; they were paying themselves a salary earned from the Star Trek IP and building themselves a nice studio from money earned on the ST IP to make future non-ST productions. If Paramount/CBS had let that go they would likely have lost all control over their own IP . Axanar's over-reach ruined it for great productions like Star Trek Continues etc. The fact that they settled out of court showed they knew they hadn't a leg to stand on and now the whole fan production community has these dreadful guidelines to work with. Let's hope it is as SpearM75503 says and Paramount/CBS will be willing to look the other way for most productions as they had done for many, many years before Axanar.

  • @FD2003Abc
    @FD2003Abc 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    What a labor of love. Keep doing this please!
    I look forward to the adventures of Captain Mason and his crew.

  • @Raggedymannn
    @Raggedymannn 6 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Absolutely fantastic, never thought I'd see the day zombies would fit in the Star Trek Universe but you folks pulled it off with a beautifully well done story, would love to see USS Excalibur NCC-1705 continue as a Fan Series, well done job all involved, Vance Major Owen and Leslie great jobs as well my friends

    • @phantomactual8916
      @phantomactual8916 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Technically we've seen the zombie idea portrayed in Enterprise, Season 3, and that was an official episode too. I can't remember exactly which episode it was, but I know it was where T'Pol started to lose control of her emotions, and featured a D'Kyr class Vulcan cruiser filled with what were essentially Vulcan zombies

    • @Raggedymannn
      @Raggedymannn 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@phantomactual8916 Thank you, last year I was kindly informed of the episodes and re-watched them, an Enterprise NX-01 episode and a TOS episode

  • @nerdyaviator732
    @nerdyaviator732 5 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    One of the best fan made films I have seen!

    • @catinabox2878
      @catinabox2878 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Better than Star Trek continues? I doubt that.

  • @LanLe-rz4lm
    @LanLe-rz4lm 5 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    I actually felt like I was watching a whole hour's TOS Episode from all the rich character, dialogue, and SPIRIT in these 2 segments, but in my own lifetime (I'm a mid 70s baby). However you did it, PLEEEASE do it again!

  • @andytay5507
    @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว +39

    'He's dead, Jim'. 'And She's dead, Jim'. 'Hell, Jim, they're all dead'. 'I'm a doctor not a coronor'.

    • @johnbower7452
      @johnbower7452 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It's Death Jim but not as we know it...

  • @twinray27
    @twinray27 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Attack of The Space Zombies......They're coming to get you commander.....

  • @JoeCannon1
    @JoeCannon1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    OK I don’t care what anybody says I thoroughly enjoyed this. I especially enjoyed the dialogue and the jokes. It doesn’t get any better than space zombies!! As for the acting I didn’t have a problem with it as a matter of fact I appreciate it when people are real. We don’t need polished pros. We just need passionate Star Trek fans. I actually prefer real people to Hollywood actors in fan films. As an aside I was sorry to see the character of captain Mason die in The Avalon episode (sorry for the spoiler). What happened? his character was great. Hopefully rumors of his demise are greatly exaggerated.

  • @gregorynpappas
    @gregorynpappas 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    This is a sleeper everyone should know about. omg. i loved it!

  • @commodorerook3797
    @commodorerook3797 5 ปีที่แล้ว +151

    1000% better than Discovery! Well done!

    • @jonathanbrown7250
      @jonathanbrown7250 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Agree. I'm not a discovery hater but if there were an episode of both and I could only watch one, I would be watching this

    • @LoneBrowncoat
      @LoneBrowncoat 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      I concur.

    • @Argonautx66
      @Argonautx66 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      I’m wondering why they’re wearing the STD “broken delta” though?
      Overall, this was fun. Good job.

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Argonautx66 Not sure, but I saw a comment elsewhere that said they had to use CBS licensed products, e.g. uniforms, etc.

    • @IRAQIWILDMAN1
      @IRAQIWILDMAN1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      HAA HAA, not even close to Discovery.

  • @kepszlok
    @kepszlok 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Great work. Even with those idiot cbs fan film guidlines...

  • @ncc1701chris
    @ncc1701chris 5 ปีที่แล้ว +47

    As a long-time fan of Star Trek I have to say in the 52 years it's been around I've been a fan for 41 years, I'd have to say this was a very nice storyline and it brings a conclusion to the story of what happened to the disabled Starship Excalibur from the Federation Fleet that fought the M5 which was aboard the USS Enterprise in the episode ultimate computer from the original series I have to say one of my favorite episodes from the original series as most true fans of the show are aware the other three Starships the Lexington the hood and the potemkin if I'm not mistaken though badly damaged were able to return to base after the M5 incident except for the Excalibur the storyline finally shows how they were able to bring the Lost Starship and her crew home. This was a very nicely done storyline and it's way BETTER than star trek discovery.

    • @captainnerd6452
      @captainnerd6452 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      You really should check out Star Trek Continues, Vic Mignona (sorry for misspelling his name) drove the best TOS episodes, he wanted to film the last stories from the "five year mission" that were never done, he managed to bring quality and even some pretty major Trek/SF actors on board. The first episodes were fairly rough, but they settled in really well, and he even managed to tie in visually and story-wise with Star Trek The Motion(less) Picture, uniforms and all.

    • @aaronparr474
      @aaronparr474 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I have to say all that had to be said!

    • @captainarcher2
      @captainarcher2 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      "The Ultimate Computer" Doctor Daystrum/M-5 creator

    • @BigBadjohn0x0
      @BigBadjohn0x0 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@captainnerd6452 as I understand it they're using the same sets where STC was filmed, an appearance from Vic would be brilliant.

    • @drmayeda1930
      @drmayeda1930 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@BigBadjohn0x0
      He's got plenty of time. He got fired from all his anime jobs and one video game. Accusations of sexual abuse were made but no evidence was produced by any of the victims or they were claims without merit. A teenage girl feeling creepy after receiving a hug and a kiss after getting an autograph. Females being hugged without first asking consent is a sexual assault since "silence is not consent most 20 to 30 years ago. It was a different time and to retroactively apply current standards.

  • @GeorgeKayaian
    @GeorgeKayaian 5 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Well that was wonderful! Great conclusion. Again-- a great piece of fan filmmaking. Sets the bar high! Well done, everyone!!!!

    • @tydunivan
      @tydunivan 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      GeorgeKayaian , Thank you so much!

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Wow! High praise from Mr Kayaian himself.

    • @GeorgeKayaian
      @GeorgeKayaian 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@andytay5507 It is well deserved! Great Trek, indeed.

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@GeorgeKayaian Mr Kayaian, that is PRECISELY what I meant. It appears you are as prolific a watcher as you are a producer. Love your stuff too! I have a suggestion, why don't you, the producer of this short, and Vic Mignogna get together for a blow out Trek that will never be surpassed?!

    • @GeorgeKayaian
      @GeorgeKayaian 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@andytay5507 that is a wonderful idea, however I never had the honor to meet Vic Mignogna. Although a huge fan of his work, (if I may use a well-worn analogy) he is several thousand rungs above me on the ladder of success. While I work in paper and tape, acting with family and friends in a small apartment on Long Island, Vic is a true professional, working on expensive sets and acting with the pros, which he is clearly one himself. I know that we both share a love of Star Trek that is universal amongst us all, but your wonderful suggestion has to remain a dream. The main point is that awesome folks like yourself keep the dream alive and make Trek films for all of us to enjoy. No matter the level, our love of Trek is what's important... to boldly go onward as they say. Thanks again for the idea... how cool it is! And thank you very much for saying you enjoy my series as well-- that is veery appreciated! I've been doing this since 1992, and it still means a lot when someone takes the time to say they enjoy my projects.

  • @calvinhandley2373
    @calvinhandley2373 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Star Trek Walking Dead (STWD) what's not to like?

  • @Da40kOrks
    @Da40kOrks 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Well that was totally worth the watch! The story was fun, the humor spot on, and the effects pretty darn good! Everyone involved should be very proud.

  • @trickymarigold
    @trickymarigold 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This is cheesy and dorky and amazing. Just like tos. Thank you for making it

  • @kommissarwhode
    @kommissarwhode 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I was able to watch until the Arnold quotes, though I almost gave up when the crew member wearing Converse sneakers went zombie. Also, rods wrapped in tinfoil as weapons? The computer generated graphics were really good, so I did not understand the lack of effort on other things. Still, I give it a C+ as a fan film. Keep trying, it will be worth it. o7

  • @wjckc79
    @wjckc79 5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    Just finished part one. I would watch these actors in a series. This is great! Loved the off the cuff humor. This IS Star Trek.

  • @alexpalmer9101
    @alexpalmer9101 5 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    You guys did a great job on this! This was not only a great followup story to "The Ultimate Computer", but it came out just in time to be a great Halloween-themed episode! It's also nice to see the STC sets live on in other productions. I hope you keep going!

  • @michaelmathis8803
    @michaelmathis8803 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    it has an "Oroville" vibe to it but Trek at the same time....Well done! (and I love the Oroville). CBS...are you listening...there are great things here and great fans. Get off your PC snooty asses!

  • @calanon534
    @calanon534 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I adore Captain Mason. I'd serve under him any day.

  • @derekbowbrick6233
    @derekbowbrick6233 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Sorry I am late to the party, this wad either the worst /best camp I have ever seen, or the best /worst camp I have ever seen.
    You have garnered a new fan, and you can thank Axanar.

  • @BennyLlama39
    @BennyLlama39 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    So he went from Mr. Adventure to space station bureaucrat? (Ten points for whoever gets the "Mr. Adventure" reference, and looking it up doesn't count.) 😀

    • @blockmasterscott
      @blockmasterscott 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Wait, he's Mr. Adventure? Oh my god.

    • @andytay5507
      @andytay5507 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ben Trimble: At what time count in short is he?

    • @Willpower-74205
      @Willpower-74205 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      [Uhura aims phaser] "Now get in the closet!"

  • @stevenbaumann8692
    @stevenbaumann8692 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    1:20. The Jeff Goldblum Jurassic Park reference 😂👍🏻

  • @shankthebat8654
    @shankthebat8654 5 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    A wonderful little fan film. You certainly deserve all the praise you're going to get for it, and I think everyone involved should be pleased with their work! That said, I'd like to offer some thoughts on what didn't work.
    Please keep in mind these comments are meant constructively, coming from someone who overall enjoyed the production. BUT... I want to see you do more, and do it better, and so this is made in the spirit of what I hope will be useful commentary...
    The first thing that strikes me is that Mason is attacked by a zombie, beats it back, and then is called to engineering by Archer. At no point does Mason say, "THIS SHIP IS FULL OF ZOMBIES!" He replies calmly that he is coming down, and doesn't at all mention what happened. There's no way he wouldn't be screaming about that over coms after it happened.
    Later, mention is made of venting energy through the nacelles. As one of them is missing, that should have been something like, "We can vent it through the REMAINING nacelle." Almost makes me think that it wasn't until after principal photography that someone in SFX decided to cut a nacelle off. Still, little things like that take you out of the moment.
    The section with the movie quotes.... I'm sorry, that was just awful. Aside from the fact it referenced movies people are unlikely to have seen a couple of centuries from now, the delivery was just horrible. Acting isn't easy. A good fan production is lucky to have all involved pull of the delivery of serious lines, but comedy is even harder. That part just really feel flat. Humor is very difficult to write, and act... maybe tone it down on the next production.
    The last quibble is the phaser fire. The SFX team did they best they could, but the actors were frequently waving their phasers about, and the SFX had to compensate for that. They did a good job, but it really didn't feel like Trek there. Canon Trek productions almost always have officers holding the phaser steady for the duration of a shot. It's easier on the FX team, and it makes it look like they are firing with authority, and not desperation.
    Again, these are comments made by someone who liked what you did, and hopes to see more. I'm not quibbling to be a jerk, or nit-picking just to be negative. I'm saying this because praise is great to have, but only serious commentary helps one do better the next time.

    • @avalonuniverse6327
      @avalonuniverse6327  5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Shank thank you for your comments. This is our first film.

    • @shankthebat8654
      @shankthebat8654 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@avalonuniverse6327 And believe me, I want to see more from you guys. I only make long comments like this to things I care about!

    • @avalonuniverse6327
      @avalonuniverse6327  5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Shank Many of the things you listed were noted during the post production process. We appreciate the feedback, and thanks again for watching.

    • @tydunivan
      @tydunivan 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      Shank,
      Disclaimer: I am only an actor in this production, not a member of the production team. Any opinions expressed by me are solely my own and do not necessarily reflect those of the controlling entities of this film.
      Now that we got that outta the way...
      Thanks for all the feedback! I’m Tyler Dunivan, I play Commander Derek Mason.
      On using 20th/21st century pop culture references: The humorous tone in this film is meant to be similar to that of “The Orville”, in which the Captain talks about Kermit the Frog, crew members Karaoke to “Any Way You Want It” by Journey and “My Heart Will Go On” by Celine Dion, and a Klingon type character eats ice cream as “comfort food” while watching a scene from “The Sound of Music”. In Babylon 5, the Chief Security Officer had a poster of Daffy Duck on the wall in his quarters and is shown introducing an alien ambassador to the tradition of eating popcorn while watching a movie.
      Pulling back on the humor for future productions would be untrue to the production team’s vision (I don’t necessarily speak for them, just my own assessment) of telling engaging adventure stories with a bit of drama, while making the audience laugh by not taking it too seriously. Please try to enjoy it for what it is.
      Thank you again for the extensive commentary. You said you only take time on things you care about, and that’s a huge compliment. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the next one!

    • @TheHamno
      @TheHamno 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@tydunivan Well, I particularly enjoyed the cheesy lines. At first I groaned but then got drawn into the story, well done to you and the whole team!

  • @amberyooper
    @amberyooper 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Cool second half!
    I didn't notice the captain's resemblance to Marty McFly until it was mentioned in a comment in the first half comments. :-)

  • @thomasdye9869
    @thomasdye9869 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Nicely done! Quotable quote: "oh yeah, forgot to tell you, I was attacked by one in Aux control." and then the Arnold one-liners back to back to back! great work. thank you all.

    • @ptonpc
      @ptonpc 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      I loved that line and the look the other two give him.

  • @remaincalm2
    @remaincalm2 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Loved it! Great gag about doing an EVA in gogo boots and a mini skirt! I hope you can somehow make more. Wonderful quality work everyone.

  • @FlightDreamz
    @FlightDreamz 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Part Gene Roddenberry, part George Romero I love it!

    • @joshuairwin2016
      @joshuairwin2016 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you sir! And I've met both Rod Roddenberry and George Romero haha.

  • @jamesrobinson1214
    @jamesrobinson1214 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I would much rather see fan films over the most recent attempts to rewrite Trek for tv, such as discovery. Keep the installments coming.

  • @JDevPeabody
    @JDevPeabody 5 ปีที่แล้ว +64

    Damn the torpedoes ( cbs lawsuit/guideline ) full speed ahead with these "segments". Any, ANY fan made content like this is WAY better than discovery or the jj monstrosities.

    • @Spacegoat92
      @Spacegoat92 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      CBS mentality. Instead of making good enjoyable stories, they try to stop anyone who does. Can't beat 'em sue them!!

    • @josephheston9238
      @josephheston9238 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@Spacegoat92 I vote for a countersuit.

    • @JDevPeabody
      @JDevPeabody 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Oh, my goodness. How much Fan Content could be made with budget of just one of the JJ enterprises ( oh, I hesitate to use that term ), er the budgets given to any of the JJ mess. CBS / Paramount could really have their own streaming monopoly on this stuff if they would use that budget to place the Fan content ( Yes, capital F for Fan, because CBS deserves the capital F ) on amazon prime or netflix ( discounting STD, of course ). C'mon CBS, listen to your fans. CBS, Star Wars even has a Fan Content award blessed by Lucasfilm. They get what fans are, why can't you?
      Please discuss amongst yourselves. I will ( decker ) now step off my soapbox.

    • @BrennaUrbangirl
      @BrennaUrbangirl 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@josephheston9238 Countersuit would never win. CBS owns Star Trek copyrights and trademarks. Courts will side with CBS for that reason.

    • @Spacegoat92
      @Spacegoat92 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@BrennaUrbangirl If they have any trekkies on that panel, they won't LoL

  • @hjbutlerrb
    @hjbutlerrb 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    It is nice to see some true Star Trek instead of that Star Trek discovery

  • @GoldenLion137
    @GoldenLion137 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Great job. Please make more

  • @jennifergruber3963
    @jennifergruber3963 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow. Exceeded all my expectations, albeit I keep them pretty low for these things. But a great effort and premise. A '"9" in fan filmdom. I'd give it a "10" except for the shiny faces.

  • @wpatrickw2012
    @wpatrickw2012 5 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    Wonderful fan film, especially working within the CBS's draconian rules. There were a couple of plot holes that could not be filled with such restraints, but overall a very good film. Too bad I could not have found it before Halloween.

    • @MGSBigBoss77
      @MGSBigBoss77 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      *Wonderful fan film, especially working within the CBS's draconian rules*
      ^Basically this!

    • @sphinxrising1129
      @sphinxrising1129 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Draconian rules? You'll have that when you seek to use other people's property, duh.

    • @jv-lk7bc
      @jv-lk7bc 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sphinxrising1129 "other people's property" doesn't derive its value from *decades of fans' hard work*. If it was left up to the corporate "owners" Star Trek would never have survived to its very first syndication, nobody would ever have heard of it, and its current value would be zero. Every person making a good living from Star Trek is doing so on the backs of fans' free labor.
      Comparisons to "other people's property" prove nothing except that you're too lazy to do your homework before you open your mouth... and accomplishes nothing but losing the respect of everyone within the reach of your voice.

  • @Selica76
    @Selica76 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is an excellent work that brings new life into classic, traditional Star Trek and serves as a good follow up to the TOS episode "The Ultimate Computer"! In fact, "Ghost Ship" could have been a pilot for an all-new series that centers on the USS Excalibur and is more like the type of Star Trek that we all knew and loved and grew up with. I believe that the CBS guidelines for fan films do not apply to animated series or graphic novels so you could go in any of those directions if the guidelines prohibit you from doing any more live-action work based on this story. An animated series would not have to be a cartoon but rather have CGI in motion including representations of the characters. "Ghost Ship" can serve as a promotion for your animated series or graphic novel(s). Just something to think about. Anyway, we would like to see more Star Trek productions from this company!

  • @barryon8706
    @barryon8706 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    The story was good, the pacing very good, the action was better than average for a fan film, the FX were very good overall... Subscribed.

  • @FutureReverberations
    @FutureReverberations 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    And much lolling was done by me! Good job! :)

  • @frankmorales643
    @frankmorales643 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Well done all! Really loved the ending.

  • @neilkendrick4976
    @neilkendrick4976 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    like many others here, I did like the feel of these two 'episodes'...

  • @TheLenaweeTrekker
    @TheLenaweeTrekker 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Fantastic! I loved the line, "it's only Tuesday." Great tie in and funny as well. Well done.

  • @proto8432
    @proto8432 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    How did they get Michael J Fox to play the captain?

  • @dougc190
    @dougc190 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Again great job guys I look forward to more episodes

  • @Jogeta5
    @Jogeta5 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The characters are a bit too much sarcastic for what looks like it should be a fairly serous event.

  • @surplusgavids
    @surplusgavids 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I enjoyed this. I always wondered how they would do a zombie story in trek. 10/10

  • @jaynawilliams6060
    @jaynawilliams6060 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    So hungry for good Star Trek. Thank you thank you

  • @kevlarchicken
    @kevlarchicken 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    "get to the shuttle!" amazing

  • @spockboy
    @spockboy 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    LOL The Captain (with the ill fitting uniform) looks and sounds like a 1970's Game Show Host.

  • @elisejanise4891
    @elisejanise4891 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    6:27 'Don't disturb my friend,he's dead tired' my favorite part in the whole film besides 6:44 'J forgive me'.

    • @keefesencen5305
      @keefesencen5305 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Yah, the zombie jokes were the only good parts in the film.

    • @halmikkelson5029
      @halmikkelson5029 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Why did Jay need to forgive anyone? Do you know? I might have not been paying attention.

  • @BygPhattyPlus
    @BygPhattyPlus 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Slightly silly, almost Orville-esqe, but well done!

  • @dustygrant3043
    @dustygrant3043 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Excellent fan 🎥!!!!!!!! A nice piece of Star Trek lore!!!!!! USS Excalibur. Was an excellent choice because of it's history and the legendary sword for which it was named!!!!!! It was also cool to see Captain Archer had family to descend him!!!!

  • @GonzaloAlvarezWoodCat
    @GonzaloAlvarezWoodCat 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    _Get to the chopper! sorry, shuttle!_
    (lol)

  • @helmethead72
    @helmethead72 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This brought a tear to my eye. An over-sentimental 52 year old fan of the original Star Trek.
    Well done everyone!!

    • @victoriaarcher6187
      @victoriaarcher6187 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Appreciate it! Thanks for watching our film. 😊❤

  • @danielmarinucci9342
    @danielmarinucci9342 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Excellent 👍 this is true star trek.
    I liked the acting, the footage was really good.
    7-7-24 i can't believe it's been 5 years since I last saw this.

  • @johnsmithfakename8422
    @johnsmithfakename8422 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    The cheesy one liners made this hard to watch ... between me laughing at how corny it is.
    I liked it. Well done

  • @maxxcreese9911
    @maxxcreese9911 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Can we get some more? PLEASE?

  • @mikep1592
    @mikep1592 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I am liking your little video series. Keep up the good work. And the uniforms are nice as well.

  • @frederickhansen7108
    @frederickhansen7108 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Well we kinda been busy, classic lol

  • @michaelbell8745
    @michaelbell8745 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Tinfoil wrapped pool noodles! HA!

    • @Roboprogs
      @Roboprogs 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I thought they were paper towel rolls. But yeah, can’t go about whacking your friends on the head with metal control rods, lol

    • @hillfolkes
      @hillfolkes 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Next time try duct taped wrapping paper tubes. 😉 They make a very satisfying "thunk" when you knock someone in the head with it, too. 😄 (We used them on "Klingon Jeopardy" at a convention, when a contestant didn't phrase their answer in the form of a question.) THUNK!

  • @edlindo6005
    @edlindo6005 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I love how you tied this episode in with "The Ultimate Computer" from the Original Series. Since CBS is giving us nothing but crap with their STD, it is great that someone is delivering what the fans have been asking for.

  • @Jerkwad152
    @Jerkwad152 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    The fight was so cheesy, that it was really good. :D

    • @avalonuniverse6327
      @avalonuniverse6327  5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Jerkwad152 Thanks! That's what we were going for!

    • @Jerkwad152
      @Jerkwad152 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Awesome. You guys did great.

    • @Argonautx66
      @Argonautx66 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Agreed. Is the double handed fist punch a Kirk copyright? ;-)

    • @Roboprogs
      @Roboprogs 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Does the rolling help?
      With apologies to Galaxy Quest
      Next time the CO needs to lose his shirt, though:-)

  • @666pinkster
    @666pinkster 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Perfect, classic campy episode. Laughed my ass off a few times. Well done to cast n crew

  • @Tiercellus
    @Tiercellus 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I freaking loved this - thank you!!

  • @MrTruth-yn7pq
    @MrTruth-yn7pq 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    430 Comments... The exact crew complement of a Constitution Starship....

  • @derekrubicky4810
    @derekrubicky4810 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Sort of cheesy, rough around the edges, but it shows promise. Definitely better than Discovery. Will stay tuned for future episodes.

  • @thomascattington1660
    @thomascattington1660 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    "Oh, yeah, forgot to tell you I got attacked by a dead crew member down in auxiliary control. It just didn't seem worth mentioning..." 😱😝😆🤣🥺
    Kidding aside this really captures the good old sci-fi spirit.

  • @FirstDragon777
    @FirstDragon777 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Red door opens “ Nope.” Red door closes. lol

    • @Nesseight
      @Nesseight 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      DON'T DEAD
      OPEN INSIDE

  • @DRAGONSLAYER1220
    @DRAGONSLAYER1220 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Gotta echo the sentiment: GREAT followup storyline to an original episode.
    Yeah, kinda cheesy dialogue...humor's kinda offbeat, but what the hell, it was good enough for a couple laughs.
    Archer's granddaughter? Great idea...who'da thunk it!
    Well done overall, enjoyed it.

  • @morganb6717
    @morganb6717 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    i took the time to reevaluate what made me critical of Segment 1, something that , arguably, should have been done before i approached the Comments thereof. some of the unmentioned points i found as a negative desolved when i ceased demanding Accuracy and rather embraced Fun instead.

    • @avalonuniverse6327
      @avalonuniverse6327  5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Morgan B Thank you! We were trying to have fun, and paint our own canvas. Really glad you enjoyed it!