This is the last video i saw one day before my exam. And you know what? i had this type in the exam. I scored 7.0 in writing although i was not able to finish my task 1 essay. You literally saved me in one of my darkest hours. Tbh, 2 weeks before the exam, i didn't know how to write a map or process and i found your channel. THANK YOU FOR EVERY THING ❤!
Just wanted to let you know upon watching many videos over youtube, I found your channel to be most helpful, just wish I would have found it at least a month before my test and not just a day before. Still, it has helped to clear most of my confusion. Thank you for putting it out there!
@@LilieIELTS The main takeaway I took was to let the seed of idea grow to justify the question at point. Revised all the videos before going the test, waiting for the results!
if I follow this format will it be ok? 1. intro 2. body 1- 2 reasons or 2 problems 3. body 2- 2 possible solutions 4. conclusion i have seen this format in many other channels where this format is told to a band 9 format.
Thanks a lot Lilie. You are the best. At least I’ve learned something new from this video. Could this approach be used in problem/solution and advantage/disadvantage questions as well? I mean stating the main points immediately after paraphrasing the question. For instance, as you stated the the the two causes and solution immediately after you paraphrased the question
Huang Li, I really wish i could see these videos earlier! i think a scientific methodology will do good to the overall performance of the writing! I only get 10 days left to participate in exams. Thanks a lot again!
Hey Lilie, Please try to make a video on how to make sure that one paragraph has only one central idea. I often become confused if I'm going off topic, when adding several supporting ideas. Thanks for being so helpful!
Great suggestion! I'll try to cover it in the next video. A good way to make sure you don't add a second topic is not to use words like moreover and further. If you use them, you're probably talking about something else rather than developing the existing idea.
I also feel exactly the same way when using these transition words. But, we can hardly find a model answer without these words in it. Also, not using them may make the paragraph seem underdeveloped. Please make a video on it.
Thanks God I found your Chanel I'll sure come back to say thank you, my exam is in 2weeks time,if there other videos you think might be of help, please post them,mainwhile, I will watch every video you have already posted.
That is truly awesome. Strait to the point and with clear explanation as to the reasoning. Thank you for that. By the way, may I ask you about the software you use to create this whiteboard animated text? Thanks in advance.
Hi Lilie, your videos have helped me a lot to get a better understanding of the test. I have a question about the conclusion in this essay. Why didn't you talk about the elderly people as the solution to answer the questions? I know you metioned them in the introduction, and body paragraphs but why aren't they mentioned in the conclusion??
I did mention old people in the conclusion. Please read the last sentence of the last paragraph: www.ieltsessaybank.com/in-some-countries-more-and-more-people-are-becoming-interested/
What about these types of questions? It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to the university? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this. Ielts general training topic. Should we write 4 body paragraphs for these types of questions?
Hey Lilie, may i know how many words is acceptable in ielts task 2 if i write more than 250 words? Is 300 too much? Many thanks for your insightful lessons :)
Hi lilie can you help me I have a question that i read somewhere , i don't know what exactly and particularly the question is but something like: Environmental problems has impacted on humans and there are many efforts are taken but just a few solutions are effective.What causes this and give solutions for this? If i offer 2 causes: -unconsciousness of humans in protecting the environment -another involving problems(i mean when devising solutions for the environment protection ,it can cause some parallel problems (I'll explain and discuss after) Is this correct?Can you please give some comments for this and fix it ?(including solutions) Thank you so much😊
Hi Lilie first of all thank you for making these amazing videos, they are really helpful. I am currently working in Suzhou as a doctor and planning to take a British medical license exam however, I am stuck in writing. Do you provide one-on-one tutorial?
i have a question..pls reply😢 i saw a question it's a causes solution essay Why.. tourist..... what are the measures..... now how to i write? how many body para should have? shall i write body pera 1 one causes and body para 2 one measures body 3 another measures...pls answer😢
Hi, that depends on how many problems and solutions the question asks us to write.. You can read sample essays here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/causes-and-solutions/
Hey , all-time I think that writing task is very daunting task for me bacause I can't understand difficult wording 😒😔 . How I can improve my writing module ?😣
There in no where in the band descriptor say that you only allow to write one main idea in a paragraph. I read Simon band 9 essay, he includes 2 main topics in one paragraph too. Are you sure what you said was true?
@@LilieIELTS My result came out. L8 /R8.5/ W6/ S6.5 ..... my program reuqire a minimum 6.5 on writing. So I will keep on watching your videos about writing 😁!!
hello, could u plz make a lesson on how to solve trafic congestion with One topic sentence for each paragraph??? i can generate ideas but cant write 250 for one topic sentence about this. thnx in advance
Hi, I have a video talking about how to develop your topic sentences using detailed examples. See if it helps: th-cam.com/video/1gmPcH0a07E/w-d-xo.html
@@LilieIELTS Thank u so much, Lilie. I"ve been watxhing all of ur videos,and tomorrow I'll face my IELTS real test. Wish me luck. Ur lessons are great,and words couldn't express my gratitude. Warm regards from Indonesia.
When I watch Ur video it's pretty much easy but when I developed my own ideas I stuck what I do plz suggest me and one more thing can I apply Ur ideas but I developed it by my own words it's right or wrong plz dear sis reply me some time I feel help less
Hi, my score explainer is in my British Council account. You won't be able to access it. If you've taken the test, you should have your own score explainer in your account.
I have another idea for this type of question in Task 2. To be specific, in body paragraph 1 I will write Reason 1 + Solution 1, then I will write Reason 2 + Solution 2 in body paragraph 2. Is this good or bad? Feel free to let me know your comment.
maym plz the question you have solved is very useful but please explain it in nepali not all nepali people will watch likes and increase it will be easy for us to read and understand plz myam try to understand 🙏🙏❤️
Your video was really helpful and thanks for that🫡..why you didn’t you give examples because the question is asking for relevant examples?? I would be very grateful if mam could clear my doubts..thank you😀
What about these types of questions? It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to the university? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this. Ielts general training topic. Should we write 4 body paragraphs for these types of questions?
This is the last video i saw one day before my exam. And you know what? i had this type in the exam. I scored 7.0 in writing although i was not able to finish my task 1 essay. You literally saved me in one of my darkest hours. Tbh, 2 weeks before the exam, i didn't know how to write a map or process and i found your channel. THANK YOU FOR EVERY THING ❤!
Congratulations and thank u so much for sharing your story here to inspire others!💕
Just wanted to let you know upon watching many videos over youtube, I found your channel to be most helpful, just wish I would have found it at least a month before my test and not just a day before. Still, it has helped to clear most of my confusion. Thank you for putting it out there!
Wow, thank you! Best luck with your test!✊
@@LilieIELTS The main takeaway I took was to let the seed of idea grow to justify the question at point. Revised all the videos before going the test,
waiting for the results!
Same with only 4 days before the exam. I hope your results were good.
@@rahulvijuda5162 what's your results?
Ps: just curious !
@@faizaa4859 I got 7.5 overall with 6.5 in writing!
Please keep these videos coming, so useful
Thanks 🙏
I got good understanding on these type of essays, now..
Keep uploading such valuable content 🙂
Thank you, I will
if I follow this format will it be ok?
1. intro
2. body 1- 2 reasons or 2 problems
3. body 2- 2 possible solutions
4. conclusion
i have seen this format in many other channels where this format is told to a band 9 format.
Sorry, I've never tried your format on actual exams so I'm not sure if it works or not.
Thanks God, I found your Chanel I'll sure come back to say thank you, My exam is on August 10.
Hi Lilie. Your tutorials are great! In this question, we have not been asked about our opinion. Is it a must to provide one?
Every task 2 question asks our opinion. They are asking what do YOU think the causes and solutions are.
Thank you. I get it now.@@LilieIELTS
Thanks a lot Lilie. You are the best. At least I’ve learned something new from this video. Could this approach be used in problem/solution and advantage/disadvantage questions as well? I mean stating the main points immediately after paraphrasing the question. For instance, as you stated the the the two causes and solution immediately after you paraphrased the question
Yes you can!
@@LilieIELTS thanks ma’am
Huang Li, I really wish i could see these videos earlier! i think a scientific methodology will do good to the overall performance of the writing! I only get 10 days left to participate in exams. Thanks a lot again!
Thank you very much for your videos Lilie. I'll be having the Ielts exam in few hours wish me luck😊
Hope u did well and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.♥
What is the difference between
Problem & solution essay and Cause & effect essay?
Please explain
Can you please share the IELTS score explainer file that you used? Thank you very much, enjoying the video..
That's my score explainer. You should have your own score explainer if you've taken your test.
Hey Lilie,
Please try to make a video on how to make sure that one paragraph has only one central idea. I often become confused if I'm going off topic, when adding several supporting ideas.
Thanks for being so helpful!
Great suggestion! I'll try to cover it in the next video. A good way to make sure you don't add a second topic is not to use words like moreover and further. If you use them, you're probably talking about something else rather than developing the existing idea.
I also feel exactly the same way when using these transition words. But, we can hardly find a model answer without these words in it. Also, not using them may make the paragraph seem underdeveloped. Please make a video on it.
Thanks God I found your Chanel I'll sure come back to say thank you, my exam is in 2weeks time,if there other videos you think might be of help, please post them,mainwhile, I will watch every video you have already posted.
That is truly awesome. Strait to the point and with clear explanation as to the reasoning. Thank you for that. By the way, may I ask you about the software you use to create this whiteboard animated text? Thanks in advance.
Thanks for the kind words!😊 Doodly is the software I use.
Hi Lilie, your videos have helped me a lot to get a better understanding of the test. I have a question about the conclusion in this essay. Why didn't you talk about the elderly people as the solution to answer the questions? I know you metioned them in the introduction, and body paragraphs but why aren't they mentioned in the conclusion??
I did mention old people in the conclusion. Please read the last sentence of the last paragraph: www.ieltsessaybank.com/in-some-countries-more-and-more-people-are-becoming-interested/
@@LilieIELTS I got it now, Idk why it looked different in the other screen, Thank you!!!
What about these types of questions?
It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to the university? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.
Ielts general training topic. Should we write 4 body paragraphs for these types of questions?
I was searching answer to this question as i wrote it today in a mock test. Thanks a bunch.
glad it was helpful.😊
Mam Please Reply......
Do I need to briefly state in the introduction what I'm going to write in the body paragraphs, in all types of essays??
It really depends....
Hi Lilie do you have more sample for problem & solution essay? I cant seem to find it in your website.thank you for helping
Sorry, I've written only one essay of that type. I couldn't find more in Cambridge books.
Hey Lilie, may i know how many words is acceptable in ielts task 2 if i write more than 250 words? Is 300 too much? Many thanks for your insightful lessons :)
I think it's okay to be a little bit over 300 words. Just don't write too long.
Hi lilie can you help me
I have a question that i read somewhere , i don't know what exactly and particularly the question is but something like: Environmental problems has impacted on humans and there are many efforts are taken but just a few solutions are effective.What causes this and give solutions for this?
If i offer 2 causes:
-unconsciousness of humans in protecting the environment
-another involving problems(i mean when devising solutions for the environment protection ,it can cause some parallel problems (I'll explain and discuss after)
Is this correct?Can you please give some comments for this and fix it ?(including solutions)
Thank you so much😊
It should be written in past present or future ?
很实用的建议，想问问现在在哪个国家发展
一直都在中国大陆。
Hi Lilie first of all thank you for making these amazing videos, they are really helpful. I am currently working in Suzhou as a doctor and planning to take a British medical license exam however, I am stuck in writing. Do you provide one-on-one tutorial?
I'm very sorry I don't want to do one-on-one tutorials anymore.
Most underrated channel❤
Wooow, thanks for the kind words!😊
Can we write superstitions instead of sense of connection? What do u think?
I have been denied access to your web site
i have a question..pls reply😢
i saw a question it's a causes solution essay
Why.. tourist.....
what are the measures.....
now how to i write?
how many body para should have?
shall i write body pera 1 one causes and body para 2 one measures body 3 another measures...pls answer😢
Mam plz provide video on grammatical range and accuracy
also, should we also include only one idea per para in problem solution essays, or include two problems in one, and two solutions in another
Hi, that depends on how many problems and solutions the question asks us to write.. You can read sample essays here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/causes-and-solutions/
Please do we need to add examples in each Body paragraphs?
no, as long as you have one example in your essay, you'll be fine.
Your videos so effective thanks ma'am.
Love from Bangladesh.
So happy to hear that!😊
Thankyou so much lilie..you are very helpful
Why is the the case?
Can I write more than one reason? And use two separate paragraph.
Then you probably wouldn't be able to develop your paragraphs as fully as those who write only one paragraph.
We donot have to write examples in cause and solution questions??
Can you write two main causes in body paragraph 1? I watched a video that did that, then they also wrote two solutions in Body paragraph 2.
I wouldn't do that.
Hey ,
all-time I think that writing task is very daunting task for me bacause I can't understand difficult wording 😒😔 .
How I can improve my writing module ?😣
This is the second time, and this video was very helpful
There in no where in the band descriptor say that you only allow to write one main idea in a paragraph. I read Simon band 9 essay, he includes 2 main topics in one paragraph too. Are you sure what you said was true?
That's not a band descriptor, it's my score explainer that they attached in my test result.
@@LilieIELTS that was not what I mean. My question is why don't we allow to write 2 main topic sentences in one pharagraph?
@@nhieutien1830 How are you able to FULLY develop your ideas if you have two ideas in one single paragraph?
so helpful! From Vietnam with love :3
Appreciate the kind words!💜
Ur explanation is straightforward.❤
appreciate the kind words!
Why did I just find your channel before having the IELTS exam tomorrow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????? thansk your videos!!!
Have you finished the test already? How did it go?
@@LilieIELTS My result came out. L8 /R8.5/ W6/ S6.5 ..... my program reuqire a minimum 6.5 on writing. So I will keep on watching your videos about writing 😁!!
You'll get there! 👊👊👊
so clear videos bcz i was in dilemma
hi lilie, I have an exam on 28th of May, can you give me few classes on writing and speaking task.
Sorry, I don't sell any courses yet.
Nicely explained
Hi lilie i found your video informative hope you will make more to help us♥️
More to come!✊
hello, could u plz make a lesson on how to solve trafic congestion with One topic sentence for each paragraph??? i can generate ideas but cant write 250 for one topic sentence about this. thnx in advance
Hi, I have a video talking about how to develop your topic sentences using detailed examples. See if it helps: th-cam.com/video/1gmPcH0a07E/w-d-xo.html
thank you❤❤
Mam please solve my confusion in this essay our opinion is not asked, then why we gave opinion in this essay
Hi, of course it asks what *you* think the reasons and solutions are.
Ok mam thanks a lot😍😍
🎉
Based on the essay provided in this video, you don't have to put example in each paragraph (reasons and solution). Is it ok?
Yes, it's okay.
@@LilieIELTS Thank u so much, Lilie. I"ve been watxhing all of ur videos,and tomorrow I'll face my IELTS real test. Wish me luck. Ur lessons are great,and words couldn't express my gratitude.
Warm regards from Indonesia.
what about idp ielts , bc ielts both having same rules ?
Yes, they are the same.
Lilie I am going to take ilets exam , could u help me
We need more videos 💯💯💯💯
Hi, I wanted to confirm if it is ok to use personal pronouns in the essay
Yes, we can use "they" and "them", no problem. And we can use "I" when giving our opinion.
If they asked what are the reasons and solutions then how we should handle this. Please reply
In this case, you should provide two reasons and two solutions.
@@LilieIELTS thanku mam
i m confussed why that in paragraph 3 also is a example. please help me🤔
Hi, I believe that in the video I already explained why it is correct to use only examples to develop your idea.
Hi Lilie, I really appreciate your videos about writing. Thanks a lot
Awww, thanks for the nice remarks.
Does your website is paid?
It's free.
I wish i could easy access to your blog dear. Better make a video abiut how access it?😁
When I watch Ur video it's pretty much easy but when I developed my own ideas I stuck what I do plz suggest me and one more thing can I apply Ur ideas but I developed it by my own words it's right or wrong plz dear sis reply me some time I feel help less
Yes, developing ideas is hard. I used to listen to WSJ tech news briefing every day. It really helped to come up with details to support my ideas.
They have asked about house 'they live in'. Not historical buildings 🧐
Thank youuuuuu❤❤❤❤❤
I am from Bangladesh. Bangladesh 🇧🇩.
Best wishes you for your Better.
Hello? How many words have you written in the actual test? Can you remember?
Very close to 300 words.
thnkyu
Do you mind sharing the URL for the score explainer?
Hi, my score explainer is in my British Council account. You won't be able to access it. If you've taken the test, you should have your own score explainer in your account.
Where is task 1 🤔
Lillie you're an angel
Thanks for the sweet words.😊
if it's reasons and solutions, then how to handle this???
Give two reasons in Body Paragraph 1 and two solutions in Body Paragraph 2.
@@LilieIELTS then there would be 2 main ideas for each para, in order to get a 7 is it okay???
@@rakibhasan4328 I think it's fine for reasons and solutions. Otherwise, you'll have to write 6 paragraphs. That would be too many.
I did similar like this ❤
Hi, how many point did you get on the exam bro?
I have another idea for this type of question in Task 2.
To be specific, in body paragraph 1 I will write Reason 1 + Solution 1, then I will write Reason 2 + Solution 2 in body paragraph 2.
Is this good or bad? Feel free to let me know your comment.
🤝🤝
Lilie you are the best may you continue to shine
Such as a sweetie.😊
thank u so much for important question &answers keep it of
So nice of you😊
maym plz the question you have solved is very useful but please explain it in nepali not all nepali people will watch likes and increase it will be easy for us to read and understand plz myam try to understand 🙏🙏❤️
Easy to watch hard ro write 😅
True!😊
1 st paragraph and last paragraph point is exactly same this will surely ruin my marks
Your video was really helpful and thanks for that🫡..why you didn’t you give examples because the question is asking for relevant examples?? I would be very grateful if mam could clear my doubts..thank you😀
Hi, I did give examples. There is one in the second paragraph and another one in the third paragraph.
What about these types of questions?
It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to the university? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.
Ielts general training topic. Should we write 4 body paragraphs for these types of questions?