Hello. I want to thank you teacher You are an awesome teacher. I have got 7.0 in writing recently On exam day I was given " a double question essay" I wrote exactly how you taught. Thank you so much
Congratulations Murodjon. That’s a great score for writing. It shows how important it is to be well prepared to answer the different types of questions you might get. I know you will have put a huge amount of effort into your preparation. Now you have been rewarded. I’m so glad I was able to help you and I really appreciate you letting me know. Warmest regards, Jacky
Thank you Erna. It is good to hear that my hard work is helping you. My website (www.ieltsjacky.com) and TH-cam channel are growing every week so I hope you'll find many more useful lesson on them. I wish you all the very best with your exam preparation. Jacky
Hi Yash, thank you for your kind comment. I really appreciate it. Thank you also for telling your friends about the video. I hope you find all my other videos just as helpful. Do visit my website as well at IELTSJacky.com. It's full of free lessons. I wish you every success with your exam preparation. Best regards, Jacky
Hello Jacky, I would like to ask regarding to using personal experience in the essay, are we allowed to write about it in any task they give, or are there any exemptions? Thank you
There are no hard and fast rules. Some teachers say that you should never use a personal example. My view is, if your experience is directly related to the essay question, then that's fine. I hope this helps.
Mrs. Jackey.... I study in an institute near my city in egypt and the instructor told us that is will deduct from our score to use more than 320 words... is that right??
Hi, u are an excellent teacher. do u provide any easy correction service? plz let me know how could i get it from you. Another thing is that despite several attempts I can not buy ur writing ebook. Is there any technical prob over there?
Thank you so much for your kind comment. I'm sorry but I don't currently provide an essay correction service. Thank you also for your interest in one of my ebooks. I can't find any problem with ebook purchases. What exactly is the issue? You can contact me via the contact page on the website if you prefer to respond in private. Best regards, Jacky
Here is my recommended essay structure for double question essays. 1) Introduction • Paraphrase the question • Outline sentence - state your answer to both questions 2) Main body paragraph 1 - Answer question 1 • Topic sentence - state your answer • Explanation - develop the idea • Example - give an example 3) Main body paragraph 2 - Answer question 2 • Topic sentence - state your answer • Explanation - develop the idea • Example - give an example 4) Conclusion Summarise both questions and answers I hope this is helpful.
Yes, you need to give your opinion. In a sense, you have to give your opinion in every type of task 2 essay because any essay you write will be your view or argument about the topic in the questions. Here are the pairs of question sentences from three of the question in this lesson. Each of them is asking you to give your opinion in your answer. Questions: How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels? Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older? Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum? I hope this is helpful.
@@IELTSJacky I mean! Can i write 'in my opinion'.? Since this is question type essay, i think this is directly causes and solutions essay or isn't? Thus, this essay more a discussion essay (where we often avoid 'I' or 'Our opinion'). Anyhow! I don't know exactly. Please clarify there are some essay types where Opinion is not give. :)
@@onkar7473 You are correct. In this type of essay, you would not write 'in my opinion'. The only types of essay where I would recommend that you use this phrase or 'I believe...', is an opinion essay or a discussion essay that asks for your opinion in the question. Instead, just set out your arguments in the way I suggest in the lesson. In answer to your last point, all essay types ask for either your opinion, thoughts, beliefs or view on the topic of the question.
Hi Temur, There is no official rule about whether or not you can use personal examples in an IELTS essay. Some teachers will tell you that you should never use personal examples whilst others are less strict about this. My personal view is that it would be preferable to use a more general example. However, it is better to use a personal example, if that is all you can think of, than to have no example at all. It is often possible to turn a personal example into a general one by changing the pronouns and the tense. Compare the following two sentences to see what I mean. I found that taking up exercise gave me more energy rather than tiring me out as I had expected it to. Many people find that taking up exercise gives them more energy rather than tiring them out as they expect it to. It would be a good idea to practice doing this so that you are well prepared if the situation arises in the exam. I hope this is helpful. Best regards, Jacky
Chirag, I am not an IELTS examiner so I am not qualified to answer your question. However, I can confirm that including relevant examples will help you to gain a good score.
Hi Shubham. Yes, you need to give your opinion. In a sense, you have to give your opinion in every type of task 2 essay because any essay you write will be your view or argument about the topic in the questions.
I'm going to take the test in a few weeks and honestly I feel so nervous and worried although I have done a lot of preparation for this test. maybe that my result won't be great but I will look back and proud of myself cuz I did try hard xD
@@IELTSJacky When I watched your video, I realized that I tend to wrote essays in a messy way, thus makes me baffled to write my main idea. However, you gave me a proper way to write essays and for that reason, I can now properly express my opinions about my homework essays.
Hi! Is this double questions essay ? Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You are required to write 250 words or more for a task 2 essay. 250 words is the minimum you must write. It will affect your band score if you write fewer than 250 wordsbut not if your write more than 250 words.
Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. In what ways are computers a hindrance? What is your opinion? is this a double question essay and how do i write a conclusion? If not than what is it
I would be interested to know where you got this question from. It looks like a combination of a discussion essay and an opinion essay. I would not expect to see such a question on a genuine exam paper. I suspect that it has been changed by someone from the original that possibly appeared on a test paper. This is what I think the original question would have been. “Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance or a potential for the human?” This is a discussion essay. I hope this is helpful. Jacky
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Hello.
I want to thank you teacher
You are an awesome teacher.
I have got 7.0 in writing recently
On exam day I was given " a double question essay" I wrote exactly how you taught.
Thank you so much
Congratulations Murodjon. That’s a great score for writing. It shows how important it is to be well prepared to answer the different types of questions you might get. I know you will have put a huge amount of effort into your preparation. Now you have been rewarded. I’m so glad I was able to help you and I really appreciate you letting me know.
Warmest regards,
Jacky
Patient like a preschool teacher informed like a university professor. Thanks Jacky.
Thank you for your kind words, Behzad. Glad to be able to help.
I love you you are a smart teacher
Thank you very much for your hard work. You are indeed an amazing teacher!
Thank you Erna. It is good to hear that my hard work is helping you. My website (www.ieltsjacky.com) and TH-cam channel are growing every week so I hope you'll find many more useful lesson on them. I wish you all the very best with your exam preparation. Jacky
Thank you, Jacky! I never thought I could get 6+ in writing but your videos helped me to get 6.5 in my exam.
That's a great result, Vaddadi. Congratulations! Glad to be able to help.
You arw very good teacher, i wish your channel grow as soon as possible, I already suggest this video to my friends.
Hi Yash, thank you for your kind comment. I really appreciate it. Thank you also for telling your friends about the video.
I hope you find all my other videos just as helpful. Do visit my website as well at IELTSJacky.com. It's full of free lessons.
I wish you every success with your exam preparation.
Best regards, Jacky
You are a wonderful teacher.
My biggest fear was destroyed by you.
My dream for you is to be prosperous and wealthy and successful.
You Deserve more views Jacky.
Thank you.
Mam Jacky Thanks for your super startegy.I got twice 7 bands with least preparation..
Very comprehensive. Thank you so much for giving the idea. Excellent!
Glad it was helpful!
comprehensive meaning bro
Im taking my first ielts exam soon to apply for university and your videos were really helpful thanks ❤❤❤
It was helpful for no only the direct question essay but for other essays as well!
I'm glad you found this video helpful. Thanks for commenting.
You are a perfect teacher. That was what i really needed... AMAZING💕
Thank you. I'm delighted to be able to help.
I just done my test today, this was the essay given to me, Thank you soooo much ❤ i would definitely recommend your videos to other ❤
I wish I get this one tooo😢
@@sanayusufy I hope you will get a high mark on your test ❤
Really having no words. That is actually I needed
Great to hear that.
Thanks Jacky, this is really handy.
Thank you Jacky your breif and understandable path for writing task 2.
Hi Jacky! May I know what is the band score for this particular essay? Btw, love your videos!
This essay should get a band 8.5 or 9.
@@IELTSJacky But your essay goes beyond 300 words, won't it reduce your scoring?
This is a good one Jacky.We appreciate
Glad you like it.
Hello Jacky, I would like to ask regarding to using personal experience in the essay, are we allowed to write about it in any task they give, or are there any exemptions? Thank you
There are no hard and fast rules. Some teachers say that you should never use a personal example. My view is, if your experience is directly related to the essay question, then that's fine. I hope this helps.
your video is so much helpful for learning ielts writing task 2.
Glad to hear that!
Mrs. Jackey.... I study in an institute near my city in egypt and the instructor told us that is will deduct from our score to use more than 320 words... is that right??
Thank you😊for useful lesson
I am looking forward to your next lesson
Hello. Thank u for such a detailed explanation.
Thank you Ma.. had 6.5 in writing 🎉
Thank you 😊
Outstanding essay. Well done!
Thank you.
Thank you the explanation is helpful
You are very welcome.
Hi, u are an excellent teacher. do u provide any easy correction service? plz let me know how could i get it from you. Another thing is that despite several attempts I can not buy ur writing ebook. Is there any technical prob over there?
Thank you so much for your kind comment. I'm sorry but I don't currently provide an essay correction service.
Thank you also for your interest in one of my ebooks. I can't find any problem with ebook purchases. What exactly is the issue? You can contact me via the contact page on the website if you prefer to respond in private. Best regards, Jacky
Thanks a bunch for this video
What are these double questions considered? Opinion? Discussion or even situation?? Thxx rushing need a response 😩
Sorry, I don't understand what you're asking me.
Thanks a million ❤🍃that was helpful
You’re welcome 😊
Nicely done!🎉
Wow am pleased ! I have the exams soon !
I'm glad the video has helped you Sheila. Good luck with your exam! Jacky
How we can create the topic sentence on for the2 examples? Do we summarize the questions or what?
Here is my recommended essay structure for double question essays.
1) Introduction
• Paraphrase the question
• Outline sentence - state your answer to both questions
2) Main body paragraph 1 - Answer question 1
• Topic sentence - state your answer
• Explanation - develop the idea
• Example - give an example
3) Main body paragraph 2 - Answer question 2
• Topic sentence - state your answer
• Explanation - develop the idea
• Example - give an example
4) Conclusion Summarise both questions and answers
I hope this is helpful.
Brilliant.
Hi
Sorry to bother
Can we use statics such as percentage or name of famous articles or magazines in our examples?
Thanks for the video
You're very welcome.
Good job please make more videos on it
Hello to Jacky
great videos mam thank you mam
Most welcome 😊
Very nice essay attempt...thanx Jacky...kindly keep making videos like this...regards varun
Thank you for commenting Varun. I'm glad the video has helped you. There are lots more video lessons coming up.
Do we need to give our opinion in this type of essay?
Yes, you need to give your opinion. In a sense, you have to give your opinion in every type of task 2 essay because any essay you write will be your view or argument about the topic in the questions.
Here are the pairs of question sentences from three of the question in this lesson. Each of them is asking you to give your opinion in your answer.
Questions:
How can we conserve these resources?
What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?
Is this a good way to raise children?
What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles?
Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?
I hope this is helpful.
@@IELTSJacky I mean! Can i write 'in my opinion'.? Since this is question type essay, i think this is directly causes and solutions essay or isn't? Thus, this essay more a discussion essay (where we often avoid 'I' or 'Our opinion'). Anyhow! I don't know exactly. Please clarify there are some essay types where Opinion is not give. :)
@@onkar7473 You are correct. In this type of essay, you would not write 'in my opinion'. The only types of essay where I would recommend that you use this phrase or 'I believe...', is an opinion essay or a discussion essay that asks for your opinion in the question. Instead, just set out your arguments in the way I suggest in the lesson.
In answer to your last point, all essay types ask for either your opinion, thoughts, beliefs or view on the topic of the question.
Thank you Jacky
You are very welcome.
Thank you very much.
You are welcome!
Brilliant idea
Glad you've found the lesson helpful.
Thank you Jacky❤
Incredible jacky..thnx alot My Dear😀😀
Most welcome. 😊
Thank you Jacky..
You are most welcome, Chandu.
Thank You...
Can we write personal exaple in essays?🤔🤔
Hi Temur,
There is no official rule about whether or not you can use personal examples in an IELTS essay. Some teachers will tell you that you should never use personal examples whilst others are less strict about this.
My personal view is that it would be preferable to use a more general example. However, it is better to use a personal example, if that is all you can think of, than to have no example at all.
It is often possible to turn a personal example into a general one by changing the pronouns and the tense. Compare the following two sentences to see what I mean.
I found that taking up exercise gave me more energy rather than tiring me out as I had expected it to.
Many people find that taking up exercise gives them more energy rather than tiring them out as they expect it to.
It would be a good idea to practice doing this so that you are well prepared if the situation arises in the exam.
I hope this is helpful.
Best regards,
Jacky
Thanks jacky
What if we miss the examples, how much bands will be deducted overall ?
Chirag, I am not an IELTS examiner so I am not qualified to answer your question. However, I can confirm that including relevant examples will help you to gain a good score.
@@IELTSJacky no worries, thank you 👍
excellent mam
Glad it was helpful.
Hello mam opinion is needed or not In this essay
Hi Shubham. Yes, you need to give your opinion. In a sense, you have to give your opinion in every type of task 2 essay because any essay you write will be your view or argument about the topic in the questions.
Are linking words like however, moreover e.t.c of no importance in task 2 essay writing
I'm going to take the test in a few weeks and honestly I feel so nervous and worried although I have done a lot of preparation for this test. maybe that my result won't be great but I will look back and proud of myself cuz I did try hard xD
Marvelous
Glad you found it helpful.
Jackie has saved all the students around the world from the writing exams
I have a plan big plan!!!!!!
Thank you ma'am.
Most welcome 😊
@@IELTSJacky When I watched your video, I realized that I tend to wrote essays in a messy way, thus makes me baffled to write my main idea. However, you gave me a proper way to write essays and for that reason, I can now properly express my opinions about my homework essays.
I'm so pleased to hear this, Hiro.
Thank you,i found your video maam😍
Glad it was helpful!
You are amazing 🥰🥰
Thank you! I'm glad you're finding my videos helpful.
14:18 I heard we shouldn't give personal examples?
Hi! Is this double questions essay ?
Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught,
many are at risk of dying out.
In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if
so, how?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
this is a give your opinion essay not a double question
Thank you so much teacher, in 20 minutes I learnt so many things, I think now I have no difficulty in this type of question. 😊😊😊 you are great👍👍👍
Thank you so much for your kind comment Murodjon. I'm delighted to be abe to help.
this essay exceeds 290 words which is a limit to write task -2 ... by exceeding the word limit it could affect the bands ?
You are required to write 250 words or more for a task 2 essay. 250 words is the minimum you must write. It will affect your band score if you write fewer than 250 wordsbut not if your write more than 250 words.
Oh really nice
Thank you.
Amazing and informative video mam...thank you for this
My pleasure 😊
So, is this is a band 9 essay?
I would expect this essay to achieve band 9.
Please can anyone give me ideas for Question 2
Sad I'm discovering this channel very late
Can controlling population conserve fossil fuel? as less population means less fuel consumption and it will last long
Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them.
In what ways are computers a hindrance?
What is your opinion? is this a double question essay and how do i write a conclusion? If not than what is it
I would be interested to know where you got this question from. It looks like a combination of a discussion essay and an opinion essay. I would not expect to see such a question on a genuine exam paper. I suspect that it has been changed by someone from the original that possibly appeared on a test paper. This is what I think the original question would have been.
“Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance or a potential for the human?”
This is a discussion essay.
I hope this is helpful.
Jacky
@@IELTSJacky Thank you so much I was so confused ❤❤
You are very welcome.
100/100
I think it is really hard to write...for this topic
Follow my lessons, keep practicing and it will get easier.
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11:31 intro
14:42 body 1
16:12 body 2
18:22 conclusion
I am looking forward to your next lesson
Thank you ♥️