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I have to admit that this is a feasible concept and you're a good creator, Sir. Even though I do feel Hercule is a fake and glory hog. Except that in the main canon Hercule at least did use enough of his fame and money to still provide for his daughter and didn't actually try to attack or demean Gohan and steal his chance of being happy with Videl. As well as being a good grandfather to Pan. Plus, this "Evil" Hercule just works. Especially with Babidi getting involved.
Even if Gohan doesn't want to erase Earth's memories of him for allegedly being responsible of King Hercule's death, it won't stop Chi-Chi to go get Bulma's Dragon Radar, find the Dragon Balls and wish Shenron to do that by herself.
@@jarvaruscarter Even if Gohan and Vegeta never say anything, she's logically gonna put two and two together at some point, especially after she sees the news. She's not the smartest woman on the planet for nothing.
“You are the prince of a cemetery”- A Righteously Angry Golden Haired Fighter Seriously though MasakoX, your storytelling is a GIFT: if you ever started Crafting your own original stories, the skies the limit. Also if you wanted to make a sequel series or "Revelation F"-type story, it would be well-received
I have seen the whole of this story before. Now the ending is harsh because we have the Golden haired phantom, a warrior that no longer wishes to fight, and the rest of the Dragon Team just scattered to the wind. If you wanted to, you could probably continue this as a different story. If you do make a sequel and have the Z Fighters comeback and also clear their name. Maybe some of Babidi's henchmen gather the Dragon Balls to bring back the bad guys for the redemption of The Dragon Teams.
Thank you MasakoX but hey maybe you can make a sequel one day. If you do make a sequel Please have the Z Fighters comeback and also clear their name. Maybe some of Babidi's henchmen gather the Dragon Balls to bring back the bad guys for the redemption of The Dragon Team and expose the bad guys and have Goku come back as he is needed.
This "what if..." is criminally under-viewed , I've listened to a number of these stories, and this is the second time listening to this in full, and it's one of the best, in tone, writing and of course, the superb delivery by MasakoX. Showing the potential of a story, with how a small change in character can cause drastic consequences
Turned into a 60’s era WW2 story near the end, honestly I wouldn’t mind seeing an adaptation of this story. It’s incredibly unique in comparison to almost any other “What If” and while it had a bittersweet ending, we don’t get many of those nowadays so I think it works. Besides as we already know, heaven isn’t so bad in the Dragon world, who knows if he would go to heaven though considering everything he did. I mean even Vegeta in the Buu arc didn’t go to heaven, and this is after all the good he did, relatively good anyway.
Hercule isn't a bad person and you could argue babidi made things worse. Would be cool if Goku would be willing to give Herc a good word and for him to be given a chance
*seeing the ghost of his deceased wife Miguel* Hercule: "Is it over?" Miguel: "Yes. No king rules forever, my love." Hercule: "I see only darkness before me."
Still feel this story is prime for a Super Sequel or a spinout like Revelation F. A world where the Z fighters are separated but fighting for a unified goal to bring things back to normal. A world where Vegeta fights not out of pride or fun, but out of duty and penance. A world where Gohan is isolated from his friends and the other Z fighters fight to bring him back. Perfect material for a story, especially with the Tensions between the Godly conflicts of Super clashing with the Heavy Earthly conflict here. Imagine after the invasion of Frieza and Morro, Red Pharmaceuticals is galvanized to bring back the Red Ribbon Army, seeing that Earth isn't safe against these Galactic Threats...and some people agree with them recalling the Earth under Mr.Satan. Of what if Zamasu comes to the Present Timeline to eradicate humanity due to the stain on existence that Mr.Satan and his legacy is, bringing Videl into the conflict as Zamasu would judge her for the sins of her father.
Overall I think this story is amazing and I love the different use of Hercule and a more social interpretation of evil within the DB universe, my only real complaint is that the Majin Vegeta part felt a bit forced, but apart from that I love this What If Story!!!!
I mean, it was forced here as it was the original series. Idk, Vegeta in both ocassions just happened to have the worst state of mind at the worst time.
@@robertharrison2032 clearly Mr satan survives that he was just so confused that the earth blew up that he sat there in space and then it returned if the z fighters warned him frieza was coming he would have went and dealt with himself and beerus would not have shown up cause he's too afraid of the legendary Mr satan
If there was a sequel to this I could actually see a bit of a time skip, where it is revealed that Vegeta while keeping his promise to never fight again has become the sole teacher to Trunks and Goten. Working very hard not just to teach them how to fight themselves and get stronger… but to be better than himself, maybe even trying to temper Trunks ego in fear that he might grow up to do stupid things like he did.
Maybe you could do: What if Goku was a bad guy at the start and Vegeta was a good guy at the start? Essentially, reversing their positions at the start of the story.
@No1AlastorSimp I think he means Goku still goes to Earth and Vegeta still stays firmly in Frieza's rule, but Vegeta has a pure heart and Goku is a violent egomaniac
@@HeyIsaiddontlookwtfwhatiswrong I didn't mean either in particular. As long as it has the basic premise that Vegeta is good and Goku is evil at the start of the story, I'm fine with it
That was a really really heavy one. Well done as always however. Also... what if nothing was changed in Dragon Ball? A good April Fool's what if, just a straight retelling of the series, nothing different
Evil Hercule and King Hercule are the same character, the story itself just had its name changed for the full story release. Though I feel like Z-Fighter Hercule would utterly stomp King Hercule due to the latter not having trained as hard as the former, especially due to his kingly duties.
Buddy, you are a GREAT narrator. I shut my eyes and listened to this. Well done, man. Thanks for a good mr Satan story. I still hope to find a story of him being in denial of everyones insane power..(magic tricks and such)
Depending on if Gohan stays on earth or the rest of the z fighters. Red ribbon could be government funded leading to twelve gammas and a potential cell max
I honestly didn't watch this theory when it first came out, it seemed too silly, "Mr.Satan being bad, HIM!?". but GOD MASAKO THAT ENDING. please give us a continuation. Vegeta losing his Pride?!, how the hell is Super going to work!? We need this Dude
Kinda curious depending on how this continues we'd have red ribbon being supplied by the world government. So instead of two gammas we may have twelve. And what do you do if no one on the planet wants you ? Gohan and Z fighters may just be living in space traveling.
Oh man. 1: Since Goku's not here, if he watches the whole thing would he allowed to visit earth someday? 2: What does Bulma see in Vegeta before Trunks born? Or never mind? 3: How would the Z-Fighters/Dragon Team carry on? 4: Now that Mr Satan is gone, Android 18 is going to find something else to get money, unless Bulma can help? I love this what if idea if he goes in this direction. I stick with what if Mr Satan and Videl become Z-Fighters better. 😎😎😎
Speaking of the Ox King...he’s a literal King..doesn’t Roshi owe him some money for accidentally destroying his castle and vast wealth with a kamehameha? He should be rich again at this point.
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Will Vegeta actually never fight again
Why did you change the title of the what if?
I have to admit that this is a feasible concept and you're a good creator, Sir. Even though I do feel Hercule is a fake and glory hog. Except that in the main canon Hercule at least did use enough of his fame and money to still provide for his daughter and didn't actually try to attack or demean Gohan and steal his chance of being happy with Videl. As well as being a good grandfather to Pan. Plus, this "Evil" Hercule just works. Especially with Babidi getting involved.
When make more dragon ball r&r series
Could you make another part or a different story of this it was so cool
Bro when Gohan said “You are a Prince of a *Cemetery!”* That line alone gave me chills like Well done Masako!
The image of Vegeta yelling at the TV with a beer is just too funny.
I can just imagine him getting upset his sports team lost.
"Those spineless weakling MISERABLE FOOOOOLS!!!!"
And the image of Gohan destroying vegeta feels familiar
"YOU ARE A PRINCE OF A CEMETERY!!!!" That's the most badass line I've ever heard. Damn.
Even if Gohan doesn't want to erase Earth's memories of him for allegedly being responsible of King Hercule's death, it won't stop Chi-Chi to go get Bulma's Dragon Radar, find the Dragon Balls and wish Shenron to do that by herself.
Chi Chi: “I DON’T CARE ABOUT YOUR PSYCHOLOGICAL DAMAGE GOHAN!!! YOU STILL NEED TO PURSUE YOUR SCHOLARLY STUDIES!!!”
Gohan No Way Home
And there is *NO* way Bulma will just let Vegeta off the hook.
@@SabeNo-rh7mb Yea......... If Bulma knew
@@jarvaruscarter Even if Gohan and Vegeta never say anything, she's logically gonna put two and two together at some point, especially after she sees the news. She's not the smartest woman on the planet for nothing.
“You are the prince of a cemetery”- A Righteously Angry Golden Haired Fighter
Seriously though MasakoX, your storytelling is a GIFT: if you ever started Crafting your own original stories, the skies the limit.
Also if you wanted to make a sequel series or "Revelation F"-type story, it would be well-received
That's our plan for the future, thank you!
@@MasakoX I'd love some podcast with Gohan, videl, and piccolo as something like the golden warriors
Absolutely agreed!
@@MasakoX I'm looking forward to that.
@@MasakoX I loved the mega mins reference and the end 😂🤣😂
I have seen the whole of this story before. Now the ending is harsh because we have the Golden haired phantom, a warrior that no longer wishes to fight, and the rest of the Dragon Team just scattered to the wind. If you wanted to, you could probably continue this as a different story.
If you do make a sequel and have the Z Fighters comeback and also clear their name. Maybe some of Babidi's henchmen gather the Dragon Balls to bring back the bad guys for the redemption of The Dragon Teams.
Thank you MasakoX but hey maybe you can make a sequel one day. If you do make a sequel Please have the Z Fighters comeback and also clear their name. Maybe some of Babidi's henchmen gather the Dragon Balls to bring back the bad guys for the redemption of The Dragon Team and expose the bad guys and have Goku come back as he is needed.
In my head, revelation f would be the next part of the story and in the aftermath, Magenta and the Neo red ribbon army take control.
Ahh Yes The One Time Hercule Goes To The Dark Side
And of course, when the heart turns to the dark side, EVERYONE gets screwed over.
This "what if..." is criminally under-viewed , I've listened to a number of these stories, and this is the second time listening to this in full, and it's one of the best, in tone, writing and of course, the superb delivery by MasakoX.
Showing the potential of a story, with how a small change in character can cause drastic consequences
"You are the princeof a cemetery"
That is probably the biggest roast Vegeta will ever get
“His silent protest was drowned out by thunderous applause” you’re an artist with your scripts.
"YOU'RE THE PRINCE OF A CEMETERY!" Savage
Turned into a 60’s era WW2 story near the end, honestly I wouldn’t mind seeing an adaptation of this story. It’s incredibly unique in comparison to almost any other “What If” and while it had a bittersweet ending, we don’t get many of those nowadays so I think it works. Besides as we already know, heaven isn’t so bad in the Dragon world, who knows if he would go to heaven though considering everything he did. I mean even Vegeta in the Buu arc didn’t go to heaven, and this is after all the good he did, relatively good anyway.
Ahh he'd end up in HFIL
Hercule isn't a bad person and you could argue babidi made things worse. Would be cool if Goku would be willing to give Herc a good word and for him to be given a chance
As always, this is a real thinker.
Update: *THE FEELS IN THE FINALE MASAKO WHY-*
Wow Masako, you made me really emotional during this What If. You truly are a master at story telling. Have a great day, sir.
Such a tragic villain story, masako gives us the super saiyan feels😭
*seeing the ghost of his deceased wife Miguel*
Hercule: "Is it over?"
Miguel: "Yes. No king rules forever, my love."
Hercule: "I see only darkness before me."
Miguel is a mans name.
@@kyotaiken stellar work
@@kyotaiken And yet Masako still used it as Hercule's wife's name.
That's her name. Though it's Michelle in the English dub
Still feel this story is prime for a Super Sequel or a spinout like Revelation F.
A world where the Z fighters are separated but fighting for a unified goal to bring things back to normal.
A world where Vegeta fights not out of pride or fun, but out of duty and penance.
A world where Gohan is isolated from his friends and the other Z fighters fight to bring him back.
Perfect material for a story, especially with the Tensions between the Godly conflicts of Super clashing with the Heavy Earthly conflict here.
Imagine after the invasion of Frieza and Morro, Red Pharmaceuticals is galvanized to bring back the Red Ribbon Army, seeing that Earth isn't safe against these Galactic Threats...and some people agree with them recalling the Earth under Mr.Satan.
Of what if Zamasu comes to the Present Timeline to eradicate humanity due to the stain on existence that Mr.Satan and his legacy is, bringing Videl into the conflict as Zamasu would judge her for the sins of her father.
"Nobody wins."
YEP, THAT ABOUT SUMS IT UP. NO FUN MARTIAL ARTS SPACE OPERA HERE, JUST D E P R E S S I O N.
"You are a prince of a cemetery!""
I'm saving that quote,
also
this what if, the darkest what if, even rivaling the Trunks goes to the DB timeline.
But we do at least leave one ray of hope in there...somewhere.
You edited and lost the heart
That is an amazing line
@@rexlumontad5644 We all need to edit at some point! *Stop Your Criticism!* Or else I'll accuse you of being a Frieza supporter!
@@SabeNo-rh7mb We all love Frieza day
Overall I think this story is amazing and I love the different use of Hercule and a more social interpretation of evil within the DB universe, my only real complaint is that the Majin Vegeta part felt a bit forced, but apart from that I love this What If Story!!!!
I mean, it was forced here as it was the original series.
Idk, Vegeta in both ocassions just happened to have the worst state of mind at the worst time.
It was a bit rushed but yeah
I would like a story that continues after this because things can play very differently than the normally would from this point on.
Masako you should write movies that was a damn good story.
The Twists and Turns were exiting.
Videl: Did you do it?
Mr. Satan: Yes.
Videl: And what did it cost?
Mr. Satan: Everything.
While not the best arc, Frieza blew up earth in his revival arc, which means Hercule has been offed in the series, just not individually
It was reversed so technically it never happened
@@kaijionline technically I suppose, they did still have that few seconds where the strongest man alive ceased to exist tho
@@robertharrison2032 clearly Mr satan survives that he was just so confused that the earth blew up that he sat there in space and then it returned if the z fighters warned him frieza was coming he would have went and dealt with himself and beerus would not have shown up cause he's too afraid of the legendary Mr satan
@@RocketWizard2075 ah yes of course my apologies, I should have never lost faith in the mighty warrior
I wanna see a “What If” centered around the story with no major retcons.
What if Dragon Ball didn’t Retcon?
You’d only really start retconning by Z
If there was a sequel to this I could actually see a bit of a time skip, where it is revealed that Vegeta while keeping his promise to never fight again has become the sole teacher to Trunks and Goten.
Working very hard not just to teach them how to fight themselves and get stronger… but to be better than himself, maybe even trying to temper Trunks ego in fear that he might grow up to do stupid things like he did.
Maybe you could do:
What if Goku was a bad guy at the start and Vegeta was a good guy at the start? Essentially, reversing their positions at the start of the story.
There is a fan manga that did that exact thing, it's called Dragon Ball Sai I believe. Though I have no idea if it's finished by now 🤔
Now that, I would be intrigued by 🤔☺️
@No1AlastorSimp I think he means Goku still goes to Earth and Vegeta still stays firmly in Frieza's rule, but Vegeta has a pure heart and Goku is a violent egomaniac
@@HeyIsaiddontlookwtfwhatiswrong I didn't mean either in particular. As long as it has the basic premise that Vegeta is good and Goku is evil at the start of the story, I'm fine with it
That was a really really heavy one. Well done as always however.
Also... what if nothing was changed in Dragon Ball? A good April Fool's what if, just a straight retelling of the series, nothing different
That Titan quote from Megamind was beautifully done sir. Bravo! I loved it!
That ending almost had me in tears, this was amazing.
"You are the Prince of a cemetary!" Goddamn that line is cold!
What if the 3 Hercules meet from
What if Hercule became Evil
What if Hercule Train like Goku
What if Hercule was King
That would be amazing
Evil Hercule and King Hercule are the same character, the story itself just had its name changed for the full story release. Though I feel like Z-Fighter Hercule would utterly stomp King Hercule due to the latter not having trained as hard as the former, especially due to his kingly duties.
"You are the prince of a cemetary"
Vegeta just took a verbal Burning Kamehameha
Dang, this what if has gotta be one of my favorite one out of them all.
Buddy, you are a GREAT narrator. I shut my eyes and listened to this.
Well done, man. Thanks for a good mr Satan story. I still hope to find a story of him being in denial of everyones insane power..(magic tricks and such)
What if Gohan turned Evil?
Or What if Chi Chi was evil? She could cause as much damage as, if not more, than Evil Mr Satan
Basically what if Nappa turned good
What if king cold was good because the ripple affect would be great
"You are the prince of a cemetery"
DAAAAAAAMN Gohan
would love to see how this timeline would progress with such a drastic change.
Depending on if Gohan stays on earth or the rest of the z fighters. Red ribbon could be government funded leading to twelve gammas and a potential cell max
Long Live The Champ
F the champ
This is one of your best. Great work Masako!
Gosh I can't belive this was 2 years ago ........ I'm not ready for adulthood
Power doesn't actually corrupt absolutely.
It only reveals the true nature of the wielder.
this was beautiful i love storys that dont have happy endings but yet come out to not be sad good job
I have a awesome what if (what if team 4 star returns for one final swing and makes the buu saga) 😄
imagine goku coming back for one day after all this and being like "i....made a mistake."
I'm imagining Goku going to look for gohan and then finding him with Piccolo and Videl in some remote shack in the woods
0:01
Yep...this is where the fun begins
Gosh your concepts are so goofy. I love it.
I finally get to watch this almost a year later!!!
Gohan should just move to Namek and start a family there.
This was such a fantastic what if
I'd love a sequel to this world.
Imagine Goku watching all this going down up in heaven 💀
Goku:...Maybe i should've come back after all?
Goku: "King Kai, what can we do to fix this?"
Great story and delivery . Thanks for your hard work it’s very entertaining 😊
At the end, Gohan truly completed his journey into becoming Spiderman
Idk how he managed to put POLITICS in DRAGON BALL and make it interesting
Politics can be very interesting when you take the monstrously powerful beings into account.
what if Tights found Goku instead of her younger sister Bulma
The story of Boxar is still ongoing (with more twists and changes than usual in the story). I really wanna see him finish that one first.
I think this is better than the actual Majin Buu saga.
The Great Saiyaman No Way Home
23:35 I was waiting for king yenma lmao
23:30 I thought you were going to show King Yamma.😂
@masakok thank you for the great video I hope you have a great day
Honestly, I want to see more of this world.
*33:24* I imagine it like superman Luise flight but more dragon ball like
This is another level of story telling.
masako you made me cry for real real, aaaaw :C
I honestly didn't watch this theory when it first came out, it seemed too silly, "Mr.Satan being bad, HIM!?". but GOD MASAKO THAT ENDING. please give us a continuation. Vegeta losing his Pride?!, how the hell is Super going to work!? We need this Dude
Is this a retelling of what is Satan turned evil. I'll rewatch but ready hope this goes different somewhere
When comedy turns to tragedy
Been watching Cautious Hero, have you?
Kinda curious depending on how this continues we'd have red ribbon being supplied by the world government.
So instead of two gammas we may have twelve. And what do you do if no one on the planet wants you ? Gohan and Z fighters may just be living in space traveling.
We need more to this story!
This potato is pulling the strings!
Oh man.
1: Since Goku's not here, if he watches the whole thing would he allowed to visit earth someday?
2: What does Bulma see in Vegeta before Trunks born? Or never mind?
3: How would the Z-Fighters/Dragon Team carry on?
4: Now that Mr Satan is gone, Android 18 is going to find something else to get money, unless Bulma can help?
I love this what if idea if he goes in this direction. I stick with what if Mr Satan and Videl become Z-Fighters better. 😎😎😎
So hercule becomes lex Luther…..nice
That ending made me cry so damn much 😭😭
Weirdly I imagined Gohan and videl's relationship be like batman Catwoman relationship but more lightly
Nice job
i need the finale of this animated as soon as possible
This what if was sad what a great what if
In this scenario hercule was acting like titan from megamind?
I just realised the pregnant lady was most likely Chi-Chi
Saiyaman: No Way Home
Why does the algorithm dislike "Mark"?
0:15 Yeah true, the algorithm really does hate Marks.
Like that Gohan don't mind wipe millions of people to solve his personal problems. I wouldn't mind if this story continues into the dB super arc.
i expected a lot more "hail satan" jokes
Speaking of the Ox King...he’s a literal King..doesn’t Roshi owe him some money for accidentally destroying his castle and vast wealth with a kamehameha? He should be rich again at this point.
I love the idea that the scary, edgy anti-heroes main method of interacting with his wife in private is playful banter. That is adorable.
0:22 what's wrong with the name Mark?
48:44 oh so he knows
I do wanna see a continuation were we see videl and gohan after all of this
39:03 😫😫😫
I was unaware that "Mark" was one of youtubes banned words.
Hoe dare you make me cry for Mr Satan
This was really sad
WHY IS THIS SO SAD 😢
Hercule creates America
26:45 Oops.
Dark.
Only with these What Ifs can we get a political DBZ story 😂