The Thing I would Like to End

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  • @keepmewierd
    @keepmewierd 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3159

    "I'm not a high stress person, I'm really not," - Hank Green, perennial stress icon

    • @sophieAutumnMay
      @sophieAutumnMay 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      +

    • @assassinblackop
      @assassinblackop 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      +

    • @lostleviathan2352
      @lostleviathan2352 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      +

    • @lostleviathan2352
      @lostleviathan2352 5 ปีที่แล้ว +210

      The only reason Hank thinks that's the case is because his brother is John

    • @cmagee79
      @cmagee79 5 ปีที่แล้ว +66

      I had to immediately stop and make sure someone had made this observation. A Hank Green without stress would be a wholly different person.

  • @neverthelessthesun1428
    @neverthelessthesun1428 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3576

    John Green the veteran author correcting his brother’s lack of marketability in a four-minute TH-cam video > any other sibling dynamic

  • @NateandNoahTryLife
    @NateandNoahTryLife 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2316

    getting your novel critiqued by your high school valedictorian seems like a stressful nightmare

    • @rizahawkeyepierce1380
      @rizahawkeyepierce1380 5 ปีที่แล้ว +91

      Especially for me, because I had a crush on my class's valedictorian, and displayed embarrassingly stalkerish behaviour towards him my senior year (before he and my best friend started dating the summer after we graduated). Ah, high school.

    • @ellamcdonald-lee2186
      @ellamcdonald-lee2186 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      +

    • @AlthenaLuna
      @AlthenaLuna 5 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      That would be an interesting dynamic for me. I was the valedictorian of my (very small) class in high school *and* I happen to have an MPS in publishing...not that I'm working in the field.

    • @Shrooblord
      @Shrooblord 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@rizahawkeyepierce1380 Amen to that xDD

    • @KyPaMac
      @KyPaMac 5 ปีที่แล้ว +23

      I'm not overwhelmingly certain that my high school valedictorian was literate (the position was chosen by student vote), so if it turned out that he was reading my manuscript and making suggestions, I'd honestly just be proud of the guy for coming so far.

  • @tmntallthewaydw
    @tmntallthewaydw 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1316

    The ending of this video is the best thing ever
    John has some good sass

    • @simonmay1671
      @simonmay1671 5 ปีที่แล้ว +57

      Reading this as 'John has some good ass' is intensely confusing
      Especially as John's legs weren't even in this video...

    • @eliontheinternet3298
      @eliontheinternet3298 5 ปีที่แล้ว +52

      I have never seen the “frustrated older sibling” vibe more accurately portrayed in a single sentence than the ending of this video.

    • @tmntallthewaydw
      @tmntallthewaydw 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@eliontheinternet3298 Facts

    • @charliespinoza1966
      @charliespinoza1966 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      +

    • @ivytarablair
      @ivytarablair 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      about CRIED laughing :D

  • @TBomb15
    @TBomb15 5 ปีที่แล้ว +353

    "John I will see you now because we're on tour together"
    John stares disapprovingly at Hank.

  • @KyoyaKaoruCiel
    @KyoyaKaoruCiel 5 ปีที่แล้ว +403

    That's my favorite "surprise we are actually together" bit they have ever done

    • @annahappen7036
      @annahappen7036 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thanks for the spoiler genius

    • @lostleviathan2352
      @lostleviathan2352 5 ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @ed_vilon668
      @ed_vilon668 5 ปีที่แล้ว +22

      @@annahappen7036 Obligatory "don't read the comments before you finish the video" comment.

    • @maryforcier6021
      @maryforcier6021 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      +

    • @r.darling4135
      @r.darling4135 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      It’s a reunion video!

  • @NateandNoahTryLife
    @NateandNoahTryLife 5 ปีที่แล้ว +740

    “Here’s what book writing looks like... First you write a book.”

    • @evalynn1863
      @evalynn1863 5 ปีที่แล้ว +23

      I mean, can't argue with that statement xD

    • @MarkThePage
      @MarkThePage 5 ปีที่แล้ว +65

      Then you draw the rest of the owl.

    • @ellamcdonald-lee2186
      @ellamcdonald-lee2186 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      +

    • @optiblueulb
      @optiblueulb 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      In many ways, that really is the easy part of writing a book.

    • @Azzarinne
      @Azzarinne 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's a good start. XD

  • @chasethefireaway3246
    @chasethefireaway3246 5 ปีที่แล้ว +154

    “I want to be running this company when I die”- Hank Green

  • @zcmini000
    @zcmini000 5 ปีที่แล้ว +228

    Hank Green: "I'm not a high stress person, I'm really not. I'm laid back."
    Vlogbrothers fans from the past decade: 🙄

  • @yisraelkatz1958
    @yisraelkatz1958 5 ปีที่แล้ว +170

    That ending was pretty meta even for the Green bothers.

  • @abbiegibbs5924
    @abbiegibbs5924 5 ปีที่แล้ว +164

    "First you write a book. I don't know how that happens" Same, Hank

    • @AikiraBeats
      @AikiraBeats 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Right writing a book is so challenging but also fun at the same time

  • @RachelAnn
    @RachelAnn 5 ปีที่แล้ว +351

    John being hype-man that Hank apparently needs in his life.

    • @tenthz
      @tenthz 5 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      John is the hype-man that we all need in our lives.

    • @MCAndyT
      @MCAndyT 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      He's the Flavor Flav of YA novels

  • @afroceltduck
    @afroceltduck 5 ปีที่แล้ว +527

    Hank: "I'm not a high-stress person, I'm really not."
    Also Hank: Starts a podcast that's literally about recapping tweets that he probably shouldn't have tweeted.

    • @tenthz
      @tenthz 5 ปีที่แล้ว +24

      Also Hank: Starts a podcast about stuff he worries about.

    • @QualityDoggo
      @QualityDoggo 5 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      Year long podcast of recapping the intricacies of butt is legs... called "butt is legs".

    • @Me-vn3gz
      @Me-vn3gz 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      What are they called?

    • @JamesJordanson
      @JamesJordanson 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Me-vn3gz the anthropocean reviewed?

  • @DJosiahHicks
    @DJosiahHicks 5 ปีที่แล้ว +295

    Hank, I love that John is still having to publicize for you even after reminding you CONSTANTLY during the release of AART 😂

  • @spock-w
    @spock-w 5 ปีที่แล้ว +304

    3:41 John is such a disappointed older brother

    • @Megrezz
      @Megrezz 5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      Line edit: I think you used 'disappointed' where you should have written 'proud'

    • @emersonjakes8119
      @emersonjakes8119 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      John wants Hank to be proud of himself but Hank is the business owner least excited about participating in capitalistic marketing that I've ever seen, so it's a struggle lol

    • @JamesJordanson
      @JamesJordanson 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm pretty sure that part is scripted

  • @charlesphilips2045
    @charlesphilips2045 5 ปีที่แล้ว +81

    The look in John's eyes made me laugh a lot. You can tell John's experience in writing has made him have that default setting.

  • @KumaKaori
    @KumaKaori 5 ปีที่แล้ว +438

    One thing the older brother would like to end: Reminding his younger brother how to market his book XD.
    ...
    By now I think it's more a of a bit, so, please dont stop

    • @artsyberry27
      @artsyberry27 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Hah. Yes to all of this

    • @pokechatter
      @pokechatter 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      "...more a of a bit"?

    • @thefaboo
      @thefaboo 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@pokechatter a gag or joke. This meaning of "bit" comes from comedy writing.

    • @pokechatter
      @pokechatter 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@thefaboo I guess my tired brain wasn't thinking of that definition. Thanks.

  • @zethstar3475
    @zethstar3475 5 ปีที่แล้ว +163

    The ending of the video made me roll on the floor laughing
    Like a deadpanned sick of your crap not again John saying his famous shill line

  • @thomasblyth7539
    @thomasblyth7539 5 ปีที่แล้ว +257

    Lmao the ending was just *chef’s kiss*

    • @untappedinkwell
      @untappedinkwell 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      ++

    • @lostleviathan2352
      @lostleviathan2352 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      +

    • @MarkThePage
      @MarkThePage 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      In every way the greatest Vlogbrothers video ending in all the ways, including more ways.

  • @Narbaculus
    @Narbaculus 5 ปีที่แล้ว +35

    "Oh no nonono no nono no no no no no nononono no nono nonono no"
    -a moped, according to Hank

  • @maggieholt6778
    @maggieholt6778 5 ปีที่แล้ว +66

    I love John for always having Hank's back when he just flat out does not know how to self-promote his book.

  • @JonathanDJCureton
    @JonathanDJCureton 5 ปีที่แล้ว +263

    “I was really sounding like a moped there for a second.”
    😹😹😹

    • @sjselby95
      @sjselby95 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I was watching on 1.5x and he totally did

    • @JonathanDJCureton
      @JonathanDJCureton 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Steven Selby listened for it back on multiple speeds. I think it works best at 1.25x!

    • @sharonoddlyenough
      @sharonoddlyenough 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      I need it as a notification sound on my phone

  • @carlosciudad-real2602
    @carlosciudad-real2602 5 ปีที่แล้ว +102

    We need more endings like this one

  • @tjtjeerdsma9938
    @tjtjeerdsma9938 5 ปีที่แล้ว +80

    Round 2 of John having to remind Hank to actually advertise his book a bit🤣🤣

  • @mariewikiwaka3851
    @mariewikiwaka3851 5 ปีที่แล้ว +347

    That lowercase “would” in the title is making me upset and I don’t know why.

    • @ndgoliberty
      @ndgoliberty 5 ปีที่แล้ว +90

      we're gonna need to line edit that

    • @randomguy263
      @randomguy263 5 ปีที่แล้ว +37

      Oh, God, why'd you have to tell me about it?

    • @mariewikiwaka3851
      @mariewikiwaka3851 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      *In dramatic Hank voice* “This would is fake!”

    • @MelissaFlaquer
      @MelissaFlaquer 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      That's what we call "dem clues"
      No, but really, I hope there is a puzzle for this book like there was for TATWD :D
      PS: I WANT BOOK NOW HANK! Giiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiive!

    • @TheMandleMan
      @TheMandleMan 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      OH MY GOD THANK YOU FOR SAYING THAT! I HADN'T NOTICED AND NOW I CANT UNSEE IT!

  • @amessiguess3773
    @amessiguess3773 5 ปีที่แล้ว +81

    Editors: This is trash
    Also Editors: But we can fix this, my guy.

  • @robinleeann
    @robinleeann 5 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    I like how Hank is describing my editing job back to me in a 4 minute video.
    Except proofreading. I didn’t remember hearing that one. It’s after copy editing.

    • @marthawilkinson3238
      @marthawilkinson3238 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ooh is it fun? It seems fun! What do u have to be good at to become an editor?

  • @dsf8497
    @dsf8497 5 ปีที่แล้ว +27

    The older people get, the more they enjoy socks. Thank you for coming to my TED talk.

  • @cyn7247
    @cyn7247 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    How adorable “I’m really into socks right now” and by the end of the year we get a sock subscription :’)

  • @elliottmcollins
    @elliottmcollins 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    "Anything to do with socks I'm really into right now". Trust that instinct, Hank from 2 years ago.

  • @naomil2288
    @naomil2288 5 ปีที่แล้ว +70

    "So here's how book writing works in the traditional publishing industry: first you write a book -"

  • @coryleaver31
    @coryleaver31 5 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    I appreciate that Hank owns a book signed by himself

  • @moiradarling97
    @moiradarling97 5 ปีที่แล้ว +41

    Question for either brother, do you still feel like it’s “your” book by time you go through all these things?
    Have fun on your tour!

    • @ZunarZulfiqar
      @ZunarZulfiqar 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      I feel like the paper would own most of it.

  • @PleaseUnsubscribeHaha
    @PleaseUnsubscribeHaha 5 ปีที่แล้ว +66

    "I want to end my li-"
    WHAT
    "-ne edits for my book"

    • @Atalinay
      @Atalinay 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      That's how I heard it too lol got scared for a second

    • @johnathangeorge1109
      @johnathangeorge1109 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Exactly what I came here to post!

  • @GarrettRobinson
    @GarrettRobinson 5 ปีที่แล้ว +29

    Never not marketing! 😂 John’s eternal disappointment with Hank’s self-promotion will never not be funny.

  • @krystgenson3182
    @krystgenson3182 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    The look in John's eyes at the end lol he is so done with Hank forgetting to actually promote the book-

  • @criticalarts4683
    @criticalarts4683 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Seeing John's face rapidly zoomed in as he tells us about Hanks book...I love it. Both wholesome and hilarious. You both are so genuinely supportive of one another and it warms my heart. Have fun on tour you guys!

  • @mirnder
    @mirnder 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    The intensity of John's expression at the very end 😂😂

  • @Just-aNerd
    @Just-aNerd 5 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    "I'm not a high stress person."
    Hank, do you remember when you ran vidcon?

  • @Jahwi
    @Jahwi 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    "I'm not a high-stress person"
    -One of the most high-strung content creators I watch.

  • @SapphireSparrowFilms
    @SapphireSparrowFilms 5 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    Bahahaha, I love John's bit at the end.
    I like the rest of the video too. But that was the part that make me snicker.

  • @TheKarishi
    @TheKarishi 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    TFW you make a whole thing about ending line-edits and then your bro performs line-edits to your video LIVE ON CAMERA.

  • @louisecrivelenti7808
    @louisecrivelenti7808 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I immediately called a friend and it was soooo nice! Thank you, Hankidihank!

  • @coena9377
    @coena9377 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Hank explaining how books are written by opening with "first, you write a book" reminds me of those how to draw something tutorials that go from "draw a circle" to "make it look like Daniel Radcliffe".

  • @Jellyfishfan24
    @Jellyfishfan24 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm glad that John came in at the end with that promo info because I actually forgot the name of the book and when I can read it

  • @SamanthaRichardsonWP
    @SamanthaRichardsonWP 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    The last piece with John is a running joke in my household too where my gf does the "Ethical Profit comes out Jan 11th and is available for preorder now" bit too

  • @akakaki
    @akakaki 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I love how John is more interested in selling Hanks book than Hank is :P

  • @jaybehkay2438
    @jaybehkay2438 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    “Things I would like to end” oh January Hank.... little did you know

  • @Celeste-in-Oz
    @Celeste-in-Oz 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hank, you don't know how encouraging that is... I'm trying to finish my first manuscript for my phd by publication and really battling with "this is hopeless, I've had to change it so many times - I'll never get it right" knowing that if I get it good enough to publish, I'll get it back with ...revisions... and then repeat the process for at least 3 more papers, and then get revisions again when I submit my thesis... You've helped me accept this insane existence as - okay -and not evidence that I should quit 😊

  • @micn6ll6
    @micn6ll6 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The ending of this video is so on brand for both brothers 🤣 Hank doesn’t mention the name or details of his book; John makes sure it’s shoved in the last 20 seconds

  • @ChronicallyCurious1
    @ChronicallyCurious1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    John's final disapproving stare at the end of this video felt like he was staring into my soul.

  • @mvwinf
    @mvwinf 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    “I would like to end my li-“
    UHHHH
    “-ne edits for my book.”
    oh, thank GOD

  • @ActualLiteralKyle
    @ActualLiteralKyle 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Good gravy, just hearing John’s voice and cadence and just LITERALLY PERFECT SOUNDS made me miss him on Mental Floss SO DANG MUCH. I’ve rewatched all MF episodes so many times I can even identify the video title from the intro.
    WE MISS YOU JOHN MENTAL FLOSS JUST ISNT THE SAME PLEASE COME BACK

  • @neonrhyme
    @neonrhyme 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love everything I’ve learned about writing from John but I also love love LOVE learning about the minutiae of the writing and editing process from Hank. Their perspectives are both so illuminating.

  • @akafred32092
    @akafred32092 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I was like "oooooohhh new book!!"
    BUT John's supportive sass at the end was amazing ❤

  • @bennyfactor
    @bennyfactor 5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    "I was really sounding like a moped there for a second"

  • @T1000-h4k
    @T1000-h4k 5 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    John standing in the end to show off his recently bought shirt.

  • @kayfraaay
    @kayfraaay 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    This comment is more about the whole 'future of the vlogbrothers' channel discussion. These last two videos confirmed my thoughts- The value of the vlogbrothers comes from the nature (and the nurturing) of your relationship as brothers. This channel started out as a conversation and I really hope that it continues in that direction too

  • @caseyhamm8822
    @caseyhamm8822 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    “rewrite this entire chapter.”
    “THIS ISN’T A LINE EDIT!!”

  • @metadolle8925
    @metadolle8925 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Three things:
    1. That transition was FABULOUS I could feel my heart going whOA
    2. John saves the day again
    3. Hank - have you found that writing a sequel is easier/faster than writing the first book? A lot of authors seem to churn out sequels much faster than first books, and I'm wondering if that's an experience thing (you're used to the characters, you have a cemented and unchangeable foundation to work from, maybe the sequel already existed as a part of the first book that was cut from the final edit, etc.) or if it's pushed by the publishers/editors.

  • @fawaaza7091
    @fawaaza7091 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    We had a class seminar where we had to talk about our favourite book. I chose LFA but the teacher said no (India considers a lot of stuff in such books as deserving of being as taboo as they are), so I went ahead with Turtles all the way down. It went really well. Props to you John. I think turtles all the way down should also be taught in high school like LFA!

  • @soundlyawake
    @soundlyawake 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is quite possibly the cutest Hank video I’ve ever seen.

  • @flowerboogerface
    @flowerboogerface 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    AW that ending though. so wholesome. Thank you Hank for teaching us about book editing and all the steps involved. Appreciated it

  • @TheClosetHistorian
    @TheClosetHistorian 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Took a break from editing my manuscript to watch this. As an as of yet unagented and unpublished author, sometimes I do find some sort of sick joy in knowing the worst thing that can happen is that I get to keep the manuscripts all to myself forever and change one word a day until I die.

  • @Grey0730
    @Grey0730 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    “I wanna be running this company when I die,” oh Hank from the past, got some news for ya

  • @helenpanshin5589
    @helenpanshin5589 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    "Art is never finished, only abandoned." -Leonardo da Vinci

  • @vinayakohri1293
    @vinayakohri1293 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    "An artwork is never finished only abandoned" ~ Leonardo da Vinci

  • @katiebrobst6901
    @katiebrobst6901 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Hank, the usual 4.5 stars. John's little camio: 7 stars.

  • @AlexaPritz
    @AlexaPritz 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    hehe, the typo is on page 301, line 5,
    “The thought of that meeting happening between Carl and Peter Petrawicki made me want to vom.”

    • @thebookgoddess7380
      @thebookgoddess7380 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      what's the typo there??

    • @michaelneufeld4515
      @michaelneufeld4515 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Is the typo vom instead of vomit? I can understand how that could slip by, seems like it could be a colloquialism.

    • @crimeny
      @crimeny 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@michaelneufeld4515 I absolutely thought it was an intentional colloquialism.

    • @MattPalka
      @MattPalka 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      I also did not think that was a typo!

    • @abbizeiger2622
      @abbizeiger2622 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I am 100% sure that is not the typo. I'm 50% sure I saw one "adn" where an "and" should have been.

  • @estrellacasias
    @estrellacasias 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    I love that hank has john to promote the book cause hank just never knows how

    • @RamenNoodle1985
      @RamenNoodle1985 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      And hank is the successful business owner 🤣🤣🤣

  • @Tbehartoo
    @Tbehartoo 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love you two looking out for each other and including us on your conversations. Thank you!

  • @fenja__
    @fenja__ 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I would love to thank you so so much for this video. I can't wait to watch it entirely and you've already made my day, but I would like to already mention that this is a really interesting and important topic for me. I am having a presentation on the professions of a lector/ author next week, which I could possibly be doing after I graduate. (Growing up with your books, you guys aren't completly not to blame for this choice :D) and your insight in the topic is incredibly amusing and helpful. Thanks a lot, Hank🤗
    Also have a lovely evening and weekend. Lots of love :)

  • @dazzlemanuel1954
    @dazzlemanuel1954 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    We love johns little cameo reminder on book promotiosn

  • @sheaelliott942
    @sheaelliott942 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    In many ways I am Hank, unable to market for myself, but at the same time I am John, shamelessly plugging myself and my achievements. It's a good thing they're in this together, and I know I wouldn't have it any other way

  • @giofontenella
    @giofontenella 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    even tho this video is about the literary world, EVERY single thing hank says also applies to journalism and academic research (journalist and historian here!). especially the "22 pages list of all the ways this is trash" and "line by line your editor goes: whYY did you do this???'". SO RELATABLEEEE!
    thank you, hank, for making such a relatable video for me. laughed the entire time, because saaaaame.

  • @MarkThePage
    @MarkThePage 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Editing is fun! It's the end of the unseeable abyss! Finally, most of the tools you're working with are visible on the page, and if you have to create a big new thing, you're just sliding it in like the last puzzle piece. ... Which, okay, is sometimes still brutal. But slightly less hopeless!

  • @Hannah_Em
    @Hannah_Em 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This... this might be the single most intense John Green moment I've ever seen, I feel like John's gaze was piercing deep into my soul as he said those words

  • @jchagasla
    @jchagasla 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hank, you have been responsible for my reading of 1Q84 a few months ago BECAUSE of how well you sold the ambitious nature the storytelling and worldbuiling (dont remember which video, it was about your writing process but dont know if it was on hank's or vb) and this is one of my favorite books today. So, a) thanks :D, secondly, it makes me very excited to know that you feel your next book is very ambitious - being a writer myself, i have been through this feeling on my second novel and currently am right there about the novel i am currently writing - and it feels like this is a feeling shared by those people who discovered how much they love writing; 3: still havent picked up an absolutely remarkable thing, i should probably get around to that, but to be honest i fell into a murakami spiral which was your fault, ultimately (see point a).); IV being in Brazil I dont really relate to your editor-market process, i have had different pressures on different stages of the publishing opus, but I still hope you can end the thing you would like to end.

  • @Alexandretta
    @Alexandretta 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The "Gaaah!" with the book on the head sounds SO much like John.

  • @LeoStaley
    @LeoStaley 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    The parasocial relationship I experience here, feeling as if they are my own brothers, is unsettlingly satisfying.

  • @MikeDeng
    @MikeDeng 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    it's ok hank. we know your book is gonna be awesome

  • @Tosslehoffe
    @Tosslehoffe ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Being an editor married to an author, this makes me laugh. The only time that you can legitimately shit on your partner in a supportive relationship is when you're their editor. It's literally 90% of the job "this is wrong" "that was wrong" "change this" "this sounds too much like x" "this conveys the wrong idea" "terrible, just terrible"

  • @finchhawthorne1302
    @finchhawthorne1302 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hank: the brother with many things to sell. John: the brother who is good at selling things.

  • @ValerieRutherford528
    @ValerieRutherford528 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have been re-editing my first self-published novel (from 2015) for almost a year now. I was close to finishing edits on my second book when I realized I wanted to apply all the things I learned over 3+ years to Book One, which hadn't really gained much of an audience. I didn't change the story and barely touched the dialogue (which I consider to be the things that made the book what it was and needed to be). But I've reworked most of the other text. Descriptions were always a struggle for me, and now they are at least more readable. Anyhow, I've been struggling a lot with motivation as I come closer to completing this long process. I can't help but worry it won't be worth it. Yes, the book is better than it's ever been before. I am so close to being (as much as you *ever* can be) happy with it. But it being better doesn't necessarily mean anyone will care. And this process has been the most critical I've ever been of my original work, of a story so vulnerable and personal that I'm terrified of how it will be received... if it ever even *is* received. The last few years of work have awakened my inner self-critic, which has been horrible for my anxiety and depression. And I think again and again: is it really worth it? I've wanted to be a writer (and nothing else) since I was eleven. But it is so much harder than I imagined it would be.

  • @Tinman97301
    @Tinman97301 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm reading your first novel now. Your second novel preordered a week ago. I really want to thank you for choosing this life path. Thank you.

  • @allisondavis4665
    @allisondavis4665 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    John and Hank are my favorite duo of brothers and the ending of this video just solidified my belief in this even more.

  • @theinkweaver
    @theinkweaver 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    THIS was my exact experience with getting an edit letter for my book. "This is good. It can be better, but it is good. Here is 20+ pages of how it is not good." WHAAAAAAAAAA--
    *brooklyn 9-9 intro music*

  • @Allovimo
    @Allovimo 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    John is SUCH a good big brother.
    Also, before my students hand their work in, I have them either read it aloud to someone OR have someone else read it aloud. They think I'm crazy, but their final product is always better for having done that step.

  • @shamelessmash156
    @shamelessmash156 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I felt this rant on writing so profoundly i sent it to all my writing buddies. We feel you and support you. but mostly: YOU WROTE A BOOK THAT IS AWESOME

  • @alinaigrad
    @alinaigrad 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is my favourite question to ask the majority of content creators (and I mean the "old school" like writers, directors, scriptwriters, etc): how do you know when your project is done?

    • @MattPalka
      @MattPalka 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      I think one time Hank mentioned when it feels about 80-90% done.

  • @emotional_support_squid
    @emotional_support_squid 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can someone please make “and then you have to say **NO!** into my new favorite gif?

  • @arillusine
    @arillusine 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    John: LET ME DO YOUR PROMO OMG WHY DO YOU NEVER REMEMBER TO DO THIS?!

    • @maryforcier6021
      @maryforcier6021 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I remember John talking about never wanting/remembering to do this in early vlogbrothers videos. Oh how the tides have turned!

  • @trevinbeattie4888
    @trevinbeattie4888 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you for just saying "no", Hank. And for making it crystal clear. :D

  • @marylindsey
    @marylindsey 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I genuinely really enjoyed the editing at the end of this video. It was a super fun surprise. 😊

  • @maddieking5542
    @maddieking5542 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I REALLY want to work in publishing. I hope maybe one day I can copy edit a Green brother book

  • @pkm1060
    @pkm1060 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hank! I’m listening to the audio version of An Absolutely Remarkable Thing! If it sucked I’d tell you. In fact, it doesn’t suck. It’s outstanding! I can’t wait to read (or listen to) the next one!

  • @HypernovaBolts11
    @HypernovaBolts11 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    John's glasses are crooked in the last frame... Help.

  • @arklowrockz
    @arklowrockz 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Well there you go Hank, you have just broken down the reason why I personally could never write a book (even though I have thought about it from time to time). I just could not deal with that amount of editorial input. That amount of implied criticism of what I had written.
    And its not like I don't have any writing experience. I certainly do. But it so far has been discursive articles about work related subjects.
    And ironically enough I also have a lot of editorial experience. However I would seriously balk at being on the receiving end of the editorial chore....

  • @emersonjakes8119
    @emersonjakes8119 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    SEE Y'ALL TOMORROW IN RALEIGH!!!!!!! AGHHHHHH I'M SO EXCITED! been watching religiously for seven years including through every video, listened to ever Dear H&J episode 4+ times, and I love love love the Anthropocene Reviewed. Thank y'all for changing my life and the world 💜🦕

  • @sorchaOtwo
    @sorchaOtwo 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for telling it like it is. Editing can be a pit of despair for those of us who have to shoulder the responsibility ourselves.