Full walkthrough how I got FULL SCORE for TOEFL Academic Writing!

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 28 มิ.ย. 2024
  • Email me directly for private lessons revolucien@hotmail.com In this video I walk you step by step through TWO model answers, one preference questions and one for open ended questions, for the Academic Discussion section of the TOEFL Writing task!
    Let's get ready! 🚀🌐
    Timestamps
    0:00 Introduction
    0:54 Contents
    1:07 Academic Discussion Overview
    1:35 Format of Academic Discussion Task
    2:40 Example 1 Overview and Analysis
    4:44 Example 1 Answer
    5:40 Example 1 Answer Analysis
    7:04 Example 1 Answer Template
    7:19 Example 2 Overview and Analysis Answer
    8:40 Example 2 Answer
    9:35 Example 2 Answer Analysis
    10:35 Example 2 Answer Template
    ! 🎯🔥
    Template Structure for preference questions:
    Intro - ‘[topic name] is a widely discussed topic with many different [functions/features]’
    My opinion with student opinion- ‘Like [Student A], I believe that/I support the idea... because it is helping...’
    Example ‘An example of this is...’
    Example elaboration ‘This shows that...’
    Conclusion - ‘Therefore... even though I think [student B] makes a good point, I more strongly agree with [Student A] in supporting this topic’
    Template Structure for open ended questions:
    Intro with opinions - ‘Whilst I agree with Students 1 and 2 that [idea 1] and [idea 2] are [good/important], I personally believe that [our own idea] is the [best/most important] because [reason]’
    Example - ‘A great example is [our own idea] helped me/someone achieve [result]’
    Example elaboration - ‘This technology/idea enabled progress in [field/industry] and created this [result] '
    Conclusion - ‘I believe that [our own idea] should [function] for [people/industry/field] and as my example shows, it has done exactly that’
    #toefl #testready #toeflexam #toefltest #toeflwriting#托福 #托福考试

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  • @farinarahman3548
    @farinarahman3548 หลายเดือนก่อน

    thank you 😇 Lucien.. 🙏

    • @TestReady
      @TestReady  หลายเดือนก่อน

      You're welcome! As a small TH-cam channel I'm also really interested to hear feedback from the audience - what do you think of our videos so far, any things you think I can improve?

    • @farinarahman3548
      @farinarahman3548 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@TestReadyI'll be applying in advanced standing program in dentistry as a foreign trained dentist. For that i need 100+ score in toefl. so if you could make videos on how to score 26+ in each 4 sections of toefl.
      detailed video on speaking sections with templates and how to generate ideas in 45 seconds in speaking sections.
      hope your channel grows more 🙏

    • @TestReady
      @TestReady  29 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Thank you for the kind wishes. I am working on a speaking walkthrough with templates at the moment and will make a separate video on how to generate speaking ideas in a short time. When is your TOEFL test?

    • @farinarahman3548
      @farinarahman3548 24 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@@TestReadydidn't book the date yet but 1st week of July I'm aiming for . do you recommend 1 month preparation is enough to score 100+ ?

    • @TestReady
      @TestReady  23 วันที่ผ่านมา

      To really answer that question I'd have to know your current level of English. We haven't spoken much but your written English needs some work so I'd advise you to really study the templates I've given and read articles from British or American sources. Aside from that I also provide private lessons so you can get in touch with me at my email address in the description box if you wish, best of luck.