oh my god so I was the one who submitted submission 2 and your feedback is so, so invaluable to me!! the way you talk about craft is so incredible and I'm so grateful that you read my work and ENJOYED it! this means so much to me
ahhh it was truly a joy to read!! ✨ thanks so much for sharing! (i know it was a while ago haha) PLEASE let us know if you ever submit this piece anywhere or finish it (or any of your other works!) ☺️
OKAY SUBMISSION 2. I WANT TO READ THIS. I love the way you explain your thoughts in such a calming and eloquent manner!! You should be a writing instructor I think you'd make a really great one :)
You're the first critique was so helpful to me. As a new writer converting a detailed outline brainstorming and character sheets into robust scenes has been such a struggle. But your step-by-step explanation and great example were exactly what I needed to hear.
I seriously love how specific you've gotten with the examples in these videos, everything is explained so well and I agree that you'd be great at teaching writing!
~ ‘i need to fall in love with the character to fall in love with the story’ i loved the video Kris!! u pick up on the most profound but secluded things. such a blessing.
Thank you so much Kris for critiquing my excerpt! I wrote that 1st Submission. I'm happy to say that I've already finished the first draft, 200,000 plus words, and I've already began editing it and working on draft two. I appreciate your feedback and as someone who spends a lot of time on plot and world building, it's nice to get some advice on working with characters. I will make sure to include some of your tips in my second draft. 😁 Much love girl, and keep doing what your doing. ❤️
So happy you brought this back. ❤ It's basically having a workshop partner who's so on the ball that there's never need to worry about the important things getting missed.
I REALLY like these kind of videos. the pity is that, I'm Brazilian, and the book I'm writing is in Portuguese. wishing That you could read it anyway. Maybe one day. Thanks for the inspiration and great advice!
You should definitely consider being an Alpha reader! You give corrections in a way that doesn't seem as harsh as most Alpha readers do- if that makes sense. I would trust you with a raw piece of work to correct without worrying too much about my manuscript being passed as another story that no one is going to read. I love your videos, keep doing what you're doing!
oh my god so I was the one who submitted submission 2 and your feedback is so, so invaluable to me!! the way you talk about craft is so incredible and I'm so grateful that you read my work and ENJOYED it! this means so much to me
ahhh it was truly a joy to read!! ✨ thanks so much for sharing! (i know it was a while ago haha) PLEASE let us know if you ever submit this piece anywhere or finish it (or any of your other works!) ☺️
@@KrisMF It is finished, though not available to read anywhere yet. But I will definitely let you know if I submit it anywhere!! 🥰
You're very talented.
OKAY SUBMISSION 2. I WANT TO READ THIS. I love the way you explain your thoughts in such a calming and eloquent manner!! You should be a writing instructor I think you'd make a really great one :)
omg thats so kind ahaha 😭💛
You're the first critique was so helpful to me. As a new writer converting a detailed outline brainstorming and character sheets into robust scenes has been such a struggle. But your step-by-step explanation and great example were exactly what I needed to hear.
I seriously love how specific you've gotten with the examples in these videos, everything is explained so well and I agree that you'd be great at teaching writing!
THANKS LYNN 😭😭💗
~ ‘i need to fall in love with the character to fall in love with the story’
i loved the video Kris!! u pick up on the most profound but secluded things. such a blessing.
😭🫶🫶🫶💗
Thank you so much Kris for critiquing my excerpt! I wrote that 1st Submission. I'm happy to say that I've already finished the first draft, 200,000 plus words, and I've already began editing it and working on draft two. I appreciate your feedback and as someone who spends a lot of time on plot and world building, it's nice to get some advice on working with characters. I will make sure to include some of your tips in my second draft. 😁 Much love girl, and keep doing what your doing. ❤️
I’m so glad to hear that!! thank you for letting me read! best of luck with your next draft. ☺️✨
So happy you brought this back. ❤
It's basically having a workshop partner who's so on the ball that there's never need to worry about the important things getting missed.
i need to read the second submission nowwww
Wow, this is amazing. This is more helpful than most writerly TH-cam videos out there. I learned so much!
haven’t even finished this video but holy cow your edits are so SMART (ofc!!). the way you explain things?? I’m learning so much!!
thanks rachel!! ☺️🫶✨
Haven't finished watching yet, but I just want to say you're so eloquent and I love how you approach critique ❤
thanks sara!!! 💛
ugh watching your videos inspire me so much to write! Your critiques were so helpful and these submissions were lovely
im so glad! 💛
Your edit with me videos are SO helpful!
These are so helpful. Thanks for doing them and I hope you do more.
Submission 2, please share more with us agghhhh so cute!
Nice video! Very easy to relax and listen to while I'm busy, and I think your critiques were on point uvu
Live for these edit with mes!
I want more 'edit with me' videos :)
I REALLY like these kind of videos. the pity is that, I'm Brazilian, and the book I'm writing is in Portuguese. wishing That you could read it anyway. Maybe one day. Thanks for the inspiration and great advice!
Omg I missed the chance to submit 😢💔
this is from an old submission call several months ago so you didnt miss anything, dont worry :) if i ever do another one, you’ll see it! ✨
You should definitely consider being an Alpha reader! You give corrections in a way that doesn't seem as harsh as most Alpha readers do- if that makes sense. I would trust you with a raw piece of work to correct without worrying too much about my manuscript being passed as another story that no one is going to read. I love your videos, keep doing what you're doing!
thats so kind! i love being a first reader on a project - i think it’s very special to be trusted with someone’s raw work :)
@@KrisMF Anytime! I look forward to your next uploads!