Rewriting Spider-Man 3: How Hard Could It Be?
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 7 ก.ย. 2019
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Just a casual little rewrite for Spider-Man 3 from the Raimi Trilogy. Part two will be out as soon as possible.
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My version of final battle goes like this:
Oscorp roof,Harry is Venom and fights Peter. Peter tries to convince him that he didn't kill his father. Harry throws Goblin grenade and the floor cracks and makes a huge pit,underneath them everything's on fire. Harry still fights Peter whose holding back. Harry pushes Peter at the peak edge of the pit.
"Think about it..I would've never hurt your father." - Peter says
Harry thinks for a bit,symbiote gets off his face and reveals a burnt and deformed face which Peter caused earlier.
"You must trust me." - Peter continues. Harry pushes Peter away from the pit and turns his back to the pit,front to Peter.
"I do trust you..But I don't trust myself." - Harry says as the flames underneath him start rising higher
"Harry,take off the suit!" - Peter yells
"It's too late,Pete. If I die,the symbiote dies." - Harry says quietly
"Harry,don't you dare!" - Peter tries to convince Harry.
"I'm sorry,Pete. This has to be done." - Harry says
"NO!" - Peter yells,Harry pushes himself backwards into the pit of fire which makes a big explosion. Peter swings away,in tears looks to Oscorp building which is collapsing down..
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Good to, with and from just a few changes, have Peter’s darker side start even before the symbiote and have a darker tone in general. It does feel weird and flaw, though, to have Peter seem to have no interactions with Harry for a long time, not reacting much to that he is in a coma and then comes out of it.
This is great
Thank you!
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Oh! Olivia Octavius foreshadowing?
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Certainly been trying!
Here's How I'd Fix Spider-Man 3 (2007):
Have Harry Osborn as the main antagonist and become the second Green Goblin like he did in the comics and 90s Spider-Man cartoon. They set it up at the end of Spider-Man 2 (2004) and they even set it up at the end of Spider-Man 1 (2002) at Norman Osborn's funeral. So it would make sense for him to be the main villain of the third film and to become the second Green Goblin (Even though I didn't like the Green Goblin costume in Spider-Man 1, I much would have preferred that than the New Goblin or the crappy Green Goblin in Not-So Amazing Spider-Man 2).
Remove Flint Marko/Sandman and Eddie Brock/Venom.
Have the ghost/hallucination of Norman Osborn/Green Goblin play a bigger role in the film as the overarching antagonist tormenting Harry and encouraging him to give into his anger similar to the comics and 90s Spider-Man cartoon.
Have the entire plot be straightforward of Harry Osborn as The Green Goblin wanting revenge on Peter Parker/Spider-Man to avenge the death of his father with Peter Parker/Spider-Man and even Mary Jane Watson trying to redeem Harry Osborn.
Have Mary Jane Watson play a role by helping Peter Parker/Spider-Man to redeem Harry Osborn/Green Goblin II.
Get rid of temporary amnesia.
Have Harry Osborn realize what a terrible person, Norman Osborn was even before becoming the Green Goblin realizing that he never loved him and only cared about money and himself. This would cause Harry Osborn to give up becoming the Green Goblin not wanting to be like his father.
Harry Osborn redeems himself. He either lives like he does in the comics and 90s Spider-Man cartoon or he dies during his redemption.
Also remove Gwen Stacy, Captain Stacy and the Black Suit arc entirely.
Whether you like Spider-Man 3 (2007) or not and if you do like that's ok and I have nothing against that. But I think we can all agree this is the Spider-Man 3 we should have gotten and much better than what we got.
While Spiderman 3 isn’t a very good film, it is still in my top 10 favorite films ever. I’m not a Raimi fanboy, nor even a superhero fan, and I don’t like it bcause I think it’s good, quite the contrary in fact. I can’t help it. This is the funniest movie ever made
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You deserve way more subs dude. Although I don't agree with the Eddie Brock being kept and keeping the link between sandman and Ben Parker, I agree with most of it. You should maybe try going to smaller TH-camrs and asking for a sub for sub kind of thing and do it everyday for a good while you'll see your channel get more subs and views etc and overtime it'll start to grow faster. I'd hate for you to not be getting a couple hundred thousand views at the least on a great video like this
I'm mostly doing this as a hobby, so I'm not all that worried about getting big view numbers. The most I can ask for right now is for people to share it if they like it enough.
As for the re-write thing, I didn't really want to exclude Brock completely. I think he still has a good story purpose for putting Peter in a negative arc for a little while, the same for Sandman and Ben Parker's link. Without those parts of the story, Spider-Man/Peter isn't put into the mental headspace to really dive into being "bad". He needs to go from high back to a low in order for him to be vulnerable to the symbiote. It's been a while since I wrote it, but I think that's where my headspace was at when I was getting all that out. :)
He was only in the black suit for the second half of the movie which disappointed me because I would’ve rather had to use a suit earlier
So many of the cartoons handle this a lot better. They really let Peter wallow in the suit for a while. Cook the tension, so to speak.
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