@@smithsoniansmith2433 Yeah Ebony “Tara” Darkness Dementia Raven Way was definitely not the first of her kind. She was just the most infamous because of just how badly the entire story _(not just the fanmade character)_ was written and the author altering the personalities, interests and behaviors of the canon characters on a ridiculous level like Harry dying his hair blood red, wearing black lipstick, sleeping with Draco in moments of weakness, using guns instead of wands sometimes, going to MCR concerts even though that band didn’t exist in the 90s and preferring to be addressed as “Vampire Potter” because his actual name isn’t cool enough.
Here is my version Mary sue, the hottest girl EVeryone thinks she is a pearl.. When she is around, A rare triple rainbow is found... She is the kindest, nice to animals,... the smartest, Can recite the dictionary, the prettiest, Her body is incredible... She can speak to fairies. Blonde hair, green eyes.. The boys are mezmerised... Her life is so easy, its makes the readers queasy. Family is wealthy, They can make people with ebola, cancer, and malaria healthy.. 30 men chasing after her, They think she is the cure, to everything.. Her wings, so pure, lined with diamonds, emeralds and everything.. Everyone bows down to her,even, mean lou, And that is an example.. of a mary sue.
Calamity Gold you forgot a strange tragic background. along with overly dramatic behavior. and wins any arguments she starts or ends in and all the bad guys want her and she never dies xD
look guys i know which so-shitty-it-can-never-be-outdone HP fic we all thought of the instant we heard the first line. it's ok, guys. we all have each other in this.
That Toni what i will never understand is why i keep fucking reading it. i've read it so many times. why? what for?? do i really hate myself so much i have to keep re-reading this shit?? i guess so!!
This wins on so many levels - fabulous singing voice, and such an apt way of describing the onslaught of Mary Sues that haunt every fandom in the known universe.
rob140892 The only reason Fleur isn't a Mary Sue is because she isn't a main character, really. Bella Swan is the textbook example of a Mary-Sue and she is a damzelle in distress for 3 books and a half.
This makes me nostalgic for something I am not and never was a part of. This makes me wish I read hundreds of Harry Potter fanfic, loved some, hated others, and wrote my own. It just looks so innocent and fulfilling from here.
Another Sue has decided to dislike. So, any guesses on which one of these hell-spawns did it? *takes a look on fanfiction* unfortunately there are so many on there that I cannot count them all. (Not saying that every OC on Fanfic.net is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu as some people actually take the time to put in some character into their character and a little something called plot.)
Rita Morais Mary Sues who watches this be like, "Hey! That is not possibly true! I am perfect the way beautiful people is. But I'M more beautiful than them! And what is even a Mary Sue? Like, there is not a person named Mary Sue! You guys think you're so smart at everything! Ehem! I KNOW EVERYTHING! It's obvious you guys hate me because YOU'RE JEALOUS! If I meet you, I can beat you in everything! Hope you like that you fat ugly pigs!" and then I cringed at my own fucking comment. Thank me the Mary Sues found out they're total assholes. No hate, really. Give this a dislike. I appreciate. Thanks.
I am not a Mary Sue. I'm a fangirl. Yet I find this song so meaningful and agree that sometimes there are some people who need a break. I solute you, you Mary Sue!
Joyce Lim: Tolkien was very fond of the Welsh Language, and the syllables were tha basis for the elvish language - i.e Rydw i'n o Cymru, wlad yr can, llenyddiaeth ac ddawns. (Example of a Welsh sentence). Also - Arwen is a very popular Welsh name, it does mean noble maiden. Gwen is also a Welsh name which means 'white', the male version is Gwyn.
Excellent song! Perfectlry described the life of a Mary Sue! Good music and nice voice! Thanx for the video, trully educative, I wish fanfiction.net would make all writers watch it!
Mary Sues happen in Lord of the Rings fanfiction too - they're either Elrond's other daughter, or a teenage girl who has somehow warped into Middle Earth, and they always fall in love with Legolas.
My first oc ever had black hair with pink streaks in it, she was an orphan, she was nice/witty/smart/amazingly gorgeous, and her eyes changed color with her mood. Back then, I thought she was the best but now.... I'm just glad I'v moved on from that.
BRAVO!!!! Oh, my... You have appointed all the lacks of a sue creator... and it makes me remember when I started writing, fortunately I don't do it anymore. Good job, people should hear this.
I'm not really in fanfiction, though I want to get into it sometime soon, I mostly third person story-type roleplay. My main fear is making my character a mary-sue.. T_T Once she was though, It was a fantasy roleplay, she was a half fairy with big swallowtail butterfly wings, she could talk to and control plants, her eyes where rainbow colors, she was an orphan, she had healing abilities, she was really strong, caring, strong willed, and secretly a princess. *Sobs from shame*
I gotta say that ED has picked the right person to speak of Mary Sues, made me laugh quite a bit. Thanks for using your time to do something thats actually good and worthwhile.
Reading or Listening to "My Immortal" makes me feel so very talented as an author... I can't stop laughing, really. This fanfiction is so epicly bad, I love it exactly for it's stupidity. Thanks to all Mary Sue writers (especially Tara Gillesbie), you made my day! - Fantastic song, besides. Beautiful voice, and the lyrics... hell yes, SO goddamn true! Thanks for that song, too. I enjoy it.
I am OLDer and I still love an adore Disney Princesses. There is some line between hard core sues and what the Princesses are. The Princesses represent the era they live in. Weak were the original 3 because of the time they were made. As time progresses we get stronger and more independent princesses. Belle, Tiana, Rapunzel and Mulan.
God, how does she sing it without cracking up every five seconds? I mean, I tried and I couldn't even get past the first two verses with a straight face XD
I remember, one of my first fanfics, before I ever heard of Mary Sues, I wrote a terrible, terrible fic about me summoning a demon and venturing into different fandoms. It was more of an unintentional parody than anything else, luckily. So glad I grew out of that.
As a result of beautiful vocals, a very catchy tune and witty lyrics, I've got to say this is one of the best songs criticising a long-standing, long-hated fanfiction trope I have ever heard (to be fair, I haven't heard many, but still, this is pretty awesome). Well done.
"I only put the lyrics into the vid. Nothing else is mine! " But that's the best part. You got the gist of it. Great video. I laughed all along with it. - The Jaguar
My old MLP OC: Alicorn. Knows the mane 6. *CRINGE.* My old MLP OC now: Pegasus. Is only a fan. *still cringe but I'm not changing it because I'm not even that into MLP anymore*
My God, some Mary Sues make me want to throw up. Sometimes one wonders if the authors who write them have ANY sense of reality WHATSOEVER. I love this video. Brilliantly written (Particularly the long list of boys who were in love with her, hehe), very, very true and you have a beautiful singing voice as well. 5 stars all the way.
THE SINGER'S VOICE IS GORGEOUS!!
Yeah.
No My Immortal jokes? Good fandom. Now stop masticating on brooms.
This predates My Immortal
@@Samantha_76 Oof.
@@smithsoniansmith2433
Yeah Ebony “Tara” Darkness Dementia Raven Way was definitely not the first of her kind. She was just the most infamous because of just how badly the entire story _(not just the fanmade character)_ was written and the author altering the personalities, interests and behaviors of the canon characters on a ridiculous level like Harry dying his hair blood red, wearing black lipstick, sleeping with Draco in moments of weakness, using guns instead of wands sometimes, going to MCR concerts even though that band didn’t exist in the 90s and preferring to be addressed as “Vampire Potter” because his actual name isn’t cool enough.
She's good....THE SINGER! Not the Mary sue
0:34 *kind of smiles*
0:39 *Tries hard not to laugh*
0:47 *Almost bursts out in laughter*
0:59 *Bursts out in laughter*
02:03 I literally laughed my ass off
rob140892 I hope you find a new ass.
Shima Shita herherherher
Doctor Potter's Phantastic Beast at the Discø yeah. the doctor's here for operation.
i did that too...
Now i can never stop watching this anymore... this describes the potter-sues perfectly!
32 dislikes?!
...
...
..Nice try, Enoby...
+Clodagh “virusdemon” Walters
and snap
Mr. Enobi Drkniss Demensia TARA Weigh
Clodagh Walters ah fuck true..
Don’t be so mean to Egogy
My love goes to the writer of this song.
Same
Ay Hetalia
Thanks it was me
@@viemarirunoaYour are awesome! ^_^
Here is my version
Mary sue, the hottest girl
EVeryone thinks she is a pearl..
When she is around,
A rare triple rainbow is found...
She is the kindest,
nice to animals,...
the smartest,
Can recite the dictionary,
the prettiest,
Her body is incredible...
She can speak to fairies.
Blonde hair, green eyes..
The boys are mezmerised...
Her life is so easy,
its makes the readers queasy.
Family is wealthy,
They can make people with ebola, cancer, and malaria healthy..
30 men chasing after her,
They think she is the cure,
to everything..
Her wings, so pure,
lined with diamonds, emeralds and everything..
Everyone bows down to her,even, mean lou,
And that is an example..
of a mary sue.
This is actually pretty bad, to be honest.
bby
Sounds like snow white
Calamity Gold you forgot a strange tragic background. along with overly dramatic behavior. and wins any arguments she starts or ends in and all the bad guys want her and she never dies xD
Calamity Gold wow ahmaazingggg
(don't hate me because I'm a typical Mary Sue with no perfect lives.)
this song deserves a reward *hands writer a cookie*
"GOD STICK TO CANNON PLEASE!"
This is beautiful! But the main victims of Mary Sues are Draco, Harry, Fred & George, Sirius and Remus (And Severus gets his fair share, too)
Where's Neville-senpai?
@@hughstike868
No one expected Neville to glow up back when Potter-sues were super popular
It's like she read one too many bad Harry Potter fanfictions.
This is still good years later.
its weird for me to say this but i can't stop listening to this its to catchy!
I agree.
Ikr
look guys i know which so-shitty-it-can-never-be-outdone HP fic we all thought of the instant we heard the first line. it's ok, guys. we all have each other in this.
Mage of Doom 2.0 good ol ebony dark'ness will forever be in our hearts
That Toni but is it ebony? or enoby?
That Toni what i will never understand is why i keep fucking reading it. i've read it so many times. why? what for?? do i really hate myself so much i have to keep re-reading this shit?? i guess so!!
Thanks to your comments, I have now proceeded to read "my immortal" in a single afternoon...
THANKS GUYSS (or should I say "fangz", geddit?) MY BRAAIN
Tyra Wetter goodbye rest in peace sleep well sweet princ
The life of creepypastas oc's
dude... can I just like, hug you???
This wins on so many levels - fabulous singing voice, and such an apt way of describing the onslaught of Mary Sues that haunt every fandom in the known universe.
I know right?! 🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
The funny thing is that the only canon mary-sue ( fleur ) is soooo not annoying when compared to fanon mary-sue xD
Fleur got the lowest points in Goblet Of Fire. and Mary Sue is supposed to be invincible
rob140892
The only reason Fleur isn't a Mary Sue is because she isn't a main character, really. Bella Swan is the textbook example of a Mary-Sue and she is a damzelle in distress for 3 books and a half.
Nah. Just because a girl is madly pretty AND capable she doesn't immediately become a Mary Sue. It's about being TOO perfect and she definitely isn't.
Whoever is singing this has an absolutely phenomenal voice. The lyrics are spot on, too. Insta-fav.
Its so accurate it hurts--
This makes me nostalgic for something I am not and never was a part of. This makes me wish I read hundreds of Harry Potter fanfic, loved some, hated others, and wrote my own. It just looks so innocent and fulfilling from here.
The 34 dislikes are all Mary-Sues
Kuroko Tetsuya there ar now 40
Kuroko Tetsuya Damn Ebony Dark"ness Dementia Raven Way...
Lilith Potter Fucking Amber Amy Amazing Sues are disliking this song
Another Sue has decided to dislike. So, any guesses on which one of these hell-spawns did it? *takes a look on fanfiction* unfortunately there are so many on there that I cannot count them all. (Not saying that every OC on Fanfic.net is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu as some people actually take the time to put in some character into their character and a little something called plot.)
Mary Sues are bad, but which fandom has the most mary sue? Creepypasta Mary Sues in my opinion are the most horrible XD
THIS IS PERFECT
So is your flying mint bunny icon. ^w^
***** Yeeeeee
Too Nina the killer and Jana the killer ...
Omg yesh
And Jana
And Charlie
And all other Creepypasta Mary Sues and Gary Stues
Sommer Hakanson Yes
Or Lucy { she has this long ass Japanese name that shows anime is everything even creepy pastas..}
Rita Morais Mary Sues who watches this be like,
"Hey! That is not possibly true! I am perfect the way beautiful people is. But I'M more beautiful than them! And what is even a Mary Sue? Like, there is not a person named Mary Sue! You guys think you're so smart at everything! Ehem! I KNOW EVERYTHING! It's obvious you guys hate me because YOU'RE JEALOUS! If I meet you, I can beat you in everything! Hope you like that you fat ugly pigs!"
and then I cringed at my own fucking comment. Thank me the Mary Sues found out they're total assholes. No hate, really. Give this a dislike. I appreciate. Thanks.
This song is accurate and entertaining, and the singing is marvelous. Well done
This ... is the best song ever, and is very slightly reviving my faith in humanity.
Though I don't think it'll ever fully return, sadly.
The fact that they got so fed up with Mary Sues that they wrote a song about is just amazing to me
Beautiful voice~ and it describes them pretty well *claps*
I am not a Mary Sue. I'm a fangirl. Yet I find this song so meaningful and agree that sometimes there are some people who need a break. I solute you, you Mary Sue!
I just read a story called "Your Life With Ron Weasley" and this song fits it perfectly.
good vocals
This song describes My Immortal so perfectly.
Joyce Lim: Tolkien was very fond of the Welsh Language, and the syllables were tha basis for the elvish language - i.e Rydw i'n o Cymru, wlad yr can, llenyddiaeth ac ddawns. (Example of a Welsh sentence).
Also - Arwen is a very popular Welsh name, it does mean noble maiden. Gwen is also a Welsh name which means 'white', the male version is Gwyn.
"Nobody likes your stories but you."
That one just killed me... I wish it was true.
This is a great song.
thats great, Never heard a better Song in this Mix of irony and truth :D love your voice btw *-*
In my English class, we were supposed to choose ten of our favorite songs. This was number one on my list.
I wonder if the people who disliked this video are Mary sues as well... XD
they were all by enoby
Excellent song! Perfectlry described the life of a Mary Sue! Good music and nice voice! Thanx for the video, trully educative, I wish fanfiction.net would make all writers watch it!
You know, you can really sing. This song speaks the truth.
This is the greatest song I've ever heard
LOL! This is classic! Very pretty voice, too. I thoroughly enjoyed this. :D
Mary Sues happen in Lord of the Rings fanfiction too - they're either Elrond's other daughter, or a teenage girl who has somehow warped into Middle Earth, and they always fall in love with Legolas.
Dude, this is so spot on! You have a lovely voice mate
And you have good vocabulary mate:)
2022 and still loving this song
"My Immortal."
Oh my goodness...I offically LOVE this song! It's hysterical!
And your voice is lovely!
They appear in every fandom, but they all have certain things in common - described as beautiful, everyone falls in love with them, etc.
I'm just here because i listened to this song a lot back in the day and i was feeling nostalgic
Jokes aside, skittle sama's voice is gorgeous.
My first oc ever had black hair with pink streaks in it, she was an orphan, she was nice/witty/smart/amazingly gorgeous, and her eyes changed color with her mood. Back then, I thought she was the best but now.... I'm just glad I'v moved on from that.
I definitely love the author of this masterpiece, whoever she is.
ok, skittle sama has an AMAZING voice, and whoever wrote these lyrics is a genius. and this link needs to be sent to certain FF.net writers.....
Starts thinking about My Immortal xD
if anyone asks what a mary sue is to me ever again I'll definitely play this song
That was beautiful. made my freakin' day.
whoever sings this has a wonderful voice.
I like how I didn't realize this was referencing Ebony Way for a long, long time.
Is it?
@XennaXDemyx I would think "My Immortal" would be the My Immortal theme song.
just chillin in my oversized hogwarts shirt
ya know-
Talented and perceptive! Your what all Mary Sue writers wish they could be.
BRAVO!!!!
Oh, my... You have appointed all the lacks of a sue creator... and it makes me remember when I started writing, fortunately I don't do it anymore.
Good job, people should hear this.
This song really describe perfectly a Mary Sue! I love it ;)
Thanks for this video, the lyrics are really good :)
"Nobody likes your stories but you."
Sums it up nicely.
This deserves more views. Beautiful voice. But there's a fine line between being great and a Mary Sue, so not TOO beautiful.
The fear of being called a Mary-Sue is what makes me fine-tune my Oc's and NEVER use them until I have input from everyone I know. THANK YOU, REALITY.
...Brilliant. Bloody brilliant. I applaud Skittle Sama and her brilliantness.
And you, dentellenoir, for your amazing lyricage.
Kudos. =D
Holy hell, this is so accurate. Such a lovely voice, too!
I'm not really in fanfiction, though I want to get into it sometime soon, I mostly third person story-type roleplay. My main fear is making my character a mary-sue.. T_T
Once she was though, It was a fantasy roleplay, she was a half fairy with big swallowtail butterfly wings, she could talk to and control plants, her eyes where rainbow colors, she was an orphan, she had healing abilities, she was really strong, caring, strong willed, and secretly a princess.
*Sobs from shame*
I used to, but when I started clawing my eyes out I decided never to roam there again.
Exellent video. I now have quotes to use in my sigs.
To the author of My Immortal:
Read this. And see /exactly/ how it applies to you.
This is genius.
Whats my immortal?
Ah, my love to you. Praise to Skittle Sama and dentellenoir! Praise them with great praise!
"...And Justin Finch Fletchley too."
jeezus.
Bwahahaaa! Thanks to my friend, I am now a friend of this song. The singer's got a fabulous voice, and the lyrics are so darn true... *chuckles*
Ok I didn't expect this at all... thank you for making me smile...
I gotta say that ED has picked the right person to speak of Mary Sues, made me laugh quite a bit. Thanks for using your time to do something thats actually good and worthwhile.
This is so awesome.
Not only the text, but also the singing voice. Wow!
Reading or Listening to "My Immortal" makes me feel so very talented as an author... I can't stop laughing, really. This fanfiction is so epicly bad, I love it exactly for it's stupidity. Thanks to all Mary Sue writers (especially Tara Gillesbie), you made my day! - Fantastic song, besides. Beautiful voice, and the lyrics... hell yes, SO goddamn true! Thanks for that song, too. I enjoy it.
HAHA! A totally awesome wake-up call to fanfic writers (myself included)! Thanks for uploading this!
You. You are AWESOME.
I... I weep from envy for your voice and ability and AWESOME.
You win the interwebz. Congrats.
I am OLDer and I still love an adore Disney Princesses. There is some line between hard core sues and what the Princesses are.
The Princesses represent the era they live in. Weak were the original 3 because of the time they were made. As time progresses we get stronger and more independent princesses.
Belle, Tiana, Rapunzel and Mulan.
God, how does she sing it without cracking up every five seconds? I mean, I tried and I couldn't even get past the first two verses with a straight face XD
I remember, one of my first fanfics, before I ever heard of Mary Sues, I wrote a terrible, terrible fic about me summoning a demon and venturing into different fandoms. It was more of an unintentional parody than anything else, luckily.
So glad I grew out of that.
If there is any truth in the world, you just sang it. I am truly touched by your words *snif*.
As a result of beautiful vocals, a very catchy tune and witty lyrics, I've got to say this is one of the best songs criticising a long-standing, long-hated fanfiction trope I have ever heard (to be fair, I haven't heard many, but still, this is pretty awesome).
Well done.
Not only is your voice amazing but the lyrics are just so great. You are perfect.
That is all.
"I only put the lyrics into the vid. Nothing else is mine! "
But that's the best part. You got the gist of it. Great video. I laughed all along with it.
- The Jaguar
My old MLP OC:
Alicorn.
Knows the mane 6.
*CRINGE.*
My old MLP OC now:
Pegasus.
Is only a fan.
*still cringe but I'm not changing it because I'm not even that into MLP anymore*
This is the funniest thing I have seen/heard in quite some time, thank you.
That was just brilliant! Loved every minute of it!
It’s beautiful, just beautiful. Thank you for this it has made my OK day better.
And this is why we should always read the description first. Correction: she has a beautiful voice. Thanks for putting up the video.
You are my hero! And you're a great guitar player/ singer too!
I'm sure you've heard this A LOT, but your voice is amazing. And so is the song. Basically, you rock.
HER VOICE IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! O___O
I sooo love this song. It's one of my all time favorites.
I do believe this is the best thing the Internet has ever produced. Certainly it is the most hilarious.
She has a lovely voice, doesn't she?
And those lyrics just top it all off
My God, some Mary Sues make me want to throw up. Sometimes one wonders if the authors who write them have ANY sense of reality WHATSOEVER.
I love this video. Brilliantly written (Particularly the long list of boys who were in love with her, hehe), very, very true and you have a beautiful singing voice as well.
5 stars all the way.
1) Amazing voice, 2) faved, bookmarked and sent to all my friends.
Gorgeous voice, Skittle Sama.
And loved the song, btw, it's AWESOME!