This is awesome! The funky time signatures really make it sound like ULTRAKILL music. I think that bringing out the percussion some more, especially in the section at 2:57 (i really like that section), could further contribute to the ‘industrial’ vibe that the title gives. Great song overall! :)
this song is fun, i think its the high key, its sorta like the pvz soundtrack? i like how you're twisting the refrain the song like with the 12/8 part, the song doesn't get stale i like that! i really like the calm track because of the high key as i said, it feels mischevious i'd say., its just fun! i do feel like the instruments sound kind of the same, and when the song loops back from 10/4 to 7/8 it feels weird, i don't feel a transition, although even the best ultrakill songs get that feeling like altars of apostasy so eh, its just of note. if u have access to a clean guitar i think that would make calm compositions like this one pop more! i think i hear a distorted guitar but it doesn't feel right with the mood of the song. i have not seen the custom level so maybe it fits in this context (and it'd be right) but as is without knowing that, it feels weird to me. anyway i like what you did! edit: corrections for clarity
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This is awesome! The funky time signatures really make it sound like ULTRAKILL music. I think that bringing out the percussion some more, especially in the section at 2:57 (i really like that section), could further contribute to the ‘industrial’ vibe that the title gives. Great song overall! :)
I have no criticism to give, this is really good, i love all the different time signatures
I really don't know why but I have a natural tendency to switch time signatures in literally everything I make :)
This is amazing and I can't wait to see more music from you! Thank you TH-cam gods for recommending me this video
this song is fun, i think its the high key, its sorta like the pvz soundtrack? i like how you're twisting the refrain the song like with the 12/8 part, the song doesn't get stale i like that! i really like the calm track because of the high key as i said, it feels mischevious i'd say., its just fun! i do feel like the instruments sound kind of the same, and when the song loops back from 10/4 to 7/8 it feels weird, i don't feel a transition, although even the best ultrakill songs get that feeling like altars of apostasy so eh, its just of note. if u have access to a clean guitar i think that would make calm compositions like this one pop more! i think i hear a distorted guitar but it doesn't feel right with the mood of the song. i have not seen the custom level so maybe it fits in this context (and it'd be right) but as is without knowing that, it feels weird to me. anyway i like what you did!
edit: corrections for clarity
thank you for the feedback!! it means a lot
@@balloonwasp np! i'll be really looking forward to this next one!
Dang, weird tempo you already got me bobing my head as if I had a seizure