99 bottles of beer on the wall, original acoustic, Rachael Chatoor
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 4 ม.ค. 2008
- www.shawnlam.ca/jackfm/
THANKS KavernKitty, for putting this song on your show! You ROCK.
Early draft, of a new song. LYRICS BELOW..
"99 bottles of beer"
You think twice, before you call me
Then you don't even call at all.
All the good advice that surrounds me
Sends a warning now
That wakes my fears and doubts
Its like 99 bottles of beer on the wall
Look at what happens when one bottle falls
Sooner or later they're all coming down, and I'm giving up.
Going through the motions, steady on course
Not riding round in circles on a Carousel horse
Do we even consider the things we are giving up
I feel lonely cold and naked
I don't cry when I'm just fine
I don't know how I should take this
Its such a crying shame
That its all about the blame
And like 99 bottles of beer on the wall
Anything can happen when one bottle falls
Sooner or later they are all crashing down and were giving up
Everything in me is crying out loud
Everyone suffers when we all act so proud
Do we even consider the things we are giving up?
Message not so clear
Why are you not here
Tell me where you've gone
Is that so damn wrong?
Just think twice before you call me
If you even call at all
Cause I will suffer through this blindly
Find a silver lining hiding beneath the clouds - เพลง
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Lisa, THANK YOU, so very very much for coming by. Yep I wrote this, got a few more I am working on, and then yes, once I have all the songs I want, I will take them and record them properly!
HUGS to you, you are and OUTSTANDING talent, and I am so glad and honored that you stopped in.
Warmly, Rach~
High praise from you girl, I adore your videos, songs, voice, songwriting, playing etc. Thank you!
This is my favorite song. Such a powerful voice you have yet a very humble person you are,....
Rachael, You are absolutely awesome! Beautiful song; beautiful singer with beautiful voice sings a compelling story! You are the entire package, the real deal!! 5*****!!
Aloha to you too, and thank you very much. How lucky that you live in such a beautiful paradise, I like your channel!
Girl I love the way you sing, its nice to see you here, thank you for coming to commment!
Of course I had to go see your channel, tell me you are musical and I want to sit round the campfire with my guitar! Enjoyed your playing and singing, thanks so much for coming by~!! :)
I did, what a beautiful voice you have, wow, thanks for coming by and saying hi!
Really love your singing; there's strength and beauty in it.
That is such a huge compliment Paula! My head is all big and puffy now! :) ((hugs)) to you darlin! xoxox
amazing Rachel. All my love to You.
Very free spirited. Very cool. Very good smooth flowing performance. Thanx for posting.
So great Rachael! Your voice is just amazing. ❤️
I love this song.....!!!!!
Wow, what a great song.......I enjoyed!!!
Thanks, this is one of my favs, can't wait to record it.
this one is rocking, too. Great !!
Lots of power in that great voice! Love your videos!
I Got It Now! Man I Love Your Music...
Thats cool to hear Dale, because I adore your channel and dig your taste in music. I feel honored to be a fav!
Your TH-cam's Music Star's Vol.1 video has some great new talent which I have not come across before, thanks for the tips, they rock!
Simply Awesome, I love the song
We all thank you very much Dana! We really enjoyed watching your work and look forward to more!~ Rach :)
Oh yes, I remember you, you have a beautiful channel, with a great list of favorites! yay, we are already freinds and everything. he he he, warmly, Rach
Thanks so much soulsister, its nice to see you here, I have watched your vids, and I love your guitar. :)
Thank you so much Marcie! Hey I love that you sang desperado, that is one of my favorites!
I like this one :-) I really feel fortunate that I got to see you sing live...I look forward to seeing you do originals!
Great job. What a terrific voice
I never heard this before. I like it a lot. Great job! Buyz da Beer!
Man, definetley sung with great emotion full of passion.... Keep them coming... Oh thank KavernKitty for the bump your way! Peace
-Dave-
Your voice is very very nice ... it's very expressive. That's a nice melody too ... Some COOL Lyrics in the song TOO.
Thanks for Shairing,
David
Thanks, you too, I watched and commented on a few of your great vids, keep singing! :)
Wow, thank you so much for that! I appreciate it a lot. I will go wander over to your channel too and browse around!
Best, Rach
You have a lovely voice. Thanks to KK for featuring you.
Kav Kat's show sent me. Glad he did your great and fun too! Mahalo, from a new subscriber. Aloha! to you and family.
Keep them coming, love your style. You have an awesome voice!
Thanks Karen, I went to your channel, I love your voice! You do some of my favorite songs. :)
I love your voice and style.
that was a ride from goose bumps, loving, crying to laughter at the end... yeah, something like that, would win anyones heart... i am kinda known for compliments in my comments but, you have left me speechless, had me crying, let me see the tender and loving mother that you are, had me crying again, as well as, you threw in a laugh or, two... now i will just throw my two lighters in the air...
Love, Light,
Peace and
ALL Blessing
~michael~
i love this soo much
Thanks a lot! Hey it was so great to watch your vid with Betty Boop in it, lol, been so long since I saw that cartoon :).
the more i listen to it and the more i like it ^^
I like your sound, great song.
Great Rachael!
This is GREAT!
Beautiful voice!
That was really great. Thanks.
he he, how very nice of you to say!
I love this song xD you ROCK !!!
very beautiful indeed
Thanks so much that means a lot, I checked your channel and I LOVE your music. You are truly talented! :)
Fantastic song !!!
God bless, from one musician to another :)
~Chris
Really like your awesome style..Rachael! =)
You're very talented!!!
Very clever...nice song. Great vocals too, of course.
Wow, thank you so much, you noticed the things in my lyrics, that I work particularly hard on trying to achieve, I'm still working on it all too, but thanks for picking up on those things. Thank you. :) Love your stuff by the way! Rach
Hi Wendy, your welcome, you are a terrific singer, your voice is so very pretty, it was a natural reaction that I am sure anyone who hears you sing will have! :)
Great song, love the lyrics. Really must have a listen to your other videos. 5*
Cool, I just stumbled across your channel and found out you are the one beat my friend Lai in the talent contest.Congratulations, I watched the outside link...very good.
Aloha from Hawaii,
Thomas
Great song!
Absolutely fantastic. Loved it!
Matt :)
Hey thanks very much to you new friend! SO glad you could visit from so far away! :)
wow! excellent. very well done. Gary
Very nice! !"!!!
Very Nice! Good Job. 5 Stars And Favorites
Dale
very nice... I first saw you with Tal Bachman you were great!
This is great, such good solid voice. You are great to watch perform to and such great emotion in your lyrics and singing :o)
Thanks so very much!
yep like your voice
nice and melodic ' good contrast in softness and power- liked the concept of lyrics
good one
shine on !!
What a voice, awesome. Great singing.
5*
Robin :o)
Thanks to you peace!
Excellent performance! :D
your voice is just amazing!! so strong! you're such a great singer =D
Thank you so much, I sincerley appreciate it!
This is my fave version Rach (although love you and lace sliding!). But in this version, one can really hear the emotion. 5*
HI Dave, yes, I can not thank KK enough, it was so cool to find out he liked the song :).
Thanks, and by the way, I love your video of photography of the ice storm. Wow, you have a great talent, just beautiful.
Hey You, Beautiful. Loved it. You have a sweet voice.. Subscribed! :) WOohooo keep them videos coming! :)
Really nice song! :) You wrote this? Woohooo I could picture what it would sound like Recording in a studio. :)
Hugs to you Sharon! ;)
this is a nice song!
i like your lyrics
Rachael, these lyrics are very good. The delivery is strong but has such nice vocal variation also. When you get kudos from ReinaDelCid and lisalavie1, you know you've got something!
I realize this was a quickie demo... the room's acoustics seemed to bring a hollowness. I'm sure you'll work through that... you deserves better! Very good!
Best of luck with SOL!
Wow. Wonderful talent. Where have you been hiding? I love you. :-)
Ok, notes taken, Thank you :) will keep all in mind. Compression? LOL when I record it next there will be a pro twiddling dials and sliding the levers, and I will know the song better ;) (I just wrote it and filmed it today), it is more of a 'scratch' demo than anything! Appreciate it!
Bello il testo della tua canzone e buona anche la musica.
Thanks , you are right, me too busy worrying about the 'video', forgot about that. I sing live, you would think I 'd have remembered something so key. LOL. I just got the camera in the fall, its all new to me really. (see more next post...)
Comments help me make the next one better, gives me things to focus on. Check drumsetc's comments below, and then see my most recent song, Paris Hilton. I considered his words carefully, and the result is an improvement. :) Rach.
Thanks Ethan!
Thank You rachael i Did Favor This Video But Its Not Showing Up On my Page Ive Been Having Trouble With That Lately. uuuuurr Im Going To Keep On Favoring This Video If It Takes All Night....lol
Thanks Trevor! :)
Nice!! *****
Thanks, you have great stuff going on your channel too, subbed ya~ KK is the bomb!
Cool, thanks so much :) Rach~
Don't listen to those haters, your great!! NICE!
Thank you! :)
99 bottles of beer on the wall, 99 bottles of beer. Take one down and pass it around, 98 bottles of beer on the wall.
*blush*, thank you :)
:) :) thank you.
hola. me encantas realmente tu musica dice mucho saludos,de mexico soy cantaautor mike tuesti, me encantas me gustaria conocerte,
Whoa.
Help, I need a beer... good grief.
yeh this one is great 5*****
love light and peace
trevor sizzle
Kramer from Seinfeld brought me here.
a shits pretty dope i like it
Stark! 5*****