Critique & edit an 80+ GAMSAT Section 2 essay with me (Task B)

[@louisa6432]

Thanks Kate, what a gift you are providing :)

[@furbytvtv]

Aw thanks Louisa, you’re very welcome 😊

[@nathanhumphreys7206]

That was fantastic!! 😁

[@furbytvtv]

Aw thanks Nathan! Glad you think so :DD

[@Miss_AnGel_]

I think by saying "we stole the land" it does show respect, a sense of understanding and ownership instead of ignorance :) - think it was a good idea IMO