Could it be - Original Song by Gary Toward

Well the votes are in it’s the original first. Will post the cover at the weekend.
I wrote this song very quickly and wanted to write something lighter and breathier. I then added the chorus which I think knits the song together. This song is about having confidence and picking your moment. I am really keen to know what you think. I don’t think the song is 100% finished as when I do get around to adding other instruments would like an instrumental in there somewhere.
Please share and let me know what you think x Thanks for all your support and here’s “could it be”

[@SeveGuitar]

Really nice song ❤

[@garytowardmusic]

Thanks. Appreciate your comment and glad you enjoyed ❤it

[@swain99]

BIG👍 No16 👍 Original song, it sounds terrific Gary👌👌
Sung with so much emotion 👏👏👏
🎸🎶🎸…..Victor👍👍👍
👍 Subscribed 👍

[@OlivierBillaut]

Wonderful creation and musical production. Much inspired and talented. Full of poetry and spirit. A real peaceful and relaxing pleasure to listen. Good for the mind and the ears. Excellent singer and guitar player with a lot of feeling and sense of groove. Unique creative style. Big big big like for this fantastic perform and brilliant sharing. Splendid and luminous.

[@garytowardmusic]

Thanks so much for your support it is really appreciated :)

[@Steak-da]

Amazing dad good job

[@garytowardmusic]

Thanks my boy x

[@VolkerundWallyMusic]

Very good sung great sound

[@garytowardmusic]

Thanks so much, am pleased with this one

[@GlennErikMathisen]

This is beautiful!

[@garytowardmusic]

Thanks So much

[@thierrybouchy]

A sweet and relaxing song very cool to listen to. Your voice is very nice. Just you and the guitar is already very good to me. If you add some other instruments, it could be strings and maybe a some soft percussion. I suggest you to put lyrics in the description for people who don't understand english 100 %. Have a very nice sunday. Musical friendships from France. Thierry 🍀🐞🎵🎶

[@garytowardmusic]

Yeah a great idea will do that going forward. Thanks once again for your input and support

[@garyhaseman4806]

Great original song Gary - I think there is a vulnerability in your writing and performance which makes it refreshing and real.

[@garytowardmusic]

Thanks Gary, I do write about a lot of personal stuff so glad it comes across like that.

[@Joe.Doucette]

Sounds like a fine song the way it is, Gary.
Sure, more instruments and such would add to it but it's good the way it is, too.
Maybe consider "clean" like this to start then add something like bass, etc., then end clean.
Too much isn't always good.
But it's your song so have fun with it and share when finished. :)

[@garytowardmusic]

Thanks Joe, I am really pleased you liked it. I have been wanting to branch out to play live and I think sometimes adding too much is going to take away from the live performance when you just play it on your own. May add some bass though if I record it for an EP. Cheers for your support

[@stanislav182000]

Nice song, welldone! Sometimes your voice reminds me Roland Orzabal

[@garytowardmusic]

Thanks so much