4 Storytelling Tips You Don’t Want, But Need

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 12 พ.ย. 2024

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  • @nainakaushik3318
    @nainakaushik3318 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

    Them: kill your-
    Me: say no more, I have been waiting to go ballistic for a long time

    • @FifiMangaka
      @FifiMangaka  4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      LOOOOL

    • @I5g58
      @I5g58 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      What are you, gege

    • @nainakaushik3318
      @nainakaushik3318 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@I5g58 🙂

  • @dragonbane3646
    @dragonbane3646 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I was always told that "show don't tell" mostly applies to emotional scenes, so that the reader can infer how each character is feeling based on how they react without you telling them how each character feels.

  • @I5g58
    @I5g58 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    This advice is mostly things I already knew about to some degree. However, I appreciate how analytical, non judgmental, and overall earnest the tone of this video is. It serves as a good reminder.

    • @FifiMangaka
      @FifiMangaka  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thanks a bunch! Really appreciate that :)

  • @dreamermj
    @dreamermj 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Great tips, the second one makes me think of the problem with 2 anime I've seen recently (both based around tcg games) where the protagonist is new to the game but wins every single match they're in which just made me not care.

  • @mayasarah5648
    @mayasarah5648 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Not me introducing a character only to kill them in the next chapter just for the plot.
    "James, the selfless and courageous son and brother, only 15 years of age, tragically passed away while saving his family. His bravery will forever be remembered, and his sacrifice will never be forgotten."
    He was killed by a dragon to save his siblings. Eaten in half but manage to stab the dragon's brain from inside its mouth.😅😅😅
    On wattpad "The Royal Gambit :The curse of the monster-king"

  • @Nailanos
    @Nailanos 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Love the video!! Question : what software are you using? 👀

  • @noush1e
    @noush1e 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    what brush do you use for your comic esp in this video? its so nice! i love the tips and they will totally help my stories in the future!

    • @FifiMangaka
      @FifiMangaka  3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thanks so much! Glad you found it useful! :) The brush I’m using is the “Cartoon Ink MN Pen” in the Clip Studio asset store!