Transform Your Writing Game: How to Craft Powerful Sentences

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  • @murtazarasool6395
    @murtazarasool6395 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Her content is just incredibly impactful and succinct.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thank you so much, Murtaza; we really appreciate that!

    • @erinlebacqz5507
      @erinlebacqz5507 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Thanks so much! ❤

    • @murtazarasool6395
      @murtazarasool6395 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@erinlebacqz5507 doer, followed by Action verb... That sets your teaching streets apart from the rest, and on top of it your magical voice keeps English enthusiasts glued to your videos..

    • @murtazarasool6395
      @murtazarasool6395 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@HighValueWriting thanks Dear , for pinning it ❤️❤️❤️

  • @paulfernandes6843
    @paulfernandes6843 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Great k job I am impressed

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Much appreciated, Paul-welcome to the channel!

  • @Master_Pogi23
    @Master_Pogi23 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    very powerful content! 💪🏻

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Much appreciated, Master Pogi! 😄

  • @alexbinai2322
    @alexbinai2322 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Love to learn more of this lessons

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Hello and thank you for your visit to our channel, and your kind comment! We will definitely think about doing some more videos on sentence structure, and you might also like this one that covers a few kinds of sentences: th-cam.com/video/SUxjMvGEtcs/w-d-xo.html

  • @askanjana
    @askanjana 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Super useful content. To the point

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  7 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Thanks so much for your comment, @askanjana! We are so glad you're enjoying the videos. :)

    • @Christopher_HVW
      @Christopher_HVW 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Thank you very much. We love to get feedback like this.

    • @Librarian_Dude
      @Librarian_Dude 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Yes, Erin's videos are great.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thanks, Librarian Dude!

  • @bathos22
    @bathos22 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    You are doing the Lord's work. So impactful.🙏🏽

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I appreciate that, friend! Thanks for your support.

  • @ngwamalfred8151
    @ngwamalfred8151 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    My love l can't imagine how much this lesson has help me with the reading module in ielts . Knowing the structure of a given sentence the key to success.🎉🎉🎉🎉

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      That's wonderful to hear! Thank you for sharing. I'm so glad the video is helpful for both writing and IELTS reading tests! :)

  • @MrShankarsa
    @MrShankarsa ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I apreciated

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you; I am glad the lesson was helpful, @MrShankarsa!

  • @WorldInterestingNews
    @WorldInterestingNews 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Very good tips in english writing... I like it very much...

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you very much for your comment, friends at WIN!

  • @Christopher_Resonetics
    @Christopher_Resonetics ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I love all the great comments here. It shows that you're really reaching people with your videos. Keep up the great work!

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thank you so much! Isn't it wonderful to hear from so many folks around the world-so kind! :)

  • @pushpatewatia159
    @pushpatewatia159 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Very nice and lesson giving video

  • @tuanhoang6536
    @tuanhoang6536 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I have difficulty in writing English.Could you make videos on adverbials and absolute phrases.Thank you so much

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Hi Tuan, thanks for visiting the channel and for your comment. I will put adverbials and absolute phrases on the list, and start creating a video soon! :)

  • @antoniorosario5912
    @antoniorosario5912 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thanks for your video.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You're welcome, Antonio; thanks for being here at the channel!

  • @tapenisataufoou5265
    @tapenisataufoou5265 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thanks very much

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  ปีที่แล้ว

      You are welcome, Tapenisa! Thanks for checking out the channel.

  • @priscoparral3475
    @priscoparral3475 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    thanks a ton for this very useful video, I found it highly important.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Thank you, Prisco; I'm glad you found it helpful!

  • @pervaizyaseeni8937
    @pervaizyaseeni8937 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Thank you so much for developing the video about the sentence. I watched the video three times with full concentration. The video (How to Write Powerful Sentences) developed and prepared very well. I liked that the sentences must answer at least two wh-questions (who/what) and it is much better to explain all five questions (who, what, when, where, why) . The video talked about active and passive voice with details and there were enough examples regarding active and passive voice. It is much appreciated to touch types of sentences (simple, compound, complex and compound and complex) because they help writers to bring variations in their writing. I am looking forward to watching upcoming videos.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Thank you for your feedback, Pervaiz. I'm glad the examples were helpful! Great idea about creating a video regarding sentence variety. I'll get that one out soon, along with paragraph-writing!

  • @helechoale1979
    @helechoale1979 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Thank you for the video of sentence structure! 🙏🏽🙏🏽

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      You are very welcome! Thanks for your comment.

  • @tleales
    @tleales 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you! Your explanations were helpful, informative, and concise.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thank you, Theo; I'm happy to hear the explanations were helpful and useful!

  • @pervaizyaseeni8937
    @pervaizyaseeni8937 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you so much for sharing useful information. Keep shinning.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thank you Pervaiz! I look forward to hearing any questions or examples from viewers! :)

  • @pervaizyaseeni8937
    @pervaizyaseeni8937 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Thanks for providing clear examples, what are some easy ways that help us in choosing appropriate words that fit the educational context?

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Great question; I think it can be quite difficult. Usually, when I am not sure how formal or complex my words should be (which should depend on what's best for my reader), I will try to "mirror" what I see from others. If someone I'm emailing with, or a client, or a textbook, or a website uses a certain kind of language, you can often then adapt your own to reflect that.

    • @pervaizyaseeni8937
      @pervaizyaseeni8937 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@HighValueWriting Thanks

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      You are welcome! This question really points out how each industry and culture will often have their own way of using certain words.

  • @salimabul-bashar3715
    @salimabul-bashar3715 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Thank you for this amazing informative lesson.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      You're welcome, Salim; thank you for your kind comment. Next up will be a video on writing strong paragraphs. :)

  • @nhavy364
    @nhavy364 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I DO LOVE YOUUU 💕

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thanks for being here at the High-Value Writing channel, and for your kind comment!💜

  • @younis9545
    @younis9545 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Thank you so much for making this video on my demand. 😊 I would also like you to do a video on bringing Clarity to your writing. You know I have a problem not being able to convey my ideas with a certain clarity and all the times I want to say one thing I end up saying other. I just wonder how not to make my readers feel confused reading my texts. 😊

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Hi there, glad you enjoyed it! Great idea about writing with clarity. I will create a new video on that soon. In the meantime, maybe these three will be helpful (if you haven't watched them yet): th-cam.com/video/H3tw-qqnwj4/w-d-xo.html & th-cam.com/video/hS5OflhlHpM/w-d-xo.html & th-cam.com/video/Y0gOvl99Qes/w-d-xo.html. Thanks for your comment as always! :)

    • @younis9545
      @younis9545 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Thank you for replying. Well, I believe I am aware much of this advice in these videos (I have watched your videos and have got my insights of these rules from those). Yet, I find it too hard to write something sensible. And by my writing insensibly I don't mean my writing doesn't make sense at the sentence level but it is normally at the paragraph level. Moreover, I find it hard to generate ideas.

    • @younis9545
      @younis9545 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      And what do you think, does every effective writing needs to be clear, or does every clear writing need to be effective? I mean what comes first clarity or effectiveness?

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi Younis, I'm sorry this reply is so late. We now have a video on writing paragraphs too: th-cam.com/video/_53AGJMkGas/w-d-xo.html
      I hope you will enjoy it! :)

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi again! I'm sorry, this reply was hidden and I just saw it now for some reason!
      I think the 2 go together. We need clarity in order to be effective. If the message isn't clear, it can't become effective. So I would say we want to write a draft, then go back and focus on clarity, then go back and focus on adding any detail needed for effectiveness.
      Thanks for your insightful questions! I'll check out the responses more quickly now!

  • @saidfarid6382
    @saidfarid6382 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Hello professor
    Thank you so much for your priceless advice and interesting guidance. I love your best method of teaching and excellent explanation. I really appreciate your job. I wish you peace and happiness under the sky of prosperity.
    Your follower from Algeria.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Thank you for your kind comment and support, Said. Wishing you the same, my friend from Algeria.

    • @Christopher_Resonetics
      @Christopher_Resonetics ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Wonderful comment. We need more kindness like this. Thank you!

  • @Jay_Goga_channel_live
    @Jay_Goga_channel_live 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Excellent video mam , next video about ielts writing general topic 1 -- letter how to write ,

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Thank you! Next up will be writing paragraphs, which you can use to create good writing on the ielts exam.

  • @apanalam424
    @apanalam424 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Just captaviting information

  • @ladallaprashanthi40601
    @ladallaprashanthi40601 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Powerful sentence like this 🤠. ... But this video was most useful to me ☺️☺️

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      🤣 Yes, that's great to hear! I'm glad this was useful. Thanks for your comment.

  • @magictouch3944
    @magictouch3944 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    can u focus in ielts writing please

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Thank you for the request! Yes, I will get into some IELTS videos this fall. Best wishes!

  • @syedaamina4912
    @syedaamina4912 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Happy to find you ❤️

  • @farooqpetersaidi7784
    @farooqpetersaidi7784 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Wow❤, u r a brilliant teacher❤❤

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Thank you so much, Farooq! So glad you enjoyed the video. 🤗

    • @farooqpetersaidi7784
      @farooqpetersaidi7784 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Recently, I watched a certain video explaining about PEE Method of Paragraph writing in academics, so the last E is for Elaboration, So I am finding it very difficult to do Elaboration for various paragraph types, can u do a video on that , plus Transition paragraph sentences and lead-in
      I am from Malawi, I do enjoy your videos, keep it up♥️❤️♥️

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Hi Farooq! Thanks for your message. I think this is a GREAT idea for a video topic! I will make a video on how to use the PEE process very soon-with some special emphasis on how to do elaboration. :)

    • @farooqpetersaidi7784
      @farooqpetersaidi7784 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@HighValueWriting I can't wait💞

  • @kyun1456
    @kyun1456 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    plzzz make a vedio using present participle phrase in advanced structure in detail...make sentence similar to that of book ,newspaper etc ...thanks

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's a great idea, Kyun; yes, will work on that video soon!

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Kyun1456, I realized I have not made your requested video yet. I will work on some more advanced structure videos. However, I did come out with one about sentence variety; maybe you will find it helpful! :) Here's the link: th-cam.com/video/QZUhby3Gssw/w-d-xo.html

  • @nsp74
    @nsp74 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    ισχυρη προταση

  • @mdjamalmdjamalkhan9130
    @mdjamalmdjamalkhan9130 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Good

  • @haroldwilhelmsen2902
    @haroldwilhelmsen2902 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you get back to me.

    • @HighValueWriting
      @HighValueWriting  2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Best wishes, Harold; I hope you found the video helpful.