This video got recommended to me in my feed (good to see the new TH-cam algo at work) Enjoyed watching your video. One piece of feedback from a random stranger’s POV: I actually preferred your Notion “one paragraph” opening statement. “Endurance competition being a vehicle for personal development” It gets to the heart of a broader problem that folks are trying to solve for themselves: personal development. Personal development is a struggle for nearly every human on earth. It seems your endurance training journey improved your own personal development in various aspects of life along the process. Self-confidence Collaboration Resilience Overcoming obstacles Etc. Etc. Then you can structure the stories in the book with what area of personal development they helped improve. Just food for thought. Good luck man and subscribed so I can see the journey 🫡
And I would put your background as Chapter 2 if you need to share your “why” of your thought process. Share the craziest story upfront, no background is needed. Your actions and reactions in those moments will show the value of the endurance training in real-time. Then you share background on how you got to this moment and why you sought this out… lol I’m typing this as I watch the video in real-time. So it may not make as much sense as I think it does. ✌️
Chill. You look way to fresh! Can't wait to dive in and see how I am apply this to my first book...
Church fit been going off!! Thank you for noticing 🤣💪
This video got recommended to me in my feed (good to see the new TH-cam algo at work)
Enjoyed watching your video.
One piece of feedback from a random stranger’s POV:
I actually preferred your Notion “one paragraph” opening statement.
“Endurance competition being a vehicle for personal development”
It gets to the heart of a broader problem that folks are trying to solve for themselves: personal development.
Personal development is a struggle for nearly every human on earth.
It seems your endurance training journey improved your own personal development in various aspects of life along the process.
Self-confidence
Collaboration
Resilience
Overcoming obstacles
Etc. Etc.
Then you can structure the stories in the book with what area of personal development they helped improve.
Just food for thought.
Good luck man and subscribed so I can see the journey 🫡
And I would put your background as Chapter 2 if you need to share your “why” of your thought process.
Share the craziest story upfront, no background is needed. Your actions and reactions in those moments will show the value of the endurance training in real-time.
Then you share background on how you got to this moment and why you sought this out…
lol I’m typing this as I watch the video in real-time. So it may not make as much sense as I think it does. ✌️
@@RantPocalypse amazing feedback, thank you!!