Hello mam, today i completed my Ielts test from Bangladesh and in writing module i got a discussion led topic. I followed your video in which u described it so easily. Hoping for a good result. Thank you again.♥️
Sorry, I forgot to mention my score. I got an overall score of 8 with 9 & 8 in Listening & Reading respectively & 7.5 in both Speaking & Writing. Thanks a lot to you Lilie mam for giving me the confidence to score good in writing. This Ielts score have been life changing for me as I am now completing my higher study in Canada. Definitely gonna recommend anyone to follow this channel if you wanna score high in writing module. To everyone, never stop dreaming! Thanks again!😀
@@LilieIELTS Unfortunately It seems that I can't clearly recollect my task 2 question that day . I believe it had something to do with social media and face-to-face interactions but that's all I can recall. 😅😅
You r doing great job for us, thanks a lot! 😊. One personal suggestion, pls make video on connecter such as although, despite, even though... and many more; however, i should be in perfect manner with suitable examples.
In today’s world, a significant number of people who have mental and physical issues are trying to use non-traditional methods and medicines instead of seeing a doctor. I believe that, people can take advantage of both trying alternative medicines and arranging appointment with their doctor. There are several number of positive developments using natural medicines and also home-made treatments which can people benefit. Firstly, seeing a doctor could be a costy way to be cured. For instance, if there is any way to relieve your pain away by not going to doctor could make you spend less money eventually. Secondly, natural pills or herbal based products are not as contaminant as regular medicines. To clarify, there are number of processes that regular medinices go through and this can cause fatal damage in the long term period to environment. Finally, natural medicines are more natural than the products which manufactured at lab. On the other hand, traditional methods in health industry also have potential to deteriorate the patiences status and so remain massive damages. For instance, one case happened recently In Turkey, a man who had backpain went to the his uncle those who claimed he could cure his back but he actually made him paralyze. Another fact I can mention is, I believe, people should get cured to professionals who take its training instead of people who have no knowledge about human health. To conlude, I believe that people can choose both ways to be examined and find the best option for themselves.
woah!! You honestly made it so easy to understand! Thank you so much! I wonder though if i could use modern medicine\traditional medicine instead of a conventional medicine? Are not those the same thing?
This is a quite extra ranged teaching methods , that is perfectly managed. It's completely a guideline for all, Mam I am from 🇳🇵 I have problems in listening parts please guidelines me for my best score
Thank you for your very helpful videos. Should we first write the two main paragraphs and then finish Introduction and Conclusion? As I saw this kind of order in your videos
Please, more videos on question type agree or disagree, to what extent you agree or disagree and negative or positive development because you videos are informative as well as I love the way you develop the idea.
Hi Lillie I wanna ask about your score explainer.. "in task 2 every paragraph has one main topic" . Do you mean If one paragraph have 2 topic discussed, it will cause lower score ? I think in band score description, there is no that rule, which should be mention only one topic.. let discuss more.. thank you
Hai, I have a question, is “ do you think this is a positive or negative development “ the same as “ is this negative or positive development “ ? Are they both opinion questions? Thank you very much
Thank you!😊 FANTASTIC as usual.👏 I think lot of people won't even be able to come up with the terms or names like "Herbs". That's the problem with Unfamiliar topics. But it's something that cannot be learned by watching videos and requires actual studying. Although still something can be written, but that may not be strong enough to prove a point and examiner comment on the sample answers of Cambridge books' say that strong ideas do matter, to get a high score. What do you think?
You're welcome. Yes, I agree. Even though this is a language test, knowledge does matter. I used to listen to WSJ tech news briefing every day and it has helped so much in terms of idea generation.
I used to follow IELTS advantage before, He said, make passage simple as much as you can and today i've got you. Is it important to describe negative aspect if i agree with the positive development? Some teachers say that i have to describe both part.?☹️
No, if you think it's a positive development, then you shouldn't say it's negative. What you should do is to include both alternative treatments and conventional treatments in your discussion. How do you think of IELTS advantage? I'm curious. They're so big.
@@LilieIELTS I think, IELTS advantage is one of the best channels for writing module, because i learned many things from there without any charge and, i used to write very high words to impress the examiner instead of good communications, and make passage more complicated. Truly speaking, i found writing task-1 really easier for me from your channel.
Thnx , Actually I used in the introduction only as It is an acknowledged fact that most of the people want to live in the metropolitan cities in order to have a better future and better quality of life. Alas! they are not aware about the fact that the quality of life in the urban cities is declining in this contemporary era due to rising work load on dwellers and upsurging environmental pollution .
Thank u so so so so much. Sending u love and light ❤️❤️❤️❤️ I hope that you can help us with reading please, especially with headings. Best and kind regards ❤️
Hello, this is an excellent video for everyone who strives to write a suitable structure for a type of question "Do you think A or B ?" However, I am afraid you have misread some definitions: the meaning of the word "medicine" is the same as the meaning of the word "treatment". In addition, using medication (drugs) is a type of medicine/treatment to treat the disease for patients. +) alternative medicine, integrative medicine, complementary medicine: using acupuncture, chiropractic medicine, magnetic field therapy, herbal medicine
+) conventional medicine, mainstream medicine, traditional therapy, , allopathic medicine, biomedicine, , orthodox medicine, and Western medicine: using drugs, radiation or surgery
Hi Excuse me why you didnt talk about the other side some believe its positive ,i was taught i should give reasons for both side then refute the side is opposite my view.
No, it isn't.😊 It's 274 words. You can read the essay on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/nowadays-a-growing-number-of-people-with-health-problems-are-trying-alternative-medicines-and-treatments/
Hello mam, today i completed my Ielts test from Bangladesh and in writing module i got a discussion led topic. I followed your video in which u described it so easily. Hoping for a good result. Thank you again.♥️
Don't forget to come back and tell us your score. All the best.💜
what was score , you didn't share
Hii I'm from bd too. Kemon score ashlo?
Sorry, I forgot to mention my score. I got an overall score of 8 with 9 & 8 in Listening & Reading respectively & 7.5 in both Speaking & Writing. Thanks a lot to you Lilie mam for giving me the confidence to score good in writing. This Ielts score have been life changing for me as I am now completing my higher study in Canada. Definitely gonna recommend anyone to follow this channel if you wanna score high in writing module. To everyone, never stop dreaming! Thanks again!😀
I am awe struck after watching this video… the hard work, dedication and talent used in your videos is mind blowing
Thank you! Cheers!😊♥
@@LilieIELTSagreed
Thanks so much for your helpful videos. I got a 7 at writing by following your tips and advice 🥰🥰🥰
Congratulations! That's amazing. Do you mind sharing your task 2 question here?
@@LilieIELTS Unfortunately It seems that I can't clearly recollect my task 2 question that day . I believe it had something to do with social media and face-to-face interactions but that's all I can recall. 😅😅
Thanks anyway. Wishing you a bright future.💜
I still can not believe this is free content, thanks a million!
Welcome! More freebies here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
Today is my exam and I am preparing myself by watching her vdo please pray for me
Best of luck ✊ and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.
Your explanation made the topic so easy.Thanks
You r doing great job for us, thanks a lot! 😊. One personal suggestion, pls make video on connecter such as although, despite, even though... and many more; however, i should be in perfect manner with suitable examples.
Noted😊
Thanks again
In today’s world, a significant number of people who have mental and physical issues are trying to use non-traditional methods and medicines instead of seeing a doctor. I believe that, people can take advantage of both trying alternative medicines and arranging appointment with their doctor.
There are several number of positive developments using natural medicines and also home-made treatments which can people benefit. Firstly, seeing a doctor could be a costy way to be cured. For instance, if there is any way to relieve your pain away by not going to doctor could make you spend less money eventually. Secondly, natural pills or herbal based products are not as contaminant as regular medicines. To clarify, there are number of processes that regular medinices go through and this can cause fatal damage in the long term period to environment. Finally, natural medicines are more natural than the products which manufactured at lab.
On the other hand, traditional methods in health industry also have potential to deteriorate the patiences status and so remain massive damages. For instance, one case happened recently In Turkey, a man who had backpain went to the his uncle those who claimed he could cure his back but he actually made him paralyze. Another fact I can mention is, I believe, people should get cured to professionals who take its training instead of people who have no knowledge about human health.
To conlude, I believe that people can choose both ways to be examined and find the best option for themselves.
Hlo mam, i will be glad if you answer my question.🙏🙏
In which type of essay we have to go for partial and when we have to stick only with one view ??
woah!! You honestly made it so easy to understand! Thank you so much!
I wonder though if i could use modern medicine\traditional medicine instead of a conventional medicine? Are not those the same thing?
This is a quite extra ranged teaching methods , that is perfectly managed.
It's completely a guideline for all, Mam I am from 🇳🇵 I have problems in listening parts please guidelines me for my best score
Thanks for the kind words. I used to listen to podcasts every day. I guess that helped in the listening part.
Which program do you use for your videos?
Thank you for your very helpful videos. Should we first write the two main paragraphs and then finish Introduction and Conclusion? As I saw this kind of order in your videos
Hi, I took the computer-delivered test and that's how I wrote the essay. But it can be hard to do so in the paper-based test.
@@LilieIELTS Understood. I also take the computer-delivered test! I think this method can be helpful.
Please, more videos on question type agree or disagree, to what extent you agree or disagree and negative or positive development because you videos are informative as well as I love the way you develop the idea.
Hi, for now, you can read sample essays of those types on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
Hi Lillie I wanna ask about your score explainer.. "in task 2 every paragraph has one main topic" . Do you mean If one paragraph have 2 topic discussed, it will cause lower score ? I think in band score description, there is no that rule, which should be mention only one topic.. let discuss more.. thank you
Which way will allow you to develop your ideas more fully: one idea or two in a paragraph?
@@LilieIELTS 2 idea in 1 paragrapgh
@@ulfatumahmuda3938 one idea in one paragraph. This video may help: th-cam.com/video/0JJHbByTYis/w-d-xo.html
Thank you so much, ma'am can you please make a video for me about writing task 2 for how can establish our idea in body paragraphs 1 and 2, please.
Hi, thanks for the suggestion. What do you mean by " *establish* our idea"?
Hai, I have a question, is “ do you think this is a positive or negative development “ the same as “ is this negative or positive development “ ? Are they both opinion questions? Thank you very much
Yes and yes.😊
@@LilieIELTS thank you very much
A very systematic approach to answer the question effectively 👍👍👍
Glad you think so!😊
Please,can you use traditional medicine in place of the alternative medicine?
Thank you!😊
FANTASTIC as usual.👏
I think lot of people won't even be able to come up with the terms or names like "Herbs". That's the problem with Unfamiliar topics. But it's something that cannot be learned by watching videos and requires actual studying. Although still something can be written, but that may not be strong enough to prove a point and examiner comment on the sample answers of Cambridge books' say that strong ideas do matter, to get a high score.
What do you think?
You're welcome. Yes, I agree. Even though this is a language test, knowledge does matter. I used to listen to WSJ tech news briefing every day and it has helped so much in terms of idea generation.
@@LilieIELTS Thanks again, I'll try that.
I want to ask you a question? Why didn't you add thesis statement in this essay ?
I used to follow IELTS advantage before, He said, make passage simple as much as you can and today i've got you.
Is it important to describe negative aspect if i agree with the positive development? Some teachers say that i have to describe both part.?☹️
No, if you think it's a positive development, then you shouldn't say it's negative. What you should do is to include both alternative treatments and conventional treatments in your discussion. How do you think of IELTS advantage? I'm curious. They're so big.
@@LilieIELTS I think, IELTS advantage is one of the best channels for writing module, because i learned many things from there without any charge and, i used to write very high words to impress the examiner instead of good communications, and make passage more complicated. Truly speaking, i found writing task-1 really easier for me from your channel.
im sitting for the paper based exam , so how should I connect my PARA1 AND PARA2 with INTRODUCTION like ?
Hi there,
Can we use sentences consisting of exclamation mark in task 2 ?
Yes, but don't over use them.
Thnx , Actually I used in the introduction only as
It is an acknowledged fact that most of the people want to live in the metropolitan cities in order to have a better future and better quality of life. Alas! they are not aware about the fact that the quality of life in the urban cities is declining in this contemporary era due to rising work load on dwellers and upsurging environmental pollution .
Not like that.😱 Better change it to something that can express your opinion like "i believe" or "in my opinion".
Ok Ma'am Thanks so much
Thank u so so so so much. Sending u love and light ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I hope that you can help us with reading please, especially with headings.
Best and kind regards ❤️
Appreciate the support. 😊
Does it mean that for this type of question, your two body paragraphs should be whether it is a positive or a negative development?
Simple and to the point. Love from Sri Lanka ❤
Glad that you think so.😊
Many many thanks to make hard things easy. Expecting more videos.
Sure 👍
Hello, this is an excellent video for everyone who strives to write a suitable structure for a type of question "Do you think A or B ?"
However, I am afraid you have misread some definitions: the meaning of the word "medicine" is the same as the meaning of the word "treatment". In addition, using medication (drugs) is a type of medicine/treatment to treat the disease for patients.
+) alternative medicine, integrative medicine, complementary medicine: using acupuncture, chiropractic medicine, magnetic field therapy, herbal medicine
+) conventional medicine, mainstream medicine, traditional therapy, , allopathic medicine, biomedicine, , orthodox medicine, and Western medicine: using drugs, radiation or surgery
must we take one side only? can we not choose a middle ground? can we not conclude that the topic has both negatives and positives?
Hi, I haven't tried your middle-ground strategy on actually exams so I'm not sure if it works or not.
I feel so lucky to have found your channel 😍
Glad that you found it.😊
that was awesome as always thank you so much
Hi
Excuse me why you didnt talk about the other side some believe its positive ,i was taught i should give reasons for both side then refute the side is opposite my view.
Hi, for this type of question, it's best to stick to only one side.
Hey mam can we write 'abovementioned' or' above mentioned'.. Which is right??
Both "above mentioned" and "mentioned above" are correct.
@@LilieIELTS Thanks a bunch mam....☺️🤗 You are angel for us.... Where are you from....?
You're welcome. I'm from China.
You just saved me. Love you Lili
Mam, if i choose positive side, do i have to write only the positive sides on both body paragraph?
Sorry for the late reply. You shouldn't completely ignore "visiting their usual doctor". This video may help: th-cam.com/video/edLuMiCUzlQ/w-d-xo.html
Your channel is awesome and you are a perfect tutor .
Thank you so much 😀
Lilie, you're wonderful! Your teachings are perfect and correct, more knowledge and wisdom. Love you!
one of the hardest task ever
I agree.😉
Can we use Different instead of alternatives..
No.
Thank you lilie❤❤.
thank you so much!!
Very helpful thank you 😊
Glad it was helpful!😊 And thanks for watching.
Thanks for your useful channel
Thanks and welcome.
Thanks, Lillie😍
Glad you liked it!😊
Alternative medication
Hi mam how are you?. Please make a sentences structure class for brand 8 essay.
Thanks for the idea. I'll give it a try in the future.
If I'll be lucky enough to get the same topic I copy and paste definitely ...😂😂😂
Nice tutorial..
Many many thanks😊
Take a love from my heart❤️
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Thanks for the sweet words.
Thanks so much mam .🙃🙂💞
Most welcome 😊
Thanks mam
Ting tong.... I m still waiting for your new video 😁
New video next Monday or maybe Tuesday.😊
It is less than 250 words. Isn't it?
No, it isn't.😊 It's 274 words. You can read the essay on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/nowadays-a-growing-number-of-people-with-health-problems-are-trying-alternative-medicines-and-treatments/
Wowwwww....
Tomorrow is my exam day. Pray for me
Awesome job Lilie IELTS...Thank you.
Thank you too!😊
Wow
Genius
That’s very complicated😅
U are so cool 👌
Thanks!😊
Poor explanation 😔