How To Write A Character That Everyone Loves

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    Here is my quick guide on writing a beloved character. I cover the character Senor Pink from One Piece and what makes him such a good character. He may not be a very important character to the story and looks ridiculous yet is loved by the fandom. If people like a character like Senor Pink, then they will certainly like yours as long as you learn what is so important about his character.
    Timestamps:
    0:00 characters
    0:45 backstory
    2:07 breakdown
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  • @blankblank6214
    @blankblank6214 หลายเดือนก่อน +146

    Senior pink is the peak of masculine character writing

    • @kaybee328
      @kaybee328 22 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      every single person should try to be like him

  • @alathreon8315
    @alathreon8315 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +133

    Note that his wife died since then., and he still continues, it's quite important.

    • @alexischow8374
      @alexischow8374 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Did they actually say that? I thought she was still alive

    • @alathreon8315
      @alathreon8315 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@alexischow8374 it was confirmed in a vivre card AFAIK.

    • @Moe_Posting_Chad
      @Moe_Posting_Chad หลายเดือนก่อน +19

      @@alexischow8374 I think the implication is that she did pass away. Because that's why he acts the way he does. He could move on with any of the women in his entourage, but instead he completely disregards them. And he has put on a ton of weight, so he is eating or more likely drinking his problems away too... Its subtle.
      I think the beauty of One Piece is the interpretation you can do with the story. What matters is not what is true, *but why we believe it.*

  • @getyoked233
    @getyoked233 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +82

    My first time seeing Señor Pink in the manga, I was like, why does this guy look so stupid. Then I got to the part where it shows his backstory, and all I could think of was how hard boiled he was

  • @verywellpie8212
    @verywellpie8212 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    Thing is… I mirror senior pink in a corny sense. I dressed in a maid outfit for my ex because she asked me for Halloween(even if we went to a haunted trail and waited in the cold for and hour, while everyone looked) I didn’t care, I just enjoyed our day and she also did. Found out she has a brain tumor later, then me getting deployed put more weight on us. She even cried to her bff(told me in secret) because I was being deployed. It broke us, and then our relationship. She’s the only girl I loved after I came home from over seas, and still too this day I think of the care she showed me while mentally abused and grandma passing.
    Life’s a mystery, love the things that come along the way that loves you for you.❤️

  • @exraaa
    @exraaa 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +74

    So hard boiled!

    • @Moe_Posting_Chad
      @Moe_Posting_Chad หลายเดือนก่อน

      *Wipes his face bikinis he ripped off of girls.*
      What a giga chad.

  • @elpatucos3941
    @elpatucos3941 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +31

    That was so well worded and convened, you painted the full picture perfectly for me and I've never even watched One Pice.

    • @Moe_Posting_Chad
      @Moe_Posting_Chad หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Now is a great time to start reading One Piece. I promise you, it is not something you will regret starting.
      "Its a tale of laughs, the whole way through!" *He said with tears running down his face.*

  • @Moe_Posting_Chad
    @Moe_Posting_Chad หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    It is genuinely difficult to say any character in One Piece has a better backstory than Senior Pink and or Bartholomew Kuma. Maybe Black Beard is gonna have one that really challenges that, but I don't know man. He's not as manly as these two dudes!

  • @peterlynch9929
    @peterlynch9929 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    A lesser TH-camr would've milked this video for 20+ minutes all to say, "Making characters relatable is good". Great video lol

  • @NewMonarchCoffin
    @NewMonarchCoffin หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Chopper is my favorite character backstory because of Dr. Hiriluk and Doctorine

  • @anaasacados
    @anaasacados หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Well-made video!! I'm embarrased to say i legit cried when you described his backstory LMAOO my fav backstory has to be Lelouch's from Code Geass. Would love to see what you think about the writing of its ending in a vid :>

  • @KingKoohii
    @KingKoohii หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Well put. Love his character. The connection he had with Franky was so powerful man. Good storytelling. Subscribed!

  • @DanielPappa-bm9bq
    @DanielPappa-bm9bq 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    great video, your analysis is spot-on

  • @CNORTHJ
    @CNORTHJ 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Even with the worst pacing of all mankind during this arc they made me care for this character but damn that fight between Franky and him was soo dragged out

  • @jbomb66a72
    @jbomb66a72 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Laws/corazons backstory

  • @SanjanaChakraborty-ep4we
    @SanjanaChakraborty-ep4we 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Hey Jonathan, Thank you so much for providing such useful tips. It is really helping me to understand how to direct the plot and come up with an overview of my characters.

  • @insertreferencehere.8066
    @insertreferencehere.8066 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Love the video. Very well put together
    My favorite backstory is Chopper's.

  • @Down.D.Stairs.
    @Down.D.Stairs. 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    ippo from hajimino ippo its a boxing manga / anime thats still ongoing its basically rocky but we see him at the end of his high school years being attacked and constantly targeted by bullies one day a heavy weight boxer sees this and helps the kid out taking him to the gym to get medical treatment and the boxer tells him he needs to defend himself and shows him how to throw a punch ippo then wants to become stronger and gos on to train himself every step of the way this manga and show really focuses on the reality and steps you need to take when it comes to self improvement and hard work taking it slow as you end up earning your ranks

  • @moycorbin4750
    @moycorbin4750 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Modern movies really had hurt how we see Superman

  • @CeceMelchor
    @CeceMelchor 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Great vid

  • @soobrunomesmo3538
    @soobrunomesmo3538 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Great video man! Keep up the good work

  • @styronticstatic
    @styronticstatic 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    My favourite backstory is kozuki oden's and senoir pink's backstory

  • @dylandesmarais3592
    @dylandesmarais3592 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    🐻📕🐾😭 Best backstory

  • @Merry-Ghoul
    @Merry-Ghoul 22 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Yeah I empathize with his past, but none of his story will make me forget how he just tore off one of the ladies' bikini tops to use it as a napkin, and how that attitude continued as a "running gag" throughout the arc. Even if it were a guy I liked, and even if he asked first, he'd get a fist to the face for even thinking of that. That's not hard-boiled, that's just being a jerk. Use a real napkin/towel.

  • @Royal_Kirby
    @Royal_Kirby 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I'm going to make a manga in the future so this will help into that.

  • @jonathanstewart1993
    @jonathanstewart1993 หลายเดือนก่อน

    1:33 editing error cuts the end of a sentance and the start of the next

  • @Nightmane
    @Nightmane 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Super hard boiled

    • @jananv5
      @jananv5 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Super manly

  • @XxConvex
    @XxConvex 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    W video

  • @O.Reagano
    @O.Reagano 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Awesome video, just please learn how to pronounce ñ correctly
    Good luck growing

  • @user-kz7dy1tg3r
    @user-kz7dy1tg3r หลายเดือนก่อน

    Pretty great video.

  • @PennyQuill
    @PennyQuill 23 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I never liked senor pink or his story, it annoyed me for some reason. So, yeah, not everyone will like certain characters.

  • @sanketvaria9734
    @sanketvaria9734 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Not true. Jotaro makes no facial expressions yet he is cool and most liked chatacter.

  • @sanketvaria9734
    @sanketvaria9734 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    What!? Senior pink has fans!? I don't like the character one bit.

    • @Wingsofredemptionfan336
      @Wingsofredemptionfan336 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

      He’s one of the most loved characters in the series alongside Corazon and bon clay

  • @chrispolo25
    @chrispolo25 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Chad Pink is already better and have more depth than Naruto & Sasuke combined 💯

  • @JohnYourMama
    @JohnYourMama 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The backstory i enjoyed watching the most was Edward Newgoat