I mean if you had the option of fighting or not fighting a sociopathic black haired guy with unusually sharp reaction speeds and a hacker ai would you? He just gotta make sure he isnt boned
@gamingwizard3296 hes probably allowed through because he has yue, and saoa yui is absolutely crazy and would totally dump 3 decades of malware into anything that told her no if allowed
2:51 has one of the earliest scenes in the series that makes people question the legitimacy of the blonde kids. Seriously, the blonde son looks like his mother's elf f-buddy. It gets worse when they're older and the fact humans can reproduce with the elves becomes known to the main cast.
Honestly I love this. Gives me old fandubbing vibes mixed for some weird reason with Red vs Blue vibes (Dunno why). Awesome vid I'ma definitely keep up with this.
I really enjoy it when a new abridged comes out on to the scene. I thought that this was a really good start, I'd like to give some criticism if that's ok. So to start i pretty much agree with everything PhatTony92 said about the world building and would like to expand upon that. Since we established that the world the Mc is now in doesn't make any sense, i think the world should represent that. For instance in the scene where the Mc takes the flying ship he should say " Mc sighs yup this really is the dating sim" (use the name of the game if you know it/ make a name up), we cut to the whirlpool in the sky and he say "Odin's toilet, whispers under his breath man the lore of this world really does make no sense" (you can repeat the line when he says that later ). When he crashes instead of him talking about his gear (since i don't think the information matters all that much) he can instead say "you know i kinda forgot that there (in game charactes) ship crashed since that was brushed over " Now to jokes i think that the abridged would immensely benefit from more sound/visual gags. For instance when the Mc falls down the stairs and it cut to black. I think that instead of ending the scene there you could have it be that when he falls down we hear a cacophony of increasingly weird noises, like the sound of metal pipes falling, glass breaking, cats hissing, and a fog horn. After that we hear the Mc patting himself down, he says "wait im ok? Chuckles a bit the yells im ok! We now hear the honk of a truck followed by the sound of it hitting the Mc along with the woosh of the truck passing by. We end the scene with hearing two of the truck driving talking but as they talk the sound slowly is drowned out and is replased by a with a ringing that is getting lowder (ringing like ringing in the ear). The scene cuts to him in the other world where it is silent all except for the sounds of cricets and birds. After he sits up it is silent for probably 3 seconds followed by him saying "what! Where am i? Followed by distant yelling in the background (his parents calling his name) In a few scenes later when they are being yelled at by the blond lady she says something along the lines of "back into the shed all of you followed by a quick cut to the Mc saying"What!" And then cutting immediately to him talking to his brother. I think that the next scene could be kicked up a notch and exaggerated far more. The scene would start with the brother saying "you seriously don't remember?!" Mc says "yes i seriously don't remember can you please tell me what happened". The brother says " man i guess you really did hit you head, i just thought you were trying to get out of punishment". he then says "well for starters you were normal one second and feral the next. Yeah it was wild you started yelling kicked Ms (insert name here)'s cat (emphasis this) backflipped out the window ran out into the middle of a field and fainted". And for visual comedy, i was thinking when watching it needed more then lo and behold it popped up (i love that kirito joke) keep up with that Anyhow i know that this is all after the fact and everything but i just wanted to give this as an example of how you could write something like this. Sorry for the long winded speech. Welcome to the scene and keep up the good work.
@@andrewowens4421 True but maybe Luxion is just a Kirito fanboy and would instantly swear allegiance to him. Or we'd get an absolutely insane reveal that abridged Luxion is actually Heathcliff from SAO abridged. He does digitize himself after all.
It's rather be trapped ina meet and frick, most viewers dont actually care beyond looks and willingfully ignore anybody who's a beter pick on the long run because they arent as good looking as their waifu who they only choose because of their looks
This was certainly a video. It could have used some music and better audio mixing, half the time i could barely hear the words, and the other half was way too loud. I certainly couldn't do better, but I hope they refine their craft.
So, in terms of writing I feel like you didn't take enough creative liberties. I know it's the first episode and you need to lay the ground work for the show, but a good roller coaster has peaks and valleys. This episode felt like going up the first peak the entire time. Build up is not a bad thing, but you ended the episode without really wetting the appetite for what's coming next, making it feel like the build up (ground work) you spent the whole video working on won't have a satisfying conclusion, worth all the build up. One of the best parts of a roller coaster is the anticipation of heading from the peak into the valley, a slight glimpse of what's to come after you reach the top of the peak. My advise is don't be afraid to deviate a little more from the canon plot, and try to always end the episode in a way that leaves the viewer wanting more, an example of this would be a cliffhanger of some kind. And this can be as simple as introducing a new character in an interesting way that the MC needs to address, but ending the video before the MC can address said character or issue. That leads to speculation, speculation leads to conversation about what could happen, and that leads to a lasting impression and the want for closure on how it will be resolved, leaving the viewer itching for the next episode.
Thank you for some great criticisms and critique, it genuinely means more than you know. As for the script writing, I'll admit I could've done better but it was my very first script I wrote. I'll definitely take everything you said into account for episode 2, you made great points about the writing process and the anticipation of everything! Thank you again, it genuinely means so much!
the writing you did was just copy and pasting a short hand version of the script that just added curse words to supplement awful writing just like one of those awful Netflix shows like paradise PD
1:55 The few seconds after that imply that the legend just gamed for 72 hours straight and didn't eat at all. The real gamer.
Sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do
I mean he kinda did in the original
Given that the actual series is a full on parody of shoddily made otome games I’m surprised I haven’t come across an abridged series of this already.
this video saved my marriage.
We are happy to have helped save your marriage
Bro is married to his albedo figure
@@TH-camWaching-t2j that’s a weird way of spelling your mom’s name
Who ask plus ratio
@@yeahwell415 womp womp
Always a fan of abridged series! Appreciate the work you put into it, also laughed hard out the gate! Subbed.
Thank you, the support means everything!
I love the fact that at 7:23 the bot needs to rely on the rifle to confirm he isn't facing Kirito
I mean if you had the option of fighting or not fighting a sociopathic black haired guy with unusually sharp reaction speeds and a hacker ai would you? He just gotta make sure he isnt boned
does that imply kirito is in the database and was an employee at the facility that would be allowed through
@gamingwizard3296 hes probably allowed through because he has yue, and saoa yui is absolutely crazy and would totally dump 3 decades of malware into anything that told her no if allowed
Is it weird that it feels like this Abridged series is taking the shows story more seriously that the show itself took its own story?
Pretty sure you’re telling the truth because literally the manga does the same thing but the anime feels like it’s going way too fast
2:51 has one of the earliest scenes in the series that makes people question the legitimacy of the blonde kids.
Seriously, the blonde son looks like his mother's elf f-buddy.
It gets worse when they're older and the fact humans can reproduce with the elves becomes known to the main cast.
This anime in general needs a season 2 which for my fellow Isekai lovers. Skeleton knight in another worlds season 2 has been announced!!!
I hope to see more in the future. I just subscribed.
Anti spiral
Rich old woman ain't got shit. I saw the Geo Metro parked on her driveway.
A true gamer would have stocked up on cup of noodles, cheese puffs, and a12 pack of red bull.😎
2:13 oh, that crunch…💀💀
Honestly I love this. Gives me old fandubbing vibes mixed for some weird reason with Red vs Blue vibes (Dunno why). Awesome vid I'ma definitely keep up with this.
I honestly like how I am pretty sure it is just one guy doing all the voices
They have 12 voice actors total, you can see who voices who in the description.
3 days of not eating, drinking or sleeping
Well it's about damn time someone made a parody of this. Please more if you can.
I MISS THIS SHOW BROOOOOO!!!
i think we are getting a season 2
HONESTLY I WAS DISSAPOINTED IN THE SHOW CUS THE MANGA HAD HIM AS A MUCH MORE REAL MC WHO ISNT A *SELF INSERT*
BUT THIS FIXES IT ALL
THANK YOUUUU
I really enjoy it when a new abridged comes out on to the scene. I thought that this was a really good start, I'd like to give some criticism if that's ok.
So to start i pretty much agree with everything PhatTony92 said about the world building and would like to expand upon that.
Since we established that the world the Mc is now in doesn't make any sense, i think the world should represent that. For instance in the scene where the Mc takes the flying ship he should say " Mc sighs yup this really is the dating sim" (use the name of the game if you know it/ make a name up), we cut to the whirlpool in the sky and he say "Odin's toilet, whispers under his breath man the lore of this world really does make no sense" (you can repeat the line when he says that later ). When he crashes instead of him talking about his gear (since i don't think the information matters all that much) he can instead say "you know i kinda forgot that there (in game charactes) ship crashed since that was brushed over "
Now to jokes i think that the abridged would immensely benefit from more sound/visual gags. For instance when the Mc falls down the stairs and it cut to black. I think that instead of ending the scene there you could have it be that when he falls down we hear a cacophony of increasingly weird noises, like the sound of metal pipes falling, glass breaking, cats hissing, and a fog horn. After that we hear the Mc patting himself down, he says "wait im ok? Chuckles a bit the yells im ok! We now hear the honk of a truck followed by the sound of it hitting the Mc along with the woosh of the truck passing by. We end the scene with hearing two of the truck driving talking but as they talk the sound slowly is drowned out and is replased by a with a ringing that is getting lowder (ringing like ringing in the ear). The scene cuts to him in the other world where it is silent all except for the sounds of cricets and birds. After he sits up it is silent for probably 3 seconds followed by him saying "what! Where am i? Followed by distant yelling in the background (his parents calling his name)
In a few scenes later when they are being yelled at by the blond lady she says something along the lines of "back into the shed all of you followed by a quick cut to the Mc saying"What!" And then cutting immediately to him talking to his brother.
I think that the next scene could be kicked up a notch and exaggerated far more.
The scene would start with the brother saying "you seriously don't remember?!" Mc says "yes i seriously don't remember can you please tell me what happened". The brother says " man i guess you really did hit you head, i just thought you were trying to get out of punishment". he then says "well for starters you were normal one second and feral the next. Yeah it was wild you started yelling kicked Ms (insert name here)'s cat (emphasis this) backflipped out the window ran out into the middle of a field and fainted".
And for visual comedy, i was thinking when watching it needed more then lo and behold it popped up (i love that kirito joke) keep up with that
Anyhow i know that this is all after the fact and everything but i just wanted to give this as an example of how you could write something like this.
Sorry for the long winded speech. Welcome to the scene and keep up the good work.
I kinda want to know what Luxion would have done if Leon had in fact been Kirito.
A great abridgement of the first episode.
Probably would have crapped his robotic pants. He knows Kirito would have taken him apart.
@@andrewowens4421 True but maybe Luxion is just a Kirito fanboy and would instantly swear allegiance to him.
Or we'd get an absolutely insane reveal that abridged Luxion is actually Heathcliff from SAO abridged. He does digitize himself after all.
@@andrewowens4421
Nah, Luxion is top unfair play. Kirito would have lost.
Don't you know... In Japan every fantasy setting is built on top an ancient sci-fi setting that was secretly Japan all along in the far flung future!
I like it, keep it up. I miss abridge content.
When i first watched this anime i assumed this was just his brain trying to convince itself hes still alive while hes literally dying
0:50 “my will to live has never been lower”
7:32, did anyone else see "jojo was here" on the wall or just me. 😂
LET'S GOOOOOOOO!!!!
I thought this anime was plenty funny already
Bro why did he get his brothers name perfect 3:42
Well, damn! Now I wanna see where this goes!
Great Job Jojo!
Thanks for being a part of this!
JoJo was here
outstanding work
Skibidi
It's rather be trapped ina meet and frick, most viewers dont actually care beyond looks and willingfully ignore anybody who's a beter pick on the long run because they arent as good looking as their waifu who they only choose because of their looks
6:38 bru
The voice of the old lady is a bit low compared to the MC, had to boost the volume levels just to barely hear her.
Thanks for the feedback, I'll do my best to make sure all the audio is leveled properly in the future!
I love the fact most of this isnt actually abridged lol
7:23
REALLY, Kirito? Now the exterminate make sense.
This was certainly a video. It could have used some music and better audio mixing, half the time i could barely hear the words, and the other half was way too loud. I certainly couldn't do better, but I hope they refine their craft.
Thanks for the criticisms! We'll be doing our best to make sure everything works out better in the future!
This will be fun
oh I remember this
Please try working on the audio balancing for future episodes. The robot is like twice as loud as the dude during the scenes they share
Thanks for the feedback! We'll do our best in the future to make sure the audio is balanced better!
SUPERB
Lmfao
This video made someone gregrent
So, in terms of writing I feel like you didn't take enough creative liberties. I know it's the first episode and you need to lay the ground work for the show, but a good roller coaster has peaks and valleys. This episode felt like going up the first peak the entire time. Build up is not a bad thing, but you ended the episode without really wetting the appetite for what's coming next, making it feel like the build up (ground work) you spent the whole video working on won't have a satisfying conclusion, worth all the build up.
One of the best parts of a roller coaster is the anticipation of heading from the peak into the valley, a slight glimpse of what's to come after you reach the top of the peak. My advise is don't be afraid to deviate a little more from the canon plot, and try to always end the episode in a way that leaves the viewer wanting more, an example of this would be a cliffhanger of some kind. And this can be as simple as introducing a new character in an interesting way that the MC needs to address, but ending the video before the MC can address said character or issue.
That leads to speculation, speculation leads to conversation about what could happen, and that leads to a lasting impression and the want for closure on how it will be resolved, leaving the viewer itching for the next episode.
Thank you for some great criticisms and critique, it genuinely means more than you know. As for the script writing, I'll admit I could've done better but it was my very first script I wrote. I'll definitely take everything you said into account for episode 2, you made great points about the writing process and the anticipation of everything! Thank you again, it genuinely means so much!
@@Isekai_Entertainment Happy, my critique could help!
Thats an xbox offbrand controller, why was a Xbox making ps4 noises?
Cool
the writing you did was just copy and pasting a short hand version of the script that just added curse words to supplement awful writing just like one of those awful Netflix shows like paradise PD
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