Nice character design and a very good song. Sensationalism and misinformation are such massive problems on the internet but it's not often you see them as the main subject of a song.
OH GOODNESS THIS IS SO GOOD !!!! the instrumentals give me old Creep-P vibes !!! the lyrics are also super good !!!! WOWOWOW THIS IS ACTUALLY INSAAAAANE 💌💌💌
second comment here hi, but i LOVE all the details in this song and i wanna talk abt it!!!!! this ended up being longer than i meant it to be but I like music, what can I say!!!! first of all i hope youre doing okay because oftentimes creators write/take inspo from personal experience
Bro I've been IN LOVE with all of these underrated vocaloid songs, I'm so sad they don't get enough attention that they deserve. And most of them aren't on Spotify and I would love to add them to play playlists
Maika herself is so underrated , it really breaks my heart that she will never get a v4 or let alone carry her Maika name any longer Due to voctro labs being bought by Voicemod , she now goes under the name of Chloe as an ai text to song
AAAAA IM A MONTH LATE TO A DROP WHAT THE FUUUCKKK THIS IS SUCH A BANGER ARE U KIDDING ME ‼️‼️ the instrumental goes SO hard on this one and the tuning is so peak i love how it always feels like the characters in ur songs are speaking directly to the audience through the lyrics, almost pleading. ITS PEAK
AHHHH IM SO UPSET I COULDN'T CATCH THE LIVE BANGER AS ALWAYS ❗❗ I LOVE THE TRIPLET BREAKDOWN BEFORE THE CHORUS ITS SOO ASJDKFHASKJDF HAPPY TO SEE YOU BACK !!!
this song is so good that it's been stuck looping in my brain for hours and hours and hours!!! everything about it amazes me, im absolutely obsessed. the part at 2:28 tickles my brain so fucking well. it really resonates with me, and it sounds so good, i love how you used maikas voice!!!
SO ANGRY I COULDNT BE AT THE PREMIERE FOR THIS RAHHHH anyway this song is really good!!!!!!!!!! it hits close to home as someone who’s dealt with bullying and harassment, although i’m not an internet famous gamer girl with pink and green hair so it’s probably not the same. love your music!!!!!
STOP RIGHT NOW I JUST LUCKILY CAME ACROSS THIS ON MY RECOMMENDATIONS AGAIN. ACTUALLY SECOND TIME I'VE SEEN IT BUT THIS TIME I CLICKED. AND IM SO HAPPY I DID THIS IS SO GOOD. IM SO READY TO HAVE THIS ON REPEAT FOR A VERY LONG TIME ‼️‼️
Hey so i just got this on my recommendations and it looks coolio will update on thoughts EDIT: THIS IS SO ANIMATIONABLE IM GRABBING ONTO MY OCS AND MAKING ANIMATIONS OF THEM TO THIS SONG
omggg wowwwww this slaps so hard!!! i love the chord progression so much and the art is so yummy ahhhhhh!!!!! speaking of art… 👁️ if you ever are looking for more video assets in future songs, 😈 i’d gladly draw some for you for free! been a fan for quite a while, and ive illustrated multiple other producers’ pvs before, so itd be cool by me. no pressure of course!!! just thought id put the offer out there!!! keep up the good work!!! 🙇
The vocals are too quiet compared to the music in some places, and the backing vocals are too loud compared too the regular vocals. It doesn't seem intentional. A better mixing process would fix this. The lyrics also seem somewhat rambling, like you were trying to cram too many phrases/ideas into one song. The result is lyrics that feel incomplete, amateur, and overall do not flow well together. The only linking factor is an overall theme and the "What the hell?!" in the chorus. In general, the music sounds samey and it's difficult to tell when one part of the song ends and another begins. You definitely have potential as a VOCALOID musician, but you're still at a somewhat beginner level
@MezephelesArt It's always helpful to give advice to a fellow artist and musician. If Vene wants me to take down my comment, I'll delete it. Just a note, but if I was being rude, why would you be rude back wirh callous comments? Seems counterproductive?
the instrumentation and tuning feels like Old Vocaloid but the themes and composition are Modern Vocaloid and its sick as hell
Nice character design and a very good song. Sensationalism and misinformation are such massive problems on the internet but it's not often you see them as the main subject of a song.
OH GOODNESS THIS IS SO GOOD !!!! the instrumentals give me old Creep-P vibes !!! the lyrics are also super good !!!! WOWOWOW THIS IS ACTUALLY INSAAAAANE 💌💌💌
this is so unbelievably catchy what the HELL!!! i love how maika sounds here wowow
I FEAR YOU COOKED,,
second comment here hi, but i LOVE all the details in this song and i wanna talk abt it!!!!! this ended up being longer than i meant it to be but I like music, what can I say!!!!
first of all i hope youre doing okay because oftentimes creators write/take inspo from personal experience
@@stqticcruncher THIS ANALYSIS IS TOTALLY BANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I GIVE YOU RHE VENESECTION STAMP OF APPROVAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
@@veneyweeney HOORAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bro I've been IN LOVE with all of these underrated vocaloid songs, I'm so sad they don't get enough attention that they deserve. And most of them aren't on Spotify and I would love to add them to play playlists
Maika herself is so underrated , it really breaks my heart that she will never get a v4 or let alone carry her Maika name any longer
Due to voctro labs being bought by Voicemod , she now goes under the name of Chloe as an ai text to song
THIS IS SO COOL!!! YOU DID A GREAT JOB ON THIS SONG AND THE ARTIST DID A GREAT JOB ON THE ARTWORK!!!
I AM GOING TO DO UNWISE THINGS.
i love phosphenes
@@errorhd9157 but do you really love me or do you love the afterimage of me stuck to the backs of your eyelids
VENESECTION NEW SONG ELTS GO LETS GO LETS GO GLEST GOT
the tuning on "hell" in "what the hell?" scratches the brain so good i love it!!!!
Absolute BANGER on my For You page today.
this scratches my brain in a way I cannot explain IT'S SO GOOD
oh i love her
You cooked with this one bro
YESSSS AHHHH ITS HEREE AND ITS DELICIOUS
AAAAA IM A MONTH LATE TO A DROP WHAT THE FUUUCKKK THIS IS SUCH A BANGER ARE U KIDDING ME ‼️‼️ the instrumental goes SO hard on this one and the tuning is so peak i love how it always feels like the characters in ur songs are speaking directly to the audience through the lyrics, almost pleading. ITS PEAK
Worth the wait!!! Another absolute bop
EATING THIS UP IM SO GLAD THIS SHOWED UP IN MY RECOMMENDED
great art, great music. also even though i've never played undertale I can't help but think "chara" every time I see that pixelated smile
CERTIFIED BANGER
been listening to this for the last 2 days, amazing.
Your tuning was amazing, you do my girl justice!
NEW VENESECTION SONG TO LISTEN TO 20000 TOMES ON REPWAT
New favorite song
Amazing instrumental and good choise with the voice
I was just looking for songs to hear what maika sounded like and WOW how come I haven't heard this one until now?? This goes hard!!
THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE THE MUSIC OF IT SMM
Never heard any of your music before, but this hooked me instantly
as soon as the song ended i subscribed so fast this is going on loop for like a week straight my ears are BLESSED
AAAAA Its so good 💖💖
maika!!! she sounds great!!!!!!!
OMG... JUST FOUND THIS SONG AT LIKE 3 AM AND IM IMMEDIATELY OBSESSED. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING SONG
WAIT THIS SLAPS?!?! flynn playlist looking beautiful😍😍😍 thank u for another masterpiece veneyweney
ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY AMAZINGLY PEAK AS PER USUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EATING THE AMAZING EDITING AND LYRICS UP FOR DINNER💗💚💗💚💗
AHHHH IM SO UPSET I COULDN'T CATCH THE LIVE
BANGER AS ALWAYS ❗❗ I LOVE THE TRIPLET BREAKDOWN BEFORE THE CHORUS ITS SOO ASJDKFHASKJDF
HAPPY TO SEE YOU BACK !!!
this song is so good that it's been stuck looping in my brain for hours and hours and hours!!! everything about it amazes me, im absolutely obsessed. the part at 2:28 tickles my brain so fucking well. it really resonates with me, and it sounds so good, i love how you used maikas voice!!!
SO ANGRY I COULDNT BE AT THE PREMIERE FOR THIS RAHHHH
anyway this song is really good!!!!!!!!!! it hits close to home as someone who’s dealt with bullying and harassment, although i’m not an internet famous gamer girl with pink and green hair so it’s probably not the same. love your music!!!!!
@@memoryrat you are an internet famous pink and green gamer girl /genderneutral in my heart
@@veneyweeneymaybe one day, vene. maybe one day😔
i am addicted to your music already this fucking sounds BEAUTIFUL GRAAAH ❤❤
WAIT I JUST REALIZED YOU ARE THE SAME PERSON WHO MADE GIVE OR TAKE I LOVED THAT SONG WHEN IT CAME OUTTT 🫡🫡🫡 ANOTHER BANGER Orz
just discovered you and i really love this song wow! i think the lyrics and melody are really good especially
Fire!!!!
PEAK???
STOP RIGHT NOW I JUST LUCKILY CAME ACROSS THIS ON MY RECOMMENDATIONS AGAIN. ACTUALLY SECOND TIME I'VE SEEN IT BUT THIS TIME I CLICKED. AND IM SO HAPPY I DID THIS IS SO GOOD. IM SO READY TO HAVE THIS ON REPEAT FOR A VERY LONG TIME ‼️‼️
This is amazing!!! the character design is is gorgeous!!!!!!!
Needs more views tbh...its so peak....
I feel a remix coming on 🔥
I LOVE THIS SONG TO BITS!
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! YOU'RE SO TALENTED!!!
OHEUEOGREOUHOEUHE YES YES YES YES VIBRATING WITH EXCITMENT
JUST TELL ME EXACTLY WHAT IS 4+4?????????!!!!!!!!!
I can't believe I fell for the clickbait!
it wasnt clickbait... there WERE tears... /j
Catchy shit right here!!!
VENESECTION IS BACK YAYYY^-^
just another venesection banger ‼‼‼‼‼‼
I LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH
NO WAY UR BACK :D
YESSSS OMG OMG I LOVE THIS!!!!! THIS IS SUCH A BANGERRR UAGHHHHH !!!!!!!!
PEAK
HOLY CRAP THIS IS SO GOOD?? IM ADDING THIS TO MY PLAYLIST
This is so fucking good,,, ❤❤❤❤
Hell yeah, this slaps
COULD I COVER THIS this is genuinely so cool
@@kotozaki-p OMG OF COURSE!!!! make sure to credit me when u do!!!! also i would love to see it so feel free to email me the link if you do!!! :D
@ alrighty! Ofc I'll credit ^^
@@veneyweeneyoh also, do you have the vsqx for this song?
@ i have the vpr!
@ idm that! Could you send the link?
This is amazing!
Hey so i just got this on my recommendations and it looks coolio
will update on thoughts
EDIT: THIS IS SO ANIMATIONABLE IM GRABBING ONTO MY OCS AND MAKING ANIMATIONS OF THEM TO THIS SONG
omggg wowwwww this slaps so hard!!! i love the chord progression so much and the art is so yummy ahhhhhh!!!!!
speaking of art… 👁️ if you ever are looking for more video assets in future songs, 😈 i’d gladly draw some for you for free! been a fan for quite a while, and ive illustrated multiple other producers’ pvs before, so itd be cool by me. no pressure of course!!! just thought id put the offer out there!!! keep up the good work!!! 🙇
Please add your songs on spotify pls :(
go viral this ate
LES FUCKING GOOOOOOOOO NEW VENE SONGGGGGG!!!!!!!
everyone say thank you dear vene (+1 sub :DDD)
🗣🔥🗣🔥
This song makes me want to eat cable wires :D (in a good way tho)
VENE GAMING !! also teehee 69th comment teehee
Is this going to be on Spotify?????
@@thearsonistofarland3087 hello!! at the moment i don’t have a spotify, but for now i plan on uploading this to my soundcloud soon :)
The only problem i have with this song is that my phone cant play it any louder
free my girl vivian she didn't do anything wrong 😭😔
The vocals are too quiet compared to the music in some places, and the backing vocals are too loud compared too the regular vocals. It doesn't seem intentional. A better mixing process would fix this.
The lyrics also seem somewhat rambling, like you were trying to cram too many phrases/ideas into one song. The result is lyrics that feel incomplete, amateur, and overall do not flow well together. The only linking factor is an overall theme and the "What the hell?!" in the chorus.
In general, the music sounds samey and it's difficult to tell when one part of the song ends and another begins. You definitely have potential as a VOCALOID musician, but you're still at a somewhat beginner level
Cool. Nobody asked
@@MezephelesArt What's with the hostility? I'm providing some honest critiques.
@@roofogatoThere's no polite reason or justification for "critiquing" someone who didn't actively request feedback
@MezephelesArt It's always helpful to give advice to a fellow artist and musician. If Vene wants me to take down my comment, I'll delete it.
Just a note, but if I was being rude, why would you be rude back wirh callous comments? Seems counterproductive?
@@roofogatoBecause of fairness