Sheesh man. th-cam.com/video/GrlyKMXYLG8/w-d-xo.htmlsi=rXjI2Z2P9X5cHiKh You can't just copy all of his motifs. Good thing you didn't just copy it for the entirety of the piece.
I started playing piano when I was 8 now I am 15. I am a late intermediate pianist. I started composing when I was 13 believe it or not. So yeah I copyed but he said you can use the motive I only copy 5 motif.
@@Daniel20587 I do believe you have been composing since you were 13 as I started composing around that time as well, I just don't think you should copy the motifs and use it for a majority of the piece. Sure he may have said you can use the motifs but I find it better to use your own as creativity and originality makes pieces good. A good example would be your G minor prelude, sure uses motifs or themes from passacaglia but it still sounds good!
I suggest you get some solid training in music theory before writing something like this. I'm not saying you don't know any theory, but I'm afraid your theory knowledge isn't enough. I know we should have our own idea when composing music, and music theory is just a part of it, but please don't underestimate the training of theory.
Some parts really do remind me a lot of Chopin! He is my favourite piano composer, I just love his pieces so much. Well done!
So nice!
So nice
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👌
good
Wait this has the same phrases as the Chopin waltz tutorial I’m not even joking
Yeah I copied 5 motif back then. Have no ideas wtf I was doing.
I like this. The rhythm is great, but the left hand might be better if it is more consistent.
Sheesh man. th-cam.com/video/GrlyKMXYLG8/w-d-xo.htmlsi=rXjI2Z2P9X5cHiKh
You can't just copy all of his motifs.
Good thing you didn't just copy it for the entirety of the piece.
This would also mean that you lied about it being made when you were 14
This would also mean that you lied about it being made when you were 14
I started playing piano when I was 8 now I am 15. I am a late intermediate pianist. I started composing when I was 13 believe it or not. So yeah I copyed but he said you can use the motive I only copy 5 motif.
@@Daniel20587 I do believe you have been composing since you were 13 as I started composing around that time as well, I just don't think you should copy the motifs and use it for a majority of the piece.
Sure he may have said you can use the motifs but I find it better to use your own as creativity and originality makes pieces good. A good example would be your G minor prelude, sure uses motifs or themes from passacaglia but it still sounds good!
@@uncertainity188 i composed this piece at 14, not 13. 13 is the age i started composing.
I suggest you get some solid training in music theory before writing something like this. I'm not saying you don't know any theory, but I'm afraid your theory knowledge isn't enough. I know we should have our own idea when composing music, and music theory is just a part of it, but please don't underestimate the training of theory.
I will keep that in mind, thanks for the criticism.
I like the polyrhythms you implemented but this is kind of a mess of a piece. There’s really not much structure and it sounds like you are forcing it.
Thanks for the feedback.
there are no polyrhythms...
you probably mean the triplets or other tuplets
Is a good piece, but do not sound like Chopin.
like it, you have discord?
Ye
@@Daniel20587 can you send me your disc, please
@@Daniel20587 can you send me your discord?