Hi Lilie, Its late to comment by now, but your videos helped me to gain a 7.5 for writing and an overall of 8., Thank you very much for your methodical and clearly structured lessons!
And I gotta say, the main reason for poor scores in part 1 is mostly BC of the long and repeated sentence structure. Instead of giving a wide range of similarly phrased sentences, you give perfectly to-the-point samples for this part. Truely a savior. Went from 6.0 writing to this, i deeply appreciate your efforts, hope you can extend to other English test courses in the future🎉🎉🎉❤❤❤
The bar chart compares the proportion of weekly income that households spent on eight types of essential goods and services categories in one particular country in the years 1968 and 2018.
Hi Lilie, writing was my weakness while practicing. Your videos helped me get a 7.5 in writing and an overall band score of 8. Thank you so much. Much Love from🇳🇬
I literally never leave a comment and I'd say it's my first comment in my 5yrs+ youtube experience. I greatly appreciate your help Lilie! Your choice of vocabulary for writing always awes me and makes me realize that I have some room for development. I already paid for some kinda online lecture but guess somehow your videos help me more than them lol. Cheers lovely again for sharing those wonderful videos! x
Hi I've just received my test results with an 8 overall and 7 in writing. Had it not been for your work, this might have been impossible. Thank u very much!!!
@@LilieIELTS It is: Some people think there is no need for printed books as everything now can be stored electronically. Others do not agree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The chart illustrates the average percentages of expediture of families in one country weekly in 1968 and in 2018. Overall, majority of spent accounted for food while the minority of money was allocated to fuel and power. An average family in 1968 spent 35% of their income in a week while this rate decreased approximately to 18% which was the sharpest decrease among others. In contrast, housing expenditure experienced one-fifth of the total income in a week and this rate increased almost 20%, compared to food category. Another striking fact that, the money allocated for household goods did not see any change at about 8% in 1968 and 2018. The fuel and power that contributed the least percentage of money allocated for total expenditure saw 10% in 1968 and this rate went down under 5%. Same trend can be seen in clothing and footware category. Regular families spent 10% of their income in clothing and footware and this rate fell by half in 2018.
The table chart depicts information regarding the both gender who were specialist in four different enterprise namely retailer, health, tourism manufacturing from 1970to 2010. The data is given in percentage. Overall looking at the graph in detail, it is apparent that manufacturing sector had maximum percentage of men whilst retailer had least. Bp1 it is clearly seen that in1970 the highest men was observed in manufacturing sector by 30/ whilst in 1990 and 2000 there had been declined by 5/ . Only 8/ female had been working in the same field however, it Rose to 3/ after a year. In term of retail sector the percentage of male was stood at more than a half whilst, the figure for women remained constant by making the difference of 2/ . approximately 25/ 23/and 21/ women were interested towards this domain respectively. A slight increase was seen in the number of male in the tourism sector to 13/followed by a sharp dwindle which accounted to be one in ten. A tiny fraction of men were specialist in health sector as opposed to 15/ women. Mam give me band score plz
Why did you say "proportion" without "S" in detailed paragraph 1, and in your last sentence why you said"all saw" wouldn't it understood that the whole categories only have less than 5%
“most notably ,leisure and housing had overtaken food as the largest areas of expenditure” Can someone explain what “overtaken” means there? I think my brain is broken
hello, thank you for the video. I have a question, please. is it okay to mention the years in the overview? because I saw many videos claiming to not use any data in the overview.
Hi Lilie, I wanna ask about the broad comment rule. a. any of the other categories b. any other category c. any of the remining categories why in the b, the category not using -ies like the other two examples? thankyou
The average family is a statistical concept, something we read about when journalists and statisticians wish to talk about typical characteristics. It's better than an average family.
Hi, Lately i have been watching your videos and i really like it , i have one question regarding this chart ,accounting for 55% number of mature people i would love to hear your suggestion , is it okay to write the 1 body paragraph about the year 1968 and on the second paragraph for year 2018?
hello, Lilie, I am a big fan of yours. I wonder if you can answer a small question of mine, which is that is it ok to replace "accounted for 35% of the total expenses" with "35% of the weekly expenses". It would be genuinely nice of you to take a few time to answer my question. Thank you, love you.
Hi, it is incorrect to use "total expenses". The percentages of the eight categories do not add up to 100%, which means those families didn't spend all their weekly income. Therefore, total expenditure must be lower than weekly income.
Could please tell me the intro I wrote is right the horizontal bar graph depicts the data of a particular country where average family spend there weekly income in different ways between 1968 to 2018
Hi, the graph doesn't provide data of a country. It provides data on weekly income. So it is inaccurate to say "depicts the data of a particular country".
The chart gives information about the families’s weekly expenditure in one country between 1968 and 2018. Overall, majority of spent was allocated to food while the fuel and power category contributed the least amount of money among others. Looking into more details, in 1968, 35% of the income was spent for food which was the highest amount of money contributed to weekly spending, while this rate decreased to about 18% in 2018. Also, 10% of money allocated for housing in 1968 and this spending almost got doubled in 2018. Household goods remained constant in fifty-year period at roughly 7.5%. Clothing and footware consisted of 5% of families spending in 1968 and this got doubled in 2018. The other striking fact is that, while the food category contributed the most spending in 1968 at 35%, this category was replaced with leisure spending at about 23% in 2018. Finally, most families allocated their about 8% of their weekly income to transport, and this rate rose to almost 15% in 2018.
@@LilieIELTS thank you mam… ☺️☺️ I have been following your writing style for more than 6 days… and i got 6.5 in writing ✍️ task at my institute. I hope I will get this score in my final assessment. 😊 thank you mam..
While speaking about housing and leisure why didn't you mention the year 2018 when you said that those two categories replaced food as the largest expenses, and you did so with the other categories
I've added "2018" to the last sentence of the third paragraph: www.ieltsessaybank.com/the-chart-below-gives-information-about-how-families-in-one-country-spent-their-weekly-income/
@@LilieIELTSthank you for your time, if you may I want to talk about the challenge that you made many days ago I'm in Egypt so I dealed with many problems to try to charge you the $1 it was almost impossible so if you may consider some easier ways to pay the next challenge
Mem you include year in overall, my instructor told me overall pragraph "not including any year or percentage " is that right or wrong information plz rep 🙏
You can read the essay on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/the-chart-below-gives-information-about-how-families-in-one-country-spent-their-weekly-income/
For example When starting the second paragraph Can we say In 2018, weekly income on food decreased by almost half to 17%. By contrast, expenditure on leisure and housing rose significantly to about 22% and 29%.Meanwhile, the outlay for household goods remained the same in both years
The bar chart provides data on the mean weekly expenses of families based on their percentage of income per week in 1986 and 2018. Overall, in 1986 food was the highest expense in one week on average, while any of the other daily necessities were not given much priority. In 2018, however, money spent on leisure took the lead followed by housing. In 1986, 35% of the weekly funds were spent on food, which was the top necessity. Housing, clothing and footware came in second at only 10% of the income used on these commodities. Whilst any of the other items, such as fuel, transport, household and personal goods were all between 6-10% of the income range, with fuel and power being the least important item. In 2018, however, there was a change in the trend, with Leisure being at the top of the list of expenses at 22%, while housing came in second at around 19% of weekly income. Food and Transport were each given 17% and 13% of the funds respectively. Lastly, any of the other items namely, fuel, clothing, household and personal goods were not that popular being only at a range of 4 to 7% of the weekly income.
Hi Lilie, Its late to comment by now, but your videos helped me to gain a 7.5 for writing and an overall of 8., Thank you very much for your methodical and clearly structured lessons!
And I gotta say, the main reason for poor scores in part 1 is mostly BC of the long and repeated sentence structure. Instead of giving a wide range of similarly phrased sentences, you give perfectly to-the-point samples for this part. Truely a savior. Went from 6.0 writing to this, i deeply appreciate your efforts, hope you can extend to other English test courses in the future🎉🎉🎉❤❤❤
The bar chart compares the proportion of weekly income that households spent on eight types of essential goods and services categories in one particular country in the years 1968 and 2018.
Hi Lilie, writing was my weakness while practicing.
Your videos helped me get a 7.5 in writing and an overall band score of 8.
Thank you so much. Much Love from🇳🇬
That's truly amazing. I'm really glad that I was able to play a small part in your success. Best wishes on your new adventure!
how did you practice ? can you tell method you used?
How long did it take you to prepare
You explained 10 hours lesson in just 10 minutes.
Thank you for helping! Keep growing.
May Allah increase you in more beneficial knowledge.
Thanks a million😊
I literally never leave a comment and I'd say it's my first comment in my 5yrs+ youtube experience. I greatly appreciate your help Lilie! Your choice of vocabulary for writing always awes me and makes me realize that I have some room for development. I already paid for some kinda online lecture but guess somehow your videos help me more than them lol. Cheers lovely again for sharing those wonderful videos! x
Comments like yours really motivate me to keep creating videos. Thank you.😊💜
Hi I've just received my test results with an 8 overall and 7 in writing. Had it not been for your work, this might have been impossible. Thank u very much!!!
Wowww, that's amazing. Congratulations! Do you mind sharing your task 2 question here?
@@LilieIELTS It is: Some people think there is no need for printed books as everything now can be stored electronically. Others do not agree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Thanks for your video. I got over all 8 BANDS and 7.5 in writing.
Wowww, that's amazing. Congratulations and wish you a bright future ahead!
Hi ! Thanks for your writing tasks . I have got 8 overall from writing 7.5
These are really amazing scores! Wish you a bright future ahead!
@Marguba how did you practice for writing
Ur teaching methods are really appreciating and helpful in obtaining more than 8 band from Nepal 🇳🇵
So nice of you😊
Hi Lillie, why did you say the proportion of weekly income, and not the proportions of weekly income in paragraph 1?
You are the best teacher. I startwd understanding how to report better after watching your videos
Really glad to hear that.😊
Wow it was so helpful and practical.please post more such kind of videos and about task 2 samples as much as you can.thank for your videos..
Sure thing and thank you! You may find my writing blog helpful: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
Wow I love your lessons, so helpful and informative. I will sit the test this month. Glad that I found your channel !!!
So nice of your! Best luck on your exam.✊
The chart illustrates the average percentages of expediture of families in one country weekly in 1968 and in 2018. Overall, majority of spent accounted for food while the minority of money was allocated to fuel and power.
An average family in 1968 spent 35% of their income in a week while this rate decreased approximately to 18% which was the sharpest decrease among others. In contrast, housing expenditure experienced one-fifth of the total income in a week and this rate increased almost 20%, compared to food category. Another striking fact that, the money allocated for household goods did not see any change at about 8% in 1968 and 2018.
The fuel and power that contributed the least percentage of money allocated for total expenditure saw 10% in 1968 and this rate went down under 5%. Same trend can be seen in clothing and footware category. Regular families spent 10% of their income in clothing and footware and this rate fell by half in 2018.
You're doing great, thank you Lilie❤️
Hi, lilie, thank you for you work, it’s become much easier
Absolutely helpful. Pls maam help with more cambridge questions being answered for task 1 and task 2.
The table chart depicts information regarding the both gender who were specialist in four different enterprise namely retailer, health, tourism manufacturing from 1970to 2010. The data is given in percentage.
Overall looking at the graph in detail, it is apparent that manufacturing sector had maximum percentage of men whilst retailer had least.
Bp1 it is clearly seen that in1970 the highest men was observed in manufacturing sector by 30/ whilst in 1990 and 2000 there had been declined by 5/ . Only 8/ female had been working in the same field however, it Rose to 3/ after a year. In term of retail sector the percentage of male was stood at more than a half whilst, the figure for women remained constant by making the difference of 2/ . approximately 25/ 23/and 21/ women were interested towards this domain respectively. A slight increase was seen in the number of male in the tourism sector to 13/followed by a sharp dwindle which accounted to be one in ten. A tiny fraction of men were specialist in health sector as opposed to 15/ women.
Mam give me band score plz
Why did you say "proportion" without "S" in detailed paragraph 1, and in your last sentence why you said"all saw" wouldn't it understood that the whole categories only have less than 5%
Best explanation. Please continue to add more videos like this.
Thank you, I will
Your videos So helpful
- from middle east oman 🇴🇲
Appreciate the kind words.😊💜
thank you so much!!
that was very useful!! thank you for your time
“most notably ,leisure and housing had overtaken food as the largest areas of expenditure” Can someone explain what “overtaken” means there? I think my brain is broken
Hi, it means "replaced".
Thanks it’s very useful for me
Welcome 😊
Waw mam. Just awesome way to explain. Good job dear
Thanks a lot 😊
Great teacher..... 👍.melaine from Ghana.west Africa
Thanks for this wonderful video tutor Lilie
I'm glad you like it😊
Thank you for making this video,
My pleasure!😊
Mam your videos are very beneficial
Is it line graph like arrow
Will you check how I have written this report ? Please what are the mistakes I had done
hello, thank you for the video. I have a question, please. is it okay to mention the years in the overview? because I saw many videos claiming to not use any data in the overview.
Yes, years are totally fine.
Hi Lilie, I wanna ask about the broad comment rule.
a. any of the other categories
b. any other category
c. any of the remining categories
why in the b, the category not using -ies like the other two examples? thankyou
They are all correct. Just different ways to say the same thing.
Why THE average family ? In introduction
The average family is a statistical concept, something we read about when journalists and statisticians wish to talk about typical characteristics. It's better than an average family.
i am having trouble with when should i use " the percentage of..." and when i dont need to use it...
Hi, can you provide a sentence in which you're not sure whether you need to use "the percentage of"?
I am from India 🇮🇳 very good explanation ma'am ❤️✅ tomorrow is my exam..!📝
Best of luck!
Please ans some are using comma before while and some are not . What should we do? Use comma before while, whereas and many others or not.
Hi, it is correct either with or without a comma.
@@LilieIELTS oke thank you ❤️
Hi, Lately i have been watching your videos and i really like it , i have one question regarding this chart ,accounting for 55% number of mature people i would love to hear your suggestion , is it okay to write the 1 body paragraph about the year 1968 and on the second paragraph for
year 2018?
Yes, there is more then one way to report data.
I am enjoying watching your videos 😅
Glad you like them!😊
Which word i can use as synonym of overtaken?
hello, Lilie, I am a big fan of yours. I wonder if you can answer a small question of mine, which is that is it ok to replace "accounted for 35% of the total expenses" with "35% of the weekly expenses". It would be genuinely nice of you to take a few time to answer my question. Thank you, love you.
Hi, it is incorrect to use "total expenses". The percentages of the eight categories do not add up to 100%, which means those families didn't spend all their weekly income. Therefore, total expenditure must be lower than weekly income.
@@LilieIELTS what about weekly expenses??
@@user-ts6vt3te8c No, weekly expenses do not equal weekly income. As I already explained, they didn't spend all their income.
@@LilieIELTS OK，i finally got it, thank you so much for your time
Could please tell me the intro I wrote is right the horizontal bar graph depicts the data of a particular country where average family spend there weekly income in different ways between 1968 to 2018
Actually I write 'and' instead of 'to' but by mistake wrote this
Hi, the graph doesn't provide data of a country. It provides data on weekly income. So it is inaccurate to say "depicts the data of a particular country".
The chart gives information about the families’s weekly expenditure in one country between 1968 and 2018.
Overall, majority of spent was allocated to food while the fuel and power category contributed the least amount of money among others.
Looking into more details, in 1968, 35% of the income was spent for food which was the highest amount of money contributed to weekly spending, while this rate decreased to about 18% in 2018. Also, 10% of money allocated for housing in 1968 and this spending almost got doubled in 2018. Household goods remained constant in fifty-year period at roughly 7.5%.
Clothing and footware consisted of 5% of families spending in 1968 and this got doubled in 2018. The other striking fact is that, while the food category contributed the most spending in 1968 at 35%, this category was replaced with leisure spending at about 23% in 2018. Finally, most families allocated their about 8% of their weekly income to transport, and this rate rose to almost 15% in 2018.
THANK YOU LILIE
Mam i wanna become perfect in both writing task 1 as well 2 but, don't know how?☹️ please mam make a video that may lead me more.
More to come.😊
mam please, you will make video on table graph sorts of task 1...
Hi, for now, you can read table essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/
@@LilieIELTS thank you mam… ☺️☺️
I have been following your writing style for more than 6 days… and i got 6.5 in writing ✍️ task at my institute. I hope I will get this score in my final assessment. 😊
thank you mam..
Best luck!✊
I'm watching this video from Bangladesh🇧🇩, which country do you make videos ?
China.😊
@@LilieIELTS Thanks me'am.We love China specially I like chinese people.
Thank you so much mam❤
While speaking about housing and leisure why didn't you mention the year 2018 when you said that those two categories replaced food as the largest expenses, and you did so with the other categories
I've added "2018" to the last sentence of the third paragraph: www.ieltsessaybank.com/the-chart-below-gives-information-about-how-families-in-one-country-spent-their-weekly-income/
@@LilieIELTSthank you for your time, if you may I want to talk about the challenge that you made many days ago I'm in Egypt so I dealed with many problems to try to charge you the $1 it was almost impossible so if you may consider some easier ways to pay the next challenge
@@omjwad2661 I'm in China, where we have strict censorship. The payment method you used is the only option I have to receive payments globally.
@@LilieIELTS I hope there will be another chance in the future cuz I I almost found out a solution to this dilemma
Thanks for video
Please more videos..
Can you please say from where I could buy the cambridge ielts academic book 17 as I have only 10 more days to go for the ielts exam ..
I don't know if it is available where you live. I bought it in China.
Would you kindly write the writing task 1 on Cambridge IELTS 1-9 in your writing blog posts? Thankyou very much!!!
Hi, you can read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
@@LilieIELTS Yeah, I have visited your website for the writing tasks. Yet, no samples on books 1-5 have been uploaded yet.
So helpful videos Lilie, thank you so much 😊
You're so welcome!💜
Mem you include year in overall, my instructor told me overall pragraph "not including any year or percentage " is that right or wrong information plz rep 🙏
Hi, we shouldn't include percentages in the overview, but years are necessary.
@@LilieIELTS I appreciate it,thanks for reply mem 🥰
Mam i am denied access to your website . It shows you have blocked my ip number.
I have question but we cant write numbers or years in overview...
Yes, we shouldn't include specific data like 10% or 20%, but it's completely okay to include years.
@@LilieIELTS really thanks u clear my doubts
Can we write the bar chart illusrates the proportion of weekly income spent by thr average families in one country between 1968 ans 2018.
Sorry the* and*
Yes, but the active voice is better than the passive voice. Also, it should be "the average *family* ", not "the average *families* "
Thanks maam you r the best☆
Hi Lilie, can I say in all the five cities instead of in any?
Can you provide a complete sentence please?
The figures remained unchanged in all the five cities
@@Myzz_Baan Yes, that works.
plz also upload the pdf of the report
You can read the essay on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/the-chart-below-gives-information-about-how-families-in-one-country-spent-their-weekly-income/
Is it possible to report this chart by years in each paragraph?
For example
When starting the second paragraph
Can we say
In 2018, weekly income on food decreased by almost half to 17%. By contrast, expenditure on leisure and housing rose significantly to about 22% and 29%.Meanwhile, the outlay for household goods remained the same in both years
So, you describe only the trends and don't make comparisons?
@@LilieIELTS i used "by contrast", to compare
I guess i could say rose significantly, overtaking food expense with 22% and 19% respectively?
thanks 😊
Nice job
The bar chart provides data on the mean weekly expenses of families based on their percentage of income per week in 1986 and 2018.
Overall, in 1986 food was the highest expense in one week on average, while any of the other daily necessities were not given much priority. In 2018, however, money spent on leisure took the lead followed by housing.
In 1986, 35% of the weekly funds were spent on food, which was the top necessity. Housing, clothing and footware came in second at only 10% of the income used on these commodities. Whilst any of the other items, such as fuel, transport, household and personal goods were all between 6-10% of the income range, with fuel and power being the least important item.
In 2018, however, there was a change in the trend, with Leisure being at the top of the list of expenses at 22%, while housing came in second at around 19% of weekly income. Food and Transport were each given 17% and 13% of the funds respectively. Lastly, any of the other items namely, fuel, clothing, household and personal goods were not that popular being only at a range of 4 to 7% of the weekly income.
It was amazing 😍
So nice of you.💜
Grand !
Is it a band 9 level essay dear????
I think it deserves at least an 8.
After Lillie I can't watch any other videos
appreciate your kind words😊
Love u but plz little slow
Sure!😊
@@LilieIELTS mam can I write every single data in table chart ?????? In body 1 and body 2 ne is their problems if i write more then 150 words ????
Yes, you can write more than 150 words but you shouldn't report all the numbers if there is a lot. We're asked to report only the main features.
@@LilieIELTS ok really appreciate btw this 10th nov I have WRL test could u check my one essay plz it's really fruitful for me ???
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i wonder why you do it for free ??
Lilie great Job ; l have tried to connect with you in Instagram to no avail . please l need a one -on - one follow up in writing.
Sorry, I'm not on IG.
How can we contact you?